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How to Write a Battle Shonen Magic System
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1:46 Collective
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  • @uboa8060
    @uboa8060 4 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Neat video, but the super power wiki is kind of ass. A lot of it is just the same nonsense copy pasted over and over again, and using it actively hurts your writing. I've seen this before, i knew someone who was trying to make characters and what not and their constant use of the super power wiki crippled them. It was like watching someone bash their head against a brick wall. Totally their fault, I know, but I do not trust that wiki as a source of inspiration for anything.

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 45 นาทีที่ผ่านมา

      I actually never use it as a source of inspiration. It's just a way of measuring how unique or common a power is, which isn't even that important in the long run.

  • @questionable4604
    @questionable4604 8 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Great video but sometimes having powers that are far more powerful than others is an intentional and good writing choice. It just depends on the story and the characters.

  • @heyangelohere873
    @heyangelohere873 10 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    ohhh wolrd trigger yeeeee weeeee

  • @olluXpollu
    @olluXpollu 18 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    I thought you didnt liked the concept of minor powers as they could be other characters' unique powers but are instead given to everyone. u said this in ur nen video

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 13 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      First, that's why its optional. And then, it depends on what they are. If the minor power is "walking on water," that was never a good option for a signature ability. However cloaking, enhancing, and more from Nen could be. Edit: JJK is also a great comparison. "physical enhancement" as a minor power works there because no character would ever have a signature move as basic as physical enhancement. But with Nen, physical enhancement is every enhancer's signature move, so giving it to everyone as well is now a problem for enhancers.

  • @obedreyes7737
    @obedreyes7737 19 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Petition for 4 alternate endings with each one getting the win 😢

  • @Reversegiant
    @Reversegiant 19 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    WORLD TRIGGER MENTIONED 🔥🔥🔥🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️

  • @yekcy
    @yekcy วันที่ผ่านมา

    Negi could've at least made the series longer developing Yotsuba more to have the audience actually like her even though I probably still wouldn't like her over miku and nino

  • @sparknarrater4821
    @sparknarrater4821 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Overall balance is good but it’s not an absolute the problem with overpowered ability’s are 1 if you want that character to lose its incredibly hard to make happen 2 fights with that character are hard to make interesting but both of those problems can be sidestepped with clever writing some of the powers you listed in ability’s that were to op didn’t cause narrative problems in there story’s 1 made in heaven had a Believable defeat at the hands of a power weaker than it it’s fight was creative and the party turned the stand on its user multiple times examples would include Jolene warping her stand around the Dolphin to accelerate herself at the same speed as MIH and emporio Turning there in the poison that was accelerated into killing Pucci 2 copy sufferers from nether problem as well in one of your videos you Dissected the tactics of a fight yuta was in so it’s got creativity covered also yuta was not only defeated convincingly but he even had help when he lost as for the others you mentioned ya Susanoo turned fights into power levels the world was so broken Jotaro had to be given the same power and limitless was so op that domain amplification had to be introduced just to counter it and even then sukuna had to be given a power that came out of nowhere to win that fight

  • @jagr6180
    @jagr6180 วันที่ผ่านมา

    wasn’t a bad ending i get why but damn bro yotsuba needs some more character development needed season 3 so badly bruh

  • @kennyulysse2163
    @kennyulysse2163 วันที่ผ่านมา

    🍿🥤

  • @The_Perfect_Leader_Hal
    @The_Perfect_Leader_Hal วันที่ผ่านมา

    You need to make a remake

  • @dark_nightwing_xl2797
    @dark_nightwing_xl2797 วันที่ผ่านมา

    What indie manga needs 😂

    • @angax100
      @angax100 9 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      My brother from Koffee. What's going on man.

    • @dark_nightwing_xl2797
      @dark_nightwing_xl2797 9 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      @@angax100 hey 🔥💯 I’m good you?

    • @angax100
      @angax100 9 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      @dark_nightwing_xl2797 can't complain; I also agree w/ your take. Just saying hi 👋

  • @dark_nightwing_xl2797
    @dark_nightwing_xl2797 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Your channel is amazing man keep it up

  • @Kanyes-alt
    @Kanyes-alt วันที่ผ่านมา

    I decide on 3 factors versatility,balance,restrictions

  • @doppio560
    @doppio560 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Cool vid

  • @BigToody
    @BigToody วันที่ผ่านมา

    How come you don’t do a “watch me design a power system from scratch” section at the end of the video? Or create a worksheet that we can all access on your website or something?

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika วันที่ผ่านมา

      I thought this guide was clear enough with examples. Plus, I can't create and hand out a good magic system for free.

    • @MasheerDx
      @MasheerDx วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@YumesukeSutashika hhh good one

  • @thesmilyguyguy9799
    @thesmilyguyguy9799 วันที่ผ่านมา

    :{ D

  • @jeanels7425
    @jeanels7425 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Okay hear me out… I wanted Ichika to win. She was my best girl. Short hair girls just do it for me okay.

  • @scarz__
    @scarz__ วันที่ผ่านมา

    miku shouldve won dont gaf about anything else

    • @Binks_Pirates
      @Binks_Pirates 3 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

      That’s what I’m saying. Yotsuba didn’t even have any screentime

  • @anime_world6684
    @anime_world6684 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Tho people assume oda planned all of one piece he didn’t, he’s just a very good improviser and that imagination and drive since he was a kid makes him add more and more to his own world he created, for me personally it’s not long because I’m not the writer I’m just a spectator that’s watching an epic adventure

  • @Jojo-rx8ug
    @Jojo-rx8ug 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    3:16 I agree but let me play devil's advocate and see if I find any or come up with any using your theme grading rubric. The *main message* of JJK according to Gege is "that no one holds the ultimate truth. The "good guys" as well as the "bad guys". Some seek to kill the hero out pure selfishness, but others are led to this decision by logical reasoning. If no one is really right then no is one is wrong either. Each character is guided by his own ethics." I'll try to connect some fights back to the main message. Mechamaru vs Mahito: *Main theme is are humans the only life worth caring about?* Mechamaru has been denied his humanity and has been living in solitude. His separation from others caused a strain on his relationships. He if often distant and quiet with others, and is called out as not being a human by panda stating "We should get along, especially since we're both cursed corpses" ( Ch 37, p 19). *Pro-theme is all life has value*. Mechamaru's peers are representing this theme, while Mechamaru is somewhere in-between the anti and pro theme. When panda states that Mechamaru responds telling panda that both of them walking freely in the sun "pisses me off" ( Ch 38, p 15). Mechamaru's goal is to overcome his heavenly restriction to ditch his puppet body and get a healthy body, he hates being associated with panda. Mechamaru doesn't see the value in non-humans (panda and himself) and would do anything to gain back his humanity. He stated he would even betray the sorcerer world for his goal ( Ch 38, p 14). *Anti-theme is not all life has value only cursed spirits are valuable. Mahito represents this and believes in this anti theme and pursues it until his death. The series has shown that curses have the capacity to love and care about each other even curses like Mahito has pride to call the disaster curses his "friends" ( Ch 20, p 19). *Action* Mechamaru dies trying to gain his humanity/value without realizing how much his peers already valued him and fails to see that even as a cursed puppet he was still human. Yuji vs Ko-guy: *Main theme is which is stronger brains vs brawn?* Ko-guy is a curse with a higher intelligence the the average curse and now thinks he above humans. *Pro-Theme is brains is not enough to help you survive in the cursed world* Itadori is fast enough and stronger to overpower Ko-guy and doesn't need to any tactics to win and tells Ko-guy to "stop looking down on humans" (Chapter 86, p17). *Anti-theme is brains is all it takes to survive in the cursed world* Ko-guy states "Those who aren't smart die" ( Ch 86, p 18). *Action* Itadori overpowers Ko-guy even though ko-guy is a much more tactical fighter supporting the pro-theme. Gojo vs the curses: *Main theme is which cooperation vs non-cooperation* Gojo is the strongest sorcery in the series and has the power to kill all the disaster curses. *Pro-Theme is being cooperative* The curses and other sorcerers are representing the pro-theme here with them doing the opposite of the anti-theme which is to team up. Itadori wanted to provide backup insisting that "There has to be something we can do. We can go as back-up (Ch 83, p 14). *Anti-theme is being non-cooperative* Gojo is representing this theme. He is the strongest and thinks that enough to handle all situations in Shibuya. I couldn't find any quotes from Gojo (-edit Rereading this chapter the higher-ups in jujutsu high actually request him to work alone, but it's in his character to do whatever he wants so his actions show his agrees with their plan, but this doesn't make much sense anyway. How could Gojo use any curse technique , or his domain in Shibuya during Halloween? He would inevitably cause serious damage like he did when saving Utahime from that cursed mansion). *Action* because the higher ups (-edit and Gojo) decided to go through this plan it costed them losing Gojo for most of the events in the manga and many bystanders dying in the train station. Ino vs Ogami: Nothing. Yuji and Megumi vs Awasaka: I can't come up with anything for this for now, but I can relate to the cooperation vs non-cooperation theme. Megumi with his ten shadows and Yuji using the wire technique Maki taught him were able to easily overpower awasaka. (Personally I don't think fights like these need themes of their own. They can be used as repetition to drive further a larger theme in the story). Mei Mei vs Ebina: Nothing. This fight was used to show off what little what know of Mei Mei based off the past arc. Nanami and Nobara vs Shigemo: Yuji vs Choso: *Main theme is maintaining a duty* Mei Mei vs Smallpox Diety: Nothing. Sorcerers vs Dagon: I'll try to get to this tomorrow Megumi vs Toji: I'll try to get to this tomorrow Sukuna vs Jogo: I'll try to get to this tomorrow Sukuna vs Mahoraga: I'll try to get to this tomorrow Yuji and co vs Mahito: *Main theme is do sorcerers actions have better reasoning behind them than curses?* I just watched your "I Am You" video and you bring up good points. Here is a counter point Yuji has killed curses that act very human and curses that are evil. Mahito has killed good and bad people, but more good people that bad people. Yuji killed his own brothers without realizing it purely out of survival. He even felt bad about killing them and questioned whether he was doing the right thing. I'll be using this fact to justify this theme. (Also I won't be quoting directly this time I'll just bring up points in the story that support the pro-theme and dismiss the anti-theme). *Pro-theme is sorcerers don't have better reasoning than curses.* The person representing this theme is Mahito and his friends. For curses like them killing is in their nature and they can't help it because it's like hunger to them. For example Dagon was a cursed womb and needed to eat people for him to grow. Choso and his brothers were just listening to their father Kenjaku and were told to kill innocents, they were also aware they are curses, and that the sorcerer society will never accept them and would kill them on sight. Like I said ealier even curses like Mahito shows some humanity by caring about his disaster curses and seeing pride in their friendship. For curses like Hanami they were born from the fear of earth and now seeks revenge on humans for mistreating earth. *Anti-theme is sorcerers do have better reasoning than curses* The person representing this theme is Itadori. He believes all curses are only evil and want to harm humans which he sees as a the better group of people. As he goes in the story he struggles with this accepting idea by killing curses that crying, naively thinking Sukuna will turn a new leaf, etc. When he eventually meets Mahito in Shibuya he begins to see himself no different from Mahito. *Action* While Itadori is beating on Mahito, Mahito sees Itadori as a wolf and himself as a rabbit. A wolf murdering a rabbit is not a evil act, just a natural act. Neither are the wolf and rabbit wrong, it's just one species has such a great advantage over another that we as people are going to feel sorry for the defenseless rabbit. (This makes me think why isn't there a something like a vegan curse. It would have more sense to have a animal curse seeking revenge on humanity that has the intelligence of a human and can speak like a human to talk Itadori into this way of thinking) Everyone vs Kenjaku: I got nothing. This was fight was just used to transition the story further. I think Gege tries to make the good guys here morally grey while also presenting their actions as good. 2:20 "A theme is supposed to be a message a way you should live your life" I somewhat disagree with this point, I don't think all themes need message saying how to live life. JJK main theme according to gege can't really provide ways you should live your life. Another example I could give of a theme not giving instructions how to life is Lovecraft's "The Call of Cthulhu". One of the main theme's in this novel is insignificance of humanity. Human's can't fight or do anything against godly cosmic threats, besides giving up and dying. Stories like JJK don't really fit into your grading rubric.

    • @Jojo-rx8ug
      @Jojo-rx8ug 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      You don't have to read from here this just some of my thoughts on your theme grading chart. I feel like your thematic chart may have some problems. First is the anti and pro theme quotes. In a visual media quotes are not always necessary. I understand quotes can be used to get a point across easily, but other visual media's like silent films from the past didn't have this ability to always use text. Some of the most influential films that defined common themes in their genres. Second thing is I feel this chart is somewhat limiting. When writing a story the author may not realize all the themes and messages they are inputting into the story. A author's personal beliefs and life experiences are second nature to them and will reflect in their writing. Top give a example is LOTR author Tolkien not realizing he was writing Catholic themes and imagery in this story. He only realized this when he was revising the story and then added onto those themes. If the author has trouble picking up on their subconscious themes in their writing, how could the average reader. The third thing is not all theme's end in action. Some themes are left open for the audience to decide. Some writers provide equal amount of justification for both the "anti" and "pro" theme and let people pick and choose which to support (This is common in lots of philosophy books). The last thing is since you're mostly grading anime and manga you should add a visual grading to the themes. Most manga and anime try to add visuals to support their themes. I'm not talking about just fights, they can use color, shading, shapes, and symbolism to add evidence for themes.

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I applaud your effort. Just like how most people agree that there is an objective way to measure a character without asking the author directly, I believe there is an objective way to measure a theme without asking the author. My goal is to extract meaning from the story, not place my own interpretation on it. This is why quotes are so important. If quotes weren’t a necessity in my rubric, then anyone could place any theme they wanted on fights without having proof. I could say several Naruto fights are “Hard Work vs talent” or “Teamwork vs working alone” or “Being a good person vs Being a bad person.” It would work for a lot of fights, but because I made quotes necessary, I can’t impose my will onto the story. I have to actually look for proof in the text. Most of your examples don’t have quotes within the frame of the battle and rely on you trying to impose a theme onto the fight. Yuji vs Ko Guy is a respectable attempt, but Yuji doesn’t have a solid quote and it’s not like Yuji just tanked his attacks. He properly countered both of Ko Guy’s tricks. Both sides were using brains and brawn. An easy parallel (that might have a stronger case w/o quotes) would be me arguing that Shikamaru vs Temari is “brains vs brawn” despite there being no quotes to support that. Just because one side uses brains and the other uses brawns doesn’t mean that they’re clashing ideologically. I could say Sasuke vs Yoroi, Naruto vs Kiba, and Naruto vs Neji are “brains vs brawn.” Gojo vs the curses was a good attempt too, but it also doesn’t have strong enough quotes. You have a Yuji quote, but there is no anti theme quote. Furthermore, I think the point of his loss is not that “Gojo should’ve worked with others” but “The villains took advantage of Gojo having to work alone.” Chapter 84, pg 13-14. “Do you know when Gojo is in his element? It's when he’s alone. It doesn't matter who the sorcerer is. Anyone who fights alongside him just gets in the way. So let’s use the even more inferior non sorcerers to restrict his movement.” Gojo was just outsmarted. I don’t think there was anything thematic/ideological. As for Cthullu, “humanity is insignificant” is a way to live life, in context and out of context. If I believe this theme, I can justify murder out of context. Finally, I don’t think arguing that JJK doesn’t fit my system makes sense since my system extracted multiple themes from season 1. JJK just stopped executing themes.

    • @rajaryan-fe1oy
      @rajaryan-fe1oy 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@YumesukeSutashika I want to give my opinion on your thematic writing philosophy since it goes so hard against my own I'm not sure if I'm not living in a story right now. You said Gojo VS the curses doesn't have any themes since they're not explicitly stated, and therefore only being drawn by interpretation, in my opinion that's not only not a bad thing, but quite wonderful, you are taking a huge subjective element out of the story and replacing it by a rulebook metric that heavily restricts the way stories should be written, not every story needs some showman for a moral arguement and have them make their sides clear before every conflict to get a point acress, in Gojo VS the curses, it is stated that Gojo likes to fight alone because no matter who it is, will always get in the way of him, this one line not only characterizes Gojo's massive flaw, but also ties into a number of conflicts the story has subtly hinted at but not specified, like when he says to Megumi to not get left behind in the HI arc, and him stating to Ijichi in episode 6 that he wants to train reliable allies, there's definitely a story here, one which I'd rather not go into the details of for both of our times' sakes, but you are free to interpret if you want, and even if it's not being stated, an immersed viewer doesn't see something and think to himself what the author must've thought while writing this, they think what this could mean for the greater world as a whole, your method restricts not only the way themes are presented, but also plot and character development and everything related to them. Another thing about the Gojo fight, I don't think anyone seeing the curses working together and succeeding wouldn't have gotten the point of the benifits of teamwork for dealing with someone who's stronger than you, a story can potentially follow your theme structure and end in a single page with just being, two guys announce their ideals, throw two punches and one of them wins, the end, but another story can never quote their themes, tell a story where the characters stick to their characterization, tell a story and get multiple themes across, some of which maybe not even being intentional by the author, the latter in my opinon being a much more meaningful experience.

  • @vincentflannigan2727
    @vincentflannigan2727 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    So I am an anime only for context. I heard in the manga Yots got more development. As a 6 character development growing as humans I like the story. For a romance story though I did dislike it. I actually like that there were intentional or unintentional clues that even I caught on the first watch through. Like I knew Yotsuba would win when she was the girl on the boat(cause she ran across Futaro during her practice right when they met). I just dislike we didnt see much of the romance on screen

  • @s3eriousbl9ck26
    @s3eriousbl9ck26 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    "but i couldnt find many" thats what happens when Talk no Jutsu is the atringest move in the verse 🤣🤣 Kishimoto isnt perfect but damn is he good.

  • @dannphan
    @dannphan 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Manca definitely sounds better. 🤔

  • @JustanotherArtist.
    @JustanotherArtist. 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Im gonna be honest, i preffer shibuya, the parallels, the character development, the meaning, i think shibuya is an little better than gojo's flash back, and being for real, is there a problem with it? No, because some people will say that "jjk shibuya is trash" others will say "jjk shibuya is peak" and other things like "past of gojo was better" but there will always be people with a contraditionary opnion, and with plausível arguments, so its just my opnion that i think shibuya is better than gojo's past

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I also like Shibuya better than Gojo's Past. That doesn't change the fact that it has no themes.

  • @nathankeel6667
    @nathankeel6667 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The story was largely based off the phycolgy consept Maslow's high archy of needs with the usugi starting at the bottom not having much then his smarts were each girl represents each part itski basic needs, Ichika being safety needs, Nino being love and belongings, and Miku being esteem needs and yotsuba being at the stage of self actualization witch is why she had most her development being in the past because she starting at the highest stage and as usugi helps each girl through there stage he gets through it aswell so him ending up with the one in self actualization with him makes sense tho I do think yotsuba should have had more moments prior to the final arc

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Idk where you heard that, but you're reaching. Itsuki is not basic needs. Basic needs is food, water, and shelter. As the daughters of a rich man, none of them are in basic/physiological. Ichika isn't in safety. She WANTS to make money, but she doesn't need to. When they all start living alone, everyone tries to get a job, so if anything, they were all in that stage. Everyone can be argued to be in love and belonging. Yotsuba is def not in self actualization. If anything, she's in self esteem.

    • @nathankeel6667
      @nathankeel6667 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@YumesukeSutashika long comment time so I can defend my points. First of all it was a theory I devised my self to solve the mystery of who would win before the movie came out because as someone who's isnt a big fan of rom coms and especially not harems and at the time the only one I liked was Love is war its what hooked me on the story, (and yes this is a mystery story or at least advertised that way). So now onto Itski this is the closest one id call to be a bit of a stretch because prior to the movie when I was theorizing neither Itski or Yotsuaba had major arc so it was a toss up untill I remembered Itski's gimmick is food and she was the one that basically got Usagi off the ground and got him through the basic needs because his family basically needed this job to survive. But then the movie/festival arc were every character completes/finalizes there character arc and im arguing because of how close each of the quiets represents one stage each one reaches self actualization and itsaki has the most stages to climb thus why she has such a foas in the movie determining her career path as a teacher (safety), encountering and confronting her biological father(love and belonging), confidence to despite everything being against her getting her score high enophe to go to collage(esteem), and her reaching slef-actualization by becoming a teacher. Now Ichka her entire charter represents safety needs her arc the summer festival was basically all about her trying to get her job as a actress she is the big sister of the quiets and is very protective and always looking out for the safety and wellbeing as well as when they move out being for awile until they all have jobs she is the one providing recourses and property of her and her sisters aswell after this she is the one to basically secure the job for Uasugi wail nino and and itski would still rebel a bit he was actually able to do his job and teach them, there is also in the final arc her choice to forgo school to become a full on actress and be her best self. Nino is even more obvious her tsundree personality her arc is largely focused on her feeling a sense of belonging among her sisters and wanting love from her adaptive father and when she finally admits her feelings to her self is the most outwardly affectionate towards Usugi this is also around the time Usugi starts to have a proper friend group outside of the quients and during the school festival her want to make the pancakes for her father and ultimately leading to her following her dream and opening a bakery with Miku. Then for Miku it couldn't be more obvious her entire charchter is her opening up about things like her love of history and wanting to work on her baking and be recognized for it all leading into the school trip arc being wail her sisters did assist alot she was able to have the confidence to do all those things with Usaugi and during the festival she was able to come to terms with her unrequited feelings and she ultimately gained enoph confidence in her baking ablity to do whats best for her and open the bakery with Nino. Then Yostuba wail prior to the festival she seems to be the most put together of he girls because she had found a sense of self in her athletic ability and being the first to break away from her sisters with her ribbon as shown through the story and primary in school festival she hasnt found her best self constantly spreading he self thin her arc in the festival is her finding her best self by being selfish going to a sports collage and accepting Usagugi' confession. Then finally there is Usaugi who after nearly ever arc focused on one of the girls he gets a arc testing if he had moved past that stage witch the anime in a vain attempt to make him a generic self insert harm mc changed or cut parts of these arcs but after the fireworks there's the practice exam where is job is put on the line (safety needs after the Ichka arc who represents that), hot springs arc were the goal is distinqwish the quints from each other and how to do it is strait out stated to be love also the sense of belonging and bond he forms with there grandfather(right after nino's arc who represents love and belonging needs), and the part were Usaugi has the confidence to go and have fun at the beach party without the quints as well as having the confidence to ask the girls to hang out at the water park (right after miku's arc who represents esteem needs), also id argue that the arcade trip with his sister and itski shows he got past basic needs because he has enoph money now that they arnt scraping by and can spend it on more trivial things. As well Usugi follows and trys to be his best self by proposing to Yotsuba and still going to the high end school were they would scarcely meet. As I said before the final arc is a bit rushed and more scenes of Yostuba and Usaugi could have gone a long way but to say its unsatisfying or it doesnt make sense goes against not only the hints you pointed out aswell as all that iv described.

    • @sattickchanda8245
      @sattickchanda8245 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I never expected someone would use maslows hierarchy thoery to explain this anime but how youre telling things I feel like for uesugi fuutarou uses each of them to fulfil his needs step by step, as you can see fuutarou who was a poor guy wanted to earn money by working hard accpets the job of tutoring quintuplets to fulfil his first need which is bascis needs, then even though he struggels so much he finnaly able to earn money to pay off their family taxes which fulfils their safety needs, for the third step hee took some time to realize but he was aware of his love for every quintuplets, through this journey with the quintuples so far he was needed to estimate his values which he does by becoming third nationally at the national exam, for self actulization he took those three days where he has to decide his true feelings and do the hard task for deciding his wife. So just because Ituski loves to eat food doesnt make her basic needs, ichika wants to secure their bond beetwen quintupls by doing something as a older sister doesnt make her sefety needs, nino loving everyone of the sisters and loves to secure thier bonds doesnt make her love and belongings, miku wanting to actualize and estimate her goals for live doesnt make her self esteem and youtsuba being able to actualize first their mother's words to keeping their bonds or being able to forget about past and finnaly able to move forward in life diesnt make her self actualization

  • @SnerMerNer
    @SnerMerNer 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Was hoping for a harem ending tbh lol. I typically don’t, but there are a few shows where it just makes the most sense to me.

  • @kennyulysse2163
    @kennyulysse2163 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    🍿🥤

  • @fraglsnitz
    @fraglsnitz 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I've tried watching this show twice and it never hooked me. First time I stopped during S1, second time I tried watching in the background while I did some game grinding. Any time stuff was happening on screen I just couldn't really seem to care much. I had Black Clover in the background recently and that at least got my attention here and there, enough for me to kind of follow and be partially interested. JJK just turned into full background noise, even during big fights. Just couldn't make me care.

  • @Jojo-rx8ug
    @Jojo-rx8ug 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Did you go to school for writing or did you form your grading rubric from reading/watching writing guides and books?

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I read 3 books and watched several videos

    • @Jojo-rx8ug
      @Jojo-rx8ug 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@@YumesukeSutashikaah ok thats what im doing to learn how to write stories too ✍🏿

  • @be7622
    @be7622 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    cook teacher cook

  • @dark_nightwing_xl2797
    @dark_nightwing_xl2797 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Your videos are very entertaining keep it up 💯🔥

  • @A-TrainN.1
    @A-TrainN.1 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    It’s obv hardwork beats talent no other themes are allowed

    • @StevenUnigod47-qx1rs
      @StevenUnigod47-qx1rs 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      No.

    • @A-TrainN.1
      @A-TrainN.1 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@StevenUnigod47-qx1rs it’s a joke bro

    • @ImchautzuCHAUTZU
      @ImchautzuCHAUTZU 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@@A-TrainN.1Ok good cause I was about to go off😂

  • @Ultra247
    @Ultra247 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    What happens-I am going to kill curse spirits indiscriminately(I am already doing that and been doing that) What fans think- OMG Yuji has changed so much frfr. He is the struggler archetype on the highest level Truly the new dbz fans

    • @Kanyes-alt
      @Kanyes-alt 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      So funny

  • @Kanyes-alt
    @Kanyes-alt 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    He’s cooking jjk🤣

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I'm just being objective. If you look at my season 1 video, there are a lot of themes.

  • @ConstantinDOSSOU-vy1zo
    @ConstantinDOSSOU-vy1zo 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The fight against Mahito is clear. Yuji always fights because he though he needs a reason to do this and deserves to life but it was always his weakness and the reason where he could give up. He needed to accept he never needed a reason and killed curse because ut was his nature. Two themes and representants : Yuji thinking the fights against curse needs a reason while Mahito said it is just a war without true justice. Exteriorisation: Todo expalined than the jujutsu sorcercers doesn't try to find a meaning i' their actions and Yuji accepts to fight against the curse only by emotion even if his actions haven't a visible effect.

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      2:02

    • @ConstantinDOSSOU-vy1zo
      @ConstantinDOSSOU-vy1zo 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@@YumesukeSutashika I litteraly explained what " I am you" means. It is all the message of Shibuya and also the theme of Gojo vs Geto. Geto like Yuji always acted by pure reason and logic. In the end, Geto became crazy because of this. It is only when Yuji accepted his actions haven't need a reason than he can fight even if he doesn't know if he deserves to live.

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@ConstantinDOSSOU-vy1zo And I literally explained it in the video that I mentioned at that timestamp. I also explained how its a character arc, but not a theme.

  • @ConstantinDOSSOU-vy1zo
    @ConstantinDOSSOU-vy1zo 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Sukuna vs jogo no theme really ? Gojo and Mahito had a debat about sacrifice themselves for their cause. Sukuna answered this than Mahito was right and Jogo admitted he wasn't enough selfish and greed. Megumi vs Toji doesn't need a theme . It is the fight to show Toji's regret

  • @kennyulysse2163
    @kennyulysse2163 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    🍿🥤

  • @kennyulysse2163
    @kennyulysse2163 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    🍿🥤

  • @yuzuhibiki
    @yuzuhibiki 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Toei when they choose to adapted a series into an anime instead of milking it like some dehydrated teets

  • @jetstreamsam9777
    @jetstreamsam9777 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    4 minutes and 11 seconds

  • @memeiacvibe
    @memeiacvibe 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Did you know: if you care so much about small details and specific plot points you just make up, its going to be hard for you to enjoy 50% of... anything really

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      If you want to turn your brain off, do it by yourself. Don't drag people into your media illiteracy.

    • @memeiacvibe
      @memeiacvibe 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@YumesukeSutashika lol, you use big words to look smarter, but that's not what I said

    • @YumesukeSutashika
      @YumesukeSutashika 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@memeiacvibe Media literacy/illiteracy is not a big word. Do you not know what "media" and "illiterate" mean? Do you not know what "literature" means?

    • @memeiacvibe
      @memeiacvibe 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@YumesukeSutashika I do but you can also just say I can't read or take in media the way you do. also you are straying away from the original point by trying to make me look stupid. You do you I guess

    • @memeiacvibe
      @memeiacvibe 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Also that's big talk for someone who does not know what I said :3

  • @Quantum1244
    @Quantum1244 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I mean damn, I didn’t expect a series called Sorcery Fight had fights

  • @darrellgoudeau2961
    @darrellgoudeau2961 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    The shows literally called sorcery fight

  • @EDLCSonofDavid
    @EDLCSonofDavid 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This is bullshit

  • @user-ur6wl8cv4g
    @user-ur6wl8cv4g 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Go/jo is the bisected one fr 😭💀

  • @justtosharefiles678
    @justtosharefiles678 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Very good video.

  • @kitanat9944
    @kitanat9944 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Definitely more true from the latter half.