😂😂 it is a retarded AI doing this story, they use AI now Nobody Does it for themselves anymore makes me want to do it myself because I could do it way better
Great space war story. One thing critics need to remember is that we are hearing these stories for free so editing will have issues and an ocassional commercial.
Anyone who likes these little stories should read Arthur C. Clarke's short story "Rescue Party". He says in a few short pages what this takes almost 36 min to narrate and it makes this look like a story for boneheads.
Someone has never studied the history of modern navel warfare, the development of navel tactics in relationship to the development of military technology. International diplomacy. The size of the solar system. The fragility of space ships. The fact that you cannot hide anything in space and the fact that habitable planets are not the desirable jewels of resources we assume them to be.
why if a picture of a female posted on the screen? As the man said size is not always rights, small can be big in the end. Good job earth the little dog put a hurting on the big one. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
That was the problem, the Council saw no value in smaller ships. You just demonstrated a human perspective to a galactic stage. We would augment larger ships with smaller ones, the Council doesn't think small has value (or at least didn't)
Now if only someone. A real someone would make stories and tell them on TH-cam in this format. That would be something awesome, Instead of this incredibly repetitive and uncreative AI shit. What i want is a real story made by a real person, and told by a real person. i vote for banning all AI's from TH-cam.
Go for it. I will vote against you, until you actually replace all of it with material personally approved by me. Otherwise, there are countless real sci-fi authors you have never even heard of (yet!).
Keep in mind these HFY stories are ripped off of Reddit HFY threads and the text fed into text to speech generators. So… they ARE human written, just read by a computer.
I've held off on listen to these hfysci-fi stories, not sure why. Fear of getting hooked, and fear of hear Tripe I guess. But this was good, really good. Just enough technobabble to get the point across, but not so much that your head is left reeling. You were a bit repetitive with the size doesn't matter, I might of ended with something like "Its not the size of the dog in the fight, but the fight in the dog that matters." to spice things up a tiny bit.
This was an interesting try, but there were a lot of difficulties. First of all, the 'council' of alien races acts just like arrogant humans. The idea that an 'insectoid' alien race wouldn't know anything about the power of small species is ridiculous. Ships in space (a vacuum) do NOT necessarily move slower or faster based on size, when there is no atmosphere to slow larger things down. The idea that ANY advanced race would think size was important is also highly unlikely, that's a less-educated human idea. All scientists would know better. Stars generally don't 'twinkle' in space. It's atmosphere that makes them twinkle. It's also odd how Earth knew so much about the technology of multiple council worlds, while the council knew so little about Earth. Smaller ships are NOT necessarily going to be faster in a vacuum. Scientists (from any advanced species) would know this. Oh, and speaking of species, how would all species be following the battle. Have they developed faster than light communications? And ALL species? Were amoeba and bacteria listening in as well. There was a decent story base here, but it needed to be proofread by someone who understands how masses react in a vacuum, and perhaps could suggest aliens who acted more alien, and more like their sources, and less like conservative human politicians. The story might have worked on a land mass on Earth itself, with good humans pitted against asshole humans. And craft acting as they normally would in atmosphere, on land, and on water. Good try, though! Keep writing, and get some good proof readers and plot checkers.
I'm not so sure. They serve a purpose we can't have all of our creative writers wasting their time entertaining us they have lives of their own. An as much fun as it is we need those genes passed on to our next generation. I am enjoying these stories but I also want to see them on the big screen. I like to feel proud of our race. But if they don't learn to go beyond this level I'll be forced to wipe it out again. We need creativity an evolution I need them to help us reach forward. I need them all to keep moving forward. Please don't make me wipe them out again😢
The story is total nonsense when it come to space battle, you are using the old frictionless water as space, but space is gravitation based, you are always moving in space, if I right now placed an object at zero speed near earth, earth, solar system and even the galaxy would fly away from it, so I literally has no choice but to use the solar systems gravity wells as I move around, so I would be orbiting planets and the sun, you can't use wolfpack nonsense when your stuck in an orbit pattern. Making this a weird Fantasy story.
that was great, thank you 👍🏻
Not bad at all, if a bit repetitive of other stories! Worth a listen this one.
Debris is pronounced deh bree. The system is SOL. It was a good story. Thanks for sharing!
😂😂 it is a retarded AI doing this story, they use AI now Nobody Does it for themselves anymore makes me want to do it myself because I could do it way better
Indeed a good story
Great story, well told
Not only that, no one cares enough to listen to it and make corrections.
Fun story, thanks!
Great space war story. One thing critics need to remember is that we are hearing these stories for free so editing will have issues and an ocassional commercial.
loved this. Well done
4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
first story i finished, good story, will listen to more.
Anyone who likes these little stories should read Arthur C. Clarke's short story "Rescue Party". He says in a few short pages what this takes almost 36 min to narrate and it makes this look like a story for boneheads.
AI reader is not up to standard neither is the CC generation.
sol not saul
Show them all our tricks? Now who is arrogant? Never show all tricks until necessary.
The limitations of A.I. is very evident
Someone has never studied the history of modern navel warfare, the development of navel tactics in relationship to the development of military technology.
International diplomacy. The size of the solar system. The fragility of space ships. The fact that you cannot hide anything in space and the fact that habitable planets are not the desirable jewels of resources we assume them to be.
why if a picture of a female posted on the screen? As the man said size is not always rights, small can be big in the end. Good job earth the little dog put a hurting on the big one. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
So aliens were size queens, until we humans F’d 🤬 them up. 🤯
Poor AI voice
I have noticed that every one of these AI powered channels print the word "hole" when the say and mean hull. And "calm" when they say comm.
There are a lot of typos like that - saul for sol and so forth
How about pronouncing the word “sob” (to cry) as “so-be” or “weekly” for “weakly” as in “He sobbed weekly” quite the crying jag!
@@abnormal6662 Sol is pronounced soul. So that is very annoying.
LOT OF GRAMMER & SPELLING ERRORS - is this AI generated ?
Oh, irony...
Big ships will always have smaller ships as defense - was expecting them to launch fighters and have a dogfight part🤷♂️
Otherwise, an enjoyable story
That was the problem, the Council saw no value in smaller ships. You just demonstrated a human perspective to a galactic stage. We would augment larger ships with smaller ones, the Council doesn't think small has value (or at least didn't)
Now if only someone. A real someone would make stories and tell them on TH-cam in this format. That would be something awesome, Instead of this incredibly repetitive and uncreative AI shit. What i want is a real story made by a real person, and told by a real person. i vote for banning all AI's from TH-cam.
Go for it. I will vote against you, until you actually replace all of it with material personally approved by me.
Otherwise, there are countless real sci-fi authors you have never even heard of (yet!).
I eagerly await your superior writing!!! 😊
Issac Assimov, Arthur C Clark, many more from the 40-50-60's who wrote of this very thing, try going to a "book" store
@@palmarolavlklingholm9684 learn to read. Ask an old person to tell you about "books".
Keep in mind these HFY stories are ripped off of Reddit HFY threads and the text fed into text to speech generators. So… they ARE human written, just read by a computer.
I've held off on listen to these hfysci-fi stories, not sure why. Fear of getting hooked, and fear of hear Tripe I guess. But this was good, really good. Just enough technobabble to get the point across, but not so much that your head is left reeling. You were a bit repetitive with the size doesn't matter, I might of ended with something like "Its not the size of the dog in the fight, but the fight in the dog that matters." to spice things up a tiny bit.
Excellent story thank you.
Who is actress or model, that her photo is on the video image?
This was an interesting try, but there were a lot of difficulties. First of all, the 'council' of alien races acts just like arrogant humans. The idea that an 'insectoid' alien race wouldn't know anything about the power of small species is ridiculous. Ships in space (a vacuum) do NOT necessarily move slower or faster based on size, when there is no atmosphere to slow larger things down. The idea that ANY advanced race would think size was important is also highly unlikely, that's a less-educated human idea. All scientists would know better.
Stars generally don't 'twinkle' in space. It's atmosphere that makes them twinkle.
It's also odd how Earth knew so much about the technology of multiple council worlds, while the council knew so little about Earth.
Smaller ships are NOT necessarily going to be faster in a vacuum. Scientists (from any advanced species) would know this. Oh, and speaking of species, how would all species be following the battle. Have they developed faster than light communications? And ALL species? Were amoeba and bacteria listening in as well.
There was a decent story base here, but it needed to be proofread by someone who understands how masses react in a vacuum, and perhaps could suggest aliens who acted more alien, and more like their sources, and less like conservative human politicians.
The story might have worked on a land mass on Earth itself, with good humans pitted against asshole humans. And craft acting as they normally would in atmosphere, on land, and on water.
Good try, though! Keep writing, and get some good proof readers and plot checkers.
I'm not so sure. They serve a purpose we can't have all of our creative writers wasting their time entertaining us they have lives of their own. An as much fun as it is we need those genes passed on to our next generation. I am enjoying these stories but I also want to see them on the big screen. I like to feel proud of our race. But if they don't learn to go beyond this level I'll be forced to wipe it out again. We need creativity an evolution I need them to help us reach forward. I need them all to keep moving forward. Please don't make me wipe them out again😢
All of these are ai generated
Somebody needs to work on their spelling.
The story is total nonsense when it come to space battle, you are using the old frictionless water as space, but space is gravitation based, you are always moving in space, if I right now placed an object at zero speed near earth, earth, solar system and even the galaxy would fly away from it, so I literally has no choice but to use the solar systems gravity wells as I move around, so I would be orbiting planets and the sun, you can't use wolfpack nonsense when your stuck in an orbit pattern.
Making this a weird Fantasy story.
these ai generated stories are getting boring and repetitive.
Another dumbass story that does nothing but repeats itself
What a load of rubbish it sounds like humans based on earth's prejudice
Science fiction has to be based on a human’s ideas. There’s no one else!
Most of these stories about humans are exactly that😂
Garbage
""lockably small"? Maybe laughably?
Consul-> consol
com-> comm
calm-> comm
flood-> fled
Hole-> hull
Seoul-> sol
Skytons-> guidance
R-> our
trash