FIRST >;) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I'm SO HAPPY THIS IS OUT, hands down one of the best objects I've done in a while. It was especially fun playing a villian, muahaha~ Such a great story, and such a great series! HUGE props to everyone else involved!
Ok so an obsessive/abusive girlfriend to magpie is creepy af and tracks her down, goes under cover, magpie recognizes her at the library, foal makes curse word mad, obsessive girlfriend murders child cuz of curse. Now I assume that moment where her eyes where red was the moment when curse’s influence took over... and she carried it on from their
You know I absolutely love just how unapologetically obsessed Ink Dye is. And this story really shows you that, Ink is fucked up. You know she’s fucked up in the head, she’s sick, she’s selfish, she’s abusive, she’s brutal. She literally has like no morals whatsoever in any way shape or form and that’s what makes her scary, she will do anything to get Mag back. And this all happened before she started going after her and Curse Word. But the scariest part of this is the obsession of a person could actually drive someone to do this dark shit.
3:13 What’s great about the dubbing of Inkdye is that we, as the audience first watching, can be fooled by thinking that Ink truly cared for Mag until literally like a minute later.
Gahh...she was humming "Against The World" towards the end there. I know that melody like the back of my hand. I love how this story is slowly building. I can not wait to see where it goes!! :D
Holy shit! Ink Dye was the cause of Magpie's decent to the dimension, and now she's free from it! Hopefully, the power of Curse Word and Magpie's love will be enough to eradicate Ink Dye for good! Can't wait for the finale to this series! Great job, Lost, Guti, Mary (especially Mary!), and Pitch!
Wait. So Lost didnt killed the foul. Yes she wanted soap but during the time her eyes were red she was shoving soap. But the shoving the foul into the water it was herself doing it cuz she loved the idea of punishing
I just want to say, Carmen has confirmed that she works as a councilor...can you imagine being one her clients and a few months into your therapy coming across this?
Yes ! Another chapter of this story ! Despite how dark it is and, honestly disturbing, it's probably my favorite reading from you (yes, even with Truth to be told and Silent Ponyville.) The switch between the different point of views is just awesome. It's good to see each side of the same story. Can't wait to have the final chapter ! Kepp on the good work gals ! and guy ! (Also the foal's voice reminds me of Banana Joe from Gumball... but that's just a side note.)
Amazing work to Lost on another amazing addition to ToTLN, as Carmen killed it as Ink Dye. I can't wait to see how this all ends, and that I am excited about the implications of the next addition to the series.
Not that I would wish it on any character, but at least that verbally and physically abusive Ink Dye got what she deserved in the end. Although truth be told, Magpie really should've told Curse Word about her. And with help, Magpie should've confronted Ink Dye. Then she wouldn't have the ongoing nightmares about it. Fears and nightmares lose power, when brought into the light. Like if I had a terrible nightmare, it seems a lot less scary after I tell my mom about it. It's because I told someone what the nightmare was! That's why light is such a powerful weapon against darkness.
I saw that you uploaded this yesterday and I was so excited! I love this story and been waiting for it. The problem was that yesterday I wasn’t mentally prepared for an emotional grimdark tale. But today I have had a better day and have had the proper time to brace myself for this emotional roller coaster. *Let me tell you, I wasn’t disappointed!* I love dark, chilling stories and this wasn’t an exception. Plus I’m so invested the this story and its characters. Man, I love grimdark but I really really hope this as a happy ending. On the outside I might be dark and brooding, but I’m a fluffy romantic at heart! Great job! I can’t wait to see how this plays out.
Whoa! Awesome story, Lost! Gave me shivers, well done! P.S. Ink Dye reminds so much of Angelique from Dark Shadows! Ink is just as crazy and possessive of Magpie just as much as Angelique is of Barnabas Collins! AWESOME!
Me: okay just gotta do homework- Lemme find some music * Goes on TH-cam * * Sees this * NEVERMIND Seriously though this has made me so exited for the next part. I'm just going to scream
TWIST!!! I loved that story. Yet kinda sad that Mag doesn't get to go home. BUT, still I loved the voice acting. I bet the next story will be JUST as exquisite!!!
I'm already depressed, grimdarks never have happy endings, what I'm thinking: * in stained memories, it seemed like lost was in ponyville, so the main six might destroy her * it might be that ink does something to mag, and lost finds out, resulting in farther depression or hopelessness * or ink kills lost like a yandere.
Getting it done: wow, that was something with the abuse implications towards mag from ink 0.o Dying now to see the first chapter and that scene again knowing this
I’ve listened to this entire series, but this installment is my absolute favorite. Ink Dye puts any of MLP’s villains to shame (though I love Astelle from Princess Trixie Sparkle). Kudos to everyone who worked on this series, especially to the voice actor for the wicked Ink Dye. 👍🏾
21:20 Wait..... This is a LostNarrator Fic I need to pronounce this correctly. "Side-Note, 0718 has become more vol-atle and extremely agrasive tow-wereds other pat-iats and stafe."
I can't help but wonder how a certain somebody would feel is she were to find out she has been depicted as a possessive and demonic villain? Ah well...
At the start: This is interesting. Is this part of the ttotln series? Looks familiar. A quarter way through: Wait, this is Ink Dye! She's dragging him by the tail... he's going to drown, right? Wait, nope. Half way through: It was at this moment: WOAHWOAHWOAH THIS IS FROM THE FIRST INSTALLMENT! THIS IS THE MOTHER, ISN'T IT? HER FIRST VICTIM! 😱 A little later: Holy crap... this is just amazing. End: MIND BLOWN! AAAARRRGGHH SO GOOD! I can't wait for the next one! Wow. Much wow.
I would love a side story about mags childhood, why her family didn't like her, how she met ink and why she decided to have a relationship with her. Was she always possessive? Or did she change? And what was there life like? And what was the one thing that drove mag over the edge and make her leave? Anyway just what I want to see 😄
Ok ink deserved what ever she got. She abused her girlfriend, abused her husband, and killed her own son. If I were in Magpies place I would make her suffer for abusing me and making me suffer.
Hey lost, I doubt you still look at old comments, but I just wanted to tell you that I love this series. This is my fifth time rewatching :) Anyway, It just occurred to me what you meant in that 2017 Q&A. I’m so sorry you were in such a terrible relationship before you met magpie. I didn’t suffer quite to the extent you probably did, but I’ve been in quite a few abusive relationships. So it means a lot to see this kind of stuff explored on a channel I love. I hope you’re having a wonderful time, and congrats on the marriage to mag ❤️
This gave me a really dimmed flashback to something that happened to me irl, but I can't really figure out what it is... Damn now I'm scared of whatever this reminds me of.
My Thoery is That Curse Word and Ink Dye are the Physical Personifacations of Lost's Mind. Curse Word being Lost's Humble Outward Personality, and Ink Dye being Lost's Insecurities and Rage.
The first time I watched this, I was really amazed by the storytelling and the overall horror. It was this very video that got me into the horror/grimdark storytelling. This story is amazing.
Don’t you dare do anything to lost or I will find you I will tell magpie she will know everything what you’ve done and she will not even be with you for the rest of your life
Spoilers (obviously) 0:00 Huh, the fourth installment in the series I kinda figured you would save this for the climax. 5:08 "I am Ink Dye" and that's all you need to know about this installment, Game Ogre people! 6:41 Oh, ohhh, ohhhh no! Suddenly I know where this is going! 9:56 Ah, Ink Dye's and Beloved's relationship. You know, I know Beloved has become a bit of a monster. But Ink Dye was horrible from the outset, I can't blame Beloved for wanting to bring some retribution, it doesn't justify what Beloved did but I can't really blame her either. 12:34 Bird Losty is best Losty. 18:02 Okay, so one of the things that were unclear from the original story was, did Curse Word cause the mother to kill the foal? the answer is No, she didn't Ink Dye is a horrible no good very bad pony (props to those who get the reference.) 24:08 I speculated since the installment in Febuaray weather not Beloved's masters would hold up there end of the bargin. I'm surprised they did. 26:38 Well, well, well, that was A Story Written with Ink. While it's impossible to know how exactly this will end, I can only assume this might come down to a magical duel between Curse Word and Beloved having to team up to bring Ink Dye down. Given the genre though, they will likely loss that confrontation unless Lost feels like breaking the genre's darkness and giving the two a happy story. Ultimately, I think Lost will want Curse Word and Beloved to be happy, but I won't be surprised if it turns out this will be an unhappy ending.
Carmen would've had a field day with this. So, the finale or climax would be the events that happens at the "Against the world" animatic, it's amazing how everything will connect eventually :) ...And Magpie, take good care of my soul, okay? It's known to be... volatile sometimes.
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FIRST >;)
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I'm SO HAPPY THIS IS OUT, hands down one of the best objects I've done in a while. It was especially fun playing a villian, muahaha~
Such a great story, and such a great series! HUGE props to everyone else involved!
You did amazing as Ink Dye who knew you could play evil females so good.
hi
Bravissimo You were amazing!
wow what a transition from fluttershy in Bod to this o.0 chilling and loved it in everyway
Carmen -Mary Medley- Best object? I think you meant project.
Ok so an obsessive/abusive girlfriend to magpie is creepy af and tracks her down, goes under cover, magpie recognizes her at the library, foal makes curse word mad, obsessive girlfriend murders child cuz of curse. Now I assume that moment where her eyes where red was the moment when curse’s influence took over... and she carried it on from their
Ok im a little confusef who exactly is magpie again? Oh ok dumb question i rember now.
@@latoyapierre7520 Magpiepony is the beloved.
You know I absolutely love just how unapologetically obsessed Ink Dye is. And this story really shows you that, Ink is fucked up. You know she’s fucked up in the head, she’s sick, she’s selfish, she’s abusive, she’s brutal. She literally has like no morals whatsoever in any way shape or form and that’s what makes her scary, she will do anything to get Mag back. And this all happened before she started going after her and Curse Word. But the scariest part of this is the obsession of a person could actually drive someone to do this dark shit.
Ink dye actually made me angry,she reminded me alot of a woman i had dated,you know minus the murder
Hope you’re ok now
Love to you.
3:13 What’s great about the dubbing of Inkdye is that we, as the audience first watching, can be fooled by thinking that Ink truly cared for Mag until literally like a minute later.
Hahaha until I found the selfish wh%R6
Gahh...she was humming "Against The World" towards the end there. I know that melody like the back of my hand.
I love how this story is slowly building. I can not wait to see where it goes!! :D
Holy shit! Ink Dye was the cause of Magpie's decent to the dimension, and now she's free from it! Hopefully, the power of Curse Word and Magpie's love will be enough to eradicate Ink Dye for good! Can't wait for the finale to this series! Great job, Lost, Guti, Mary (especially Mary!), and Pitch!
Dance, my puppets, dance~
Let’s see you EARN your happy ending~~~
GutiuSerenade you and the gang were amazing, bravissima!
I'd rather hang out with the candy mare then deal with these mares
GutiuSerenade It WAS you! I knew it! >:3
GutiuSerenade I hope thay do
*dances*
I'm guessing that the last story is going to be a showdown between Ink Dye and Curse Word over Mag. Awesome job on this one, everypony!
We hope!
Drakila 94 I believe it will be just that
SPOILERS!
Yes, it was and a very awesome one at that. Though it was Curse and Mag taking down Ink.
This was fantastic. Cant wait for more!
Hi!!!!!!
Wait. So Lost didnt killed the foul. Yes she wanted soap but during the time her eyes were red she was shoving soap. But the shoving the foul into the water it was herself doing it cuz she loved the idea of punishing
Exactly!
Mag still USED Lost, although Ink deserved everything that came to her
Button Mash doesn't want a bath-
Lmao
"She wasn't loved... because she was pink?"
RACIST FREAKING BIRDS MAN!!!
Lol, I thought the same thing
😂😂
I just want to say, Carmen has confirmed that she works as a councilor...can you imagine being one her clients and a few months into your therapy coming across this?
Thank you for the heart!!!
Lesson learned: don’t trust angry lesbian horses
Hush ur face man
No shit
Yes ! Another chapter of this story ! Despite how dark it is and, honestly disturbing, it's probably my favorite reading from you (yes, even with Truth to be told and Silent Ponyville.)
The switch between the different point of views is just awesome. It's good to see each side of the same story. Can't wait to have the final chapter ! Kepp on the good work gals ! and guy !
(Also the foal's voice reminds me of Banana Joe from Gumball... but that's just a side note.)
It reminded me of Button Mash!
Amazing work to Lost on another amazing addition to ToTLN, as Carmen killed it as Ink Dye.
I can't wait to see how this all ends, and that I am excited about the implications of the next addition to the series.
Not that I would wish it on any character, but at least that verbally and physically abusive Ink Dye got what she deserved in the end. Although truth be told, Magpie really should've told Curse Word about her. And with help, Magpie should've confronted Ink Dye. Then she wouldn't have the ongoing nightmares about it. Fears and nightmares lose power, when brought into the light. Like if I had a terrible nightmare, it seems a lot less scary after I tell my mom about it. It's because I told someone what the nightmare was! That's why light is such a powerful weapon against darkness.
I saw that you uploaded this yesterday and I was so excited! I love this story and been waiting for it. The problem was that yesterday I wasn’t mentally prepared for an emotional grimdark tale. But today I have had a better day and have had the proper time to brace myself for this emotional roller coaster. *Let me tell you, I wasn’t disappointed!* I love dark, chilling stories and this wasn’t an exception. Plus I’m so invested the this story and its characters. Man, I love grimdark but I really really hope this as a happy ending. On the outside I might be dark and brooding, but I’m a fluffy romantic at heart! Great job! I can’t wait to see how this plays out.
Another great part to a great story! Now we just have to wait a year for the last part. XD
*THAT PLOT TWIST*
My god, this was worth the wait. I can't wait to hear more of this story! 💜
The plot thickens
Whoa! Awesome story, Lost! Gave me shivers, well done!
P.S. Ink Dye reminds so much of Angelique from Dark Shadows! Ink is just as crazy and possessive of Magpie just as much as Angelique is of Barnabas Collins! AWESOME!
I never thought about the connection between Angelique and Ink, you're right
Me: okay just gotta do homework-
Lemme find some music
* Goes on TH-cam *
* Sees this *
NEVERMIND
Seriously though this has made me so exited for the next part. I'm just going to scream
Thanks for the like and highlight!
:333
Wait is the city in the clouds thing a metaphor for Magpie maybe being grown in a community of only Earth ponies when she was a unicorn?
TWIST!!! I loved that story. Yet kinda sad that Mag doesn't get to go home. BUT, still I loved the voice acting. I bet the next story will be JUST as exquisite!!!
Are there more stories like this!? This is AMAZING!!!
I'm already depressed, grimdarks never have happy endings, what I'm thinking:
* in stained memories, it seemed like lost was in ponyville, so the main six might destroy her
* it might be that ink does something to mag, and lost finds out, resulting in farther depression or hopelessness
* or ink kills lost like a yandere.
But That's The Point Of Grimdark Stories , They Supposed To Not Have Happy Endings
Damn Lost, that was so worth the wait! And yes, I love listening to your Grimdark readings at about 12 in the morning! Amazing job, as always!
You let her kill Minin?!
Also, please continue this! I just marathoned the others before, and loved the story, awesome work lost!
Getting it done: wow, that was something with the abuse implications towards mag from ink 0.o
Dying now to see the first chapter and that scene again knowing this
I’ve listened to this entire series, but this installment is my absolute favorite. Ink Dye puts any of MLP’s villains to shame (though I love Astelle from Princess Trixie Sparkle).
Kudos to everyone who worked on this series, especially to the voice actor for the wicked Ink Dye. 👍🏾
Omg!! Wow this was AMAZING!!!! I wasn't expecting this to tie up with the lost narrator, I was so surprised! You are a great narrator!!
when i read this on Fimfiction I was speechless. This came out amazing!! Good job Lost!!
21:20 Wait..... This is a LostNarrator Fic I need to pronounce this correctly.
"Side-Note, 0718 has become more vol-atle and extremely agrasive tow-wereds other pat-iats and stafe."
Ouch.
I can't help but wonder how a certain somebody would feel is she were to find out she has been depicted as a possessive and demonic villain? Ah well...
God i love halloween on your freaking channel!!! Yes!
Early squad where you @ doe!!!
omigosh its when curse word finds her and the dead foal!!!! OMG I LOVE THIS
Whoa that was surprisingly really great lost! I'm stunned way to go you guys! Bravo bravissima!
You were surprised this is amazing?
@@crazycrafter9309 i already knew how awesome this was gonna be, and looking back its still awesome!
anyone else think ink dye is a scp yandere
It’s all coming together. This whole time I thought ink dye was curse word. This is one heck of a great story. Good job
This was quite a lovely story Lost. I look forward to more videos like this one.
Awesome fanfic read great work!
*when you have to go to bed/to school when lost uploaded a new vid*
Feels
Ink got everything she had coming to her.
"I don' like this story. 'n I don' like BRDZ"
My favorite quote~
Oh boy, a new chapter in The Lost Narrator series!
*gets to the end*...... just gonna go curl into a ball now...
At the start: This is interesting. Is this part of the ttotln series? Looks familiar.
A quarter way through: Wait, this is Ink Dye! She's dragging him by the tail... he's going to drown, right? Wait, nope.
Half way through: It was at this moment: WOAHWOAHWOAH THIS IS FROM THE FIRST INSTALLMENT! THIS IS THE MOTHER, ISN'T IT? HER FIRST VICTIM! 😱
A little later: Holy crap... this is just amazing.
End: MIND BLOWN! AAAARRRGGHH SO GOOD! I can't wait for the next one! Wow. Much wow.
I would love a side story about mags childhood, why her family didn't like her, how she met ink and why she decided to have a relationship with her. Was she always possessive? Or did she change? And what was there life like? And what was the one thing that drove mag over the edge and make her leave?
Anyway just what I want to see 😄
UUUUGH THIS IS SO GOOD LOST! YA GOT ME SHAKIN HERE. I WONDER WHATS FOR THE NEXT STORY
Oh god no....It CAN'T end like THIS! I NEED TOO KNOW IF MAGPIE AND CURSEWORD REUNITE! Either way if this is the end, it was a bloody good end.
There's gonna be one more... Next year. XD
Nooooooooooooooo! I can't wait that longggggggg I can't waaaait, but I'm a excited and patient person so I'll wait
Trust me, I'm excited too, but I'd rather have quality content in exchange for waiting.
+The Fan lair true Im a patient person (it was part of the joke, I would never rush a content creater)
@Holly Sandy, okay. But I wouldn't blame you if you were serious. The next one's gonna be awesome.
WATCHED IT, LIKED IT, LOVE IT, AT THE END ALMOST SCARED MY SOUL RIGHT OUT OF MY BODY, THIS WAS GREAT WELL DONE WITH EVERYTHING.
Oooooohhhhh soooo amazing you guys! :D you all did amazing on this
The hype is real! I'm so excited!!!
Oh my... This was intense. Woah. Another amazing addition to this series, I'M SHOOK.
how come this only has 991 views, it should have way more, lost is the best youtuber ever, im my opinion anyway :)
Well this just got dark super quickly
and I love it
Anybody else think that freak on a leash wold fit inkdye
Ok ink deserved what ever she got. She abused her girlfriend, abused her husband, and killed her own son. If I were in Magpies place I would make her suffer for abusing me and making me suffer.
...............What a TWIST!
You've got that Jigoku Shoujo vibe going on in the end.
I come here to listen to this a second time…and my bones still get chills. It's amazing really.
Hey lost, I doubt you still look at old comments, but I just wanted to tell you that I love this series. This is my fifth time rewatching :)
Anyway, It just occurred to me what you meant in that 2017 Q&A. I’m so sorry you were in such a terrible relationship before you met magpie.
I didn’t suffer quite to the extent you probably did, but I’ve been in quite a few abusive relationships. So it means a lot to see this kind of stuff explored on a channel I love. I hope you’re having a wonderful time, and congrats on the marriage to mag ❤️
wow this is very dramatic,and creativ at the same time.I had goose bumps as i listened to this,great job!
Bad intentions by digital daggers makes me think about the character, ink dye.
I love listening to older readings and hearing what was bloopered.
This gave me a really dimmed flashback to something that happened to me irl, but I can't really figure out what it is...
Damn now I'm scared of whatever this reminds me of.
I'm officially dying to see the last part. So intense!
The voice acting was amazing, you can feel the raw emotion in it.
HOLD ON so ink was the one who told here about the soul thing!?
Holly ship, that's terrifying! I love it! I can't wait for the continuation!
I clicked this video because the thumbnail had me think this was a dark story about Diamond Tiara and Inky Pie. It caught my curiosity.
I loved listening to this, it was so emotional and kinda scared me, 10/10
Wow! This was deep as hecc, and i love it! Very well written too! (my gawd i hate cliffhangers)
My Thoery is That Curse Word and Ink Dye are the Physical Personifacations of Lost's Mind. Curse Word being Lost's Humble Outward Personality, and Ink Dye being Lost's Insecurities and Rage.
The first time I watched this, I was really amazed by the storytelling and the overall horror. It was this very video that got me into the horror/grimdark storytelling. This story is amazing.
Is it just me or the Colt sounds like Button Mash just asking
Are you guys building up a massive story? This is amazing if you are.
Did anyone notice when Mag was humming she was humming "Against The World'?
Don’t you dare do anything to lost or I will find you I will tell magpie she will know everything what you’ve done and she will not even be with you for the rest of your life
YES! IT'S HERE! HYPE FOR FINALE AFTER!
Spoilers (obviously)
0:00 Huh, the fourth installment in the series I kinda figured you would save this for the climax.
5:08 "I am Ink Dye" and that's all you need to know about this installment, Game Ogre people!
6:41 Oh, ohhh, ohhhh no! Suddenly I know where this is going!
9:56 Ah, Ink Dye's and Beloved's relationship. You know, I know Beloved has become a bit of a monster. But Ink Dye was horrible from the outset, I can't blame Beloved for wanting to bring some retribution, it doesn't justify what Beloved did but I can't really blame her either.
12:34 Bird Losty is best Losty.
18:02 Okay, so one of the things that were unclear from the original story was, did Curse Word cause the mother to kill the foal? the answer is No, she didn't Ink Dye is a horrible no good very bad pony (props to those who get the reference.)
24:08 I speculated since the installment in Febuaray weather not Beloved's masters would hold up there end of the bargin. I'm surprised they did.
26:38 Well, well, well, that was A Story Written with Ink. While it's impossible to know how exactly this will end, I can only assume this might come down to a magical duel between Curse Word and Beloved having to team up to bring Ink Dye down. Given the genre though, they will likely loss that confrontation unless Lost feels like breaking the genre's darkness and giving the two a happy story. Ultimately, I think Lost will want Curse Word and Beloved to be happy, but I won't be surprised if it turns out this will be an unhappy ending.
I like the dead silence music in the Background
Now we wait for another whole year. Another suspenseful, bloody-brilliant story such as this, for the next year.
the idea of waiting a year for the epic conclusion make makes me sad and itchy.
I love these story's, but I hate having to wait for the next part. Thanks a bunch for doing what you guys do.
red bird=lost narrotor
... so... what is ink's powers? well i know of only a few so far:
-immortality/agelessness
-narration powers?
-shapeshifting?
Mary melody profumance in this stroy scares me
Ok I finally got to listing to this! I'll edit this when I finnish.
Edit: AMAZING WRITING!! I loved it :)
Props to PegasusPitch for adding some much-needed levity to this... XD Goddamn.
I gotta go reread all these stories now. >.>
IT INTERTWINES IS ITH THE LOST NARRATOR STORY
top 10 pony plot twist
I bow before your awesome tales Lost Narrator and company..*bows*
Carmen would've had a field day with this.
So, the finale or climax would be the events that happens at the "Against the world" animatic, it's amazing how everything will connect eventually :)
...And Magpie, take good care of my soul, okay? It's known to be... volatile sometimes.
Dear Mrs.Narrator I wish I could thank you because you fill my dark side with contentment
Sweet OC :3
Why am I watching this at 3 AM in the morning?
NUUU! I wan't Curse to reunite with Mag! XD make more plz where they reunite!!
I might be late, but I just have to make this reference...
*YOU MUST BUILD UP OUR MACHINE YOU DIE TONIGHT!*
That Was Great,,, /)
Wait is he the colt from "The tale from the lost narrator"?
Yes
"Doodle log Sunday Feb 18" THATS MY BIRTHDAY!