Tearing up while listening to you reading your essay. Like the name, it's very personal dan touch heart of the reader. I hope all of your plans and visions for Indonesia's education could come true, Kak Wai! You're doing great and will always be, insya Allah❤️
Hearing the first sentence makes me cry kak, that's why your essay can get you into harvard... As indonesian That's so true.. Thankyou for the insight and wish my essay can get get me into harvard too
Kak,thank you so much for sharing this statement of purpose. I can see the view that your essay is eloquent,simple yet captured all your vision for applying master's in harvard. Hope you always had a great day ya kak! Thank you for inspiring me!
Hi, I can definitely say that you aced your Harvard application with your essay. You are one of a kind. I was looking for a winning essay example as I am preparing a master's degree scholarship application. However, your essay made me reflect and question my purpose again. I don't have an exceptional life story like yours and I am a total mediocre. One of the reasons why I want to go after grad school is because since I graduated in 2021, I have never been accepted by any companies that I applied to. Meanwhile, I desperately want to have a career in the environmental sector or marine science-related field. So, I thought grad school is a good idea to elevate my qualification, skills, and knowledge. But now, I still question myself. Anyway, you're a star and I am sure you'll excel in your study at Harvard.
That was awesome hearing your essay, Mbak Wai. It encouraged me to pursue my dream studying abroad then payback to our country. Also appreciate with the LPDP tracker. It could be useful for me. See you in Harvard
I am impressed, finally understood how to write a perfect personal statement. I am also coming from the impoverished country and the stories mentioned in your essay are very familiar to me. God bless you and help you to achieve all of your dreams and aspirations.
After listening your whole essay, I am pretty much sure this is not just an essay, it's your lifes one of the priority goal you are striving for! Kudos🎉! May Allah gift you constant success throughout the process😊
Hi! Would you mind making a video on your stats & especially ecs? I find it really difficult to branch out to shadowing/internship programs that accept us SMA students in indonesia. Virtual programs of that sort are also very rare :( I believe my best chances are just highschool club branch chapters but I don’t think it’ll sway the ao much. Thanks! Really admire your essay writing 😊
Is this a Statement of Purpose? Or a Personal Statement? From my understanding, a Personal Statement has a word limit of 500 words and this is quite big for that
I saw and read your complete essay, now I am thinking that how I grate thinking like you for my best essay. Harvard is my dream college like you. My dear sister ! Can you help(guide) me filliout the common app a application? Please please please...
Halo kak. Makasih udah share. Bermanfaat banget informasinya. Kalau boleh tanya kak, dulu pas daftar ke uni-nya ada syarat buat kasih GRE/GMAT kita ga kak?
Aight, imma make a bet now, that ur going to be one of the most influential woman in Indonesia in at least 30 years. Here's hopin for a better edu 💪
I bet!!!
It made me cry. It's beautiful. Hope you can achieve these goals for your community!
Tearing up while listening to you reading your essay. Like the name, it's very personal dan touch heart of the reader. I hope all of your plans and visions for Indonesia's education could come true, Kak Wai! You're doing great and will always be, insya Allah❤️
Sasaaa thank you so much for the kind words!!! Aamiin, doa yang sama untukmu💛
Hearing the first sentence makes me cry kak, that's why your essay can get you into harvard... As indonesian That's so true.. Thankyou for the insight and wish my essay can get get me into harvard too
Kak,thank you so much for sharing this statement of purpose. I can see the view that your essay is eloquent,simple yet captured all your vision for applying master's in harvard. Hope you always had a great day ya kak! Thank you for inspiring me!
Hi, I can definitely say that you aced your Harvard application with your essay. You are one of a kind. I was looking for a winning essay example as I am preparing a master's degree scholarship application. However, your essay made me reflect and question my purpose again. I don't have an exceptional life story like yours and I am a total mediocre. One of the reasons why I want to go after grad school is because since I graduated in 2021, I have never been accepted by any companies that I applied to. Meanwhile, I desperately want to have a career in the environmental sector or marine science-related field. So, I thought grad school is a good idea to elevate my qualification, skills, and knowledge. But now, I still question myself. Anyway, you're a star and I am sure you'll excel in your study at Harvard.
girl same
That was awesome hearing your essay, Mbak Wai.
It encouraged me to pursue my dream studying abroad then payback to our country. Also appreciate with the LPDP tracker. It could be useful for me.
See you in Harvard
I also learned Barbara Oakley's Learning How To Learn. Thank you for sharing!
IT MIGHT EVEN HAVE BROUGHT TEARS IN THE EYES OF READERS ,PERFECTTT WELL I LEARNT A LOT FROM IT THANKSSSS A LOTTTTT
I am impressed, finally understood how to write a perfect personal statement. I am also coming from the impoverished country and the stories mentioned in your essay are very familiar to me. God bless you and help you to achieve all of your dreams and aspirations.
After listening your whole essay, I am pretty much sure this is not just an essay, it's your lifes one of the priority goal you are striving for!
Kudos🎉!
May Allah gift you constant success throughout the process😊
Hi kak, I am new here and this video is so helpful and inspiring. Thank you for letting us reading your essay
So inspiring, thank you for sharing :)
Thanks for sharing your experience! 💖
Hi kak! Thank you for sharing this with us❤. I'm a big fan. And i'll be sure to watch you making all the dream happen! Good luck kakkkk
Hi! Would you mind making a video on your stats & especially ecs? I find it really difficult to branch out to shadowing/internship programs that accept us SMA students in indonesia. Virtual programs of that sort are also very rare :( I believe my best chances are just highschool club branch chapters but I don’t think it’ll sway the ao much. Thanks! Really admire your essay writing 😊
No wonders why you got in! Loved it! Congrats!♥
Thank you so much for sharing this kak Wai ❤❤❤
Hope you find it helpful💛
Thank you for sharing this essay
You are an inspiration. Thank you for sharing this.
Kak Wai u r very inspiring🥹🥹 keren banget kakk! Thank you for making this video🫶
kakk, your essay really touch my heart! wishing all the good things for you! thank you for sharing🤍
thank you so much! 🫶
Is this a Statement of Purpose? Or a Personal Statement? From my understanding, a Personal Statement has a word limit of 500 words and this is quite big for that
TREMENDOUS!
kak waiii❤❤❤
you always inspire me! thankyou so much for share this
Terima kasih banyakk kata2 baiknya! Semoga bermanfaat💛
This is great
Your opening kakkk😭👊🏼✨ slap so hard
semoga bermanfaattt💛
I saw and read your complete essay, now I am thinking that how I grate thinking like you for my best essay. Harvard is my dream college like you. My dear sister ! Can you help(guide) me filliout the common app a application? Please please please...
Halo kak. Makasih udah share. Bermanfaat banget informasinya. Kalau boleh tanya kak, dulu pas daftar ke uni-nya ada syarat buat kasih GRE/GMAT kita ga kak?
How many words should your composition consist of and how many pages should it be?
Jesus bless you. Your video really helped me. Thanks!
Hello, I wonder if there is a pdf of the composition?
this is waaayy longer than a 500 word limit for a personal statement...
Brilliant essay but not useful. I dont have a sob story to play on the emotions of the admission committee
every people have their own stories and the same thing as you. you should looking for it,even at the smallest action that you take