My Erasmus MOTIVATION ESSAY Breakdown

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 5 ม.ค. 2022
  • In this video, I make a breakdown of the Motivation Letter I submitted to the DENSYS Admissions Committee during the last ERASMUS MUNDUS application session.
    I hope you can take some tips from this to improve your application for this year.
    Don't forget to LIKE and SUBSCRIBE to the channel.
    Cheers!
    Check out my other video on (Everything you need to know about the ERASMUS MUNDUS Scholarship) - www.youtube.com/watch?v=JsXfx...
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  • @al-aminowodunni8030
    @al-aminowodunni8030 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Elgee. For the valuable tips you've shared in all your videos

  • @donaldokpako4844
    @donaldokpako4844 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    This is awesome and very insightful too.. Congratulations to you and I tap into your Grace.. Thanks for the tips

  • @nournashaat290
    @nournashaat290 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank you a bunch for the info.

  • @emmanuelowolabi12
    @emmanuelowolabi12 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much for sharing, bro.

  • @user-fw4yk3dl3j
    @user-fw4yk3dl3j 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you bro. You inspired me

  • @bismarkrazak3672
    @bismarkrazak3672 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you sir!

  • @judeogbodo7434
    @judeogbodo7434 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Beautiful

  • @joyosoku652
    @joyosoku652 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you❤

  • @sLytherinGoddeZ
    @sLytherinGoddeZ ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i learned a lot from your video. Thank you so much for making this video and sharing your SOP. I hope i can be chosen too.

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  ปีที่แล้ว

      thank you for watching. I wish you all the best with your application!

  • @maureengola57
    @maureengola57 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Interesting motivation letter. Today the motivation letter has been broken down into questions and each question has number of characters. Now it is difficult to write as you have explained. Can you do another video following the format they have presented on the application form?

  • @mahmudsajib798
    @mahmudsajib798 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi, Can you upload the full motivation letter? I think you read parts of it.

  • @ezekielgnwibo3022
    @ezekielgnwibo3022 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I'm just meeting your videos sir. I shev reslly enjoyed them. How long is rhis particular essay sir. And can you please list the paragraphs...... please 🙏🙏

  • @vivianoche1367
    @vivianoche1367 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Please urgent and important question. Should the letter have an addressee and addresser and if yes please what should be the addresser

  • @adeniranolayiwola2496
    @adeniranolayiwola2496 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Weldone! What is your word count?

  • @manjikefas754
    @manjikefas754 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Please can statement of result be accepted instead of certificate by Erasmus Mundus Scholarship? I am saying this because iam in my final year and will graduate by may 2024 and certificate will be required by August 2024. You know that it takes a long time for certificates to be issued in Nigerian public universities.

  • @harunasaleh828
    @harunasaleh828 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello, thank you sir for the hints.
    My question is on CV, please as it's stated that the CV should be Europass format. I downloaded the Europass CV template online, must all my details go in line with the template or I can create more space and headings?

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I think this question is tailored to the specific program's requirements.
      i would advise you to reach out to the program's coordinators for more info.

  • @kennedymwita9366
    @kennedymwita9366 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great Elgee, if I ask ,Is it important to include figures , or attach links to the motivation letter?

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hello Kennedy,
      By figures, do you mean numerical data? if yes. I think it is best to limit the usage as much as possible so that your essay does not read like a research paper.
      Also, for the links, I wouldn't advise you to include them in your essay, my advice would be to include them in your CV and make reference to it in your essay!

  • @preciousozemoya3063
    @preciousozemoya3063 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for the video. Is it ideal to write in your essay that you have plans of returning back to your country?

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      yeah, it's okay to do so.
      Basically, the scholarship body is sponsoring your education so that you can help effect change in your local country also. so it wouldn't be out of place for you to mention plans about this in your essay.
      I wish you all the best with your application

    • @preciousozemoya3063
      @preciousozemoya3063 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@iam_elgee Thank you for the response and kind wishes.

  • @m.slim002
    @m.slim002 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Can you share your sop word file

  • @isaacikhaiduwor16
    @isaacikhaiduwor16 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What are you thoughts about the content when there is a limit of a page?

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Hello Isaac,
      I still think you should apply a similar approach, just make sure you scrap out as much irrelevant info as much as possible.
      This could be a tough thing to do, as you feel like everything is relevant. a good rule of thumb is to review your writeup as much as possible and also get feedback from other scholars.
      I wish you all the best.

  • @patrickakiba4959
    @patrickakiba4959 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How do you fit in all of these details in one page as it is in my case

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hello Patrick.
      Truth is you just have to find a way.
      But one tip I can give you is to review your writeup as much as possible, you'll surely find some irrelevant things you can remove.
      Also, make the best use of your cv. Detail it as much as you can and find a way to refer to them in your essay.
      Last tip, If the admission committee are not strict with the "layout" of the page . You can play around with the margins to accommodate more words.

  • @philanspice7971
    @philanspice7971 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Good morning bro, I want to ask you for me to apply for two to three programs under Erasmus Mundus will I write three different SOP or can use one SOP and by editing each program where necessary?

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      It's advisable to write different sop for your respective applications

    • @philanspice7971
      @philanspice7971 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@iam_elgee Thanks bro.

    • @philanspice7971
      @philanspice7971 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I want to confirm this. What did you use when tendering documents on "Prove of residence"
      And pls when you apply for it how many programs did you apply for?

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@philanspice7971 I applied for 3 programs. I used a certificate from my work place as proof of residency

    • @philanspice7971
      @philanspice7971 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Local Government identification can't be used?

  • @sandychics__
    @sandychics__ ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello, please is it necessary we out an address on the motivation letter?

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  ปีที่แล้ว

      No not necessary, except explicitly stated on the program's application website

  • @emanhybnt
    @emanhybnt 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I have written a SOP on my own but used chatgpt to correct any grammar mistakes. Now when I take the AI content detection, the letter appears to be written by AI? Do you think it's safe to submit? Do they check AI detection?

    • @Spatial_Guide
      @Spatial_Guide 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      don't use AI. write it yourself. it's hard but with grace and effort it will be okay

  • @diamondtv50
    @diamondtv50 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hy Elgee, Tnkz for the tips. I've been working on my sop for over 2 months and I'm done, to be submitted soon coz my deadline is 31st jan. Could u help me go through it b4 submitting, i'ld really appreciate that.

    • @iam_elgee
      @iam_elgee  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hello.
      I'm sorry I am currently unavailable at this moment. I hope you can find some other scholar to help you with it.
      I wish you all the best.

    • @diamondtv50
      @diamondtv50 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@iam_elgee Ok
      Thank you

    • @izuchukwuezenwafor7596
      @izuchukwuezenwafor7596 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Good luck on your Application Prince Diamond.

    • @diamondtv50
      @diamondtv50 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@izuchukwuezenwafor7596
      Tnkz bro

    • @diamondtv50
      @diamondtv50 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Are u an erasmus scholar too?

  • @drizzle1866
    @drizzle1866 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    >>> Kante

    • @bemie692
      @bemie692 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      The DENSYS asked that the motivational letter should be just 1 page. How were you able to include all the points you mentioned?
      Does that mean I can write up to two pages?

  • @davidtosin509
    @davidtosin509 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have been trying to find past awardees on the program i am trying to apply for(BIM A+ and ALA I.e Architecture…), to help me review my essay and CV, please I don’t know if you can help me do that sir🙏🏽, I just followed your Instagram page, kindly follow back🙏🏽🙏🏽 thanks