The Black Ship - Chapter 35

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  • @scifistories1977
    @scifistories1977  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +54

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    • @stratometal
      @stratometal 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Oh yeah! I saw Steven's next escapade in my notifications alongside with this! I am like a kid in a candy store and with an all you can eat coupon!

    • @travelingscienceman4404
      @travelingscienceman4404 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Love the sister channel!

    • @adriancooper78
      @adriancooper78 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      I can't thank you enough for your hard work I'm so sorry that you weren't feeling well thank you for everything that you do I passionately look forward to these stories thank you again

  • @ekhidna4
    @ekhidna4 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +378

    Hope everyone enjoys the new chapter! I am feeling much better now and more Black Ship shall come your way! Thank you all for your patience!

    • @yomogami4561
      @yomogami4561 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +22

      glad you're better and love the story

    • @jpwoelfling
      @jpwoelfling 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +34

      Your health is important. Take care of yourself and thank you for the wonderful world you have created.

    • @michaeldargan4462
      @michaeldargan4462 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      Very enjoyable and thank you 👍

    • @Ds-xi2sq
      @Ds-xi2sq 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

      Get better , Well be here when your ready . Everyone thanks you, The Black Ship , Is a very special story !

    • @Tarokenification
      @Tarokenification 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

      Welcome back and happy to hear you are on the good road to recovery. I'll tell ya, it has been a hard week waiting for this but I knew it would all be worth it in the end. Glad you're back to it.

  • @Rockribbedman
    @Rockribbedman 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +98

    I was in withdrawl. So glad you posted this.😂

    • @fabel1429
      @fabel1429 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Ditto!

    • @vec306
      @vec306 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Ditto ditto

    • @ballroomdru
      @ballroomdru 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      For real!!!!

    • @danhardesty6318
      @danhardesty6318 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      As you can see, more than a couple of us were in withdrawal.

    • @gomezasc
      @gomezasc 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Great!!!

  • @Crazy49er
    @Crazy49er 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +65

    Someone needs to move or hide Wyatt's family asap...

    • @snowwolf8186
      @snowwolf8186 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Question how long will they be on the run? Or will we lose one of the family members?
      Only time will tell.

    • @zpase
      @zpase 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      I think, they won't believe he was a mere comoner. And the the prince will find some traitor by just waiting to see who bites

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Well the first line of defense for Wyatt's family is the fact the Gimore family has chosen to stay neutral. Then combination with the fact that Volantis is on the edge of Principality of Astor. So any forces form loyal Duke Draymore will take time to get to them.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@Soundwave119 and the naming convention on Volantis may mean more than one Wyatt Staples, after all every Staples will be W. Staples

    • @303Gaming1
      @303Gaming1 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      They don't know anything about him, let alone his family, they are likely safer if they are not moved since moving them would likely seem suspicious

  • @chrispancoast9767
    @chrispancoast9767 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +34

    the fact these usurper 'nobles' can't fathom a commoner being good at anything is going to be their Achillies Heel in the end. Wyatt earned his Uplifting in more ways than even he is aware of.

    • @Swordstriker97
      @Swordstriker97 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      To be fair several loyalist nobles only really begrudgingly accept his ennoblement.

    • @TheSolidSnakeOil
      @TheSolidSnakeOil 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      If it weren't for the commoners being stone cold afraid of them, they'd have a French Revolution on there hands tout suite.

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Most of the traitor nobles will totally underestimate Wyatt but I have a feeling the Cornelius Draymore unlike most of them would not make that mistake. Especially when given the full background of Wyatt that the 3rd fleet has on him and combine that with what Jade tells them of Wyatt's actions since saving Princess Clara. I have a feeling that what he knows about Cynthia Windfield, he will put 2 and 2 together and realize that it was Wyatt commanding Samuel's Glory when it fought the Drazin, not Cynthia.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Soundwave119 Yup I think you are correct, Wyatt maybe his enemy but he will likely have a lot of grudging respect for him

  • @walterf1205
    @walterf1205 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +22

    LET'S DO THIS!!! I going into withdrawal from lack of awesomeness. I checked every 30 minutes for the last four days for an update. Leave it to the universe to update it when I was physically incapable of checking for an hour & a half.

    • @onthecouch4498
      @onthecouch4498 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Me too. I was 2 hours late. But grateful to have a new chapter.

  • @Shadow.Dragon
    @Shadow.Dragon 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    Great episode! With each implant, Wyatt becomes even more dangerous to the traitors of the Principality! They will regret any actions thy take against his family and friends!

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      More accurately they will not live to get the chance to regret any actions they might take against his family ;-)

    • @steveb6103
      @steveb6103 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Wes is a hunter in a guild. So will the guild come to his families aid?

  • @tgriffetts4806
    @tgriffetts4806 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Uplifted to nobility makes sense his eyes are chromatic in color and not both blue, but distinctly different from other nobility. Surely his eyes will forever mark those he greets and showcase his origins and conduct will differ from what others expect of him. I know we all realize the political entanglement in his future, but filling in the back story on families and history is critical to thickening the plot now and defining the extended roles. It will be interesting to hear how you portray this feudal political arena and class based culture across interstellar space colonization. I foresee pioneers of the past, great deeds of patrons, tragic fates of others. The internal family conditions of both lines have already struck a cord within me and my hopes for the future of Wyatt, the Prince, the Princess, and the loyal families under these. Count me among those interested in the publication of this work, I keep re-listening to the story from the beginning to consider all the implications you have weaved in creating this literary drama.

  • @R151NG5UN
    @R151NG5UN 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Love his new eye colour!! Very wolf like!!

    • @jornzwaagstra1150
      @jornzwaagstra1150 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      the picture wasnt accurate to the descrition tho

    • @beanbag8449
      @beanbag8449 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Eyyyyyy I see what you did there
      Lone wolf wyatt staples for the win!

  • @chrismetevier9396
    @chrismetevier9396 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

    I believe we are ALL in agreement, finally. Anticipation in publishing, great move.

  • @RonaldMyers-oz3pk
    @RonaldMyers-oz3pk 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Watching The water boil .! When I first started following the story there was only 6 or so chapters I was hooked the first chapter. And like a big fish . And checking 6 or 7 times a day and found my self watching the water boil.😂 Looking for the next chapter. And soon realized the next chapter will come out when it's ready just like boiling water for a cup of tea it only boil when it's ready not one second early.er. then I stopped watching the water boil and just wateing for the whistle from My kettle/ notification sound from My phone .so I just stopped watching the water boil And started following other storylines hahaha but as soon as the next chapter is posted . So make sure you have set your notifications to all so If you find your self watching the water boil like me be patient . And.gimmy gimme gimme gimme more more now 😮 just like every one else. Now I just have another cup of tea 😊😊 knowing there's another one coming as soon as it's ready

  • @bobhedden4484
    @bobhedden4484 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Another great chapter, I had wondered about the Hazel eyes but never would have guessed heterochromia. Nice touch. Glad the author is back to writing, really missed it.

  • @truezulu
    @truezulu 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    Wow, the graphics just gets better and better and more and more on point.
    Very well done.

    • @thire7432
      @thire7432 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Still isn’t quite giving him his black hair though.

  • @drew-uk6976
    @drew-uk6976 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    That was fantastic, if Lord Andrew manages to retreive & unseal Wyatt's records i fear for Wyatts family back on Volantis, Jade's bound to use his family to get to Wyatt!.

    • @ThomasTomiczek
      @ThomasTomiczek 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Sounds like a seed for some hard storyline.

    • @thire7432
      @thire7432 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@genemcintyre5352yeah, they’ll have to go through Mr Warlo first!

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      No I'm sorry, our son died 14 years ago on a school trip, killed by the Drazzan ... ;-) Fortunately as Wyatt said he's had until very recently no friends since that time so finding people who truly know him will be difficult, also the weird naming convention might mean there is more than one Wyatt Staples, after all every Staples will be W. Staples on Volantis LOL

    • @Urbana2012
      @Urbana2012 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Yes; his family is a vulnerability. It’ll also give Wes a chance show off his marksmanship (if Ekhidna will indulge us)

  • @stupossum9805
    @stupossum9805 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    Oh thank you for releasing a new chapter. I absolutely love this novel series.

  • @Myrcella_Rykker
    @Myrcella_Rykker 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    Congratulations Wyatt, your a Husky now with those eyes

    • @snowwolf8186
      @snowwolf8186 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Now he is a shining example of a Lone wolf in more ways...

    • @TheSolidSnakeOil
      @TheSolidSnakeOil 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'm wondering why they wanted to change his eye color anyway. Part of the procedure was to make them blue.

    • @lapis6944
      @lapis6944 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@TheSolidSnakeOil Blue is the colour used by Nobles to show their social standing, it was most likely cosmetic for that reasoning, it's mentioned a few time throughout the series that commoners have brown eyes while Nobles have blue and I believe Royalty has purple

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@lapis6944 Do you remember where that was mentioned about the blue eyes? I can see how with noble in the Principality of Astor in general obsessed with looks and could see many nobles deciding to stand out more by not having common blue eyes of nobles. I can see why you think that purple eyes are a sign of royalty in the Principality , since so far the only people with purple eyes are of royal blood.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@lapis6944 most of the nobles have silver cybernetic eyes rather than gene enhanced eyes, suggesting that gene enhancement is a whole new level of expense compared to cybernetics. I'm still curious as to why House Winfield are picking up that cost. The only thing I can think of is that by his actions in saving Clara and later foiling the coup d'etat that they regard Wyatt as someone who has carried out their role of Royal Protectors and are rewarding him accordingly, house Winfield after all were the first to talk about Knighting Wyatt

  • @grimaldus4475
    @grimaldus4475 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Woohoo chapter 35!!! Now I can see how the new space marine Wyatt Staples does lol

  • @fredflint5645
    @fredflint5645 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    The plot thickens. As more espionage was ordered. Very interesting story. Thanks.

  • @codyayres
    @codyayres 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    I have been waiting and checking for the next chapter after a week. I love this story so much.

  • @RonaldMyers-oz3pk
    @RonaldMyers-oz3pk 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Wakey everyone. You can stop watching the water boil haha ❤😊

  • @sethk6763
    @sethk6763 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    I prefer reading books, but the hilariously akward voice of the AI is 75% of the experience.
    And the story by itself accounts for the remaing 75%.
    All in all i never listened to audiobooks, since i like to read.
    But I'm enjoying the stories on these channels.
    Keep up the good work.

  • @splitirisbear4589
    @splitirisbear4589 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    To think that someone of common birth can't possibly be exceptionally good at something? The arrogance. It's no wonder the principality is declining.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      It's the education system, the commoners are bought up being told that it is there role to do whatever they are told by the nobility, meanwhile nobles are bought up being told that the commoners hare basically menial workers. It was probably originally intended that the nobles were supposed to lead by setting a good example but over time that's been corrupted

  • @Revittize
    @Revittize 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Another great episode. It was great to get an explanation of the implants. Jade is a piece of work since he was the one that killed the blue blood and blaming the Prince on it. I still want to know why they are calling him a false Prince.

  • @kevindunn5591
    @kevindunn5591 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Wyatt is going to become a Royal lone Wolf! Just a thought. Love the story!

  • @Grogzilla22
    @Grogzilla22 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    BLACK SHIP JUST DROPPED

  • @yomogami4561
    @yomogami4561 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    enjoyed this chapter and the eyes were a surprise but i loved the reason behind it. nice to know the hereditary traits can overpower the new therapy
    i suspect anyone going after wyatt's family will face a world of hurt by them

  • @sethk6763
    @sethk6763 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Loyalty is its own reward

  • @Urbana2012
    @Urbana2012 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Welcome back!!! Wonderful episode! Listened a second time already. Again: the new and additional graphics are a delight.

  • @DannyWilliams-ce9wl
    @DannyWilliams-ce9wl 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I have enjoyed every chapter thoroughly. Always looking forward to the next one. It's very well written and holds ones attention to the edge.

    • @DannyWilliams-ce9wl
      @DannyWilliams-ce9wl 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I am also going to download the entirety when completed, just so I can enjoy it many more times and share it with friends and family when camping sitting around a fire and looking at the stars high in the rocky mountains. I don't know how many of your listeners have seen the stars from atop a ten thousand foot mountain but it is a sterile experience that never gets dull. Thank you for the stories.

  • @thomasohanlon1060
    @thomasohanlon1060 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Out standing
    Now begins the time of peril for the Staples family

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Well at least House Gimore is neutral so the Tratior forces will have to be careful not to alienated them and push them to side House Astor. Then Volantis is on the edges of the kingdom, so it will take time for any hypothetical tratiors going after Wyatt's family. To me they are more danger of large pirate Drazin raiding squadrons.

  • @jaystevens9394
    @jaystevens9394 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    Different colored eyes wasn't what I was expecting. I was guessing cat eyes or something 😆

    • @DrgnLdyLizzie2001
      @DrgnLdyLizzie2001 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I was thinking it would be something that made him smell really good to the female half of the population, like super pheromones.

    • @jaystevens9394
      @jaystevens9394 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@DrgnLdyLizzie2001 dudes gonna find himself married to the princess or something.

    • @DrgnLdyLizzie2001
      @DrgnLdyLizzie2001 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@jaystevens9394Lol. Yeah, probably.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      @@jaystevens9394 Clara or Cynthia, I was originally thinking Cynthia but have changed my mind to Clara now, I think both ladies in their own ways are as broken as Wyatt is, but because of her reputation no noble is going to want to marry Clara, on the other hand Wyatt can see beyond her carefully crafted mask...

  • @garycoffey5149
    @garycoffey5149 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    So happy next chspter is here woo hooo

  • @Longbowman3
    @Longbowman3 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I like the symbolism of his body rejecting the noble’s attempt to turn his eyes blue, basically sums up Wyatt’s character in a nutshell.

  • @debrobertson-positivedirec5898
    @debrobertson-positivedirec5898 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    One of the reasons I prefer this channel and stories, is the dialog.
    Description is nice, but too much and my brain wanders. I enjoy hearing the interactions.

  • @davidorf3921
    @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

    OK here's one for you all to think about, who the hell is Jade working for ? We know that somehow he was the one who killed Fredrick Anderson yet he's telling his supposed master that Anderson was executed by the Prince

    • @danwhiteman2529
      @danwhiteman2529 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I first thought Hadrian, but now with the tech he used to kill Anderson, it might be the puppet master (or maybe Andrew?) over Draymore.

    • @travelingscienceman4404
      @travelingscienceman4404 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      I am guessing one of the other human factions, not the erebians, but one of the more developed ones that are more distant from the principality. I am blanking on the other human nation names but there was one I was thinking of in particular.

    • @travelingscienceman4404
      @travelingscienceman4404 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      also I am curious to talk to you outside of youtube comments, how can I get a hold of you?

    • @dantepoggini7752
      @dantepoggini7752 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      When they murdered Anderson and used unknown technology in the principality, I suspected Jade was working for the ship builders, now that he’s hiding his involvement in the murder, shows that the orders were received from elsewhere, which gives me grounds for more suspicion.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@genemcintyre5352 I don't have a Kofi, that's the author LOL 🤣

  • @USMC0311CplJackson
    @USMC0311CplJackson 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    A good work day is a work day I can work while listening to a new chapter of The Black Ship!

  • @BK-nm7xt
    @BK-nm7xt 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Loving the story. I have a couple friends following it too.

  • @ralphgoodman8181
    @ralphgoodman8181 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Wyatt looks good. I forget how young he is. I wait for every new post. Thanks again .

  • @dockaos924
    @dockaos924 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Another great chapter thanks👍😊

  • @Soundwave119
    @Soundwave119 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I am glad that EkhidnaWritez is feeling well enough to continue writing more chapters for this story again. 😊
    I do like how this chapter started with Cynthia double-checking that the eye mutation that he now has posses no health risk the Cybernetic and genetic doctors. I do love how the head doctor reaction to Wyatt was a commoner and how Cynthia will not tolerate anyone bad mouthing him in her presence 😂. I am not surprised that the doctors like how Wyatt obeys their commands, especially when they can tell Wyatt doesn't want to be there.
    I am not surprised that Wyatt is very happy to be out of the pod. I do like how Cynthia asked Wyatt if his family has history of heterochromatia. Interesting how 1 eye 👁 is vibrant ice blue and the other eye 👁 is vibrant hazel . Interesting to see that Wyatt's new eyes have zoom function.
    I am not surprised that Wyatt has mixed feelings about his scar from the Drazin not being heal.
    I do like the scene where Cynthia and Wyatt have a private chat first time since his new genetic and cybernetic enhancements. I do love Wyatt's reaction to the sycreter implant is to make you smell better and how Cynthia agrees at his reaction of stupid blue bloods 😂🤣😆.
    It's funny how Wyatt reacts to hearing hearing all the different cybernetic and genetic enhancements for looking and smelling better.
    I do like we get to see Jade fonally getting into contact with Andrew Caystion. Its funny how Jade talks smack about Clara and Cynthia but if had to face them in person wouldn't dare to say such things to keep his head 😂. Interesting that Jade didn't tell the truth that Jade killed Frederick Anderson to prevent him breaking and release intel.
    Its going to hilarious when Jade finds out that Wyatt is truly a commoner 😂.

    • @ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
      @ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I was surprised that Clara did not come to visit Wyatt while he was in the pod Could this be a concern to disguise the importance of Wyatt It was also interesting that Jade contacted Andrew instead of Tigan

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I am guessing she wanted to but all the things she needs to do to make sure the Noirnavio is properly stocked, do social interactions to support her brother and planning her campaign against the Caystion.
      To me, Jade is the type of person that when given a task she rather give his superiors the full story and not a partial story. The Caystions control the 3rd Fleet and that's where most of military files on Warrent Officer Wyatt Staples is at. So Jade talks Andrew Caystion to get the full picture on Wyatt Staples and then he will contact Tigan.
      Edit: After rewatching chapter 28 it seem that I mixed things up, I thought that Jade worked for Tigan but it was the Caystons. OOPPPSSS! So Jade lied to her own boss about how Fredrick Anderson died. This has made others and now me think there is a possibility that Jade maybe trip agent.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx no but she had her best and most trusted friend watching over him, Cynthia has the sort of reputation where people do not want to make "mistakes" around her, by leaving Cynthia in charge of Wyatt Clara is able to get on with the boring but necessary stuff and does not show how Important Wyatt is to her, though having Cynthia there sort of does that anyway LOL

    • @ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
      @ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@davidorf3921 After several more watching's it seems as though Cynthia is very conscious of security at the medical facility

  • @Sethy1ST
    @Sethy1ST 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Finally back from work, now gotta take a shower and delight myself in this new chapter

  • @Edwoodgt
    @Edwoodgt 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    One of the most gripping scifi stories I've listened to in ages, can't wait for the next addition. Thank you

  • @stratometal
    @stratometal 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    OOOOOOOOH Heterochromia!
    I had to go looking at what vibrant blue ice looked like, nice. As for deep hazel almost orange I am also familiar with that, though I bet Wyatt's might be borderline unnatural. The description makes it sound like they are close to amber. What a striking combo.
    Anyway Wyatt be eye licking himself!🤣
    I really like the depictions, really crisp. His face look quite nice, the armor, the hair, everything! This AI is scary good, or is it the person feeding the prompts mastering the tool? Kudos.
    And to Ekhidna, hope you are feeling better! Thanks for the story! You da man!

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      The AI is good but the prompts make a massive difference, even the orer or weighting of the words has significant effect.

    • @stratometal
      @stratometal 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@davidorf3921 Takes effort to get the AI to say things and make images the way you desire. People think that using AI tools is easy but its just a new skill that takes time to master. Writing those prompts got to be a pain. I have tried but my results have been childish.

  • @edwinmarcais6040
    @edwinmarcais6040 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I'm enthralled to see the new chapter. Its an exquisite saga of epic proportion. I will anticipate the next chapter, trying to wait patiently. Its amazingly addictive. Thank you so much

  • @davidorf3921
    @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Ah I can be happy now

  • @tomsbluzmanis7040
    @tomsbluzmanis7040 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Would love to see the moment he choses to get the Tier 3 implant. Oh yheaaaa🎉

  • @soullessred5785
    @soullessred5785 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Oh I hope Wyatt’s family gets some protection before anything happens to use them against him

  • @danielleriley2796
    @danielleriley2796 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This is just the best story and the best reading I have ever heard. The pictures are so Goddess and fitting. I just love it!

  • @figplucker908
    @figplucker908 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Thanks

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Wow, thank you, figplucker!

  • @craig-n9v
    @craig-n9v 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Please,please, more ,more,sooner next time

  • @dennisstancil1427
    @dennisstancil1427 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    and another wonderful story, thank you, looking forward to the next one.

  • @Titansmiter
    @Titansmiter 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Jade sounds like a double agent. Someone gave him an order to kill Frederick but now his boss doesn't know?

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Or even a triple agent, the Prince (or whoever orders Jade on behalf of the prince) think he is Loyal, the Cayston's think he's actually there man, but the reality is someone probably outside the system gave him the ability and technology to kill Frederick

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@davidorf3921 It would be a crazy twist if Jade is triple agent working for both traitor and loyalist at the same time! Also isn't Jade a agent of Tigan and not Andrew Cayston? I think that's the reason why Jade lied to Andrew how Fredrick died.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Soundwave119 I'm really not sure, all I know is that as yet we have not seen the bigger picture, Jade certainly has his own agenda though

  • @KrK-EST
    @KrK-EST 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Thank you. 🙏
    It has been long time since the last one and have missed the series a lot.

  • @matthiasschmidt4974
    @matthiasschmidt4974 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    "I am the great nightmare you so conciously awoid. Cause I am your downfall."

  • @jpwoelfling
    @jpwoelfling 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Thank you for this chapter. I was really wanting to know what the mutation in his eyes would look like. I was hoping they would be demon Red. lol.

  • @leonievanheerden7090
    @leonievanheerden7090 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Reveal day.... Wyatt becoming even more Wyatt 👏⭐❤️

  • @pauldwalker
    @pauldwalker 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    just as i was heading to bed.

  • @nelsonclark7092
    @nelsonclark7092 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Good story ty for the entertainment

  • @chrismetevier9396
    @chrismetevier9396 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Thanks!

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank you Chris, It's very much appreciated.

  • @leonievanheerden7090
    @leonievanheerden7090 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Just thought to add one more comment 😀 I have a sinking, nasty feeling with my suspicion as to the identity of the traitor simply named J Stay safe and alert dear Wyatt, trouble lurks on the horizon 🍀

  • @Kangstor
    @Kangstor 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    It would be a real plot twist if Wyatt was a sleeper agent not even knowing it himself and not just him but his whole family for generations were sleeper agents only to be used in a dire situation and not even royal family were informed about this.

    • @thire7432
      @thire7432 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      That would be a great twist. The reader would be thinking “ha ha, the nobles think there’s something sketchy about him when he’s really just awesome.” But after it’s revealed “…I guess the bad nobles were right after all…”

  • @jajajtec
    @jajajtec 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I hoped for glowing iris for some reason. But that works as well.

  • @andrewlatex950
    @andrewlatex950 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Thank you for this latest chapter the saga continues to develope quite well. The eyes were a nice touch just like our cat 🐈‍⬛.

  • @kevindunn5591
    @kevindunn5591 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Life is good!! Thank you

  • @josebarahonalopez907
    @josebarahonalopez907 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    That was some chapter ❤.
    The wait was killing me. I need my shot 💉of the black ship already

  • @alaricrivas3819
    @alaricrivas3819 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Thanks For The Update.

  • @Emekkaa
    @Emekkaa 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Hell yeah

  • @kaikenichi6409
    @kaikenichi6409 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Wyatt might be a descendant of the first lone wolf 🧐

  • @l33790053
    @l33790053 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I get home from work and theres a new episode of the black ship? HECK YES! And people say mondays suck xD

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Mondays do suck, but just occasionally an episode of The Black Ship can make things a bit better

  • @Ds-xi2sq
    @Ds-xi2sq 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    A+ Thanks !

  • @T-MoMoD
    @T-MoMoD 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Let's go!!!!

  • @davidlynch8955
    @davidlynch8955 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    The next chapter absolutely has to be one of two things wither wyatt, cynthia and clare are talking maybe with milkedis or its going to involve the caystons

  • @R151NG5UN
    @R151NG5UN 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    God damn this one took a bit to come out, dead set I check every day! 😅

  • @dennisakb4858
    @dennisakb4858 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Wondering if the heterochromia condition is associated with a previous noble house that may have been lost .

  • @andrewdye836
    @andrewdye836 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    NEED MORE! Enjoying very much.

  • @phillipholland92
    @phillipholland92 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I've been waiting all day for this

  • @smokinggnu6584
    @smokinggnu6584 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    He can't POSSIBLY just be a normal guy! Quick, waste extensive resources chasing shadows to prove he's some sort of uber-spy or something!!

  • @johnminer1407
    @johnminer1407 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Authors medical background is showing (bone marrow function and heterochromia). I knew a girl in high school that had heterochromia. It does exist but would also been pleased with red eyes.

  • @KarterBigs
    @KarterBigs 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Well well peek a boo!

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Once again, Thank you Karter!

  • @mikeloeven
    @mikeloeven 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    You're a SPACE MARINE Wyatt !!

  • @adriancooper78
    @adriancooper78 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Yo'!!! House Cyaston is treacherous

    • @Urbana2012
      @Urbana2012 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      THANK YOU!
      Has anyone else speculated why Duke Draymore has rebelled and rebels so hate the Astor’s?
      Maybe the Prince has rejected romance with Draymore’s daughter Veronica?
      Or, maybe diabolical machinations of forces outside and against the Principality?
      And why has Ekhidna introduced then given so much time to Gabrielle, the Duke’s son?
      Revenge for a demotion or death among the Caystons?
      Maybe I’m over thinking it.

    • @adriancooper78
      @adriancooper78 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @Urbana2012
      An earlier episode had indicated that Duke Draymore is getting help from an outside source. Perhaps they promised him something once to Principality is defeated.

  • @robertisaacson6072
    @robertisaacson6072 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I was hoping for gold eyes..... it would have made everyone around him feel lesser in a way.

  • @outlawrprc2131
    @outlawrprc2131 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Boy do you guys enjoy the punishment the we get after almost 8 days without a new chapter

  • @Magath1988
    @Magath1988 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    i can honestly say, this is the best Hfy storie i´ve read. Congratz, it´s trully awesome.

  • @UniverseUnfolded
    @UniverseUnfolded 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The part I've been looking forward to the most is here

  • @idiinletholdus
    @idiinletholdus 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    love the this story and how its told please keep it going 😃

  • @jayjester4843
    @jayjester4843 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Ah, Princess Clara wants her boyfriend to smell good.

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Clara does not see Wyatt in romantic light in any way or at least consciously. Subconsciously on the other hand I can see is a different story, subconsciously Clara sees that in many ways Wyatt would be good partner for her, particularly after he completes the training that Redford and Cynthia give him to mold him into the best knight he can be, especially since he is 1 of Clara's few true friends who is utterly loyal to her.
      Also Clara knows that Wyatt is probably not going to even think of romance at least until he feels like he is a competent officer and noble.

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@Soundwave119 I would lay odds that at some point Clara will end up kissing Wyatt (although it might be Cynthia who kisses him) after which Wyatt will eventually get the idea that he now has a girlfriend. But I suspect if/when it occurs it will be in a funny situation. e.g. they end up on Volantis to meet Wyatts family and have that knitting session and Wyatt's youngest bro asks which of the two ladies is his girlfriend, Wyatt goes all defensive and whichever noble he will ends up with will be the one to ask him why he's never asked ....I think that it promises to be one of the authors funnier chapters

    • @ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx
      @ArthurBuchanan-vf7kx 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@davidorf3921 I also look forward to this you may have the background correct (if not Wam then his mother). The other scene might be (much less likely ) would be if a plot gets involved with Veronica

  • @NickoGBG
    @NickoGBG 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Hi. Really liking this new space opera! Go Wyatt, go!

  • @gandalfff69
    @gandalfff69 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hope you're feeling better OP

  • @carsparks1980
    @carsparks1980 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Late comment - who else wants to see Nultar's reaction to the duel?😀

  • @mikebruins7859
    @mikebruins7859 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Ko-fi paid. Thank you for The Black Ship - Chapter 35.

  • @daghost11
    @daghost11 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Yep, i can see it more & more now- Lady Veronica will be sent to investigate Wyatt herself, which means a showdown between Wyatt, Cynthia & Clara and Lady Veronica… and i can see Wyatt besting Veronica, and he’ll spare her life…

  • @stonereaper1157
    @stonereaper1157 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Many videos and no time to watch
    That said this holiday weekend I've caught half of the story
    Excellent so far

  • @AndreHeij
    @AndreHeij 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Thx for the upload 💯

  • @korellian
    @korellian 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This is such a good series. ❤

  • @hillbillyhippipe
    @hillbillyhippipe 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    hello there story I have kept up with each episode they are very good I am waiting for Wyatt to get back at that Duke to see if he throws the Duke into a bunch of draws A fitting in to a coward I like the story man waiting for the next chapter thank you very much man...

  • @s0cc451
    @s0cc451 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    O Blessed Machine! A new Black Ship episode dropped!

  • @carsparks1980
    @carsparks1980 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Well THIS will get interesting.
    First, I don't think Wyatt realizes he was going to be ennobled pretty much from the time Cynthia started training him. As a commoner, he was too legally and socially vulnerable to be a commoner and remain in close association with Clara, and his actions more than justified his elevation.
    Yes, Jade neatly sidestepped his role as an assassin. He has plausible deniability, and sometimes the truth is a bit too inconvenient - especially since it would make the Caystons look bad (and Draymore by extension).
    I have to wonder if Andrew will be killed or captured. Killing him would be easier, but his interrogation could be very enlightening. We will have to see.
    Jade's access to such an extensive and effective cyber penetration suite has me also wondering. We know from Jincho and the raid on the secret base principality cyber security is a bit lame, but the suite seems a little too good. Like, maybe he's not a principality native, although the comment about "disloyal mongrels" argues he is a member of the nobility.
    I guess we'll just have to see!😀

    • @ThomasTomiczek
      @ThomasTomiczek 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I think Jade's history has nothing to do with his equipment - more, who is providing ALL the equipment, including the stealth ships? There is a high tech player in the background.

    • @carsparks1980
      @carsparks1980 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@ThomasTomiczek The stealth ships make it abundantly clear there is an external higher tech actor, and Draymore's "phone call" at the end of Chapter 31 solidifies that thought. My question had more to do with "is Jade a principality native, or is he on loan from the external power?" At the moment he seems to be a principality native. As for who the external group is, I still think the Ur Diviners are the best bet for reasons mentioned in other posts.
      I don't think the external power is supplying all the equipment, just enough of "the good stuff" to give Draymore what they think is a decisive edge. That is a pattern seen worldwide IRL at this point.
      As a side note, principality forensics seems incredibly lame. Questions like "why would you even check Wyatt's quarters? Did you really think somebody would put a QEC on a garbage scow? If it was placed in the quarters, what about checking access times - or access logs for modification?" Did Finnegan enforcers think to interrogate the dissidents to find out why they got out of line? Color revolutions always leave clues, but you have to look for them. And don't get me started on Anderson's death.

    • @ThomasTomiczek
      @ThomasTomiczek 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@carsparks1980 Yep, but that means that the availability of a high-tech suite does not indicate anything. And yes, there are holes in the story ;) Well... it is still amazingly good.

    • @carsparks1980
      @carsparks1980 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ThomasTomiczek There are no holes, only questions. 😄
      I have to REALLY like something to put in this much effort.
      The availability of a high tech suite is a dot, indicating several things. Intel is about finding dots and connecting them correctly.
      EDIT: Now that I think about it, the seeming lack of competent forensics makes sense under this social system. With political assassinations as a not infrequent aspect of life, would nobles want a competent forensics authority? Somehow, maybe not.

    • @bobhedden4484
      @bobhedden4484 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@carsparks1980 I agree with the questioning of the dissidents to find out who got them started, but that could lead to Jade and end his character.

  • @josebarahonalopez907
    @josebarahonalopez907 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Lunch time just got better ❤❤

  • @jasonmacip3108
    @jasonmacip3108 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Been waiting on black ship