Honestly I still think you read a little too fast Mr. I appreciate you reading it and you're not an AI but relax a little, enjoy the story and slow it a bit. Listen to our friends Squirrel, Net and Amy......they read a little slower and it come across more natural........
@@homoerectus6953 I agree the pace is a little too fast. I think he may also be asking about the background sounds, which don’t really do much for me one way or another. But let me be clear, even if no changes are made at all, this will still be one of the better HFY channels. Really, the only thing holding it back in my opinion is the occasional seemingly AI generated content.
@@homoerectus6953adjust the playback speed. I have to play NetNarrator vids at 1.25 speed LoL because he reads too slow... especially with the story on screen😂. TLDR: Playback speed is adjustable by the listener... or maybe just hear faster?😂😂
A good story told by an actual person. No word salads, just good clear speech. The voice characterisations for the various characters in the story is great too. Throw in ambient sounds and sound effects and you end up with something that is actually pleasant to listen too. A great channel.
It's nice to hear one of these stories where it's not one of the following... • humans, amazingly good at war • humans, the only compassionate species in existence • a story structured like a university lecture
I've quickly grown tired of the stories (which may or may not belong to the owner of the channel) read by a computer. And then we have this, on the complete opposite of the spectrum, not only read by an actual person, but read WELL.
read well, but I don't believe the stories are by human writers. There are too many contradictions and inconsistencies and failures in the promise for a 30 min. or less short story for a human writer. Even One proofread and rework would drastically improve the quality.
@@imweakfordeaky sry, promise is the translation for "Versprechen" in german, and that is sometimes used for this purpose. That doesn't change my point though
So far, this is the ONLY channel like this that I have sub'd to because of real people providing the voices for the characters and not some computer voice that constantly screws up...makes for better storytelling and works better on the imagination for the listeners...
It seems discontinued, but Amie's Literary Empire was another human HFY reader. Also, Quinnhasse had a typo, it's Agro Squirrel. Main channel is Agro Squirrel Narrates.
I think this channel so far has at least slightly outshined most of the other HFY channels. the sound effects for me are cool and lend a different tone, though they dont make or break anything. The reading does however, sound more natural and I do appreciate that. As for people complaining about the reading being too fast, I personally think its fine, but I also find most audiobooks or audio readings too slow, so that might just be my ADHD lol.
The story was excellent and all the extras added a high quality finish to that excellence. Thank you so much for all your endeavors to bring this story to us. Please, don't leave us hanging on the cliff's edge to what happens to Captain DeMarco and Captain Varak and his crew. I don't know how you select the artwork that accompanies your stories - whether it is "stock" or created to go with the story - but it matches up with the story much better than the majority of others do. The one thing that would improve it would be if the artwork reflected the character descriptions given and those descriptions continued to be shown in all the subsequent artwork. Sorry to be so long-worded, but that means I like what you're doing. And guess what - you have become the one and only scifi channel that I've subscribed to. Keep up the great work!
I was also wondering about being told that Earth was destroyed and Terrans were extinct yet we were supposed to believe that this one needed to be interrogated to learn more about Earth's defenses, fleet and tactics. I liked the narration but the story was a little rough.
I followed this channel about a week ago getting into the whole genre of these stories. While This particular story isn't my cup of tea. I love the added sound effects, production value. And I'm curious why you stopped? It doesn't seem like your newer videos have this. And I wish they did This story even though I wasn't entertained by the content was so entertaining because of the effort you put into it. This is an amazing video. Please do more.
The start reminds me of another story where they were captured by an ai that had...absorbed... the organic crew and, eventually, the intruders also. The AI had plans. I wish I could remember the title/author.
Why do they need to know anything about Earth's defences if the humans and their planets are all defeated and extinct? Where is the ship that "roared to life" ? 2/5.
Where there is one, there may be more. What if the humans, seeing defeat looming, seeded other warships with humans in cryogenic sleep around the galaxy? Knowing human defense strategies would be a help.
If one slip through the cracks how many more also could have slept through the cracks, perhaps an entire colonization ship slowly drifts through the void
The human trying to guilt trip the aliens is silly, because I don't think any of them were even born when the war was going on. The human, on the other hand, very much was. If anybody should be guilt tripped into feeling sorry for their actions, it's him.
The whole thing made no sense lol why is the risk of keeping someone alive , to lo learn the weaknesses of an extinct races fleet, that was already destroyed in last stand 400 years ago?
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GREAT story, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for having a Human read instead of an AI. I'm tired of unwarranted pauses, mispronounced words, and words pronounced differently than before. AND errors in the stories. Great to not have to list those errors. NO errors here.
Decent,pace is fine, audio if fine too, Story is crap. Its breaks mind way into another alternate story, clearly multiple story versions blended together.Or at the very least a part cut out at 16:33. Earth and humanity its fleets are gone, yet inquisitor want to keep it human around to learn battle tactics, fleet positions, earth doctrines,defenses.
Human: [Maximum Gigachad mode, GOOOOOO!!] Xenos: [gets utterly curb stomped like a bunch of sissies] Me: 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 "Hyper-Impossible fuck physics extra stupid maximum wackspin ignore logic reason and sanity badass mode! I like it! Next chapter; the human goes *GOD-MODE* and kills all life in a 974,000,000,000,000,000 gigaparsec radius in under 0.0001 seconds! YEAH!! Humans are badass!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
It would be really nice if the titles of your videos reflected more of the actual story because in no way shape or form was a story about a worship that came to life
Stale air happens when there's no circulation, no new air being brought in. So the uncirculated air sits there, taking on the smells of the space. Old paint, old carpet, old upholstery, old cat litter box. Old cooking. Stale air.
and across countless dark moons lost between stars.. within countless cold battleships that drifted into the deep space along with the asteroids chained to them.. buried beneath numberless oceans , cold as hot ones.. inquisitors mistakes the awakening of a lone ghost ships relic ,for what causes them all to stir and fire start blossom across all that been built ...on slaughter
mmmm. Not sure where the break is. Subtexts (without Ytube CC enabled) is showing Chitin at 0:31 and i'm seeing similar chitin subtexts later....but the VA is not pronouncing the word chitin...he's pronouncing Kiten...with a K not a Cha sound. Turning on YT Close Caption (CC enable)..its getting translated as kite according to audio. Either the Subtitles put into the movie have mistakenly written the wrong spelling for a sound - K vs Cha or the Voice Actor (VA)...is not familiar with the pronunciation of the letters Cha Chitan vs K sound Kite Kitten. Worst scenario is the author of a book write chitin and decided that it should be pronounced with a K which NO ONE is going to read in their head and pronounce that way. I cant go on... If this was meant to be a professionally released movie or clip an was put in front of reviewers or live audience..it would be eaten alive for something so obvious to be corrected before it went to production.
So... do we leave this scene unfinished? Just a slice of time out of some other place with no point? All of us here dare you to pony up the bet for the next part. Go ahead, push your coin to the center of the table. We wait.
What is up with the MC Escher perspective in the image used around the 9 min mark. Way too distracting. (since I know there are plenty of morons out there; I am not talking about how the image was created, I am talking about the image in and of itself)
Audio good, reading good, few sound effects to add ambience also good. The writing was the weakest part. Too much repetition and it came across as trying too hard for how little plot there actually was. Barely anything actually happens here and there is no actual reason to give credence to both the reactions of the xeno scum or even why everyone is so hesitant other than the human seems like a capable melee fighter - which was incongruous with the fact he just got thawed out of the ice and was described as gaunt. The ending especially - why on earth is one single human a risk? There are a couple tidbits that indicated some legal problems based on the Federation charter - but no explanation or even leading tidbits to give the ominous feeling that is trying to be conveyed legitimacy.
We worked VERY hard on the audio and sfx for this video! Can you tell?
Honestly I still think you read a little too fast Mr. I appreciate you reading it and you're not an AI but relax a little, enjoy the story and slow it a bit. Listen to our friends Squirrel, Net and Amy......they read a little slower and it come across more natural........
it shows keep up the good work, with the surge in ai stories/story tellers the extra effort is appreciated.
@@homoerectus6953 noted!
@@homoerectus6953 I agree the pace is a little too fast. I think he may also be asking about the background sounds, which don’t really do much for me one way or another.
But let me be clear, even if no changes are made at all, this will still be one of the better HFY channels. Really, the only thing holding it back in my opinion is the occasional seemingly AI generated content.
@@homoerectus6953adjust the playback speed. I have to play NetNarrator vids at 1.25 speed LoL because he reads too slow... especially with the story on screen😂.
TLDR: Playback speed is adjustable by the listener... or maybe just hear faster?😂😂
A good story told by an actual person. No word salads, just good clear speech. The voice characterisations for the various characters in the story is great too. Throw in ambient sounds and sound effects and you end up with something that is actually pleasant to listen too.
A great channel.
It's not a real story without a "Cacophony".
😮 😄 😆
Or a green eyed redhead woman in a Mustang? 😏
It's nice to hear one of these stories where it's not one of the following...
• humans, amazingly good at war
• humans, the only compassionate species in existence
• a story structured like a university lecture
I hear you but one I heard about the outpost with a rail gun was pretty cool. Would be nice to see animated
Wow, this is your best story so far! You MUST make this into a series, please!
I would love to see a continuation of specifically this story
Specifically This story. I totally agree!
Me three.
me four
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Your storytelling and channel is getting better and better.
I've quickly grown tired of the stories (which may or may not belong to the owner of the channel) read by a computer. And then we have this, on the complete opposite of the spectrum, not only read by an actual person, but read WELL.
read well, but I don't believe the stories are by human writers. There are too many contradictions and inconsistencies and failures in the promise for a 30 min. or less short story for a human writer. Even One proofread and rework would drastically improve the quality.
@@Parciwal_Gamingmaybe you also should have proofread first, as these stories have premises, not promises.
@@imweakfordeaky sry, promise is the translation for "Versprechen" in german, and that is sometimes used for this purpose. That doesn't change my point though
Don't like them, don't read them.
So far, this is the ONLY channel like this that I have sub'd to because of real people providing the voices for the characters and not some computer voice that constantly screws up...makes for better storytelling and works better on the imagination for the listeners...
You should checkout aggro squirrel
look up argo squirrel
It seems discontinued, but Amie's Literary Empire was another human HFY reader. Also, Quinnhasse had a typo, it's Agro Squirrel. Main channel is Agro Squirrel Narrates.
There NetNarrator
Galactic HFY states all stories were written by him. I can get a deal with an AI voice for that at least.
"Agro Squirrel" and "Net Narrator". Both have hundreds, if not thousands, of excellent narrations.
I probably wont watch a lot of these but you're getting a subscription for the simple fact that you're reading these and not using AI voice.
I think this channel so far has at least slightly outshined most of the other HFY channels. the sound effects for me are cool and lend a different tone, though they dont make or break anything. The reading does however, sound more natural and I do appreciate that. As for people complaining about the reading being too fast, I personally think its fine, but I also find most audiobooks or audio readings too slow, so that might just be my ADHD lol.
Ive also got ADHD and with other HFY videos or even normal ones they seem too slow so i use 2x speed but this guy goes fast enough for me
The story was excellent and all the extras added a high quality finish to that excellence. Thank you so much for all your endeavors to bring this story to us. Please, don't leave us hanging on the cliff's edge to what happens to Captain DeMarco and Captain Varak and his crew.
I don't know how you select the artwork that accompanies your stories - whether it is "stock" or created to go with the story - but it matches up with the story much better than the majority of others do.
The one thing that would improve it would be if the artwork reflected the character descriptions given and those descriptions continued to be shown in all the subsequent artwork.
Sorry to be so long-worded, but that means I like what you're doing. And guess what - you have become the one and only scifi channel that I've subscribed to. Keep up the great work!
ummmm.....failed to notice any warship that "roared to life". Saw a cryo-pod open but that weren't no ship?
Was waiting for that bit. Still am. Fucking AI generated stories.
I was also wondering about being told that Earth was destroyed and Terrans were extinct yet we were supposed to believe that this one needed to be interrogated to learn more about Earth's defenses, fleet and tactics.
I liked the narration but the story was a little rough.
same here, this is utter crap, lies start from the title. this smells like ai with zero effort from a human.
Drinking game: Take a shot every time it says "wildcard" 😂
@@liquidpatriot4480I don't want to end up in the hospital.
This is my favorite channel with HFY stories. The sfx and music really adds to the immersion. Great work as always!
Thank you very much!
Outstanding video with excellent sound and sound effects. Great job and thank you.
I followed this channel about a week ago getting into the whole genre of these stories.
While This particular story isn't my cup of tea. I love the added sound effects, production value. And I'm curious why you stopped? It doesn't seem like your newer videos have this. And I wish they did This story even though I wasn't entertained by the content was so entertaining because of the effort you put into it. This is an amazing video. Please do more.
Best I've heard recently and really looking forward to the next part
The start reminds me of another story where they were captured by an ai that had...absorbed... the organic crew and, eventually, the intruders also.
The AI had plans.
I wish I could remember the title/author.
agro squirrel or an AI channel?
Why do they need to know anything about Earth's defences if the humans and their planets are all defeated and extinct? Where is the ship that "roared to life" ? 2/5.
That was my thought too. I was half expecting Nautilus to activate a defense protocol and disappear on its own.
Where there is one, there may be more. What if the humans, seeing defeat looming, seeded other warships with humans in cryogenic sleep around the galaxy? Knowing human defense strategies would be a help.
There's a single human, but life, uh, finds a way?
If one slip through the cracks how many more also could have slept through the cracks, perhaps an entire colonization ship slowly drifts through the void
6:30 Imagen the movie AILEN but the Xenomorphs switched places with the humans. XD
They used to call this genre the 'Eric Frank Russel'. Always been a favorite of mine.
There had better be a sequel!
I like this one!!!
Any chance of a continuation; doing a Jason Bourne on the aliens?
lololol
Nice. Enjoyed the story. Keep em coming.
good story and narration
i hope this will become a series
thanks
Very well done. The sound effects add drama and fascination. Marvelous!!!!😀👍😎
Interesting story. Is this a one off or will there be future chapters?
I’m with QuinnLacey. Where’s the next chapter? I smell trouble ahead for the Federation and reemergence or discovery of humanity.
sure! if enough people want it, we can write a part 2 :)
@@StarboundHFY be a shame for this to be a one off the story was just getting interesting.
This was the starter, where's the main?... then desert obviously 😂
Start writing...😉❤
Didn't quite get why the "federation" would fall apart if humanity was still around or why they (we) were sooooooooooooo important
You deserve my subscription. Keep at it please.
Love the audiotheater! Subscribed
Thanks for the sub!
I really enjoyed that one the story went along a good pace and yes the audio work was very nice
The human trying to guilt trip the aliens is silly, because I don't think any of them were even born when the war was going on. The human, on the other hand, very much was. If anybody should be guilt tripped into feeling sorry for their actions, it's him.
Depends on the life spans of the various species, they might live for thousands of years or be immortal barring outside forces.
The whole thing made no sense lol why is the risk of keeping someone alive , to lo learn the weaknesses of an extinct races fleet, that was already destroyed in last stand 400 years ago?
@@Shadowlurkering They did mention humans being particularly short lived.
Very cool!!! does this one get a second part?
Much appreciation for the sound effects,it adds greatly to the story 💐⭐🛸👽
Good stories, well told, on this channel.
Thanks for listening!
very nice, will they be a follow up to continue the stories? I'm intrigue!
Great sounds. I don't like how the story just ended
These stories have no ending. Would be a good story if it went some where.
Best channel out there for this content. I like the new audio, no one is doing this keep it up.👍
thank you so much!
Am I the only one that hopes to hear more of this story
Good story!
More of this one please!
W , O , W , . GREAT WORK so THANK YOU ;
Love the extra audio
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GREAT story, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for having a Human read instead of an AI. I'm tired of unwarranted pauses, mispronounced words, and words pronounced differently than before. AND errors in the stories. Great to not have to list those errors. NO errors here.
Glad you enjoyed it!
An interesting first chapter.
I love the SFX, keep it up
Subscribed. Love this format
Thanks for subbing!
Well read but the title is misleading and has nothing to do with the story, very disappointed. Downvoted for misleading title, story went nowhere.
Decent,pace is fine, audio if fine too, Story is crap. Its breaks mind way into another alternate story, clearly multiple story versions blended together.Or at the very least a part cut out at 16:33. Earth and humanity its fleets are gone, yet inquisitor want to keep it human around to learn battle tactics, fleet positions, earth doctrines,defenses.
It makes no sense at all.
Great story, but very sad for the Human Race and Earth.
That was a very good one
Is this an original story, if not, can you post a link to the original?
Human: [Maximum Gigachad mode, GOOOOOO!!]
Xenos: [gets utterly curb stomped like a bunch of sissies]
Me: 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 "Hyper-Impossible fuck physics extra stupid maximum wackspin ignore logic reason and sanity badass mode! I like it! Next chapter; the human goes *GOD-MODE* and kills all life in a 974,000,000,000,000,000 gigaparsec radius in under 0.0001 seconds! YEAH!! Humans are badass!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I really want to hear more of this story
Is their a place where I can just Read the stories?
Unless there is a part 2, this was unsatisfying
What use is information of earth's fleet's weaknesses if they're all gone? Tactical strategies, sure, great idea, but, i don't know.
This is a good pilot, and I really hope there will be more episodes.
I didn't enjoy the ending, you are right.
Will there be a continuation of this story
At what point did the ancient battleship "roar into life"?
Is there a second part to this?
had to google what space cycle are LOL so this poor guy is 4950 (+ his age) years old 😱
More!
It would be really nice if the titles of your videos reflected more of the actual story because in no way shape or form was a story about a worship that came to life
Is there a continuation?
Part 2 please
So when does the ship roar to life ??
Is there another part to this story
fuck ya an actual human reading one of these stories for once? deffinitely getting my like and sub keep up the good work fuck the ai
oxygen doesn't get stale 🙄
Never heard of stale air before?
@@herpderpinson2118Stale air means not a lot of oxygen in it. Stale oxygen is like dry water. It can't physically happen.
Stale air happens when there's no circulation, no new air being brought in. So the uncirculated air sits there, taking on the smells of the space. Old paint, old carpet, old upholstery, old cat litter box. Old cooking. Stale air.
Seriously, you never heard the phrase "stale air" before? What kind of rock do you live under?
I think the wording was clumsy. Stale air is quite acceptable, stale oxygen is not.
and across countless dark moons lost between stars..
within countless cold battleships that drifted into the deep space along with the asteroids chained to them..
buried beneath numberless oceans , cold as hot ones..
inquisitors mistakes the awakening of a lone ghost ships relic ,for what causes them all to stir and fire start blossom across all that been built ...on slaughter
velrak appears again!!!
Is there a part 2?
So is there a part 2?
So the human warship DIDN'T roar to life?
Clickbait.
mmmm. Not sure where the break is. Subtexts (without Ytube CC enabled) is showing Chitin at 0:31 and i'm seeing similar chitin subtexts later....but the VA is not pronouncing the word chitin...he's pronouncing Kiten...with a K not a Cha sound. Turning on YT Close Caption (CC enable)..its getting translated as kite according to audio.
Either the Subtitles put into the movie have mistakenly written the wrong spelling for a sound - K vs Cha or the Voice Actor (VA)...is not familiar with the pronunciation of the letters Cha Chitan vs K sound Kite Kitten. Worst scenario is the author of a book write chitin and decided that it should be pronounced with a K which NO ONE is going to read in their head and pronounce that way. I cant go on... If this was meant to be a professionally released movie or clip an was put in front of reviewers or live audience..it would be eaten alive for something so obvious to be corrected before it went to production.
Avatar: The Last Human
So... do we leave this scene unfinished? Just a slice of time out of some other place with no point? All of us here dare you to pony up the bet for the next part. Go ahead, push your coin to the center of the table. We wait.
So? What _did_ happen next?
Incomplete and a bit too much purple prose for me.
Well, that was a story that went nowhere.
So it just ends in the middle of a story? Ffs wish people would complete a story first
we’re leaving it open for a potential part 2!
@@StarboundHFY you're the author?
@@silenttitan416An AI is.
@@willdavis3802 a wonderful way to have a subpar story
Continue please
"WildCard"
thank you, oh Algorithm for sending me to a living story...except the artwork is obviously AI
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The narrator is cute
Could you make series of different kind do you could concentrate on different stories also time to time make one-sgot after the another.
KO that was good.
So… part 1?
Isn't this the same story I just heard?
Without more this will always be a terrible story. Don’t you think we have enough pain in reality? people don’t want a story of their own destruction.
part 2 ?
The Inquisitor ship went missing without a trace. What had happened? Where was the human?
@@davidhenderson3400 It's a mystery alright
next part?
What is up with the MC Escher perspective in the image used around the 9 min mark. Way too distracting.
(since I know there are plenty of morons out there; I am not talking about how the image was created, I am talking about the image in and of itself)
Well that was 2 short... kinda went south 🙄
Audio good, reading good, few sound effects to add ambience also good. The writing was the weakest part. Too much repetition and it came across as trying too hard for how little plot there actually was. Barely anything actually happens here and there is no actual reason to give credence to both the reactions of the xeno scum or even why everyone is so hesitant other than the human seems like a capable melee fighter - which was incongruous with the fact he just got thawed out of the ice and was described as gaunt. The ending especially - why on earth is one single human a risk? There are a couple tidbits that indicated some legal problems based on the Federation charter - but no explanation or even leading tidbits to give the ominous feeling that is trying to be conveyed legitimacy.
Bot of click bait here. When did the Warship Roar to life?
Begs for a part 2, 3, 4. . . .