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  • @sam_isnt_real
    @sam_isnt_real 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +213

    wish me luck!! i just submitted my application today! :D
    UPDATE: i got accepted and i'll be going to montclair this fall!! thank you for this video!!

    • @veronicasmemories
      @veronicasmemories 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +21

      Congratulations! I'm submitting my applications for grad school this week!

    • @ShakiraRao
      @ShakiraRao 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Can u please give your insta @ ,I really want to discuss about certain things!!

    • @carloscastillo4346
      @carloscastillo4346 13 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

  • @yasamanraeisi2909
    @yasamanraeisi2909 2 ปีที่แล้ว +242

    I'm applying in two months wish me luck :)

    • @rovan3554
      @rovan3554 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      and? Do they accepted your essay?

    • @sincerelysaa
      @sincerelysaa ปีที่แล้ว +4

      update?

    • @scoobydoo7220
      @scoobydoo7220 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Any luck? Wherever you end up, I bet you'll do incredible regardless!

    • @lee-annnabila3299
      @lee-annnabila3299 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Good luck🙏

    • @yasamanraeisi2909
      @yasamanraeisi2909 ปีที่แล้ว +49

      Guys I got rejected 😂😂😂😂

  • @admissionsgames
    @admissionsgames ปีที่แล้ว +72

    Helpful brainstorming technique is to think through the experiences you have in your day that are unique to you. I didn't get this until we all ready stories about what family dinner looked like in AP Lang -- completely different across the different students.

  • @Sssss2t
    @Sssss2t ปีที่แล้ว +78

    I am international student and I am writing my essays to apply for Harvard and Cornell. Wish me luck!!

    • @imaginationpictures
      @imaginationpictures 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Good luck!!

    • @LUKA-kh6db
      @LUKA-kh6db 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      how did it go ?

    • @Blep._
      @Blep._ 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      how'd it go?

    • @Monestfiks
      @Monestfiks 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      I wanna do that to ! Does anyone have any tips for me i'm 15 i did some Math Olympiads and did a lot of math ! I wanna get into cornell

    • @mia1535
      @mia1535 หลายเดือนก่อน

      did you get in??????

  • @bryiannamorris
    @bryiannamorris 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    they ask such simple questions i still feel like i have to put so much into it like omg

  • @fillahbanda4664
    @fillahbanda4664 ปีที่แล้ว +34

    All steps are important you can't skip any of them. Will use these next year when writing my essays

  • @raouf9592
    @raouf9592 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

    I'm gonna start writing my essay this summer !

    • @pookie-s5p9h
      @pookie-s5p9h 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Hope you get a college you deserve and are satisfied with! Good Luck!

    • @BillieLovesYou
      @BillieLovesYou 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      same!

    • @keirabellasxo881
      @keirabellasxo881 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Me too

  • @emmaluo1832
    @emmaluo1832 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    One of my classmates got into Harvard. I asked how she got in and it was no surprise to how much work she had put in. Not going to be rude, but I'm deadass going to describe her. She's always been that one kid with very minimal friends. Always talked to herself and walk in circles. You never know what's going on in her head. She'd always get straight As and participated in a lot of climate change protests. She would trade her entire summer to volunteer ever since grade 9 and joined almost every club in the school. Even clubs that were at the verge of extinction. Honestly I don't think she achieved anything super big like inventing something new to get into Harvard. All she did was prove that she's actively participating and connecting with the world.

  • @Iman-zb1vc
    @Iman-zb1vc 2 ปีที่แล้ว +94

    I have already applied to Harvard for REA, I definitely did exactly what she said.

    • @aspirant1060
      @aspirant1060 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I also applied! 🥰

    • @bruhhvalo7594
      @bruhhvalo7594 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Y’all got in?

    • @Iman-zb1vc
      @Iman-zb1vc 2 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      @@bruhhvalo7594 no, I got rejected.

    • @cleverkeily776
      @cleverkeily776 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Which one is better: applying to early decision or regular?

    • @ryana8232
      @ryana8232 2 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      @@Iman-zb1vc you got rejected because you listened to her advice

  • @Yanks4life99
    @Yanks4life99 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Good video! Starting to write my college essay. Going into senior year in high school!

    • @kami_ow1366
      @kami_ow1366 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      same man im so lost

  • @lawrisdiallo2558
    @lawrisdiallo2558 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    I am in 7th grade but I am starting to think about the colleges I would love to go to and be prepared

    • @ashleymiranda5188
      @ashleymiranda5188 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Omg😢I thought I was alone. All my friends say I am crazy because I am planning all the things I want to do in highschool and other things like my top colleges and my passion project ext . I want to be a vet now am planning but when I turn at 14, I am putting my plan in action by starting to sign up for scholarships so I can save for college and vet school and lots of other things I have like 3 pages in document. 😅

    • @Dresstoimpress990
      @Dresstoimpress990 5 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      Guys I think you should just relax until high school starts, it's good to have a plan but you should also just live life and have fun

  • @alondrie4366
    @alondrie4366 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    The essays have to always being a type of storyline? THe question I am writing of is "TELL US ABOUT WHO YOU ARE. HOW WOULD YOUR FAMILY, FRIENDS, AND/OR MEMBERS OF YOUR COMMUNITY DESCRIBE YOU? IF POSSIBLE, PLEASE INCLUDE SOMETHING ABOUT YOURSELF THAT YOU ARE MOST PROUD OF AND WHY." And currently I am just adding the description of my self as bullet points, with very specific descriptions and feelings but I am not really sharing any story. So... I am really worried

  • @sahilkarki8811
    @sahilkarki8811 2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Thanks for real advice Harvard and Harvard community.

  • @hizkiapermata5206
    @hizkiapermata5206 2 ปีที่แล้ว +49

    Im currently writing a college essay for Harvard. Hope to get admitted.

    • @laumendcs
      @laumendcs 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      same!

    • @hizkiapermata5206
      @hizkiapermata5206 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      @@laumendcs wow great. Hope your admitted and hope to see each other on Campus :)

    • @laumendcs
      @laumendcs 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      God bless us

    • @hizkiapermata5206
      @hizkiapermata5206 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@laumendcs amen

    • @nothashiyoutube
      @nothashiyoutube 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      i wish you the best of luck

  • @bereketbitew551
    @bereketbitew551 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I'm gonna struggle! Wish me luck guys!!

  • @lol-ue3rg
    @lol-ue3rg 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    have to submit my essay in less than 6 days i’m so nervous 😭😭😭

  • @cristiancervantes4376
    @cristiancervantes4376 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Thank you this will help my essay I promise I will be writing essay

  • @gammawammajamma
    @gammawammajamma 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    currently a junior ;-; starting my uni essay now in hopes of an acceptance from columbia or hunter

  • @zanmar6764
    @zanmar6764 17 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    I can’t think of anything at all.

  • @xabibakarimova634
    @xabibakarimova634 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I have a question. If all students have to write their own essays, how will you determine if that particular student wrote it? I mean, if the student's essay is written by another person. After all, the writing of that student himself is not checked, is it not?

    • @alondrie4366
      @alondrie4366 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      well, they can´t. I think that the important part of writing it yourself is that, since this questions ask about you, you are the person who knows you the most and add the best description to yourself

    • @amistrophy
      @amistrophy 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@alondrie4366 they can sorta get a feeling off of how your other supplementals (or EC short answers even) are written

  • @thebosstex1172
    @thebosstex1172 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Question for anyone: I have a strength of writing pretty well. I’m no author though, nor in any profession I could use it for. I also feel like I could hone it more. What major in college should I go for that could potentially lead to a career that pays thrivable or even lucrative income?

    • @Ben_579
      @Ben_579 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Journalism, Play or Screenwriters, I think those could be great!

    • @shamsa9227
      @shamsa9227 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      I would say maybe a field in research? Applying research in your writing could definitely land you a stable job.

    • @Dresstoimpress990
      @Dresstoimpress990 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I replied to your comment somewhere else too but I think there's many careers with writing so if you have any other interests you could find a career with them combined

  • @TokaHassan-n1r
    @TokaHassan-n1r 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I am really concerned about how can i inform the university that i am the right student that will benefit them behind . is it by showing my personality and my leader service commitments

  • @AshleyChing-c3o
    @AshleyChing-c3o 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Happiness and pride then free associate

    • @AshleyChing-c3o
      @AshleyChing-c3o 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Authentic voice, another set of eyes for advice and feedback

  • @MireilleLaverty
    @MireilleLaverty 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    A question to anybody out there reading these comments. Obviously it would be unethical to have an AI tool write your essay. Would it be ethical to have one proofread your work? Thanks for your input.

    • @davidlovett4282
      @davidlovett4282 28 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      I think Grammarly is ok to use to check your Grammar, but I'm no expert.

    • @Dresstoimpress990
      @Dresstoimpress990 5 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      I don't think it would be unethical, but I would just not trust it idk why so maybe have a teacher proofread it!

  • @leenstouch2193
    @leenstouch2193 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    ⁠​⁠hey I have a question I’m really trying to get an answer for a while , so what do u mean extracurricular like are those held by the school bcs I’m outside us and in our school we don’t have such thing as extracurricular or it is not held by school or related to the school like we just what do we do for that extracurricular

    • @zeemouu
      @zeemouu 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      anything not related to academics so can be things in school like a school club or stuff outside school too like internships etc

  • @sbahlemichelle2968
    @sbahlemichelle2968 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    AT what grade/year can I start applying and preparing ? BTW I'm currently in grade 11.

    • @excusemequeencomingthrough7684
      @excusemequeencomingthrough7684 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      same here, i think it's better to start now

    • @jessy7843
      @jessy7843 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Start Now, it's a lot easier

    • @giantasiansticker8068
      @giantasiansticker8068 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      I started preparing in 8th grade I’m in 9th now and preparing for things I’m going to take next 1-2 yrs

  • @mssalejandro
    @mssalejandro ปีที่แล้ว +3

    IM APPLYING IN 22 DAYS, WISH ME LOOK :)

    • @vanshikap3050
      @vanshikap3050 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Well did u get in?

  • @ognjenpilipovic334
    @ognjenpilipovic334 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Is the word limit still 650?????

  • @TheBirdGeek
    @TheBirdGeek 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I am seven and I’m almost 8 and I literally searched up what to do for your college essay. I don’t know why and then

    • @MrSnorlaxz
      @MrSnorlaxz 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      I'm a little older, 11. I recommend just to focus on your extra curricular and try to know what might make you stand out. 10 more years to know, just grow our your social life. Trust me, join clubs and sports asap.

    • @pookie-s5p9h
      @pookie-s5p9h 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@MrSnorlaxz Real, i should've started to worry about my ECs, Stats and essay since elementary or middle school or maybe since i was in the womb. Its too late for me now, I guess only a community college will accept me.

    • @MrSnorlaxz
      @MrSnorlaxz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@pookie-s5p9h dang. I did not expect this comment. I wish you the greatest luck in the passing future

    • @leenstouch2193
      @leenstouch2193 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      ⁠@@MrSnorlaxzhey I have a question I’m really trying to get an answer for a while , so what do u mean extracurricular like are those held by the school bcs I’m outside us and in our school we don’t have such thing as extracurricular or it is not held by school or related to the school like we just what do we do for that extracurricular

    • @MrSnorlaxz
      @MrSnorlaxz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@leenstouch2193 well, things like sports or clubs or social events like math team, discovering a new cell and researching on it and even working can all be an “extracurricular”. It doesn’t really matter it can be held at school or even out. There’s some crazy things you can call as extracurriculars that they approve of, for example volunteering for a social project like a library or even tutoring people as a nonprofit.

  • @jaryncoleman208
    @jaryncoleman208 8 วันที่ผ่านมา

    How does this hook sound, "Andrew Carnegie’s, one of the wealthiest men to walk the planet, grave read “Here lies a man who was able to surround himself with men far cleverer than himself."

  • @valentinaravaioli5165
    @valentinaravaioli5165 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thank you!!

  • @likereally1485
    @likereally1485 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Is anyone willing to reqd my personal essay i dont have anyone to ask and dont know how to get a collehe advisor😭🙏

    • @izzatillousmonov5126
      @izzatillousmonov5126 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hey, I think we can help each other. I need a partner on this. What do you say?

    • @mishal81
      @mishal81 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@izzatillousmonov5126hey you can join me

    • @Dresstoimpress990
      @Dresstoimpress990 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

      did you end up getting in wherever you applied?

  • @krup9898
    @krup9898 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you!

  • @ellegarrels2317
    @ellegarrels2317 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    thank u bestie

  • @truthlife3142
    @truthlife3142 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Can you give me some examples for writing essay for your college application

  • @doubleA5
    @doubleA5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Looking for a couple of great writers I can pay to finsih my papers throughout this school year. May you reach out if anyone is interested in making some money for writing essays, and helping me throughout my college year.

    • @hellobruh4209
      @hellobruh4209 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'll do it........ although English isn't my first language I'm proficient enough to write papers and collegiate level essays. It will also be cheaper for you since you'll pay me in dollars and I live in a country where the exchange rate works in your favour. Let me know where I can contact you.

  • @HumbleDuckM9
    @HumbleDuckM9 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Applying today and writing it today 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅

  • @samkim7466
    @samkim7466 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    great video

  • @jinnam6822
    @jinnam6822 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    😁thanks

  • @MariadeLourdesAniesSanch-ze7hf
    @MariadeLourdesAniesSanch-ze7hf 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I like help me...
    because for me sleep forever

  • @reubenmanners5209
    @reubenmanners5209 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I just use chat GPT. Then modify it😂

  • @Aaronasmrsleeep
    @Aaronasmrsleeep 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The video ended in 4:20 lollll

  • @Sssss2t
    @Sssss2t ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I am international student and I am writing my essays to apply for Harvard and Cornell. Wish me luck!!

    • @cringe1488
      @cringe1488 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      GL

    • @MichiganUSASingaporeSEAsia
      @MichiganUSASingaporeSEAsia 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Cornell is good as well as university of Michigan, Western Michigan University and Michigan Technology University

    • @vanshikap3050
      @vanshikap3050 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Did u get in?

    • @leenstouch2193
      @leenstouch2193 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@vanshikap3050​​⁠​⁠hey I have a question I’m really trying to get an answer for a while , so what do u mean extracurricular like are those held by the school bcs I’m outside us and in our school we don’t have such thing as extracurricular or it is not held by school or related to the school like we just what do we do for that extracurricular

    • @leenstouch2193
      @leenstouch2193 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ⁠​⁠hey I have a question I’m really trying to get an answer for a while , so what do u mean extracurricular like are those held by the school bcs I’m outside us and in our school we don’t have such thing as extracurricular or it is not held by school or related to the school like we just what do we do for that extracurricular