Okay, so my laptop has this weird habit of stopping vids while I'm in the middle of watching them, right? So, it gets to exactly 29:47 and stops and I have a mini heart attack. I half-expected a pink pony to pop up next to me and drag me away. Added to the atmosphere. :D
When you recognize whose voice it is that's sobbing T_T I like how Mag is portrayed like one of those 'Intelligent planner' characters. Maybe leaning towards cunning, but still good hearted. And I wouldn't be surprised if 'He' turned out to be Guti somehow xD
I am amazed at the fact that this series is nothing like what I had imagined. The power that Curse Word had and the promise Magpie needed to keep genuinely horrified me. But the hope to see each other again nearly drove me to tears. Well done, Lost. You've created a truly captivating story.
How do I put this into words... I knew the both of you were good story tellers, by Celestia and all that is awesome in this world, you two are some of (if not the best) storytellers I have ever heard in my life. The way you all spoke and it's tone, it's unsettling nature, it darkness, it all fits so well! I hope to see more! And you two are awesome!
Well... That was both sad, yet scary, especially the part where Magpie went all demented. I have a feeling there will be more to this, but all in all great job! Awesome start to the month!
Haillee Jordan hmm i thought it was a harry potter valdimort thing one must not speak his/her name type thing ya know if you say it ya get cursed i dunno everyones opinion matters lol jk its the internet but any way nice thought tho
Night Shade I'm not BronyLeo but I AM his brother so what do you want? you got the reference now for the promised pastry!, do you want a cupcake, brownie, enclair, croissant, cake, pie. any pastry, even waffles and pancakes even though they aren't really pastries.
That was...incredible. That ran a great gambit of emotions. Surprise and pleasant at first then the dark twist that was the climax but that ending...oh man that ending. The was heart-wrenching. I was getting all teary eyed from it. You guys did a great job! Bravo.
saw that coming *calmly walks further into hell* also great story I... actually saw my oc following your "beloved" down the wrong path, the sound of a pony's whooves and echoing along a dark foggy path. ik those sounds weren't in there but these beautiful sad stories be narrated or read alone in a dark room, are so well done I can't help but fill in every detail. thx lost for another wonderful tale..
This is my first time hearing these stories and I almost cried at the end of this one. A being so distraught at the loss of her loved one...its beautiful.
the end part made me cry so much as if i could feel her pain of not being able to find her beloved i swear i could actually feel her pain THE FEEEELLLLLS
Well, I did not see that ending coming! This was so defiantly worth the wait!!! Another amazing job Lost, and you two Magpie!! Defiantly going to come back to this one again!
Very well made, especially loved the artwork you had to go along with the vivid storytelling.Now if you'll excuse me, it's time to go and dance with the devil thanks to a certain Magpie.
Beautifully written, you managed to outdo yourself after your last story. Though I feel there are small bits of filler you could edit out, this story was great I love the twist ending and just how you were going to twist this into a Grimdark. So I could only wonder if you will be doing another sequel after this and if so, how would you go about it? either way, I love both stories keep up the awesome work Lost!
Losty, I enjoyed this story. Very dark, very scary storytelling, but so damn good!!! Can't wait for next weeks story!!! Keep being awesome, Grimdark queen of the bronies!!!
oooooh that gave me chills I am glad you guys started the spoopyness I think everyone waited until today because of Sister Location which Lost Guitiu I can't wait til you guys play it Sister Location is epic...
I actually felt tears in my eyes on this one. This story... Truly a work of art. Tragic and heartrending, but so beautiful. You did a good job on it... Both if them.
That ending tho... Good story, and a great way to start off the month.... _Speaking of hell, my stop is here_... *Pulls out Chain gun* _Rip and Tear_...
Clever effects on the vortex on what was meant to be us going to the afterlife but have Magpie as a detraction we are pony 712 and that our soul is sold to you. Bravo !!
Even if she told me that I had to be sacrificed in the end, I would still hug her and wish her good luck to be with her lover once more again before entering into the depths of Tartarus
I'm rewatching this series even though Christmas is 2 days away, and I felt my heart ache at the ending. I knew what was gonna happen, but it still didn't prepare me for all the emotions that I would be feeling. You, Magpie, Gutti and so many of the others have done an amazing job with this series! I actually made some art for you and Magpie I just haven't had the chance to send it the last few years. I promise when the opportunity arrives, I will send them! Plus, in the letter I will send, I will describe my MLP OC that me and my first girlfriend had came up with, giving details on her color and her cutie mark. Who knows, if you like her, it would be cool if someone you knew who does the vectors for ponies could draw her? And maybe she(I) could be a guest in any stories in the future. But it's okay if not. I really enjoy all your work Lost, and yours too Magpie! You two are my big inspirations and I want to be able to do something like what you guys do. Rarijack and Pinkiedash forever!! LostMag 5ever!!
Dang.... wow...totally felt tears welling in the end there. Is it...bad that I slightly relate to this story? I mean...I can picture myself being Curse Word if this were to happen to me beloved...
LN, if i haven't said it already, this series is so good! I listen to all your narrations when i sleep and, although i have been having some dreams thanks to them, it's super worth it! Hopefully, we can link up some day and discuss bringing a few ideas I have to life. Happy New Year
i'm extremely mindblowned because the one who magpie was talking too was the colt from the 1st? because the colt y'know who was shouting and curse word curse at that guy and the colts mother killed her maybe thats colt who died i get it this is like the sister location y'know in the game there is many questions and secrets about what was going actually make the game good and secrety the same time as your fic losty your story was absolutly brilliant because it gives sense of lore within the story brilliant
Loved the first story and have been fighting for time to listen to this, so excited!!! ....oh, oh wow, this is adorable! I am smiling so much and even if the POV is dead this is happy!.....oh? Backstory? Hmm, this took a serous tone. *Magi talking about first seeing Curse* ...*tearing up from cute* ...*clears throat* I'm fine! Oh dear, The Beloved knew about her talent....I can feel the tragedy coming close!...*is uncomfortable and scared with Magi's change of voice* W-what's...what's happening....I-I don't understand...Oh nonononono This stopped being cute o.O. *crying again* I....she... Whelp, OW *clutches dead heart* Oh god! That ending, Lost your lamentation cry brought me to tears once again!. This was so amazingly heart breaking and I loved it! The whole twist I did not see coming and at the end of it all.....who's HIM? Maybe we'll find out next year?
that was amazing. i loved every second and i was on the edge of my seat the entire time. i wish now that i went to watch the first one and not this one first.
I'd be all like "wait a minute is this hell?" Then i'd be like "thanks i needed to be dropped off here i sold my soul and was almost due" and then i'd call out to a friend :oi crowley man i'm here early now we can party forever" and there would be this big rage in hell and beloved would be made fun of for bringing a soul who isn't able to amount to her debt to the good king of hell
lost, if you're reading this, then first of all, thank you, and second, I hope everything will turn out alright in the end for Curse Word and her beloved Magpie.
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I love that one scream that stands out and you realize who's voice it is.
OMG Lost!
"Oh, my name doesn't matter. You won't remember it."
But...but I know your name..
I will find you
ArtisticKateCat i Will get you
I love you guys.
Yeah...
MAGPIEPONY.
I KNEW HER BELOVED HAD TO BE MAGPIE!!
EXACTLY
YES
Nope it’s PEWDIEOIE
So this is what Magpie does When she's not writing
Chris Gionti Yeah being q part-time demon
Okay, so my laptop has this weird habit of stopping vids while I'm in the middle of watching them, right? So, it gets to exactly 29:47 and stops and I have a mini heart attack. I half-expected a pink pony to pop up next to me and drag me away.
Added to the atmosphere. :D
When you recognize whose voice it is that's sobbing T_T
I like how Mag is portrayed like one of those 'Intelligent planner' characters. Maybe leaning towards cunning, but still good hearted.
And I wouldn't be surprised if 'He' turned out to be Guti somehow xD
Alexander Lyon Guti? Who's that?
Wanda Roger Oh, right! GutiuSerenade, yeah?
unfortunatewitnessX yup ☺
Alexander Lyon
I feel like 'He' has to be either guti or the devil voiced by guti
I am amazed at the fact that this series is nothing like what I had imagined. The power that Curse Word had and the promise Magpie needed to keep genuinely horrified me. But the hope to see each other again nearly drove me to tears. Well done, Lost. You've created a truly captivating story.
That was fantastic, Lost. You, Magpie, and Guti did a great job as always. It was spooky but very sad.
Ribonchan o
Who's magpie
A heart-wrenching story that still manages to be scary. Wonderful job!
How do I put this into words...
I knew the both of you were good story tellers, by Celestia and all that is awesome in this world, you two are some of (if not the best) storytellers I have ever heard in my life.
The way you all spoke and it's tone, it's unsettling nature, it darkness, it all fits so well!
I hope to see more!
And you two are awesome!
Well... That was both sad, yet scary, especially the part where Magpie went all demented. I have a feeling there will be more to this, but all in all great job! Awesome start to the month!
DAMMIT!!! THAT PONY PROMISED ME FREE CANDY!!! XD
Pikasayan She promised biscuits!
Pikasayan Oh no, she got Celestia because she offered cake!
dude I finally got it her name isn't curse word because she curses but because if you hear her words you are cursed
Haillee Jordan Holy cow! your right! that makes so much sense!
Haillee Jordan hmm i thought it was a harry potter valdimort thing one must not speak his/her name type thing ya know if you say it ya get cursed i dunno everyones opinion matters
lol jk its the internet but any way nice thought tho
wait pay no attention to that comment i had not listend all the way
Haillee Jordan And it took you all this time to figure it out
frick i was 8 mins in XD its my fault for checkin' comments first
Literally Read This At 5:00 AM Last Night In Hype For This. Worth It^^ Amazing Job Losty^^ (That Ending Scream Made Me Drop Into Tears.)
CadentClock39 same
So I guess you can say the had some ahem,
Sorrows and Regrets? anyone to get the reference gets a pastry of they're choice!
Brony Leo Princess Trixie Sparkle? .3.
I WANNA ECLAIR!!!!!!!
Brony Leo oh fuck off
Night Shade I'm not BronyLeo but I AM his brother so what do you want? you got the reference now for the promised pastry!, do you want a cupcake, brownie, enclair, croissant, cake, pie. any pastry, even waffles and pancakes even though they aren't really pastries.
Brony Leo I want a strawberry.
That was...incredible. That ran a great gambit of emotions. Surprise and pleasant at first then the dark twist that was the climax but that ending...oh man that ending. The was heart-wrenching. I was getting all teary eyed from it. You guys did a great job! Bravo.
I get the feeling that she is NOT a reliable narrator. I know that may sound like a "Captain Obvious" thing, but still.
I didn't, and it was worth it
saw that coming
*calmly walks further into hell*
also great story I... actually saw my oc following your "beloved" down the wrong path, the sound of a pony's whooves and echoing along a dark foggy path. ik those sounds weren't in there but these beautiful sad stories be narrated or read alone in a dark room, are so well done I can't help but fill in every detail. thx lost for another wonderful tale..
Wow there are no words to describe how amazing this is
I remember listening to the first part of this story... and it became one of my favorite stories that you've ever read; this one also made its mark.
This is my first time hearing these stories and I almost cried at the end of this one. A being so distraught at the loss of her loved one...its beautiful.
Welp, the lost narrator and the candy mare are two favorite mlp fanfic monster legends. 😈
the candy mare ruined me
Chief10133 Well now I've got another one to add: Psycho Changeling Queen Twilight.
@@hypershock0storm479 It's from the Hard Reset series (not Hard Reset itself, but one of the sequels), right?
@@tochoXK3 Indeed.
16:25 So this is where that blooper origenated from 😉
And What a simple yet deep twist on the take of the lost narrator :)
That shattering sound you just heard was my heart breaking like glass at the end of that story. fantastic story losty keep it up
That ending hit the feelz a bit there Lost.
i really like this story. less horror like and more saddening. Then close to the end... Magpie got Terrifying :D
the end part made me cry so much as if i could feel her pain of not being able to find her beloved i swear i could actually feel her pain
THE FEEEELLLLLS
I love that bit.
If you thought that was emotional though, wait til you see the project I'm working on.
I knew Magpie would be the beloved. This was so amazing! I almost cried. ~Jasmine
ERMEHGEEEEERRRRDDD FINALLY
Oh my gods I'm watching this again. Don't talk to me for laike, the next three hours.
Ending:HOLY SHIT
that hidden losty scream just fills my soul with completeness.
What an amazing story. VERY well done and a nice continuing to the lost narrator. : )
shit after knowing what happened in stained memories im in fucking tears now
thanks~
eeeyyy lost noticed me
I'm hoping someone like this never happens to you two, y'all are perfect for each other
Well, I did not see that ending coming! This was so defiantly worth the wait!!! Another amazing job Lost, and you two Magpie!! Defiantly going to come back to this one again!
Hey Lost, got something I need to talk to you about over on Patreon when you get the chance
Very well made, especially loved the artwork you had to go along with the vivid storytelling.Now if you'll excuse me, it's time to go and dance with the devil thanks to a certain Magpie.
Wow, this is astounding! Maggie, I understand. I know a lot of friends at my school who are shy.
I liked both of your entries in this series. You did an awesome job, the twist at the end had me fooled. Thank you for sharing this with us.
I made a good choice listening to this series in October. I need the vibes
Beautifully written, you managed to outdo yourself after your last story. Though I feel there are small bits of filler you could edit out, this story was great I love the twist ending and just how you were going to twist this into a Grimdark. So I could only wonder if you will be doing another sequel after this and if so, how would you go about it? either way, I love both stories keep up the awesome work Lost!
Losty, I enjoyed this story. Very dark, very scary storytelling, but so damn good!!! Can't wait for next weeks story!!! Keep being awesome, Grimdark queen of the bronies!!!
so heartwrenching a part 3 is now mandatory
This is my favorite part of this story. I love Magpie and CurseWord and to see Magpie's side of the story
"Her REAL special talent"
XD
Omg this was amazing and already am I inspired! Fantastic work you guys and thank you Mag for taking us to a dark place XD
Well, this is one Very special kind of purgatory... .
"Grimdark" definitely fills the bill on this one.
Ok, I didn't expect for the feels
oooooh that gave me chills I am glad you guys started the spoopyness I think everyone waited until today because of Sister Location which Lost Guitiu I can't wait til you guys play it Sister Location is epic...
Wait magpiepony is your special somepony?!?!
+Seashell yup mag is lost's girlfriend
Seashell and this is when losty points you to the girlfriend tag
you... didn't know? haven't you seen the bloopers!?
Now they're married!!!
I actually felt tears in my eyes on this one. This story... Truly a work of art. Tragic and heartrending, but so beautiful. You did a good job on it... Both if them.
I love how you can hear Lost in the screams
I thought that this was going to be a happy story judging from the look on Magpie's face. Me and my warped sense of humor!
if i was born in this universe that this story takes place
and Lost would tell me gorey story
i would be ok
woooow this was great! i love these two stories, they work together so well especially with the twist endings X3
Magpiepony has a beautiful voice! I am so glad she is yours, TheLostNarrator
Expertly done. I must say, you truly haven't received enough credit for this one. All of you. ^^
Every time I watch the ending, the feels just hit me
That ending tho...
Good story, and a great way to start off the month....
_Speaking of hell, my stop is here_...
*Pulls out Chain gun*
_Rip and Tear_...
Clever effects on the vortex on what was meant to be us going to the afterlife but have Magpie as a detraction we are pony 712 and that our soul is sold to you. Bravo !!
Even if she told me that I had to be sacrificed in the end, I would still hug her and wish her good luck to be with her lover once more again before entering into the depths of Tartarus
such awesome stories. I love the plot twist endings.
Am I the only one who heard curse word screaming in the pits of hell?
I'm rewatching this series even though Christmas is 2 days away, and I felt my heart ache at the ending. I knew what was gonna happen, but it still didn't prepare me for all the emotions that I would be feeling. You, Magpie, Gutti and so many of the others have done an amazing job with this series! I actually made some art for you and Magpie I just haven't had the chance to send it the last few years. I promise when the opportunity arrives, I will send them! Plus, in the letter I will send, I will describe my MLP OC that me and my first girlfriend had came up with, giving details on her color and her cutie mark. Who knows, if you like her, it would be cool if someone you knew who does the vectors for ponies could draw her? And maybe she(I) could be a guest in any stories in the future. But it's okay if not. I really enjoy all your work Lost, and yours too Magpie! You two are my big inspirations and I want to be able to do something like what you guys do. Rarijack and Pinkiedash forever!! LostMag 5ever!!
Lost that was an amazing story. I wish that there is a continuation where you and magpie finally be together again.
Hey, I already saw Stained Memories. I can't wait for the next installment of this lore and learning more about Ink Dye! #WhoISInkDye?
this is now by far one of my favorite readings. can't wait till next friday. another part maybe? i wanna know if she ever meets up with cursey DX
You've met a terrible fate, haven't you?
ThePonyGamer you got that from either legend of Zelda or the creepypasta Ben
I get the reference!
your scream at the end actually made me cry lolgreat story!
nice story can't say I was expecting a sequel but the story being told by the other ponies point of view is nice /)
Dang.... wow...totally felt tears welling in the end there. Is it...bad that I slightly relate to this story? I mean...I can picture myself being Curse Word if this were to happen to me beloved...
Words can not describe how sad i felt at the end when Lost screamed.
That hit me in the feels too
Well on the bright side my character is immune to losts curse cause I'm already cursed and cannot die
WAS THAT MAGPIEPONY NARRATING!!?? WHAT HAPPENED TO LOST??? LOST IS GONE!!!! SHE'S...lost! XD
LN, if i haven't said it already, this series is so good! I listen to all your narrations when i sleep and, although i have been having some dreams thanks to them, it's super worth it! Hopefully, we can link up some day and discuss bringing a few ideas I have to life.
Happy New Year
i'm extremely mindblowned because the one who magpie was talking too was the colt from the 1st? because the colt y'know who was shouting and curse word curse at that guy and the colts mother killed her maybe thats colt who died i get it
this is like the sister location y'know in the game there is many questions and secrets about what was going actually make the
game good and secrety
the same time as your fic losty your story was absolutly brilliant because it gives sense of lore within the story brilliant
this was real good and the end made me cry hope there more of it some time
Oh neat! Judging by the title I thought it might be a sequel! Yay!
Yup. Thank you for the tearjerker at the end. Yup.
Okay this is probably a really stupid question but what is the name of the last song at around 34:08
Or the tune or what ever you want to call it :/
It's a reversed music track actually. lol It's called Reversion from Myuuji, but like I said, it's backwards in this reading.
TheLostNarrator
Some songs have the best reversed tunes.
Spooky subliminal intent don't you think Lost?
TheLostNarrator Holy Shit that's actually really cool
PON3 Vinyl heh
thank you losty, I needed something to keep me awake tonight err day
Magpie- “Sorry, not- sorry!” ;3
Loved the first story and have been fighting for time to listen to this, so excited!!! ....oh, oh wow, this is adorable! I am smiling so much and even if the POV is dead this is happy!.....oh? Backstory? Hmm, this took a serous tone. *Magi talking about first seeing Curse* ...*tearing up from cute* ...*clears throat* I'm fine!
Oh dear, The Beloved knew about her talent....I can feel the tragedy coming close!...*is uncomfortable and scared with Magi's change of voice* W-what's...what's happening....I-I don't understand...Oh nonononono
This stopped being cute o.O. *crying again* I....she...
Whelp, OW *clutches dead heart*
Oh god! That ending, Lost your lamentation cry brought me to tears once again!. This was so amazingly heart breaking and I loved it! The whole twist I did not see coming and at the end of it all.....who's HIM? Maybe we'll find out next year?
Another amazing story lost a nice little grim tale for us to listen to
Fascinating. Quite the lovely continuation
This is saddest/coolest story I ever heard and I love this story
F@&# that was really well written! Can we expect a 3rd chapter in "The Tale of the Lost Narrator"?
that was amazing. i loved every second and i was on the edge of my seat the entire time. i wish now that i went to watch the first one and not this one first.
This was an AWESOME squeal to the tale of a lost narrator! I fucking love this! Bravo! Bravo! *claps*
I really love this month, so many horror fics!
i am so excited to see if lost will find her beloved :D
Amazing work lost, just like always
Zota storm it should be Amazing work, Lost. Just like always. Becuse it sound's like they wasted amazing work
I loved this... This was so good! I really did adore it.
When the video ends and you feel tears run down your face
That is heartbroken. I hope she finds her soon.
I like the minor deviations you make in this audio (I've read along, that's how I know)
if this is just a start im super hyped for this month
I'd be all like "wait a minute is this hell?" Then i'd be like "thanks i needed to be dropped off here i sold my soul and was almost due" and then i'd call out to a friend :oi crowley man i'm here early now we can party forever" and there would be this big rage in hell and beloved would be made fun of for bringing a soul who isn't able to amount to her debt to the good king of hell
So damn good 😊 I so pumped for what's to come
If this gets a sequel, it should be dark, but also uplifting.
lost, if you're reading this, then first of all, thank you, and second, I hope everything will turn out alright in the end for Curse Word and her beloved Magpie.
So, MagPie is the beloved? Ohhh... now I get it! 🤔