I absolutely love this personal statement! I have read a lot of them from various people and this one is living proof that it's not just about mentioning the 10 thousand essay competitions you've won, the olympiads you've participated in and work experience that is completely unobtainable for the average individual I especially like your clear text structure, a lot of essays seem to have this staccato flow to them where it feels like the sentences are being freestyled rather than carefully planned. So finally seeing a good example of this not being the case is relieving! Overall really well done, hope you're having a great time at warwick! It is well deserved :)
My personal statement right now sounds too much like an essay- do u think I should shorten what I think- and is it alright if i send u something to see what u think as of right now( ive only reflected with one paragraph right now)?
@@kathleennicole95 hey! would you be willing to review my personal statement too? im aware its been an year since you posted this video but I would still be extremely grateful to hear you opinion !
So glad you enjoyed the video:) th-cam.com/video/NksZ1yZP4Ek/w-d-xo.html here’s a link to another video I made that relates to economics applications if it helps!
hii, i'm also writing a personal statement for economics right now. i like it so far but i'm kinda stuck, could i send it to you so you can take a look at it? xxx
I absolutely love this personal statement! I have read a lot of them from various people and this one is living proof that it's not just about mentioning the 10 thousand essay competitions you've won, the olympiads you've participated in and work experience that is completely unobtainable for the average individual
I especially like your clear text structure, a lot of essays seem to have this staccato flow to them where it feels like the sentences are being freestyled rather than carefully planned. So finally seeing a good example of this not being the case is relieving!
Overall really well done, hope you're having a great time at warwick! It is well deserved :)
This is one of the first times I’ve genuinely learnt something useful in a personal statement review- thank you so so much !
This was really helpful!!! I'm currently writing my personal statement and being confused about how to show not to prove.
Thank you so much! Let me know how it goes :)
hello, did u take the tmua and if yes how much did u get if u don't mind sharing?
Hey, I just came across your channel and I was wondering if you were able to give corrections for my economics personal statement.
Thank you so much, I think you’ve saved my Application.
Thank you so much for this, I just got an offer from UCL and I used this to help me
Omg I am so happy I found your channel you’re so fun to watch can’t wait for more vids!! Can you make one for year 13 advice?
This is amazing! Thank you!
My personal statement right now sounds too much like an essay- do u think I should shorten what I think- and is it alright if i send u something to see what u think as of right now( ive only reflected with one paragraph right now)?
Hi i don’t know if my previous comments posted, but of course! I’d be happy to have a look
@@kathleennicole95 Alright I just need a couple days to finish a draft first and then ill send it maybe to ur IG, if thats ok?
sounds good👍
@@kathleennicole95 hey! would you be willing to review my personal statement too? im aware its been an year since you posted this video but I would still be extremely grateful to hear you opinion !
Please I have drafted a personal statement for financial economics, can you read through for me. Thank you
This was really helpful, Thank you so much! Best of luck at Warwick
So glad you enjoyed the video:)
th-cam.com/video/NksZ1yZP4Ek/w-d-xo.html here’s a link to another video I made that relates to economics applications if it helps!
What scores are you getting in practice TSA?
I was shocked to see my country, Kazakhstan, in your PS))
Thank you! I'm looking to apply to America's economic colleges!
Good luck!!
where u applying ED ?
hii, i'm also writing a personal statement for economics right now. i like it so far but i'm kinda stuck, could i send it to you so you can take a look at it? xxx
How did you get work experience with DIT in kazakhstan??
My parents are based there atm!
applying to similar unis and dis vid helpful asl