I am really impressed with the way you use the language , and your method of writing is very clear to understand 👏, wish you good luck !!! Thank you so much❤. Your videos are truly helpful all the time.
I have alreday taken date but still had less confident about task 2 writing .. With your videos I am glad that i am building my confidence. Thank you so much...
I'm having an IELTS test tomorrow and it's kind of a pity that only now did I find out about your videos. They're so easy to understand, especially with the examples that you carefully explain. Definitely one of my favorite IELTS youtube channel.
@@LilieIELTS ayo, read this reply 1 month later and I can happily announce that I got an 8.0 overall, still my writing is only 7.0, will definitely revisit your channel once I need my certificate renewed
I have searching a best video for the IELTS preparation, here I get best among all for my guidance of the IELTS preparation. Thank you so much, I wish to upload more informative video for the IELTS further.
At first I was having problem with this essay topic. But now I understood it clearly. Thank you it really helped me. Now I will use this template to practise.
notes: all four paragraphs have to talk about our own opinion; body paragraph needs main idea; body paragraph: topic sentence includes main idea, explanation (not necessary), example, own opinion; 2:52 singular they
In an argument essay you expose/*discuss both sides or views* and then give your opinion (at the end, usually by the strongest argument), letting the reader aknowledge both sides arguments (without your opinion influence) so you WON'T DEVELOP THE ARGUMENTS BY YOUR POSITION but GIVING THE REASONS OF BOTH SIDES and then expose your final position with all the information given. In this case we are talking about a ✨balance an argument IELTS question✨
Please upload positive and negative one ( + & - are similar to agree and disagree one?)you are wonderful teacher as well as helping so many of us in free. thank you very much 🙏
Yes, the two types of questions you mentioned are the same. You can read positive-or-negative-development essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/positive-or-negative-development/
Hi Lilie, I have a question. People usually say, Don't add someone's quotations in writing task 2 as an example. So what is your opinion about this? because you added Peter Thiel's own remarks.
@Lilie IELTS Thank you so much mam 🙌❤👍your writing skills and helpful advise are invaluable mam. I still have a doubt and request you to guide me as it will help me a lot,my doubt is in "Discuss both the view and then give opinion- academic writing task 2" ( I watched your insightful video but still have a query. I find it more easier to write ideas when I use method you explained at 3:57 minutes (individual para and supportting one view backed with examples and no opinion); therefore, Can I write in the format below: Intro paragraph. paragraph 1 (only 1st view, no opinion) paragraph 2 (only 2nd view, no opinion) 3rd paragraph( just my opinion in one sentence starting with I strongly believe...and no examples ((1st query: is it okay to do this and make a 3rd paragraph only for opinion 2nd query: examples needed in 3rd paragraph?))(examples here can increase the word length much more) Conclusion para Thank you, Regards,
@@LilieIELTS okay mam than I try to do it as you explained in the video. Thank you so much once again💛🙌👍👌your youtube channel should be rated 1st among all others. Thank you, Regards,
Hi Lilie !! I have this question about word count in ielts writing. Would you please tell me about it. Question is : in ielts writing do they count prepositions and articles as words or not?
i am having a hard time connecting my main gist-like topic sentences, thesis and also how do i generate ideas? And I absolutely find your videos very helpful. Thank you so much
In writing task 2 discussion essay. If the question is "some people say its better to have single law system throughout the world but other say its should be free to make their own laws in the country " in the first body paragraph can I disagree the first point and write the disadvantages of having single law system in the world ?. Or will I loss the mark ?
There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. It says measure means plural. Do i need to write one measue or 2? Could u plz make it clear??? I Didn't see this type of question before.
I don't think it will. I used different collocations, e.g., "make changes" and "resist change". Don't worry about repeating an individual word, especially when that word is a key word.
Please ma'am, why is it that you gave only one reason when the question says reasons meaning that there should be more than one reason. Secondly, is it advisable to write 2 different reasons in a single paragraph?
the thing we disagree with should come to the 1st para? and the thing we agree should be in 2nd para?? is this the method? if not how can we decide it please help me
@@manpreetbrar4327 Congratulations on the high scores! Did your introductory paragraph occupy all those lines? Trying to figure out if having empty lines would reduce scores.
I'm desagree with where you have to give your opinion in this specific kind of IELTS question we have to READ CAREFULLY "Discuss* both these views" Discuss means to talk or write about (a topic) in detail, taking into account different issues or ideas. ⬇️ In an argument essay you expose/*discuss both sides or views* and then give your opinion (at the end, usually by the strongest argument), letting the reader aknowledge both sides arguments (without your opinion influence) so you WON'T DEVELOP THE ARGUMENTS BY YOUR POSITION but GIVING THE REASONS OF BOTH SIDES and then expose your final position with all the information given. In this case we are talking about a ✨balance an argument IELTS question✨ ‼️BUT‼️If the question refers to your explicit opinion or the extent of your agree or disagree... Then you must STATE your POSITION making it CLEAR through all the essay parts. Hope I make it clear 🫠
All ok about the essay but why do we stating that " I agree with this argument.....". it's just a plane opinion essay isn't it, unlike agree/disagree essay.
Hi, you do need to say which side you agree with. If you don't want to use "agree", you can say that I believe change is always a good thing balabala....
Got 7.5 in writing. Thank you for your videos
Woow, that's a really high score, congratulations! What are your scores on the other sections?
Amazed by your level of understanding and teaching by simplifying the topics.
appreciate the kind words💕
半年以來,找了好多教材看了好多教學影片,終於找到最大希望值~Lilie老師的教學邏輯更掌題教學最精闢到位!!!! 忠實跟隨!!!!
谢谢您💕
it’s such a shame that I have to scroll down so far looking for your videos in the search menu, you’re an amazing teacher Lilie
I just wanna say u explained the details worthy of attention really well!! Look forward to more videos
your writing videos are amazing. They are so clear, understandable, and informative.
I was a fan of IELTS advantage, and from now i'm a fan of your Writing video.. How cool is it? 😍
Very coooool.😊
Because he ask for money to explain all the task 2 formats.
Just one is for free and our lily right here has provided us with all the materials free of cost.
@@anildhull6377 right, you are right..she is amazing, as well as lovely 🤭
yeaa same
I am really impressed with the way you use the language , and your method of writing is very clear to understand 👏, wish you good luck !!! Thank you so much❤. Your videos are truly helpful all the time.
I have alreday taken date but still had less confident about task 2 writing ..
With your videos I am glad that i am building my confidence.
Thank you so much...
Hope you got the score you need and don't forget to come back and share your test result here!✊
really mind-blowing every single time I watch your videos, not gonna lie !
Happy to hear that.😊💜
I'm having an IELTS test tomorrow and it's kind of a pity that only now did I find out about your videos. They're so easy to understand, especially with the examples that you carefully explain. Definitely one of my favorite IELTS youtube channel.
Did your exam go well?
@@LilieIELTS ayo, read this reply 1 month later and I can happily announce that I got an 8.0 overall, still my writing is only 7.0, will definitely revisit your channel once I need my certificate renewed
@@hoangtri5776 woah congrats. Having the IELTS test too in 24 hours
Tell me about your test please
I have searching a best video for the IELTS preparation, here I get best among all for my guidance of the IELTS preparation. Thank you so much, I wish to upload more informative video for the IELTS further.
Thanks for the kind words. I'm back from the Chinese new year festival. Hopefully, I can upload a new video next week.😊
thank you, Lillie! This video made me understand more about essays overall
I'm so glad!☺️
Your teaching technic is amazing 😊
Tomorrow is my exam hoping for the best 🙂
I was looking for this types of video, where and when I should state my opinion. Thanks a lot one more time.
So nice of you.😊
I was encountered by giving opinions but you solved the problem. I would be grateful to you. Stay blessed by the Almighty. Thank you.
Glad to hear that and you're welcome.😊
@@LilieIELTS ❤️ from Bangladesh
I happened to see your yt channel. This is super fast and well summarized. Thank you very much! ❤
Glad it was helpful!😊
This is the best video to prepare for IELTS thank you
Glad it was helpful!😊💜💜💜
Thanks for your coaching. You made me score an overall band of 7.0 ( L-6.5, R- 6.5, W- 7.5 and S- 7.5).
Congratulations, I'm so happy I could play a small part in your success.😊
Thanks for your excellent free videos. I have got my desired band following your advice and tips.
Congratulations! What are your scores?
At first I was having problem with this essay topic. But now I understood it clearly.
Thank you it really helped me.
Now I will use this template to practise.
Thanks for the kind words. You can also read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
notes: all four paragraphs have to talk about our own opinion; body paragraph needs main idea; body paragraph: topic sentence includes main idea, explanation (not necessary), example, own opinion; 2:52 singular they
Take, for example...
example-led paragraph 5:10
Your hard work will pay you off one day! Thank you for the video
Hope so!😊
Everything is tremendously explained. ❤️
Tremendously appreciate your kind words.☺
best IELTS channel I've seen
I listened to you a day before my exam,thanks i made it 🎉
Thanks so much for your videos Lillie. They are very understandable and really life saving🙌. Keep up the great work❤
In discussion essay, it’s always good that you provide your stand at conclusion not in introduction.
No, your opinion needs to be clear throughout the entire essay.
In an argument essay you expose/*discuss both sides or views* and then give your opinion (at the end, usually by the strongest argument), letting the reader aknowledge both sides arguments (without your opinion influence) so you WON'T DEVELOP THE ARGUMENTS BY YOUR POSITION but GIVING THE REASONS OF BOTH SIDES and then expose your final position with all the information given. In this case we are talking about a ✨balance an argument IELTS question✨
i got 7 bannds watching your videos it is really helpful for beginers , mainly in writing you are the best tutor .
Excellent tutoring. Thank you
Please upload positive and negative one ( + & - are similar to agree and disagree one?)you are wonderful teacher as well as helping so many of us in free. thank you very much 🙏
Yes, the two types of questions you mentioned are the same. You can read positive-or-negative-development essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/positive-or-negative-development/
@@LilieIELTS thank you lilie i got advantages outweigh disadvantages on exam day :-)
@@KainsazEdits That's great and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.☺
@@LilieIELTS sure why not :-)
@@LilieIELTS hello Lilie i got overall band 7 (LR 7.5 WS 6) thank you for your valuable guidance 🥰!
Thank you very much my dear teacher
Best teacher ever
You gave me serous confidence to register
glad to hear that!😊
Hi Lilie, I have a question. People usually say, Don't add someone's quotations in writing task 2 as an example. So what is your opinion about this? because you added Peter Thiel's own remarks.
You are fabulous ❤. Thank you so much 🙏❤
Falling in love with your video, China is love
thank you so much @lilie from you I have learned a lot. I will be doing my exam on coming Wednesday. Hoping for good marks and yes may god bless you 🙌
Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here!✊
tomorrow i´m going to take the ielts, i really hope it goes well. thanks foryour video
Best of luck!
your guidance is adoreable❤️
Your comment is adorable. 😊
I really love your style of teaching
Thank you! 😃
Thank you so much please keep doing these videos 😊
I thank you lile , you made it easier to understand.
Glad to hear that!😊
Huge respect for you❤🙏
Tons of love,from Nepal 🇳🇵❤️
thanks for the kind words!😊😊♥
Wow thoroughly enjoyed the video and learned a lot. 🎉🎉❤
It's a great explanation, big thanks to you!!!
Glad you liked it!
Wow, This is so simple 👏 😍. Thank you ma,am❤
Splendid ❤
Could I ask if the score will be affected if we don't recommend IELTS format of
Introduction
Body paragraph 1
Body paragraph 2
Opinion
Conclusion
Well explained; highly recommended
Thank you so much, keep going!!!! im looking forward your next vid
Thank you too!😊
I watch a lot and take the discission that yoy are, really, amazing ❤.
thank u😊
Maam yu are the best I salute yu straight to the point
Made my day, thank U!☺
Thank you for your amazing and beneficial videos. Can you explain how to generate ideas and find examples to write in an upcoming video, please?
listening to news podcasts would help.
You are doing great job ma'am 👍
Please 🙏 make more videos on task 2 . Your videos are helpful
The next video will be about a task 2 question in ielts 17.😇
@Lilie IELTS Thank you so much mam 🙌❤👍your writing skills and helpful advise are invaluable mam. I still have a doubt and request you to guide me as it will help me a lot,my doubt is in "Discuss both the view and then give opinion- academic writing task 2" ( I watched your insightful video but still have a query. I find it more easier to write ideas when I use method you explained at 3:57 minutes (individual para and supportting one view backed with examples and no opinion); therefore, Can I write in the format below:
Intro paragraph.
paragraph 1 (only 1st view, no opinion)
paragraph 2 (only 2nd view, no opinion)
3rd paragraph( just my opinion in one sentence starting with I strongly believe...and no examples
((1st query: is it okay to do this and make a 3rd paragraph only for opinion 2nd query: examples needed in 3rd paragraph?))(examples here can increase the word length much more)
Conclusion para
Thank you,
Regards,
I'm sorry I've never tried your structure in an actual exam so I don't know if it works.
@@LilieIELTS okay mam than I try to do it as you explained in the video. Thank you so much once again💛🙌👍👌your youtube channel should be rated 1st among all others.
Thank you,
Regards,
Mam you are the best and your explaination is fabulous 🥰🥰🥰
Thanks a lot 😊
Thanks for your video, it really improved my skills.
I have exams this morning please wish me luck
Best of luck!✊
You really a good instructor. I am from Bangladesh
So nice of you.😊
Maam your all good but I think that using any memories things can low bands score ( piter thiel said ?
what do you think what band score would your essay may take?
Fabulous explanation
Thanks a lot 😊
I'm sorry but I think you forgot to put the link for IELTS Simon example led paragraph link, you said you will put it in descriptions
Thanks your videos is very helpful 🙂 😊
Glad you like them!😊
Hi Lilie !! I have this question about word count in ielts writing. Would you please tell me about it.
Question is : in ielts writing do they count prepositions and articles as words or not?
Yes, prepositions and articles are counted.
Great explanation!
Glad it was helpful!😊
i am having a hard time connecting my main gist-like topic sentences, thesis and also how do i generate ideas?
And I absolutely find your videos very helpful. Thank you so much
You're most welcome!😊
thank you so much for this!!
You're so welcome!😊
In writing task 2 discussion essay. If the question is "some people say its better to have single law system throughout the world but other say its should be free to make their own laws in the country " in the first body paragraph can I disagree the first point and write the disadvantages of having single law system in the world ?. Or will I loss the mark ?
I think this structure is good for me.
Introduction
Body 1 - Idea 1
Body 2 - Idea 2
Body 3 - My opinion
Conclusion
Yes, that would work too.
Thanks
Good day teacher.Can we send you our essays so that you checked and sent your feedback?
Merci beaucoup,madame
Thankyou miss lilie❤
This kind of question were come up on my IELTs yesterday huhu...i have a mental block on Task 2...i take my IElts here in Hong Kong.
Don't forget to come back and share your test result here.😊
Thank you mam🙏💐
thanks a million.
Very helpful video
Glad you think so!😊
There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. It says measure means plural. Do i need to write one measue or 2? Could u plz make it clear??? I Didn't see this type of question before.
Hi lilie i your vedios (3 vedio about discussion essay)have 3 type of introduction with 3 template waht is best
It is necessary to write article or year in the example?
Actually no, you can write from your own experience or from your daily life
Hi first of all video was usuful for me
do you have video about "positive or a negative development" ???
Sorry, I don't but you can read sample essays of that type on my website: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/positive-or-negative-development/
You didn't paraphrase the general statement in the introduction, is that okay ?
Thanks for the wonderful video....👍👍
I have a doubt that you have used risks and changes so many times, will it effects our IELTS score?
I don't think it will. I used different collocations, e.g., "make changes" and "resist change". Don't worry about repeating an individual word, especially when that word is a key word.
@@LilieIELTS Thank you very much for the reply and guidance....☺️
what if the question doesn't ask your opinion?
Can you made a video on sentence formation ,mean structure which help me to get 7 band
Hi, I recommend focusing on developing your ideas. In this way, you naturally write good sentences.
@@LilieIELTS mam how to develop ideas,can you help me 😇
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Can I say these expressions "the long-term' and "the short-run"
Does this kind of question follow the same structure? "Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion "
Please ma'am, why is it that you gave only one reason when the question says reasons meaning that there should be more than one reason. Secondly, is it advisable to write 2 different reasons in a single paragraph?
You deserve 1M subscribers 🥹
the thing we disagree with should come to the 1st para? and the thing we agree should be in 2nd para??
is this the method? if not how can we decide it
please help me
Yes, that's the way to answer a discussion question.
This is awesome
Wowwww, glad you enjoyed it.😊
Should I write my introduction after body paragraphs even in the real exam please
I took the computer based tests in which I was able to write body paragraphs first. But of course an introduction should precede the body paragraphs.
@@LilieIELTS I left roughly 4-5 empty lines to write intro and wrote it later. and scored 7.5 in writing and 8 each in all other 3 modules.
@@manpreetbrar4327 Congratulations on the high scores! Did your introductory paragraph occupy all those lines? Trying to figure out if having empty lines would reduce scores.
can we write our opinion and main ideas in introduction?
Yes, of course.
I'm desagree with where you have to give your opinion in this specific kind of IELTS question we have to READ CAREFULLY "Discuss* both these views" Discuss means to talk or write about (a topic) in detail, taking into account different issues or ideas. ⬇️
In an argument essay you expose/*discuss both sides or views* and then give your opinion (at the end, usually by the strongest argument), letting the reader aknowledge both sides arguments (without your opinion influence) so you WON'T DEVELOP THE ARGUMENTS BY YOUR POSITION but GIVING THE REASONS OF BOTH SIDES and then expose your final position with all the information given. In this case we are talking about a ✨balance an argument IELTS question✨
‼️BUT‼️If the question refers to your explicit opinion or the extent of your agree or disagree... Then you must STATE your POSITION making it CLEAR through all the essay parts. Hope I make it clear 🫠
Your video is attracting
All ok about the essay but why do we stating that " I agree with this argument.....".
it's just a plane opinion essay isn't it, unlike agree/disagree essay.
Hi, you do need to say which side you agree with. If you don't want to use "agree", you can say that I believe change is always a good thing balabala....
@@LilieIELTS Great 👋✌️
But I can’t grasp ideas to explain like I am not able to generate general reasons 😢