Adam, you are the best!!! I've followed your videos since 2014 as a beginner, and now I'm quite proficient in the English language. I have to say that you were the first native speaker who I could understand, thank you for being so empathetic and slowing down your speech while sharing your vast knowledge and tips :) I wish you all the best!
This is really great lesson, I'm a new CELTA graduate from Oxford and still struggling with writing, I hope if all English learners watch this video, it's perfect. Thank you very much.❤
I had been struggling to get my work done on Writing untill I watched your really useful video. The task used to seem totally dull and complex to accomplish and it lowered my overall score in ielts, I try to make it possible with the help of yours. Thank you so much🙏🏼
What a lovely and informative lesson it is. Adam is best at what he does, he does not just teach us what we should do, but he also elaborates more on what we should not do so that we understand the main points.
I am struggling with my budget to afford a good English tutor, but thankfully I found your channel. It is very helpful to me that I soon will take the TOEFL test. God bless you, Teacher Adam!
i want to follow all your videos, i think this video is my way of success. i am poor grammar in english. i can follow all your videos as much i can. thanks a lot sir.
Thank you so much Ms. Adam ! You're the best. I got better in writing and organizing my ideas, but I still have a problem my language isn't too well . My sentences are weak due to my languag. Even simple and important words I cannot understand them 😓 That's my biggest problem.
I don't know which words I should use to express how grateful I am to you. So, simply I thank you lot for helping me get 27 in the writing section of TOEFL ibt. Your tips gave my writing a structure that was helpful in the test. Best wishes for you, Adam. I will always be your fan. A great teacher you are ☺☺
Wow, this is a lifesaver! i always struggle with how to write and structure a body paragraph. I don't know how to elaborate my idea.! your breakdown of each sentence makes it so clear to me now.. thankyou so for your free education!! i wish you success in all things you do in life :D
Hi, Adam! I wrote the essay below and would really like to hear your opinion about it. I followed you indications step by step. Some people say that private schools should not be allowed to exist. Why do people believe this? What is your opinion? Introduction 1.General statement. Private educational system has been experiencing a long existence during centuries, starting as exclusive institutions lead by wealthy rulers or clerics and ending nowadays by being spread all over the world. 2. Question. While there are disadvantages to existing private schools, (3. Opinion) I rather believe that individual educational institutions are beneficial and should be encouraged. Body paragraph 1 1.Topic sentence. The vast majority of people pleads against private schools due to two valid reasons. 2.1 Present the 1st point, idea, argument. One of the most significant consideration against exclusive schools is in terms of high annual costs for attending it. 3.1 Expend/elaborate. This cost is prohibiting for pupils who come out of families with less financial resources, leading to an exclusively admission of students with wealthy backgrounds. 4.1 Example. The annual price for American School in Bucharest is, for instance 12,000 Euros/year, way too high for a Romanian family to afford. 2.2 present the 2nd point, idea, argument. Moreover, high fees do not guarantee certified-teachers, who do not have a teaching degree. 3.2 Expend/elaborate Having a certification does not always entitle a professor to be the most suitable for a teaching role, but proves the schoolmaster’s ability in working with children in a proper way. 4.2 Example For example, last year in Romania a math teacher from a private school became a controversial topic after he was fired due to his lack of abilities in working with young persons, abilities which are normally measured throughout these certifications. Body paragraph 2 1.Topic sentence. While the point above may be justified, there are other arguments to sustain private schools. 2.1 Present the 1st point, idea, argument. The most valid or plausible point is that private schools are able to offer a better understanding of kids’ needs and interests. 3.1 Expend/elaborate. In exclusive institutions, children are divided into small classes, which allows teacher to be more focused on what students are talented of, what they like to do, and things to be improved for each individual. These kind of schools could grant access to theater, music courses, language lessons tailored on specific needs. 4.1 Example. For example, if a kid is talented on languages or music, school is able to offer real professionals like native speakers teachers or musicians, aspects impossible to fulfil in a public system. 2.2 present the 2nd point, idea, argument. Another important argument is that private schools have their own international alumni network which enables their students to have more professional opportunities after graduation in finding better jobs or following a greater career in an international environment. 3.2 Expend/elaborate These networks are in constant contact with schools, participating to events held by exclusive institutions, where companies already can find potential employees. 4.2 Example According to Economical Journal specialists, the employment grade after graduation is higher for private educational entities (60%), compared to 30% for public schools. Conclusion Selecting the right educational path for your kid, either private or public, is a very personal and important task for a parent who has to carefully weigh the advantages or disadvantages of both systems and implications in the future professional life of a young person. In conclusion, the benefits of private schools overcome public systems advantages, especially from the point of view of better professional opportunities in the future thanks to their alumni network and individual tailored system.
you know what, I am a native english speaker and I have never been taught how to write. We just don't get grammar or writing construction in our schools! Thank you for putting this information out there for those of us that want to learn how to write!
extremely useful video, especially because the position and connection of the example with the last sentence is simplified. Gonna watch the whole video 👍👍👍 Thank you so much Adam
Adam, frankly speaking, you are a mega star. your tutorials are always excellent. The explanation is clear. Am a new subscriber but i really fine your videos helpful. Thank so so much.
Hi! Adam. Thank you so much for your efforts, they are extremely helpful. I have a few question that I hope you answer. In the advantage and disadvantage type. Where should I write my opinion? in the introduction or conclusion? And should I write the pros in the first body and the cons in the second one, or it depends on my opinion. Like if I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, I should start the first body by the pros. Thanks in advance.
Thank You Respected Sir .. Sir Now a days I have prepared IELTS test for further study to abroad. Your leacture helps me a lots to improve English within short time....,, Sir plz make a vedio in each part of easy such as Opinion Discussion problem solving etc....
Hi Adam, Thanks for this video. It's really helpful. As you mentioned in the video that in future you shall create videos about how to make different body paragraphs and explain about their functions. Please try to make one such video. I am eagerly awaiting for it. Once again thanks so much. You are amazing tutor for many of us. Cheers
Is it correct? The key reason of traffic jam is more preference to private vehicle. A large number of people prefer to drive instead of travelling by a public transport for work. A lot of cars even two wheelers are congested on the road which lead to traffic congestion. Although many people due to it often get late for their work, they do not opt public transport. And the another factor for traffic problem is narrow roads.Due to the space of roads is less, automobiles can not be driven adjustably.
A student who is weak in mathematics may need additional assistance from his parents or a tutor to clarify textbook examples. Can we say his or her parents or their parents? What would be the agreement?
Technically, 'a student' is singular, so you should say his, her, his or her. Many people avoid the 'his or her' because it's too long and over a whole conversation or piece of writing it becomes annoying. Better to choose one pronoun and go with that. However, these days many people simply use 'their' and it is generally accepted as a part of the language. In formal writing, though, use one of the singular pronouns.
14:44 in the last sentence "this student will be have greater..." isn't 'be' redundant? instead of it, can we write "this student will be having greater..."? thank you for your priceless videos, Adam, they are excellent for English learners
Some videos on affixes that can go with any word unlike those are fixed prefixes.. For example the suffix like can go with all words.. Also, In word power made easy I have read that one can add "ness" to any adjective for the formation of nouns. But the internet agrees to this book... Please resolve my problem..
Hi, I love how you teach and explain very well, but it is difficult for me to understand because it is almost two years living in the United State. Second-year of college and ESL class is dangerous with essay writing. :((
Dear I follow your videos really it develop my English but I need lessons in academic writing especially in my thesis could you tell me where I can find it
At 11:30 , It says "Discuss both points", doesn't it mean we have to discuss BOTH points and THEN give our opinion? Why do we just choose one in our first paragraph?
Sir, thank you for your videos . But one point is still confusing for me, can you explain me? Expanding/elaborating are similar to providing reasons? What I mean is that we can just provide reasons and it can be reckoned as expanding/elaborating? Thank you
![[Part 1] ทารกน้อยถูกทิ้ง👶 หญิงชราเก็บขวดขายเลี้ยงดูเขาจนโต #โลกการละคร](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/nPTDvFCExks/mqdefault.jpg)
Adam, you are the best!!! I've followed your videos since 2014 as a beginner, and now I'm quite proficient in the English language. I have to say that you were the first native speaker who I could understand, thank you for being so empathetic and slowing down your speech while sharing your vast knowledge and tips :) I wish you all the best!
This is really great lesson, I'm a new CELTA graduate from Oxford and still struggling with writing, I hope if all English learners watch this video, it's perfect.
Thank you very much.❤
I had been struggling to get my work done on Writing untill I watched your really useful video. The task used to seem totally dull and complex to accomplish and it lowered my overall score in ielts, I try to make it possible with the help of yours.
Thank you so much🙏🏼
What a lovely and informative lesson it is. Adam is best at what he does, he does not just teach us what we should do, but he also elaborates more on what we should not do so that we understand the main points.
I am struggling with my budget to afford a good English tutor, but thankfully I found your channel. It is very helpful to me that I soon will take the TOEFL test. God bless you, Teacher Adam!
How did it goes?
@@renassalahudden9520 Hi!! It went well though my score not passing my target. Yet, I really am grateful that I have improved my writing skill. ✊😆
Hey Adam,stop bombarding my mind with this kind of cool tips.God bless you & your family man.Great job☝️
Insightful, organised, and clear overview of pros and cons. One of the most useful presentations possible on the subject.
About 3 years later I will come back and tell you my score. Your videos are really helpful
Sir,
You are the best.
I've seen almost 20 different teachers' classes
You are the best.
Thank you very much sir.
it has been more than a week since you last posted, I'm dying for more
My favourite English teacher, Adam, thanks a lot for this lesson .
Got 24 in writing!!! I am happy..thanks brother i followed your idea
The best explanation I've seen so far, in depth.
Hi Adam. Great video, as usually
Please, can you make a series of videos on each type of essay questions
Thank you!
Dear Sir Adam,
As always great ...
U R the best teacher...👏🏻👏🏻
i want to follow all your videos, i think this video is my way of success. i am poor grammar in english. i can follow all your videos as much i can. thanks a lot sir.
Thank you so much Adam! It was a useful lesson to prepare myself for IELTS.
Zero unlike that's great
....... My one of the fvrt teachers 👏
Thank you so much Ms. Adam ! You're the best. I got better in writing and organizing my ideas, but I still have a problem my language isn't too well . My sentences are weak due to my languag. Even simple and important words I cannot understand them 😓
That's my biggest problem.
I don't know which words I should use to express how grateful I am to you. So, simply I thank you lot for helping me get 27 in the writing section of TOEFL ibt. Your tips gave my writing a structure that was helpful in the test. Best wishes for you, Adam. I will always be your fan. A great teacher you are ☺☺
Simple superb sir. I can't find better than this. Your teaching are really awesome.. Thank you so much. God bless you.
You’re doing good job for such students who are vulnerable in English
Honestly, you are the best at this!!
Wow, this is a lifesaver! i always struggle with how to write and structure a body paragraph. I don't know how to elaborate my idea.! your breakdown of each sentence makes it so clear to me now..
thankyou so for your free education!! i wish you success in all things you do in life :D
I enjoy listening to how you teach......very clear!
Thank you for taking your time to create such valuable videos for english students. You are the best!
you are the best one lecturer!!!!!keep it up!!!!!!.........
Your tips are of high value for me
Hello Adam,you made me pride with your explanation. You are indeed a food tutor thank you.
Mr Adam, Fantastic your explanations are
Thank you Adam!!! I use your videos in my teaching.
Hi, Adam! I wrote the essay below and would really like to hear your opinion about it. I followed you indications step by step.
Some people say that private schools should not be allowed to exist. Why do people believe this? What is your opinion?
Introduction
1.General statement. Private educational system has been experiencing a long existence during centuries, starting as exclusive institutions lead by wealthy rulers or clerics and ending nowadays by being spread all over the world. 2. Question. While there are disadvantages to existing private schools, (3. Opinion) I rather believe that individual educational institutions are beneficial and should be encouraged.
Body paragraph 1
1.Topic sentence. The vast majority of people pleads against private schools due to two valid reasons. 2.1 Present the 1st point, idea, argument. One of the most significant consideration against exclusive schools is in terms of high annual costs for attending it. 3.1 Expend/elaborate. This cost is prohibiting for pupils who come out of families with less financial resources, leading to an exclusively admission of students with wealthy backgrounds. 4.1 Example. The annual price for American School in Bucharest is, for instance 12,000 Euros/year, way too high for a Romanian family to afford. 2.2 present the 2nd point, idea, argument. Moreover, high fees do not guarantee certified-teachers, who do not have a teaching degree. 3.2 Expend/elaborate Having a certification does not always entitle a professor to be the most suitable for a teaching role, but proves the schoolmaster’s ability in working with children in a proper way. 4.2 Example For example, last year in Romania a math teacher from a private school became a controversial topic after he was fired due to his lack of abilities in working with young persons, abilities which are normally measured throughout these certifications.
Body paragraph 2
1.Topic sentence. While the point above may be justified, there are other arguments to sustain private schools. 2.1 Present the 1st point, idea, argument. The most valid or plausible point is that private schools are able to offer a better understanding of kids’ needs and interests. 3.1 Expend/elaborate. In exclusive institutions, children are divided into small classes, which allows teacher to be more focused on what students are talented of, what they like to do, and things to be improved for each individual. These kind of schools could grant access to theater, music courses, language lessons tailored on specific needs. 4.1 Example. For example, if a kid is talented on languages or music, school is able to offer real professionals like native speakers teachers or musicians, aspects impossible to fulfil in a public system. 2.2 present the 2nd point, idea, argument. Another important argument is that private schools have their own international alumni network which enables their students to have more professional opportunities after graduation in finding better jobs or following a greater career in an international environment. 3.2 Expend/elaborate These networks are in constant contact with schools, participating to events held by exclusive institutions, where companies already can find potential employees. 4.2 Example According to Economical Journal specialists, the employment grade after graduation is higher for private educational entities (60%), compared to 30% for public schools.
Conclusion
Selecting the right educational path for your kid, either private or public, is a very personal and important task for a parent who has to carefully weigh the advantages or disadvantages of both systems and implications in the future professional life of a young person. In conclusion, the benefits of private schools overcome public systems advantages, especially from the point of view of better professional opportunities in the future thanks to their alumni network and individual tailored system.
you know what, I am a native english speaker and I have never been taught how to write. We just don't get grammar or writing construction in our schools! Thank you for putting this information out there for those of us that want to learn how to write!
extremely useful video, especially because the position and connection of the example with the last sentence is simplified. Gonna watch the whole video 👍👍👍 Thank you so much Adam
Adam, frankly speaking, you are a mega star. your tutorials are always excellent. The explanation is clear. Am a new subscriber but i really fine your videos helpful. Thank so so much.
Thank you for useful lessons, You are one of the best teachers
My favourite teacher, Adam
What a wonderful video! I finally know how to write a body paragraph. THANK YOU!
Hi! Adam. Thank you so much for your efforts, they are extremely helpful.
I have a few question that I hope you answer. In the advantage and disadvantage type.
Where should I write my opinion? in the introduction or conclusion? And should I write the pros in the first body and the cons in the second one, or it depends on my opinion. Like if I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, I should start the first body by the pros.
Thanks in advance.
It s very useful topic for all learners, thank you for your endeavour to explain, keep it up, Sir . Love you from Thailand.
Thank you very much Adam!
Thank You Respected Sir ..
Sir Now a days I have prepared IELTS test for further study to abroad. Your leacture helps me a lots to improve English within short time....,, Sir plz make a vedio in each part of easy such as Opinion Discussion problem solving etc....
Very helpful video. Exactly what my mistake points. thanks
thank you so much Adam~~
Thanks a lot for your valuable lecture.
Thanks Adam:) I'm preparing for IELTS and I need someone for checking my essay so is there anyone who needs IELTS writing buddy? :)
No body dislike this video, I think the negative people stop learning
such an educational video. Clear and very helpful. Thank you for making this video!
Very helpful 👍
Adam, Excellent presentation and description. Can you please provide a video for cause and effective or advantage or disadvantage type of essay
Hi Adam,
Thanks for this video. It's really helpful. As you mentioned in the video that in future you shall create videos about how to make different body paragraphs and explain about their functions. Please try to make one such video. I am eagerly awaiting for it. Once again thanks so much. You are amazing tutor for many of us.
Cheers
Thank you very much Adam for great video
Best video.
Thank you.
Is it your other youtube channel?
thanks for an another upload! It is very helpful💓
Is it correct?
The key reason of traffic jam is more preference to private vehicle. A large number of people prefer to drive instead of travelling by a public transport for work. A lot of cars even two wheelers are congested on the road which lead to traffic congestion. Although many people due to it often get late for their work, they do not opt public transport. And the another factor for traffic problem is narrow roads.Due to the space of roads is less, automobiles can not be driven adjustably.
This is very great. Could I use this for my students? Thank you so much for your reply.
Your lessons are very helpful. Thank you so much! :D
A student who is weak in mathematics may need additional assistance from his parents or a tutor to clarify textbook examples. Can we say his or her parents or their parents? What would be the agreement?
Technically, 'a student' is singular, so you should say his, her, his or her. Many people avoid the 'his or her' because it's too long and over a whole conversation or piece of writing it becomes annoying. Better to choose one pronoun and go with that. However, these days many people simply use 'their' and it is generally accepted as a part of the language. In formal writing, though, use one of the singular pronouns.
Thanks for your help sir
14:44 in the last sentence "this student will be have greater..." isn't 'be' redundant? instead of it, can we write "this student will be having greater..."? thank you for your priceless videos, Adam, they are excellent for English learners
Thank you, Adam, and I think you should open an Alipay account so students from China could make their donation.
Hi Adam, do you have any videos for CBEST writing? Thank you
Thank you Adam.
Sirr you r so much supportive
Do you have to paraphrase the background statement? Where should my opinion be? In the introduction or in the conclusion?
Awesome to way to teach sir...
Your teaching style amazing ! Love you sir .
Thanks! Very interesting and actually useful video!
This is a very helpful video.
Very excellent
Thank you Adam!!! I love the way you teach!
Really good curriculum. One question, will this help me study for the CBEST writing section? I think it would, I just want to reassure.
thank you for your efforts i follow your instructions and I hope to raise my writting skills accept my greetings
adama it is fine and i follw your program but some tines intrente break down my country pls down load in my email
very good lesson, thank you so much. am looking for your website but i cannot find that essay correction service details as you mention in the video.
You're too good👍.
Keys
1. response
2.content
3.delivery
4.coheson and cohesive
Bring lessons on Advanced Grammar such as Intonation or stress.
Thank you so, much for your help
Sir can you please make a video on "how to introduce next paragraph in the last of first paragraph".
Share your knowledge ❤️❤️ Sir
Thank you so much Sir. Very helpful :--)
Thanks 💕💙💝
Thank you Adam ...
Very useful video...
Some videos on affixes that can go with any word unlike those are fixed prefixes..
For example the suffix like can go with all words.. Also,
In word power made easy I have read that one can add "ness" to any adjective for the formation of nouns. But the internet agrees to this book... Please resolve my problem..
Fantastic lesson! Thank you!
How do I get to the edited one
Hi, I love how you teach and explain very well, but it is difficult for me to understand because it is almost two years living in the United State. Second-year of college and ESL class is dangerous with essay writing. :((
Thanks a lot teacher!
thank you soooooooooooooo much for this
Dear I follow your videos really it develop my English but I need lessons in academic writing especially in my thesis could you tell me where I can find it
Wow 😮
Intéressant thank teacher! 👍👍
youtube star! amy bro!!
what’s up! ㅋㅋㅋ lol
Sir please share something about the linking words,to connect paragraphs togather in an essay.it irritates me much! your every lesson is lucretive.
What is the alternative for To begin?
At 11:30 , It says "Discuss both points", doesn't it mean we have to discuss BOTH points and THEN give our opinion? Why do we just choose one in our first paragraph?
Sir, thank you for your videos . But one point is still confusing for me, can you explain me? Expanding/elaborating are similar to providing reasons? What I mean is that we can just provide reasons and it can be reckoned as expanding/elaborating? Thank you
You are amazing.