@@brucewelty7684 The author has apparently never heard of the 7 P annacronym, Prior Preperation & Planning Prevents Piss Poor Performance, nor the maxim "No one left behind".
This is an ancient tactic in war and is well described in Chinese history (because they wrote more down than anyone). In Romance Of Three Kingdoms, there is a semi-fictional story (as there is with everything ROTK) where Zhuge Liang defends his master Liu Bei from an irresistable force of Cao Cao led by Xiahou Dun. Zhuge found the trails and narrow passageway into a valley. Then at the battle, he goaded General Xiahou over and over by having all the best and brightest of Liu's generals to flee haphazardly each time before Xiahou's approach, emboldening him with each "defeat". By the time Xiahou realized he was on the other end of the valley, his lieutenants, veteran generals themselves, warned Xiahou several times they were in danger due to the tightness of the terrain. By the time Xiahou came to his senses and saw the point, they gave the order to halt and retreat but the line was so long including the carts of the supplies and such, they couldn't turn around so easily. At that queue, all of the soldiers hidden above the valley cliffs began to roll down logs and bales of incendiaries which hit a bunch of the random carts (that looked like the Liu army's abandoned supplies) that were full of saltpeter, mines and explosives. The whole valley was on fire. Although the officers including Xiahou were able to get out, the majority of the Cao army was not only defeated, they were destroyed, man, horse, cart and foodstuffs by fire. After the defeat, Xiahou had his juniors to bind him up so he could present himself to his master Cao Cao for execution. Cao realized that the rumors of Zhuge Kongming were real and forgave General Xiahou with no penalties of the defeat because, even though the majority of army and supplies were absolutely annihilated, he/Cao was wrong to fight the brilliant genius of Zhuge Liang with the simply valor of Xiahou Dun. Basically if you want to beat someone who is overwhelmingly strong, lure your opponent into your strongest point within and then surround and destroy them. It happens many times in Chinese warfare history.
Well, think about it this way: Biggest empire of the world: British Empire: If the UK was blown up, would there be ANY industry to protract the war afterwards? Nope. Mercantile empires are all the same. The Center holds all the industry/political power.
@@jammer68 Just wondering... what is your age and IQ and have you EVER read basic history of the age of empire? UK empire had THOUSANDS of ships and traded with NO ONE other than thmselves. Attacked and took whatever they wanted or needed. South Africa had the bad choice of finding gold and having the only major port in the southern continent otherwise they would speak DUTCH and more than likely Cape Town would still be white to this day.
@@w8stral And you see how well that is working out for Capetown... (But your points are well considered. I think the major difference between the UK empire and a 'galactic' empire is communication. If they had near instant communication, then the fleets could co-ordinate an attack with overwhelming firepower. Earth wouldn't survive. Even if they did it just to drag us down with them (which would likely be the case) Earth would still be doomed.)
@@kevincaruthers5412 ? Are you this ignorant of basic history? UK empire communications were via speed of ship... There was no internet, satellite comms, Phone, radio, or even telegraph. A star empire depending on FTL speed would have even greater lethargic communications.
@@w8stral You seem to be under the impression that, just because something was a certain way in the past, it will also be that way in the future. That's a false equivalence fallacy. There is sufficient evidence to suggest that, once we would be able to travel to other solar systems, we would also be able to implement systems of communication which can transmit information faster than our travel speed. Yes, during the first British Empire, we had sluggish communication. Both intercontinental travel and mass communication were in their infancy. Especially long range communication required messages to be physically delivered, and was therefore tied to the travel speed of ships. However, in the centuries following that specific time period, both travelling and communication were in constant development. One particular development that supports the idea of faster communication than travelling in the future is technology that allowed us to send messages to each other without having to physically deliver them. This advancement made communication far easier and faster than physical travelling. At this time we still have fleets of ships and even transport by air. However, the speeds of our fastest modes of intercontinental transport are nothing compared to our speeds of intercontinental communication. Given that the speed of communication is so much faster than the speed of travelling in our current day, what makes you suggest that the speeds of communication will be slower than travelling in the future? What do you base this on, other than a point in history that has already been made redundant by our current technology?
It was more implied than explicitly mentioned near the beginning. "Standard Imperial sensor sweep, they're not picking us up." or something to that effect.
So.. you hear someone coming towards your house, you know they dont have good intentions. You make something that can stope them before they stop you. Do you say hey! lets make more just in case? or use it before its too late. NOW! I get what you are saying.. BUT its a story.. it didnt really happen. Just giving a scenario as an example :) It wasnt a bad story afterall :)
Love these types of books/stories so I decide to subscribe after only listening to 40 seconds. oh and thank you for not having an annoying voice so I can listen and enjoy what you say😂
If we're confined to one planet, that's all the eggs in one basket. Planets have 100% predictable orbits. All it takes is one good-sized asteroid, plucked from the Kuiper Belt by an advanced enemy and accelerated to a significant fraction of c, set on a course to "directly intercept" the world, and all humans lucky enough to be spaceborne at the time will be (as CJ Cherryh so eloquently phrased it) "brotherless and widows forever".
Can we just take a moment to appreciate the irony of a Japanese scientist engineering the planetary version of the 1945 bombing of Nagasaki? That's bloody clever writing.
*Invictus* By William Ernest Henley Out of the night that covers me, Black as the pit from pole to pole, I thank whatever gods may be For my unconquerable soul. In the fell clutch of circumstance I have not winced nor cried aloud. Under the bludgeonings of chance My head is bloody, but unbowed. Beyond this place of wrath and tears Looms but the Horror of the shade, And yet the menace of the years Finds and shall find me unafraid. It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishments the scroll, I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul.
The narration of the story is superb. However. There are a few fundamentally wrong things in this story. This I have noted is also a recurring theme in the stories in this channel. Single ship, whether is the last or the first taking on an entire Empire. Its just... not reasonable. If you said it is a small team, maybe. Stuff like this keeps wringing me out of the immersion. Not the only thing but the most common thing across the catalogue of stories here.
Learn modern irregular warfare: destroy target, leave without a word,let the bigger opponent wonder who was attacking and force them to waste resources in pountless defense.
This is a very good story! It is in many ways how we, as free people, have fought our oppressors and were victorious. We have not only the memories, but the scars to prove our resilience. God Bless all the brave men and women who gave all to allow us to be free. Amen!
It seems unlikely one ship could defeat an entire galactic empire. It reminds me of the Liberator from Blake's 7. They knew they would need allies, which Blake and later Avon would try to entice. In this story, this first ship would realistically only be able to do gruella hit-and-run raids, not unlike how this story was having it do at first. To take it to the level of actually defeating the empire, they've have to build many more, and at least a few hidden bases of operation. Basically, it'd be like star wars without the Force.
Seems to be written by AI based on human writer prompts. It’s interesting for the first couple videos but starkly shows why human writing is different and hits a different chord
Exactly my thoughts... not a bad story bad a no point did any ship cloak or decloak. And a ship the size a moon sure as hell isn't any stealth ship. Just just built it in secret somehow.
@louisburland5346 Even using greater than your measurements and percentages of size to crew ratios, this ship would still be crewed by thousands. Still a Hell of a bridge.
How would one go about starting a profession in narration or books on "tape"? I have a feeling that I would be pretty good at it with a little help. I spent six months in jail when I was younger, and the one thing that made me liked and respected by everyone, was I read to them at night from a children's book series called, "Hank the Cowdog" The whole pod would get real quiet so the "white boy" could read to them. For some people, my nightly stories, are what kept them from getting into trouble. They gave me snacks, protected me like I was part of their family. Ever since then, the thought of doing that for a job, really stuck with me. So, please tell me anything you think I should know, about voice acting.🙏
Venturing into the world of storytelling and video expression. VideoGPT subtly became my ally, refining my content and elevating its professionalism effortlessly.
These kind of stories are usually just very gimmicky and poorly written, barely making sense in many aspects. But i really enjoyed this one. I'd watch a film based on this
btw AI is perfect for space scenes, as it's very good at adding a fuck ton of details and capturing the sheer scale of futuristic structures. Similar human made art tends to be a little bit lazy and rarely features such detalization. Still not perfect, needs a few years I'd say
hey, i was wondering if y'all would find a way to offer downloads of your videos on ko-fi, like a "purchase this to own a copy" and have it give MP3 and MP4 formats of your stuff with a watermark and such? audiobook/movie style, because the art selection is awesome, and the stories are awesome too, and i'd love to buy some of the ones i like more as a one off to download. maybe you could even collab with folks like corridor crew and make animations and such, themed around the art. it might sound a little silly or ridiculous, but i'd love to see y'all make something like, an hour long, and offer downloads for like, $5-$10 to keep forever. i'd 100% watch on youtube and then purchase.
hope you got all the permissions lol i guess there are some channels that have been using hfy content and not giving props to the original creators if you are not one of these sorry for the bother
Actually: stealth tech would be pointless in space warfare. Reason: space is big. You are essentially trying to find a needle in a haystack, with your eyes being blindfolded. That, and light travels painfully slow. Any chances to discover something in space that would not want to be found could have been relocated by the time you found it. The only stealth technology of any use at all in space warfare would be radiation of heat. Or the lack of leaking heat.
Stealth is incredibly effective when one is not alone. In empty space, sure useless. But having a cloaked fleet to ambush keys targets in a war would be invaluable.
It allows you to get closer without alerting your enemies which would have sensor/detection technology all over the system that could pinpoint something coming from far away. Makes sense when you want to get close, minimizing the enemies ability to detect you until you are ready to attack. Very little time if any to prepare a proper defence. Why do countries make stealth fighters? Same concept.
@@SetsunaInfinite Star trek is a perfect example. Can see you through sensors God knows how many light years away but cannot see a cloaked ship until it is in front of you dropping the cloak. Until you develop a sensor that can see or notice the cloak, you are going to have a bad time.
The only problem with the human super Carrier. They don't build 1 neighborhood 12. No matter what size it is, build 12 of them. All these that's denied states of America in the United States of America's gonna have their advantage over any other country. In space century at 6 space company's building spaceships on eaothers, as is in 2024 a few of them were gonna fail. But most of them are gonna make it into space and a hand musk is gonna have the most powerful space x.
Why these new stories are going from bad to worse? I notice that in the past few months most of the HFY stories become so stupid and bad writen, is it because they use AI to write them now days?
So few of the writers of these YT SciFi stories pay any attention to the golden rule of writing: show, dont tell. It s all a long, tedious description, not a story. Try a less affected, less grandiloquent language, and try not just informing what is, but making it happen.
Clunky story which follows the same predictable pattern: amazing equipment, hero captain, mad scientist, all combining to waste a vast and expensive resource by not using it properly instead of continuously, until other similar ships could be built. Heroic standoffs above Earth prove that their long-term plans had failed completely. There's nothing unpredictable in this formulaic AI-generated story.
Very poorly written. Discordant elements. No proper transitions. Illogical and unrealistic battle scenes - even for a simulated screen play or game scenario. And WHAT "stealth" tech?
in space there’d be no use for the type of stealth like cloaking or tech like that it would be something that stops heat radiation flares so other ships would not pickup your location
How would YOU reveal Human's Secret Supercarrier to Aliens? Would you play it cool or rub it in their face?
No, a larger number of smaller vessels that can be in many places at once, sowing seeds of despair. Unable to stop a death by a thousand cuts.
Lots of automation?
Humans are Magnanimous, Professional killers not a bunch of ignorant low frequency douche bags.
Oh, if I used to stealth ship, they would never see it coming, but I would not be the aggressor
We ate not there to become conquers, we want to be known as equals. A true warrior keeps is skills hidden until needed.
Literally F-22 going interstellar and saying
"Would you intercept me? I'd intercept me."
With several hundreds of interstellar F-22s inside.
And fire Red Bull cans at 700 rounds a minute. Oh, wait, that's the A10.
I get that reference..lol
I see you are a fellow man of Habitual Linecrosser culture.
@jammer68
In less than 4 second bursts, or it will stall the Warthog.
Invictus went out like Richard III, taking as many of the enemy with it as possible.
The space battles that last 1 sentence but everyone's feelings are thoroughly explored for 55 paragraphs.
Thanks.
No watch for me
Can we get a weak hurrah for the indomitable spirit of humanity? lol.
I wouldn’t have announced that I was from earth I would have let them be frightened of the unknown.
Going on the offensive with only one battleship? No sister ships? No cruiser or destroyer screen? That's piss poor tactics .
And he launched all his fighers in the first battle and...LEFT THEM THERE
@@brucewelty7684 The author has apparently never heard of the 7 P annacronym, Prior Preperation & Planning Prevents Piss Poor Performance, nor the maxim "No one left behind".
This is an ancient tactic in war and is well described in Chinese history (because they wrote more down than anyone). In Romance Of Three Kingdoms, there is a semi-fictional story (as there is with everything ROTK) where Zhuge Liang defends his master Liu Bei from an irresistable force of Cao Cao led by Xiahou Dun. Zhuge found the trails and narrow passageway into a valley. Then at the battle, he goaded General Xiahou over and over by having all the best and brightest of Liu's generals to flee haphazardly each time before Xiahou's approach, emboldening him with each "defeat". By the time Xiahou realized he was on the other end of the valley, his lieutenants, veteran generals themselves, warned Xiahou several times they were in danger due to the tightness of the terrain. By the time Xiahou came to his senses and saw the point, they gave the order to halt and retreat but the line was so long including the carts of the supplies and such, they couldn't turn around so easily. At that queue, all of the soldiers hidden above the valley cliffs began to roll down logs and bales of incendiaries which hit a bunch of the random carts (that looked like the Liu army's abandoned supplies) that were full of saltpeter, mines and explosives. The whole valley was on fire. Although the officers including Xiahou were able to get out, the majority of the Cao army was not only defeated, they were destroyed, man, horse, cart and foodstuffs by fire.
After the defeat, Xiahou had his juniors to bind him up so he could present himself to his master Cao Cao for execution. Cao realized that the rumors of Zhuge Kongming were real and forgave General Xiahou with no penalties of the defeat because, even though the majority of army and supplies were absolutely annihilated, he/Cao was wrong to fight the brilliant genius of Zhuge Liang with the simply valor of Xiahou Dun.
Basically if you want to beat someone who is overwhelmingly strong, lure your opponent into your strongest point within and then surround and destroy them. It happens many times in Chinese warfare history.
Ai writing, similar to Disney, once used and not in focus, it does not exist
You forget the humans are very insidious in our quest for survival and freedom and victory
A single home system against an empire seems impractical, you would forever be playing defense.
Well, think about it this way: Biggest empire of the world: British Empire: If the UK was blown up, would there be ANY industry to protract the war afterwards? Nope. Mercantile empires are all the same. The Center holds all the industry/political power.
@@jammer68 Just wondering... what is your age and IQ and have you EVER read basic history of the age of empire? UK empire had THOUSANDS of ships and traded with NO ONE other than thmselves. Attacked and took whatever they wanted or needed. South Africa had the bad choice of finding gold and having the only major port in the southern continent otherwise they would speak DUTCH and more than likely Cape Town would still be white to this day.
@@w8stral And you see how well that is working out for Capetown...
(But your points are well considered. I think the major difference between the UK empire and a 'galactic' empire is communication. If they had near instant communication, then the fleets could co-ordinate an attack with overwhelming firepower. Earth wouldn't survive. Even if they did it just to drag us down with them (which would likely be the case) Earth would still be doomed.)
@@kevincaruthers5412 ? Are you this ignorant of basic history? UK empire communications were via speed of ship... There was no internet, satellite comms, Phone, radio, or even telegraph. A star empire depending on FTL speed would have even greater lethargic communications.
@@w8stral You seem to be under the impression that, just because something was a certain way in the past, it will also be that way in the future. That's a false equivalence fallacy. There is sufficient evidence to suggest that, once we would be able to travel to other solar systems, we would also be able to implement systems of communication which can transmit information faster than our travel speed.
Yes, during the first British Empire, we had sluggish communication. Both intercontinental travel and mass communication were in their infancy. Especially long range communication required messages to be physically delivered, and was therefore tied to the travel speed of ships. However, in the centuries following that specific time period, both travelling and communication were in constant development. One particular development that supports the idea of faster communication than travelling in the future is technology that allowed us to send messages to each other without having to physically deliver them. This advancement made communication far easier and faster than physical travelling. At this time we still have fleets of ships and even transport by air. However, the speeds of our fastest modes of intercontinental transport are nothing compared to our speeds of intercontinental communication.
Given that the speed of communication is so much faster than the speed of travelling in our current day, what makes you suggest that the speeds of communication will be slower than travelling in the future? What do you base this on, other than a point in history that has already been made redundant by our current technology?
I don't quite remember hearing about a cloaking device on the invictus though.
It was more implied than explicitly mentioned near the beginning. "Standard Imperial sensor sweep, they're not picking us up." or something to that effect.
I definitely Like a human telling the story. Good job
Even with his "st" blends adding an H to them?
It is good to see a real person vocalising the story.
same
Why would Humans decide to attack whwn only ONE special ship was made ?
It would be much better to make several THEN attack...I don't get it
Of course, you would make more than one, but it seems like every story they have on here.They only have this one ship makes no sense
All the way through the story this was constantly on my mind. It kept me from enjoying the story because it seems so obviously wrong and idiotic.
Unless they just didn't have the resources to build more than the one at the time. 🤔
So.. you hear someone coming towards your house, you know they dont have good intentions. You make something that can stope them before they stop you. Do you say hey! lets make more just in case? or use it before its too late. NOW! I get what you are saying.. BUT its a story.. it didnt really happen. Just giving a scenario as an example :) It wasnt a bad story afterall :)
How about using that one ship that's ready so they don't get killed while they wait to make more of them?
Love these types of books/stories so I decide to subscribe after only listening to 40 seconds. oh and thank you for not having an annoying voice so I can listen and enjoy what you say😂
haha welcome aboard!
What a damn idiotic idea. Humanity builds ONE impressive ship and goes to fing multi-system imperium with multiple FLEETS.
THANK YOU! This is simply not how asymmetric warfare works.
This is what happens if you let an AI write your stories^^
What bitches
If we're confined to one planet, that's all the eggs in one basket. Planets have 100% predictable orbits. All it takes is one good-sized asteroid, plucked from the Kuiper Belt by an advanced enemy and accelerated to a significant fraction of c, set on a course to "directly intercept" the world, and all humans lucky enough to be spaceborne at the time will be (as CJ Cherryh so eloquently phrased it) "brotherless and widows forever".
@@xheralt You're completely missing the point here...
Can we just take a moment to appreciate the irony of a Japanese scientist engineering the planetary version of the 1945 bombing of Nagasaki? That's bloody clever writing.
*Invictus*
By William Ernest Henley
Out of the night that covers me,
Black as the pit from pole to pole,
I thank whatever gods may be
For my unconquerable soul.
In the fell clutch of circumstance
I have not winced nor cried aloud.
Under the bludgeonings of chance
My head is bloody, but unbowed.
Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the Horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of the years
Finds and shall find me unafraid.
It matters not how strait the gate,
How charged with punishments the scroll,
I am the master of my fate,
I am the captain of my soul.
Thank you.
Good to see this channel growing...
interesting story and good narration thanks
Fantastic story.
Sci-fi stories got into writing.
I've noticed at some points in these stories that the word "scientist" is used when it should be using "engineers".
...bugs...its always gotta be bugs....
😂😂😂
And don't forget farts...farts are pretty powerful.
you know what would be messed up this was history and we didnt know it
Humanity's greatest asset? Lockheed-Martin!
You must be a US American, to have come up with that option and it's wrong, as would any single company be.
@@Thurgosh_OGIt’s a joke.
The narration of the story is superb.
However.
There are a few fundamentally wrong things in this story. This I have noted is also a recurring theme in the stories in this channel. Single ship, whether is the last or the first taking on an entire Empire. Its just... not reasonable. If you said it is a small team, maybe. Stuff like this keeps wringing me out of the immersion. Not the only thing but the most common thing across the catalogue of stories here.
Learn modern irregular warfare: destroy target, leave without a word,let the bigger opponent wonder who was attacking and force them to waste resources in pountless defense.
Very sad story, I hope this never happens to us.
This is a very good story! It is in many ways how we, as free people, have fought our oppressors and were victorious. We have not only the memories, but the scars to prove our resilience. God Bless all the brave men and women who gave all to allow us to be free. Amen!
It seems unlikely one ship could defeat an entire galactic empire. It reminds me of the Liberator from Blake's 7. They knew they would need allies, which Blake and later Avon would try to entice. In this story, this first ship would realistically only be able to do gruella hit-and-run raids, not unlike how this story was having it do at first. To take it to the level of actually defeating the empire, they've have to build many more, and at least a few hidden bases of operation. Basically, it'd be like star wars without the Force.
Seems to be written by AI based on human writer prompts. It’s interesting for the first couple videos but starkly shows why human writing is different and hits a different chord
In this entire video was there any cloaked ships? I was waiting for an ambush or something anything and yet nothing.
Exactly my thoughts... not a bad story bad a no point did any ship cloak or decloak. And a ship the size a moon sure as hell isn't any stealth ship. Just just built it in secret somehow.
With the layout it makes me wonder
Okay, the ship is the size of a moon, but the ENTIRE crew can fit on the bridge?!? Come on!
British subs good war had up to 130 crew Russian subs 3x size were 90% automated 38 cre
AI running almost everything
@louisburland5346 Even using greater than your measurements and percentages of size to crew ratios, this ship would still be crewed by thousands. Still a Hell of a bridge.
Thought that only officiers were allowed on the bridge. For normal crew there exists the ships communications system.
Miniturisation, or, dimensiontunelling, or Dr Who
How would one go about starting a profession in narration or books on "tape"? I have a feeling that I would be pretty good at it with a little help. I spent six months in jail when I was younger, and the one thing that made me liked and respected by everyone, was I read to them at night from a children's book series called, "Hank the Cowdog" The whole pod would get real quiet so the "white boy" could read to them. For some people, my nightly stories, are what kept them from getting into trouble. They gave me snacks, protected me like I was part of their family. Ever since then, the thought of doing that for a job, really stuck with me. So, please tell me anything you think I should know, about voice acting.🙏
Venturing into the world of storytelling and video expression. VideoGPT subtly became my ally, refining my content and elevating its professionalism effortlessly.
Hope I'm not insulting anyone but where can I buy THIS story?
hey! what are you looking to buy exactly?
Frontier saga they based it on great book series
So the Invictus basically jump-rammed the enemies flagship?
So: Humanity's version of the Death Star?
How the hell did the ship get from Sol to Arcturus?
maybe the fact that it was built with a teleportation device
Cool, very cool.
So the Invictus rammed the fleet as it attacked Earth, but a big chunk of it was as the Empires homeworld? Overall a good story though.
And they only built one? 😮
These kind of stories are usually just very gimmicky and poorly written, barely making sense in many aspects. But i really enjoyed this one. I'd watch a film based on this
I see commenters have not studied a little thing called "guerilla warfare"
If it doesn’t fit in a short, don’t put it in one
.@StarBoundHFY Only The Real Space Ship From Star Wars Movie Life Action Channel.😐.
Why does the alien voices sound so much like skaven
btw AI is perfect for space scenes, as it's very good at adding a fuck ton of details and capturing the sheer scale of futuristic structures. Similar human made art tends to be a little bit lazy and rarely features such detalization. Still not perfect, needs a few years I'd say
hey, i was wondering if y'all would find a way to offer downloads of your videos on ko-fi, like a "purchase this to own a copy" and have it give MP3 and MP4 formats of your stuff with a watermark and such? audiobook/movie style, because the art selection is awesome, and the stories are awesome too, and i'd love to buy some of the ones i like more as a one off to download. maybe you could even collab with folks like corridor crew and make animations and such, themed around the art. it might sound a little silly or ridiculous, but i'd love to see y'all make something like, an hour long, and offer downloads for like, $5-$10 to keep forever. i'd 100% watch on youtube and then purchase.
WTF???? No goat sounds or mispronounced stuff? This cant be right?? 😀 thankyou :) thumbs up ☝
hope you got all the permissions lol i guess there are some channels that have been using hfy content and not giving props to the original creators if you are not one of these sorry for the bother
What does this have to do with stealth?
Actually: stealth tech would be pointless in space warfare. Reason: space is big. You are essentially trying to find a needle in a haystack, with your eyes being blindfolded. That, and light travels painfully slow. Any chances to discover something in space that would not want to be found could have been relocated by the time you found it. The only stealth technology of any use at all in space warfare would be radiation of heat. Or the lack of leaking heat.
Stealth tech is not for the eye. It is meant to minimize radar detection. Interstellar propulsion tech will become a hell of a challenge to hide.
Stealth is incredibly effective when one is not alone. In empty space, sure useless. But having a cloaked fleet to ambush keys targets in a war would be invaluable.
It allows you to get closer without alerting your enemies which would have sensor/detection technology all over the system that could pinpoint something coming from far away.
Makes sense when you want to get close, minimizing the enemies ability to detect you until you are ready to attack. Very little time if any to prepare a proper defence.
Why do countries make stealth fighters? Same concept.
@@SetsunaInfinite Star trek is a perfect example. Can see you through sensors God knows how many light years away but cannot see a cloaked ship until it is in front of you dropping the cloak.
Until you develop a sensor that can see or notice the cloak, you are going to have a bad time.
Really only stealth needed is to "jam" signals reduce all heat signatures basically making all scanners en etc fail
Moral of the story? Humanity is not to be taken lightly.
Are the pictures in the video AI Made?
Ummm...where's the cloned ships?????
Nice one, well told and a damned fine short story.
So many plot holes I could pilot the "Destiny" through them side ways! Good start but it needs a LOT more work.
They only made 1? Really?
The only problem with the human super Carrier. They don't build 1 neighborhood 12. No matter what size it is, build 12 of them. All these that's denied states of America in the United States of America's gonna have their advantage over any other country. In space century at 6 space company's building spaceships on eaothers, as is in 2024 a few of them were gonna fail. But most of them are gonna make it into space and a hand musk is gonna have the most powerful space x.
Why these new stories are going from bad to worse? I notice that in the past few months most of the HFY stories become so stupid and bad writen, is it because they use AI to write them now days?
So few of the writers of these YT SciFi stories pay any attention to the golden rule of writing: show, dont tell.
It s all a long, tedious description, not a story.
Try a less affected, less grandiloquent language, and try not just informing what is, but making it happen.
Are these stories written by AI?
Yes
@@roberttilford7991 I thought so, I listened to a couple, and it is the same story, over and over, many times repeating the same paragraphs.
We have 2 full time human writers :)
@@StarboundHFY Is that in addition to AIs or instead?
These don't have enough excess words to be AI. Granted the story needs a ruthless editor but it's not as bad as AI.
yaaaay, your not an AI are you? this is cool.
nope! i just heard the change of voice. whats golem doing here! jk, good one! more immersive :D
THEN A NEW PROTYPE FROM A UNKNOWN RACE COME OUT OF NOWHERE AND DESTROYS THE STEALTH SHIP🤣🤣
Clunky story which follows the same predictable pattern: amazing equipment, hero captain, mad scientist, all combining to waste a vast and expensive resource by not using it properly instead of continuously, until other similar ships could be built. Heroic standoffs above Earth prove that their long-term plans had failed completely. There's nothing unpredictable in this formulaic AI-generated story.
What was that ship in the thumbnail? That was a cool design.
I really like these stories but the volume is too low
The ending are always stupid, no other weapons but ramming? Get a better writer.
Good AI reader but still a bit mechanical. They're getting better, though.
lol
So a ship captain makes the decision for the entire race? Okay....
look through the wars of our past and see how many individuals made decisions for our entire species
Where is the stealth tech?
Yes AI propaganda it being used as a propaganda tool, machine.
This sounds more like a synopsis than a story. Try again. Could be good
:)
clunky story 🙄
crap
So the Japanese didn't do anything wrong then?
Id intercept me
disjointed story elements, size scale keeps changing
A.I. plot..... title does not match the story
Very poorly written. Discordant elements. No proper transitions. Illogical and unrealistic battle scenes - even for a simulated screen play or game scenario. And WHAT "stealth" tech?
in space there’d be no use for the type of stealth like cloaking or tech like that it would be something that stops heat radiation flares so other ships would not pickup your location
This story is GRRRREEEAAAT!
Should be a series or a movie!!!