Using Active vs. Passive Voice when Storytelling

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  • @alexanderlyon
    @alexanderlyon  ปีที่แล้ว +2

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  • @breathewellcoaching
    @breathewellcoaching ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I always learn something new, thanks Coach Alex. I like all the examples you used to illustrate this lesson.

  • @acp4343
    @acp4343 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I'm sure that there are others out there that combine the theory and the practical as well as Coach Alexander, but I haven't come across them yet - a gold mine!

    • @alexanderlyon
      @alexanderlyon  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      That is too kind. Thank you.

    • @allbusinessbasics
      @allbusinessbasics ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It's a dream of mine to get even CLOSE to his ability to blend those two so well. His new book is exactly the same.

  • @MebsTejpar-ty6ct
    @MebsTejpar-ty6ct ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I am going to use my active voice "You create winning videos coach Alex! " Thank you for this lesson on Active and passive voice. It was really interesting to learn this.

  • @itry09
    @itry09 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Think your Lisa for recommending this beautifull and interersting channel 🙏

    • @alexanderlyon
      @alexanderlyon  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thanks for coming. Lisa is amazing.,

    • @itry09
      @itry09 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@alexanderlyon thanks a lot .

  • @gladyfaithmalompong9386
    @gladyfaithmalompong9386 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Many thanks. Learning is incredibly fascinating.

  • @ladydove5895
    @ladydove5895 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    As an English speaker myself. You have taught me so much. Thank you!

  • @rawls101
    @rawls101 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Great video Alex!
    I would add that sometimes in storytelling, there are moments you may want to make the reader feel that sense of "distance" or "disconnect". When we listen or read your "X" Passive example for instance, that's exactly the feeling it gives... distance. Almost as if the character telling it feels nothing for what they're sharing, or that perhaps they felt that way once, but are emotionally hurt in someway, so when they say "The contentment of family was felt" you actually sense the opposite from the character telling you that fact. Almost an air of sadness.

  • @alexanderlyon
    @alexanderlyon  ปีที่แล้ว +1

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  • @allbesoulkind
    @allbesoulkind ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I was just about to start an essay & went to put on a track that cleanses mind from distracting thoughts ... & Hey Presto! You were there on cue to help me with beginning the piece & successfully drinking my tea whilst hot!
    Thank You for y0ur Conscious PrEssence ❤️
    All Love & Gratitude 🙏

  • @nakijjobashamim1506
    @nakijjobashamim1506 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great video Alex helping us the introverts

  • @annemariemiguel2541
    @annemariemiguel2541 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Love this. Will use in my HS class. So well explained and exampled. :) And will check for more. Thanks

  • @bwilsonbp
    @bwilsonbp ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Another great video, Alex. I encourage my students to use storytelling in speeches to boost engagement and active listening. I like your short videos and recommend your new book Positive Communication for leaders. Keep up the good work.

    • @alexanderlyon
      @alexanderlyon  ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for sharing my content and being so supportive!

  • @carltoncartyjr6625
    @carltoncartyjr6625 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow! I’m glad found your channel. I use a passive voice in my communication. Thank you for the actionable steps.

  • @FLOATERSEL
    @FLOATERSEL ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I want to thank you for the great video. God bless

  • @depg49
    @depg49 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great tips! Thank you!

  • @INTJATarot
    @INTJATarot ปีที่แล้ว +1

    interesting, thank you

  • @israelkur2018
    @israelkur2018 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is an amazing video; I really enjoyed it. Thanks, Mr. Alex, for sharing it.

  • @brendagraham8611
    @brendagraham8611 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Tip! Reading children's books aloud is a good way to practice inflection for an active voice.

  • @eva-mariacoughlin9456
    @eva-mariacoughlin9456 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so very much for your advice, lately I am asked to tell some stories of my travels and I do not want to lose the attention of my listeners. English is my second language so I appreciate every tip and advice I can get, God bless you! 😊

  • @allbusinessbasics
    @allbusinessbasics ปีที่แล้ว

    This is awesome! I LOVE the level of technical detail here with the sentence breakdowns. I straight up laughed at the part about diluting action verbs followed by a gerund. I do that ALL the time and will keep a close eye on it now! As always, thank you for the excellent content, Alex!

    • @alexanderlyon
      @alexanderlyon  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thanks. I wouldn't dare bring up the word _gerund_ in a video. People would unsubscribe! Ha. I'm pushing my luck diagraming the most basic parts of a sentence. It's a tough sell and I appreciate your positive feedback.

    • @allbusinessbasics
      @allbusinessbasics ปีที่แล้ว

      @@alexanderlyon Haha! Well, you do an excellent job keeping it simple and explaining as you go. 😃

  • @kellyflykelly5300
    @kellyflykelly5300 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Politicians are wizards at using passive language when something doesn’t behoove them!

  • @AllanLimosin
    @AllanLimosin ปีที่แล้ว

    I use passive voice in a sentence when the actor itself is unsure or unknown and when it is general. Sometimes, I use it when the previous sentence clearly indicates the actor but it can be misleading.

  • @PascalBachmann
    @PascalBachmann ปีที่แล้ว

    Active and passive voices both offer unique nuances in storytelling, enriching narratives with varied perspectives and tones.

  • @richarddebono7092
    @richarddebono7092 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks Alex. Do you offer any one on one coaching?

    • @alexanderlyon
      @alexanderlyon  ปีที่แล้ว

      No, I don't. But I do have a group coaching program. If you're on the waitlist, you'll hear about when enrollment opens (it's not open for new clients currently). You can see it on my website. Links are below every video.

  • @AndiRose21
    @AndiRose21 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Not calling you out, just reminding viewers that actual masters of communication do know how to sprinkle in passive sentences as needed, which allows the listener to draw conclusions as well as not feel “accused” when there is suggestive text or talk, while maintaining a mostly active voice dialogue. Normally this is seen as dialogue which may include passive voice switching to a story, in active voice as an example.
    Learning to balance speech as well as when and why is also important.

    • @alexanderlyon
      @alexanderlyon  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yes, I agree. There's sometimes a good reason to use a passive voice. The trouble is, people usually struggle to use active voice.

    • @theschoolofbodylanguage
      @theschoolofbodylanguage ปีที่แล้ว

      Congratulations Alex🎉

  • @lupirite6373
    @lupirite6373 ปีที่แล้ว

    Umm, German is SVO, for example: "Gib mir deine Hand" (Give me your hand) is word for word the same as English, the verb order rules are slightly different; however in 80% of the cases it is the same.

    • @alexanderlyon
      @alexanderlyon  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you for sharing. I don't speak German, as mentioned. I read a couple of things online about how it wasn't an SVO language but I don't have first-hand knowledge about it.

    • @lupirite6373
      @lupirite6373 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@alexanderlyon Totally fine, there are Many misconceptions about German. It's really a very beautiful language and actually pretty easy for an English speaker to learn. Did you know that English is actually a Germanic language not a latin based one? It has loads of latin words, but the grammar and more commonly used words tend to be very similar to German.

  • @wayneyadams
    @wayneyadams ปีที่แล้ว

    1:12 I had to take two years of German for my language requirement in college and the grammar is brutal. They will put the verb at the end of the sentence at the drop of a hat. The worst part is figuring out which verb goes last when the sentence has more than one verb.

  • @abdullaalteneiji6533
    @abdullaalteneiji6533 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hvcc