have you addressed all parts of the question? - ielts writing task 2 opinion essay

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  • @sonajuhasova3774
    @sonajuhasova3774 2 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    Thank you so much for your videos, they were great help. I took the IELTS academic a couple of days ago and today I got my results. Overall, I got a band 8 (8.5 listening, 9 reading, 7 writing and 8 speaking). Thanks once again for everything

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      That's amazing. Congratulations! Do you mind sharing your task 2 question here?

    • @sonajuhasova3774
      @sonajuhasova3774 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Of course! Some people believe it is more important to spend public money on roads and freeways than it is to spend it on public transport, such as trams and buses. To what extent dou you agree or disagree?

    • @chrisbella2622
      @chrisbella2622 ปีที่แล้ว

      Congrats,pls which of TH-camrs did u use as your reading coach

  • @phonethetoo5314
    @phonethetoo5314 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you so much, Lillie. I got my result today and scored 7 in writing all thanks to you.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's amazing! Wish you a bright future ahead!✨ What was your task 2 question?

    • @phonethetoo5314
      @phonethetoo5314 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@LilieIELTS As far as I remembered, I think " The best way to reduce environmental issues is to increase the fuel price ". The question type is "to what extent do you agree?"

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@phonethetoo5314 thanks for sharing!

  • @mkr576
    @mkr576 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Your way of explanation is superb . Thanks for such an informative video🤗 Keep it up👍

  • @hi___ting
    @hi___ting 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you so so so much Lilie!!! I'll take IELTS test this weekend, and your videos help me a lot!!!🥰

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Good luck with your exam. Don't forget to come back and tell us your test result.

  • @imm5108
    @imm5108 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you!! You can explain very clear, also your presentation is the best!!

  • @sabbirhasan3055
    @sabbirhasan3055 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    After completely watching this video,literally i became a strong candidate of ielts ❤🎉

  • @shreyankasansarshrestha8222
    @shreyankasansarshrestha8222 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you for this amazing content. Really appreciate your effort and I hope you get more subscribers.

  • @natureofbangladesh8493
    @natureofbangladesh8493 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thnks for ur info! Through which we are learning how to elaborate writing tasks

  • @PriankaHowlader
    @PriankaHowlader ปีที่แล้ว

    Your videos are beneficial in all aspects. Had enrolled in online coaching but your way of explanation and incentive to be more flexible during writing is awesome. Thank you so much❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad to hear that😊♥

  • @lovelynepal1652
    @lovelynepal1652 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much ma’am , before watching this video i had problem in lengthy question . Now i am feeling more confident!

  • @DanishAftab-z6o
    @DanishAftab-z6o 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Such a high end thinking and valuable tips lilie. Thank you for sharing these❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      So glad!😊

  • @ByaSah
    @ByaSah ปีที่แล้ว

    thanks for your videos. They are really useful and you made them clearly.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      glad that you liked them!😊

  • @ChamiJayVlogs
    @ChamiJayVlogs 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi your channel is soo helpful!
    can you do a video for reading and listening tips please!!

  • @TanvirAhmed-xr8il
    @TanvirAhmed-xr8il ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great video as always

  • @lephuonganh3114
    @lephuonganh3114 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much. My test will be Sep 23. I will come here to share with you my result

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      I'll be waiting!😊

    • @lephuonganh3114
      @lephuonganh3114 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS I got my result today. Overall I got 6.5 with 6.5 in writing. I just follow all the strategies you share in writing. Thank you for your help. You are a great teacher ❤️

  • @iroshinidissanayaka
    @iroshinidissanayaka 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much lilie🥰 , my exam is 10th November, The way of yr teaching is more helpful to me, can concentrate well...🙏❤

  • @sukilee73
    @sukilee73 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    wish me good luck! Thanks Lillie

  • @7rings-kj3jx
    @7rings-kj3jx ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much!! Very inspiring

  • @yasmeentahtah3118
    @yasmeentahtah3118 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    In this kind of essay do we need to highlight the disagreeing side???
    In a separate paragraph????

  • @ainurello
    @ainurello 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you very much for your tremendous help and ideas for solutions ❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      So nice of you😊💜

  • @hhanie-ng5619
    @hhanie-ng5619 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much Lilie~ I have a queation, do I have a higher score if I write briefly 2 main ideas in the Introduction or it's not compulsory?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I wrote them in actual exams and got a 7.

    • @hhanie-ng5619
      @hhanie-ng5619 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS wow amazing thank you so much ~

  • @adityaveersingh8856
    @adityaveersingh8856 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great explanation...👍
    But I want to know what's your take on writing General Statement at the start... Is it good or bad?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yes, I think you can start a agree-or disagree essay with a general statement.

  • @sakiulislamripon
    @sakiulislamripon 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    May you please evaluate my essay based on this topic and provide me with a band score:
    Consumption of sugary products are very common in most of the countries and this becomes a growing concern among the governments and policy makers. Since food or drink containing high quantities of sugar lead to severe health issues, it is argued that the price of the sugar based products should be increased to keep away the people taking from consuming more sugar. I fully disagree with this statement because consuming sugary foods or drinks has become a part of the individuals habit and the price of the healthy products required to be in a lower cost to encourage them to take less sugar.
    People are run by their habits and it is quite impossible to break the chain of their day-to-day habit. Take, for example, it is a common habit for the Bangladeshi people to have tea biscuits and cake on the breakfast and lunch. Despite this, they are fond of eating sweets in every festivals. Therefore, hiking the price of these products leads to creating suffering in them because they cannot but consume those sugary products. Hence, increasing the price will create unsatisfaction among the citizens.
    It is an open secret that healthy products are not cheap to buy and so, it is inevitable to reduce their prices to some extent. By this initiative, people will definitely purchase them and make them a part of their life. To illustrate, if healthy foods and drinks become cost effective, the common psychology of the inhabitants will be to replace the sugary products to a great extent with those healthy items. Thus, lowering the price of the edible healthy products will ensure the peoples less consumption of large quantity of sugar.
    In conclusion, the growing concern regarding consuming sugar items cannot be solved by raising their price rather this will lead to creating dissatisfaction among the people. Hence, reducing the cost of healthy products can solve this problem to a great extent.

  • @mkr4664
    @mkr4664 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks sister for sharing this masterpiece.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm glad you like it😊

  • @DepshiZo-c
    @DepshiZo-c 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you so much mam 🙏 ❤️

  • @patelheet4380
    @patelheet4380 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    hey lilie one of my friend got desire band score on writting by using your techniques
    thanks a lot.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      That's awesome! What's his or her score for writing?

    • @patelheet4380
      @patelheet4380 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS 6.5 in w. Athough he was not able to get even 4.5, by watching your videos he did.

  • @vm7738
    @vm7738 ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you!

  • @HungNguyen-wh8yi
    @HungNguyen-wh8yi ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you do the tips about listening and speaking?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Will definitely try it in the near future.😊

  • @drfestmusic
    @drfestmusic 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    My IELTS today , in some countries people are having their first child at an older age. Give reasons to this trend.
    Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thanks for sharing. Hope U can the score you need.

    • @drfestmusic
      @drfestmusic 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS you welcome. Yes staying positive. ☺️

  • @Gwen714
    @Gwen714 ปีที่แล้ว

    So interesting

  • @cottonknitfabrics.8984
    @cottonknitfabrics.8984 ปีที่แล้ว

    i have read all most all opinion essay of you where you have mentioned two ideas in the introduction but in this essay you didn,t ... so my question is which one is better ? should i mention that or not ?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi, it isn't a must to mention to two main ideas in the introduction but I think we should include them in the conclusion to give the essay a summary.

  • @ЛюциферМорнингстар-ф5и
    @ЛюциферМорнингстар-ф5и ปีที่แล้ว

    These topic seem to me that , it is like problem solving but with ready solution on the title .

  • @abdullahshafi4432
    @abdullahshafi4432 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you so much. My exam is tomorrow. I will share my result here after the exam.

    • @amnakhanpalwasha
      @amnakhanpalwasha 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@abdullahshafi4432 what's your result bro?

  • @Akosua3290
    @Akosua3290 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks lilies

  • @hashimbutt4279
    @hashimbutt4279 ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam could yo please explain how to crack/paraphrase Tast 2, statements,.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi, I already have a video about it: th-cam.com/video/eY4q_9ZTTIk/w-d-xo.html

  • @deepshikanagarkoti7144
    @deepshikanagarkoti7144 ปีที่แล้ว

    What to do if we do not have exact data to give as example?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi, the two examples I provided are imaginary situations. In this case, we can make up numbers.

    • @deepshikanagarkoti7144
      @deepshikanagarkoti7144 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@LilieIELTS thankyou so much Lilie. I was stucked in that part.

  • @AmandeepKaur-xn9cv
    @AmandeepKaur-xn9cv ปีที่แล้ว

    Can I write do you agree or disagree essay type question in 70-30 ratio??

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sorry, I missed your comment. I don't recommend a 70-30 ratio.

    • @AmandeepKaur-xn9cv
      @AmandeepKaur-xn9cv ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS thanks for your reply

  • @prabhatrimal57
    @prabhatrimal57 ปีที่แล้ว

    big fan

  • @delvindavis1285
    @delvindavis1285 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hlo ma'am pls make video regarding postive and negative development questions

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Here you go: th-cam.com/video/dFPVRy_siS0/w-d-xo.html

  • @ahmedraihan7781
    @ahmedraihan7781 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    You speak so fast mam 🙂
    please slow down a bit while making vedio
    My exam set on 10th November so I'm watching your all vedios you'll see my comments more

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yeah, I have trouble slowing down. I'll be more careful next time. Thanks for your comments.

  • @ChamiJayVlogs
    @ChamiJayVlogs 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I ‘m fed up with listening and reading 😞

  • @patelheet4380
    @patelheet4380 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    hey lillie have u deleted any task 1 table related video from your chennel.

  • @watchofficial6602
    @watchofficial6602 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Note:- Today’s learning fact is that give direct example if you are not be able to explain the reason of the topic sentence.. 😇
    I used to think i have to explain the reasons of the topic sentence, then example.. 🤨🤨🤨

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I used to think so too.😅