I found the FIRST DRAFT of Make Your Mark

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  • @Spiritlikes99
    @Spiritlikes99 15 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +49

    "in red means it was either changed or removed" the whole page being red is crazy 💔💔

  • @Makakaka
    @Makakaka 10 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +20

    Oh dang, I didn't expect the first draft to be public now.
    I read this last month, and it was quite an experience, I had to keep my mouth shut lol This is really awesome!

  • @Tanmaydeshpande-nl5jy
    @Tanmaydeshpande-nl5jy 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +39

    OMG that was soo scary. you didnt have to risk your life for us

  • @hannahlamagna
    @hannahlamagna 14 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +20

    Ferns lines being given to Zipp is probably why I love Zipp Zipp seems very Barbie Skipper in a way that is probably why I like Zipp. I also like why RD was very Blunt in the early seasons

  • @mix-up9003
    @mix-up9003 10 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +8

    I had the sneaking suspicion they were using scrap idea form the movie, it was apparently some sort of toxic magic pollution if I recall, I love the mystery and tension on that, but I hate the rush conclusion on what it was. Thanks for the video.

  • @fluttershyisnotadoormat4678
    @fluttershyisnotadoormat4678 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +23

    I wish sparky was cut character...

  • @EmmaLikesTacoMusic
    @EmmaLikesTacoMusic 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +15

    That is fun intro, I love it!

  • @misterconartist
    @misterconartist 8 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +3

    i will draw fern, this was a great video

  • @spooky1997
    @spooky1997 14 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +6

    Artists. Grab your pens.

  • @SmokeTheHorsehog
    @SmokeTheHorsehog 13 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +4

    My immediate question is what the hell were they thinking with that Mysterious Room, the same thing I'm still thinking about the Mysterious Room in Tell Your Tale... But I have a bigger question. If Fern was meant to be Hitch's new deputy, would Sprout still be in the show at all? He was doing community service and not deputy anymore, after all.

  • @amberwilliams6999
    @amberwilliams6999 16 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +7

    Wow i think it's really cool that we were originally going to see misty's spell room in make your mark and it also being like g5 version of the cutie mark map room which I love but i still love g5 no matter what 🎉🎉🎉🩷🩷🩷

  • @harleaarmstrong7659
    @harleaarmstrong7659 8 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +6

    "MLP G5 was meant to be the best generation and never-cancelable" is the best joke I've ever heard XD

  • @AmandaLove-mu7us
    @AmandaLove-mu7us 11 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +2

    Everypony: "WRITE THAT DOWN!"

  • @ClearHeartAppleMLP
    @ClearHeartAppleMLP 8 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +2

    From the sounds of it this all ties into the connecting back story between G4 and G5 in the pitch bible. Had we not lost Brian Goldner its very likely this is what we would have got albeit with Fern obviously not there.
    Now the 6 chairs in the crystal room..THAT likely is the very place the ceremony to recharge the unity crystals took place with 5 of the mane 6 and Starlight Glimmer as the leaders of the New Equestria settlements. And up to a point in History the pony guardians who caried on the duty after they and each successive guardian passed.
    Its possible Queen Haven, Alphabittle & Argyle were the only decendants of their generation left of the Guardians. The true nature of the seperated crystals and the unification ceremony all lost to time.

  • @TwitalAnimates
    @TwitalAnimates 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +9

    TRUE FERN FANS WHERE ARE YOU 🗣🗣🗣🗣

  • @AzraelIbliz
    @AzraelIbliz 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +8

    I am sorry if I am a bummer here. But in gerneral when you write a character you think about what they add to the story. If the same goal can be reached with already existing charcters it is very common to scrab the new character. If you think about that the maincast is already 6 Characters yeah it's very understandable that they cut Fern. I don't know about the other changes though since I didn't watch much of this generation.

  • @shane5326
    @shane5326 12 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +2

    I mean what was stopping them from reusing Sprout if they didn't decide to make a replacement deputy? Even if Fern replaced him, they could've had him be the pony who complains about not having magic and can't stand the other ponies instead of Posey "Karen" Bloom.

  • @seandragon9130
    @seandragon9130 6 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    Well that's a bummer, I would have liked to see the first draft and the new character they originally attended to add in Make Your Mark, but while the previous chapter the one we got now was okay but hearing what you're saying it had a bit of a few issues here and there but all in all it was an okay chapter.

  • @joshuawilfred8050
    @joshuawilfred8050 13 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +2

    someone has to tell this draft to hawk nightwing

  • @otaku-sempai2197
    @otaku-sempai2197 11 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +3

    Have you never watched Ghostbusters? Janine is pronounced: jah-NEEN. I heard you and my first thought was "Who the buck is jah-NINE?"

  • @AmandaLove-mu7us
    @AmandaLove-mu7us 11 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +2

    Oh great now we have 3 TH-camrs on Hasbro's wanted list😭😭😭😭

  • @mk-aka-morgan8386
    @mk-aka-morgan8386 12 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +4

    WHERE DID YOU GET THIS INFORMATION!?!?

  • @voltrainferno6360
    @voltrainferno6360 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +4

    Ok yeah, they should have gone that way. Thanks for the confusion, hAsbRo!

  • @OG.StrawberryGoat
    @OG.StrawberryGoat 4 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +2

    This finally leaked? I've heard rumors but dang- there it is!

  • @Bumble_BeeProtogen
    @Bumble_BeeProtogen 9 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    At this point am just gonna remake make your mark myself because am just so upset of how it came out it really just failed a whole community and even it’s targeting addince don’t even waichs it as my sister who IS in the age demographic for the show finds it boring and rather waich something else

  • @seandragon9130
    @seandragon9130 6 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    I heard originally that the crew was originally going to make a season 2 in Make Your Mark but that project was scrapped and canceled, after Hasbro decided to continue the story on tell your Tale and I also heard that they were originally were going to do a other Equestria Girls G5 version maybe you can do a video talking about the project that the G5 crew were originally trying to do.

  • @markglasses
    @markglasses 11 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +2

    Fern? That name sounds familiar.

  • @johnny2x47
    @johnny2x47 7 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    Like that was my biggest gripe with the series overall it could have been better if Hasbro wasn't too busy micromanaging it. Like every time something creative was going to happen Hasbro would stop and interfere and stop what could have been an overall great series

  • @moisieiev7124
    @moisieiev7124 14 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    One thing that makes me curious about initial drafts for G5, is how connected it was to G4. Before Hasbro encountered Copyright problems

  • @moisieiev7124
    @moisieiev7124 14 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    I wonder if Cutie Map was cut because of Copyright problems

  • @MAnimations-mg4ow
    @MAnimations-mg4ow 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +6

    Was hoping to hear a well written story, welp... reality Is often disappointing. Hope to hear the draft made by Boulder Media.

  • @Tanmaydeshpande-nl5jy
    @Tanmaydeshpande-nl5jy 16 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    the cutie map has 7 chairs

  • @farvardinmainyu1961
    @farvardinmainyu1961 3 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    🤯

  • @trinitybirtcil6696
    @trinitybirtcil6696 9 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Do we know anything about future pony content?

  • @quinnhouk5369
    @quinnhouk5369 14 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    That’s crazy

  • @mayowhishes
    @mayowhishes 12 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    little big planet music 🎶

  • @tygical
    @tygical 6 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    12:08 not bro using banjo kazooie music 😭😭😭

  • @hannahlamagna
    @hannahlamagna 14 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    Your so awesome

  • @SarahFleming-q9p
    @SarahFleming-q9p 16 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    Under 1hr
    👇

  • @DomausCharles
    @DomausCharles 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    Do another one this is awesome

  • @MewDenise
    @MewDenise 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +3

    I just HOPE that they learned something from this and will make something great with G6

  • @orionskittles
    @orionskittles 13 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    rahhh i'd love to join the discord server and draw fern but it's a 16+ server and i'm only 15 😔

  • @renamon5658
    @renamon5658 17 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา +1

    K

  • @ECI_MLP
    @ECI_MLP 16 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Hey

  • @ML20-gt2vh
    @ML20-gt2vh 11 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    11:40