I like the story.....but you should remove the things about the narrator. It detracts from the story to hear 'The narrator's voice filled with wonder', 'The narrator spoke, awe threading thru his words'. The narrator is telling us the story and at the same time telling us what he is feeling, all while his tone and voice stay the same. It is distracting.
They had better start breeding before deciding to lose any humans left. Maybe stay hidden for a couple of generations, then they can afford to lose those over breeding age! LOL
Well, by 1:36 I'm lost. Terry is heading towards cryopods. And Andorian Kill Squad materializes in front of him. Mira, one of the kill squad pulls the trigger on his weapon, but hesitates. And Terry tackles Mira and hits his palm on the Cryo Pod freezing himself. ... what, how ?? Where is the rest of the kill squad, are the cryo pods just out in the open, how did they know were the chamber was if it was hidden, why didnt the other Andorians in that kill squad let him go?? And now at 6:00 its revealed nobody knows were Terry and his cryopod is, despite Mira still being alive and part of the Andorian kill squad that intercepted Terry and Mira was there when Terry went into cryosleep. And now Mira is out systematically killing every human in cryosleep except Terry because they don't were he is. Oh you sad sad pathetic AI. And they plan to replace writers with this shit?? 18:38 ... The Narrator shouted to be heard over the roar of the engines . . . . so now, the narrator is somehow relaying this story to us in real time =) LOL 22:00 I'm just throwing this out there. According to Terry the ship he is on is an ancient relic from the long abandoned days of human exploration. And he's been aboard it for days, so I'm guess its supplied with fresh water and rations that last forever. Or he would have died from dehydration and definitely very weak from lack of food. But somehow the ship was uploaded with information on were the EXPERIMENTAL cryopods were all located throughout human space . . . . 24:14 Terry squared his shoulders, facing his fellow survivors with fire in his eyes. The NARRATOR conveyed his words, each one ring with conviction . . . . . OH FRACKING REALLY?!?!?! 29:00 And now the awakened survivors have someone scavenged a fleet of ships and our overwhelming the enemy who slaughtered humanity at the height of its power, and then went forth to conquer every other species in the galaxy. I mean, hey, the ships we had back then were no match, but after centuries of warfare and conquest by the Andorians, the human ships somehow caught up?? You know, it says up there that: Original story, written and owned by me If I were this 'me' I'm not sure I would want to take credit for the total shit show this story is. Maybe one of those writers in REDDIT who are pretty good at telling stories could take this and .... MASSIVELY OVERHAUL IT ....
@@rockinmusic69 Gravitational, solar, electromagnetic and probably a lot more forces I don't know were all spreading out in a wave that were shocking. Aka a shockwave.
Are these the Andorians from Star trek? Blue skin with antenna? 😂 But seriously, the story is just strange! Are we supposed to believe that during an alien invasion or galactic war all of humanity just went into cryopods to sleep? The narrator's voice is very confused 🤔
I'm sorry to say this BUT, the narrator evidently doesn't realize that the part of the story script that tells the narrator how to express himself in reading the story, is reading aloud the instructions on how the narrator is to express himself in reading the story. This narrator needs to the story without the instructions to the narrator on how to express himself in reading the story. PLEASEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
The only way to stop this AI written and "narrated" dreck is to stop listening to them when we find them. I started listening to HFY type stories a few years back. Some had some wonderful human narrators ... a joy indeed ..not so much now.
The story is very interesting. But I can't escape the nagging question of why hidden cryo facilities? It would have been far wiser to have hidden bases. A century of researching new technology and regrowing the human population, would have given far more benefit. Oh and the "narrator" needs to be next on the Andorian hit list. They are far to narcissistic if they need to mention themselves every few sentences.
These are normally good but this one wasnt good. the story didnt make sense. Where did they get warships, weapon, numbers to challenge maybe trillions strong empire.
I agree! I've heard a lot of these stories and this one is definitely unusual. The thing about the "narrator's voice" it's almost like it shouldn't be read out loud, it's instructions for the reader on how they should sound when reading the story out loud? If that makes sense. Never heard an AI story that makes use of this. Maybe the AI is learning? LOL
Well currently must nation got doomsday vault only two was destroyed one Iran and other in Egypt. So story inc. something that is truth habit of nation doomsday vault the character found.
moral of the story: don't piss off the humans, we've fought each other for so long; we'd look forward to a new adversary (88 ways to kill an Andorien.)
This story makes no sense. Why on Earth would people head for cryopods when they're under attack ? How do they provide any protection? All they do is make the sleeper very vulnerable. If the pods were in a very secure area,.why not just seek refuge in that very secure area ? We're under attack.. Let's have a little nap.
The story although had a reasonable premise was in my opinion rather lackluster in its presentation of the events - after centuries the person emerged to find ashen areas where parks once stood and smoke rising - the plants and trees would have recolonised the areas burnt and what is still be burning after centuries ? Look to Chernobyl/Pripyat to see the rewilding of a city after only a few decades or more and less than centuries !
Well the happenstance of an intact spaceship being there in the rubble of a destroyed human colony, ready to depart AND containing within its computer a starmap of all lost human cryo facilities feels forced. How could the bad guys have missed it after sending ground assault troops ?
after listening to many of these stories one thing becomes clear , that adomitable spirit to survive , becomes so much easier if you are "non esential personell", cos when the sh#t hits the fan you always get sent to the escape pods. Yep i would be a humble cleaner on a starship knowing that an escape pod will have my name on it lol, i will do my "bit" just by surviving and keeping the human race going .
"hope kindling in his chest for the first time in centuries"? He has only been awake a short time, he doesn't even know that it HAS been centuries. Personally, all this talk about a "narrator" ticks me off. I would have preferred the story to be in the "First Person". Let Terry describe what he feels, what he sees. Not have the narrator do it. And what is all this talk about cryo stations scattered around the galaxy, when the first thing we are told is that they are still "EXPERIMENTAL"? This all sounds like someone describing a movie to someone who is blind. "Centuries of oppression"? All those warriors had been sleeping, frozen away from any oppression.
There are far too many holes in this story. Too man parts of this story that just do not make sense. A guy flews an invasion and puts himself into cryogenic hybernation, is awakened and has the same skill sets and abilities as he had that had him flee the invasion, and somehow he flees again but finds and old derelict ship, etc... and then they awake with only their old technologies that lost vs a new tech plus upgrades since then by the aliens. Yeah. Not believable.
This story went to quickly. In 34 mines one human escaped enemy infested space to find sleeping humans that slept for centuries then went one by one waking sleeping humans. Then find ships and then win the day?
Europe would've become Germany. There would be no separate nations. And even after losing, they are arguably the most powerful country in Europe, again....
The Andorians are idiots. If they're that scared of hum9, they should've disabled/destroyed every cryo pod they found. Aren't these characters amazing? Their fingers flying over unfamiliar controls. Even though they aren't a pilot or unfamiliar with the alien language, they can press all the right buttons in the right order to start and fly the ship.
Excuse me? That's an odd choice, to reward comments with '88' in them. It could, of course, be for a completely innocent reason, but the likelihood is fairly low. Could you clarify your reason? For those who wonder what I'm on about, '88' is a popular symbol among fans of the German gentleman with the funny mustache who caused a bit of a mess during the 1930ies and -40ies, whose initials were the 8th letter of the alphabet. I'm not generally suspicious about the use of cryptic signals; they're chosen precisely because they have other, innocuous uses. However, when they just appear out of the blue, for no discernible reason...
I enjoy listening to the stories but "the narrator said " I don't need to HEAR because i am listening already and don't need to be told I'm listening LOL Now seeing "the narrator said written on the screen is different to me that's ok just a thought. The story and voice are great. Now if this was a story about a narrator telling a story. 77
I've listened to a few of these AI generated 'stories.' I shudder using that word because this is really just a collection of words generated from prompts and copied from other examples in a database, then pushed through a grammar algorithm. There's no actual thought given to a story line. This is a horrible medium and these are painful to listen to if anyone bothers to think about what the AI is generating. At least I no longer worry about Skynet trying to destroy the human race. If this is AI, a drunk squirrel could defeat it in a match of brainpower.
This is jumbled at the beginning. Stop doing yhis for awhile. Take writing and composition classes, please. Start by structuring your chapters. Then write each in order. Then narrate on line. 😮
You are under the mistaken idea anyone is writing this. It's completely AI written from generic prompts. That's the only way they could crank out so many of these so fast. There's no consideration for plot, backstory, character development. Continuity of story line is non-existent. If you actually listen to a few, you'll find yourself wondering many times at the transitions, the mix up of characters in the scenes, the repeating of themes. This entire channel is nothing but feeding keywords into an AI engine to get it to pump out as many variations on a theme as it can. All so they can flood youtube with videos for quick monetization dollars before people get sick of the shallow stories and realize just how bad they are, and how much better actual science fiction books can be. Currently, AI is incredibly stupid, with the intellect of a three year old at best. It shouldn't be mistaken for anything resembling Intelligence.
@@jodeum2 Thank you for the explanation. I love science fiction that is written by people. No wonder these make no sense whatsoever! Well, I'm not wasting anymore time listening to their drivel! Peace out!!!
This is garbage. The premise sounds awesome but this whole thing is trash and needs to be redone. Remove the AI talking about itself as narrator it’s messed up. This was rushed you can easily tell no heart was put into this story.
All these armchair experts, . . . ! If y'all know so much, go out, try it out n prove him wrong! Then again failure only proves that you aren't up to the task!
I agree if everyone else the narrator needs to be left out of the story because every time you decide how the narrator is going to emotionally describe what’s happening all you doing is taking away from the story stop it! I cannot condone this story when you mess it up yourself!
was explained, they were attacked in force without warning, they were out numbered, outgunned and the tech was way beyond what the colony could handle. The colony's defenses were overwhelmed. Standing ground was suicide. The cryo pods were built for this scenario so he took it.
The narrator's voice, is saying how much we should enjoy this.
I like the story.....but you should remove the things about the narrator. It detracts from the story to hear 'The narrator's voice filled with wonder', 'The narrator spoke, awe threading thru his words'. The narrator is telling us the story and at the same time telling us what he is feeling, all while his tone and voice stay the same. It is distracting.
What if I tell you that these are all AI generated content... Jingjing
@@ferencnovak4250that seems obvious 😂😂😂😂. Shame it could have been really good.
They had better start breeding before deciding to lose any humans left. Maybe stay hidden for a couple of generations, then they can afford to lose those over breeding age! LOL
BONK!
Sounds like the narator couldn’t stop from reading out the’narators tips’ in the margins.😂
Well, by 1:36 I'm lost. Terry is heading towards cryopods. And Andorian Kill Squad materializes in front of him. Mira, one of the kill squad pulls the trigger on his weapon, but hesitates. And Terry tackles Mira and hits his palm on the Cryo Pod freezing himself. ... what, how ?? Where is the rest of the kill squad, are the cryo pods just out in the open, how did they know were the chamber was if it was hidden, why didnt the other Andorians in that kill squad let him go??
And now at 6:00 its revealed nobody knows were Terry and his cryopod is, despite Mira still being alive and part of the Andorian kill squad that intercepted Terry and Mira was there when Terry went into cryosleep. And now Mira is out systematically killing every human in cryosleep except Terry because they don't were he is.
Oh you sad sad pathetic AI. And they plan to replace writers with this shit??
18:38 ... The Narrator shouted to be heard over the roar of the engines . . . . so now, the narrator is somehow relaying this story to us in real time =) LOL
22:00 I'm just throwing this out there. According to Terry the ship he is on is an ancient relic from the long abandoned days of human exploration. And he's been aboard it for days, so I'm guess its supplied with fresh water and rations that last forever. Or he would have died from dehydration and definitely very weak from lack of food. But somehow the ship was uploaded with information on were the EXPERIMENTAL cryopods were all located throughout human space . . . .
24:14 Terry squared his shoulders, facing his fellow survivors with fire in his eyes. The NARRATOR conveyed his words, each one ring with conviction . . . . . OH FRACKING REALLY?!?!?!
29:00 And now the awakened survivors have someone scavenged a fleet of ships and our overwhelming the enemy who slaughtered humanity at the height of its power, and then went forth to conquer every other species in the galaxy. I mean, hey, the ships we had back then were no match, but after centuries of warfare and conquest by the Andorians, the human ships somehow caught up??
You know, it says up there that: Original story, written and owned by me
If I were this 'me' I'm not sure I would want to take credit for the total shit show this story is. Maybe one of those writers in REDDIT who are pretty good at telling stories could take this and .... MASSIVELY OVERHAUL IT ....
No shockwave in space. That takes atmosphere.
Meh, it's fiction. But then again, graviational waves do exist.
@@rockinmusic69
Gravitational, solar, electromagnetic and probably a lot more forces I don't know were all spreading out in a wave that were shocking. Aka a shockwave.
Are these the Andorians from Star trek? Blue skin with antenna? 😂
But seriously, the story is just strange! Are we supposed to believe that during an alien invasion or galactic war all of humanity just went into cryopods to sleep? The narrator's voice is very confused 🤔
I like this story but is there going to be a part 2 to this
I'm sorry to say this BUT, the narrator evidently doesn't realize that the part of the story
script that tells the narrator how to express himself in reading the story, is reading aloud the instructions on how the narrator is to express himself in reading the story. This narrator needs to the story without the instructions to the narrator on how to express himself in reading the story. PLEASEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
yep yu beet me to it
there are 2 narrators, the second is reading the story told by the first...
Nice work
The only way to stop this AI written and "narrated" dreck is to stop listening to them when we find them. I started listening to HFY type stories a few years back. Some had some wonderful human narrators ... a joy indeed ..not so much now.
The story is very interesting. But I can't escape the nagging question of why hidden cryo facilities? It would have been far wiser to have hidden bases. A century of researching new technology and regrowing the human population, would have given far more benefit.
Oh and the "narrator" needs to be next on the Andorian hit list. They are far to narcissistic if they need to mention themselves every few sentences.
Why do I feel like I heard a story from the Warhammer lore
Oh damn now ima have to look into warhammer lore. Have been thinking about it anyway but one more reason.
These are normally good but this one wasnt good. the story didnt make sense. Where did they get warships, weapon, numbers to challenge maybe trillions strong empire.
Ai content
I agree! I've heard a lot of these stories and this one is definitely unusual. The thing about the "narrator's voice" it's almost like it shouldn't be read out loud, it's instructions for the reader on how they should sound when reading the story out loud? If that makes sense. Never heard an AI story that makes use of this. Maybe the AI is learning? LOL
I have to agree. The story required more than 35 minutes
Well currently must nation got doomsday vault only two was destroyed one Iran and other in Egypt. So story inc. something that is truth habit of nation doomsday vault the character found.
moral of the story: don't piss off the humans, we've fought each other for so long; we'd look forward to a new adversary (88 ways to kill an Andorien.)
I have to admit .. I'm pretty tolerant but the "narrator" shit really started to piss me off
This story makes no sense. Why on Earth would people head for cryopods when they're under attack ? How do they provide any protection? All they do is make the sleeper very vulnerable. If the pods were in a very secure area,.why not just seek refuge in that very secure area ?
We're under attack.. Let's have a little nap.
it's written by AI.
I would like to see more of this story
AI doesn't understand that humans need food and water.
The story although had a reasonable premise was in my opinion rather lackluster in its presentation of the events - after centuries the person emerged to find ashen areas where parks once stood and smoke rising - the plants and trees would have recolonised the areas burnt and what is still be burning after centuries ? Look to Chernobyl/Pripyat to see the rewilding of a city after only a few decades or more and less than centuries !
You don’t read out “the narrator…” bits lol
This one was definitely lame... ready for the next one lol
Hope a continuation of the story is coming in the near future!!
Well the happenstance of an intact spaceship being there in the rubble of a destroyed human colony, ready to depart AND containing within its computer a starmap of all lost human cryo facilities feels forced. How could the bad guys have missed it after sending ground assault troops ?
The Andorions have a saying: Don't push the pink skins to the thin ice.
For a realistic story it’s lacking, but the use of AI for short telling is relatively new so expect it’ll get better with practice.
Feels like it was written by an ai, has potential if a human were to write or tweak it
Written by Al.
Almost passes.
He should have had Jason say we will meet on Halloween 😅😅at the predetermined site
Best story of the HFY subreddit. Still, I was hoping for more.
how can a smalll fraction of humans with now centuries old tech, do what humans couldnt do when they where many.
now that would be smart flying a helicopter in a tornado
after listening to many of these stories one thing becomes clear , that adomitable spirit to survive , becomes so much easier if you are "non esential personell", cos when the sh#t hits the fan you always get sent to the escape pods. Yep i would be a humble cleaner on a starship knowing that an escape pod will have my name on it lol, i will do my "bit" just by surviving and keeping the human race going .
"hope kindling in his chest for the first time in centuries"? He has only been awake a short time, he doesn't even know that it HAS been centuries. Personally, all this talk about a "narrator" ticks me off. I would have preferred the story to be in the "First Person". Let Terry describe what he feels, what he sees. Not have the narrator do it. And what is all this talk about cryo stations scattered around the galaxy, when the first thing we are told is that they are still "EXPERIMENTAL"? This all sounds like someone describing a movie to someone who is blind. "Centuries of oppression"? All those warriors had been sleeping, frozen away from any oppression.
The narrator the narrator the narrator, gave up because of this.
This is plain stupid! 😩😩😩
great story! What was that about the 8's?
Just in our billions? like 1 week later all people on earth like gone??
There are far too many holes in this story. Too man parts of this story that just do not make sense.
A guy flews an invasion and puts himself into cryogenic hybernation, is awakened and has the same skill sets and abilities as he had that had him flee the invasion, and somehow he flees again but finds and old derelict ship, etc... and then they awake with only their old technologies that lost vs a new tech plus upgrades since then by the aliens. Yeah. Not believable.
This story went to quickly. In 34 mines one human escaped enemy infested space to find sleeping humans that slept for centuries then went one by one waking sleeping humans. Then find ships and then win the day?
I would watch this movie.
the title should have stated until a human woke not humans!
Europe would've become Germany. There would be no separate nations. And even after losing, they are arguably the most powerful country in Europe, again....
Remember the narrator said 🤣🤣
The Andorians are idiots. If they're that scared of hum9, they should've disabled/destroyed every cryo pod they found.
Aren't these characters amazing? Their fingers flying over unfamiliar controls. Even though they aren't a pilot or unfamiliar with the alien language, they can press all the right buttons in the right order to start and fly the ship.
That's what they were doing
You didn't listen to the story
i enjoyed this story but i would like to hear part 2 thanks ia in the 80 amd ilimemovies a story of sifi.. or futurist as this one is
Not reccommended. This could have been a good story, but the author missed the mark on suspension of disbelief. Too many things don't make any sense.
AI is too damn wordy.
Andorians? Come on now lmfao that’s straight out of Star Trek
well I suppose they managed to kill of all them Vulkans then
Back out my coma
This is HALO infinites story line lol
Excuse me? That's an odd choice, to reward comments with '88' in them. It could, of course, be for a completely innocent reason, but the likelihood is fairly low. Could you clarify your reason?
For those who wonder what I'm on about, '88' is a popular symbol among fans of the German gentleman with the funny mustache who caused a bit of a mess during the 1930ies and -40ies, whose initials were the 8th letter of the alphabet. I'm not generally suspicious about the use of cryptic signals; they're chosen precisely because they have other, innocuous uses. However, when they just appear out of the blue, for no discernible reason...
The narrator
I enjoy listening to the stories but "the narrator said " I don't need to HEAR because i am listening already and don't need to be told I'm listening LOL Now seeing "the narrator said written on the screen is different to me that's ok just a thought. The story and voice are great. Now if this was a story about a narrator telling a story. 77
Garbage , how the hell did he get out of cryo ? Story not believable thumbs down !!
Machine shut down or stopped causing it to happen.
Why is the narrator narrating the narrator
It’s an AI thing.
88 Wonderful stories and narration 88
Thumbs down, the AI shouldn't have added himself to the story, make the story unreadable.
Is this battlefield earth?
Huh? God no.
Why is the narrator narrating the narration?
I've listened to a few of these AI generated 'stories.' I shudder using that word because this is really just a collection of words generated from prompts and copied from other examples in a database, then pushed through a grammar algorithm. There's no actual thought given to a story line. This is a horrible medium and these are painful to listen to if anyone bothers to think about what the AI is generating. At least I no longer worry about Skynet trying to destroy the human race. If this is AI, a drunk squirrel could defeat it in a match of brainpower.
Good analogy
After hearing the word "Narrator" a third time, lost interest.
Very poor story.
What a gigantic plothole. :-(
This is jumbled at the beginning. Stop doing yhis for awhile. Take writing and composition classes, please. Start by structuring your chapters. Then write each in order. Then narrate on line. 😮
You are under the mistaken idea anyone is writing this. It's completely AI written from generic prompts. That's the only way they could crank out so many of these so fast. There's no consideration for plot, backstory, character development. Continuity of story line is non-existent. If you actually listen to a few, you'll find yourself wondering many times at the transitions, the mix up of characters in the scenes, the repeating of themes. This entire channel is nothing but feeding keywords into an AI engine to get it to pump out as many variations on a theme as it can. All so they can flood youtube with videos for quick monetization dollars before people get sick of the shallow stories and realize just how bad they are, and how much better actual science fiction books can be. Currently, AI is incredibly stupid, with the intellect of a three year old at best. It shouldn't be mistaken for anything resembling Intelligence.
@@jodeum2 Thank you for the explanation. I love science fiction that is written by people. No wonder these make no sense whatsoever! Well, I'm not wasting anymore time listening to their drivel! Peace out!!!
@@jodeum2 I assumed this stuff was from a subreddit or something.
8 billion humans on this planet.. technically sleeping. Within every single technological advancement the giant is nudged. The cosmos tremble.
Hernandez Barbara Johnson Helen Taylor Sarah
Andorian???? Realy??? Steal more from Star Trek 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦
Jones Maria Thomas Richard White Charles
"The narrator's voice" ruined this story!
AI voice is till the worst thing in these stories.
AT8
White Anthony Thompson Sarah Walker Mary
This is garbage. The premise sounds awesome but this whole thing is trash and needs to be redone. Remove the AI talking about itself as narrator it’s messed up. This was rushed you can easily tell no heart was put into this story.
All these armchair experts, . . . ! If y'all know so much, go out, try it out n prove him wrong! Then again failure only proves that you aren't up to the task!
I agree if everyone else the narrator needs to be left out of the story because every time you decide how the narrator is going to emotionally describe what’s happening all you doing is taking away from the story stop it! I cannot condone this story when you mess it up yourself!
Makes no sense, rubbish.
Again, too much blah blah blah blah
Narrator😒
Terrible
This one is absolutely poorly written, it’s abysmal
Terrible story
Its a shame he didn't fight when it mattered instead of running and hiding in cryo this is shit.
was explained, they were attacked in force without warning, they were out numbered, outgunned and the tech was way beyond what the colony could handle. The colony's defenses were overwhelmed. Standing ground was suicide. The cryo pods were built for this scenario so he took it.
What a yt spam crap...