how to fully address all parts of the question/ielts task 2 to what extent do you agree or disagree
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The question used in this video is from Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 1 Writing Task 2.
Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 how to respond to "to what extent"
0:46 fully understand the question
01:45 make comparisons
02:32 body paragraph 1
04:15 body paragraph 2
07:00 introductory paragraph
08:18 conclusion paragraph
08:41 entire essay&key takeaways
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First time I am failure in my exam second time I got 8 band in writing section. Your video boosted my score thank you so much 💗
Wooow, 8 is a really really high score for writing, congratulations! What was your task 2 question? Was it an agree-or-disagree question or discuss-both-views question? Do you mind also sharing your scores on the other three sections here?
Sorry, but I think you are not honest, because even in this comment you have an obvious and basic grammatical error(I am failure) , so it is hard to believe you could achieve 8 band in writing at this level you showed.
Maybe it was a typing error from the keyboard
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That's actually my goal: make "free" better than "paid". Thanks for the kind words.😊
Hi Lilie, do we always need to compare both views in body paragraphs in all types of essays? Like you did in bp1 “Although roads are cost-effectively , they cannot be that fast as railway does?”
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That's great. And good luck with your exam.
Same ..mine is in Oct 13
Hello, what was your writing task topic? and task 1
I have been in touch with your channel since i start my Ielts preparation ❤keep going lily & I'll try my best to get higher band score
Thanks for the kind words but I'm Lilie not Lily.
Splendid your class is😊 thanks sister
Can you make a video on a reading test from Cambridge 17 GT or post them on your Blog? It would be of great help.. Thanks in advance
Outstanding essay
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Hi Lilie, are there any tips that help me come up with topic sentences because I'm quite struggle with thinking of a relevant ones 😭
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I want to say that your lesson are so so great and the way u explain all writing task 2 questions are so clear and detailed. Thank u so much for such an amazing lesson.
You're very welcome!😊 I learned a lot by making these videos. Let's improve together!
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More will come.😊
Can you make a video about counter argument and how to use it?
Plus, i wanna ask if i can write the 1st paragraph about why the others support roads and the 2nd one is about why i agree with railways and explain the advantages outweigh?
How can I improve my spelling mistakes and grammar ?
Ma'am, how much marks will be deducted if I write one wrong synonym in Task 2 introduction? Please reply
This video is super organized and your explanation is perfectly clear! I came to know why I was stuck in 6 or 6.5 in my writing. I'm sure this essay would be more than 7, right? What band did you aim for with the essay?
Hi, I think this essay deserves at least an 8.😊 And I'm glad that my video has helped you identify your problems.
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To what extent type questions....how can we go partially and how to write in thesis statement?
Thanks for your assistance
It's my pleasure😊
Always amazed by your writing skills ❤
Wow, thank you!
Will there be any problem if I started with partially agree or disagree
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I have lived in china more than 7 years Chinese people use the same accent they call everysing instead of everything
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After listening your voice it take me back in memories of past that we have made in past
haha, yes, the "the" sound is difficult for us.
Thanks for this great video.
Glad you liked it!😊
Green travel means?
is there any difference between ; do you agree or disagree and what extent do you agree or disagree,//? if i write one side like both body paragraph for both questions ,, will it be correct?
Lilie thank you for your precious effort you are the best
thanks for watching and commenting!😊
Please give me some tips to achieve 6.5 bands in writing my exam will two days later
Lillie, I don't know such examples to explain in my essays😢
Some people think that money should be spent on railways whether on roads while others think investing financial sources on roads more beneficial. This essay will strongly agree that government should invest money on railways rather than roads. This is because, investing on railways reduce the carbon dioxide emissions and diminish the stress that people have everyday traffic on roads.
In today’s world, people are becoming concerned about environmental effects of human structures which release toxic gasses as well as carbon dioxide. Carbon dioxide which can be defined as chemically (CO2) is non-toxic gas but it eliminates oxygen (O2) which all people need to maintain their lives. Every internal-combustion vehicle on roads emit carbon dioxide which ruin the outside environment but this issue can be tackled by building more railways. For instance, one research which has been recently done showed that, if one-third of people quit driving vehicles on road, it will reduce CO2 at %40 at the next 2 years.
On the other hand, thousand of people drive for their work everyday.When it comes to mental health, which is the issue which cannot be ignored, is increasing the amount of stress of people whilst they stuck in traffic. On top of that, they spend significantly plenty of time to reach their work. A recent research shows that, a person who lives in Istanbul is getting old mentally and even physically by the excessive effect of stress everyday in traffic. Moreover, traffic on roads not only effect the mental health of people but also consume people’s valuable time.
To conclude, constructing railways have much more advantages than roads in terms of environmental and health issues. In future, I think governments should have more consciousness for both their citizien and climate.
can this essay get 6.5?
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Sure thing!😊
By the way, what kind of reading video do u want?
Hlo Lilie your way of explaining is outstanding and thanks for sharing such informative videos to all of us
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I got a band “6.5” in writing. Thank you so much for these tutorials. They did help me a lot/
That is awesome! Wish you a bright future ahead.
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If you able to identify your problem then this could be a big improvement and now i able to identify mine mistake so thank you 😊
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In what extent do you agree or disagree ? Do we have to write only agreement or both agree and disagreement? Pls reply
Hi Lilie, can we partially agree/disagree in this type of essay? If yes, whats the proper structure we should follow?
I don't recommend 'partially agree'.
Hi Lillie, first of all thank you for your outstanding job that you are doing, my question to you is; why are you comparing air freight and sea freight with railway mode of transport? Aren’t we supposed to compare railway with road? Please explain, thanks.
That comparison is just supporting how cost-effective and fast rail transport is. Did you see that I compared railways to roads at the end of that paragraph?
i want to first say your essays are exemplary and your words motivate us to write better but i want to ask band 7 says one idea in one paragraph rails encourages green travel roads increase in cars use they are two ideas is it ok or what we need to do
Hi, we need to compare railways with roads. I explained at the end of the paragraph that cars have a much higher rate of carbon emissions per capita, which is relevant to this paragraph's main idea "green travel". You can read the essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/governments-should-spend-money-on-railways-rather-than-roads/
Mam Mauja introduction and conclusion ko reference Kasa or better Kasa likha this is big problem mam for me can you help me
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Hi, Lilly. I am going to appear in IELTS in April. I don't have any idea about the Computer Test. What do you prefer? I am practicing on writing but I am Facing issues in erasing I am afraid I would lose neatness on exam day as I erase alot
Hi, I prefer the computer test and that's what I took. For task 2, I wrote the two body paragraphs first. This way, I forced myself not to waste too much time on the introductory and conclusion paragraphs. If you do decide to take the computer test, you need to practice reading data on the screen. Sometimes, there is a lot of data. Perhaps, you can make short notes on paper.
but what if i dont completely agree with the que ? i mean the ques are usually smth that i partially agree.
I've never tried 'partially agree' in an actual exam so I'm not sure if it works, sorry.
Hi Lilie! Is it okay if I only partly agree/disagree with the idea?
better not
You're good dear.
I want to ask one question is it necessary to tell about Boday's paragraph in the introduction I am too much upset about how to add it in the introduction.
Not 100% necessary. Just make sure to state your opinion.
So it is not like that we have to stick to one side in ( to what extent do you agree and disagree ) we have to discuss both sides right?
We definitely need to stick to one side when giving our opinion.
Hi Lilie, thanks for your helpful lecture. I have a question. Is it better to have a strong view and ignore the other side of the argument, or should we try to address both sides (still give our opinion)? I would choose the first way, but I also see many teachers use the second approach. I think it's just the same as a discussion essay if we go this way. Does it depend on the question?
Is it right to provide both beneficial and negative side of this types of question? Maybe I saw somewhere that: if we use both benefits and potential drawback it allows examiner to see that I'm able to analyze multiple perspective and present a well-rounded argument.
I've never tried your method in an actual exam so I don't know, sorry.
@@LilieIELTS what was your score mam?
@@MdAshraf My latest test result: L8,R9,W7,S7,Overall8
Thank you so so much ❤️❤️❤️
My exam the 28th October wish me luck 😁❤️
You can do it!✊
Hey lilie today was my test and it went well but the difficulty i faced was with time management. Ur videos was amazing i got bar chart in task 1 and i tried to make broad coments and coments like you teach i also got adv disadv essay but time went too quickly there. At home time time can be managed but there it was big problem i got Adv out weigh dis essay.
Can u make a video on ilets writing time management i have completed task 1 in 15 min and did planning for task 2 in 5 min but developing ideas seemed impossible while testing. i hardly manage to just write conclusion i donot even count words. can you please make a video on time management.
Hi, I understand the challenge you were facing in the actual exam. That's why I took a computer-based test. I started with Task 2. I wrote the two body paragraphs first and, by the time I started writing the first and last paragraphs, there wasn't much time left. So I just forced myself to write those two paragraphs ASAP. I forced myself not to spend too much time paraphrasing. I also finished Task 1 in 15 min. I actually had 2-3 min left to check the essays. Oh, I also bought the same keyboard used in the test.
What type of keyboard is used in test
I've read somewhere that using road for town and street for city. is it right ?
btw I'm a little consfused about the example you give in the main body 2. the topic sentence is about railway networks are crucial for economic activity. it's about railway but in the ex you use ocean and air freight and didn't mention to the railway transit. those are not the same meaning, right ? can u help me, plz
Hi, the entire example is about the China-Europe Railway Express, which is a railway network. There is only one sentence in which I mentioned ocean transportation. I contrasted rail transportation with ocean transportation to show how fast high-speed trains are. You can read the essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/governments-should-spend-money-on-railways-rather-than-roads/
amazing lecture, very imformative. your voice is so cute also, please make more videos like this for writing and speaking Lilie. Many thanks.
Thanks for the kind words!😊
@@LilieIELTS I have a question, in band 9 writing task 2 they say 'use cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention' what is that mean, and how to avoid this mistake?
@@MrHaiTiếngAnh Using linking words is just one of the ways to link sentences. There are other ways to link sentences that attract no attention. I am going to make a video about it but I'm super slow.
@@LilieIELTS so you mean that do not worry about this criteria?
@@MrHaiTiếngAnh That's not what I mean. You definitely need to improve your skills on that area. It's hard to explain here. Wait for my video.
Hi Lilies!!
Please, could one partially agree/disagree to a question like, "To what extent do you agree or disagree"?
Better not.
May I know your score on the writing section of the IELTS exam? Btw, I really enjoy watching your videos ^^
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Certainly!
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If i write 3 paragraph in what extent do you agree or disagree. For example: 2 for agree and 1 for disagree ??
I've never tried that method in an actual exam so I'm sure if it works, sorry.
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Hi, you said we must compare the both point of view in to what extent do agree or disagree type of essay but I always read whole essay from your website where you only write one side essay which side you agree but not compare. Why I request you can tell.
Hi, I've responded to the comment you left on my site.
@@LilieIELTS I appreciate you whole hearted so I have confusion to write this type essay why you talk me like that one more thing I always learn some new thing when learn your essay I will say sorry if you do not feel good if I ask any questions as a student I have doubt so I rais the question otherwise I didn't have attention to hurt your feeling.
Can I Use “I” Body paragraphs Please explain
Yes, you can use "I" in the body paragraphs of a discuss-both-views essay or a disadvantages-outweigh-disadvantages essay.
Please make more videos
Sure thing!😊
how about if question states Should government spend money on railways or roads? Give your opinion. In this case, what should be the structure. should we go one sided or consider counter argument too.
Hi, no difference from the original question so everything would remain the same.
@@LilieIELTS Do we have to develop argument one sided?
Lilie why dont you make more videos on essays
More to come!😊
Can one use "Partially agree or disagree" or one must stick to "Totally agree or disagree"?
I've never tried 'partially agree' in an actual exam so I don't know if it works, sorry.
@@LilieIELTS Thank you for your response
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What if i partially agree
I never do 'partially agree'.
Lilly you're amazing, keep doing the great work. If I cleared my IELTS exam with an overall band score 8, it's because of you. Your writing sessions are top notch and easy to understand. The formats you use for different types of writing really helped me achieve good score. Thank you!
thank you too.😊💜
Your introductory and conclusion part both are almost same. Shouldn’t both part need to talk about same reasons but in different manner?
Hi, I think I did use different wording to summarize the two reasons. I only repeated the key words "economic activity". You could say something like "drive the economy forward". But if you read the third paragraph carefully, you will notice that paragraph is really about economy ACTIVITY. There is nothing wrong to repeat a key idea that accurately summarizes the paragraph. If you want, you can read the essay again here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/governments-should-spend-money-on-railways-rather-than-roads/
My teacher uses your web site to teach us
and many sites copy my content and ideas
To what extent do you agree or disagree------can one write, I agree partially.....?
Better not.
There are lot of high level vocabularies that are hard to understand.. 😵💫
For example?
How much this type of Essay can get band
@@majhamontage7776 8.5 Easy
She explained everything pretty well, watch full video don’t even skip 30 secs, as it’s a knowledge-packed vid
Very helpful. But there's a notion that when you're doing to what extent, we have to acknowledge the point that we disagree with. So if its done in that way, how will the essay be structured ?
You don't need to do that. As you can see, I addressed all parts of the question without doing it.
@@LilieIELTS thanks. What about the introduction part in discuss both views ? do we have to state ideas for both views or only for those which we agree with ?
@@season322 Either way works.
Guys, what is the difference between "Do you agree or disagree" and " To what extent do you agree or disagree" ???
They are the same except that you use words like 'totally' or 'completely' to answer 'to what extent'. For example, I COMPLETELY agree with this viewpoint.
@@LilieIELTS So, I shouldn't use such words when the question is " Do you agree or disagree" ??
No need for views of disagreement here?
No, you stick to only one side.
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I hope your classes will help me to get at least 7+
Me too.😊
Hey Lillie, Thank you so much for your videos. My test on April 30 and am bit nervous about my essays could you help me improving myself.
here is my essay. could you pls review it
A growing interest towards the international pop and celebrities is seen in the youngsters when compared to the popular people in the history of their countries. I think this is because the easy availability of social media and other OTT platforms. The educational institutions should implement the lectures and tours to improve historical knowledge.
To begin with, social media offers direct access to the fancy and lavish lifestyles of world-famous pop singers and movie starts. There are many popular social media apps, namely twitter, Facebook, Instagram just to name a few. These tools showcase day to day activities of the celebrities and so-called influencers. Among all three, the use of Instagram has been rocketed in the last few years.
At the same time, The Ove-the-top platforms are the main reason behind the situation we have today. There are several paid steaming services provided online, Amazon video-on-demand and Netflix to name a few. For example, A K-pop series named as BTS accounts 400 billion searches in the year to 2022.
Firstly, more lectures on the famous historic people should be included in the school curriculum. Apart from this, to grow the interest of youngsters in history, the teaching institutions should adapt visual methods of teaching such as power point presentations, seminars and conferences. Secondly, the educational institutions should arrange the tours to historic places such as museums and forts, bi-annually.
In conclusion, mainly social media and OTT platforms are the one to increase the curiosity and desire towards the life of international Pop and entertainers. To overcome this, the teenagers and youngsters should be more encouraged to learn about the famous historical people of the countries.
Thank you in advance.