MY UCHICAGO PERSONAL STATEMENT

Hello hello tanners
Time stamps
0:46 - video breakdown
1:00 - super ultra helpful personal statements
1:54 - my two personal statements
2:37 - explaining the main idea behind PS- Challenge
3:54 - avoid J curve essays!!!
3:49 - Breaking down my PS
4:18 - language and style
4:58 - reading out my PS + bits of analysis
THIS MARKS THE CONTINUED BEGINNING OF MY U.S. COMMON APP RANT
Started a year earlier, now back and continued by popular demand :)
Hope this was helpful, stay tuned for more!
PLEASE comment videos you want to see I have a massive massive backlog list but idk which ones to try to edit first oops.
Some of you may have heard, but I have an almost impossible goal of subscribers I would like to reach by the end of my summer (October) -- which quadruples my current subscriber count. I don't think I'll get to it, nor do I think I have a good shot, but nonetheless I really want to try!!
The main reason for this is that going into second year of UChicago, it might become harder and harder for me to upload videos, and an increased audience will only be extra motivation for me to treat this as a serious hobby instead of just "oh yeah I do that sometimes"
Hope the video was helpful, and please comment the next few videos you want to see!!
Potential next few videos up will be:
UChicago Uncommon Essay
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Enjoy? ☻
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🌸About Me
Chloe Tan
18 years old
Singapore-Indonesian, grew up in Shanghai
Did the IBDP program in high school
Currently at the University of Chicago
Major: Econ. spec Data Science, Public Policy/Polisci
Accepted to: UChicago, KCL, UCL, Oxford
Interests: finance, political science, entrepreneurship, data science
🌸Chat with Me!
instagram: @itschloetan
email: [e-mail]

[@victoriasimeran9423]

im applying this year here and this essay is making me go crazy lmaooo i havent gotten through one draft i like

[@elliegilbert-bair5625]

me too!!

[@kongrenyu9321]

Hi Chloe, I'm your biggest tanner, thanks for making these youtube videos to help me navigate the application process.
Hopefully I'll see you at UChicago soon!

[@SuryaPranav-ej2el]

Bro, Did you got in

[@x0cx102]

the first 30 seconds of this (the description of common app personal statement process) was soooo spot on. we can all relate so much
and I also really liked the way you explained your personal statement!

[@pachi640]

thank you so much!!!! I'm applying to UChicago this fall and this was so helpful!! I think that subscriber goal would be easy, not impossible; your videos are so amazing ✨

[@v.f.d.guzman1705]

Hope to see your uncommon essays soon! (:

[@lzhou7455]

I have not subscribed any youtubers for months, I dont know why I just did. You are so excellent 😂 I am wating my offer from University of Manchester in Computer Science and I am so nervous. I watched your another video about Oxford reaction. Congrats and it is a pity that you did not come to UK😔. Anyway, brillant videos and opstimistic personality. 💜😉

[@karinamak7368]

Thank you!

[@motomoto616]

Look who's back!

[@teeI0ck]

this video is very helpful. 🧗‍♂️
its showing an accurate and deep understanding; great perceptive. 💡
Muito obrigado for all the insightful information... 🤝

[@natasharay3556]

i just stumbled upon your channel! i love the challenge essay. my common app essay has a similar theme! do you read essays?

[@brucetang2777]

Thank uuuu sooooooo muchhhhhhhhh OMG

[@simondoku]

Wow...

[@joshuaw5671]

I did a j curve structure but the subject is drastically different than a typical one do you think it’s okay

[@KoruGo]

I can't understand what you're saying in parts because of the audio quality in this video

[@asynchloe]

God Got it!! Working on getting a mic for next time :-; :-;

[@KoruGo]

That'll help a lot!

[@ucup5681]

@@asynchloe and also you talk too fast.....

[@meganlouie8372]

have you ever thought of editing your ucas essay and submitting it for the common app? would you recommend doing that if i’m a student who’s pretty crunched for time for college applications?🙏🏻

[@tomheffron2896]

I'm confused, does Chloe attend UChicago? Or, Oxford? And is her name Chloe? In one of her videos, a letter from UChicago used a different name.

[@asynchloe]

Tom Heffron I applied to Oxford and UChicago, but I turned down Oxford and am currently at UChicago (I kept making Oxford videos because people kept asking me about them after my PPE decision reaction) --- and yes my name is Chloe, but my legal name is Tan Xuan Ru (hence UChicago letter) -- This is also why my youtube email is "[e-mail]" with txr at the beginning standing for "tan xuan ru"!! Hope this clears things up :)

[@tomheffron2896]

Thanks, Chloe! Of all the vloggers at these elite colleges, I find your videos to be the most interesting.

[@andie898]

what's the link to your writing PS?

[@rubikashree7724]

Ok jackie chans secret sister