I guess goat-fainting-genes run on the Staples family! Hope everyone enjoyed this chapter! As always, thank you all for your support, so stay tuned for the next chapter!
no, thank you my guy this story is movie worthy. Im 40 since april and i can say that ive read many books and watched over 1000 movies in my lifetime. This story is both original and very entertaining something todays films are lacking. Hollywood movies are lacking originality as of late. I really wish more people knew about this audiobook. please try to publish this book, its a gold mine. I am being sincere
Do you have a patreon or anything that people can send financial support. I don’t know your backstory but I’m guessing this is a hobbie or side project. But a lot of us myself included have become I dare say o we engrossed in the story and wish to see it continue.
OMG ! It’s Ekhidna! Thank you for your space opera which I look forward to every week. I hope Wyatt Knight Buffet’s journey doesn’t end at eradicating the Drazzon. Thank you again for the space opera.
Who knows how many generations of Staples have had this rare genetic mutation. I wonder if this is a random genetic mutation or some artificial gene modification? I could see some weird noble wanting some commoners to have the same weird/funny problem that some goats 🐐 have.
Thanks! again, The author has a sense of humour with the family fainting, had me laughing loudly. I am amazed at how much better your visuals are getting week by week, keep up the great work, nice to see the Staples Family. Roll on the next exciting episode, as always I will be watching.
Thanks, Kevin! When my new streaming platform is online, i want you to be one of the testers. You'll also get a free account and never have to pay for access.
@@scifistories1977 i would be honoured, to help in any way i can, this sounds like a dream you've been working out for a while, your YT Channel has come a long way and you have helped to pool many great SiFi writers, As I have said before and will say again, You are MY go to TH-camr for bringing writers stories to life, i am sure it will be a huge success, I can not wait to see Your Adventures grow.
I can honestly picturing Clara having all the Staples around and out of nowhere just drop some over the top news and watch them go down like dominoes. With Clara, Cynthia and Winona continuing their knitting like nothing ever happened.😂
Duke Draymors little girl has even more serious issues than I originally thought, Also who's the third party, clearly the supplier of his ships, but it looks like maybe the instigator of the coup, also maybe a connection with the mysterious agent within the Prince's fleet ?
Check back to Chapter 26 about the states outside the principality, then consider Anderson's words as he was restrained in Chapter 23. The Ur Diviners are a good bet for the mysterious "others".
@@davidorf3921 Too late for that Noble family line she wiped out ala The Reaper...based on information 'found 'by Felicity Cintor so it would have bbeen fabricated to make her look good and get back at Veronica/Duke for being snubbed at the table meeteing. :(
This episode made me giddy with delight. When Wyatt’s father and brothers passed out, I almost whooped out loud . Thank you for a worthy addition to this tale.
Absolutely loved this chapter! I really hope that once why it gets to talk to them again fainted in front of the prince add a quart full of Nobles in the Royal family. Definitely would love to hear the family's reaction on that story! John, as always amazing job man! Keep up the Great work!
My pleasure, Karter! Thanks again! I'd like you to be a tester for my new streaming platform. It's not ready yet... but when it is, I'd like to give you a login to check it out.
Good chapter. Swear this is better than 99% of TV shows. Ty for all the work you guys put in. Wyatt asking his fam not to tell Mr warlow he's a blue blood now had me in stitches
i just wrote the almost the exact same thing. hollywood is lacking originality and the writing for most shows are terrible and im tired of the remakes.
This episode had me laughing like a lunatic 😂 loved Wyatt getting to speak to his family. I'd love to have known their reaction to seeing him on the royal procession, with his own banner. Well, i suppose itd mostly be his mum's reaction, the rest will have fainted the moment they worked out what was happening 😂
Another great chapter, the images of the video were great. They represented the story well. I loved how the last image actually said duke draymore. Veronica is feral dog that needs to be imprisoned. The mysterious call says the duke made some sort of deal to save the Principalities but still not why, can’t wait to find out why. The one thing I really hate about Wyatt is the fainting, and all the males log his family do it. Really? I didn’t remember hearing the names of his brothers but having everyone in his family having a W name made me laugh.
Yeah all commoners on the planet apparently have a first name starting with W it was explained in a previous chapter - regarding the fainting there is apparently a hereditary condition Vasovagal syncope which can cause this so looks like the Author knows what they are doing LOL - I suspect that the more Wyatt hangs around with Clara and Cynthia the harder he will be to shock and thus the fainting will decrease, that or it will kill him
@@davidorf3921you never know, remember Wyatt has three implants coming plus one from Commander Winfield. Maybe something in that surgery will remove Wyatt’s propensity for fainting.
This time I'm a little late, since i was watching "a humans best friend" at the time, but god, i rlly loved seeing how both Wyatt and his family are alike, haha
Seems like all the men in that family are wound way too tight.😄 I'm very glad the author chose to cover Wyatt's call, and I hope we will get some more updates as episodes roll in I really appreciate how this isn't just a story about Wyatt. He's a bridge to a host of other stories and characters, all of whom are developing at a respectable pace. Then you have Draymore's story continuing to develop as well. The subtle foreshadowing is VERY well done, with Frederick Anderson's words as Cynthia restrained him being the preface to Draymore's call, and a testimony to the depth of the Duke's treachery. It will be very interesting when the two stories collide. Speaking of Anderson, the prince better have his story down pat. Anderson's absence from the procession will be noticed.
Right when i thought this story couldn't get any better, then WHAM ! I'm telling you right here and now ... This is so good in fact perfect !! Keep the voice it's icing on the cake, the best ... Please keep going so many ways to draw this out and expand the story '' The Black Ship '' . Just wanted to take the time and your eyes to read this ... This is a Win Win Win ... Looking fore ward to listen to Chapter 32 ...Thank You
Last episode was Book 2 Chapter 30. That and the change to Wyatt's family made me think I had missed something. Hope you have returned to chapters and leave out the Book part for simplicity. It appears that the Duke is a pawn of the builders of the Black Ships and he might be in a little over his head.
I’m really enjoying 🤣 this story line, it’s not same old earth against the space council. Telling Wyatt’s surrounding story really helps and seeing his family today, a real joy 🤩 Thank you 🥹
Everything about this story is first rate, professionally & ingenuously written! This chapter was so well done... so enjoyable. Thank you again to the author for such a fantastic SSS & SciFi Stories for all the work in placing such great voices to the characters!
TGIF thank you for a wonderful chapter to close out the week. The staples family reunion though brief was a further development to the continued adventures of WS. The shield may need a rework to include a fainting couch 😅. Wyatt stepped up to the Plate and showed that he is truly a thoughtful son. Clara provided sound advice and though the 400K shocked the family Wyatt let them know that he now has the wherewithal to do more. All of the Staples males are afflicted with the fainting spells. Wyatt’s mother is genuinely proud of her son and all that he has accomplished to date. I am sure that the future holds bigger and better things for Wyatt. Looking forward to chapter 32 😊
It is always a pleasure to find another chapter has hit the youtube waves and I am so glad I don't have to depend on catching it on TV the old fashion way. The fainting spells having a very specific trigger for Wyatt is rather funny and makes him more human than most stories that have a hero without any serious flaws. I had already guessed that Duke Draymore had been 'encouraged' to push for this revolt. What this mysterious being is up to remains to be known but the fact Draymore has apparently acted upon this compulsion has many possibilities that remain to be known. But if I were to postulate on the various possibilities they would be. 1) The Mystrery Being (MB) has something to gain from the instability of the principality, 2) Draymore is just a pawn in this skeem of the MB. 3) There is a genuine threat from some outside force that has prompted all of this that the MB knows of but was unwilling to share with the proper rulers of the principality. 4)... I will hold on to this one till I know more. Anyway another great chapter in the story. But if I had one gripe I would say that the story should be released at the same time and day each week just to help us poor readers from checking their computer every 30 minutes. But who am I to tell y'all what is best. Thanks for giving us this great saga of Wyatt Staples, savior to the princess, adviser to the prince, punching bag to the lovely Cynthia, Knight Bannerett, and son and brother with a habit of fainting whenever he gets overwhelming emotionally overloaded.
I wonder when we will see veronica vs cynthia that will come. I also wonder if the bugs etc in communication bouys and satellites mentioned a couple of chapters ago will trace wyatt's call and put the family in danger. Definitely a few hmmmms going on. Another great chapter Ekhida
Books have always been the best way to tell a story. The mind is better at filling in back ground if the writer gives it hints of what suppose to eye, he does. I can’t wait for next chapter.
I think I'm following 4 or 5 sci-fi authors, but this one is hard wired in my schedule. It's a delight to listen in. The visual descriptions are great and getting better and better. And the story line...a Princess who can kick ass and a knight bannerette who thinks he's a regular Joe. I mean you can't go wrong.🎉
Great episode, reading and pictures. Draymore knows what he is doing is wrong his wife wouldn't be there for him but for the children. So who is behind him and why is he doing what he is doing. slaughtering a whole house ???? I there should be blowback for that. Jincho said his people had more advanced weapons than the principality. His knowledge might help them turn the tide if he can help augment their ships. This could be a movie or series of movies.
Who knows how many generations of Staples have had this rare genetic mutation. I wonder if this is a random genetic mutation or some artificial gene modification? I could see some weird noble wanting some commoners to have the same weird/funny problem that some goats have.
Veronica is a straight DAMN psychopath, I feel like with her this would transfer over into another book of the story where she BECOMES hellbent on revenge because her dad is killed in a manner we don't see coming yet and somehow Wyatt is at the forefront of it because all his training with Cynthia finally turns him into a badass who kicks ass and for the sake of Clara not dying he has to kill the uncle at some point.
Well this was an interesting twist with about 2/3 of the chapter from Wyatt's family on Volantis. I do like how we get to see things from Weskal's pov. It is interesting to see how Wyatt's family is at the same time as Wyatt on the Noirnavio and not in the past. It was great showing the Staples reaction to hearing about the coup and the 3rd Fleet is loyal Duke Draymore, which Wyatt is (was) attached to. It was nice to see one of the reasons why Winona didn't want Wyatt in the navy was if there was a coup/Civil War. I do find it funny that by the time the Gimore finally tells their commoners about the coup Wyatt's family barely has time to think about it and Wyatt calls then 😂. I do love the wholesome scene with the family reunion Wyatt has with his immediate family after not talking with them for about a year. I do like how Weskals reaction to Wyatt wearing a officer uniform and the rest of families reaction quickly following 🤣. I am not surprised that his family is happy Wyatt is now serving in the Prince's fleet and safety at Macha. I am not surprised that Wyatt decided to make sure to see his family gets dumbfounded react of the 400,000 credits, similar to how Clara did to him 😊. It was hilarious that Wam teasing Wyatt thinking the woman's voice he heard from Wyatts end is Wyatt's girlfriend. Especially when Wyatt thinks about Cynthia being his girlfriend 😂 and rebuked his brother that the woman was his superior and his friend. I am not surprised that Wyatt ends the call with telling them he had become a knight barrent. Since he didn't want to deal with the fallout of it. Well you surprised me EkhidnaWritez with all male members of the Staples family has goat fainting issues at something supper surprising😂🤣. Interesting how Wirt fainted because Wyatt became a noble and Weskal due to Wyatt making a friend. I do think that Winona get along well with Clara and Cynthia in finding how Wyatt fainting spells. Poor Wyatt getting 😢 no support from him mom with thinking how many times he probably has fainting due to him becoming wealthy, a officer and a noble. It was nice touch how Cornelius relaxed then he saw the evidence backing up Veronica's claim that House Ivali had betrayed house Draymore and that Veronica did not go half cocked killing of an entire moderately powerful noble family. Its good that Cornelius is smart enough to realize that Veronica is hammer that needs to be kept in check, other wise she may kill people who don't deserve it and cause him unnecessary problems. I do like how Cornelius admits he screwed up raising Veronica.
I knew someone else noticed that Weskal was more surprised by Wyatt making a friend than by the other news. Weskal knew that Wyatt would go far in life so him becoming an officer and wealthy noble was just surprising news, but he had long since resigned to the fact that Wyatt was so guarded that he would never open up enough to make a friend, so him making a friend was an outright earth shattering revelation.
@@thire7432 Of course the family are not stupid so Weskal probably realised that given the friend is also his boss that she must be a fairly important noble as well
Great chapter. Maybe my fav so far. The dukes part in the end made it even better. I like the way the author does his writing. The family visit stirred emotion in me due to my own life exp. Only good authors do that. Love this story and thank you
TY i loved learning about wyatts family, this was a nice surprise. i say this ever time but its true, i love this story and will read or watch as long as you want to write. TY
I already thought there was a third party involved, those black ships were clearly built outside the principality. I don't think it's Drazan myself, perhaps the overlords of those little engineers? And I think Duke Draymore is being coerced, maybe they kidnapped his wife?
The black ships are certainly from an outside supplier, but not Ykanti or Drazzan in origin, Jincho said in the last chapter that his people would basically kill to get black ship technology
Cornelius seems to regret a lot in regards to his daughter. Also her devotion is creepy af. Kinda makes me suspect her mind was forced into this level of devotion, probably by the entities that are pulling the strings behind the scenes. Which would explain why the Duke has locked his son up and hidden away from all prying eyes. He's not just a son that disagrees with him, he's in danger of getting turned in the same fashion as Veronica. My question would be what happened to the spy network that serve the Principality? It's difficult to swallow that the only spy network in the galaxy all belong to Cornelius and his allies! I'm hoping more allies of the Prince pop up in Cornelius's camp and start working against them in the shadows. Just my thoughts as a fan, not critiquing the brilliant work of EkhidnaWritez! I still love the story even if I'm way off lol 😅
The fainting thing is nice and gives life to the story but I’m more forced on the duke and getting more and more confused why he betrayed his nephew and what does he know that made him do it
That indeed is the question isn't it, right now I see a couple of possibilities 1. Whoever is supplying the black ships has managed to convince the Duke that he has to do this to "Save the Principality" or 2. The prince has decided that the overarching rule of the nobles needs to be loosened a little so that commoners can shine a little, which would of course upset the nobility
@@davidorf3921 Both are good reasons but we seen the duke not care about the nobles as well unless they are being useful to him so I don't think it the 2nd reason and the 1st reason does not make sense for him to betray his family like so with out even talking to them or from what i can tell
I need this story made into an anime series at least, better yet, a live action series either on tv, or a streaming service. You have everything a good series needs to be successful! Thanks for the fun!
I'm about to start a streaming platform (see my community posts). If I can get it off the ground, I plan to make this series into an animated cartoon series.
I love this group of episodes I'm always looking to watch the next one and was wondering when this was gonna come out. Keep up the good work and keep making these awesome videos.
Totally intrigued by who Lord Cornelius was talking to at the end. I wonder what the deal Cornelius made was for? This definitely could be made into a great TV series on one of the streaming services. Are you listening Amazon Prime? 😉
I just started watching these and became obsessed. I now can't wait for the next part to come out (assuming more parts are coming). Does anyone know the average time it take for new parts to come out?
Veronica is trying to be like Clara but without the actual emotion to back up the decision. Shes doing it because she is cold, clara did it out of rage at the lives lost.
I can't wait until Clara and Cynthia have a discussion of who goes after Wyatt. What is going to happen when Wyatt has a dance with one of them and they kiss him afterward, faint and cause an enormous scene
Lol I see it now. The 3 of them are knitting in Clara's private quarters. Cynthia: You know, for a pilot, you sure faint a lot. Wyatt: Do not. Clara: Cynthia, I will bet you 5 million credits I can make him faint before you. Cynthia: Your on!
I guess goat-fainting-genes run on the Staples family! Hope everyone enjoyed this chapter! As always, thank you all for your support, so stay tuned for the next chapter!
no, thank you my guy this story is movie worthy. Im 40 since april and i can say that ive read many books and watched over 1000 movies in my lifetime. This story is both original and very entertaining something todays films are lacking. Hollywood movies are lacking originality as of late. I really wish more people knew about this audiobook. please try to publish this book, its a gold mine. I am being sincere
Do you have a patreon or anything that people can send financial support. I don’t know your backstory but I’m guessing this is a hobbie or side project. But a lot of us myself included have become I dare say o we engrossed in the story and wish to see it continue.
@@jb13878 if you look in the main post you will find the Author has a Kofi
Fabulous story 😊
OMG ! It’s Ekhidna! Thank you for your space opera which I look forward to every week.
I hope Wyatt Knight Buffet’s journey doesn’t end at eradicating the Drazzon.
Thank you again for the space opera.
Well we now know where Wyatts trait of fainting comes from. Good old dad. And he passed it along to all his children
Who knows how many generations of Staples have had this rare genetic mutation. I wonder if this is a random genetic mutation or some artificial gene modification? I could see some weird noble wanting some commoners to have the same weird/funny problem that some goats 🐐 have.
also huskies, malamutes, wolves, domesticated dogs but it also affects cats, horses and occasionally even people.
Funny to see that Wyatt's fainting comes from his father
You beat me with that comment.
Looks like everyone in his family has kind of a problem with fainting uh? Hahahahah
I'm glad Wyatt doesn't faint while in battle.
Being faced with the immediate possibility of getting messily dead has a truly amazing capacity to focus a person's attention and efforts.
It is something that happens getting up so HIGH.... then when it was over the DROP TO NOTHING....... The body just shuts down.....
Thanks! again, The author has a sense of humour with the family fainting, had me laughing loudly. I am amazed at how much better your visuals are getting week by week, keep up the great work, nice to see the Staples Family. Roll on the next exciting episode, as always I will be watching.
Thanks, Kevin!
When my new streaming platform is online, i want you to be one of the testers. You'll also get a free account and never have to pay for access.
@@scifistories1977 i would be honoured, to help in any way i can, this sounds like a dream you've been working out for a while, your YT Channel has come a long way and you have helped to pool many great SiFi writers, As I have said before and will say again, You are MY go to TH-camr for bringing writers stories to life, i am sure it will be a huge success, I can not wait to see Your Adventures grow.
Ditto about the visuals!
Synchronized fainting, Clara’s new pass time
The family that faints together stays together 😅
She needs to enoble them all at once 😂
@@zackbuelt9943But Wyatt's mom Winona does have the same fainting issues as her husband and children.
I can honestly picturing Clara having all the Staples around and out of nowhere just drop some over the top news and watch them go down like dominoes. With Clara, Cynthia and Winona continuing their knitting like nothing ever happened.😂
His whole family are fainting goats lol
I love how the men in the family all faint and not the women. Anything that changes up stereotypes in a fun way has my praise
“… Did Wyatt say he made a friend?”
I’ve listened to this episode for the fourth or fifth time.
I chuckle every time. ❤
Duke Draymors little girl has even more serious issues than I originally thought, Also who's the third party, clearly the supplier of his ships, but it looks like maybe the instigator of the coup, also maybe a connection with the mysterious agent within the Prince's fleet ?
Check back to Chapter 26 about the states outside the principality, then consider Anderson's words as he was restrained in Chapter 23. The Ur Diviners are a good bet for the mysterious "others".
The Duke might want to remove the edges from all the knives in her house and hide the bullets.
@@patricklaroseii70 Not to mention taking the power pack from her sword
David, I hope you see this. I do so enjoy you deep dive comments into this story
@@davidorf3921 Too late for that Noble family line she wiped out ala The Reaper...based on information 'found 'by Felicity Cintor so it would have bbeen fabricated to make her look good and get back at Veronica/Duke for being snubbed at the table meeteing. :(
I LOVE THIS STORY, but holy crap the voice being used for Veronica and the tone of it IS like NAILS on a chalkboard type sound.
This episode made me giddy with delight.
When Wyatt’s father and brothers passed out, I almost whooped out loud .
Thank you for a worthy addition to this tale.
Here I am, shutting down for Friday and - BAM, another half hour that comes first ;)
Absolutely loved this chapter! I really hope that once why it gets to talk to them again fainted in front of the prince add a quart full of Nobles in the Royal family. Definitely would love to hear the family's reaction on that story!
John, as always amazing job man! Keep up the Great work!
My pleasure, Karter! Thanks again!
I'd like you to be a tester for my new streaming platform. It's not ready yet... but when it is, I'd like to give you a login to check it out.
@scifistories1977 Of course! You know I'm always happy to help! Just let me know when you ready for testers!
Good chapter. Swear this is better than 99% of TV shows. Ty for all the work you guys put in.
Wyatt asking his fam not to tell Mr warlow he's a blue blood now had me in stitches
i just wrote the almost the exact same thing. hollywood is lacking originality and the writing for most shows are terrible and im tired of the remakes.
Thanks! You never disappoint!!!!
Thank you again. You're very good to me, and I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
@@scifistories1977 your welcome!
Thanks
Thank you! sorry for the late reply. I very much appreciate your support.
Twists and turns. Wheels within wheels. Another great episode! Thanks.
Thanks! Can't wait for the rest!
Thank you!
Gotta say i waited all week for this
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Likewise
the plot thickens!
glad to see wyatt's family and reactions to the story so far
thanks for a great story
Thanks! This is one of my favorite series! Your graphics are getting better all the time. Keep up the great work!
Thank you! sorry for the late reply. I very much appreciate your support.
Chapter 33 part 1 is out later today.
"He made a friend."
Mothers always notice the important things.
I love your work. Please keep going with the story.
Actually it was Weskel who made that statement.
@@thire7432 Oh. Really? Just listening to english is still difficult to me. Sometimes I miss details.
@@Jekanadar yes, Weskal said that and then fainted. It was, apparently, the piece of information most surprising to him.
This episode had me laughing like a lunatic 😂 loved Wyatt getting to speak to his family. I'd love to have known their reaction to seeing him on the royal procession, with his own banner. Well, i suppose itd mostly be his mum's reaction, the rest will have fainted the moment they worked out what was happening 😂
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Another great chapter, the images of the video were great. They represented the story well. I loved how the last image actually said duke draymore. Veronica is feral dog that needs to be imprisoned. The mysterious call says the duke made some sort of deal to save the Principalities but still not why, can’t wait to find out why.
The one thing I really hate about Wyatt is the fainting, and all the males log his family do it. Really? I didn’t remember hearing the names of his brothers but having everyone in his family having a W name made me laugh.
Yeah all commoners on the planet apparently have a first name starting with W it was explained in a previous chapter - regarding the fainting there is apparently a hereditary condition Vasovagal syncope which can cause this so looks like the Author knows what they are doing LOL - I suspect that the more Wyatt hangs around with Clara and Cynthia the harder he will be to shock and thus the fainting will decrease, that or it will kill him
@@davidorf3921you never know, remember Wyatt has three implants coming plus one from Commander Winfield. Maybe something in that surgery will remove Wyatt’s propensity for fainting.
Veronica is the dukes Cynthia, but seems more like a loose cannon psychopath and her instability will be her undoing
This time I'm a little late, since i was watching "a humans best friend" at the time, but god, i rlly loved seeing how both Wyatt and his family are alike, haha
Seems like all the men in that family are wound way too tight.😄 I'm very glad the author chose to cover Wyatt's call, and I hope we will get some more updates as episodes roll in
I really appreciate how this isn't just a story about Wyatt. He's a bridge to a host of other stories and characters, all of whom are developing at a respectable pace. Then you have Draymore's story continuing to develop as well. The subtle foreshadowing is VERY well done, with Frederick Anderson's words as Cynthia restrained him being the preface to Draymore's call, and a testimony to the depth of the Duke's treachery. It will be very interesting when the two stories collide.
Speaking of Anderson, the prince better have his story down pat. Anderson's absence from the procession will be noticed.
Oh, that’s true. Frederick probably would have been one of the nobles in the procession.
The small background details adds to the depth of the story. One again another great chapter
Right when i thought this story couldn't get any better, then WHAM ! I'm telling you right here and now ... This is so good in fact perfect !! Keep the voice it's icing on the cake, the best ... Please keep going so many ways to draw this out and expand the story '' The Black Ship '' . Just wanted to take the time and your eyes to read this ... This is a Win Win Win ... Looking fore ward to listen to Chapter 32 ...Thank You
Last episode was Book 2 Chapter 30. That and the change to Wyatt's family made me think I had missed something. Hope you have returned to chapters and leave out the Book part for simplicity. It appears that the Duke is a pawn of the builders of the Black Ships and he might be in a little over his head.
Thanks!
Thank you, Trinity!!
Great episode! I love how the author is expanding our "sphere of understanding"!
I'm beginning to like this story even more and more.
Please, keep it up.
I’m really enjoying 🤣 this story line, it’s not same old earth against the space council.
Telling Wyatt’s surrounding story really helps and seeing his family today, a real joy 🤩
Thank you 🥹
Mom’s pride replaces her fear for the moment
Enjoying the storyline. Keep up the good work.
Thank you! Glad your enjoying the story.
Everything about this story is first rate, professionally & ingenuously written! This chapter was so well done... so enjoyable. Thank you again to the author for such a fantastic SSS & SciFi Stories for all the work in placing such great voices to the characters!
TGIF thank you for a wonderful chapter to close out the week. The staples family reunion though brief was a further development to the continued adventures of WS. The shield may need a rework to include a fainting couch 😅. Wyatt stepped up to the Plate and showed that he is truly a thoughtful son. Clara provided sound advice and though the 400K shocked the family Wyatt let them know that he now has the wherewithal to do more. All of the Staples males are afflicted with the fainting spells. Wyatt’s mother is genuinely proud of her son and all that he has accomplished to date. I am sure that the future holds bigger and better things for Wyatt. Looking forward to chapter 32 😊
Looks like wyatt comes from a family of fainters🙄😂
I love this story. This is the best story out there. Thank you
It is always a pleasure to find another chapter has hit the youtube waves and I am so glad I don't have to depend on catching it on TV the old fashion way. The fainting spells having a very specific trigger for Wyatt is rather funny and makes him more human than most stories that have a hero without any serious flaws. I had already guessed that Duke Draymore had been 'encouraged' to push for this revolt. What this mysterious being is up to remains to be known but the fact Draymore has apparently acted upon this compulsion has many possibilities that remain to be known. But if I were to postulate on the various possibilities they would be. 1) The Mystrery Being (MB) has something to gain from the instability of the principality, 2) Draymore is just a pawn in this skeem of the MB. 3) There is a genuine threat from some outside force that has prompted all of this that the MB knows of but was unwilling to share with the proper rulers of the principality. 4)... I will hold on to this one till I know more.
Anyway another great chapter in the story.
But if I had one gripe I would say that the story should be released at the same time and day each week just to help us poor readers from checking their computer every 30 minutes. But who am I to tell y'all what is best. Thanks for giving us this great saga of Wyatt Staples, savior to the princess, adviser to the prince, punching bag to the lovely Cynthia, Knight Bannerett, and son and brother with a habit of fainting whenever he gets overwhelming emotionally overloaded.
I wonder when we will see veronica vs cynthia that will come. I also wonder if the bugs etc in communication bouys and satellites mentioned a couple of chapters ago will trace wyatt's call and put the family in danger. Definitely a few hmmmms going on. Another great chapter Ekhida
Books have always been the best way to tell a story. The mind is better at filling in back ground if the writer gives it hints of what suppose to eye, he does. I can’t wait for next chapter.
I think I'm following 4 or 5 sci-fi authors, but this one is hard wired in my schedule. It's a delight to listen in. The visual descriptions are great and getting better and better. And the story line...a Princess who can kick ass and a knight bannerette who thinks he's a regular Joe. I mean you can't go wrong.🎉
Been a long week waiting for this!.
Great episode, reading and pictures. Draymore knows what he is doing is wrong his wife wouldn't be there for him but for the children. So who is behind him and why is he doing what he is doing. slaughtering a whole house ???? I there should be blowback for that. Jincho said his people had more advanced weapons than the principality. His knowledge might help them turn the tide if he can help augment their ships. This could be a movie or series of movies.
Does this entire family have low blood pressure problems or something? The smallest little shock and they're dropping like flies.
I bet you’d faint if someone gave you a million bucks lol
@@davidring681 Naj. Seriously. Also - and he is right - ONE yes, but ALL?
Vasovagal syncope can be hereditary and causes fainting in otherwise healthy people
@@ThomasTomiczek just like goats
Who knows how many generations of Staples have had this rare genetic mutation. I wonder if this is a random genetic mutation or some artificial gene modification? I could see some weird noble wanting some commoners to have the same weird/funny problem that some goats have.
Thoroughly enjoying this storytelling! Interesting, rich, and engaging.
Dude I laughed way too hard at this chapter!!
I love this story so much
Veronica is a straight DAMN psychopath, I feel like with her this would transfer over into another book of the story where she BECOMES hellbent on revenge because her dad is killed in a manner we don't see coming yet and somehow Wyatt is at the forefront of it because all his training with Cynthia finally turns him into a badass who kicks ass and for the sake of Clara not dying he has to kill the uncle at some point.
And now we learn of what’s happening on the home front.
The plot thickens!
This easily became one of my top 5 favorite story's. I'd love to see it animated.
Well this was an interesting twist with about 2/3 of the chapter from Wyatt's family on Volantis. I do like how we get to see things from Weskal's pov. It is interesting to see how Wyatt's family is at the same time as Wyatt on the Noirnavio and not in the past.
It was great showing the Staples reaction to hearing about the coup and the 3rd Fleet is loyal Duke Draymore, which Wyatt is (was) attached to. It was nice to see one of the reasons why Winona didn't want Wyatt in the navy was if there was a coup/Civil War.
I do find it funny that by the time the Gimore finally tells their commoners about the coup Wyatt's family barely has time to think about it and Wyatt calls then 😂. I do love the wholesome scene with the family reunion Wyatt has with his immediate family after not talking with them for about a year.
I do like how Weskals reaction to Wyatt wearing a officer uniform and the rest of families reaction quickly following 🤣. I am not surprised that his family is happy Wyatt is now serving in the Prince's fleet and safety at Macha. I am not surprised that Wyatt decided to make sure to see his family gets dumbfounded react of the 400,000 credits, similar to how Clara did to him 😊.
It was hilarious that Wam teasing Wyatt thinking the woman's voice he heard from Wyatts end is Wyatt's girlfriend. Especially when Wyatt thinks about Cynthia being his girlfriend 😂 and rebuked his brother that the woman was his superior and his friend.
I am not surprised that Wyatt ends the call with telling them he had become a knight barrent. Since he didn't want to deal with the fallout of it. Well you surprised me EkhidnaWritez with all male members of the Staples family has goat fainting issues at something supper surprising😂🤣. Interesting how Wirt fainted because Wyatt became a noble and Weskal due to Wyatt making a friend. I do think that Winona get along well with Clara and Cynthia in finding how Wyatt fainting spells. Poor Wyatt getting 😢 no support from him mom with thinking how many times he probably has fainting due to him becoming wealthy, a officer and a noble.
It was nice touch how Cornelius relaxed then he saw the evidence backing up Veronica's claim that House Ivali had betrayed house Draymore and that Veronica did not go half cocked killing of an entire moderately powerful noble family. Its good that Cornelius is smart enough to realize that Veronica is hammer that needs to be kept in check, other wise she may kill people who don't deserve it and cause him unnecessary problems. I do like how Cornelius admits he screwed up raising Veronica.
I knew someone else noticed that Weskal was more surprised by Wyatt making a friend than by the other news. Weskal knew that Wyatt would go far in life so him becoming an officer and wealthy noble was just surprising news, but he had long since resigned to the fact that Wyatt was so guarded that he would never open up enough to make a friend, so him making a friend was an outright earth shattering revelation.
@@thire7432 Of course the family are not stupid so Weskal probably realised that given the friend is also his boss that she must be a fairly important noble as well
@davidorf3921 I honestly could see Wam not realizing that Cynthia is a noble and Wyatt's suppior due to all the bombs he is dropping on his family 😂.
Already listened to this chapter 2 times! So it's a family thing.
Great chapter. Maybe my fav so far. The dukes part in the end made it even better. I like the way the author does his writing. The family visit stirred emotion in me due to my own life exp. Only good authors do that. Love this story and thank you
TY i loved learning about wyatts family, this was a nice surprise. i say this ever time but its true, i love this story and will read or watch as long as you want to write. TY
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Awesome. Now we know that fainting runs in Wyatt's family.😂😂 Who is the puppet master over Draymore? 👍👍
Thank you
Excellent chapter!!
I love your writing style. 😊
I already thought there was a third party involved, those black ships were clearly built outside the principality. I don't think it's Drazan myself, perhaps the overlords of those little engineers? And I think Duke Draymore is being coerced, maybe they kidnapped his wife?
The black ships are certainly from an outside supplier, but not Ykanti or Drazzan in origin, Jincho said in the last chapter that his people would basically kill to get black ship technology
Cornelius seems to regret a lot in regards to his daughter. Also her devotion is creepy af. Kinda makes me suspect her mind was forced into this level of devotion, probably by the entities that are pulling the strings behind the scenes.
Which would explain why the Duke has locked his son up and hidden away from all prying eyes. He's not just a son that disagrees with him, he's in danger of getting turned in the same fashion as Veronica.
My question would be what happened to the spy network that serve the Principality? It's difficult to swallow that the only spy network in the galaxy all belong to Cornelius and his allies! I'm hoping more allies of the Prince pop up in Cornelius's camp and start working against them in the shadows.
Just my thoughts as a fan, not critiquing the brilliant work of EkhidnaWritez! I still love the story even if I'm way off lol 😅
Great story line. Thank you
Hit LIKE, it's a dam'd good story. . . listen to the Black Ship from the beginning, you won't be disappointed!
“Did Wyatt say he made a friend?”
It never gets old.
love that Wyatt's fainting spell is genetic from his father side. 😂
I am really enjoying this story, what a series this would make.
It's so funny that all the men of the family faint....😂 hey Mom just happy with the knowledge.
WOW On a Friday! Thanks, it was a long week. I think I'll grab a beer
One of the best chapters...... Looking for much more......!!!!!!! GREAT JOB......!!!!!!!!!
The fainting thing is nice and gives life to the story but I’m more forced on the duke and getting more and more confused why he betrayed his nephew and what does he know that made him do it
That indeed is the question isn't it, right now I see a couple of possibilities 1. Whoever is supplying the black ships has managed to convince the Duke that he has to do this to "Save the Principality" or 2. The prince has decided that the overarching rule of the nobles needs to be loosened a little so that commoners can shine a little, which would of course upset the nobility
@@davidorf3921 Right now I'm thinking it's #2.
@@davidorf3921 Both are good reasons but we seen the duke not care about the nobles as well unless they are being useful to him so I don't think it the 2nd reason and the 1st reason does not make sense for him to betray his family like so with out even talking to them or from what i can tell
Draymore bad man get him WYATT 😊😊😊😊🎉🎉🎉
I LOVE THIS!!!!
Excellent chapter
Thank you for these visual upgrades.
3:13 "...clearly *Wirting* on something..."
I see what you did there 😏
I need this story made into an anime series at least, better yet, a live action series either on tv, or a streaming service. You have everything a good series needs to be successful! Thanks for the fun!
I'm about to start a streaming platform (see my community posts).
If I can get it off the ground, I plan to make this series into an animated cartoon series.
Loving this story. Can't wait for more!
So awesome. I love this series I can't wait to see more of it.
I love this group of episodes I'm always looking to watch the next one and was wondering when this was gonna come out. Keep up the good work and keep making these awesome videos.
Love this story, hard to find one to get hooked on
Totally intrigued by who Lord Cornelius was talking to at the end. I wonder what the deal Cornelius made was for? This definitely could be made into a great TV series on one of the streaming services. Are you listening Amazon Prime? 😉
So now we know where Wyatt got his fainting spree from, lol lol lol 😂
ROFL! I called it 😊. "By the way I'm a noble now. Got to go bye!"
Once a week feels too long. I feel like a kid waiting on my next shonen jump episode. Could we get a release schedule?
This series reminds me of the Firefly series. 😊 another series that was way too short.
"Who did you have to kill to get that kind of money?!" *said with sarcasm*
.... I mean, do you want the long list or the short list?
God i am so giddy with this ep. I wanted to see the fams reactions to his promotion to nobility
I inherited a fainting trait from my dad too
I just started watching these and became obsessed. I now can't wait for the next part to come out (assuming more parts are coming). Does anyone know the average time it take for new parts to come out?
4 to 7 days typically depending on chapter length I dare say there will be a new chapter between Wednesday and Saturday
love this book
Veronica is trying to be like Clara but without the actual emotion to back up the decision. Shes doing it because she is cold, clara did it out of rage at the lives lost.
Weskell was wandering the woods, wanting to waste wascally wabbits with his wifle. The comedy chapter.
Forgive me, but I'm not crazy about the way the family was portrayed. They looked like something out of the old west. I knew picky, picky.
a long awaited episode. meeting his family
I can't wait until Clara and Cynthia have a discussion of who goes after Wyatt. What is going to happen when Wyatt has a dance with one of them and they kiss him afterward, faint and cause an enormous scene
Lol I see it now.
The 3 of them are knitting in Clara's private quarters.
Cynthia: You know, for a pilot, you sure faint a lot.
Wyatt: Do not.
Clara: Cynthia, I will bet you 5 million credits I can make him faint before you.
Cynthia: Your on!
@@TheJammer3483 sounds good Clara is feeling mortal from the close of Chapter 30 and Wyatt will stick to first one.
Another episode ❤❤❤
Why the hell am I tearing up?
Way to go WYATT 😊😊😊😊😊🎉🎉🎉🎉