How to Start your Statement of Purpose or Personal Statement like a Pro | with a Real Example

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  • @BestmanAcademy
    @BestmanAcademy  4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Find other paragraphs, emails, and steps for admission and funding in our free course here: niw.bestmanacademy.com
    Good luck with your search!

  • @MeBookology
    @MeBookology 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    You are amazing Sir. I found an advisor at MIT and Princeton. I have been struggling to write my SOP. I have two top universities in my hand and I don't want to receive a rejection letter because of my poor SOP. Your instruction immensely saved me. God bless your hard work.

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      🙏And yours as well. Best wishes!

    • @emilycarter8922
      @emilycarter8922 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      You might want to check this out th-cam.com/video/5ZUgT5cgTg0/w-d-xo.html

  • @abdulkhaliqshuaibu
    @abdulkhaliqshuaibu 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is one of -if not the most- comprehensive explanations on this topic. 👏👏

  • @mustaphaosman3762
    @mustaphaosman3762 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How come I didn't see this channel earlier. Thanks sir I've learnt alot

  • @adenreleobalanlege6440
    @adenreleobalanlege6440 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    You are a good teacher, may God bless you.because a day with a good teacher is far more rewarding than 100 years of hard study.

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      It's my pleasure! God bless you too. Best wishes.

  • @nwosuedith8600
    @nwosuedith8600 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    My friend speaks highly of this channel; now I can attest to this. From this time onwards, I'll sleep on this channel😂 till I gain admission...

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Cheers to you and your friend!

  • @tobiadeyeye4507
    @tobiadeyeye4507 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am very happy to come by your channel because i have been looking for someone that is in the nutrition field with experience on applying for grad school.
    thank you

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Good to have you here, Mike.

    • @tobiadeyeye4507
      @tobiadeyeye4507 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@BestmanAcademy thank you

    • @tobiadeyeye4507
      @tobiadeyeye4507 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@BestmanAcademy Hello doc, i would love to be part of your mentoring network, kindly share with me how i can go about that.
      Thank you

  • @estherboadu5116
    @estherboadu5116 ปีที่แล้ว

    Well done DR
    Please can you Elaborate more on the change of field? A video on that will be appreciated 🙏

  • @lonewolf.8635
    @lonewolf.8635 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This is awesome content 🙂
    ... I will be using the two... Personal story and statistical approach

  • @abdoumaravia4425
    @abdoumaravia4425 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you Dr. Ojo it's one of the best video i've ever seen.

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hey Abdou! Good to hear from you. I'm glad you found it helpful

  • @ibrahimswaray7459
    @ibrahimswaray7459 ปีที่แล้ว

    You are the best!

  • @lawalbukola250
    @lawalbukola250 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much Sir, well detailed

  • @GradschoolAdvisor
    @GradschoolAdvisor 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    We can't wait for the next video. Thank you sir.

  • @sinapaul318
    @sinapaul318 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    hello dr. Ojo,
    good day sir, I have watched so many of your videos on here and I must say it has really answered most of my questions on how to get admission into U S schools. I would love to ask if SOP means the same things as ESSAY cause the school I'm trying to apply to requested that I submit an essay talking about myself personally and professionally and how the program will help me achieve my professional endeavors.
    hope to hear back from you soon sir

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hello Mr Paul,
      What you have described are what is typically covered in an SoP. So you should be able to use the SoP lessons here as your "essay"

    • @sinapaul318
      @sinapaul318 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@BestmanAcademy okay Dr. Thank you so much sir.

  • @LightAlways
    @LightAlways ปีที่แล้ว

    Both personal story and statistical support sir.
    Thanks for your time

  • @successchinakwe9529
    @successchinakwe9529 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow! Very insightful.
    The fear is now vanishing little by little... Hope has come alive that I can do it.
    Thank you so much Sir. God bless you Sir

  • @rhema3272
    @rhema3272 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow. This is amazing. I'll be using both approach

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Great! Best wishes for your application

  • @amosolalekanakinyemi4488
    @amosolalekanakinyemi4488 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Very Helpful.

  • @fademidey4701
    @fademidey4701 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much, sir this explanation came to me handily exactly what I was looking out for.

  • @naturalafricanfoods1221
    @naturalafricanfoods1221 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello Dr,
    Please educate sir. Will a student of undergraduate be required to write Statement of purpose?

  • @TheAceReviews
    @TheAceReviews 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Exactly what I was looking for. Thank you!

  • @marieannabvl
    @marieannabvl 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am searching for tips for writing a study objective! I really appreciate your video!

  • @bensonnsikakabasi3462
    @bensonnsikakabasi3462 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Dr. I am a newbie. Pls when can I send this SOP is it after the first code email or I can attach my SOP with the first code email which am to ask for fundings?

  • @Chethakmp3
    @Chethakmp3 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much! Your video is very helpful!

  • @joshuaolowolaju
    @joshuaolowolaju 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is great. Thanks Dr

  • @mogoahlilian
    @mogoahlilian ปีที่แล้ว

    This is really good! Thank you.

  • @ogunyemiyetundemary9934
    @ogunyemiyetundemary9934 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Welldone Prof.

  • @adetayo268
    @adetayo268 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please sir, do you have a mentorship program?

  • @princessokoye-ze1wp
    @princessokoye-ze1wp ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you for this. Please can you help review my SOP?

  • @Hannylytics
    @Hannylytics 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you

  • @VizWithVictory
    @VizWithVictory 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is great!
    I would be using both🙂

  • @yusufeniola3341
    @yusufeniola3341 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am so going to use the two methods. Thank you for the information...... However I will like to ask a question regarding my grade with is 3.47 out of 5.00 from the department of Pasture and Range Management at University of Agriculture Abeokuta. I will like to advance more on crop sciences not agronomy for my msc. Do I need any professional certification to update my resume before applying

  • @oluwamuyiwaamusan5395
    @oluwamuyiwaamusan5395 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is great and insightful

  • @babatunnadite
    @babatunnadite 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    wow! Thanks Doc.

  • @chipochinyathi4992
    @chipochinyathi4992 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    do i have to always follow this procedure in all personal statements or in a case where some have specific needs like they say write a short statement that describes your academic interests, purpose,objectives and motivation in undertaking this postgraduate study i will just have to stick to those specifications?

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi.
      Please stick to the instructions for your particular application. Regardless of the instructions, you can still get a sense of how to argue certain points from these videos. For example, you can use how we described our interests here in paragraph 1 to construct yours. Same for describing your educational or work experience. I hope that helps

  • @edetokon7255
    @edetokon7255 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I will do both

  • @osowatejiri5930
    @osowatejiri5930 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much
    This is really helpful

  • @felixeruvwetere-orere6220
    @felixeruvwetere-orere6220 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you doc.

  • @Godisgood7040
    @Godisgood7040 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you very much

  • @JapawithCelina
    @JapawithCelina 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you Dr😊 my question is ..”is it compulsory to indicate a supervisor in the SOP? Thanks

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It is not compulsory if it is not stated as a requirement on the department's website. Having said that, I always advise you mention one or more professors whose research interests you. It sort of shows you have some clarity on your goals and have done your research about the department to know the professors that can potentially mentor you to achieve your goals.

  • @sandahadizah9994
    @sandahadizah9994 ปีที่แล้ว

    I want both

  • @Bridgetugochi
    @Bridgetugochi 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Sir is personal statement same as motivational letter?

    • @BestmanAcademy
      @BestmanAcademy  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      They can be interchangeable terms as they often comprise of similar sections/information needed to fully understand your person and your goals. You should always lookout for any instructions on the department webpage on how to write these documents. If in doubt or if instructionsare lacking, you may contact the graduate coordinator for clarifications. If they don't reply, use th resources we have here to draft yours and if they reply, some of the information needed would have been addressed in our SoP videos so you can still use these ideas to argue your case when writing whichever essay.

  • @zinoagbanobi7757
    @zinoagbanobi7757 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello dr. Ur videos are really insightful. Can u please help me review my SOP?

  • @joshuaolowolaju
    @joshuaolowolaju 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is great. Thanks Dr

  • @TopViralvideosonly
    @TopViralvideosonly 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you

  • @oyindamolagilbert-ojo5434
    @oyindamolagilbert-ojo5434 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you

  • @FortisinFide
    @FortisinFide 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you

  • @ilohsamuel7666
    @ilohsamuel7666 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you