I am literally so deeply moved, because of what you said: “Parents are the roof that protect the house, the leaves that shield the branches. Without the walls the roof comes crashing down, without the branches leaves flattern to the ground (…) Perhaps the world is nothing. When the leaves flattern to the ground, the wind scatters them, leaving no memory of their existence”. This vivid way of describing the position of parents who lost their kids is EPIC. It really does help to understand the gravity of the situation and feel the emotions you describe.Thank you for making this video!
I really admired her way of writing. She is the most competent writer I have ever come across when it comes to scholarships. I am so jealous(in a positive way, I will practice).
Your essays inspire me. You have a unique character that everyone should emulate . I'm glad I stumbled on your video and I hope and know I'll see you in Yale 2023
Hey, do you know there is a way you can avoid doing assignments ever again but still get great grades? It's a simple trick that will blow your mind: th-cam.com/video/Qcz790uxHFQ/w-d-xo.html
hi, I’m a Baha’i from Vietnam. Watching this video really give me a sense of familiarity since you mentioned the faith quite regularly. I also dream to get into Yale some day as well ^^ congrats on your achievement, those essays really touched my heart!
Beautiful! the fact that you put little anecdotes about your parents + sister and what you learnt from them is brilliant. it is something very simple but has a profound impact on the reader.
Alla’u’abha dear friend! I’m a Baha’i from Macao, China, Hong Kong, China and Canada who had some physical problems that stunted my academic growth, I only did semester 1 of Bachelors. However, I just got accepted into a MA in creative writing by a uni in UK, they waived my BA requirement because my writing sample was good enough. I’d love to attend or teach at Harvard some day. Unity in diversity and independent investigation of the truth are my favorite Baha’i values.
your essays are amazing! and your name is so pretty. a lot of videos like these demoralize me and make me depise both myself and the people who can do, what i think i couldnt, but not YOURS! your essay about your family was inspiring - i love how you totally caught us off guard with what you chose! how did you know what essays you wanted, and choose your ec, so on?
This is some genuinely beautiful writing. Thank you for the video, was definitely helpful now that I'm starting to think about what I want to write about
take advantage of all of the opportunities presented to you. join clubs, take up leadership positions, and enter contests. above all, do what YOU want to do
Just start a club of anything to help community- with 3 friends and grow it all 4 years. Ivy’s love lots of volunteer hours so find 1 organization and devote 4 years to it and be a leader by junior year. Find any kind of internship by sophomore/ junior year--it can be small. Take 2 AP in freshman and 3 in sophomore year etc and keep that GPA up--what ever it takes. Start taking the psat and get High scores on it. All doors open when you become a national merit finalist-scholarship, all colleges. Ivies also love tutoring youngsters-- so start teaching elementary kids 2,3 of them anything....music, reading,math. Ivies/ top colleges love starters, leaders, volunteers, high scores. Don’t do clubs only 1-2. Be a leader to start a new club--far better than winning contests.
I meant to say speech and debate, journalism, robotics all 4 years in any of these are considered intelligent activities by ivies;.... don’t make athletics your focus, definitely do it,
For anyone who’s feeling down: Romans 8:18 “The pain you’ve been feeling can’t compare to the joy that is coming!” John 3:16 “For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son that whosoever believes in Him shall not perish but have eternal life.” Whatever is going on right now, have faith, your situation will get better. :) Jesus bless anyone reading this and have a great day!!🥰✨💖
I'm on the verge of writing my UChicago supplement and I can't lie, I'm as confused as you were. I have no idea how to get it done. I hope your video helps me to get to my destination. Thanks for the video though .
omg are you kidding, you write like a star. these essays are genuinely beautiful and pretty sure the committee couldnt deny you an acceptance
I am literally so deeply moved, because of what you said: “Parents are the roof that protect the house, the leaves that shield the branches. Without the walls the roof comes crashing down, without the branches leaves flattern to the ground (…) Perhaps the world is nothing. When the leaves flattern to the ground, the wind scatters them, leaving no memory of their existence”. This vivid way of describing the position of parents who lost their kids is EPIC. It really does help to understand the gravity of the situation and feel the emotions you describe.Thank you for making this video!
It’s the essay making me cry for me
@Luis Forest wut?
Your last essay was absolutely beautiful, and it brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing it!
I really admired her way of writing. She is the most competent writer I have ever come across when it comes to scholarships. I am so jealous(in a positive way, I will practice).
Your essays inspire me. You have a unique character that everyone should emulate . I'm glad I stumbled on your video and I hope and know I'll see you in Yale 2023
Hey, do you know there is a way you can avoid doing assignments ever again but still get great grades? It's a simple trick that will blow your mind: th-cam.com/video/Qcz790uxHFQ/w-d-xo.html
did you get into Yale?
2023 bro
Did u do it?
I'm not even near college age yet but I'm just listening for the sake of hearing beautiful, poetic words and stories to please my ears.
Actually unbelievable. They were all very well written and I hope to one day write an essay as interesting yours.
hi, I’m a Baha’i from Vietnam. Watching this video really give me a sense of familiarity since you mentioned the faith quite regularly. I also dream to get into Yale some day as well ^^ congrats on your achievement, those essays really touched my heart!
I loved how your essays were soo personal and relatable but at the same time brilliant enough to get you into the ivy leagues .
Beautiful! the fact that you put little anecdotes about your parents + sister and what you learnt from them is brilliant. it is something very simple but has a profound impact on the reader.
This essay is so good and inspired me as a child to Kenyan immigrants, I relate a lot.
You're such a talented writer! Congratulations on all of your acceptances
Now I know how high the bar is 😭😭
These Essays were amazing !!
as someone who was part of bahai youth groups, this was so inspiring. thank you for sharing your experiences and essays!
Alla’u’abha dear friend! I’m a Baha’i from Macao, China, Hong Kong, China and Canada who had some physical problems that stunted my academic growth, I only did semester 1 of Bachelors. However, I just got accepted into a MA in creative writing by a uni in UK, they waived my BA requirement because my writing sample was good enough. I’d love to attend or teach at Harvard some day. Unity in diversity and independent investigation of the truth are my favorite Baha’i values.
The essay is so amazing. I'm from Ethiopia and i'm watching your vid's. They are so nice i love you. And i love that you are Eritrean
Kenean Samuel wow like Nipsey Hussle
I knew it. Am from Ethiopia and new right away she was from our hood
not even kidding this almost made me cry!! aaaaa goosebumps
Ur voice is angelic and the essay is amazingg
Words cannot describe how beautifully scripted and unique your essay was. Thank you for sharing it :)
Jese, that's the best essay I have ever heard. Respect
the last sentence of the common app essay was so good, loved all the essays!!
the way you portray your admiration for your parents is so beautiful; loved it!
as soon as i clicked on the video i was like “wow she’s so pretty.. she looks habesha” LMDAOOA
The best essay I’ve ever listened!
your common app was beautiful! i love the way it was worded and you're storytelling is great
Your essays are amazing
I love your essays, I am trying to write mine now and still stuck. Really love the essays
This is really random, but the whole video I was just distracted by how pretty you are
Actually 😭😭
Same 😆
More creepy than random, but okay
W rizz ?
Same
This essay gave me tears 😢 unique, creative and inspiring
I am from Eritrean too and my parents went through the same thing as yours and it's just amazing how you wrote it.
your essays are amazing! and your name is so pretty. a lot of videos like these demoralize me and make me depise both myself and the people who can do, what i think i couldnt, but not YOURS! your essay about your family was inspiring - i love how you totally caught us off guard with what you chose!
how did you know what essays you wanted, and choose your ec, so on?
Thank you for sharing. The essay about parents who lost a child, should be recorded as a spoken word piece/poem.
This is some genuinely beautiful writing. Thank you for the video, was definitely helpful now that I'm starting to think about what I want to write about
Bro beautiful essay!
Ps-you should write a book, I’d totally read it!
this is genuinely incredible
omg wonderful!! all of your responses were wonderful wow.
Ok, but all of your essays are incredible!!!!!!! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Literally full body chills
Wooow your essays are soooo great.This is good thumbs up! I've really learnt a lot.
hopefully i can get better at writing when i write my essay in 5 years
I am literally inspired by your story and such a beautiful essays indeed Leleda.
Powerful 🖤 & your hair is EVERYTHING 🖤
weird question, what's your favorite book/ type of book you read?
literal chills!!!
Bro YOU ARE SO GOOD
This was very inspiring! thank you for sharing your wonderful experience
That last essay of yours needs to be published somewhere!
OMG 🥺 THANK YOU SO MUCH,MY BELOVED SISTER💕💕💕
i couldnt help crying by the end of this video
this is so cool! im from asmara eritrea too!
Thank you so much for this video , I loved all your essays.
LOVE the hairstyle!
I'm a freshman (as of this year) and I want to take steps to getting me into an ivy league school. Please help me!!
take advantage of all of the opportunities presented to you. join clubs, take up leadership positions, and enter contests. above all, do what YOU want to do
Just start a club of anything to help community- with 3 friends and grow it all 4 years. Ivy’s love lots of volunteer hours so find 1 organization and devote 4 years to it and be a leader by junior year. Find any kind of internship by sophomore/ junior year--it can be small. Take 2 AP in freshman and 3 in sophomore year etc and keep that GPA up--what ever it takes. Start taking the psat and get High scores on it. All doors open when you become a national merit finalist-scholarship, all colleges. Ivies also love tutoring youngsters-- so start teaching elementary kids 2,3 of them anything....music, reading,math. Ivies/ top colleges love starters, leaders, volunteers, high scores. Don’t do clubs only 1-2. Be a leader to start a new club--far better than winning contests.
I meant to say speech and debate, journalism, robotics all 4 years in any of these are considered intelligent activities by ivies;.... don’t make athletics your focus, definitely do it,
Oh gosh your writing is amazing!
You are so pretty 😭
I love your essays!! I have a questions though, does each university have its own personal statement prompt?
some require their own short supplemental essays
elelelelleelele congrats konjit!
Hello i want to ask if i should write my 2021 common app essay in paragraphs or should i just write one long essay with no paragraphs
Always write essays with paragraphs
this is good to watch
youre glowingg
For anyone who’s feeling down:
Romans 8:18 “The pain you’ve been feeling can’t compare to the joy that is coming!” John 3:16 “For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son that whosoever believes in Him shall not perish but have eternal life.” Whatever is going on right now, have faith, your situation will get better. :) Jesus bless anyone reading this and have a great day!!🥰✨💖
Gwen Shin My pleasure!! Know that you are loved sis! By Him and me! God bless you!!🙏🏽✨💖
God bless you for this!!💗💗
Thank you so much. God bless you, sister!
I like your easy. Because it contains natural life history and wisdom.
Me tryna replicate this 💀
Lmao thx for the inspiration tho
Be original!
😭😭
You are amaaaazing!!!
off topic but you and your entire family are so pretty
How exactly do you come up with such amazing essays ❤❤ it’s wonderful, no wonder you got in🎉🎉
how long did it take you in total to write your essays and supplemental questions?
They say 20+ hours
Honestly I love you
Just asking, did you do the SAT
Beautiful essay!
PaperGen is the best way to write long papers and stay clear of AI detection!
Will you make a life at Yale vlog ?
I'm also Eritrean and its my dream to go to Yale.
Love your hair. ❤️❤️❤️
She didn’t have a laptop and wrote everything on her mobile phone😭
So inspiring! You're so cute! And so smart!
Did you apply to UT Austin ?? I have had a hard time deciding on where to apply and trying to see if many even found it as an option??
Great essay!!
What's are some books you recommend?
Thank you for sharing. You are loved.
Love u so much ❤❤❤❤❤❤
I knew you are from Ethiopia/ Eritrea when I saw ur face. BTW your essay is amazing.
your hair is gorgeous and you are as well
That was amazing 😮.
Thank you for the video butt your so pretty
Do you also read essays and give feedback? Thanks
I'm on the verge of writing my UChicago supplement and I can't lie, I'm as confused as you were. I have no idea how to get it done. I hope your video helps me to get to my destination. Thanks for the video though .
love from ethiopia
Sending you love from east africa 💕💕
please make a video about you extracurriculars
What's your favorite book?
Can't find the first part of this video
Ummm ur stunning
Ikr!! So preeettttyyyy
Do you have a video on like your high school statistics (just for reference).
omg Im a bahai too this is so inspiring!
are u habesha🤔
4:08
I have a doubt if u get also into Stanford,But what is the reason for choosing Yale over Stanford?