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Liked the video, i think if you had a nice flow , but at 1:09 u broke the flow of the storytelling to give ur spoiler why are u saying this story. But u have nice image, looks, setup behind you, music, it felt so interesting to hear the story, but you broke it. I think if u will have script behind the camera and will read it in nice slow perfect flow while telling ur story in a nice uninterrupted, unedited way. This will attract people, thats why i just subscribed after getting recommended ur video. Keep the video easy to listen on background - success will come.
Thanks for your comment! Would you prefer if I just read off the script and looked down more? I was hesitating to look down, but the goal is to keep my voice as a background and it will be easier if i keep looking down.