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- be consistent: say that you will do eim things in college - make characters count - numbers matter - WRITE everything that you were in that organization - write accomplishments - write out acronyms - order them in how many hours you've put into them - use very strong verbs and use the smallest amount of verbs you can - can use humor, add color - don't exaggerate
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Thank you so much! Something this video taught me that I haven’t heard before is that I should include more than just the organization name in that section, and actually describe the organization a bit more. This was super helpful!
The tip you shared about showing colleges the trajectory of your experience in a club was very insightful, and I plan on integrating that into my activities page!
Yk im just really grateful for you and everyone out there who is GENUINELY trying to help ppl achieve what they want and as in international student there is so much i wanna do just so little opportunity where i am but im here trying and you are helping even if i dont get accepted i dont want to have regrets and say I didn’t try enough so thank you genuinely for helping to the most you can :)
Why the hell does this have 17 views? Oh my god, You just helped me think of my passion project. I'm a gap year student from Nepal, Asia. And, Yale is my dream ( not exaggerating ). I have no guidance from my college or counselors around me. Internet is all I have. It's so great to have someone like you put up videos like these. Would love to have some feedbacks from you. Would mean the world.
Hi Kevin, you've honestly been so much help through starting my college apps! Don't know if you remember me but I took a summer writing course you taught with future bridge in 2022 (80% red, 20% blue!). One of my main activities is music (specifically piano) and I have a lot of different things that are all focused around this topic. For example: competitions, volunteer music theory mentor for 10 weeks, weekly lessons with a kid in my community, and composing music for a children's choir and for sight reading competition events. I was wondering how I should go about entering these into the activities section. Should I keep them all in one activity entry or split them up (and if so, how)? How do I estimate the time per week and weeks per year when considering more than just one specific activity? I feel like every one of these piano related activities could use more elaboration but I'm afraid of having too much about music (I was also planning on having an activity on acapella choir singing and another on school leadership, class council and commissioner of sound).
Hi Michael! Thanks for your message brother! I'd separate your piano into two portions, one for competitions, another for music volunteering and a third for music composition... it's a bit of a complicated question so your best bet is to upload it to our portal and we'll take a look! www.elevated.school/editmyessay We review activities lists!
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AMAZING video literally the opposite of clickbait when adding color where do you draw the line with common references (ex Anton Ego from Ratatouille) should I put like (from Ratatouille) or is that degrading/if its not really really obv don't make the joke 😭
I’m a student currently and I began volunteering at Red Cross consistently, however my hours picked up from 30 minute to 2 hour sessions per week. I began in 11th grade and now I’m in 12th continuing my duration of volunteering. How many hours should I put in the hours per week and how many weeks for the per year?
Hi everyone! In the two years since we started this channel, we've helped more than 70+ students get into every single Ivy League School, Stanford, MIT and more! If you're interested in working with us, please visit our website: www.elevated.school/getstarted. And if you'd like your essay edited by a member of our team, visit www.elevated.school/editmyessay . Also, please note that we do take on exceptional low-income students every year, so if you identify as part of that group and would like a scholarship, let us know! I hope you found this video helpful and are having a wonderful day 😇
Hey hi! I'm a fellow follower of yours from India! You must have an idea by now that how much your guidance matters to students like us who have absolutely 0 access to counsellors who actually can help us Thanks Kevin You matter! As a junior at highschool whos struggling a lot, I see this as an absolute W
Hello! I don't know if you will respond, but what would you recommend putting in the "Position/Leadership Description" space if you are putting one of your 'hobbies' as an activity? (For example, I cook every single day to feed myself and my sister, but I'm not sure what to put for the leadership position here?)
what if i’ve never had any leadership positions? would a lack of them look bad on my apps? edit: my replies aren’t showing up but i got into my ED school which is a T25, it’ll be fine
What if a college allows me to upload a resume on Common App? If I have more than ten activities I want to share, should I leave the Activities section blank and just create a resume?
I don't want to sound repetitive and waste admission officers' time by doing both. Even if I note at the top of a resume that it's just a continuation of my Activities Section, I don't have that many extra activities lol, so I'm worried that my resume will look too blank. I think my concern might be kinda silly, but I'm genuinely confused. As always, thx for the vid!
Yo, I work at Stanford as a tech ops for sports broadcast, my daughter is a freshman in high school, she shadows me now and now will be hired as a tech ops when the acc comes in, is that a good start
I just started using the common app today and I left a few things blank because I need to ask my guidance counselor about a few things before I finish. But I’m afraid to exit out of the app and that it won’t save my work will it delete and j have to start over?
guys can someone help me please. I chose 1 activity as ART and in position/ leadership description I don't know what to write cause there is no particular position or leadership so I wrote "drawing / sketching artist". So also for activities where I did not participate in an organization or something , its just an normal activity that I did throughout the years sooo what about that ? do those activities count here or are these activities only those times when I participated in an organization or event ?
Hey I'm not really sure about my extracurriculars . Just wanted to get your opinion on it , it'd be great if that'll possible . 1 Reported for an upcoming news channel via youtube 2 Wrote a novella 3 Published articles in my school magzine , newsletter , local newspaper and a local magzine . 4 Published a research paper on the QUAD 5 Worked as a content writer for six months in TedX Talks 6 Founder and President of the Literature club in my school 7 Tutored students for around 5 years . 8 Participated in an anthology that was published 9 IMUN at school level 10 Participated at various workshops , submitted a short story in one of them . Also organised an event in our school . Since it's the admissions time I'll really appreciate if you could review this
I'd just put the top leadership positions you were a part of! If you still have extras you want to mention, you can talk about them in your Additional Information
Hey Kevin, I have been watching your videos since the start of my junior year and now I am in my senior year. I just wanted an opinion. (others who read this comment, please rate my stats and let me know where I stand.) I have a gpa of 3.5 out of 4. My SAT score is 1370 (770 in Math and 600 in English) I will be giving my IELTS exam in August. I have worked as a Developer Intern, a fundraising intern(raised > ₹33,500) and a cybersecurity intern. I am also the President of our school's Student Council. I am also the founder of our school's first computer club and have organized competitions for students of grade 3rd to 12th. I have also hosted our school's annual sports day and edited our school's annual magazine. Also have collected food, stationary supplies for orphanages from all the students currently studying in our school. I am still working on my essays. Please give your honest opinions about these and let me know if you got any tips for me. I wish every applicant good luck and I look forward to applying for colleges this year with y'all. Thank you :)
I have also worked on a working voice assistant, which I ironically names Jarvis. Unfortunately, due to the lockdown, I lost my code with my laptop. Should I still include it in my applications? This happened back when I was in my freshman year(9th grade).
@@viplavnagpal8008you have a strong stats and ecs but most imp make sure your essays show your personality and growth. Another tip - apply to your dream school in Early decision.
I’m a student currently and I began volunteering at Red Cross consistently, however my hours picked up from 30 minute to 2 hour sessions per week. I began in 11th grade and now I’m in 12th continuing my duration of volunteering. How many hours should I put in the hours per week and how many weeks for the per year?
I’m a student currently and I began volunteering at Red Cross consistently, however my hours picked up from 30 minute to 2 hour sessions per week. I began in 11th grade and now I’m in 12th continuing my duration of volunteering. How many hours should I put in the hours per week and how many weeks for the per year?
Since 2022, we’ve edited more than 3300 college essays and helped hundreds of seniors from around the world gain more than 600+ acceptances to top 20 schools. If you’d like your essay (or activities list) professionally edited, we’d be honored to help!
Visit: www.elevated.school/editmyessay
Where our students got in: www.elevated.school/2024results
is this service for free?
- be consistent: say that you will do eim things in college
- make characters count
- numbers matter
- WRITE everything that you were in that organization
- write accomplishments
- write out acronyms
- order them in how many hours you've put into them
- use very strong verbs and use the smallest amount of verbs you can
- can use humor, add color
- don't exaggerate
How should I list a summer precollege experience ?
i also wonder this@@DRPRINCESSNY
What's acronyms?
@@calebrono5712 acronyms are the initials of certain thing e.g. Science technology Engineering and Mathematics written as STEM
Hi friends!! For the next month (until 11/1/23), we’ll be selecting 3 of the commenters on THIS video for a FREE essay review! To qualify, all you have to do is like and reply to this comment with something you learned from this video :) FYI normally, we charge $225 for a professional common app review with feedback from two of our ElevatEd consultants!
Absolutely Interesting and practical video, These tips make a lot of difference..Thank you so much!!
I'm an international student and I just wanted to say thank you for everything your doing, I've learned a substantial amount from your videos.
Thank you so much! Something this video taught me that I haven’t heard before is that I should include more than just the organization name in that section, and actually describe the organization a bit more. This was super helpful!
Thank you for this, I learned an interesting tip that using more powerful, but fewer verbs really helps the activities section stand out.
The tip you shared about showing colleges the trajectory of your experience in a club was very insightful, and I plan on integrating that into my activities page!
Yk im just really grateful for you and everyone out there who is GENUINELY trying to help ppl achieve what they want and as in international student there is so much i wanna do just so little opportunity where i am but im here trying and you are helping even if i dont get accepted i dont want to have regrets and say I didn’t try enough so thank you genuinely for helping to the most you can :)
So is there any progress? I mean have you been accepted by any college yet? I'm also applying as an international student by the way
I felt so overwhelmed with the little space available, but you really helped optimize those characters, thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why the hell does this have 17 views? Oh my god, You just helped me think of my passion project. I'm a gap year student from Nepal, Asia. And, Yale is my dream ( not exaggerating ). I have no guidance from my college or counselors around me. Internet is all I have. It's so great to have someone like you put up videos like these. Would love to have some feedbacks from you. Would mean the world.
kata pugnu vayo aile didi?
This is a godsend thank you so much! I started the activities section and had absolutely no clue how to start. This is a life saver!
You're so welcome!
YOU ARE THE BEST!!! WHY DON'T YOU HAVE A MILLION SUBS!!!
Agree😕
i owe you my life omg this is the best EC section advice i've seen yet
the commercial breaks are uniquely amazing 👍💯💯
His body talks more to you than his words. Skillful
You’re body language and hand movements are really fun, great video!
So far the best video I have ever seen. Clear presentation
Glad it was helpful Prince!!
Hloo there
Completely agree with u.
I am also a student from Nepal with Yale as a dream clz and I also believe this channel is a gem.😘
You are very amazing and excellent private Consler of University applying students.
Great job.🎉🎉
Thanks Mom!!
this was so helpful thank uu!!
Glad it was helpful!
Thanks for this video. It is very clear, jammed full of useful info and your energy is encouraging and entertaining. Great stuff!
Hi Kevin, you've honestly been so much help through starting my college apps! Don't know if you remember me but I took a summer writing course you taught with future bridge in 2022 (80% red, 20% blue!).
One of my main activities is music (specifically piano) and I have a lot of different things that are all focused around this topic. For example: competitions, volunteer music theory mentor for 10 weeks, weekly lessons with a kid in my community, and composing music for a children's choir and for sight reading competition events. I was wondering how I should go about entering these into the activities section. Should I keep them all in one activity entry or split them up (and if so, how)? How do I estimate the time per week and weeks per year when considering more than just one specific activity? I feel like every one of these piano related activities could use more elaboration but I'm afraid of having too much about music (I was also planning on having an activity on acapella choir singing and another on school leadership, class council and commissioner of sound).
Hi Michael! Thanks for your message brother! I'd separate your piano into two portions, one for competitions, another for music volunteering and a third for music composition... it's a bit of a complicated question so your best bet is to upload it to our portal and we'll take a look! www.elevated.school/editmyessay We review activities lists!
Great video! From the video I know that we must be honest and not exaggerating the hours
Thank you so much! This video is just what I was looking for :))
this channel is so helpful! thank you Kevin!
I really don't have this many extracurriculars. The ones I do have are so boring.
This was very helpful thank you so much for your advice
From now until August 2024, I (Kevin) will offering doing FREE intro calls with students (and parents!)
Visit: linktr.ee/elevatedschool
Thank you watching our videos! Your support seriously means the world to us!!
This is an amazing video and hugely helpful!! Thanks a lot!
You're very welcome!
this is actually extremely helpful. thank you!
You're welcome!
Kev is a genius
Bro,u r just amazing!
Do you have some tips for the Gap Year essay? :(
Wow 😂. So amazing 🤩. Ohh I love this video. I wish I can follow all your videos ❤
Loved this video!
AMAZING video literally the opposite of clickbait when adding color where do you draw the line with common references (ex Anton Ego from Ratatouille) should I put like (from Ratatouille) or is that degrading/if its not really really obv don't make the joke 😭
Thanks Bro! Your tips are really making a difference.
Happy to help!
I’m a student currently and I began volunteering at Red Cross consistently, however my hours picked up from 30 minute to 2 hour sessions per week. I began in 11th grade and now I’m in 12th continuing my duration of volunteering. How many hours should I put in the hours per week and how many weeks for the per year?
I guess it’s time to start working on this 😅
Good video. Love ur tiktoks
Thank you so much brother, I'm on process applying,,buy what is acronyms?
Hi everyone! In the two years since we started this channel, we've helped more than 70+ students get into every single Ivy League School, Stanford, MIT and more! If you're interested in working with us, please visit our website: www.elevated.school/getstarted. And if you'd like your essay edited by a member of our team, visit www.elevated.school/editmyessay . Also, please note that we do take on exceptional low-income students every year, so if you identify as part of that group and would like a scholarship, let us know! I hope you found this video helpful and are having a wonderful day 😇
Hey hi!
I'm a fellow follower of yours from India!
You must have an idea by now that how much your guidance matters to students like us who have absolutely 0 access to counsellors who actually can help us
Thanks Kevin
You matter!
As a junior at highschool whos struggling a lot, I see this as an absolute W
We're at the same boat
hey can u tell me where are we supposed to write the gap year essay (after 12th grade) in common app
Extremely helpful:)
i love this thank you
Great video!
Hello! I don't know if you will respond, but what would you recommend putting in the "Position/Leadership Description" space if you are putting one of your 'hobbies' as an activity? (For example, I cook every single day to feed myself and my sister, but I'm not sure what to put for the leadership position here?)
You can use some humor, like "Pasta Master and Head Chef of Ash Family"! Or you can simply put: Family Cook, cook 15 meals/wk for 3 siblings.
@@elevatedschool thank you so much I appreciate it!
YOU ARE WONDERFUL!
THANK YOU ELLAAA
what if i’ve never had any leadership positions? would a lack of them look bad on my apps?
edit: my replies aren’t showing up but i got into my ED school which is a T25, it’ll be fine
How did it go
@@surikibrom1324 good, got into my ED school (a top 25)
@@surikibrom1324 got into my ED school (top 25)
What if a college allows me to upload a resume on Common App? If I have more than ten activities I want to share, should I leave the Activities section blank and just create a resume?
I don't want to sound repetitive and waste admission officers' time by doing both. Even if I note at the top of a resume that it's just a continuation of my Activities Section, I don't have that many extra activities lol, so I'm worried that my resume will look too blank. I think my concern might be kinda silly, but I'm genuinely confused. As always, thx for the vid!
Never leave the activities section blank! Some colleges don't look at the resume (even if Common App allows you to upload it!)
Yo, I work at Stanford as a tech ops for sports broadcast, my daughter is a freshman in high school, she shadows me now and now will be hired as a tech ops when the acc comes in, is that a good start
You are the best!
ok i know this isnt the point of the video but whered you get that sweater its awesome
I just started using the common app today and I left a few things blank because I need to ask my guidance counselor about a few things before I finish. But I’m afraid to exit out of the app and that it won’t save my work will it delete and j have to start over?
you can exit, it saves. I've exited out of mine and it saved.
guys can someone help me please.
I chose 1 activity as ART and in position/ leadership description I don't know what to write cause there is no particular position or leadership so I wrote "drawing / sketching artist". So also for activities where I did not participate in an organization or something , its just an normal activity that I did throughout the years sooo what about that ? do those activities count here or are these activities only those times when I participated in an organization or event ?
just clarifying, the admissions ppl are ok that the activity description is not full sentences? like do i not use punctuation at all?
Yes!
Please make a video on gap year essay
Hey I'm not really sure about my extracurriculars . Just wanted to get your opinion on it , it'd be great if that'll possible .
1 Reported for an upcoming news channel via youtube
2 Wrote a novella
3 Published articles in my school magzine , newsletter , local newspaper and a local magzine .
4 Published a research paper on the QUAD
5 Worked as a content writer for six months in TedX Talks
6 Founder and President of the Literature club in my school
7 Tutored students for around 5 years .
8 Participated in an anthology that was published
9 IMUN at school level
10 Participated at various workshops , submitted a short story in one of them . Also organised an event in our school .
Since it's the admissions time I'll really appreciate if you could review this
Hello Kevin
Do not exaggerate!! Got it 😅
If there is not enough space to type in all the leadership positions you’ve had in an activity, would you recommend to just input them all separately?
I'd just put the top leadership positions you were a part of! If you still have extras you want to mention, you can talk about them in your Additional Information
So putting extra awards in additional information does not hurt u?
Nope!
Hi everyone, can anyone help me? I just want to know are universities ask for some certificates or recommendations for proving your activity?
18 RECRUITS?!?!?!?
My entire team doesnt have 18 swimmers.
What about post graduation?
Guys! if I was captain of my school team in various sports , do I list it as an activity or an honour?
Activity! Honors would be if you won competitions, although colleges tend to want more academic honors as opposed to sports ones!
Ah fuck wish I saw this before submitting my application an hour before lol
good morning y'all
I thought the additional information section was for Covid impact
There are two additional information section I guess, and one for covid
You gesticulate a lot
for me like nobody
the best way Is the job
Great video, but bro, u r emoting way too much
Hey Kevin,
I have been watching your videos since the start of my junior year and now I am in my senior year.
I just wanted an opinion. (others who read this comment, please rate my stats and let me know where I stand.)
I have a gpa of 3.5 out of 4.
My SAT score is 1370 (770 in Math and 600 in English)
I will be giving my IELTS exam in August.
I have worked as a Developer Intern, a fundraising intern(raised > ₹33,500) and a cybersecurity intern.
I am also the President of our school's Student Council.
I am also the founder of our school's first computer club and have organized competitions for students of grade 3rd to 12th.
I have also hosted our school's annual sports day and edited our school's annual magazine.
Also have collected food, stationary supplies for orphanages from all the students currently studying in our school.
I am still working on my essays.
Please give your honest opinions about these and let me know if you got any tips for me.
I wish every applicant good luck and I look forward to applying for colleges this year with y'all.
Thank you :)
I have also worked on a working voice assistant, which I ironically names Jarvis. Unfortunately, due to the lockdown, I lost my code with my laptop. Should I still include it in my applications? This happened back when I was in my freshman year(9th grade).
Hey! I think you can review your essay for free in, college vine essay peer review.
@@viplavnagpal8008you have a strong stats and ecs but most imp make sure your essays show your personality and growth.
Another tip - apply to your dream school in Early decision.
Man ur gesticulation doesn’t look real, it’s like you memorized it
bro is a cutie patootie
how to contact you like for proof reading essay etc pls drop ur social media
You can contact us here!
www.elevated.school/getstarted
I’m a student currently and I began volunteering at Red Cross consistently, however my hours picked up from 30 minute to 2 hour sessions per week. I began in 11th grade and now I’m in 12th continuing my duration of volunteering. How many hours should I put in the hours per week and how many weeks for the per year?
His body talks more to you than his words. Skillful
I’m a student currently and I began volunteering at Red Cross consistently, however my hours picked up from 30 minute to 2 hour sessions per week. I began in 11th grade and now I’m in 12th continuing my duration of volunteering. How many hours should I put in the hours per week and how many weeks for the per year?