Reading the Essay that Got Me Into Harvard | Personal Statement | Indonesian Student

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  • @nemsjep3725
    @nemsjep3725 ปีที่แล้ว +51

    Aight, imma make a bet now, that ur going to be one of the most influential woman in Indonesia in at least 30 years. Here's hopin for a better edu 💪

  • @laura1089
    @laura1089 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    It made me cry. It's beautiful. Hope you can achieve these goals for your community!

  • @AishaRizqy
    @AishaRizqy ปีที่แล้ว +40

    Tearing up while listening to you reading your essay. Like the name, it's very personal dan touch heart of the reader. I hope all of your plans and visions for Indonesia's education could come true, Kak Wai! You're doing great and will always be, insya Allah❤️

    • @Waitatiri
      @Waitatiri  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Sasaaa thank you so much for the kind words!!! Aamiin, doa yang sama untukmu💛

  • @hafidadwiyaalima9246
    @hafidadwiyaalima9246 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Hearing the first sentence makes me cry kak, that's why your essay can get you into harvard... As indonesian That's so true.. Thankyou for the insight and wish my essay can get get me into harvard too

  • @albaloven5737
    @albaloven5737 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    Hi, I can definitely say that you aced your Harvard application with your essay. You are one of a kind. I was looking for a winning essay example as I am preparing a master's degree scholarship application. However, your essay made me reflect and question my purpose again. I don't have an exceptional life story like yours and I am a total mediocre. One of the reasons why I want to go after grad school is because since I graduated in 2021, I have never been accepted by any companies that I applied to. Meanwhile, I desperately want to have a career in the environmental sector or marine science-related field. So, I thought grad school is a good idea to elevate my qualification, skills, and knowledge. But now, I still question myself. Anyway, you're a star and I am sure you'll excel in your study at Harvard.

    • @ellifz
      @ellifz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      girl same

  • @indrawanyoswanda
    @indrawanyoswanda 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    That was awesome hearing your essay, Mbak Wai.
    It encouraged me to pursue my dream studying abroad then payback to our country. Also appreciate with the LPDP tracker. It could be useful for me.
    See you in Harvard

  • @nidasjafia4060
    @nidasjafia4060 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Kak,thank you so much for sharing this statement of purpose. I can see the view that your essay is eloquent,simple yet captured all your vision for applying master's in harvard. Hope you always had a great day ya kak! Thank you for inspiring me!

  • @Temur818
    @Temur818 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I am impressed, finally understood how to write a perfect personal statement. I am also coming from the impoverished country and the stories mentioned in your essay are very familiar to me. God bless you and help you to achieve all of your dreams and aspirations.

  • @MissionCome-Back
    @MissionCome-Back 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    After listening your whole essay, I am pretty much sure this is not just an essay, it's your lifes one of the priority goal you are striving for!
    Kudos🎉!
    May Allah gift you constant success throughout the process😊

  • @hafsa7081
    @hafsa7081 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    IT MIGHT EVEN HAVE BROUGHT TEARS IN THE EYES OF READERS ,PERFECTTT WELL I LEARNT A LOT FROM IT THANKSSSS A LOTTTTT

  • @adhwaav
    @adhwaav 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi kak! Thank you for sharing this with us❤. I'm a big fan. And i'll be sure to watch you making all the dream happen! Good luck kakkkk

  • @sarahdrio4623
    @sarahdrio4623 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I also learned Barbara Oakley's Learning How To Learn. Thank you for sharing!

  • @annisasjournal
    @annisasjournal 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi kak, I am new here and this video is so helpful and inspiring. Thank you for letting us reading your essay

  • @viraxeva6748
    @viraxeva6748 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you so much for sharing this kak Wai ❤❤❤

    • @Waitatiri
      @Waitatiri  ปีที่แล้ว

      Hope you find it helpful💛

  • @andreaegeapato3510
    @andreaegeapato3510 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    No wonders why you got in! Loved it! Congrats!♥

  • @zalikhadista3649
    @zalikhadista3649 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    kakk, your essay really touch my heart! wishing all the good things for you! thank you for sharing🤍

    • @Waitatiri
      @Waitatiri  10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      thank you so much! 🫶

  • @zora0927
    @zora0927 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thanks for sharing your experience! 💖

  • @AB.926
    @AB.926 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    So inspiring, thank you for sharing :)

  • @ratanatepynarin1218
    @ratanatepynarin1218 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for sharing this essay

  • @darisataqiya5875
    @darisataqiya5875 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Kak Wai u r very inspiring🥹🥹 keren banget kakk! Thank you for making this video🫶

  • @agusdwihastutik8109
    @agusdwihastutik8109 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You are an inspiration. Thank you for sharing this.

  • @melistyaee5460
    @melistyaee5460 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    kak waiii❤❤❤
    you always inspire me! thankyou so much for share this

    • @Waitatiri
      @Waitatiri  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Terima kasih banyakk kata2 baiknya! Semoga bermanfaat💛

  • @anonymously2525
    @anonymously2525 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    TREMENDOUS!

  • @arnavdixit1397
    @arnavdixit1397 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Is this a Statement of Purpose? Or a Personal Statement? From my understanding, a Personal Statement has a word limit of 500 words and this is quite big for that

  • @haninhaha
    @haninhaha ปีที่แล้ว

    Your opening kakkk😭👊🏼✨ slap so hard

    • @Waitatiri
      @Waitatiri  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      semoga bermanfaattt💛

  • @itohowoakpan5320
    @itohowoakpan5320 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is great

  • @pnarkaya3382
    @pnarkaya3382 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    How many words should your composition consist of and how many pages should it be?

  • @Rin_1459
    @Rin_1459 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Jesus bless you. Your video really helped me. Thanks!

  • @andredaniel5631
    @andredaniel5631 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Halo kak. Makasih udah share. Bermanfaat banget informasinya. Kalau boleh tanya kak, dulu pas daftar ke uni-nya ada syarat buat kasih GRE/GMAT kita ga kak?

  • @pnarkaya3382
    @pnarkaya3382 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello, I wonder if there is a pdf of the composition?

  • @reddragon6317
    @reddragon6317 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Brilliant essay but not useful. I dont have a sob story to play on the emotions of the admission committee

    • @MamaRambu-k4b
      @MamaRambu-k4b 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      every people have their own stories and the same thing as you. you should looking for it,even at the smallest action that you take