They Terrorized The Galaxy, Until Humans Woke From Cryo Sleep | HFY Sci‐Fi Story

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  • @johnlehane8689
    @johnlehane8689 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

    The narrator's voice, is saying how much we should enjoy this.

  • @robertw8897
    @robertw8897 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +30

    I like the story.....but you should remove the things about the narrator. It detracts from the story to hear 'The narrator's voice filled with wonder', 'The narrator spoke, awe threading thru his words'. The narrator is telling us the story and at the same time telling us what he is feeling, all while his tone and voice stay the same. It is distracting.

    • @ferencnovak4250
      @ferencnovak4250 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      What if I tell you that these are all AI generated content... Jingjing

    • @QueenBabylonnia
      @QueenBabylonnia 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@ferencnovak4250that seems obvious 😂😂😂😂. Shame it could have been really good.

  • @pamelamitchell8789
    @pamelamitchell8789 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    They had better start breeding before deciding to lose any humans left. Maybe stay hidden for a couple of generations, then they can afford to lose those over breeding age! LOL

    • @keiker2254
      @keiker2254 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      BONK!

  • @QueenBabylonnia
    @QueenBabylonnia 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Sounds like the narator couldn’t stop from reading out the’narators tips’ in the margins.😂

  • @chadrowin2956
    @chadrowin2956 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Well, by 1:36 I'm lost. Terry is heading towards cryopods. And Andorian Kill Squad materializes in front of him. Mira, one of the kill squad pulls the trigger on his weapon, but hesitates. And Terry tackles Mira and hits his palm on the Cryo Pod freezing himself. ... what, how ?? Where is the rest of the kill squad, are the cryo pods just out in the open, how did they know were the chamber was if it was hidden, why didnt the other Andorians in that kill squad let him go??
    And now at 6:00 its revealed nobody knows were Terry and his cryopod is, despite Mira still being alive and part of the Andorian kill squad that intercepted Terry and Mira was there when Terry went into cryosleep. And now Mira is out systematically killing every human in cryosleep except Terry because they don't were he is.
    Oh you sad sad pathetic AI. And they plan to replace writers with this shit??
    18:38 ... The Narrator shouted to be heard over the roar of the engines . . . . so now, the narrator is somehow relaying this story to us in real time =) LOL
    22:00 I'm just throwing this out there. According to Terry the ship he is on is an ancient relic from the long abandoned days of human exploration. And he's been aboard it for days, so I'm guess its supplied with fresh water and rations that last forever. Or he would have died from dehydration and definitely very weak from lack of food. But somehow the ship was uploaded with information on were the EXPERIMENTAL cryopods were all located throughout human space . . . .
    24:14 Terry squared his shoulders, facing his fellow survivors with fire in his eyes. The NARRATOR conveyed his words, each one ring with conviction . . . . . OH FRACKING REALLY?!?!?!
    29:00 And now the awakened survivors have someone scavenged a fleet of ships and our overwhelming the enemy who slaughtered humanity at the height of its power, and then went forth to conquer every other species in the galaxy. I mean, hey, the ships we had back then were no match, but after centuries of warfare and conquest by the Andorians, the human ships somehow caught up??
    You know, it says up there that: Original story, written and owned by me
    If I were this 'me' I'm not sure I would want to take credit for the total shit show this story is. Maybe one of those writers in REDDIT who are pretty good at telling stories could take this and .... MASSIVELY OVERHAUL IT ....

  • @rockinmusic69
    @rockinmusic69 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    No shockwave in space. That takes atmosphere.

    • @GamingDad
      @GamingDad 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Meh, it's fiction. But then again, graviational waves do exist.

    • @chadrowin2956
      @chadrowin2956 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@rockinmusic69
      Gravitational, solar, electromagnetic and probably a lot more forces I don't know were all spreading out in a wave that were shocking. Aka a shockwave.

  • @3RAN7ON
    @3RAN7ON 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Are these the Andorians from Star trek? Blue skin with antenna? 😂
    But seriously, the story is just strange! Are we supposed to believe that during an alien invasion or galactic war all of humanity just went into cryopods to sleep? The narrator's voice is very confused 🤔

  • @Vincent-z5g
    @Vincent-z5g 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I like this story but is there going to be a part 2 to this

  • @michaeleversberg1712
    @michaeleversberg1712 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    I'm sorry to say this BUT, the narrator evidently doesn't realize that the part of the story
    script that tells the narrator how to express himself in reading the story, is reading aloud the instructions on how the narrator is to express himself in reading the story. This narrator needs to the story without the instructions to the narrator on how to express himself in reading the story. PLEASEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

    • @steventodd8366
      @steventodd8366 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      yep yu beet me to it

    • @williamoloughlin8298
      @williamoloughlin8298 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      there are 2 narrators, the second is reading the story told by the first...

  • @raven98031
    @raven98031 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Nice work

  • @quentinmichel7581
    @quentinmichel7581 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    The only way to stop this AI written and "narrated" dreck is to stop listening to them when we find them. I started listening to HFY type stories a few years back. Some had some wonderful human narrators ... a joy indeed ..not so much now.

  • @shanehanson6013
    @shanehanson6013 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    The story is very interesting. But I can't escape the nagging question of why hidden cryo facilities? It would have been far wiser to have hidden bases. A century of researching new technology and regrowing the human population, would have given far more benefit.
    Oh and the "narrator" needs to be next on the Andorian hit list. They are far to narcissistic if they need to mention themselves every few sentences.

  • @greggolding7627
    @greggolding7627 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Why do I feel like I heard a story from the Warhammer lore

    • @wardraven8755
      @wardraven8755 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Oh damn now ima have to look into warhammer lore. Have been thinking about it anyway but one more reason.

  • @coreyjacobs2718
    @coreyjacobs2718 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +41

    These are normally good but this one wasnt good. the story didnt make sense. Where did they get warships, weapon, numbers to challenge maybe trillions strong empire.

    • @imperatornicolae3232
      @imperatornicolae3232 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      Ai content

    • @3RAN7ON
      @3RAN7ON 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      I agree! I've heard a lot of these stories and this one is definitely unusual. The thing about the "narrator's voice" it's almost like it shouldn't be read out loud, it's instructions for the reader on how they should sound when reading the story out loud? If that makes sense. Never heard an AI story that makes use of this. Maybe the AI is learning? LOL

    • @omaracevedo4784
      @omaracevedo4784 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I have to agree. The story required more than 35 minutes

    • @shirlenedavis4020
      @shirlenedavis4020 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Well currently must nation got doomsday vault only two was destroyed one Iran and other in Egypt. So story inc. something that is truth habit of nation doomsday vault the character found.

  • @shuckaby2564
    @shuckaby2564 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    moral of the story: don't piss off the humans, we've fought each other for so long; we'd look forward to a new adversary (88 ways to kill an Andorien.)

  • @quentinmichel7581
    @quentinmichel7581 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I have to admit .. I'm pretty tolerant but the "narrator" shit really started to piss me off

  • @quantisedspace7047
    @quantisedspace7047 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    This story makes no sense. Why on Earth would people head for cryopods when they're under attack ? How do they provide any protection? All they do is make the sleeper very vulnerable. If the pods were in a very secure area,.why not just seek refuge in that very secure area ?
    We're under attack.. Let's have a little nap.

    • @tomsavage8514
      @tomsavage8514 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      it's written by AI.

  • @greggolding7627
    @greggolding7627 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    I would like to see more of this story

  • @grandyhynes1636
    @grandyhynes1636 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    AI doesn't understand that humans need food and water.

  • @Hu5ky
    @Hu5ky 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The story although had a reasonable premise was in my opinion rather lackluster in its presentation of the events - after centuries the person emerged to find ashen areas where parks once stood and smoke rising - the plants and trees would have recolonised the areas burnt and what is still be burning after centuries ? Look to Chernobyl/Pripyat to see the rewilding of a city after only a few decades or more and less than centuries !

  • @lj7884
    @lj7884 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You don’t read out “the narrator…” bits lol

  • @kardaine29
    @kardaine29 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This one was definitely lame... ready for the next one lol

  • @MrGadinck
    @MrGadinck 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hope a continuation of the story is coming in the near future!!

  • @vlad78th
    @vlad78th 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Well the happenstance of an intact spaceship being there in the rubble of a destroyed human colony, ready to depart AND containing within its computer a starmap of all lost human cryo facilities feels forced. How could the bad guys have missed it after sending ground assault troops ?

  • @SandraNelson063
    @SandraNelson063 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The Andorions have a saying: Don't push the pink skins to the thin ice.

  • @BH-by5ky
    @BH-by5ky 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    For a realistic story it’s lacking, but the use of AI for short telling is relatively new so expect it’ll get better with practice.

  • @Altair4611
    @Altair4611 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Feels like it was written by an ai, has potential if a human were to write or tweak it

  • @_zoinks2554
    @_zoinks2554 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Written by Al.
    Almost passes.

  • @murph19611
    @murph19611 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    He should have had Jason say we will meet on Halloween 😅😅at the predetermined site

  • @Christobanistan
    @Christobanistan 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Best story of the HFY subreddit. Still, I was hoping for more.

  • @papamaanbeerVideo
    @papamaanbeerVideo 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    how can a smalll fraction of humans with now centuries old tech, do what humans couldnt do when they where many.

  • @davidbrandenburg8029
    @davidbrandenburg8029 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    now that would be smart flying a helicopter in a tornado

  • @rayzorrayzor9000
    @rayzorrayzor9000 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    after listening to many of these stories one thing becomes clear , that adomitable spirit to survive , becomes so much easier if you are "non esential personell", cos when the sh#t hits the fan you always get sent to the escape pods. Yep i would be a humble cleaner on a starship knowing that an escape pod will have my name on it lol, i will do my "bit" just by surviving and keeping the human race going .

  • @lynneclark5313
    @lynneclark5313 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    "hope kindling in his chest for the first time in centuries"? He has only been awake a short time, he doesn't even know that it HAS been centuries. Personally, all this talk about a "narrator" ticks me off. I would have preferred the story to be in the "First Person". Let Terry describe what he feels, what he sees. Not have the narrator do it. And what is all this talk about cryo stations scattered around the galaxy, when the first thing we are told is that they are still "EXPERIMENTAL"? This all sounds like someone describing a movie to someone who is blind. "Centuries of oppression"? All those warriors had been sleeping, frozen away from any oppression.

  • @TheAsylum100
    @TheAsylum100 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    The narrator the narrator the narrator, gave up because of this.

  • @mesajongte
    @mesajongte 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This is plain stupid! 😩😩😩

  • @itjustmemanning8441
    @itjustmemanning8441 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    great story! What was that about the 8's?

  • @joakimportnoff1093
    @joakimportnoff1093 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Just in our billions? like 1 week later all people on earth like gone??

  • @KatraMoo
    @KatraMoo 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    There are far too many holes in this story. Too man parts of this story that just do not make sense.
    A guy flews an invasion and puts himself into cryogenic hybernation, is awakened and has the same skill sets and abilities as he had that had him flee the invasion, and somehow he flees again but finds and old derelict ship, etc... and then they awake with only their old technologies that lost vs a new tech plus upgrades since then by the aliens. Yeah. Not believable.

  • @omaracevedo4784
    @omaracevedo4784 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This story went to quickly. In 34 mines one human escaped enemy infested space to find sleeping humans that slept for centuries then went one by one waking sleeping humans. Then find ships and then win the day?

  • @ythserver
    @ythserver 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I would watch this movie.

  • @davidbrandenburg8029
    @davidbrandenburg8029 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    the title should have stated until a human woke not humans!

  • @Crimson_Mysterium
    @Crimson_Mysterium 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Europe would've become Germany. There would be no separate nations. And even after losing, they are arguably the most powerful country in Europe, again....

  • @frankdelucey2137
    @frankdelucey2137 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Remember the narrator said 🤣🤣

  • @daleraney9456
    @daleraney9456 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The Andorians are idiots. If they're that scared of hum9, they should've disabled/destroyed every cryo pod they found.
    Aren't these characters amazing? Their fingers flying over unfamiliar controls. Even though they aren't a pilot or unfamiliar with the alien language, they can press all the right buttons in the right order to start and fly the ship.

    • @wilburcollins8342
      @wilburcollins8342 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      That's what they were doing

    • @tecraman8100
      @tecraman8100 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      You didn't listen to the story

  • @kristinkristinsdottir5277
    @kristinkristinsdottir5277 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    i enjoyed this story but i would like to hear part 2 thanks ia in the 80 amd ilimemovies a story of sifi.. or futurist as this one is

  • @tealwraith9045
    @tealwraith9045 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Not reccommended. This could have been a good story, but the author missed the mark on suspension of disbelief. Too many things don't make any sense.

  • @Xixorian
    @Xixorian 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    AI is too damn wordy.

  • @gainz4dayz576
    @gainz4dayz576 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Andorians? Come on now lmfao that’s straight out of Star Trek

    • @valkeery1216
      @valkeery1216 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      well I suppose they managed to kill of all them Vulkans then

  • @matthewcherrington2634
    @matthewcherrington2634 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Back out my coma

  • @godfathergaming8731
    @godfathergaming8731 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is HALO infinites story line lol

  • @erikjrn4080
    @erikjrn4080 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Excuse me? That's an odd choice, to reward comments with '88' in them. It could, of course, be for a completely innocent reason, but the likelihood is fairly low. Could you clarify your reason?
    For those who wonder what I'm on about, '88' is a popular symbol among fans of the German gentleman with the funny mustache who caused a bit of a mess during the 1930ies and -40ies, whose initials were the 8th letter of the alphabet. I'm not generally suspicious about the use of cryptic signals; they're chosen precisely because they have other, innocuous uses. However, when they just appear out of the blue, for no discernible reason...

  • @chasonsnotes
    @chasonsnotes 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    The narrator

  • @steventodd8366
    @steventodd8366 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I enjoy listening to the stories but "the narrator said " I don't need to HEAR because i am listening already and don't need to be told I'm listening LOL Now seeing "the narrator said written on the screen is different to me that's ok just a thought. The story and voice are great. Now if this was a story about a narrator telling a story. 77

  • @robertabraham6456
    @robertabraham6456 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Garbage , how the hell did he get out of cryo ? Story not believable thumbs down !!

    • @warrenadkins3222
      @warrenadkins3222 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Machine shut down or stopped causing it to happen.

  • @foxdrawer1103
    @foxdrawer1103 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Why is the narrator narrating the narrator

    • @BH-by5ky
      @BH-by5ky 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      It’s an AI thing.

  • @theslowwalker
    @theslowwalker 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    88 Wonderful stories and narration 88

  • @dbrosmedia
    @dbrosmedia 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thumbs down, the AI shouldn't have added himself to the story, make the story unreadable.

  • @redmoose7052
    @redmoose7052 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Is this battlefield earth?

  • @Blackout5871
    @Blackout5871 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Why is the narrator narrating the narration?

  • @aarushparikh5481
    @aarushparikh5481 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

  • @jodeum2
    @jodeum2 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I've listened to a few of these AI generated 'stories.' I shudder using that word because this is really just a collection of words generated from prompts and copied from other examples in a database, then pushed through a grammar algorithm. There's no actual thought given to a story line. This is a horrible medium and these are painful to listen to if anyone bothers to think about what the AI is generating. At least I no longer worry about Skynet trying to destroy the human race. If this is AI, a drunk squirrel could defeat it in a match of brainpower.

    • @bigdsson
      @bigdsson 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Good analogy

  • @harpuiaarchwing5828
    @harpuiaarchwing5828 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    After hearing the word "Narrator" a third time, lost interest.

  • @zdenekzdenek3589
    @zdenekzdenek3589 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Very poor story.

  • @iceman-b4f
    @iceman-b4f 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    What a gigantic plothole. :-(

  • @marysmith-ps7uj
    @marysmith-ps7uj 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    This is jumbled at the beginning. Stop doing yhis for awhile. Take writing and composition classes, please. Start by structuring your chapters. Then write each in order. Then narrate on line. 😮

    • @jodeum2
      @jodeum2 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      You are under the mistaken idea anyone is writing this. It's completely AI written from generic prompts. That's the only way they could crank out so many of these so fast. There's no consideration for plot, backstory, character development. Continuity of story line is non-existent. If you actually listen to a few, you'll find yourself wondering many times at the transitions, the mix up of characters in the scenes, the repeating of themes. This entire channel is nothing but feeding keywords into an AI engine to get it to pump out as many variations on a theme as it can. All so they can flood youtube with videos for quick monetization dollars before people get sick of the shallow stories and realize just how bad they are, and how much better actual science fiction books can be. Currently, AI is incredibly stupid, with the intellect of a three year old at best. It shouldn't be mistaken for anything resembling Intelligence.

    • @marysmith-ps7uj
      @marysmith-ps7uj 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@jodeum2 Thank you for the explanation. I love science fiction that is written by people. No wonder these make no sense whatsoever! Well, I'm not wasting anymore time listening to their drivel! Peace out!!!

    • @Christobanistan
      @Christobanistan 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@jodeum2 I assumed this stuff was from a subreddit or something.

  • @yodaleiheehu3280
    @yodaleiheehu3280 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    8 billion humans on this planet.. technically sleeping. Within every single technological advancement the giant is nudged. The cosmos tremble.

  • @XnndjehdhkNxndjhds
    @XnndjehdhkNxndjhds 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hernandez Barbara Johnson Helen Taylor Sarah

  • @kikikintamasangrasshuepfer8954
    @kikikintamasangrasshuepfer8954 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Andorian???? Realy??? Steal more from Star Trek 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦

  • @MillDonald-g3p
    @MillDonald-g3p 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Jones Maria Thomas Richard White Charles

  • @soldierscotty1959
    @soldierscotty1959 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    "The narrator's voice" ruined this story!

  • @stevenborman9110
    @stevenborman9110 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    AI voice is till the worst thing in these stories.

  • @johnbrumfield6311
    @johnbrumfield6311 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    AT8

  • @DavyTracy-l7i
    @DavyTracy-l7i 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    White Anthony Thompson Sarah Walker Mary

  • @RJ-zi8hw
    @RJ-zi8hw 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is garbage. The premise sounds awesome but this whole thing is trash and needs to be redone. Remove the AI talking about itself as narrator it’s messed up. This was rushed you can easily tell no heart was put into this story.

  • @michaelellis3091
    @michaelellis3091 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    All these armchair experts, . . . ! If y'all know so much, go out, try it out n prove him wrong! Then again failure only proves that you aren't up to the task!

  • @mycastlecellar
    @mycastlecellar 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I agree if everyone else the narrator needs to be left out of the story because every time you decide how the narrator is going to emotionally describe what’s happening all you doing is taking away from the story stop it! I cannot condone this story when you mess it up yourself!

  • @jester5ify
    @jester5ify 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Makes no sense, rubbish.

  • @grandyhynes1636
    @grandyhynes1636 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Again, too much blah blah blah blah

  • @JACKALz
    @JACKALz 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Narrator😒

  • @macmckenzie1242
    @macmckenzie1242 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Terrible

  • @SGTGardner
    @SGTGardner 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This one is absolutely poorly written, it’s abysmal

  • @tr66tr66
    @tr66tr66 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Terrible story

  • @Andrew-tf8jt
    @Andrew-tf8jt 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Its a shame he didn't fight when it mattered instead of running and hiding in cryo this is shit.

    • @williamoloughlin8298
      @williamoloughlin8298 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      was explained, they were attacked in force without warning, they were out numbered, outgunned and the tech was way beyond what the colony could handle. The colony's defenses were overwhelmed. Standing ground was suicide. The cryo pods were built for this scenario so he took it.

  • @zawiszaczarny7876
    @zawiszaczarny7876 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    What a yt spam crap...