The next episode will take a bit, bc it will have a bunch of illustrations for the backstory portion..... i say that as if i won't have a random burst of hyperfixation and finish the whole thing in a day, like i did with this one..
First, at 8:07 - Yes, you should make a separate video about Semblance so the characters's bio and story won't be feel too cluttered at once. However, regarding about Polarity, is also can be highly affected/influenced by Phyrra's emotions. For example; when she is stressed this cased the metal to bend, when she is angry is crushed or turns spiky. Good point in showing the more negative side of Phyrra's fame affecting her social life from the disturbing letters to being constantly being followed by reporters. _OOF._ Honestly loved that you added little things in which Phyrra and Jaune can bond over and form a friendship, and THIS allow a more natural flow in developing to a romance less rushed. I love Arkos but man, the show fumbled about the whole romance stuff in future volumes. Also YES, Phyrra and Nora bonding! I can totally see those two being akin to sisters, talking about their respective crushes, fashion styles and even sharing exercises routines. As for Ren, I can imagine him being a good listener and everytime Phyrra is overstressed, he used his Semblance to calm her down. In RWBY Chibi, he is the dance instructor, so he is totally the one who taught the whole team how to slay on party at V2. Have an amazing week!
My biggest complain with Pyrrha is that she barely interacts with Ruby. So it feels weird that later Ruby is affected by the death of Pyrrha. Don't get me wrong, it makes sense. It's just, it could have been more dramatic if they were closer Friends. There is also that how she was always treated as someone special except for Jaune. When in the series, only Weiss treats her as someone special. It could have been an opportunity to make Ruby a super fan of Pyrrha and else. Also, most of her character is around Jaune. Except for her arc during volume 3, she is mostly around supporting Jaune, developing his character, being in love with him, etc. Also. I while her sacrifice was heroic and emotive, it felt unnecessary. I mean, outside of Ruby awakening her silver eyes, Pyrrha died for nothing. It would have been smarter to make contact with Ironwood, Glynda and Qrow. I mean, Pyrrha should have know that she was gonna die. There is the polemic around using her death to move Jaune character. Is... Complicated, I can understand her conclusion. The problem is that later we focus mostly around Jaune suffering for Pyrrha. Ren and Nora aren't crying for her death or something. And is Jaune, and not Ruby, the one to fight Cinder in all of this of "You killed Pyrrha!" in Haven.
Yeah, those are pretty much all points that i have in plans to address later. This is why in this episode i focused more on the vague fanbase she has and interacts with (through fan letters), the community and societal pressures of it. And also why i gave her more personal connections with Ren and Nora, make the team more connected and not just "ship 1, ship 2". As for interactions with RWBY and characters outside, that's for after timeline. And for her death, that would be when we get to v3
I have an idea for the faunus is that a normal faunus has both the ears and tail aka having two traits of the animal but a human and faunus hybrid only has a single animal trait and doesn't have night vision and has weaker senses to the average faunus but are much better than the average human
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The next episode will take a bit, bc it will have a bunch of illustrations for the backstory portion..... i say that as if i won't have a random burst of hyperfixation and finish the whole thing in a day, like i did with this one..
Prryha casually using her semblance out of laziness and unable to cook makes a bit more flawed and more relatable.
Also, SHE SO PRETTY!
First, at 8:07 - Yes, you should make a separate video about Semblance so the characters's bio and story won't be feel too cluttered at once.
However, regarding about Polarity, is also can be highly affected/influenced by Phyrra's emotions. For example; when she is stressed this cased the metal to bend, when she is angry is crushed or turns spiky.
Good point in showing the more negative side of Phyrra's fame affecting her social life from the disturbing letters to being constantly being followed by reporters. _OOF._
Honestly loved that you added little things in which Phyrra and Jaune can bond over and form a friendship, and THIS allow a more natural flow in developing to a romance less rushed. I love Arkos but man, the show fumbled about the whole romance stuff in future volumes.
Also YES, Phyrra and Nora bonding! I can totally see those two being akin to sisters, talking about their respective crushes, fashion styles and even sharing exercises routines.
As for Ren, I can imagine him being a good listener and everytime Phyrra is overstressed, he used his Semblance to calm her down. In RWBY Chibi, he is the dance instructor, so he is totally the one who taught the whole team how to slay on party at V2.
Have an amazing week!
this is one of the videos of all time
My biggest complain with Pyrrha is that she barely interacts with Ruby.
So it feels weird that later Ruby is affected by the death of Pyrrha. Don't get me wrong, it makes sense. It's just, it could have been more dramatic if they were closer Friends.
There is also that how she was always treated as someone special except for Jaune. When in the series, only Weiss treats her as someone special.
It could have been an opportunity to make Ruby a super fan of Pyrrha and else.
Also, most of her character is around Jaune. Except for her arc during volume 3, she is mostly around supporting Jaune, developing his character, being in love with him, etc.
Also. I while her sacrifice was heroic and emotive, it felt unnecessary. I mean, outside of Ruby awakening her silver eyes, Pyrrha died for nothing. It would have been smarter to make contact with Ironwood, Glynda and Qrow.
I mean, Pyrrha should have know that she was gonna die.
There is the polemic around using her death to move Jaune character. Is... Complicated, I can understand her conclusion. The problem is that later we focus mostly around Jaune suffering for Pyrrha.
Ren and Nora aren't crying for her death or something.
And is Jaune, and not Ruby, the one to fight Cinder in all of this of "You killed Pyrrha!" in Haven.
Yeah, those are pretty much all points that i have in plans to address later. This is why in this episode i focused more on the vague fanbase she has and interacts with (through fan letters), the community and societal pressures of it. And also why i gave her more personal connections with Ren and Nora, make the team more connected and not just "ship 1, ship 2". As for interactions with RWBY and characters outside, that's for after timeline. And for her death, that would be when we get to v3
@@sunnysunsins Excelent. Looking forward to see more!
I'm excited!.
I have an idea for the faunus is that a normal faunus has both the ears and tail aka having two traits of the animal but a human and faunus hybrid only has a single animal trait and doesn't have night vision and has weaker senses to the average faunus but are much better than the average human
You missed the biggest thing in her redesign that gaoing hole in her chest after the arrow goes through it.
@@JesusRuiz-gb4is no i did not. Look at 2:10, right before pj sketch starts