An Apple Sleep Experiment [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 30 ต.ค. 2017
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What would really happen if somepony didn't sleep....?
"An Apple Sleep Experiment"
Written by Magpiepony
Narrated by TheLostNarrator
With Special Guest VAs
Magpiepony as Apple Bloom and Trixie
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Why was this a day ago??
I wonder if Luna's magic could have prevented this.
YASSSS
Warning:
it’s really good.
Moral of the story: drugs are one hell of a drugs
Celtric lol, u mean crystal Meth/cocain/weed/acid/meth/etc. is one hell of a drug.
Celtric like 420 😎
No. It's mostly Filthy Rich can die
@Rae Oh stfu druggie, weed is certainly a drug. So is sugar and coffee if you think about it hard enough. Stop denying what you already know...
@@CA-vy8et Sugar has been proven to be the most addictive substance that we consume, but it's not considered a drug. You don't see dealers roaming the streets with it, or doctors administering it to patients. No, instead, it is packed with other ingredients to create a nice treat aimed at everyone- including children. So, yeah, sugar is addictive, but not a drug. Caffeine is the same story, second verse.
How this could’ve been avoided:
-Apple jack organized a night harvest so people could help without getting heatstroke, or just offer a lot of water
-Apple jack could’ve asked twilight for some money (she’s a Princess, she has to be rich)
-Apple jack decides to cook blue meth with pony Walter white and sell them across equestria while avoiding the pony DEA
Yep
Isn't that apples desapier after midnight?
caught me in the first 2/3 not gonna lie
apple bloom we need to cook
i always got the impression that twilight isnt rich she just has the title as a princess but she doesnt necessarily have a lot of money
I actually really like this because it's an escalating psychological horror instead of just the typical shock gore-fest.
This is a lot more narrative than say sweet apple massacre
I mean I do like gore but psychological is much better in my opinion
Yeah I dont like gore creepypastas. Cupcake is an exception. because nostalgia. Phychological is less predictable, because with gore its like Yeah everyones gonna die in some creative way yaaaaay-
with phycological you can do alot more then just killing everyone.
The original Russian Sleep Experiment creepypasta definitely focused more on the gore rather than the psychological aspect.
yes!! i was genuinely surprised since most of the popular horror fics, at leasf the ones i knew about, were "what if this pony was EVIL and PSYCHO and KILLED PONIES" and then that's it.
18:31 that “I SAID NO!” was so powerful. you could really see the first signs of madness here
I just got there and YES OMG it is
It’s one of my favorite parts. I really gotta hand it to the VA, this unhinged burst of aggression is so well done!
😢omg yes so scary better than any monster
The scariest monsters are never the ones with the biggest teeth or the sharpest claws. The scariest monsters are the ones that look like you or me.
I love it sm
“Where... is Applebloom? Is she safe? Is she alright?”
“It seems that in your anger, you killed her.”
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
;-;
Nice star wars reference
Underrated
Ish dis tru- QnQ
The potion, the insanity, the massacre, the cure and the sadness, all of this caused by the greed of Filthy Rich.
Red Psycho Or Granny’s financial ineptitude.
Screw Filthy
in conclusion eat the rich
Nah it was granny’s fault
Filthy Rich isn't anything anymore he's just a stain
1:02:56 dude this line still hits so hard, she *knows* she’s messed up in the head but she’s too far gone to even want to fix herself-because she thinks there’s nothing left to fix
*It’s not actually her line, it’s a line from one of the victims of the Russian sleeping experiment!*
@@RitsuSakuma69Oh so this story is really inspired by he russian sleeping experiment?
1:12:06
@@Ar-Arsy It seems to be loosely inspired by it.
I had a look myself and there is some elements of the Russian Sleep Experiment poured into this. Applejack goes crazy the same way the victims did when they had lack of sleep. But it also has its own original ideas too making it almost its own thing as well, like when Applejack broke her legs. Overall this is a pretty good MLP grim dark story.
Normally, I don’t listen to grim dark stories, but this one was actually pretty interesting and kept me hooked from beginning to end.
Kudo’s to the writer who wrote this
Lauren Faust: I’m just going to create a nice show about friendship and magic unicorns
The fandom:
The show:🥰💖💗💮💐🦄🔮✨😇🌺
The fandom:🩸💉💀⚰️⛓️😈👹🥀🔪
@@coldhaixx1905 yes
And even after the show has ended, the fandom shall live on forever more.
@@Gemmygod yes
@MEDICAL BOY yas
imagine if this was actually an episode
oh lord the children
I would actually watch that cuz then i would say " Creepy mlp yee"
I am a child, heh
Imagine the letters from parents.
Yes
Yaaaaassssssssssss
Then again maybe not
Okay in all honesty, when Applejack said "wanna bet?" It sounded kinda badass
Wendigo Studios “in all honesty” lol
yeah lol
Yea lol
When I heard it, I felt scared.
when?
Twilight gaslighting Applejack cost her big time in the sequel. Not going to give spoilers, but it's a good follow up.
"If I didn't hate you before, I certainly hated you then!"
i heard someone had a headcannon that the twilight that visited aj at the end of the fic was chrysalis the whole time. the fic specifically mentions twilight's headless corpse earlier, so twilight already got her karma for giving aj the potion by being murdered by her. twi being a changeling also explains how jarringly out-of-character she is in the ending because that literally wasn't twilight.
Huh? When is Twilight's corpse mentioned? Particularly headless? I know she's unconscious in one scene, but what?
My head cannon is that, because of her head injury, twilight forgot that she gave the potion in the first place.
@@Twinklethefox9022 that actually makes sense
@@gren8te319 I like to think that Applejack's rampage was actually largely her hallucinating the people she blamed for causing her insanity. For instance it says Filthy Rich was already dead when she killed one of the early on-screen victims, but at the same time you could very easily imagine this referred to either that victim already being dead or to the other victims she had at that point. It is hard to believe after all, that after she had already been detained for wanting to hurt him that Rich would return to where she lives. Though of course, whatever the author says would override this.
What I'm saying is, in this story it could very easily be assumed she had just thought she killed Twilight when in reality it was a fully innocent pony that was actually dead before her.
@@gren8te319 but her friends knew. That's the problem. There's a plot hole that's never fully explained
" we don't take kindly to spies around here"
...Engineer?
*SLAP MY LIKE BUTTON*
slap my hand :3
Lol yee
oh god, your comment just made me imagine the shovel part but with spy as lyra and engie as applejack. ewww...
*SEDUCE ME*
When applejack was bucking a tree, my captions said “applejack was f****ing a tree” that, was freaking funny
LOL
I also listened to that part as well 😂😂😂😂😂😂
LAMAKSHDSIIRHR
Another funny
The line was "princess's"
But the caption said "parentheses" and I legit thought I was gonna die from laughing my ass off
Same lol
Looking back at this story, I made a realization...Twilight could have just quickly gathered up all the apples with magic and then this never would have happened...
Then again we never would have gotten this story if that did happen.
I love this story. I haven’t watched it in a long time and coming back, I realized why I like it so much. Nobody is truly at fault here. Nobody had intentions to hurt anyone, but in the end, Twi’s betrayal of AppleJack makes her the true villain of the story
APPLEBLOOM! BRING THE SHOVEL! SO I CAN DIG THE SHIT OUT OF LYRA!!!!
xP
Yup thats Lost!😂😂😂
dont you be talkin 'bout my mama, DONT MAKE ME GET THE SHOVEL
Brony Leo what ever happened to her shovel shotgun?
Best comment on the internet.
I remember how sad it made me that apple jack didn't have her own creepypasta, this was amazing omg
Ever heard of Bad Apples?
Or Apple Eyes
@@RedactedText I don't believe that's even an official story yet, unless the creator made it one
Heard of the trotting dead?
@@I_Eat_Lemons it is an official story-
I like how applejack has like no stories about her, it’s so nice to have one especially so well written
It's sadly poetic how in the beginning, Applejack mistakenly assumed that she might have kicked her older brother to death, when in actuality, she just kicked a tree a little too hard and her brother was safe at the hospital.
In the ending, Applejack really did kicked her older sister to death, and is left questioning whether she is still alive.
Her sleep deprived mind made up a nightmare of paranoia, and now she is left to experience it for the rest of her life, long after the effects of the potion wore off.
AppleJack is inevitable.
Thanos is inevitable.
AppleJack = Thanos confirmed
And Ah...
Am Apple Bloom.
Thapple jack
Thanos is purple twilite is purple....THEY ARE FUSED!!!
H
A
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Enter 'X-files' theme song
coppa: confused screaming
LMAO
B.eαstiєωoof xD
Coppa: Kid show..? HORROR?!?!?! *UNBELIEVABLE!*
@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 lmao
@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 o
The Twilight I know would NEVER let Applejack take the fall, like the narrator said. This is such a creepy and sad story! Really well done!
I love how applejack is always basically described as a boring pony that dosent make mistakes,And the only time she gets a creepypasta its based on real life events and it’s extremely gruesome and this is literally like the only creepypasta she has other then apple eyes💀
What real life events- >->
@@novapond6642 Look it up👺
Moral of the story:
Apple jack you should've taken coffee instead to stay awake
How are people still replying it’s been 3 years 💀 PeoPle plEase I dOnt eVen rEmembEr cOmmenTing thIs
Especially the ones with a ton of CAFFINE
That is so true
Dasmolpotato OOF so true though lol
College and highschool kids can relate
*TIM HORTONS AND STARBUCKS AWAKEN*
I love how they have literal gods who can raise and lower the sun and moon but can’t make rain. I find that hilarious for some reason
Well, they're the princesses. Remember from the Hearth's Warming episode that the unicorns did it before they found Equestria? And rain is the pegasi's job.
Did you not hear the part where the princesses had a spell to make the ocean usable
well, they don't have a Princess of Water
the story is already terrifying and extremely well written but the VOICE ACTING oh my god. i had full body chills when she was killing lyra and when she gave her monologue to rainbow, this is insane and it’s a shame this is one of the most underrated mlp creepypastas because it’s psychologically one of the most messed up
24:10 The combination of the sound of Filthy Rich laughing, Applejack groaning, the narrator speaking, and the tree cracking all at the same time makes this sound like a YTP 😂
*starts video*
I'm a brave boi
*gets to AppleJack in the hospital*
NoT a BrAvE eNoUgH bOi FoR tHiS!!
I'm listening to this at work... working security in a hospital.... I'm not brave anymore for Celestia's sake I'm not brave enough for this
I know that! XD
@@cujo1786 RIP you may you have a good life
@@tiredashell7205 I'm alive and well... well enough to continue listening to stories read by scribbler
xD😂
Applejack: I am the inevitable.
Apple Bloom coming outta nowhere: *and I am Iron Man.*
Nice
And I am Shrode!!
Actually she's apple bloom
And I...
Am...
*An apple to the core*
My Little Pony : Endgame
Four years later, still wanting a sequel.
Yep, like, Apple's Sleep Forever
there's 2 now
it happened
WE GOT IT 4 IS COMING SOON
@@TejashreeRavikumar YEEEEEES GRAAAAAAAGH
I only now realize that she could have had a full on loop hole. ONLY make the required jars of double, saving the rest of the apples. Once Filthy Rich got the jars feel free to sit with her family and make the rest together before selling them for winter profit. If only she had seen it
Filthy would’ve taken all the jars, regardless if she had doubled it.
@@ReesesBees I’m super late to this, but I think they mean to make the usual amount of jars they would make normally in a season. Don’t make jam of the other apples, and hide them. Then once filthy is gone with those jars, make the others into jam and sell those for the winter profit.
That wouldn't have worked, she dud do this, however filthy was still going to take the rest of the jam. If they tried to sell any, he would just confiscate it.
Honestly my smart ass was gonna say they should've given him the jam and kept enough apples to make jelly; Filthy Rich only asked for the jam, not everything made with zapapples, jam and jelly are close but they *are* two different things
_"I'm the thing you fear. The wild beast that hides within us all, but is kept back by sleeping. I will always be in the back of your mind, I will forever be waiting for the right time. The time when you finally snap and loose all control of self."_
:0
*damn*
i eat that
Wait. A unicorns waiting for me. Damn. I should stop sleeping. I want to see a unicorn.
(No seriously this is deep. Love the user name.)
so EDGY
*Achievement unlocked: You have survived a video by TheLostNarrator*
I've listened to this video I dunno how many times
Who said I survived?
E
@@iwanwahyudi7004 A
@@yes-i-am-no-longer-irl-brob S
I like how you can hear the show’s Applejack and the fanfic’s Applejack. I think it’s so unsettling but verrrry fitting. It gives you that sense of “Applejack doesn’t know what’s going on and that she isn’t being told the truth.”
I havent been into mlp in years and on a mlp creepypasta rabbithole out of pure boredome, but this story stands out as something truley magnificent in terms of writing. If you replaced the ponies with humans, it would be a really good horror novel and possible movie. This story sounds like a horror from the 80s or 90s that is considered a cult classic. I agree with many of the comments here that there should be a second part, but I think it should focus on Twilight and the guilt she lives with. It could be a psychological horror in its own as the guilt starts eating at her when memories from the past, before the potion, surround her. Yet she is too afraid to admit she's in the wrong because she was Celestia's star student, and she worked way to hard to become a princess to let it all fade from an honest mistake. She keeps herself sane by fully blaming Applejack because she asked for the potion, and this causes trauma for Twilight as she now begins to cope by pushing to blame onto others, her own sanity slips as the pressure of being a princess becomes too much. She goes down a similar path of Applejack's as she refuses to stop working, trying to hide her mental degradation. It could be similar to that of how Twilight went crazy in that one episode, desperate to help but a refusal to be in the wrong. One day her "help" causes a death. She didnt listen to the pony she was helping and did what she thought was right, ending their life. She freaks out, hides the body somewhere with her magic or something, and so on. Just an idea but it could be very interesting if done right.
Dude that such a good story to write now I'm wondering what will happen in the end of the story
@@erwinsmith3006 I love making silly little ideas in my silly little head
@@irenic_raccoon I will not call that silly little head
I like how this story is only loosely inspired by "The Russian Sleep Experiment," what with a total lack of sleep freeing some form of latent madness that supposedly lies within everyone. IMO, the effects of the madness are better demonstrated, in this story. At first, it seems as though Applejack is having a fairly straightforward break from reality that becomes more extreme as her sleep deprivation continues. That, and the focus of the story is on the consequences of the madness, instead of a "we are the madness that you kill with sleep" twist ending.
I can tell from the name of this grim story
@@fangirl3323I think their point was that it was _loosely_ based on the creepypasta rather than a complete copy.
@@troin3925
And being its own thing too which other Creepypasta Stories should be made into an MLP version of it There's Laughing Jack with Button and I got some
Twilight the Killer (Classic Jeff version I like that one)
Bleeding Armor (Creepypasta Version of Shining Armor and MLP version of Homicidal Liu)
Spike the Killer (Jane Arkensaw aka Jane the Killer version of Spike)
Laughing Pinkie Pie (Pinkie Pie version of LJ)
@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 What?
@@troin3925
I was doing my own ideas for Creepypasta MLP inspired idea stories for the characters
FINALLY SURVIVED A LOSTNARRATOR GRIMDARK SO PROUD OF MYSELF
*Go back I listened to more and it's too late for me but you can be saved*
An person's dark corner same
@@tiredashell7205 that's right
SPOILERS
"Sometimes you can't have what you want, that's just how life is."
Apple Bloom will remember that.
I remembered this story to be well written and the performance to be great. I am glad to come back to it and find that I was wrong. It is even better than I remembered.
When AJ's insanity really starts to kick in on the hospital bed, I was in awe.
Excellently done.
Especially with the glitch effects and with the narrators switching back and forth. Those were unique elements!
Greed, Wrath, Blood lust, gore, abuse, murder, and betrayal... Perfect story, 10/10
Yep.
Umm
;-;
Friendship is Maaaagic!!
mlp be like
Am I the only one that thinks granny Smith is the most to blame?
why
Would make sense since she made the deal with Filthy Rich. She should've atleast helped with the zap apples and taking care of AJ
Elemental 206411 but she´s an old mare
crome force
Are u dumb m8, so you’re saying is that if someone “old” committed a crime and needed to go to jail but you’d just let em go cuz their “old”?!
What about.
Hitler?
It's Twilight. She literally could have picked of all the apples of the tree and none of this would have happened. Then she lets Applejack rot in jail just because she wanted to get off scot free.
oh my GOD the voice acting on Applejack is gosh darn IMMACULATE IT'S SO GOOD OH MY GOD
This hit hard, especially the ending and ending music, i know i’m late to this but its genuinely a masterpiece, it made me think a different way about Twilight.
Twilight: Applejack, can I talk to you?
Applejack: Want to go to the zoo?
What drugs are in all those apples she ate?!
@@oceandiamond7934 what r u talking about? She didn't eat any apples...
@@angeldust94 yeah she ate the ponies
I don’t get it
???
That one picture where Applejack tightens the rope around Lyra's will now give me nightmares.
46:36 :)
V A O I fear nothing but THAT... it scares me!
My heart jumped when I saw it😰😱😣
V A O same but when you’ve seen it more than once (I’ve watched it a few times)
It’s still bad
This was twilights fault. She still gave apple jack the potion knowing there was a possibility of horrid side effects and yet ended in massacre. Filthy also could have been understanding. The fact twilight lied to cover her butt and keep her reputation is horrible and wrong. Wanna say your a amazing narrator very well done and all who made the art was just pure chilling!
Eh I feel like it was a mix of both Apple and Twilight. Twilight said "Use this as an absolute LAST resort." Implying, "Hey, I don't know what this will do to you." And AppleJack took it straight away. However, I think more of the blame lies on Twilight. For giving her that potion, AND THEN lying/gaslighting about it. Not owning up to her big mistake.
I can't believe Twilight decided to lie to Applejack when she got the cure at the end. What happened to feeling guilty when you gave her the potion? Now there's no potion. If there was really no potion, Applejack would of just passed out.
I'm not mad, just surprised and shocked.
I guess that's what makes a good story.
*beginning of this stuff*
This isn’t to bad.
*hospital part*
I CAN SURVIVE I CAN SURVIVE
*voice glitching*
I CANT SURVIVE I CANT SURVIVE
"It's not like we haven't ran into these types of problems before!"
...why is it when I hear this, I get the feeling she's referencing almost EVERY MLP Creepypasta?
Like, seriously! Listen to that part over and over and TRY to convince me it's something else.
The fact that Filthy was dead the whole time is powerful man
This story was amazing and it also shows how dangerous different kinds of substances can be in real life
Lack of sleep is also highly dangerous and I love how it could all be portrayed in this story !
Truly an outstanding job and performance from everyone working on this 🎉👏
Apple Jack: *kills lyra*
Me: Do ya think she killed Filthy yet?
Narrator: she killed Filthy already
Shame. Would’ve loved a scene where he gets what he deserves xP
@@yuyaricachimuel555 I agree. It would have been interesting
@@Twinklethefox9022The only difference between the other ones would be his pleas, because no matter what any of them said, she only heard her own insanity. But it would have felt slightly more fulfilling, hearing his fear.
@@yuyaricachimuel555 Just so you know, Filthy Rich is actually quite humble in the show.
@@caelusprime5278 irrelevant to this fanfic
Apple Jack's infamous shovel has returned
Mhh *_Y E A B O I_*
She is the ancestor of Shovel Night!
Twilight sure is a good friend leaving her friend in a cell even though she's pretty MUCH the reason why she got her friend there
It hits hard because we damn well know that the Princesses or at least just Celestia would have let her off somehow. Twilight's fear of failure really did everyone dirty
I see why twilight did what she did, it's true Equestria couldn't afford to lose both of them and she warned Applejack of the side effects, she was simply doing the best to help a friend during dire times, and let's be real here, even if you think you wouldn't most ppl would do the same thing, humans are inherently selfish afterall, we do what our brain decides is the best outcome for us when it comes to dire situations
Dear lord that was chilling to the core, Applejack going insane is far, far scarier than Cupcakes or Rainbow Factory, it feels more true to her character too, her devotion to her family costing her everything
I still say that Rainbow Factory is way scarier than this, but other than that I agree.
This one and Rocket to insanity are my favorite
Rf has to be the scariest of all of them
@@ghostlytavern129 Rocket to insanity in my opinion took waaaaaaay too long to remain interesting. Even with everything dubbed and edited!
You’re telling me, I nearly couldn’t fathom those images when Lyra confronted her
Me: All seems fine.
*Gets to the psycho part.....*
Me: Well, there goes my sleep.
NO GET SOME SLEEP OR YOU'LL END UP LIKE APPLEJACK... plz don't end up like Applejack, I don't want to die
I haven't gotten any sleep since last week
I fall asleep to this! (I play it every time I sleep, so about once every 3 or so days)
no WaIT WHAT HAVE WE APPARENTLY *NOT* LEARNED
Same..
I never read this fanfic as a kid, so i'm coming back and watching everything I missed. I still love MLP creepypastas so much, and this story holds up so well! love it!
This… I think I just got traumatized.
Seriously, due to my own ADHD, I sometimes have my own sleep issues. I wake up feeling just like Applejack before she snaps: focused, full of energy, jittery and temperamental. It terrifies me to think that I could slip this low if insomnia was piled on top of this.
Most of all, this stands out from other Grimdark stories. It isn’t “edge for the sake of edge” like one would expect from something like Cupcakes and its many clones. This is a well-written psychological horror that could very well happen to anybody. And for that, I thank you, Magpiepony, and everyone else who helped bring this reading to life.
Please, take care of yourselves.
Moral of the story: DON’T DO STEROIDS KIDS XD
Thanks for having me and Katie voice in this Lost. ‘‘Twas so much sinister & spoopy fun. ^^
DaWillstanator/Thespio I'm still scared man man I'm so scared though good job
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😢😢😢😭😭😭😢😢
thanks also im 10
DaWillstanator/Thespio Moral of the story is actually: DON'T END UP LIKE APPLEJACK! MY FAVS CHARACTER!😥😥😫😫
Hello DA you did good
that bone crack... that, that made me sick...
Same man same
Same here
wait... when? I don't remember hearing an actual crack....
Jade Ocal it happened 3 times when she first breaks her back legs after bucking the tree around 20 ish minutes into the video
Emerald DragonFlame time stamp?
I still come back to this time after time when citing my fave grimdark story's, its just to damn good, and the way lost approached this production wise makes it all the better listen. such a masterpiece, and one id recommend anyone to read/listen to if there into horror
26:11 this one (whitout audio) would be a perfect troll for the cloppers
This. Needs. A sequel.
Although AppleJack resorted to using dangerous substances in the face of potentially losing her and her family's livelihood to an individual she despised, I find it very hard to place guilt on her. If one's well being and future, and the well being of their loved ones, were abruptly put under intense pressure by some event out of their control, it isn't a surprise that they would justify going, you could say, "the extra mile" to try what they may to help. AppleJack, from what I can deduce, is a being willing of self sacrifice and heroism. She is not swayed by the notion of bringing harm to herself to help preserve others. And in this case in particular, the fact that she took the potion just tells me the lengths she trusts Twilight's mastery in magical practices. I will say, AppleJack's refraining from seeking help when the initial effects of the potion started becoming apparent was a bit odd, but it is easily explained by the fact that it was the potion meddling with her cognitive state. She wasn't in her right mind.
And then we get this ending. Twilight separates all involvement with the horror that occurred by, essentially, gutting AppleJack's utility and innocence from her, proclaiming that she herself had pushed herself into the madness that consumed her and that the fact she was an element would not save her since there was another that could fill that role.
It's honestly disturbing to witness this.
And that is why, there. should be. a sequel.
This leaves on a such a sour note that it makes the viewer desire something to wash that away and bring levity to the tale.
But then again, most horror refuses to do so, instead leaving their stories with bitter ends to make themselves more striking and, perhaps, memorable.
Either way, great story.
Why would there be a sequel? Applejack is in prison for life. Twilight isnt going to come and see her. The other mane 6 will probably be told she died or another lie since twilight is so ready to lie and place all blame off of herself.
@@bluedragon8762 it still would be nice to see
@@rae-rae8005 nice to see sure but would make no sense in accordance with the story
@@bluedragon8762 hm.... Maybe so.
@@bluedragon8762 You do have a point, yes; a realistic sequel to this probably wouldn't be as exciting.
Still, just goes to show how unjust the ending is conveyed.
Moral of the Story: GO. TO. SLEEP.
Jeff? Is that you??
NO!! GO. TO. NANDOS!!!
hello jeff the killer
Jeff the killer
Did you just-
*Applejack stabs Lyra with a shovel*
“We don’t take kindly to spies around here”
Why do I feel like that’s an unintentional TF2 reference
I know I'm 4 years late to this masterpiece of a story but, this was creepy, gory, and sad all at the same time.
The ending made me tear up a little. It showed how AJ was worried sick about what happened to Apple Bloom. Not to mention the fact that Twilight completely denied the fact that she gave AJ the potion in order to keep her perfect reputation. I felt bad for AJ. I'm not saying it was Twilight's fault, but I'm also not saying that it's 100% AJ's fault either. They both did wrong. For me, it's hard to choose who was really "in the wrong". But Twilight denying the fact she gave AJ the potion, id say she's pushed a little more towards the wrong. (in my opinion)
The art also caught my attention the most. It portrayed exactly what was happening, which, in my opinion, made everything more eerie and unsettling. The artists did amazing!
The voice acting, too. They did an amazing job aswell! The narrator's monotone voice creeped me out(not in a bad way) and the way the others voiced the characters, I don't have words to describe how I feel. But in short, I LOVED it!
In my opinion, this story is well-written. Maybe better than any other MLP "creepypastas" lol. But nonetheless, I enjoyed this!
Granny: ”Hold on there Apple jack”
Subtext: hold on a wrinkle chick”
Me: (c" ತ,_ತ)
( 3:25 )
Well thats true but not true
XD XD XD
WELL NOW HOLD ON A MINUTE...WTF
XD
b u t t e r c u p XD
The way Twilight handled the situation at the end is probably the darkest part of this story.
It's easy to criticize her for her decision, but she would have to be quite the big person to take the fall with Applejack. It's cowardly yes, but the show has (obviously) never really put Twilight in a position like that.
It's interesting to speculate how a character might actually react.
I don’t think it was the darkest part but very much mad about but again Twilight did tell AJ that she has not master it so IDK the real blame here
@@Kevin-tx8et
I feel is a situation of unknowing disfortune. It starts out as a freind trying to help the other and then it starts to have shit it the fan at how fast it escalated! Twilight created the potion in a way to help Applejack, and AJ wants to help her family and save them from debt. Two innocent actions ended up in carnage!
This is one of my favorite grimdarks ever.
I always get livid at end hearing Twilight lie revealing her betrayal and coward behavior.
So ridiculously heavy and feels real and disgusting.
I like the grounded the beginning of the story is. The heatwaves ruining the crops and severely impacting a farmer's finances, which are barely enough to support them when harvests are fine, is pretty realistic.
Applejack's descent into insanity also doesn't feel too jarring, unlike a lot of creepypastas. (Up until the mandatory quote from the original Russian Sleep Experiment, that is) Her sleep deprivation led to her becoming emotionally unstable and forgetful, and with her added stress, made her insanely paranoid.
AppleJack: *I AM THE INEVITABLE!!!*
Tony Stark: _..and i am iron man_
*snap*
I AM SHREK
And I'm Kanye West!
And I'm a talking Umbreon!
I'M Jack Tracker the secret intelligent service 😎😎😎
2-3 years passed. It is still the best story I've ever heard yet so sad.. the music and sound effects are just amazing is all
for real its really well made
I randomly remembered this story, and I agree that this is still top tier, narrative and productive wise.
*Something sweet to bite:* Am I a joke to you?
@@PrederNationteam74
OH SHI-
This was 5 years ago lmao
As a person with anger issues the part where she breaks her legs is painfully accurate she was hurting herself but felt no pain I used to punch my metal bedframe but I didn't feel anything I was to mad to rap my head around the pain of it. It's just to accurate.
Just gotta say, the voice acting in this video is fucking phenomenal all around, I can't pick a single person who did a bad job or even alright job. Everyone did fantastic. This video, somehow, has become somewhat of a comfort video for me lol, I really love the twist this story has for the Russian Sleep Experiment and as I said, it sounds amazing. Keep up the amazing work!
5:47
Subtitles auto generated
“YOLO Granny Smith”
Okay but this is basically the story summed up
XDD
Yo wtf facts I just checked
Russian sleep experiment with ponies and a more personal story.
10/10
Jimmy Killeen 11/10
Howzabout 1000/10?
1,000,000/10
1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000/10
∞/10
Absolutely amazing narration, it felt only a step down from a animation. The images/scenery to go along with the story, the music, the voice acting all done amazingly. I love this story it’s so captivating, sad, gruesome, disturbing and I love all of how it’s told. Felt like a different kind of movie but good, and sometimes better in that way.
*Ironically counter to this. I had taken sleeping pills to help myself sleep, spoiler they didn't work. However there was one memory I recalled, I was trying to fall asleep next to my brother, when all of a sudden something zapped me awake, and my heart skipped three beats causing me to jump and fall onto the floor. Needless to say my brother gave me a very confused expression.*
The amount of creativity this fandom has is astounding.
Sure we have categories, good or dark, but even some of the darkest can be so well done it’s unbelievable.
Normally I’m not one to dwell in grimdark fan fics but from your channel, Lost, and from the others, like Scribbler.
I found a growing interest in reading these dark fictions.
From music, to art, to crafting, and writers, the amount so many people have worked on is such a great sight to see.
41:45 those eyes....46:36 that smile......
Applejack has reached a whole new level of crazy
In deed. It was fun painting dose 2 paintings.
Jonsson7 you painted it?
Jonsson7 why would you make something like this?! it's terrifying!
Chant with me guys: *"Sleep Is For The Weak."*
NO JOKE SHES INSANE!!
Idk why I clicked on this thinking it'd be a commentary video or something, but the story and the narration certainly hooked me!
Bruh AJ didn't remember what happened and twilight gave her the potion. AJ should get a lawyer and plead insanity THIS SHIT AIN'T FAIR! # FREE AJ 😤✊🏿
who would win, the entire town of ponyville vs. one sleepy boi
chicken mcnuget I'm laughing so hard, omfg
Obviously the settlement that could use our help I’ll mark it on your map
@@majorityman9607 you made my day 😂😂
One sleepy boi
XD
I love how at the beginning it was really cute but then it slowly gets more and more detailed and more more gruesome
Me too! And what's even better is the tension's there even at the start through hidden details/subtext.
The whole thing was Twilight's fault. She is a PRINCESS for faust sake! She could have GIVEN applejack the money to pay off the debt or last the winter. She also has unlimited reassoures, She could easily make the farm a historic site so Filthy couldn't touch it. But no, let's give AJ an unstable spell and feign guilt and victim blame. The Princess of Friendship everyone!
I love how neither Applejack nor Twilight end up being villains or heros in this story- Applejack begged for the spell in spite of Twilight's warnings and Twilight gave in, knowing that there would be consequences (although I highly doubt that Twilight knew about AJ's state of mind or even thought that AJ would go on a murder spree)
I'm so excited for Another Apple Sleep Experiment's final part and seeing how everything comes together 🧡
Additional note: AJ was stated to have thrown up the potion immediately after drinking it, so there's also that factor 👀
23:16 Applebloom is a unicorn,Sweetie Belle is an earth pony
Wait what?
Nani?!?!
Wah-??? No it's the- opposide of it!?
Wait oh yeah! Now I know
Bro it’s true
Body: I'm tired. Let's go to bed-
Brain: *Bish Please. Sleep Is For The Weak. Now Turn On Every Light In The House!*
Me with every light in the house off: weakling
XDD body: Understandable, have a great day
Be careful not sleeping or else you'll end up like Applejack
The voice acting here was so good! I honestly thought these were the real voice actors (unless they are) and the story is so good! The moral of the story is a very important one, and I’m assuming that by the name, this could’ve been an experiment that twilight set up, and that’s why she’s not admitting to giving applejack the syrum, or somehow she lost her memory such as when she was beaten by applejack
Imagine what it's going to be like for big mac coming home to find out one of his little sisters is died and the other went insane and almost massacred all of ponyville as well as her friends and their sister.
Applejack: "WHO SENT YOU!? You're... you're a SPY!" Me: No Bon Bon is a spy lol
“MY NAME ISN’T BON BON... IT’S SPECIAL AGENT SWEETIE DROPS”
Maggatrix NOO my name is BLUEBLING
Maggatrix
WHO SENT YOU
WHOOOOO
Had a stroke after reading this, it's hilarious but I feel sick for laughing
if there's a spy-at your apple farm WHO YOU GONNA CALL?-THE.PYRO
Moral of the story: if twilight gives you an energy drink, do NOT drink it...
I would. The records I could set from no sleep
Lol
Or better yet, don't ask for her help she might betrayed you in the end just to save herself and reputation
Maybe that potion was a drug
Apple jack shouldn't have asked for the potion. But Twilight shouldn't have forgotten that this happened because she gave that dangerous potion to Apple Jack when she knew it wasn't safe.Though I can't put all the murderers that Apple Jack did on Twilight.
Why are mlp creepypastas are unironically good
*everyone: ITS SO SCARY.*
*me: yeah but the art is MASTERPIECE.*
When Applejack keeps calling Lyra spy keeps reminding me of TF2.
Spy:*choke* *choke*
Engineer:Shut up you spy!
I think this is everyponys fault:
Granny Smith for making the deal,
Applejack by taking this measures
and Twilight for not taking the blame for the potion.
Yeah you can say Granny thinks there are no more options and Twilight advise AJ about the effects.
But as for Twilight she have to act like a princess and not just let AJ without an answer about her sister and just let her like that until de day AJ dies.
Twi must be joking.
AJ is the element of honesty and no one can't take her place just like that.
That's not how the elements of harmony works and even less how friendship works.
Twilight is not worth for the element of Magic.
Not anymore.
As for the VA's good job. I really love it.
All work very professional in my opinion.
Besides, how many times have Applejack helped Twilight?
BRUH TWILIGHT BLAMED HERSELF FOR THE GODDAMN POTION!!!!
@Arielle Stephens Calm down? I'm calm, this is just my conclusion to the story xD
Finn [Redacted] what i think they meant is how twilight never took the fault in the end of the story, and instead of helping applejack (albeit not many ways you can do that) she lied to applejack, locked her away, and abandoned her. Yes, she took the guilt at first, but once her own image was at stake, she pinned it onto applejack.
Finn [Redacted] I understand where you’re coming from, and I’m in no way saying Applejack wasn’t at fault, the only thing that I think puts a thorn in my side is that Twilight lied to applejack in the end, expecting her to believe it. I personally do believe majority are in the wrong, but to me Twilight and Applejack are a gray area of wrongdoing.
Twilight absolutely sold AJ down the river. If she was found to have enabled this then she'd be the one being stripped of Princesshood and Element. Starlight Glimmer could easy give Twilight a run for Element of Magic. Twilight would end up like Sunset - outcast from her position at Celestia's side. Far easier for Twi to have the Element of Honesty replaced by the biggest threat to her (Starlight) and hide behind 'the good of Equestria because I need to be the one with the answers'. You can tell by the way certain lines are written/phrased. Too much at stake for Twi to lose, better to offer up a scapegoat.
This story was so sad yet so amazing!