These stories are really good... but they really need to cut down on the crucibles, ozone, and burnt flesh. lol - it's really repetitive after a while. I don't know if these are all AI generated or what, but it's a little nuts. :)
I think they are. Another thing I notice is with other sci-fi TH-cam stories like this one is that "Hung in The Balance" is used really often throughout the story.
Nothing is forged in a crucible. A crucible is used to melt metal. Metals are forged on an anvil, or at the forge which also includes the source used to heat metals for forging. AI authors across all the channels make this mistake.
To be fair, it's a mistake they inherited from a lot of human authors who have used a variation on the "cool sounding" saying: "Nations are forged in the crucible of war" Metaphorically it makes sense, as a nation is being torn and molten down in the 'crucible of war' it is also forged anew into something else afterward. It's an abbreviated metaphor. Otherwise it would be something like - Nations are molten down and forged anew from the crucible of war. Onward from that you're just into description rather than a metaphor which breaks the purpose of condensing an idea entirely.
OK so we were fighting aliens and then the aliens got attacked by aliens so the first aliens came to us for help and we united against the second aliens, but then we went to go get help from another set of aliens that turned out to be another bad guy And were we fighting the second aliens or the third aliens at the end of the story? You lost me at that part.
@@wesleymoore3693 not quite we don't help none human DNA having aliens please see Ogryn,Ratlings, etc for further explaination also one of the elves is being tolerated at the moment by the Imperium so its not all aliens. Also most factions in warhammer want to exterminate every other faction that is not their faction granted I much prefer fantasy over 40k more factions and actually has dwarves and Ogres in fantasy. Meanwhile no dwarves in 40k and far far to many elves you cannot trust elves
Too condensed into a too small time frame though. Like movies where characters show up in places when it's convenient without any consideration that it would take a long time of travel to do so.
This is awful. Hung in the ballance is a phrase I dread hearing over and over and over and over. I'm granting a Thumbs down for each story made untenable by it.
Love the fact that the picture is a bunch of space marines from 40k
There seems to always be a bigger fish 😂😂
Yes, there is always a bigger fish.
We can ill afford another Klendathu
...and you are to be the new Sky Marshall?
Great stuff man.
I'm starting to notice an underlying thread of contemporary global politics in the newer sci-fi audiobooks.
88 heart fillings about the story ending so badly
This is definitely reapers
These stories are really good... but they really need to cut down on the crucibles, ozone, and burnt flesh. lol - it's really repetitive after a while. I don't know if these are all AI generated or what, but it's a little nuts. :)
I think they are. Another thing I notice is with other sci-fi TH-cam stories like this one is that "Hung in The Balance" is used really often throughout the story.
And gorillas don’t forget the gorillas! I did have to smile at the automated text and the thought of a pack of Silver Backs causing havoc and mayhem.
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Every single civilization in the galaxy either join the galactic coalition who joined the dark Tron
Amazing story line and story telling.
The pic is SPACE MARINES!
I prefer the artwork to the new Primaris marine armor from 40k - though its similar
Nothing is forged in a crucible. A crucible is used to melt metal. Metals are forged on an anvil, or at the forge which also includes the source used to heat metals for forging. AI authors across all the channels make this mistake.
To be fair, it's a mistake they inherited from a lot of human authors who have used a variation on the "cool sounding" saying: "Nations are forged in the crucible of war"
Metaphorically it makes sense, as a nation is being torn and molten down in the 'crucible of war' it is also forged anew into something else afterward. It's an abbreviated metaphor. Otherwise it would be something like - Nations are molten down and forged anew from the crucible of war. Onward from that you're just into description rather than a metaphor which breaks the purpose of condensing an idea entirely.
The story jumps around too much
Another great story
i liked this story
OK so we were fighting aliens and then the aliens got attacked by aliens so the first aliens came to us for help and we united against the second aliens, but then we went to go get help from another set of aliens that turned out to be another bad guy And were we fighting the second aliens or the third aliens at the end of the story? You lost me at that part.
I hope you figure it out because the fate of galaxy hangs in the balance. 😂😂😂
If you trade out “alien” for planet, you have warhammer 40k. Because humans don’t help aliens there haha
@@wesleymoore3693 not quite we don't help none human DNA having aliens please see Ogryn,Ratlings, etc for further explaination also one of the elves is being tolerated at the moment by the Imperium so its not all aliens. Also most factions in warhammer want to exterminate every other faction that is not their faction granted I much prefer fantasy over 40k more factions and actually has dwarves and Ogres in fantasy. Meanwhile no dwarves in 40k and far far to many elves you cannot trust elves
hung in the balance
Wtf are human gorillas HAHAHAHAHA
10:50 what exactly did the narrator skip there??
The pacing was too fast. Also, how many alcoves are there, it seems like a lot.
But of course alea running on earth I seen them every day 😮
Like the stories but please, come up w new different names for ships and planets! Stop with the Z's. No more Prometheus or whatever. New please!
Much better can be done with these unfinish stories
Most of these stories are pretty much the same. I'd like to hear one where we lose
That would not be a HFY story then, there are plenty of those types of stories out there
Too condensed into a too small time frame though. Like movies where characters show up in places when it's convenient without any consideration that it would take a long time of travel to do so.
I hope that’s not the end of the story 88
Too many Z names...hard to sort out.
88 Another fine bit of programming.
wtf?? unpolished and incomplete, how did this get to the internet??
I’m so lost what the heck is going on lol
Thanks for the stories. Forget the whiners, they have know talent and are jealous 😅
This story was AI generated, with human plot inputs.
Money money money
Ditto
You couldn’t have ended it after the battle? 88
This is awful. Hung in the ballance is a phrase I dread hearing over and over and over and over. I'm granting a Thumbs down for each story made untenable by it.
Is there any other kind of tension aside from " palpable"?
@@billdieterich Ohh the agony. Please stop 😂
Get out of your basement.
Yes sir. 🫡 Did you want to crawl out of yours? You watched this crappy story too.
Post your awesome stories. Prove your superiority, kiddo. 😂😂😂
Does the story continue? 88
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Stop reading AI generated stories, there’re predictable and nonsensical.