They Laughed At "Tiny Army", Until They Realized It Had HUMAN Soldiers! | HFY Sci-Fi Story

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  • @summit7051
    @summit7051 หลายเดือนก่อน +203

    "..weaponized gunships.."??
    It wouldn't be much of a gunship if it wasn't weaponized!

    • @zugzug6773
      @zugzug6773 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      You have to admit the AI is getting better

    • @jansandman6983
      @jansandman6983 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    • @mainmanbumfuzz8983
      @mainmanbumfuzz8983 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      Gestures angrily in human. "It's in the name!"

    • @danielleriley2796
      @danielleriley2796 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      The writer has NO IDEA about weaponry. They just mix terms like a shitty blender. I’ve given up at the surface to air missiles that have both tungsten and depleted uranium rods in them that are released… first that would be explosively fired from the warhead and there would be only one type of metal since the missile speed and explosive delivery needs to be tailored for the mass and density and effect on target of the two rod metals.
      Next will be neon yellow with reflective strips for cammo jackets….

    • @zugzug6773
      @zugzug6773 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@danielleriley2796 Its an AI.

  • @alanmacification
    @alanmacification หลายเดือนก่อน +51

    They committed the crime of perfidy - false surrender. No quarter is to be given.

  • @CubanWriter
    @CubanWriter หลายเดือนก่อน +157

    When I see something using well-known sci-fi names like 'Bajoran' it makes me think it was the product of an AI, and that no human editor even bothered to look it over.

    • @pkill23
      @pkill23 หลายเดือนก่อน +17

      This channel is 100% AI generated stories

    • @victorfinberg8595
      @victorfinberg8595 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      very impressive, then

    • @iamabadger
      @iamabadger หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      @@pkill23 Except it's not, most of the videos are just an AI voices reading reddit posts to make money off other people's writing...

    • @blockhead5124
      @blockhead5124 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@iamabadger I like "SciFi Stories" (scifistories1977), still ai voices and reddit stories but the channel owner will contact the story writer, ask permission and share revenue with them from their videos. He also uses different ai voices for different characters.

    • @TheScoundrel70
      @TheScoundrel70 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Well, considering Star Trek and Star Wars have borrowed heavily from people, places, and things that do, or have existed (maybe in a different language) it's not surprising that many words get modified, or repurposed to fit the narrative of science fiction.

  • @daswordofgork9823
    @daswordofgork9823 หลายเดือนก่อน +48

    Bajorans: Consider the fate of your women.
    Human: Clearly you don’t know our women. I should have just marched them up here judging from what I’ve seen.

    • @donktheclown
      @donktheclown หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Lol. Good one, Leonidas !!

    • @chadrowe8452
      @chadrowe8452 22 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      I like the sequel better."I'm not here as a witness"

    • @Damocles54
      @Damocles54 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@chadrowe8452 any sequel that features Eva Green dressed (or un, as the case may (or may not) be) as she was in this movie is automatically better than the prior entries in the franchise. Subsequent sequels as well.
      Stand alone anthology stories.
      Anything based on fan fiction, shot in an iPhone and uploaded to TH-cam.
      And many unrelated movies as well.
      Of course, my opinions on the matter are subjective. You're free to disagree. Everyone has the right to choose beinf wrong😂😂😂😂

  • @ThomasFishwick
    @ThomasFishwick หลายเดือนก่อน +26

    "Fenris" and "Bajoran"...
    good lord, the AI is strong in this one!

    • @hermes6910
      @hermes6910 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Nice catch.
      Something tilted me, I couldn't say what... But now I know.

  • @redakroma1
    @redakroma1 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    Good story, sighed and facepalmed at the Star Trek name references though. Only inconsistency was at the end which involved the child's doll. The commander had given it back to the little girl and told her to go hide, then he had it back in his hand at the end ("Whoops").

  • @dominickefrim3088
    @dominickefrim3088 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

    This should be the base story for a movie. No drama. Just, confidence, carnage and victory....🤔

    • @robinstuyvesant7187
      @robinstuyvesant7187 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Gotta make space for the woke messages and pontification.

    • @dominickefrim3088
      @dominickefrim3088 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@robinstuyvesant7187 wokeness killed Star Wars...and Halo....and Star Trek.....

  • @dna6882
    @dna6882 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    The only thing that gives away that an ai is writing this is when it uses the same words to describe something . The words it uses are totally correct but it cannot understand that even though those words are the best choice to describe something, we english language speakers find it off putting to use the same metaphor or turn of phrase multiple times in the same body of text. The Ai cannot understand such subtleties of writing.

    • @americanjoe5486
      @americanjoe5486 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Great idea,,,,,, if AI is really up to this task

    • @BJ-bd5fc
      @BJ-bd5fc 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      At least until the AI gets enough data sets (containing those human-written subtleties) fed into it. Today's AI doesn't understand or philosophize about anything. It just mimics and reformulates what us humans create.

    • @watchwood
      @watchwood 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Also, Humvees in a scifi setting? That's something I'd expect a human writer to catch.

  • @LondonLawman
    @LondonLawman หลายเดือนก่อน +47

    That looks like Titus Pullo of the XIII Legion. I would not be messing with him.

    • @PumpkinHoard
      @PumpkinHoard หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      That was my thought. RIP Ray Stevenson.

    • @swiftmatic
      @swiftmatic หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Pullo and Vorenus were like the Hulk and the Thing of the ancient world. Fuck yeah!

    • @svenguinee1072
      @svenguinee1072 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      We march for Macragge! Courage and Honour!

    • @wesleybaldwin7060
      @wesleybaldwin7060 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I dunno , kinda looks like #47

    • @diarradunlap9337
      @diarradunlap9337 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      The second guy in the picture looks like Connor MacLeod from Highlander.

  • @timg6252
    @timg6252 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    This AIs grasp of battle field tactics is woeful.

  • @tonylittle8634
    @tonylittle8634 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    I’m old enough to know that sci-fi and Hollywood usually give us a hint of what’s to come or has already happened behind the scenes.

  • @scorchedearth1451
    @scorchedearth1451 24 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    Humanity is a force to be reckoned with.
    They have a lot of experience after all, fighting each other.

  • @mattc.310
    @mattc.310 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    He gave the doll back to the little girl, but he looked at it in his hand later, and other strangeness, but an engaging story.

  • @samdavies7337
    @samdavies7337 หลายเดือนก่อน +39

    Great fun, but please, please get the text proof read before publishing. There are LOTS of spolling mistakes!

    • @elzwindglenraven
      @elzwindglenraven หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      'spolling' lmao kewl

    • @donaldboyer8182
      @donaldboyer8182 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Lot's of redundant chatter from the narrator. I thought he gave the doll back to the little girl.

    • @iamabadger
      @iamabadger หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      The whole channel is fully automated, reading and generating thumbnails pulled from (sometimes) uncredited reddit posts. It posts a 30min to 1h long video every 2 hours. There will be no proofreading here at all. It's just a cheap way of making money off of other people's work and writing...

    • @durbledurb3992
      @durbledurb3992 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@iamabadger How did you find that out?

    • @johncarlaw8633
      @johncarlaw8633 28 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      ​@@durbledurb3992 " How did you find that out?" just look at the video release rate.
      Also the quality.
      It has been happening a lot on YT and other media and getting much worse.
      A couple of years ago it was just people lifting stuff from reddit HFY and and other sources and running text to speech over them but now it is just wholesale AI randomness not worth wading through.
      If it doesn't give a source for the story it is likely a lot of AI now.
      On the RHS recommendation list you can click on the three dots and select "Don't recommend channel" and it isn't supposed to show them again, but sometimes it still does.
      Hopefully it won't tempt me with this channel again.

  • @LeeG7953
    @LeeG7953 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I’m one of those old soldiers (11B), and this story was fantastic, thank you!

  • @DamienBlade
    @DamienBlade หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Aren't the Bajorans a race in Star Trek?

  • @sephuris5555
    @sephuris5555 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    I hear bajorians i star thinking star trek lmao

  • @ducatirottie
    @ducatirottie หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Dammmm, almost felt bad for the aliens for a minute! 😂😂😂

  • @BFPerry220
    @BFPerry220 หลายเดือนก่อน +22

    Humans didn't have ftl, but are on this planet. Soo, they lived there too? Or they spent generations just to get 1% of the way there to aid them? I don't get this, the Bajoran Capital city is only miles away from the battlefield, so they also lived on that planet with the L aliens? So much is confusing and I barely started. These vids are great as a, "what not to do" if you do a little story writing.

    • @donaldboyer8182
      @donaldboyer8182 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      We heard some talk of the Bajoran council back at the city. What happened to them? Are they still there? Not a bad story. But inconsistent.

    • @jackjohnson40
      @jackjohnson40 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Agreed! It's almost so good but then these stupid mistakes...

    • @williamoloughlin8298
      @williamoloughlin8298 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

      came through a stable wormhole, no ftl required.

    • @briannewman9285
      @briannewman9285 22 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@williamoloughlin8298That doesn’t make it any better. So, now we’re supposed to believe that they can survive the infinite gravity of a black hole, but can’t go FTL?

    • @Cleaver2396
      @Cleaver2396 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

      The oppressed aliens brought the humans there

  • @williamhowell4738
    @williamhowell4738 หลายเดือนก่อน +24

    88 I am a veteran of combat, the closing words by the commander have never been truer!

    • @markmedlin9731
      @markmedlin9731 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      88 thank you sir for your service

    • @haha__hihi
      @haha__hihi 26 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@markmedlin9731 plot twist: grandpa is from germany /s

    • @manofmann8901
      @manofmann8901 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

      ​@@haha__hihiThats all I think when it asks for 88, H-H

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    America, we are failing miserably........

  • @stevesmith7839
    @stevesmith7839 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Humvee's far in the future? They wouldn't have made anything different by then?

    • @handleyourowntool
      @handleyourowntool หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Nope! Humvees and outdated super bombers will never go out of style.

    • @handleyourowntool
      @handleyourowntool หลายเดือนก่อน

      Wait?! Did you take any care to see what time frame this video took place? It was the year 2024

    • @stevesmith7839
      @stevesmith7839 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@handleyourowntool It's an alternative present?

    • @stevesmith7839
      @stevesmith7839 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@handleyourowntool Lamborghini would be pleased to know. But about war, we used to have Willys Jeeps. One quote from a Warhammer game is an orc saying, "I got me an idea for making walkin..... faster." Jeeps are for making walkin faster, but eventually, with power armor, walkin... will be faster. A bombers purpose is to deliver bombs.... until bombs deliver themselves, as in missiles. We are seeing that evolution being played out in a couple modern war theaters. Bombers are rarely used to deliver bombs anymore, because they are perceptibly interceptable. They are also expensive. With the Phalanx system and other systems, intercepting even missiles and shells is becoming more a reality. Eventually, missiles and shells will have stealth tech and armor, maybe shielding. Tank armor won't be enough. It will be better to have fast, light vehicles. Probably power armor.

    • @Slowpoke514
      @Slowpoke514 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Even if this was 1,000 years in the future, you know how humans like their nostalgia. They could have named a new all terrain vehicle a Humvee just because it was a vehicle of war in the past.

  • @marmalade6681
    @marmalade6681 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

    45:05 then 46:05 erm.. your AI needs to stop smoking weed

    • @grogvaughan5649
      @grogvaughan5649 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      TF is wrong with smoking weed?!?

    • @marmalade6681
      @marmalade6681 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@grogvaughan5649 Absoluting nothing! ! Smoke weed everyday! But dont post weirdass shit and expect more weed! .. hmm more weed please :)

    • @KallenMalefic
      @KallenMalefic หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@grogvaughan5649I smoked one weed now I am gay and worship Satan.

    • @TheSolidSnakeOil
      @TheSolidSnakeOil หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@grogvaughan5649 It make you say, do, write stupid things as the examples. This was definitely written by an AI. He hands the doll to the girl, "Get to safety, the battles over"? And in the next sentence he's in ship with self same doll?

    • @grogvaughan5649
      @grogvaughan5649 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@TheSolidSnakeOil sounds like a you issue

  • @Guardias
    @Guardias หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Bajorans getting their asses kicked? Sign me up.

    • @richardberry7470
      @richardberry7470 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Wrong Bajorans! These are insectoids with purple blood.

    • @richardberry7470
      @richardberry7470 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Or Reptillian!

    • @rjhergert6590
      @rjhergert6590 หลายเดือนก่อน

      🤣

  • @Hungryghost01
    @Hungryghost01 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Bajor? They're from DS9

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    He was adopted...biological father is George s. Patton...

    • @suziewheeler6530
      @suziewheeler6530 หลายเดือนก่อน

      We don't know that to be true. What are the odds? There is a lot about those stories that can't be confirmed

  • @Furzkampfbomber
    @Furzkampfbomber 3 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Kinda ironic that the ruthless, imperialist invaders are Bajorans, considering Bajor's fate in DS9.

  • @mrbuck5059
    @mrbuck5059 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The Bajoran Wormhole is now secured by Captain Benjamin Sisko. Lets hope the Cardassians dont join the Dominion.

  • @user-xv9bi3ne9m
    @user-xv9bi3ne9m หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I really like your story. I'm a vet, and a lot of what you said in the story is true to how a soldier is and will do. Be blessed. 88.

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    They throw a few rockets at themselves and blame whoever it is they want to invade at the time..........

    • @tesmith47
      @tesmith47 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yep america

  • @carlchu2180
    @carlchu2180 7 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I am getting hooked on these SF stories. Reminds me of the eighteen eight-eight westerns on radio.

  • @agustincastror
    @agustincastror หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Good tale! Keep the good Work.
    Thankyou

  • @MPTX-be8qq
    @MPTX-be8qq หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    It would also be cool if there was some sort of animation or still pictures to go along with this.

  • @damianfirecaster7230
    @damianfirecaster7230 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you for these great stories :)

  • @BennyPrice-ok1tt
    @BennyPrice-ok1tt หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    War they wanted it now they'll regret it

  • @durbledurb3992
    @durbledurb3992 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I swear, if they try to ban my railgun I will go postal 😆 Good story.

  • @JackT1961
    @JackT1961 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    88. This was an amazing story. No truer words could have been spoken near the end.

  • @cam0865
    @cam0865 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Loved it.
    I can get by the names and stuff. ..
    Thankyou to the Author..
    Gave me a needed departure from my days activities

  • @peterjensen3559
    @peterjensen3559 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I am 52 years old and when I grew up we didn't have PlayStations we barely had television to the best part was when my mom read stories from us and I give you an 88 thank you for your story

  • @michael-ys3wi
    @michael-ys3wi หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Bajoran? DS9 gonna be calling.

  • @rjhergert6590
    @rjhergert6590 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    i keep laughing every time thinking ds9

  • @Amokhunter
    @Amokhunter หลายเดือนก่อน +185

    I recommend taking it down, then change Bajoran into something else and reupload it, otherwise you might have Paramount knocking on your door with a lawsuit. Bajor is a planet in the Star Trek universe and Bajorans are a rather prominent species in said universe.

    • @malahammer
      @malahammer หลายเดือนก่อน +20

      Will you relax 🙄

    • @paulholmpileborg6340
      @paulholmpileborg6340 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      What if the AI voice and speech to text got it wrong and its Bahyorans? Huh?
      How are they going to prove that its Bajorans

    • @erikstolzenberger1517
      @erikstolzenberger1517 หลายเดือนก่อน

      YOU CAN'T SUE AN AI...if it created this story using open source material, Paramount can kiss their arses...and that ridiculous trash that Roddenberry created? That's open source in this case...get yourself a law degree or shut the f up, kid.

    • @lucashenry6281
      @lucashenry6281 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@paulholmpileborg6340the subtitles.

    • @quetzelmedina3
      @quetzelmedina3 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

      @@malahammerno. Hes right.

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    F38 raptors...

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    You own the air, you own the war.......

  • @tonymickens8803
    @tonymickens8803 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    BAJORANS? WHERE THE HELL IS CAPTAIN SISKO????

  • @garydomogalla1925
    @garydomogalla1925 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I've only been listening to these for about a month or so but in that time I've heard several references from different franchises such as Stargate, Star Trek, Sliders, Quantum Leap, DC Comics, Doctor Who, Twilight Zone, etc

  • @chucklefuck
    @chucklefuck หลายเดือนก่อน +31

    0:24 "the humans had been providing humanitarian aid" yeah that sounds like a very human thing to do

    • @TheSolidSnakeOil
      @TheSolidSnakeOil หลายเดือนก่อน

      That something a lot of the writers or, let's be honest, AI never takes into a count with these stories. Also, using Bajorans.

    • @wizzard4063
      @wizzard4063 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@TheSolidSnakeOilit's one of the ways you can tell it's written by an AI

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Sea, air, land...seal.........

  • @davidmiddleton7958
    @davidmiddleton7958 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Perhaps renaming the aliens as Bad-yings? Would avoid a costly cpoy right court case. However, an excellant short story. Many thanks to the author and this channel.

  • @0minous187
    @0minous187 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    last i checked bajorans arent reptiles...

  • @victorfinberg8595
    @victorfinberg8595 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    45:05 and a minute later
    schroedinger doll

  • @robertwildhorse3331
    @robertwildhorse3331 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    This sounds like our futures history. My father worked for the experimental design department for one of our arrow space companies. He did DARPA stuff before there was a DARPA. He was very stoic about his work. At times we would be watching a documentary on future stuff like pulse weapons and pulse engine technology. I would hear him scoff As a young child I would ask "what Dad" All he would say is " we've had that technology for....hell twenty years now" and then stone face stoic again. A man of few words. I truly believe we know and posses far more technology than we will know in well, my life time. I am sure if the need arrives we will be amazed with the stuff that has been hidden from the general public. It is a shame but, true.

  • @whitehazegruntz250
    @whitehazegruntz250 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    When u attack someone and lose. Your not returning for revenge. Revenge implies something was done wrong to u. But attackers r the ones doing the wrong ones so ya

    • @grekofrog
      @grekofrog หลายเดือนก่อน

      Depends on the point of view of the attackers. And in a story where you got a warlike, ruthless species like these Bajorans, they could see defeating their invasion force as a humiliation, and want take revenge for said humiliation.
      You see, it's about establishing the barbaric point of view of the attacker. And make them more dangerous, but yet, predictable.

  • @Sadarsa
    @Sadarsa หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    the end of the battle repeated itself twice, then the aftermath of the battle repeated itself twice.

    • @bhaebe6671
      @bhaebe6671 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Poorly edited

    • @larryselkirk426
      @larryselkirk426 หลายเดือนก่อน

      One of the traits of AI is repetition. One of the other stories used the exact same description three times for different things.

  • @stevenredpath9332
    @stevenredpath9332 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    The only surprise in this story is that the bad guys are called Bajorans. There’s no nuance here.

  • @TofforWhite
    @TofforWhite หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    seems like the AI got stuck in a loop when writing the end.

  • @kermit977
    @kermit977 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hi, Saagar I have seen a UFO flying around the top of the full moon
    & also have been visited by the Tall people while cleaning up the
    the beach where I live & also had & a visit by the reptilian as well
    who was standing by & an old car when I approached him he through a coffee cup on the ground so I picked up the cup & then moved to the shelter shed to clean up around the area then I saw a male sitting on the bench with his finger moving around the phone on my movement while I continued to pick up the rubbish. as 2 reptilians were sitting on the bench seat to moving their fingers on their phones too & the next day while turning on my TV there was a figure of 4 greys looking at me from my TV .so people wake up & let these aliens to show them a peace full greetings to the world we live in.

  • @WilliamTaylor-zk7iw
    @WilliamTaylor-zk7iw 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Avatar is truly what humans are like

  • @alfreeman728
    @alfreeman728 13 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Pounding the table put a dent in the "hardened" metal? LOL!

  • @sparkeyjames
    @sparkeyjames หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Bajoran sounds like a name plucked from Star Trek Deep Space Nine.

    • @GeorgHaeder
      @GeorgHaeder หลายเดือนก่อน

      Because it is.

  • @martinwalshe5657
    @martinwalshe5657 2 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    Very entertaining, love sifi

  • @WilliamTaylor-zk7iw
    @WilliamTaylor-zk7iw 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Good man he stopped being like them

  • @landenschooler6726
    @landenschooler6726 29 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    It seems the author never watched Star Trek: Deep Space 9......

  • @peterjensen3559
    @peterjensen3559 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    and then you have a captivating voice that somehow just rings through! in the way you tell the story 🥰

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Blue blood, not purple...copper base...humans are iron base.........

  • @jameshaury2716
    @jameshaury2716 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    You could have thought of a better name than Bajorans that was already used in star trek DS9.

  • @iamdragonkrys
    @iamdragonkrys หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great story 👏👏👍👍

  • @willdsm08
    @willdsm08 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Odd. They won the battle, and rather than reinforcing their positions, they all went home to Earth. Sounds like American doctrine during the Vietnam War.

    • @4X10S
      @4X10S หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      You view the war in military terms, but war is an extension of politics.
      The 60,000 U.S. soldiers that were lost in Vietnam was the political defeat that U.S. couldn't accept.
      They lost because there was no will in U.S. citizens to fight that war, and yes, it's a loss, Communists of Vietnam won in the end defeating the South Vietnamese Democratic army.
      Same thing happened in Afghanistan, they never lost their will to fight, all while U.S. couldn't continue this senseless money sink.

  • @larryselkirk426
    @larryselkirk426 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The assumption that the galaxy is consumed by darkness is irrational. But it is fantasy I guess.

    • @user-dk5um1ig4d
      @user-dk5um1ig4d หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      So new story
      Human visited some aliens.
      They had a nice chat.
      Peace reigned though out the galaxy.
      The end.

    • @larryselkirk426
      @larryselkirk426 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@user-dk5um1ig4d : I did not say there was no darkness. There would be plenty to fight. There always is. But there is more light than darkness.

    • @user-dk5um1ig4d
      @user-dk5um1ig4d หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@larryselkirk426 there is no way to tell what other races will be like when we meet them so no way we can judge weather there will be more light or dark out there. But it doesn’t matter my point was that it would make a short and boring story.

  • @williamburroughs9686
    @williamburroughs9686 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    It's a good story. The only mistake the author made was at the end. When Greg looks at the doll in his hand.
    The mistake was that he had already handed it back to the little girl who went away.
    But again. Great story. :)

  • @richarddean1333
    @richarddean1333 หลายเดือนก่อน

    88 just found your series and i love it, i dont know how many you have written but i plan on listening to them all

  • @georgeperez-stillwagon6458
    @georgeperez-stillwagon6458 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great story. I enjoyed it very much. 1 to 10, I give it a 10. It was so interesting I tried to imagin in my mind how every action and order was taken place. Even trying to picture the girl with the doll.

  • @kingpetra6886
    @kingpetra6886 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    A verbal comic strip. Disney, your finished.

  • @thechillhacker
    @thechillhacker 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Nah guys, it wasn't accidental - these are in fact, THOSE Bajorans, just with the Cardassian precedents never diverging as a separate people, but forming Bajoran society from the onset - Perhaps under the watchful eyes of the Pah' wraith?...

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Put two pictures side by side and tell me he ain't.........

  • @NotAnIlluminatiSpy
    @NotAnIlluminatiSpy หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Must have been the Maquis

  • @jenkor513
    @jenkor513 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Bajorans are human in appearance, cardassians are lizard like. Both groups are formidable warriors and a few humans would not stand a chance.

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Can even tell you, who set the charges........

  • @TronMan986
    @TronMan986 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Bajoran should be like human. When did they became scaly reptile?.

  • @martinwalshe5657
    @martinwalshe5657 ชั่วโมงที่ผ่านมา

    88 brilliant story , I stay up well past bedtime to listen it toll the end ,

  • @patrickdurham8393
    @patrickdurham8393 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This one doesn't suck.

  • @RamonRodriguez-hq7vn
    @RamonRodriguez-hq7vn หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Someone has infantry training, on the writing staff. I recognize certain terminologies.

    • @aoofmg6684
      @aoofmg6684 หลายเดือนก่อน

      AI knows infantery stuff if you prompt it properly 😉

    • @The_Conqueeftador
      @The_Conqueeftador หลายเดือนก่อน

      Bajoran freedom fighters is a star trek thing. So is the man he called a reptile. Which kind of describes the Rommulans. "Scaley head".

  • @MisterNizz
    @MisterNizz 28 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Come up with a non copyrighted alien name, and you’ve got something here.

  • @richardhockey8442
    @richardhockey8442 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    no quarter - the oriflamme has been raised

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Not flat....a lot bigger than we know.........blood don't look blue, until it dries...

  • @andyking957
    @andyking957 หลายเดือนก่อน

    executing war prisoners because of some of some ambush is a war crime anyway

  • @ogrehaslayers605
    @ogrehaslayers605 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I always thought Bajoran's were just religious nutters who complained about the Federation and got occupied by the Dominion. 😂

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Very soon, we'll remember who we are........

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Some reptilians can fly and have wings...we too can fly, without wings.......

    • @bicanoo_magic3452
      @bicanoo_magic3452 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I know you're saying that as a joke. But I CAN kinda fly. I have levitated or risen quite fast to a height of say 40feet. I've stuck myself to the ceiling of the office. All of this with witnesses. All by people that knew me or still do. Only ONCE was it voluntary. The people that saw all this don't want to talk to me anymore. Just saying. It IS possible and DOES exist. Don't ask me how I got it or how I discovered it. All by accident and it happens when it happens. It never freaks me out. But boy do others lose it. One woman fainted cold out, right in front of me, after watching me be pegged against the ceiling in the office like a star fish.

    • @MrPanzerblitz
      @MrPanzerblitz หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@bicanoo_magic3452 I see you edited this.....obviously, not enough!

  • @bulldogstrut1
    @bulldogstrut1 15 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Very reflective of current events.

  • @jesuscardona1359
    @jesuscardona1359 25 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I like the story ❤

  • @grekofrog
    @grekofrog หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    There were indeed a lot of errors in this story, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. And that is what I came here for, entertainment. Thanks. However, I hope to see less errors in the future, despite them, I liked it.

  • @paulywhit2783
    @paulywhit2783 29 วันที่ผ่านมา

    I do notice in all these stories ,it always just the beginning,as usual we have upset every warlike race in. The universe

  • @jhutsebaut
    @jhutsebaut หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I really want to corrct the mistakes in the close captioning! 😆

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Plato once ssid., you can tell a nation's worth, by how it treats it's veterans..........

  • @neurofiber2406
    @neurofiber2406 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Your AI desperately needs an editor...

  • @anandadayakar
    @anandadayakar 14 วันที่ผ่านมา

    88 Nice warrior fantasy for Memorial day😅 Refreshing to have Humanity lifted up for once 😅 In Part Two, we learn the human CIA arranged the invasion.

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    67 miles.........

  • @GBXS
    @GBXS หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    So the undisputed masters of the galaxy share a planet with another race / peoples which is not under their control. And humans are able to land on their home planet (as the Bajoran council was on the same planet) and kick their ass whilst there is no mention of the presumed space-battle. This just makes no sense.

  • @dougbillman2333
    @dougbillman2333 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Navy rail guns prove, Gaia is not round....
    .
    L