Redesigning Your Logos! (Bad Logo??) 😳 Ep 9

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 31 พ.ค. 2024
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    In this video, I'm redesigning your logos in Adobe Illustrator CC 2023. Most of the time, I love minimalism, but that can sometimes take away from the character of the brand identity. So I'm going for a more handmade logo design effect. Not everything in graphic design has to be minimal - especially when it comes to designing logos! You can follow along with this if you like, there's a link so you can download the logo files!
    Plantify Logo: www.dropbox.com/s/61djffizufk...
    Sunrise Logo: www.dropbox.com/s/e9wk6nzqjb4...
    If there's anything you would like me to cover in a video, then let me know by commenting down below!
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  • @willpatersondesign
    @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    Hope you guys enjoy the video! If you did, then make sure to post your own logo on the subreddit! Watch the previous episode here: th-cam.com/video/-bwYtTjcjqc/w-d-xo.html

    • @shafik1227
      @shafik1227 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Tuned In

  • @NatOliver
    @NatOliver 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +33

    Hi Will, can I suggest an idea for you? Would you fancy redesigning defunct British brands? I’m thinking of brands that were once synonymous with the British high street like Woolworths, Phones4u, Debenhams, maybe even Mr Whippy, BHS and Safeway. All were big brands/chains in their day. Maybe it’s time they got a revamp for the high street in 2023? It’d be cool to see your take of bringing back once loved brands.

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      This is such a good idea

    • @ardnisgnirf
      @ardnisgnirf 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Did this ever happen? would love to see this ❤

  • @OOF_ItsAndy
    @OOF_ItsAndy 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +30

    Hey! I made the Sunrise Yoga logo, thanks for taking a stab at fixing it, love what you came up with as it's clearly a well thought out logo and composition, not my squished text abomination haha
    Love the content! Hope to see more of my designs amplified by you so I can further develop my logo design skills!

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      It's not an abomination! It was fun to re-work it though, thanks for posting it :D glad you enjoyed it

    • @Ethanol.
      @Ethanol. 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      Nah bro yours was better. You asked for a yoga company logo, he gave you a daycare looking one.

  • @Kittldesign
    @Kittldesign 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

    Excellent demonstration of Kittl, Will! We're excited to be adding even more mockups soon and filling up those categories. 🔥

  • @suyashimishra
    @suyashimishra 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Just recieved the notification! This was much needed!✨🙌

  • @Jopasd
    @Jopasd 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    4:22 imho, I think the more rounded version in the sketch worked best, keeping the P thicknesses more balanced.

    • @PRKK1
      @PRKK1 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      yeeeeeeeeeees

  • @neehasahu201
    @neehasahu201 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    First logo transformation was something i was expecting but what you done with 2nd logo that blows my mind.😮😮

  • @TachyBunker
    @TachyBunker 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    You're very talented. Can you do a video for music artists? I love Carpenter Brut's logo, and want to do something as iconic and recognizable yet unique.

  • @logotronix.
    @logotronix. 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    These logos are simply extraordinary in their minimalism 😀

  • @EllyseaAndDolls
    @EllyseaAndDolls 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    🍋 I really enjoy logo redesign videos, I learn a lot from them. It's funny because my studio is called Studio Yoake, which means sunrise in Japanese, but I didn't go for a playful logo like this sunrise logo, I went for a logotype with a very modern ligature serif font whose A makes kind of a circle with the horizontal bar. Otherwise, all very clean and streamlined.

  • @dantecxx
    @dantecxx 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you for your content 🙌

  • @ilhamismail2908
    @ilhamismail2908 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    i love your creative but simple idea

  • @dannyr2976
    @dannyr2976 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Nicely done Will 'Pater-kern' with the re-designs, great choice of font for 'Plantify', would've tried having the inner leaf shape on the left side run parallel to the stem of the 'P' (no pun intended!) more to keep the original shape of the letterform a little more, then somehow work in the shape. I agree with you that clichéd can work depending how it's executed. Watched the whole way through so 'Lemon'.

  • @yinkashanu3014
    @yinkashanu3014 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    You’re a legend!

  • @Jonayed_M_Khan
    @Jonayed_M_Khan 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    love these redesigning episodes

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'm glad you enjoy them! I have fun making them

  • @AngeloMontilla
    @AngeloMontilla 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great video Will!

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you! Really appreciate you watching :)

  • @sanketkachare4488
    @sanketkachare4488 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    P is not perfectly align in plantify logo

    • @twinklefire7241
      @twinklefire7241 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      That’s all I could focus on. And it seemed a little too small as well, shorter than the “L” and thus not visually balanced.

  • @buckbuchanan4810
    @buckbuchanan4810 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    lemon. :) I also thought you could cutout the horizon into the star S icon to bring more continuity between the icon and the full logo

  • @gearlounge3743
    @gearlounge3743 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Awesome designs. Thanks

  • @yasith_randu4465
    @yasith_randu4465 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Your video was so much help to me, thanks a lot < will

  • @StillSahan
    @StillSahan 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Thanks🍋

  • @mitzerbitzer
    @mitzerbitzer 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Kern Kop Will on duty right now, make sure you're not running around with W-illegal kerning.

  • @greenscreener7655
    @greenscreener7655 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Eleven! Nice work as always👍

  • @jedu_youtube
    @jedu_youtube 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Mate, loving the videos. Trying to come up with a new logo for my channel and seeing your thoughts and process is really really helpfull! Just had to comment and say thanks!

  • @Dumbydouchbag
    @Dumbydouchbag 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Eleven! I really enjoyed the design process and the simplification honestly the way u speak is super clear! I was thinking you could redesign actual logos like Coca Cola in a different time period , you put time periods on a spinning wheel, spin it, and then put the logos on a separate wheel, spin it and whatever it landed on , you must do (just a thought yk ☺️)

  • @apatsa_basiteni
    @apatsa_basiteni 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    That sunrise logo redesign was fire

  • @MyLudimila
    @MyLudimila 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The yoga one looked kinda lost. It reminded me more of a water park or sunscreen company logo, but it was cute (IMO of course).

  • @patch863
    @patch863 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    i really like the more handrawn and natural feel to todays logos!
    also lemon 🍋

  • @CabdullahiCadde1
    @CabdullahiCadde1 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Great And Good

  • @eleoptera
    @eleoptera 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hey. Nice stuff. However I think the sketch you made for the P in the first logo looks a lot better than the one You constructed from the font. Couldn't you have traced the leaf and Integrated that in the font path?

  • @char.graphics6747
    @char.graphics6747 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    How did you record yourself while designing on the laptop

  • @cyclopswithbangs
    @cyclopswithbangs 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Will acting like New Spirit isn't super huge right now! Great usage!

  • @howjos
    @howjos 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    11 -the sunrise logo worked out great

  • @CondogCreative
    @CondogCreative 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Is the P in Plantify supposed to be smaller than the other type?

  • @jkartz92
    @jkartz92 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    It not only depicts like a leaf, but also feels liek a elephant trunk!!

  • @tylercommons6479
    @tylercommons6479 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Lemon. I like the second logo as like a beachware brand but I think you missed the part about it being a yoga studio. it was a bit too playful for the non-existant brief.

  • @britishcrackamico
    @britishcrackamico 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Will, I love watching your videos.
    I have been a freelance graphic designer from the UK for almost a decade now so I know better than anyone how designs can be each to their own. But knowing your style, that P just does not fit with Plantify. I think it would be better if we had a plan of what the brand actually belonged to, is it physical or digital. That P just did not hit, it was too heavy and didn't fit with the rest of the font (I liked the font). The idea was strong but execution in my opinion wasn't. Do you know what I mean? It felt like a rush job but maybe that is the best way to create videos? I'm not a youtuber! Can you do a double redesign? Redesign your initial ideas? Presuming the client wanted to go on a new route? Much respect hut as you know, the client is always picky. Love you homie x also why couldn't you show us the ipad edit as opposed to mouse? X

    • @britishcrackamico
      @britishcrackamico 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Also, just finished the video, the last logo was meant to be for a yoga studio and not for a new orange juice brand. Again, not hating but just trying to give costuctihe criticism. In all honesty the client could potentially love the logo, but by chance they don't, maybe make a video redesigning YOUR OWN logos based on client feedback. These are both cool logos in their own right but I think you missed the mark with both of them. But, again, I love your work and your channel, a big fan and been following you for years!

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Redesigning the redesign might be a good idea hahaha.

    • @britishcrackamico
      @britishcrackamico 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@willpatersondesign Maybe we could have a redesign battle? 'Subscriber battle!'

    • @britishcrackamico
      @britishcrackamico 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@willpatersondesign if you dsre......

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@britishcrackamico lol, I've done battles in the past. These are just videos where I try and give a different take. I'm not being competitive.

  • @Todn_Hamekul
    @Todn_Hamekul 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    where did you search for your typeface?

  • @mohamedzaky1850
    @mohamedzaky1850 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    i love this series so much it's give me a great inspiration

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'm glad you like it :D It's my favourite too :)

  • @craiglancaster8200
    @craiglancaster8200 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    What was the font you used for sunrise? It's a nice looking font and I don't think you mentioned it.

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      It was hand lettered :)

    • @enemyofaveragedotcom
      @enemyofaveragedotcom 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@willpatersondesign Right! Thanks for getting back to me!!

  • @victorbenetti4636
    @victorbenetti4636 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    how you did that on the star in 10:43

  • @therealjamin6618
    @therealjamin6618 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Nice Haircut 👌

  • @aldelcy
    @aldelcy 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    why not make the i dot the leaf? too cliche?

  • @Rocklee21745
    @Rocklee21745 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Greattt really loved the sun rise logo and mockups 😍😍🤌✨

  • @klst1746
    @klst1746 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Nice vid, quick question though.
    I mean yeah rules are meant to be broken but the invisible guidelines for designers (as well as my university prof) taught me to not change two elements in a logo (not meant literally).
    So my question would be: Why did you add the second leaf to the right of the logo? Did you want it to be there for the playfulness or any other reason?
    I would like to know that. Thanks in advance :)
    oh and: lemon

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Great question. To me the logotype seems to left side heavy - so adding a visual to right side balanced it out. Although, it isn't placed as accurately as I would've liked it to be. :)

    • @klst1746
      @klst1746 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@willpatersondesign Ah okay sometimes it's as simple as it gets haha

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@klst1746 Yup! It's cool to break the rules. You'll fail a lot of the time, but every now and then you'll find a gem (not calling my logo here a gem)

  • @Mania26
    @Mania26 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I wish be that good in logo design as you :(

  • @DavidMArt3
    @DavidMArt3 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Yes sir I love your works and teachings. They are all great.
    If you're interested I would love to see a cool logo using just the letters "d" and "m"
    Thank you for the quality packed videos

  • @abdullahnaseem2285
    @abdullahnaseem2285 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Really adore your work brother. Wish to work with you someday as an official employee or an intern. Would be a dream come true. 😍

  • @luvhopefullie727
    @luvhopefullie727 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you. Great video!!!
    Lemon.

  • @F4xP4s
    @F4xP4s 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You are the Kernel!

  • @vladamark98
    @vladamark98 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Was it lemon or lime?
    Amazing video! Keep up the great work

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Both!

    • @vladamark98
      @vladamark98 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Oh my! You replied. ^ - ^
      Thanks

  • @mrilyes7001
    @mrilyes7001 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Like every time ,u r so talented🎗

  • @lancewenzel5344
    @lancewenzel5344 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ngl the sunrise type reminds me of Löded Diper from Diary of a Wimpy Kid

  • @user-fg7yt1sd4o
    @user-fg7yt1sd4o 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I did this logo [Mutahar Husain] thanks Will for your critique❤

    • @user-fg7yt1sd4o
      @user-fg7yt1sd4o 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Brother please mentions my name thanks❤

    • @user-fg7yt1sd4o
      @user-fg7yt1sd4o 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Plantify one *

  • @nyme2349
    @nyme2349 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This has nothing to do with graphic design, but I absolutely love your haircut, looks good 👍

  • @PsiTechVirus
    @PsiTechVirus 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Instead of the Kerning police, can you just be The Kernal?

  • @dishaarts21
    @dishaarts21 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    great work. also 🍋

  • @forgrow4623
    @forgrow4623 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    nice..

  • @BendoubaAbdessalem
    @BendoubaAbdessalem 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    1:51 photopea

  • @hpadgaming5843
    @hpadgaming5843 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    And did client like this logo or not? I want to know update.

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      It was a redesign of a logo I saw on our subreddit so I'm not sure if it's even a real company!

  • @coreyspaulding17
    @coreyspaulding17 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    🍋

  • @arqamkhawaja
    @arqamkhawaja 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You are amazing bro. Love from Kashmir. Would you like to redesign my school's logo if I submit you information and pics of it.

  • @Jarnokes_Design
    @Jarnokes_Design 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    lemon

  • @iantyyc
    @iantyyc 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Lemon 🍋🍋

  • @IHateMaL
    @IHateMaL 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The P kinda look like it’s a phantom lol

  • @jawsDANK
    @jawsDANK 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    🍋🍋

  • @blackswan7033
    @blackswan7033 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lemon 🍋

  • @naomipaterson9300
    @naomipaterson9300 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    🍋🍋🍋

  • @amyavan
    @amyavan 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lemon🍋

  • @declan_franklin
    @declan_franklin 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    11

  • @MikeGOplay
    @MikeGOplay 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Leven

  • @IndiSzn
    @IndiSzn 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    eleven

  • @edmondbobb-murden2097
    @edmondbobb-murden2097 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lemon

  • @slythemongoose9138
    @slythemongoose9138 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    LEMON, MELON, OMEN, LONE, ONLY, MOLE, MENLO, NOLEM, NOMEL, NOME, GNOME, MONE, LOME, MONGREL, GROMEL, GRONE, RONE, NORE, MORE, GORE, GROLEM, GOLEM, GNOMGNOM, MONG, MUNG, LUNG... TTFN, THANKS AGAIN!

  • @Yellowsnakedesigns
    @Yellowsnakedesigns 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋

  • @FensBRL
    @FensBRL 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    your T is too far from the N, Mr. Kerning Police

  • @fatandhandsome
    @fatandhandsome 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Homely is an interesting difference in terms between the US and UK. In the UK its good and cozy, but here it's ugly and unattractive. Rough difference based on the audience. But that P is definitely US homely.

  • @hossamnossair7605
    @hossamnossair7605 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Sunrise logo is more beautiful than plantify

  • @dustadorre
    @dustadorre 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    E1EV1N

  • @NoNameCode
    @NoNameCode 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Original logo was better in frist one

  • @MarcJensan
    @MarcJensan 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    So far I AM loving your videos, but you tripping with your legs is a huge distraction. If it is something you cannot help, then I do apologize for pointing it out. Maybe you addressed it in a previous video? Maybe you have ADHD? You did mention flipflopping between different things.

  • @eskideamos
    @eskideamos 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I think there was a way to interpret the sunrise logo more respectfully of the original - sticking to the 70's typography theme and just executing it better. People shouldn't be so quick to give up their initial idea just because someone else re-does it with better execution, but disregards the original inspiration. The updated logo lacks any character and just looks like another generic immature typeface logo. Miss on this one, just my 5 cents. Peace!

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Although I don't agree that my logo lacks character, I 100% agree with what you're saying!

  • @qurangripe2490
    @qurangripe2490 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Me not like your on, or before on both

  • @filipstojanovski1675
    @filipstojanovski1675 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Sorry, the Kittl thingy is just too much of a hassle.

  • @youtubeuser1492
    @youtubeuser1492 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    🍋

  • @Alik-Green
    @Alik-Green 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    lemon