Completely agree with you! The concept and plot is good BUT the writing is so bad. Like if a really good fantasy author like Fonda Lee wrote this series it would easily be 5/5. It’s so annoying that Yarros focuses so much on fluff and unnecessary tangents that take too long.
Completely agree with you! The concept and plot is good BUT the writing is so bad. Like if a really good fantasy author like Fonda Lee wrote this series it would easily be 5/5. It’s so annoying that Yarros focuses so much on fluff and unnecessary tangents that take too long.
I agree, i feel like this book was a trainwreck and so difficult to go through, it could have been half the length and nothing would have changed
Why ever do you think things will improve going forward when the second book is already perfectly consistent with how bad the first one was?
both books are gorgeous for me