They Laughed At "Tiny Army", Until They Realized It Had HUMAN Soldiers! | HFY Sci-Fi Story

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  • @summit7051
    @summit7051 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +265

    "..weaponized gunships.."??
    It wouldn't be much of a gunship if it wasn't weaponized!

    • @zugzug6773
      @zugzug6773 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

      You have to admit the AI is getting better

    • @jansandman6983
      @jansandman6983 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    • @mainmanbumfuzz8983
      @mainmanbumfuzz8983 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      Gestures angrily in human. "It's in the name!"

    • @danielleriley2796
      @danielleriley2796 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      The writer has NO IDEA about weaponry. They just mix terms like a shitty blender. I’ve given up at the surface to air missiles that have both tungsten and depleted uranium rods in them that are released… first that would be explosively fired from the warhead and there would be only one type of metal since the missile speed and explosive delivery needs to be tailored for the mass and density and effect on target of the two rod metals.
      Next will be neon yellow with reflective strips for cammo jackets….

    • @zugzug6773
      @zugzug6773 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@danielleriley2796 Its an AI.

  • @CubanWriter
    @CubanWriter 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +225

    When I see something using well-known sci-fi names like 'Bajoran' it makes me think it was the product of an AI, and that no human editor even bothered to look it over.

    • @pkill23
      @pkill23 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +24

      This channel is 100% AI generated stories

    • @victorfinberg8595
      @victorfinberg8595 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      very impressive, then

    • @iamabadger
      @iamabadger 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

      @@pkill23 Except it's not, most of the videos are just an AI voices reading reddit posts to make money off other people's writing...

    • @blockhead5124
      @blockhead5124 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@iamabadger I like "SciFi Stories" (scifistories1977), still ai voices and reddit stories but the channel owner will contact the story writer, ask permission and share revenue with them from their videos. He also uses different ai voices for different characters.

    • @TheScoundrel70
      @TheScoundrel70 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Well, considering Star Trek and Star Wars have borrowed heavily from people, places, and things that do, or have existed (maybe in a different language) it's not surprising that many words get modified, or repurposed to fit the narrative of science fiction.

  • @ThomasFishwick
    @ThomasFishwick 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +59

    "Fenris" and "Bajoran"...
    good lord, the AI is strong in this one!

    • @hermes6910
      @hermes6910 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Nice catch.
      Something tilted me, I couldn't say what... But now I know.

    • @Throan1
      @Throan1 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@hermes6910 "Hyper acceleration" is another one, the awkward use of adjectives is always a bad sign.

  • @alanmacification
    @alanmacification 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +68

    They committed the crime of perfidy - false surrender. No quarter is to be given.

    • @kaykaymishka5548
      @kaykaymishka5548 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Ikr!!! The female admiral was weak and squeamish 😂😂

  • @Amokhunter
    @Amokhunter 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +216

    I recommend taking it down, then change Bajoran into something else and reupload it, otherwise you might have Paramount knocking on your door with a lawsuit. Bajor is a planet in the Star Trek universe and Bajorans are a rather prominent species in said universe.

    • @malahammer
      @malahammer 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

      Will you relax 🙄

    • @paulholmpileborg6340
      @paulholmpileborg6340 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      What if the AI voice and speech to text got it wrong and its Bahyorans? Huh?
      How are they going to prove that its Bajorans

    • @erikstolzenberger1517
      @erikstolzenberger1517 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      YOU CAN'T SUE AN AI...if it created this story using open source material, Paramount can kiss their arses...and that ridiculous trash that Roddenberry created? That's open source in this case...get yourself a law degree or shut the f up, kid.

    • @lucashenry6281
      @lucashenry6281 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@paulholmpileborg6340the subtitles.

    • @quetzelmedina3
      @quetzelmedina3 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      @@malahammerno. Hes right.

  • @LondonLawman
    @LondonLawman 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +50

    That looks like Titus Pullo of the XIII Legion. I would not be messing with him.

    • @PumpkinHoard
      @PumpkinHoard 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      That was my thought. RIP Ray Stevenson.

    • @swiftmatic
      @swiftmatic 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Pullo and Vorenus were like the Hulk and the Thing of the ancient world. Fuck yeah!

    • @svenguinee1072
      @svenguinee1072 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      We march for Macragge! Courage and Honour!

    • @wesleybaldwin7060
      @wesleybaldwin7060 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I dunno , kinda looks like #47

    • @diarradunlap9337
      @diarradunlap9337 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      The second guy in the picture looks like Connor MacLeod from Highlander.

  • @dna6882
    @dna6882 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

    The only thing that gives away that an ai is writing this is when it uses the same words to describe something . The words it uses are totally correct but it cannot understand that even though those words are the best choice to describe something, we english language speakers find it off putting to use the same metaphor or turn of phrase multiple times in the same body of text. The Ai cannot understand such subtleties of writing.

    • @americanjoe5486
      @americanjoe5486 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Great idea,,,,,, if AI is really up to this task

    • @BJ-bd5fc
      @BJ-bd5fc 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      At least until the AI gets enough data sets (containing those human-written subtleties) fed into it. Today's AI doesn't understand or philosophize about anything. It just mimics and reformulates what us humans create.

    • @watchwood
      @watchwood 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Also, Humvees in a scifi setting? That's something I'd expect a human writer to catch.

    • @freezedeve3119
      @freezedeve3119 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      also story kind of repeated itself couple times and had some weird inconsistencies which make it bit weird.

    • @gladeloy3341
      @gladeloy3341 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Buy that Ai a thesaurus !

  • @terribrumfield8399
    @terribrumfield8399 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    You can always rely on the human soldiers to kick some Alian tails ... 😊

  • @falsehope4421
    @falsehope4421 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Damn, the humans beat the fight out of a species of warriors, sounds pretty impressive

  • @jimseven5358
    @jimseven5358 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Very good, with one glaring error: the girl's doll. First he gives it back to the girl, later it's still in his hand. Still well worth a thumbs up!😃

  • @mattc.310
    @mattc.310 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    He gave the doll back to the little girl, but he looked at it in his hand later, and other strangeness, but an engaging story.

    • @flashcraft8287
      @flashcraft8287 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Ya, I commented about that too. Seems like no one read this before posting it. Lame.

  • @daswordofgork9823
    @daswordofgork9823 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +67

    Bajorans: Consider the fate of your women.
    Human: Clearly you don’t know our women. I should have just marched them up here judging from what I’ve seen.

    • @donktheclown
      @donktheclown 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Lol. Good one, Leonidas !!

    • @chadrowe8452
      @chadrowe8452 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      I like the sequel better."I'm not here as a witness"

    • @Damocles54
      @Damocles54 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@chadrowe8452 any sequel that features Eva Green dressed (or un, as the case may (or may not) be) as she was in this movie is automatically better than the prior entries in the franchise. Subsequent sequels as well.
      Stand alone anthology stories.
      Anything based on fan fiction, shot in an iPhone and uploaded to TH-cam.
      And many unrelated movies as well.
      Of course, my opinions on the matter are subjective. You're free to disagree. Everyone has the right to choose beinf wrong😂😂😂😂

  • @timg6252
    @timg6252 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

    This AIs grasp of battle field tactics is woeful.

    • @Lord_Amadee
      @Lord_Amadee 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Nowhere near skynet levels...

  • @dominickefrim3088
    @dominickefrim3088 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +32

    This should be the base story for a movie. No drama. Just, confidence, carnage and victory....🤔

    • @robinstuyvesant7187
      @robinstuyvesant7187 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Gotta make space for the woke messages and pontification.

    • @dominickefrim3088
      @dominickefrim3088 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      @@robinstuyvesant7187 wokeness killed Star Wars...and Halo....and Star Trek.....

    • @mardus_ee
      @mardus_ee หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@dominickefrim3088 Halo and Star Wars are ok, and there will always be classic Star Trek, including TNG and DS9, and Enterprise.

  • @NacnudPinky
    @NacnudPinky 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    1:47
    should have replied, "I'm afraid we can't do that, we don't have tails" for the wittily defiant one liner

  • @LeeG7953
    @LeeG7953 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    I’m one of those old soldiers (11B), and this story was fantastic, thank you!

  • @redakroma1
    @redakroma1 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +30

    Good story, sighed and facepalmed at the Star Trek name references though. Only inconsistency was at the end which involved the child's doll. The commander had given it back to the little girl and told her to go hide, then he had it back in his hand at the end ("Whoops").

    • @Speedfly1
      @Speedfly1 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Yes spotte that too, could be a sign of an AI generated story. I don't know. I liked it besides that.

    • @bradheath4200
      @bradheath4200 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I was curious as to if I heard that wrong. Good catch.

  • @scorchedearth1451
    @scorchedearth1451 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Humanity is a force to be reckoned with.
    They have a lot of experience after all, fighting each other.

  • @jordanwicinski2141
    @jordanwicinski2141 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    There's no way bjorans would act like cardassians!

  • @cam0865
    @cam0865 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Loved it.
    I can get by the names and stuff. ..
    Thankyou to the Author..
    Gave me a needed departure from my days activities

  • @DOZZER62
    @DOZZER62 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    He saw the muzzle flash and then felt the round impact his skull and then felt nothing at all.😂

  • @davidmiddleton7958
    @davidmiddleton7958 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Perhaps renaming the aliens as Bad-yings? Would avoid a costly cpoy right court case. However, an excellant short story. Many thanks to the author and this channel.

  • @TheFirstSunbreaker
    @TheFirstSunbreaker 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    “Dear humanity,
    We regret being alien bastards.
    We regret coming to Earth.
    And we most definitely regret the corps just blew up our raggedy ass fleet.”

  • @mrbuck5059
    @mrbuck5059 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    The Bajoran Wormhole is now secured by Captain Benjamin Sisko. Lets hope the Cardassians dont join the Dominion.

  • @williamburroughs9686
    @williamburroughs9686 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    It's a good story. The only mistake the author made was at the end. When Greg looks at the doll in his hand.
    The mistake was that he had already handed it back to the little girl who went away.
    But again. Great story. :)

  • @samdavies7337
    @samdavies7337 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +42

    Great fun, but please, please get the text proof read before publishing. There are LOTS of spolling mistakes!

    • @elzwindglenraven
      @elzwindglenraven 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      'spolling' lmao kewl

    • @donaldboyer8182
      @donaldboyer8182 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Lot's of redundant chatter from the narrator. I thought he gave the doll back to the little girl.

    • @iamabadger
      @iamabadger 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      The whole channel is fully automated, reading and generating thumbnails pulled from (sometimes) uncredited reddit posts. It posts a 30min to 1h long video every 2 hours. There will be no proofreading here at all. It's just a cheap way of making money off of other people's work and writing...

    • @durbledurb3992
      @durbledurb3992 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@iamabadger How did you find that out?

    • @johncarlaw8633
      @johncarlaw8633 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      ​@@durbledurb3992 " How did you find that out?" just look at the video release rate.
      Also the quality.
      It has been happening a lot on YT and other media and getting much worse.
      A couple of years ago it was just people lifting stuff from reddit HFY and and other sources and running text to speech over them but now it is just wholesale AI randomness not worth wading through.
      If it doesn't give a source for the story it is likely a lot of AI now.
      On the RHS recommendation list you can click on the three dots and select "Don't recommend channel" and it isn't supposed to show them again, but sometimes it still does.
      Hopefully it won't tempt me with this channel again.

  • @damianfirecaster7230
    @damianfirecaster7230 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Thank you for these great stories :)

  • @sephuris5555
    @sephuris5555 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    I hear bajorians i star thinking star trek lmao

  • @michael-ys3wi
    @michael-ys3wi 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Bajoran? DS9 gonna be calling.

  • @PopJacare
    @PopJacare 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Dammmm, almost felt bad for the aliens for a minute! 😂😂😂

  • @williamhowell4738
    @williamhowell4738 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

    88 I am a veteran of combat, the closing words by the commander have never been truer!

    • @markmedlin9731
      @markmedlin9731 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      88 thank you sir for your service

    • @haha__hihi
      @haha__hihi 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@markmedlin9731 plot twist: grandpa is from germany /s

    • @manofmann8901
      @manofmann8901 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@haha__hihiThats all I think when it asks for 88, H-H

    • @arminwebster1087
      @arminwebster1087 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Amen, Brother. Been and done that.

  • @marmalade6681
    @marmalade6681 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +29

    45:05 then 46:05 erm.. your AI needs to stop smoking weed

    • @grogvaughan5649
      @grogvaughan5649 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      TF is wrong with smoking weed?!?

    • @marmalade6681
      @marmalade6681 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@grogvaughan5649 Absoluting nothing! ! Smoke weed everyday! But dont post weirdass shit and expect more weed! .. hmm more weed please :)

    • @KallenMalefic
      @KallenMalefic 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@grogvaughan5649I smoked one weed now I am gay and worship Satan.

    • @TheSolidSnakeOil
      @TheSolidSnakeOil 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@grogvaughan5649 It make you say, do, write stupid things as the examples. This was definitely written by an AI. He hands the doll to the girl, "Get to safety, the battles over"? And in the next sentence he's in ship with self same doll?

    • @grogvaughan5649
      @grogvaughan5649 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@TheSolidSnakeOil sounds like a you issue

  • @stevesmith7839
    @stevesmith7839 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Humvee's far in the future? They wouldn't have made anything different by then?

    • @handleyourowntool
      @handleyourowntool 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Nope! Humvees and outdated super bombers will never go out of style.

    • @handleyourowntool
      @handleyourowntool 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Wait?! Did you take any care to see what time frame this video took place? It was the year 2024

    • @stevesmith7839
      @stevesmith7839 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@handleyourowntool It's an alternative present?

    • @stevesmith7839
      @stevesmith7839 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@handleyourowntool Lamborghini would be pleased to know. But about war, we used to have Willys Jeeps. One quote from a Warhammer game is an orc saying, "I got me an idea for making walkin..... faster." Jeeps are for making walkin faster, but eventually, with power armor, walkin... will be faster. A bombers purpose is to deliver bombs.... until bombs deliver themselves, as in missiles. We are seeing that evolution being played out in a couple modern war theaters. Bombers are rarely used to deliver bombs anymore, because they are perceptibly interceptable. They are also expensive. With the Phalanx system and other systems, intercepting even missiles and shells is becoming more a reality. Eventually, missiles and shells will have stealth tech and armor, maybe shielding. Tank armor won't be enough. It will be better to have fast, light vehicles. Probably power armor.

    • @Slowpoke514
      @Slowpoke514 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Even if this was 1,000 years in the future, you know how humans like their nostalgia. They could have named a new all terrain vehicle a Humvee just because it was a vehicle of war in the past.

  • @durbledurb3992
    @durbledurb3992 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I swear, if they try to ban my railgun I will go postal 😆 Good story.

  • @DOZZER62
    @DOZZER62 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The
    Writer knows absolutely. Nothing about firearms.

  • @BFPerry220
    @BFPerry220 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +24

    Humans didn't have ftl, but are on this planet. Soo, they lived there too? Or they spent generations just to get 1% of the way there to aid them? I don't get this, the Bajoran Capital city is only miles away from the battlefield, so they also lived on that planet with the L aliens? So much is confusing and I barely started. These vids are great as a, "what not to do" if you do a little story writing.

    • @donaldboyer8182
      @donaldboyer8182 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      We heard some talk of the Bajoran council back at the city. What happened to them? Are they still there? Not a bad story. But inconsistent.

    • @jackjohnson40
      @jackjohnson40 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Agreed! It's almost so good but then these stupid mistakes...

    • @williamoloughlin8298
      @williamoloughlin8298 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      came through a stable wormhole, no ftl required.

    • @briannewman9285
      @briannewman9285 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@williamoloughlin8298That doesn’t make it any better. So, now we’re supposed to believe that they can survive the infinite gravity of a black hole, but can’t go FTL?

    • @Cleaver2396
      @Cleaver2396 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      The oppressed aliens brought the humans there

  • @muniryassin9351
    @muniryassin9351 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great story , great text .

  • @DamienBlade
    @DamienBlade 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Aren't the Bajorans a race in Star Trek?

  • @Sadarsa
    @Sadarsa 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    the end of the battle repeated itself twice, then the aftermath of the battle repeated itself twice.

    • @bhaebe6671
      @bhaebe6671 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Poorly edited

    • @larryselkirk426
      @larryselkirk426 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      One of the traits of AI is repetition. One of the other stories used the exact same description three times for different things.

  • @jenkor513
    @jenkor513 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Bajorans are human in appearance, cardassians are lizard like. Both groups are formidable warriors and a few humans would not stand a chance.

  • @sparkeyjames
    @sparkeyjames 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Bajoran sounds like a name plucked from Star Trek Deep Space Nine.

    • @GeorgHaeder
      @GeorgHaeder 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Because it is.

  • @neurofiber2406
    @neurofiber2406 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    Your AI desperately needs an editor...

  • @alfreeman728
    @alfreeman728 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Pounding the table put a dent in the "hardened" metal? LOL!

  • @whitehazegruntz250
    @whitehazegruntz250 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    When u attack someone and lose. Your not returning for revenge. Revenge implies something was done wrong to u. But attackers r the ones doing the wrong ones so ya

    • @grekofrog
      @grekofrog 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Depends on the point of view of the attackers. And in a story where you got a warlike, ruthless species like these Bajorans, they could see defeating their invasion force as a humiliation, and want take revenge for said humiliation.
      You see, it's about establishing the barbaric point of view of the attacker. And make them more dangerous, but yet, predictable.

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    You own the air, you own the war.......

  • @tonymickens8803
    @tonymickens8803 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    BAJORANS? WHERE THE HELL IS CAPTAIN SISKO????

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    They throw a few rockets at themselves and blame whoever it is they want to invade at the time..........

    • @tesmith47
      @tesmith47 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yep america

  • @Schwaapilz
    @Schwaapilz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    So I guess the far more advanced species in this story has never heard of mixed unit tactics? Never even considered developing a method to jam an enemies radar/targeting systems? Hell, never even heard of radar in general??? Never considered developing heavy armor for things like troop transports? Or tanks?!

  • @tonylittle8634
    @tonylittle8634 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I’m old enough to know that sci-fi and Hollywood usually give us a hint of what’s to come or has already happened behind the scenes.

  • @0minous187
    @0minous187 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    last i checked bajorans arent reptiles...

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Sea, air, land...seal.........

  • @MPTX-be8qq
    @MPTX-be8qq 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    It would also be cool if there was some sort of animation or still pictures to go along with this.

  • @stevenredpath9332
    @stevenredpath9332 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The only surprise in this story is that the bad guys are called Bajorans. There’s no nuance here.

  • @T-h-a-t_G-u-y
    @T-h-a-t_G-u-y 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    “Man-pad teams Europe” lol

  • @Hungryghost01
    @Hungryghost01 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Bajor? They're from DS9

  • @victorfinberg8595
    @victorfinberg8595 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    45:05 and a minute later
    schroedinger doll

  • @TofforWhite
    @TofforWhite 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    seems like the AI got stuck in a loop when writing the end.

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    He was adopted...biological father is George s. Patton...

    • @suziewheeler6530
      @suziewheeler6530 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      We don't know that to be true. What are the odds? There is a lot about those stories that can't be confirmed

  • @philk534
    @philk534 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Nice story, could have used different names for an adversary but given the narrative wrnt very well. You repeated several areas. Which could have been filled with different content as opposed to filler. As with your other stories very engaging which allowed me to make up for myself a back story to fit this narrative. Enjoyed it, very engaging. Liked the ending which allowed room for other stories.

  • @BennyPrice-ok1tt
    @BennyPrice-ok1tt 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    War they wanted it now they'll regret it

  • @peterjensen3559
    @peterjensen3559 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I am 52 years old and when I grew up we didn't have PlayStations we barely had television to the best part was when my mom read stories from us and I give you an 88 thank you for your story

  • @kennethhope1438
    @kennethhope1438 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I enjoyed your story!

  • @willdsm08
    @willdsm08 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Odd. They won the battle, and rather than reinforcing their positions, they all went home to Earth. Sounds like American doctrine during the Vietnam War.

    • @4X10S
      @4X10S 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      You view the war in military terms, but war is an extension of politics.
      The 60,000 U.S. soldiers that were lost in Vietnam was the political defeat that U.S. couldn't accept.
      They lost because there was no will in U.S. citizens to fight that war, and yes, it's a loss, Communists of Vietnam won in the end defeating the South Vietnamese Democratic army.
      Same thing happened in Afghanistan, they never lost their will to fight, all while U.S. couldn't continue this senseless money sink.

  • @peterjensen3559
    @peterjensen3559 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    and then you have a captivating voice that somehow just rings through! in the way you tell the story 🥰

  • @Mothyone
    @Mothyone 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    😂😂😂as an operator 😂😂😂

  • @stephenav3986
    @stephenav3986 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Good story…thanks

  • @agustincastror
    @agustincastror 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Good tale! Keep the good Work.
    Thankyou

  • @RolandoMartinez-t4y
    @RolandoMartinez-t4y หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is the slippery slope.
    First u have the U.S. Space Force then u have Galactic Forces.😂

  • @kingpetra6886
    @kingpetra6886 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    A verbal comic strip. Disney, your finished.

  • @24tanksalot
    @24tanksalot 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    88, thank you so much for this story. I myself have written 3 letters to families of my soldiers that did not make it home. I still carry the scars.

    • @MrGrombie
      @MrGrombie 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      He didn't like it.... Love the lies told from AI stories lol

  • @georgeperez-stillwagon6458
    @georgeperez-stillwagon6458 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great story. I enjoyed it very much. 1 to 10, I give it a 10. It was so interesting I tried to imagin in my mind how every action and order was taken place. Even trying to picture the girl with the doll.

  • @RamonRodriguez-hq7vn
    @RamonRodriguez-hq7vn 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Someone has infantry training, on the writing staff. I recognize certain terminologies.

    • @aoofmg6684
      @aoofmg6684 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      AI knows infantery stuff if you prompt it properly 😉

    • @The_Conqueeftador
      @The_Conqueeftador 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Bajoran freedom fighters is a star trek thing. So is the man he called a reptile. Which kind of describes the Rommulans. "Scaley head".

  • @robertwildhorse3331
    @robertwildhorse3331 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This sounds like our futures history. My father worked for the experimental design department for one of our arrow space companies. He did DARPA stuff before there was a DARPA. He was very stoic about his work. At times we would be watching a documentary on future stuff like pulse weapons and pulse engine technology. I would hear him scoff As a young child I would ask "what Dad" All he would say is " we've had that technology for....hell twenty years now" and then stone face stoic again. A man of few words. I truly believe we know and posses far more technology than we will know in well, my life time. I am sure if the need arrives we will be amazed with the stuff that has been hidden from the general public. It is a shame but, true.

  • @martinwalshe5657
    @martinwalshe5657 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Very entertaining, love sifi

  • @garydomogalla1925
    @garydomogalla1925 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I've only been listening to these for about a month or so but in that time I've heard several references from different franchises such as Stargate, Star Trek, Sliders, Quantum Leap, DC Comics, Doctor Who, Twilight Zone, etc

  • @kermit977
    @kermit977 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hi, Saagar I have seen a UFO flying around the top of the full moon
    & also have been visited by the Tall people while cleaning up the
    the beach where I live & also had & a visit by the reptilian as well
    who was standing by & an old car when I approached him he through a coffee cup on the ground so I picked up the cup & then moved to the shelter shed to clean up around the area then I saw a male sitting on the bench with his finger moving around the phone on my movement while I continued to pick up the rubbish. as 2 reptilians were sitting on the bench seat to moving their fingers on their phones too & the next day while turning on my TV there was a figure of 4 greys looking at me from my TV .so people wake up & let these aliens to show them a peace full greetings to the world we live in.

  • @rjhergert6590
    @rjhergert6590 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    i keep laughing every time thinking ds9

  • @Citizenesse8
    @Citizenesse8 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

    Do not keep that Bajoran name in anything you have because Paramount owns Star Trek and they may come after you.

    • @definatelynotalpharius
      @definatelynotalpharius 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      This is false. They won't. Section 31 doesn't exist anymore. Definitely. Totally gone. Anything you've heard otherwise is baseless rumour.

    • @DarkStar-vx7rn
      @DarkStar-vx7rn 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      They can only go after him if he's making money off of selling it. Otherwise anyone who wrote fan fiction would get in trouble

    • @ProzacStylings
      @ProzacStylings 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@DarkStar-vx7rn This is not true.
      First, Fair Use has four facets associated with it, not just profitability. You can lose a fair use case even if you're not making any money. Profit isn't even the most important factor. Transforming/changing the content is the most important factor.
      Second, Fair Use is a defense employed against otherwise valid copyright claims. They can still come after you for using their IP, and you may still have to defend yourself in court with a fair use defense.

    • @Guardias
      @Guardias 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Hell, Paramount doesn't give a shit about the shows they make, doubt they'll give a damn about this.

    • @Is_This_Really_Necessary
      @Is_This_Really_Necessary 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Not necessarily. Legally speaking, you can't own words. You can own your depiction of a word, but you cannot own the word itself.
      In other words, Paramount Pictures owns their use of the word "Bajoran", but they themselves do not own the word "Bajoran".
      In this case, Paramount Pictures Star Trek "Bajorans" are an alien race that look almost identical to humans. Whereas HFY Sci-Fi's "Bajorans" are reptilian.

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    F38 raptors...

  • @larryselkirk426
    @larryselkirk426 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The assumption that the galaxy is consumed by darkness is irrational. But it is fantasy I guess.

    • @Serb-m4b
      @Serb-m4b 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      So new story
      Human visited some aliens.
      They had a nice chat.
      Peace reigned though out the galaxy.
      The end.

    • @larryselkirk426
      @larryselkirk426 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Serb-m4b : I did not say there was no darkness. There would be plenty to fight. There always is. But there is more light than darkness.

    • @Serb-m4b
      @Serb-m4b 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@larryselkirk426 there is no way to tell what other races will be like when we meet them so no way we can judge weather there will be more light or dark out there. But it doesn’t matter my point was that it would make a short and boring story.

  • @jonbeams9786
    @jonbeams9786 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I thought it was a movie recap. I was surprised, to find it a storyline.
    Very well written, written. Thank you.

  • @jhutsebaut
    @jhutsebaut 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I really want to corrct the mistakes in the close captioning! 😆

  • @JoeHazlet
    @JoeHazlet 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I really like your story. I'm a vet, and a lot of what you said in the story is true to how a soldier is and will do. Be blessed. 88.

  • @jameshaury2716
    @jameshaury2716 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    You could have thought of a better name than Bajorans that was already used in star trek DS9.

  • @martinwalshe5657
    @martinwalshe5657 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    88 brilliant story , I stay up well past bedtime to listen it toll the end ,

  • @markhuggins8223
    @markhuggins8223 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Very good ❤

  • @MicahGroover
    @MicahGroover 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Why do I get the feeling AI is blowing smoke up our asses before it wipes us out?

  • @iamdragonkrys
    @iamdragonkrys 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great story 👏👏👍👍

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Some reptilians can fly and have wings...we too can fly, without wings.......

    • @bicanoo_magic3452
      @bicanoo_magic3452 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I know you're saying that as a joke. But I CAN kinda fly. I have levitated or risen quite fast to a height of say 40feet. I've stuck myself to the ceiling of the office. All of this with witnesses. All by people that knew me or still do. Only ONCE was it voluntary. The people that saw all this don't want to talk to me anymore. Just saying. It IS possible and DOES exist. Don't ask me how I got it or how I discovered it. All by accident and it happens when it happens. It never freaks me out. But boy do others lose it. One woman fainted cold out, right in front of me, after watching me be pegged against the ceiling in the office like a star fish.

    • @MrPanzerblitz
      @MrPanzerblitz 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@bicanoo_magic3452 I see you edited this.....obviously, not enough!

  • @monkeyoncrackone
    @monkeyoncrackone หลายเดือนก่อน

    All I can think of is the 77th ID in ww2 XD

  • @tradways
    @tradways 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ha! You just screwed the rest of your species… no surrenders. Thats like killing the officer or doc!

  • @NotAnIlluminatiSpy
    @NotAnIlluminatiSpy 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Must have been the Maquis

  • @samusofsparta
    @samusofsparta 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    better than most of these stories.... but it repeats itself several times and the weird event at 43 minutes.... while emotional seemed out of place in this story by quite a bit.... a solid 6/10

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Blue blood, not purple...copper base...humans are iron base.........

  • @GBXS
    @GBXS 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    So the undisputed masters of the galaxy share a planet with another race / peoples which is not under their control. And humans are able to land on their home planet (as the Bajoran council was on the same planet) and kick their ass whilst there is no mention of the presumed space-battle. This just makes no sense.

  • @maribethgeiger444
    @maribethgeiger444 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Excellent!! Very well done!!

  • @rainman7992
    @rainman7992 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    how many times are their eyes gonna get filled with an adjective....Grammarly, where are you when you are needed most

  • @jesuscardona1359
    @jesuscardona1359 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I like the story ❤

  • @poseidon5003
    @poseidon5003 28 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Bajorans? LOL

  • @Guardias
    @Guardias 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Bajorans getting their asses kicked? Sign me up.

    • @richardberry7470
      @richardberry7470 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Wrong Bajorans! These are insectoids with purple blood.

    • @richardberry7470
      @richardberry7470 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Or Reptillian!

    • @rjhergert6590
      @rjhergert6590 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      🤣