@@englishlearningexpert3595 I will definitely mr.Harrison, and I would be glad to watch more videos related to IELTS, because I'm going to take the real exam soon.
@@englishlearningexpert3595 Good evening mr.Harrison. I'm sorry for answering your message a bit late, and I'm really glad that you asked my honest opinion. It indeed shows that my opinion is valued. When it comes to your request sir, I have watched the video once again, and I am very sure that this essay could potentially take at least 8.0 band score. I have to admit that your organizational features are strong. I assure you sir that this essay would take at least 8 band score in each criteria or I suspect even higher but I am not sure, because I am not unfortunately in your level or an examiner. I have only 2 years of experience in academic writing. I hope that I have shared my notion as clear as possible, or at least as you expected. Sincerely, Azizbek
Hello! Thank you for your video. I'm currently preparing for my IELTS and after seeing many videos on the matter, I've noticed that a common suggestion is to create a very precise structure in your report. After the intro, it is in fact suggested to write a general overview over the main trends in the graph and only then to continue with the specific analysis. In this video I noticed that you did not include a general overview of all data but started right away with the analysis of each section. Can this approach lead to a high score as well? Is the "general overview" only a suggestion but not the rule?
That’s a good point - I think I split the overview between paragraph 2 and 3 because it was quite a long paragraph. I know that in terms of grammar and vocabulary this is band 9 - it sounds like an educated native speaker. I’ve done everything the question asked within the word limit. However, you’d need to check with the IELTs rules to be 100% certain there’s no special structure. 😀
Hello , thank you for the video. But what do you think is it necessary to use numbers in writing overview paragraph? Or is it better to survive with a very general statement?
Yes - I’ll to find a good one but I’ll definitely do another video in the future. Glad you liked it. Can you do me a favour and share that video somewhere? Thanks 🤩
Finally. You make IELTS content. I'm walking on air !!!
Thank you! 😀 I hope it doesn’t disappoint.
Finally. Sir, you are doing a great job, I'm so excited. In a nutshell, You are making my life a lot easier.
Ah thank you! I👍 Hopefully you’ll like it and I can start making more like this!
@@englishlearningexpert3595 I will definitely mr.Harrison, and I would be glad to watch more videos related to IELTS, because I'm going to take the real exam soon.
@@WV_Blake I’d be very grateful to hear your honest opinion about this video.
@@englishlearningexpert3595 Good evening mr.Harrison. I'm sorry for answering your message a bit late, and I'm really glad that you asked my honest opinion. It indeed shows that my opinion is valued. When it comes to your request sir, I have watched the video once again, and I am very sure that this essay could potentially take at least 8.0 band score. I have to admit that your organizational features are strong. I assure you sir that this essay would take at least 8 band score in each criteria or I suspect even higher but I am not sure, because I am not unfortunately in your level or an examiner. I have only 2 years of experience in academic writing. I hope that I have shared my notion as clear as possible, or at least as you expected.
Sincerely, Azizbek
it just looks perfect mr.Harrison. You are indeed in another level and I am afraid it takes a decade to me to reach your level😅.
I'm sure that it will be very helpful as usual!
I hope so 🙏
nice sir --best teacher so far
Thank you my friend! 😀
Excellent!!1, Brilliant, I'm speechless
Thank you very much 😀
wow!this video was really helpful and informative!!thank you sir🌸
You’re very welcome. Thanks.
Numbers are not to be included in the overveiw. You should only put it in your two body paragraphs.
Thanks 😀
Great, Please share for all type of question for Writing Task 1
Tomorrow I have a video on task 2. It will be available at 7am London time. 🕰️
Hello! Thank you for your video. I'm currently preparing for my IELTS and after seeing many videos on the matter, I've noticed that a common suggestion is to create a very precise structure in your report. After the intro, it is in fact suggested to write a general overview over the main trends in the graph and only then to continue with the specific analysis. In this video I noticed that you did not include a general overview of all data but started right away with the analysis of each section. Can this approach lead to a high score as well? Is the "general overview" only a suggestion but not the rule?
That’s a good point - I think I split the overview between paragraph 2 and 3 because it was quite a long paragraph. I know that in terms of grammar and vocabulary this is band 9 - it sounds like an educated native speaker. I’ve done everything the question asked within the word limit. However, you’d need to check with the IELTs rules to be 100% certain there’s no special structure. 😀
Hello , thank you for the video. But what do you think is it necessary to use numbers in writing overview paragraph? Or is it better to survive with a very general statement?
Hmm I'm not sure - I think both could work but please check with an IELTS teacher.
This video came on time🙏
Great! 👍 Thanks.
Thanks
You’re welcome.
Hello. Thank you very much for this video.
Is it possible to make some videos with literary essays please?
You’re welcome! Thanks. All my upcoming videos will be about essay writing - yes. 😀
Can you cover more line graphs for ielts please
Yes - I’ll to find a good one but I’ll definitely do another video in the future. Glad you liked it. Can you do me a favour and share that video somewhere? Thanks 🤩
Can we write values in overalll paragraph..???
I have but maybe you should double check the rules 😀
numbers are not allowed in overview?
I have but maybe you should double check the rules 😀
Thanks
You're welcome.