Some constructive criticism: Your way of speaking is quite monotone. After a while of listening to you I check out for a bit. And I think most viewers would agree with me. And that really isn't meant judgementally, because I myself am quite monotone in my speaking patterns (as one might tell from my videos) I don't expect you to change your way of speaking, even though some training in that aspect might yield results. But at least some type of faster cuts or engaging captions when saying something important might keep people watching for longer. Your thumbnail is great, btw. Keep doing similar ones. Cheers :)
Thank you for the criticism, it will only make me better. I really do appreciate it. I realize I speak slow when I do not have exactly what I am going to say off a script or front of mind. Some parts I had to speed up to 120% lol. This next one I just released, I wrote out the script and tried to edit the cuts better. If you find time to watch the fitness tracker video I released, I would love more honest feedback.
@@CalmRiot Just watched the video. I have to say that it is much better in comparison to this video. You actually picked up on it really quickly, I'm surprised. Have you noticed it yourself or did someone close to you give some advice? :D
Some constructive criticism:
Your way of speaking is quite monotone. After a while of listening to you I check out for a bit. And I think most viewers would agree with me. And that really isn't meant judgementally, because I myself am quite monotone in my speaking patterns (as one might tell from my videos)
I don't expect you to change your way of speaking, even though some training in that aspect might yield results. But at least some type of faster cuts or engaging captions when saying something important might keep people watching for longer.
Your thumbnail is great, btw. Keep doing similar ones.
Cheers :)
Thank you for the criticism, it will only make me better. I really do appreciate it. I realize I speak slow when I do not have exactly what I am going to say off a script or front of mind. Some parts I had to speed up to 120% lol. This next one I just released, I wrote out the script and tried to edit the cuts better. If you find time to watch the fitness tracker video I released, I would love more honest feedback.
@@CalmRiot Just watched the video. I have to say that it is much better in comparison to this video. You actually picked up on it really quickly, I'm surprised. Have you noticed it yourself or did someone close to you give some advice? :D
@@player99l I realized it while editing this video. The process of sharpening the craft is so much fun.