Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Motivation Letter: Deep Dive into my SOP

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 15 ก.ค. 2024
  • In this video I share some tips on how to write a winning SOP, some do's and don'ts and also gave a breakdown of my personal SOP.
    00:00 Intro
    01:18 Things you should never do in your SOP
    01:35 No pity games
    02:34 Keep it short and concise
    03:35 Don't re echo your CV
    05:00 Never Plagiarize
    05:59 My SOP
    06:35 Paragraph 1- My motivation
    08:37 Paragraph 2- Academics and work experience
    13:21 Short term and long term goals
    13:55 Why this program?
    14:40 Conclusion

ความคิดเห็น • 95

  • @danielemenike402
    @danielemenike402 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Esther,this was insightful

  • @A.Danielime
    @A.Danielime 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for this info. So needed

  • @ckariukick8
    @ckariukick8 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for this!

  • @iyanuoluwaajayi6437
    @iyanuoluwaajayi6437 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for this.

  • @yeppeogeu2828
    @yeppeogeu2828 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank you for the video!! this helped my anxieties over writing SOPs. cheers!✌️

  • @renzzz1908
    @renzzz1908 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for your straightforward tips for motivation letter. They truly are helpful. No wonder you got in for scholarship. Trying my luck again for next year! 😁🤞🏻

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You are welcome. Thank God for helping me.
      I wish you the best in your next application.

  • @ilesanmifestus4661
    @ilesanmifestus4661 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    It's really helpful. Thanks

  • @omoleadekanmi4768
    @omoleadekanmi4768 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Insightful!!

  • @emmanuelokeme6272
    @emmanuelokeme6272 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you Esther

  • @user-it9qd4qe8g
    @user-it9qd4qe8g 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much! I'm also applying for SE4GD this year

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You are welcome! I wish you success in your application. You will really love it here😁

  • @ClintonOj
    @ClintonOj ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Maximum Respect Sister👑. I am taking you for launch when I get this scholarship!

  • @JudeAkhabue
    @JudeAkhabue ปีที่แล้ว

    Quite detailed SOP tips. From

  • @wegenegetachew9678
    @wegenegetachew9678 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I really wondered your way of handling the presentation.

  • @aneyeforthepeople6204
    @aneyeforthepeople6204 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    It's so sweet to see people form this part of the world doing greater things... especially women. I am in the northern part of Nigeria so information on like an this is key. Pls if you don't mind...who reviewed Ur SOP?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you! A friend in a similar program reviewed my SOP, I also sent it to people in other programs that I knew, and also to a Grammarian to check my grammars.

  • @robinranabhat3125
    @robinranabhat3125 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I think for many of us, we are smart enough to not use your sop in any ways. And sharing the sop would actually be helpful.

  • @irenezee
    @irenezee ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello Tomi,
    If I am currently doing a masters program (to end by June) can I still apply and do I need to send my transcript for masters? Or i should leave out the fact I am doing a masters?

  • @amarachiobasi2000
    @amarachiobasi2000 ปีที่แล้ว

    I just chanced on your channel and it is amazing. Thank you for all you do.
    Quick one, I am finding it difficult to navigate the Erasmus website. On the course catalogue I viewed, I didn’t find Social work and I would like to apply for it. I would also like to the Impact Entrepreneurship course.

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Warm welcome ☺️. Well, you might not find the exact name of the course you want, usually the program names are usually kinda different and long. So look out for related programs and take time to go through the description. I hope that helps.

    • @rema262
      @rema262 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      hey, did you apply? or get accepted?

    • @amarachiobasi2000
      @amarachiobasi2000 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@rema262 non. My transcript didn’t make it back in time. I will be applying this year though 😪

    • @amarachiobasi2000
      @amarachiobasi2000 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@rema262 you?

  • @tmzeeupdates1771
    @tmzeeupdates1771 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello, wonderful video. Your delivery and method of communication is just breathtaking. In the video you indicated how your SOP was around a page and 5 lines. I would kindly like to know the font size you used as this directly affects the length. Thank you gorgeous 🙂

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thanks for your kind words. I used calibri, font size 11, but usually the recommended font is arial size 11 or times new romans size 12. In all you do, keep it neat, consistent, and maximise the space. Cheers!

    • @asapgaming8388
      @asapgaming8388 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hi Tomi, thank you for the informations. Please i dont know how busy you are, although the application date for the EMJM scholarship program is still quite far. So, i will be sending you my SOP just for your review, and you can help me do at your convenience! Please confirm your availability.

  • @inaandie3352
    @inaandie3352 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thanks a lot for this information. Please what font size and font type did you make use of, for your SOP? And if it's not specified by a particular program, what appropriate font type and size to use for an SOP?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      I used calibri, font size 11, but usually the recommended font is arial size 11 or times new romans size 12. In all you do, keep it neat, consistent, and maximise the space. Cheers!

  • @nwachukwufrancis9007
    @nwachukwufrancis9007 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    fwhats the ideal ont size and spacing?

  • @israelimathsconcepts9756
    @israelimathsconcepts9756 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Please can I apply for Erasmus scholarship with my statement of result since I've not gotten my original degree certificate?

  • @mobethh
    @mobethh 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    pls when I am stating a fact from lets say United Nation. do I need to say "according to the UN" or I just state the problem/statistics right away.

  • @emmaabu012
    @emmaabu012 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    what a well-detailed video... do Erasmus Mundus receive a statement of result in place of a certificate of degree to attest one is done with a bachelor's program.. thank you as I await your reply

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you.
      In most cases, the program requires your degree certificate. But if for whatever reasons, you don't have the degree certificate yet, please contact the program coordinator.

  • @ade_si_olaoluwa
    @ade_si_olaoluwa ปีที่แล้ว

    thank so much Esther, am confused about the courses and university in the sense that one course can be available in three different countries, how do i go about it

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Adesola, all you need to do is apply to the program, you don't need to bother about applying to each school.

  • @dosudavid527
    @dosudavid527 ปีที่แล้ว

    How can you do a deep dive into a personal SOP in a motivation letter? These are distinct things!

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว

      Well, SOP and motivational letter are commonly used interchangeably in scholarship applications.

  • @joshuaolulowo3658
    @joshuaolulowo3658 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello Tomi, wonderful video and great tips. Quick question, is it alright to have citations and references in my sop?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      In your CV, you can put your publications there(if that's what you mean by citations), but you can brag about it small in your SOP 😁, then for references (if you mean recommendation) - you don't have to put that in your sop- most programs have a separate section for references. Cheers!

    • @joshuaolulowo3658
      @joshuaolulowo3658 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@techwithtomi Thank you for the response, I appreciate it

  • @abr.7
    @abr.7 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    hi, thank you very much this video was very help full, but you didn't mentioned where should we mention which universities we want to select and why?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      For Erasmus, you don't exactly chose the university, you apply to the prpogram, each program already have defined universities that run the Erasmus program. So the program you chose determines which university/country you go

  • @1daneet
    @1daneet 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Otuoke University. Lol that example was so random.. 😅😅😅

  • @augustaakuamoah891
    @augustaakuamoah891 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi. Thanks so much for the video. But I have a few questions
    1. Do I need to be a Research Assistant or have publications before I apply?
    2. If yes,how do I go about with my publication? I have no idea on how to go about it
    3. Could you kindly share your email so I could mail you privately for assistance? I'm getting so overwhelmed with the entire situation 😢

  • @chidii
    @chidii ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How did you write the description of courses?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi Chidi, just a brief description of what the course is about. To make it easier, if you have a course page on your school website, you can use the course description from there.

  • @rachaelaikhuomon2669
    @rachaelaikhuomon2669 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Do you write different motivational letters for applying for the course and applying for the scholarship?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      It's a single application, you don't apply separately, so it's one motivation letter

  • @yaseen_b
    @yaseen_b 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for your valued information. I need your help to determine my percentage. My rank is 3 and the number of students was 200. Which one is correct: I was in the top 1 percent or in the top 10 percent?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      If you calculate your percentile using (1- (your rank/number of students)) x 100, that's 98.5% in your case which means you perform better than 98.5% (approximately 99% 😁) of your class. It is safe to say that you are top 1%

    • @yaseen_b
      @yaseen_b 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@techwithtomi Thank you for your explanation

  • @joyyakubu5880
    @joyyakubu5880 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I would like you to review my SOP 🙏. When am done I will let you know

  • @noriahkatungwe3195
    @noriahkatungwe3195 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    if you want to apply for 3 programs, do you submit three different SOPs?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yes please and each SOP must be tailored for each program. Don't use a generic SOP

  • @philanspice7971
    @philanspice7971 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Good morning ms Esther, I saw some video concerning the SOP am I going to putting an address?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      No you don't need to put an address.

    • @philanspice7971
      @philanspice7971 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@techwithtomi Thanks so much

  • @diamondtv50
    @diamondtv50 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hy Esther, Tnkz for the tips
    I'm applying for Embedded computing systems, and I'm done with my sop
    Could u pls help me go through it b4 submitting? My deadline is 31st jan.

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I would suggest you apply for review via EMA Nigeria, that way they can route your SOP to someone in similar field (This is better).

    • @diamondtv50
      @diamondtv50 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@techwithtomi
      Thank you

    • @chinnyfolktales
      @chinnyfolktales 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Please do you have the watts app link.

    • @diamondtv50
      @diamondtv50 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@chinnyfolktales What course are u applying

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@chinnyfolktales it's a Facebook group. Search for EMA Nigeria on Facebook

  • @mutalemukwala8362
    @mutalemukwala8362 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you apply when you have one more semester before graduation?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว

      Sure you can, as long as you can be sure that your degree certificate will be ready at the required time. Cheers!

  • @utiprecious3904
    @utiprecious3904 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ma, pls do you mind reviewing my sop

  • @ericofosuasare7595
    @ericofosuasare7595 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please I would like to apply for one of the erasmus mundus program and it requires me to submit a residence certificate. Please where in Ghana can I get that? Or which document is known as a residence certificate?. Thank u

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว

      Hello Eric, I don't live in Ghana, however, you can check at your local government, In Nigeria, they issue such document at the local government.

    • @njerikimiri9601
      @njerikimiri9601 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hey Eric, did you get help?
      Coz I'm in Kenya and this document is really confusing me

  • @renie_aasam
    @renie_aasam ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow..really love how you delivered it😍 but a quick question what about the proof of English language proficiency? Did you have to write an internationally recognized one or you were waived per your country?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I addressed this in my recent video on Erasmus Q&A. In my case, I had to take the English test

  • @Jenny-fl5cn
    @Jenny-fl5cn 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello. Can I get the Erasmus Mundus scholarship for a masters in social work?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      yes sure.
      check aseanop.com/erasmus-mundus-ma-advanced-development-in-social-work-2021-24/- but i think this one is closed.
      you can also the course catague for others : www.eacea.ec.europa.eu/scholarships/emjmd-catalogue_en

  • @roka_chukwu
    @roka_chukwu 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Please help me with the link of registration 🙏❤ because they are so many links

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      www.eacea.ec.europa.eu/scholarships/erasmus-mundus-catalogue_en

  • @adeyanjuoluwatofunmi8314
    @adeyanjuoluwatofunmi8314 ปีที่แล้ว

    Good morning
    Pls it’s SOP and Motivation letter the same?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      the two terms are used interchangeably - so in my opinion- yes
      If in doubt, please double check with the program cordinators

  • @fevenmehari3591
    @fevenmehari3591 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Do they have MSc. program in molecular biology and biotechnology? If so can you send me the link please

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You can check the course catalogues : www.eacea.ec.europa.eu/scholarships/erasmus-mundus-catalogue_en

    • @fevenmehari3591
      @fevenmehari3591 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@techwithtomi Thank you so much dear

  • @kancicekleriengsub
    @kancicekleriengsub ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you please review my SOP. I would be really grateful to you

  • @mayowaadeniji
    @mayowaadeniji 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you very much for the wonderful video. Please, could you help review my SOP?

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi Mayowa, I would suggest you submit it for review via EMA Nigeria group. They can direct your SOP to people in your field- which is better in my opinion.

    • @chinnyfolktales
      @chinnyfolktales 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Please do you have the watsapp link?
      Thanks.

  • @monishabiswas3658
    @monishabiswas3658 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you please share one of Erasmus Mundus scholarship winning SOP format ? If you have no issues please share yours. Thank you.

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Monisha, connect on linkedIn so I can share this: www.linkedin.com/in/esther-adenekan-2949549a/

    • @oto-obongattah6355
      @oto-obongattah6355 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Your profile is not available on LinkedIn

  • @SE_IFADA
    @SE_IFADA ปีที่แล้ว

    Please, I will need you to proofread my sop

    • @techwithtomi
      @techwithtomi  ปีที่แล้ว

      Let's connect on linkedIn: www.linkedin.com/in/esther-adenekan-2949549a/

    • @SE_IFADA
      @SE_IFADA ปีที่แล้ว

      @@techwithtomi done ✅
      Please do accept my request 😊