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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 26 มิ.ย. 2024
- So I've been doing this essay review since last year and many of you have gotten into the top unis (YAY!!). But these are some of the MOST COMMON mistakes I always comment on and give suggestions for people to improve upon.
I'm thinking of making this a series where I give more examples of how to convey your story better in your personal statement - let me know if you guys want this! :)
If you're interested in the essay review service, my quote starts from £150. Drop me an email for more details
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Watch this first, I explained in detail how to approach your personal statement and shared mine too: • My Cambridge MPhil (Ma...
For more things to avoid, check my Oxford PS (I didn't get into it and learned a lot from my own PS): • My Oxford Personal Sta...
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Application for grad school is due in 2 days and I'm super thankful I came across this video. Because my personal statement doesn't use overly-sophisticated language, nor does it read like a laundry list of my accomplishments, like many of the personal statements I've read from those in my field, I've started feeling discouraged and insecure about it. With my writing being professional and easy to follow, I hope this will score in my favour by making the administrators' jobs easier.
Best of luck to each and every one of you applying for higher education!
Hey these were really helpful points and I've seen very few resources pointing these out so concisely yet so well explained. Thank you!!
been struggling with the second mistake, tysm kak😢❤
This video was RELEVANT for what I am doing right now. Thank you!!
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i have a problem of writing long sentences actually. after watching this, i will probably work towards keeping my sentences short, objective and concise. thankyou so much. (and thanks for providing the context of the negative tone* example - alot of people probably might have misunderstood it.)
straightforward video, thank you
Thank you very much for sharing your knowledge. Thank you for good deed.
Excellent video with sage advice. Every day is a school day👍😊💜✌️
Best to say truthful - as in CVs don't get caught out at interview - write about the concepts and arguements that interest you (relative to the degree) and put the authors' names in brackets afterwards. Not only does that avoid plagiarism, it explains your interest in those concepts and arguements (with understanding) whilst acknowledging the author and showing that you've read the papers/books/literature too.
I came across a MBA personal statement where only 500 words were allowed (iirc for many MBAs it's a 1000 words). However basic guidelines were given by the university, which needed careful reading.
Then it's a case of, edit, edit, edit, edit and edit it again. Don't waste words, stay relevant to the degree and what the university has asked of you in the guidelines. Be mindful to watch out for hyphens being counted as words not characters in some auto word count functions (count the words manually if unsure). Also a brief - in bold - heading can be useful as an aide memoire and to clarify to the reader (iirc they're not part of word count), however in 500 words, that's just two headings for two main sections relative to what the university has specified they want to know about.
I'm no expert but I hope that helps others💜✌️😊
Keep it up,kak.✊🔥
Thank you very much for your this video!
many a-ha moments in this video. thank you!
Thanks
Thank you, I am rewriting my statement now, as I probably broke more than half of these 😂
Very useful
Hey Viancqa should I use a quote at the beginning if I'm not sure how to start of my application.
Hallo Viancqa...
saya mau minta sarannya aja ya, mungkin bisa kasih saya masukan.
anak saya tahun depan rencana ambil jurusan cyber security di UK.
dan dari 3 uni yang akan saya sebutkan ini, menurut kamu mana yang bagus nya untuk cyber security ?
1. coventry uk ( sama dengan kampus kamu )
2. UWE bristol
3. Leeds Beckett University
thanks atas masukannya
Im applying through UCAS that limit it to 4000 characters... I've written (2500/4000) and just wondering if its good enough or not
She look alike an asian actress that performed in the avengers
Great video
Hi vianqa pls can you review my personal statement??
I’m writing my personal statement for Columbia - could I hire your for a couple sessions to help edit and for your input?
Just shooting my shot!
Trying to change the criminal justice system and I’m writing about my own experience with domestic abuse (as an abolitionist) and what I’ve done as an activist and some academic interruptions ptsd adhd dyslexia and all that good stuff.
If you don’t ask you’ll never know!
Hey that's an amazing story to begin with! Sure, shoot me a DM on @letvihelpyou on IG, or through email ask.viancqa@gmail.com and will share more details.
Dayuumm idol u so really cute tbh 🥰