Statement of Purpose Tips: Harvard (HGSE) Masters in Education [admitted student real example 2020]
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 4 ก.ค. 2020
- This Statement of Purpose is from a student who was accepted to the Harvard Graduate School of Education with a focus on higher education. Here I read the statement and give commentary on what makes this a strong statement and how to borrow elements for your own SOP.
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Personal Statement Example please!!
Personal statement example please! Preferably one from someone who doesn't have direct experience in their desired field of education
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I know who this student is!! She’s amazing and one of the kindest and committed people know!! She helped me w my masters program app
Yes she is amazing! She didn't need much help from me.
Was watching this in bed at 2:00 am cozily and the video made me get off my bed and revamp my entire SOP. So so thankful.
These videos are so helpful :) definitely will pass this along to my undergrad students thinking about grad school 💓
Please do!
Interesting to see how criterias are insanely far from those in Europe and especially France, it’s totally unthinkable for us to share your personal life in statement of purpose… very informative
Hi Lauren! Thank you for creating this channel. I watched almost all ur videos, it sure helped me a lot! Thanks to you, I got admitted into the Graduate School of Media Design in Japan last month:')
You're so welcome!
This video is loaded. Thank you Lauren. Permit me to borrow some words.
Thanks for this. It would help me better structure my SOP.
You are welcome
This was a very much needed video! Thank you so much.
Glad it was helpful!
yes, they are the academic focus but this letter seems a little more personal to me.
Hi Lauren, thank you for these videos. I've been watching the ones about SOPs and your feedback on others' essays definitely provided some desperately needed guidance on writing my own. I would love to see a video from you focusing on 'theory' based programs (like theoretical physics and math) as there aren't many examples that I can find online, and I am personally trying to get into a PhD program in pure math.
I don't have any experince with those, but I'll check around with some friends to see what I can find.
I too want it lauran
This is super helpful, thank you !
Glad it was helpful!
Good things come to those who wait , you'll know if this is for you.
Thanks for these amazing videos, Lauren! I just wanted ask you one question though: when you write your SOP, do you necessarily have to list your experiences in chronological order? Or is it fine as long as your past experiences are relevant and make a compelling case as to why you are fit for the graduate program?
They don't have to be in order. You probably also can't fit all your experience in an SOP. I generally recommend to pick 1-3 relevant experiences to share in an SOP (depending on the length requirements). Think about weaving together a story of the main highlights of your experience. Your resume is the space for chronological order.
This is amazing. I hope I could be able to set up an online meeting with you.
Thank you!
Thank you for sharing 🙏🏽❤️
You are so welcome
Very good job 👏
Much appreciated!
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This is super helpful
Can i please get the the soft copy of it? Or link of this sop
Could you read a PS in philosophy of science programs
What if person does not have sound statement of account
And here I am, with a 1000 words max. allowance for my SOP...
If you download my free sample essays you will see some that are less words.
Thanks Ma'am!
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Hi Lauren,
I am from Uzb. Can I apply for a masters degree even though i have graduated masters?
Can i get application fee waiver?
Thanks
Please make this type of videos more
Plzz...🙏🙏🙏
Thanks for the feedback. I have more coming
Thanks for sharing 🤗❤️
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By any chance you have coached people who apply for masters programmes in the UK? If so, is there any difference when it comes to writing the SOP for UK masters programmes? I've read the guiding questions on the school's website, and they all seem very academic-focused. Great thanks in advance!
I do not have experience applying to UK program.
@@LaurenValdez Thanks for the reply, Lauren!
C, and thank you for this video!
You can find many personal statement examples on this playlist. th-cam.com/video/0xMhYjINMDI/w-d-xo.html
hello Lauren, i am unable to download the link for the sample sop, could you help me with that? Thank You.
Try this link essays.laurenvaldez.com/
Hello!
I am wondering if this MS in education from HGSE will help to become a lecturer at community college level or gre into investment banks.
Thank you!
Most community colleges you only need a masters degree to teach. So it should be helpful.
Hey, I am a paramedic and would like to request sample of one for Master of health care management
Thanks Lauren!
It really helped me I almost gave up writing my essay 😭
Quick one question! Would it be necessary to include specific professor's research?
You might want to check this out th-cam.com/video/5ZUgT5cgTg0/w-d-xo.html
Thank you for your video it was super helpful! May I ask, should a statement of purpose have a creative title or just simply state “ statement of purpose” in top left corner under name?
It doesn't need a title and I generally don't see students put one.
Hi Lauren, I came across your channel last month, and this is such an exemplary resource and kudos to you for helping passionate but not so privileged children with loads of information.
I have one query- I am applying for a master's that is not related to my bachelor's and I am having difficulty understanding how to put it across? Can you do a video on the same or provide me with a tip. Also, if you have any slots available for a feedback session, please let me know. I couldn't find it on your website!
Again, thank you, and kudos!
You might want to check this out th-cam.com/video/5ZUgT5cgTg0/w-d-xo.html
@@emilycarter8922 much thanms
What do I do if I come from a loving and functional family who gave me a great childhood
Hi Lauren, hope you are doing great. would you like to review my sop for yale graduate school?
I would be happy to. I have a few options for office hours, however I am on family leave at the moment and am looking to come back soon (before the new year for sure) . Make sure to subscribe and if you are on my email list you will be the first to know about new resources. landing.mailerlite.com/webforms/landing/i0p4x3
Thank you for sharing. My GPA of bachelor’s degree is low, but GPA of master’s degree is ver high. Could you please give me some advice on overcoming and explaining my low GPA?
I wouldn't worry about it if you Master GPA is high. You also check out this video with specific strategies on overcoming a low GPA th-cam.com/video/EzpY4FOHEic/w-d-xo.html
@@LaurenValdez Thank you for your encouragement. I will watch this video. Have a good night.
I love your videos, love you, i requested you to upload MIT GRAD (Mechanical Engineering) SOP, it was my dream school last year i applied for mit media lab and i got rejected. Am planning to apply for class 24 (grad) at MIT.
I'll reach out to some friends to see if I can get my hands on an SOP of someone accepted to MIT Media Lab or Mechanical Engineering. You can also come by office hours and we can review what you previous submitted and talk about how to make improvements laurenvaldez.com/events
@@LaurenValdez am very glad that you replied, i also like to help people applying for grad program, because i find it very hard to find gard s.o.p, if you need any help plz let me know am happy to contribute and help, i not expert like you but i like to contribute.😊
Hi Lauren, are you still holding office hours?
Yes, my monthly free office hours are today at 5pm PT. My private office hours sell out fast, but you can sign up for the notification list to get notified if I add more spots. You can find all the info at laurenvaldez.com/events
Mam I'm a student of final year of Graduation with Education Honors ...I want to apply for Master degree in Education ..how can I apply in HGSE ?..please help me Mam
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I am completing my bachelor's degree in Engineering currently, but I'd like to pursue a Masters in Education, is that feasible?
Yes totally! I've also seen fully funded MEd programs for people in STEM. I recommend trying to do some tangential teaching if you don't have any experience. For example, tutoring or volunteering with youth.
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Hello Ms. Lauren, would you be willing to help me with revising my statement of purpose? I would truly appreciate it.
Check out my office hours times where I give feedback laurenvaldez.com/events
@@LaurenValdez the free option is in December and unfortunately, my deadline is December 1st. Thank you anyway.
Present I am from Indonesia
Are you reviewing SOP as a service?
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Please help me in making SOP
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Can you please also evaluate my sop and give me some tips.
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Isn't this too personal for a SOP ??
This program only has one essay, rather than a separate personal statement. In that case, you want to add in personal details as well. You can get very personal and vulnerable as long as it is relevant to why you will be a good fit for the program. In this case, this student wants to help students who are at risk of dropping out of college. Since she herself was one of those students and comes from a disadvantage background, that actually makes her a good candidate because she has a better ability to relate to students who are struggling. If she were applying to something else like engineering, these details wouldn't necessarily be relevant.
Are you sure that this one got approved ? 😂
Yes I saw their acceptance email