Biology Essay - Don't make these mistakes! How to get full marks | common essay mistakes

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  • @chunkplunk
    @chunkplunk ปีที่แล้ว +184

    I hate essays

  • @jacobhurst4440
    @jacobhurst4440 ปีที่แล้ว +114

    as someone who is not that confident on biology i think papers 1 and 2 were nice so hopefully aqa keeps it going

    • @adailyfact
      @adailyfact 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      What grade did you get?

  • @LottieHodges-z4b
    @LottieHodges-z4b ปีที่แล้ว +15

    all my ao2 ends up being about respiration and atp for metabolic processes i swear

  • @Matt-pw1sg
    @Matt-pw1sg ปีที่แล้ว +44

    The worst part of Paper 3 isn’t the essay, it’s the other questions on the paper. I just can’t do them at all as they’re mainly calculations and practical based - so doesn’t really require actual knowledge as much…

  • @irrelevance3859
    @irrelevance3859 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    I’m so upset that Biology and Chemistry exams are so close together this year! Maths too unfortunately, I have no idea how I’m going to prepare for Bio paper 3, Maths paper 3 and Chem paper 2 and 3.

    • @AelHydrangea
      @AelHydrangea ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Bestie I'm doing bio chem and maths and I wanna kms, I had a clash, between chem paper 1 and french paper 1, then today I had chem paper 2 and french paper 2. I'm actually hating my life rn and I've heard that maths is almost as bad with it being one day away from chem almost every damn time

  • @lizabeth6583
    @lizabeth6583 ปีที่แล้ว +36

    I've heard that potential essay questions could be importance of:
    1) energy transfers
    2) responses to the environment
    I have used you video on the 2 useful topics, e.g. proteins -> immune response (for response to the environment) to try plan these. I was wondering what other topics you would recommend for these, especially energy transfer

    • @sambarr8979
      @sambarr8979 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      For energy transfer:
      - nitrogen cycle
      - photosynthesis
      - the general transfer of energy in an ecosystem discussing food chains and food webs
      - absorption of glucose involves active transport
      - carbon cycle
      - respiration

    • @nass773
      @nass773 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@sambarr8979 no because we don’t even learn the carbon cycle

    • @lizabeth6583
      @lizabeth6583 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@sambarr8979 you're a life saver thank you

    • @anthernbans
      @anthernbans ปีที่แล้ว +10

      @@nass773 you can do the carbon cycle as proof of outside learning to get to 25

    • @imanef3703
      @imanef3703 ปีที่แล้ว

      A whole essay paragraph on it though?

  • @imma_eatjin
    @imma_eatjin ปีที่แล้ว +16

    this essay is the worst part of biology and i have my last four exams this week so i’m literally EXHAUSTED this ain’t it

    • @callummullaney8052
      @callummullaney8052 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Same bro, chemistry paper 2 today :(

    • @qasimzaidi3901
      @qasimzaidi3901 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@callummullaney8052how’d you find it

  • @voiceofozai3404
    @voiceofozai3404 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Can you write about the same concept twice but in different contexts? For example the sodium potassium pump in glucose absorption and the sodium potassium pump in maintaining the resting membrane potential?

    • @violetcramphorn3362
      @violetcramphorn3362 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      I'm not a teacher but I would say no, cause you have limited time to write your essay so you want to show all your knowledge and if you write about the pump more, it will seem as tho your knowledge is limited and I'm sure it isn't. Hope this helped!

    • @bakerrr23
      @bakerrr23 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      You absolutely can, yes. As long as it is from different parts of the spec and the IMPORTANCE is different, you could write all 4 paragraphs about sodion potassium pumps

    • @laurenellison7592
      @laurenellison7592 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yes you can

  • @Sofia-gk9sn
    @Sofia-gk9sn ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Hi Miss, I attended your essay session on the 24th of May but I never got the follow up email with the link to rewatch it, is there any way I could please access this?

  • @oliverwrench9109
    @oliverwrench9109 ปีที่แล้ว

    I almost got full marks but before an introduction/ conclusion- so in that scenario I needed then, I am just going to do it.

  • @Amy-xi5qf
    @Amy-xi5qf ปีที่แล้ว +2

    It’s super confusing that my teacher says the most important thing is linking paragraphs like wth

    • @okz7079
      @okz7079 ปีที่แล้ว

      Dont link then trust

  • @Sophia.Brinkman
    @Sophia.Brinkman ปีที่แล้ว +2

    my time management is awful and i’m worried that if i don’t start with the essay ill run out of time. What would you do?

    • @Elias.04
      @Elias.04 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      The essay is probably harder to get marks in than the rest of the paper so do the rest of the paper first to bag the easier marks!

  • @ameliashep
    @ameliashep ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi, was just wondering if it’s ok to use the same/ similar AO2 in multiple paragraphs? For example, if talking about cycles can you say in one paragraph ‘the importance of the cardiac cycle is to produce oxygen for aerobic respiration which produces ATP for metabolic processes etc’ and then in the next paragraph say ‘the calvin cycle is important because it produces a hexose sugar such as glucose which is needed for respiration in the glycolysis stage, this is important because glycolysis produces ATP for metabolic processes etc’. Can’t figure out if the reason they are important must be from a different spec point each time. Thank you for the video!

    • @MissEstruchBiology
      @MissEstruchBiology  ปีที่แล้ว

      Its OK to.have some similarities in AO2 yeah, but try and give different applied examples. So if ATP is the importance then give a different eg of its use

    • @ameliashep
      @ameliashep ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MissEstruchBiologyok great, thank you so much!

  • @LB-fm6se
    @LB-fm6se ปีที่แล้ว +7

    do you have any predictions for topics based on what was in paper 1 and 2?

    • @MissEstruchBiology
      @MissEstruchBiology  ปีที่แล้ว +18

      summary of topics not assessed yet coming Monday

    • @Pearlytt
      @Pearlytt ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MissEstruchBiology miss can you please do for OCR A please??

  • @MohammedKhan-rq1pk
    @MohammedKhan-rq1pk ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Is paper 3 mostly practical based??

  • @luciegm3236
    @luciegm3236 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hi miss, just wondering if for importence- this is what i've been doing- can be a different topic to what you've described if that makes sense? I'm currently planning an essay on 'importence of concentration gradients' as practice and I've done a paragraph on the importence of the electrochemical concentration established in the oxidative phosphorylation stage of respiration, then my second paragraph of why this importent as it makes 34 atp for muscular contraction?

  • @ZingyBoBingy
    @ZingyBoBingy ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Going for an A*

  • @WuryemJulius
    @WuryemJulius ปีที่แล้ว

    Absolutely helpful❤❤❤❤❤

  • @aminanaveed8432
    @aminanaveed8432 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    hi miss, but im scared that if i dont link my paragraphs, the examiner who is marking my essay might not know that paragraphs do not have to link and so might mark me down, as my school biology teacher tells us to link the paragraphs.

  • @Kaneki0508
    @Kaneki0508 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi miss I’m confused about one thing. For example if the essay question is based on proteins, can I write about active transport for multiple topics such as one for nerves and another for the PCT In the nephron? Or can active transport only be used for one paragraph?

    • @josephwarner1751
      @josephwarner1751 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Search up the AQA spec, if ‘-‘active transport’ appears in only one spec point (from transport against substances) then no, you have to talk about different things. For example (this is made up) but if glucose and fats were in the same ‘box’, then you can’t talk about them as DIFFERENT points

    • @josephwarner1751
      @josephwarner1751 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      So you wouldn’t be able to use active transport as your AO1 marks for 2 DIFFERENT paragraphs

  • @yaeltam
    @yaeltam ปีที่แล้ว +1

    ahhhhhhhhhhhh i dont wanna do this paper can someone else do it for me thanks

  • @OliviaSireshuk
    @OliviaSireshuk ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Miss, thank you so much for all of your videos! I was taught to have a describe paragraph and then an importance paragraph, so for example, a paragraph on enzymes for describe and then a separate paragraph for importance on digestion for example. Is this wrong? Should I be doing describe and importance in the same paragraph?

    • @lizabeth6583
      @lizabeth6583 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I know very little about essays but was taught to have it in all one paragraph, I think putting it all together may make it clearer for examiners that you have linked the importance of whatever you just wrote about, but I'm not too sure about that

    • @OliviaSireshuk
      @OliviaSireshuk ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks! 😊

  • @otps8035
    @otps8035 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    4:12 really?????? that's good

  • @J.246
    @J.246 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank youuu!

  • @otps8035
    @otps8035 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm not good with the AO1 :(

  • @SebMcGill
    @SebMcGill ปีที่แล้ว

    Yo guys where could I find a load of model answer essays to compare my biology essays to ?

  • @jessh5319
    @jessh5319 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    hi! i was taught to do one paragraph AO1 then another on the AO2 link (so you end up with about 8 paragraphs overall). would that still work even though it doesn't correspond with your model? thanks :)

    • @inmybed1385
      @inmybed1385 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      yeah I think that sounds good, I usually do that and get quite decent marks x

  • @akuawinnie9957
    @akuawinnie9957 ปีที่แล้ว

    is it true that there is a listo of 20 topic titles they reuse/pick from each year? if so where can i find it ?

  • @maygray3253
    @maygray3253 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey guys!!! Thanks a lot Miss for all your help
    I just wanted to ask about significant errors if any knows how they’re marked
    So I believe I made one error by accidentally including the second messenger with insulin and not glycogen
    I’m not sure if I go down a band or not… does anyone have an idea ? Thanks a lot!!!

  • @marantamil459
    @marantamil459 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thankyou!

  • @clairefarmery1525
    @clairefarmery1525 ปีที่แล้ว

    Do you have any predictions for the essays this year?

  • @strifepk9711
    @strifepk9711 ปีที่แล้ว

    Cheers miss

  • @sue9302
    @sue9302 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    hi miss - what counts as different spec points ?

    • @MissEstruchBiology
      @MissEstruchBiology  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      anything in a different box on the spec.

    • @textingterrors9049
      @textingterrors9049 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@MissEstruchBiology hi miss for example control of heart rate, control of blood glucose and control of blood water potential are in different boxes in the spec- can more than one of these be used as separate paragraphs? because my teacher said you should only do one. thank you :)

  • @ol3273
    @ol3273 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi miss, could you tackle the essay like writing 5 different 6 mark answers? Also is it true that you cannot write beyond 2 a4 pages before the examiner ignores the rest?

    • @rubymitchell4037
      @rubymitchell4037 ปีที่แล้ว

      omg I really hope thats not true

    • @MissEstruchBiology
      @MissEstruchBiology  ปีที่แล้ว +4

      no, it's very different to long answer qs.
      and absolutely not true that examiners won't read it all!

  • @meepmoop250
    @meepmoop250 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your cat is so cute

  • @TheAccumulation
    @TheAccumulation ปีที่แล้ว

    Blabbering for 80% of the video oh my god

    • @MissEstruchBiology
      @MissEstruchBiology  ปีที่แล้ว +6

      feel free to skip on to different content if it's not for you