The Black Ship - Chapter 28
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2 Chapters of The Black Ship in the same week?, you spoiling us!, thank you so much for all the hard work.
Same what a surprise
This is about the only story I've been absolutely hooked by.
I am ADDICTED to this story
I wait at the edge of my seat for each upload
Me too.
Same.
Especially with hilarious scenes like with Redford's reaction to Wyatt's 1st choice for a Heraldic Shield. 😂
You and me both
I enjoyed this story very much. I replay many times and still haven't lost interest. I live off the grid and glad that I can listen to every new chapter as it comes out. Hope that this continues for it keeps my sanity living out here with my nearest human neighbor being five miles from me. Please continue sending this story out for us to enjoy
Thats cool, I'm looking at land to get off grid in the nearish future
Good luck getting harder without means for cost is high and restrictions are many. Wish for you the best.
Can’t wait for the “composters,” to take out the trash! Also, generally curious what Wyatt’s shield and motto will be.
Especially when making Drazin raiders into compost.
I hope his shield is a garbage bag or something lololol
What a pleasant after dinner treat two chapters in one week , thank you to the author ✍️.
The continued background on the evil Duke/Uncle helps fill in the background from the opposition. Clearly the Duke’s team is too entrenched in their thinking 🤔 to think outside the box. The prince’s outside the box thinking 🤔 and his embracing the in the right place at the right time with Wyatt in the long run will hopefully provide a catalyst to push the principality into a new age.
Commander Redford’s tactful guidance to Wyatt is a nice touch . He does not issue an order but instead sets out the factual guidance to allow Wyatt to allow Wyatt to constructively grow as a person and an officer.
As a personal note I would hope that those who can and have the wherewithal are thanking the page sponsor and the Author.
Thank you until the next chapter 🥃🍾
Actually Duke Cornelius Draymore team has members in it that do out of the box think for how ridge their culture is. I mean how overall effect the black ships used at the Battle for Gintrax, especially considering stealth ships goes against honorable fighting.
Here we go, final video of work day and it’s our favorite story. The crew thanks you both!
ooooh more looks into the enemy
thanks for another good story
poor wyatt being put upon by being loyal and competent
Great episode! "Composters?" Very utilitarian, as in "we will make our enemies into something good!" LOL!!!
The Composters will make the Drazin into compost!
The composters sounds a little too drazan to me
The slogan could be The composters will bury the traitors.
I'll see myself out
@@Wise4HarvestTime that is hilarious and I can see how you think that! 🤣😂
I love that the villain is respectable and understandable. History truly is written by the victor.
Binged in three days. Now eagerly awaiting more with the rest of you. Clara has done quite well with Cynthia and now Wyatt at her side. What a team!!
This is one of the best stories I’ve come across on TH-cam. Each chapter leads me to want more.
I need chapter 29 in my life!
As the song says "Loving every minute of it"
So many views, so few likes🤨 Like people, the author, narrator and Wyatt deserves better.Thank you,2chapters in one week 💐⭐❣️⭐💐
Otaku Spirit TH-cam channel also suffers similar issues lots of people viewing videos but do not like them. Which is annoying since, like this channel, most views are from people who keep coming back to the channels videos as loyal watchers.
Interesting this chapter starts with Duke Cornelius Draymore, the 1st time we see him since chapter 19 in book 1. Nice we get to see the the inner circle of Cornelius's allies. I do like how Cornelius still respects the Prince to degree.
Cornelius is smart in trying to make sure the coup between houses and not a civil war.
I do love the scene where Tamiran Caystion admits the blunder Samuel Caystion at Gintrax costed there side lots of high tech ships 🚢.
I do like see how the coup is going from Cornelius side. I do like hearing how by sounds House Windfield has a massive for assembling and have 3 battleships. I do like how Cornelius does want the military academies for the national military armed forces to be left alone and no trying to get personal from them. Its smart of Cornelius telling his followers to use passive means as much possible to calm the commoners and only use surgical strikes ages the most rebellious commoners.
I do like how Cornelius has Tamiran a more detailed explanation on interesting seeing that the battle of Gintrax the Caystion force were supposed to have more ships but they didn't get there do to Drazin raiders and Finigan forces.
I do like how pissed off Hadrion is with the loss of Frederick Anderson due to him personally recruited to their cause. Interesting to hear Luxax's brother sided with Cornelius. It seems that Veronica is few fries short of a Happy Meal.
I do like the detailed explanation on the FTL communications network of the Principality of Astor. Not surprised that Cornelius does fear the RM due them stuck in places that make them not much of a threat to him. Awesome catch phrase for House Draymore.
I do love ❤️ Wyatt's choice for his squadron name being " Composterse." Its hilarious 😂 that Redford freaking out with Wyatt's Heraldic Shield. I do like how Redford realized that Wyatt's problem is due to ignorance.
It does seem that the author is paying attention to the comments section since the Heraldic Shield for Wyatt shows it. I do like how the problem is there is too much on the Heraldic Shield 🛡.
Nice history lesson on Redford's House Calin Heraldic Shield 🛡 . I am not surprised that there's a noble tradition that making a Heraldic Shield is to be made on your own.
It will be interesting seeing Wyatt interacting with his Eplsion teammates for the 1st time since he became a noble. I have a feeling that Wyatt will at first have friction with the new 5th member of his squadron but will end up good friends by the end of a Terran month. Will be interesting in seeing the Finigan nobles reaction to Wyatt.
I love that description of Veronica - Few fries short of a Happy Meal
@@davidorf3921 Well it does describe her quite well. I most think of that phrase from Stargate SG1 Time Loop episode from season 4. Veronica is crazy, nuts, insane bonzo, no longer in possession of once full faculties, 3 fries short of a Happy Meal, WACKO! 🤣😂
Well that felt complicated, the Duke is not a very happy fellow and his daughter sounds like a psycho on a short leash
Yeah the Daughter has serious daddy issues bordering on being a "pick me!" girl.
So do you think it will be Cynthia who takes her down? Or Clara?
@@vanguard9067 Who knows, it might even be her brother, there appears to be no love lost between the siblings in that family.
@@vanguard9067was thinking the same thing. She is wearing armor so she would be more a match for Cynthia.
@@Tupsx57 Totally agree. From a character development perspective, Cynthia is the better match, from a plot perspective Clara is the better match. I am more interested in seeing Cynthia, in her well-developed role of personal body guard tearing apart the psycho Duke Draymor traitor with professional coldness:-)
Love it. Such an awesome story.
I would love to see longer chapters .Evan if it took longer to get them out
"Loyalty is my reward"would be a good motto for Wyatt's heraldic shield.
While that would be nice but that is the catch phrase of House Astor and the Principality of Astor. So Wyatt needs a different one. I have a feeling that Redford's comments on how his Heraldic Shield is supposed to reflect him being a vassal of Astor is going to determine the final version. I could see it showing 3 figures of people on it. Middle person is Clara, the right person is Cynthia and the left person is Wyatt. Showing that Wyatt is Clara's left hand person.
Well, the compost hauler represents both his origin, as well as his ingenuity to succeed with whatever tools he has at his disposal. And crazy enough to be recognized as *THE Wyatt Staples* later on. The hauler's gonna stick.
The duke isnt outright evil, interesting take on this style of story
I'm glad the shield, or at least the first iteration had the garbage hauler on it... hope it says but it might have some call back to Wyatt thinking about his family again. Hell it may have one of those Lachoa bugs on it and quote from his dad.
What a great chapter. Both in scope and in explanation. I really love the details shared by Redford at the end. Perfect. Thank you both, writer and video guy.
Poor Samuel getting thrown under the bus by Tamiran. Lol.
He probably deserved at least a large chunk of the blame.
@@Soundwave119Doesnt look like it. If he planned the strike, he would have been at the battle. It is obvious that Tamiran planned the whole thing. He needed a scapegoat when things went south. I mean Samuel was already dead so he was a convenient patsy.
Thank you. Another great chapter. By far greatest story in all you tube sci fi comunity.
This was a surprise to have two episodes this week.
I really wish we understood why the Duke feels that the Prince is unworthy, and his inner circle call him a false Prince. Veronica is just as Gabrial said a pet that understands nothing other that to ask her father how high to jump when he says jump, or when he says sit, to ask where to sit.
Wyatt's shield will be interesting, but really the Composters as the squad name.
I really liked Redford's little lecture, it is teaching Wyatt that being a noble is a lot more than he thought. Cynthia needs to give him more lessons than just battle exercises. She and Clara need to explain the meaning of naming the ship, since previous chapters indicated that there was more behind it, his reaction to whatever the meaning is will probably be interesting. I'd love to see Redford and maybe Gault teaching Wyatt what it really means to be an officer and a noble.
I'm hooked ! This is great ! I can't wait for the next one 💯❤️🔥💫
I watched the 11 hours long segment which had from chapter 1 to 26 in it & then 27 & 28 right afterwards, but now I'm feeling frustrated waiting for 29.
This takes me back to the works of Dickson and Laumer. Well done!
I love this series listen to both books in the last 3 days
Should odds be set to start betting on the Cynthia vs Veronica duel? Now that Veronica's personality has been introduced, a duel has to be in the future.
The composters sounds more like a drazan squad than a human one 😆🌴🎋
More like what Wyatt plans to turn any Drazzan into
I do agree with Davidorf3921 that Composters sounds like what Wyatt wants to do to Drazin. It is also a reference to how it was compost like materials he used to save Clara and Cynthia from Cayston forces.
I viewed it as him saying anyone unlucky enough to run into this wedge will be turned into trash. A nice subtle threat.
Thanks for another episode.
When will we begin to learn what the Duke thinks is wrong with the prince or why Veronica is so fervent?
this might be the best story here.
cam you get more like it
Composters. Oh lawdy.
It stays true to normal Wyatt naming protocol.
Thanks!
Thank you again! Andrew. Your support has been amazing.
@@scifistories1977please let me know when the next installment drops
You are in the Uk 🇬🇧?
Thank you for the second chapter in one week. The story gets more intriguing with each chapter.
Duke Draymore thinks far to much of himself which is a common trait among the nobles but it seems that there is either something that the prince or the king (before he died) has done that set Draymore off on this coup or the man is so full of himself that he can't accept any truth but the fiction he believes.
It seems our author might be taking some of his ideas from current events.
And this was another great addition to the story. With a bit more insight into the inner workings of the opposition and the learning curve of Wyatt, the universe continues to grow in detail.
Current events or historical ones, even old stories, he also takes note of comments here and goes with some of them
I must admit Redford is right, on both accounts. I would say the Squadron name coud be the Defenders ( protecting the Innocent) and his sheld could be a castle tower with 3 six pointed stars above it on a black back ground. Showing part of his oath to House Aster ( again showing his oath to protect). And his love of space.
Thoughts on this?
Could work, I'd put a couple of staples (a traditional heraldic symbol) either side of the tower at the bottom though as a nod to him not changing his name now he's a noble
Beautiful story love it ❤❤❤
we need more. A lot more.
Composters - What you do with weeds and dead organic matter. What they will do to those plantoid aliens called the Drazzan. A fitting end to those monsters since that's what they do to humans when preparing their feed.
It will be interesting seeing Wyatt's Composters turning Drazin raiders into compost!
If I were Wyatt, I'd have a black field with tiny white and silver dots( symbolizing his childhood longing for space) and have those vines drape over the top, left, and right borders with flames starting at only the bottom of the vines (symbolizing his victory over his childhood monsters and reason for his ennoblement)
But the Commander might think the flames still to flashy and loud
How about a Lachoa flying a trash hauler while knitting and towing a Black ship against a planet back drop on a black shield
@@patricklaroseii70 the way I see it putting a bug or a trash hauler on his shield would invite all the other nobles to insult him even more. Many of them hate him for being "upstart trash" already
Heraldry is meant to be simple and recogniseable from a distance, look at old traditional shields and you will see what I mean, a shield was typically a single background colour or two, those backgrounds could be split horizontally or vertically in a variety of ways with straight or wavy lines, then you add devices to the shield often to represent who you are or your name, interestingly a traditional device for a shield is a staple, so you could use two of those to represent the staples family name, you could add one or more mullets or estoiles to represent stars (mullets are traditionally straight sided stars with 5 points but can have more) estoiles have traditionally got wavy edges and 6 points.. Little dots or highly detailed objects like a trash hauler will be hard to make out from a distance. Mottos are typically added later as are (if he gets suitable rank) all the bits and pieces surrounding the shield, although as a knight Wyatt gets a closed helm on top of the shield
I have a feeling that Redford's comments on how his Heraldic Shield 🛡 is supposed to reflect him being a vassal of Astor is going to determine the final version. I could see it showing 3 figures of people on it. Middle person is Clara, the right person is Cynthia and the left person is Wyatt. Showing that Wyatt is Clara's left hand person.
@@davidorf3921than I revise my shield for Wyatt. A black background with one white large star. The edges of the shield draped with vines like the Drazzan and burning flames climbing up the vines at the bottom
Well that's the poletiek taking care of... There are roles about your noble shields that must be fallowd.. 1e your lord's hous then your house and strength.. The colour of your lord then add yours... Tip from a historical perspective 😅
It's slightly different for a Banneret Knight, Essentially a banneret is a new line of nobility as such they come up with a totally new crest, though they may use some device to reference those who raised them up, Newly created houses tend to be fairly simple designs with only a few devices on the shield, things get more complicated as noble houses inter marry and you get combined heraldry
2 in a week? Hype!
Aaah, with such sharp mind as that of Wyatt and knowing the weight of his enoblement one could think that after good think he could come up with fitting shield and even name for his squadron. I kind of feel a bit dissapointed in his choices. Otherwise solid chapter
A sharp mind maybe, but no experience or knowledge in the subjects, the squadron name sort of makes sense, they appear to use one word squadron identifiers, you want something that will not become garballed over the radio.
CHOP CHOP bud. Need more
Thanks 😊
Loving this
Booo! Booo! Duke Traitormore.
🤣🤣 I like it!!
But Duke Cornelius Draymore is awesome in a villian who you dislike but respect him at the same time. Then there's the fact that because of Cornelius's coup Wyatt's potential will not be squandered anymore.
I do have to admit your comment is hilarious. 🤣😂
@@Soundwave119 thanks. You’re right at least he doesn’t want a civil war either
That sent me! Made me remember Richard TRAITORO Hellsing from Hellsing Ultimate Abridged!
More please !
Once again asking for this to start getting posted to HFY again.
Thank you
please actually do make the design for us
2 in one week 😀😀😀 thanks😘
Good story.
Yeah buddy
Duke Draymore sounds like a Perfectly reasonable Man . Not an Evil despot . But his own Son is against him and Prince Astor , his Nephew , was elevated over him .
I wonder what the REAL story is . Veronica seems like the Draymore version of Julianna Winfield .
I am eager to catch up!
The @SciFiStories1977 channel has a Playlist for "The Black Ship" which includes:
· all chapters of 'Part 01'
· the video with all chapters of 'Part 01' 📕
· the 'Book 02' chapters as each is released 📖
"The Blackship"
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There is also a playlist with just the Chapters released so far.
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Currently, there are three chapters available.
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"The Black Ship: Book 02"
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OMG 3 more in the can ready to go tysm I am a old man and my eye sight is not The best I have been reading syf for a long time this is a great book/story tysm and to these people who think they could do better, I just blew you a raspberry out of my backside for you.
The shuttle should be kept
A wreath of burning vines?
Motto
Ever loyal
Ever humble
Should be KISS enough
Loving it!
Eh with all that advanced technology, they are amazed by a healthy 80 year old? Really? Might want to change that age if this ever goes to print
Only just started listening to these amazing stories. Could someone explain how long we wait usually for next chapter? Chapter 30?
This story is written in real time, and the author writes a new chapter every 5-7 days. The next chapter (29) should be out later today after it was slightly delayed getting to me and needed a few final adjustments.
@@scifistories1977 Many thanks for response. This audio story has actually got me hooked. I'm usually shattered on a night after work and just watch mundane TV. This book has had me searching for more HFY stories. Many thanks :)
Do you have a list of SCIFI stories worth a listen?
Wyatt's banner should be the shape of the black ship, with a hand holding a sword up from the bottom, with a motto of victory over treason. Just my opinion.
I wonder if this episode gave away the name of the as-still-unknown killer of Fredrick (from Chapter 27)
all we know is that they are not on the Clara ship and there are not many prominent nobles with them. so at this point it could be anyone, but i’m guessing it’s someone we have already heard from in book one.
Draymore: "This must not become a war. It is only a question of succession."
Bruh, there's shooting and killing. This is a war. Just looking at history with all the European Wars of Succession in the past two thousand years, and Draymore trying to delude himself and his traitorous ilk that the piss on his leg is, in fact, rain makes me want to facepalm.
I am late I late let’s go get them WYATT😅😅😅😅😊😊😊🎉🎉🎉🎉
Can we get an ETA of ch. 29?
When the nxxt chapter? i want more.
When chapter 29 expected
Affter norinavio idk what anyone expected from staples composters is decent name cause squad name is not very needed and affter all he did techically take out the trash which got him a squadron but the shield yeah i can agree with redford bit to much and etc but i probably shouldnt say crap cause well id prob do the same as wyatt maybe not as much as him but maybe close but in all honesty considering some traditions of medievil times best way to make a shield for your house or order one that can be put onto a shield not too big detailed and more oh yeah i just rembered something i know for a fact no one would like it but wyatt should of done a uh was it luca or something like that
Does anyone knows when chapter 29 will be available?
Sort of but I can't tell, however I'm sure it won't be much longer
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Is Jade, Hadrian's brother?
The prince and Clara's father was the duke's younger brother was he assassinated
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What a bunch of megalomaniacs !
Tem toda a razão e eu não gostando de compras a prestações reconheço que não sou muito bom a economizar mas dívidas isso não ⛔
Yeah pretty sure this a ghost writer.
You can't really hide style and the mind behind it.
Different AI voice?
I'm using a different voice for Duke Draymor's POV.
@@scifistories1977 it worked out pretty well.
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