Original Song - Neon Blue (Instrumental)

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  • @astorrhymemaster
    @astorrhymemaster  10 หลายเดือนก่อน +60

    Though what I've uploaded is an instrumental, it does have lyrics:
    [Verse 1]
    Brand new trends, impossible to track,
    Once it starts, no looking back.
    I'm left behind, I can't keep up.
    But I'm so close, I'm on the cusp.
    [Chorus]
    Neon blue sign over my head,
    Color of calm, color of dread.
    Blue like the sky,
    Ever heavy eyes,
    Watching all the people passing by.
    Neon blue sign over a bar,
    The only light against the dark,
    Drink already done,
    Waiting for the sun,
    Waiting for that one big hit to come.
    [Verse 2]
    Little red dots, little red dots,
    I want them badly, I can't stop.
    I want to say I'm better, I know I'm not
    Maybe this time, maybe this time.
    It could be good, it could be bad,
    I check every minute that I have.
    Nobody cares and it's driving me mad,
    Maybe it's me, maybe it's me.
    [Chorus]
    Neon blue sign over my head,
    Color of calm, color of dread.
    Blue like the sky,
    Ever heavy eyes,
    Watching all the people passing by.
    Neon blue sign above the glass,
    I can feel time going by too fast,
    Hundreds of names,
    Obscured by rain,
    Just another play in a neverending game.

    • @yasminothman842
      @yasminothman842 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      THESE ARE SO PERFECT👌

    • @jeromyperez5532
      @jeromyperez5532 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I don't know how I feel about the lyrics. I'd have to hear them performed.
      Sometimes a song has strong lyrics that stand on their own.
      But I don't know if this is that.
      I think this works better as an out of time narrative. Almost like when we come across the drinker, she realizes that she's gone too far and ignores her instincts to fight anyways. Doesn't have to have a conclusive ending, but abstracting the song I think matches the instrumental as more of a mood song instead of something more literal.
      I think the lines about watching people pass by almost makes the drinker seem narcissistic. She's destroying herself right now, and it seems serious, why does she or we care about the people around her that aren't in a state of emergency?
      I think you're holding back on the edginess that the instruments are asking for.
      Maybe that's the intention. You've got a social media interpretation of the deftones version of "lived in bars". I don't know, I'd have to hear it performed.
      Yes, I know nobody asked my opinion.

    • @Alex_Off-Beat
      @Alex_Off-Beat 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Please make a version with vocals! 🙏💕

  • @Blank_the_Bard
    @Blank_the_Bard 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I really like the feel of it
    It feels like going back in time to a time before mine when pc where just coming out and arcades were common

  • @LuzOhCramity
    @LuzOhCramity 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +35

    This hits my brain in the exact right spot

  • @illMetBySunlight
    @illMetBySunlight 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Excellent track, the melancholic tone really fits what you were going for
    I love that its a very oldschool electronic sound but its also very different from stuff I've heard

  • @sk_lxr2920
    @sk_lxr2920 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    this scratched an itch in my brain I didn't even knew I had. It's been a while since I've listened to anything of this genre but you made it cool again for me lol
    really really really good!

  • @yasminothman842
    @yasminothman842 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    I watched your videos analyzing disney music and was really impressed by your knowledge of music lol, so ofc I knew this would be a beautifully crafted banger! ❤

  • @supreme-oats
    @supreme-oats 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I'm really glad that I found your music, I was pleasantly surprised how professional it is
    I love your two last tracks, especially this one I have been listening to for the last week!

  • @EddyA-sw5ox
    @EddyA-sw5ox 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    I think this turned out really great. I love the rhythm of the music and the techno feel to it. it feels ominous but has a sense of wonder to it. Great job making this. :D

  • @ABakaHero
    @ABakaHero 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +56

    Doesn't sound bad on it's own but I don't find it enjoyable enough to listen again on it's own. It feels like it's begging for vocals to accomidate it. Looking forward to the version with vocals!

    • @jeromyperez5532
      @jeromyperez5532 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      I had the opposite experience. I have a playlist that this fits perfectly on. Though I do think the mix could use a little fine tuning. The bones of the song work.

    • @banheezone
      @banheezone 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Same here tbh, it feels like the instrumental version of a song rather than It's own thing. It's missing something.

    • @user-ov9vr1wc2j
      @user-ov9vr1wc2j 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Guys, it literally has (instrumental) in the title 😭

    • @jeromyperez5532
      @jeromyperez5532 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@user-ov9vr1wc2j I don't think it did at the time.

    • @user-ov9vr1wc2j
      @user-ov9vr1wc2j 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@jeromyperez5532 idk cause I’m seeing comments from back then that call it an instrumental as well

  • @Lady_ETHNE
    @Lady_ETHNE 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +45

    This is awesome! This instrumental sounds like something straighter out of a video game, and that's a good thing!
    Would love to see a full song with vocals! Out of curiosity, since you've said you're not a great singer, have you considered using a vocal-synth like Vocaloid or Synth-V for the singing parts?

    • @user-my9ob9cd7q
      @user-my9ob9cd7q 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      I'm seconding this recommendation, especially for Synth V, which is much more capable of sounding realistic than Vocaloid! (I prefer Vocaloid because it ISN'T hyperrealistic, but non-vsynth fans tend to prefer Synth V, so :( the vocal synth space has changed so much...)

    • @vflowersimp
      @vflowersimp 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      i want just about to say that it would sound cool if the vocals were done with a vocaloid and then i saw this comment lol

  • @levnikulin4321
    @levnikulin4321 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    gorgeous!!! the texturessszzzz really got me when they came in. thank youuuuu

  • @AnglerSeaAngel
    @AnglerSeaAngel 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    Who knew that online validation could be so catchy?!

    • @ct-gv6yl
      @ct-gv6yl 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      What

    • @AnglerSeaAngel
      @AnglerSeaAngel 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@ct-gv6yl oh yeah it says so in the description

  • @Mushroomelixir
    @Mushroomelixir 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    This is some of the best instrumentals I've heard tbh

  • @joypink5599
    @joypink5599 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I really dig this. It reminds me of some tracks in Hades by Super Giant Games, which is always a good thing.

  • @jortsofficial173
    @jortsofficial173 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Buzzes my brain in just the right way….the syncopation and layering makes for a very fascinating sound that is slightly unsettling. I think vocals could add a lot!! Love ot

  • @mxridraws
    @mxridraws 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I would loveeeeeee to hear this with lyrics eeeee it sounds amazing right now

  • @bigbazbeast
    @bigbazbeast 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    oh right on im lovin it large also big up the artwork that's really cool

  • @krookedking6979
    @krookedking6979 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I'm trying to leave a comment like a third time in a row and TH-cam won't let me 😅
    I just simply wanted to say that I like it, reminds of dark wave for some reason. I like it!

  • @Akitsunesceilingfan
    @Akitsunesceilingfan 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ooooh I love this!

  • @tomnyskull
    @tomnyskull 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I like this!

  • @madivandoren
    @madivandoren 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    This absolutely slaps. I can't wait to hear more songs from you!

  • @kmkohno
    @kmkohno 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    banger

  • @Tatulak
    @Tatulak 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I really REALLY liked your content. both original music and the analysis

  • @MrMDH1986
    @MrMDH1986 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Pretty cool sound. Would be cool to see the piano sheet for it

  • @personperson4571
    @personperson4571 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Immaculate ✨✨✨✨✨

  • @heyj64
    @heyj64 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    👌

  • @alexrexaros9837
    @alexrexaros9837 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Things I hate about the algorithm;
    Your channel does something that is not of the usual flair even though its great? Aint gonna recommend it to anyone!
    Fuckin...

  • @RainbowMan9407
    @RainbowMan9407 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This sounds really great!

  • @dabatman5187
    @dabatman5187 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Why wasn’t this in my subscription feed? TH-cam mess ups aside, I really like this, but I’m also curious how the lyrical version will sound. It could hit different with those lyrics you posted

  • @ellencoleman4604
    @ellencoleman4604 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Reminds me of Hotel California, like that it went more 80s thriller as it went on.

  • @vanyamortis
    @vanyamortis 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

  • @agirlwholoveseeyore
    @agirlwholoveseeyore 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    swag ♡

  • @shsgsy
    @shsgsy 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    im way more interested in instrumentals once i know the vocal version... not the other way around 😂 whats holding you back from recording vocals ? The lyrics seem great! Fear? Shame? Perfectionism ? Just do it, theres no time like the present

  • @abezevlag7337
    @abezevlag7337 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Waiting patiently for when you figure out how to get Goku to sing this song's lyrics 🎉

  • @IGoofedUp
    @IGoofedUp 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Yummy

  • @Radcakemix
    @Radcakemix 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Adding this to my autistic tunes right now. It does things to my brain, especially here 2:09. It sounds like rick and Morty intro and that's one of my favorite sounds in music. Please tell me what it is so i can look up more pieces with similar trope.
    I love it so much, it gives cowboy space alies in the best way possible ❤❤❤

    • @Radcakemix
      @Radcakemix 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Oh, STOP! The background sound here 3:00 is so good, I fucking love layering with ominous choir

  • @newmancl0
    @newmancl0 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Just discovered your channel. LOVE your breakdowns of music. Best thing since the Art Of The Score Podcast.
    This music is good. BUT, I subscribe to channels for specific things. If this channel is many different things, I wont subscribe. I know that many people will disagree with me on this. But, my 2 cents if it helps. I like focused and specific youtube channels.

    • @astorrhymemaster
      @astorrhymemaster  10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      The plan is to continue releasing music analyses while using my music to buffer those uploads. So the weeks I don't upload analyses, I'll upload music, just so I'm uploading something. Hope that makes sense.

  • @jilp2002
    @jilp2002 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Ass

    • @nvirdf
      @nvirdf 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      if its not for you just stfu 😭😭