Dear miss Amanda, I am Kingsley, a grade 8 teacher at college view schools located at 228 ave , kitchener. Most of my students have read your new book and found it extremely interesting, infact, when I asked the children to mention their favorite authors last Tuesday, 90 percent of the class mentioned your name. They find your books funny and suspense filled. Since you are a role model to most kids in my class, this letter is to invite you for a one day career grooming session here at College View on 27th of next month. I would love for you to talk to my students about your book and the inspirations that led to the beautiful piece of art. If your time permits on that day, I and the kids will be delighted if you can be part of a short role-play based on chapter 7 of your most recent book. Thank you for being such a motivation and a good role model for the kids, I am hoping to read your response soon. yours Faithfully, Kingsley Obilo.
Dear James Hawthorn Trust this meets you well. Prize Mates Academy is a public school founded in 1998 for Kindgergaten and Grade one to Grade 9 students. I am a teacher for the Grade 2 students and we proud ourselves as one of the formost schools in promoting sustainability in the residential neighbourhoods. My Grade 2 class have recently carried our a project on cleaning up the community park and creating an awareness on the need of proper disposing of refuse into the recycle or organic bins made available in the parl. I believe that these values align with your recent article on Sustainability in the neighbourhood.
I highly appreciate the Human Resource’s proposal to convert the first floor to a useful place that would help increase employee’s productivity. I believe that building an office gym is preferable than having a childcare center. Firstly, the company in general is consists of unmarried employees. Most of them do not have children thus the facility will not be utilized well. In addition, our employees do sedentary work that require physical exercise to avoid further health issues. We have seen that some employees are taking medical leave due to issues with back ache and shoulder pain. We would like to remedy this situation by given them free access to a fully equipped gym. A 30-minute exercise is enough to get them fit and healthy. Having a childcare center on the other hand would bring a lot of disagreements related to noise due to the playground and classroom setup. Children create disturbing sounds that could interrupt work. It can also cause distractions on the parents themselves. Parents might tend to leave their desk to attend their children. Childcare are still best to be placed away from work or away from a place that require full concentration. I am certain that having a gym would give more benefits to the employees’ productivity. I also believe that the employees would appreciate having the facility since it is free-of-charge.
It's a great lecture, but the email example makes me nervous. I haven't been to an expensive restaurant and I can't imagine what food or service could make me mad. If I meet these types of questions, I need to spend more time on imagination than actual writing. I know this test is all about writing skills, I don't need to worry about content. However, I still will be struggling with which tone should I use when meeting this question. Should it be a very formal tone or more on an offensive tone?
Hi Thanks for great explanation. I have purchased 7 bundle practice tests. Are those tests at the same difficulty level of actual test or harder than that?
Hi Ughur. All CELPIP tests follow the same structure and format. The practice tests are designed to reflect the same level of complexity that you will encounter on the real test.
Ughur Gasimov: I am planning to appear for the Celpip exam in comming days. Can you please share your account credentials? I can give 7 bundle practice test as well. Thank you!
Hi ! Thanks for very useful lesson. However, I wonder that there is a spellcheck function on the exam for writing section ? Because I saw on the slides that stated : “spellcheck words in red”
Hi Vincent. Yes, the CELPIP Test has a spell-check feature that recognizes incorrect spellings and provides a drop-down menu of suggestions for you to choose from. Please note, it does not correct the spelling for you!
Please tell me how to improve writing because i am create the story every task but my i can not elaborate / prescribe properly. kindly give any tips regarding writing ..........
Hi Ajay, please find episodes below that focus on the Writing Section: th-cam.com/video/aCqtp0V_SlI/w-d-xo.html th-cam.com/video/xjzOU1KvvCI/w-d-xo.html
Hello Fanshowe! Thanks for commenting. Task 2 asks you to give your opinion in a survey. You don't need to include a greeting at all. You can simply start by stating your opinion (from the two choices given on the test) and explaining why you feel that way. Here's one example from a writer being asked to decide how the city should use the green space in the middle of town. He starts the response by saying, "I believe the green space should be turned into a recreational park because it would support the citizen's physical and mental health." (The rest of the writing would give examples of how the physical and mental health would be supported). Task 1 asks you to write an email, so a greeting is necessary. I hope this helps!
@@CELPIPOfficial thanks, it was just one of the task in the video that was rated level 10. Perhaps, it was task 2 response with greetings. That's just shook my head. Really appreciate you for your response and work you are doing, it is extremely helpful to a lot of people, not just for immigration purposes but also to learn english in general.
Hello Abhay! Thank you for your question. The spell check identifies spelling errors and provides alternate suggestions to choose from. The test taker will have to choose the right spelling themselves.
I don't think Celpip tests actually rate fancy/big words. Celpip mainly tests you on you Canadian workplace english standards and using such words, although admirable is a bit odd.
if you really help to aim high in celpip, give us all practice and more more sample writing answers because too much short time to finish the test how about me i am not really good in english just trying hard but the examiners are damn brutally no chance to give high score.
Yes, I did purchase the 7 practice tests, but I don't know where to see the sample answers. They don't show up automatically like the answers to reading and listening.
Hi Daniel, when you start each component of the practice test, you should find an "Answer Key" button on the bottom left corner of each page. Similarly, you should find a button on the left of your Writing responses that says "Click here to view sample responses".
Hi Gagan. Brandi, our CELPIP Test expert has answered this question in our CELPIP LIVE videos about the Writing section. Please visit our CELPIP LIVE playlist. Here's an episode where we answer a few FAQs. th-cam.com/video/lOFiXQqLImw/w-d-xo.html
I'm sure you think that's the case. I have seen test takers write decent English but their delivery is awkward and often the jist of the sentence is lost behind fancy words. Tell em to stick to the point and they'll do fine.
A very good morning. My name is Johnny, from Dubai and am planning to take General celpip. Please how can I join this sessions live? Please kindly do let me know the days of the week you meet and the time. Thank you
Hello Jagdeep, this link may give you a better understanding of scores. You will find sample answers for each level. www.celpip.ca/prepare-for-celpip/score-comparison-chart/
I took the CELPIP-G exam two weeks ago and scored 11 in writing thanks to this video and the free CELPIP Writing Pro: Target 9+ Study Pack.
Got a level 9 in writing. Got my celpip results yesterday. Thanks a lot for your guidance
Can you share materials?
I'm writing my test tomorrow and I badly need a 9. I'm terrified.
Sivanesan T CELPIP official website ha all data. I also bought test preparation materials from their website. They are very useful
Watching Close Make sure you to give explanation to each of your ideas. Explain as much you can and you’ll do well. All the best
Can anyone share writing material of celpip with me please.
Thank you for this video! I got ny CELPIP Scores today and got Level 10 for Writing.
Great! How about other sections?
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Hi Ling, congrats could you pls please help with Writing template if you've any..am planning to right shortly
Dear miss Amanda, I am Kingsley, a grade 8 teacher at college view schools located at 228 ave , kitchener.
Most of my students have read your new book and found it extremely interesting, infact, when I asked the children to mention their favorite authors last Tuesday, 90 percent of the class mentioned your name. They find your books funny and suspense filled.
Since you are a role model to most kids in my class, this letter is to invite you for a one day career grooming session here at College View on 27th of next month. I would love for you to talk to my students about your book and the inspirations that led to the beautiful piece of art. If your time permits on that day, I and the kids will be delighted if you can be part of a short role-play based on chapter 7 of your most recent book.
Thank you for being such a motivation and a good role model for the kids, I am hoping to read your response soon.
yours Faithfully,
Kingsley Obilo.
Dear James Hawthorn
Trust this meets you well.
Prize Mates Academy is a public school founded in 1998 for Kindgergaten and Grade one to Grade 9 students. I am a teacher for the Grade 2 students and we proud ourselves as one of the formost schools in promoting sustainability in the residential neighbourhoods. My Grade 2 class have recently carried our a project on cleaning up the community park and creating an awareness on the need of proper disposing of refuse into the recycle or organic bins made available in the parl. I believe that these values align with your recent article on Sustainability in the neighbourhood.
the instructor lady has a god like education background wow.
Great Lecture! Amazing, Thank you and say hi to your lovely Cats
We're glad you're enjoying our sessions!
I highly appreciate the Human Resource’s proposal to convert the first floor to a useful place that would help increase employee’s productivity. I believe that building an office gym is preferable than having a childcare center.
Firstly, the company in general is consists of unmarried employees. Most of them do not have children thus the facility will not be utilized well. In addition, our employees do sedentary work that require physical exercise to avoid further health issues. We have seen that some employees are taking medical leave due to issues with back ache and shoulder pain. We would like to remedy this situation by given them free access to a fully equipped gym. A 30-minute exercise is enough to get them fit and healthy.
Having a childcare center on the other hand would bring a lot of disagreements related to noise due to the playground and classroom setup. Children create disturbing sounds that could interrupt work. It can also cause distractions on the parents themselves. Parents might tend to leave their desk to attend their children. Childcare are still best to be placed away from work or away from a place that require full concentration.
I am certain that having a gym would give more benefits to the employees’ productivity. I also believe that the employees would appreciate having the facility since it is free-of-charge.
It's a great lecture, but the email example makes me nervous. I haven't been to an expensive restaurant and I can't imagine what food or service could make me mad. If I meet these types of questions, I need to spend more time on imagination than actual writing. I know this test is all about writing skills, I don't need to worry about content. However, I still will be struggling with which tone should I use when meeting this question. Should it be a very formal tone or more on an offensive tone?
Hello! Your questions may have been answered in this video - th-cam.com/video/WQ5Fd7_TODY/w-d-xo.html
I take the test in 10 days. What kind of pen should I bring to the center, or no need a pen?
Hi Thanks for great explanation. I have purchased 7 bundle practice tests. Are those tests at the same difficulty level of actual test or harder than that?
Hi Ughur. All CELPIP tests follow the same structure and format. The practice tests are designed to reflect the same level of complexity that you will encounter on the real test.
Ughur Gasimov: I am planning to appear for the Celpip exam in comming days. Can you please share your account credentials? I can give 7 bundle practice test as well. Thank you!
This is really helpful. Thanks
Thanks for such a good guidance and information
Hi, I would like to ask a question about the second task. Do we need a formal introduction for paragraph 1? or we can directly indicate option A /B ?
Hi Meaghan, your voice is so sweet and polite.
is it okay to use contractions? in formal emails.
Hi ! Thanks for very useful lesson. However, I wonder that there is a spellcheck function on the exam for writing section ? Because I saw on the slides that stated : “spellcheck words in red”
Hi Vincent. Yes, the CELPIP Test has a spell-check feature that recognizes incorrect spellings and provides a drop-down menu of suggestions for you to choose from. Please note, it does not correct the spelling for you!
If i get 11in the first writing and 9in the second, what will be my total score in writing?
Unfortunately, the study pack is not available
Please tell me how to improve writing because i am create the story every task but my i can not elaborate / prescribe properly.
kindly give any tips regarding writing ..........
Hi Ajay, please find episodes below that focus on the Writing Section: th-cam.com/video/aCqtp0V_SlI/w-d-xo.html
th-cam.com/video/xjzOU1KvvCI/w-d-xo.html
it is task 2, why there is a need for greetings. how is it different from task 1 then.
Hello Fanshowe! Thanks for commenting. Task 2 asks you to give your opinion in a survey. You don't need to include a greeting at all. You can simply start by stating your opinion (from the two choices given on the test) and explaining why you feel that way. Here's one example from a writer being asked to decide how the city should use the green space in the middle of town. He starts the response by saying, "I believe the green space should be turned into a recreational park because it would support the citizen's physical and mental health." (The rest of the writing would give examples of how the physical and mental health would be supported). Task 1 asks you to write an email, so a greeting is necessary. I hope this helps!
@@CELPIPOfficial thanks, it was just one of the task in the video that was rated level 10. Perhaps, it was task 2 response with greetings. That's just shook my head. Really appreciate you for your response and work you are doing, it is extremely helpful to a lot of people, not just for immigration purposes but also to learn english in general.
Will the spell check also correct big words like bourgeoisie, pterodactyl, etc.?
Hello Abhay! Thank you for your question. The spell check identifies spelling errors and provides alternate suggestions to choose from. The test taker will have to choose the right spelling themselves.
I don't think Celpip tests actually rate fancy/big words. Celpip mainly tests you on you Canadian workplace english standards and using such words, although admirable is a bit odd.
Do you have task 1 and task 2 responses for different topics ?If so can you please share us
Hi Siddhartha Reddy. You can find sample responses on our website :
www.celpip.ca/prepare-for-celpip/score-comparison-chart/
where can i find the study pack ?thanks
if you really help to aim high in celpip, give us all practice and more more sample writing answers because too much short time to finish the test how about me i am not really good in english just trying hard but the examiners are damn brutally no chance to give high score.
I didn't know where I can see the chat.
Hi, I would like to join Celpip classes, please let me know how to do so.
No sound from 51:22???
Yes, I did purchase the 7 practice tests, but I don't know where to see the sample answers. They don't show up automatically like the answers to reading and listening.
Hi Daniel, when you start each component of the practice test, you should find an "Answer Key" button on the bottom left corner of each page. Similarly, you should find a button on the left of your Writing responses that says "Click here to view sample responses".
I would like to received that email how can I get it?
Thank you. Very helpful.
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Do we have to strictly adhere to word limits in writing sections?
Hi Gagan. Brandi, our CELPIP Test expert has answered this question in our CELPIP LIVE videos about the Writing section. Please visit our CELPIP LIVE playlist. Here's an episode where we answer a few FAQs.
th-cam.com/video/lOFiXQqLImw/w-d-xo.html
Thanks
1hr:20min - 1hr:30min
Wonder why task 2 is 1 minute shorter than task 1😂
the novelist is a women as mentioned in the question but the invite is sent to Male.
i have the pleasure to present to you St. dominic school for with i am english techer for grade5.
Is there a link to performance standards and Level descriptors?
Kindly follow this link which can be found through the CELPIP website: www.celpip.ca/take-celpip/test-results-scoring/
I thought that task 2 is logical argument, not email or letter.
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I had students who could write way better than your sample answers but still they got only 6 in writing
For further information about test scoring, kindly refer to this link: www.celpip.ca/take-celpip/test-results-scoring/
I'm sure you think that's the case. I have seen test takers write decent English but their delivery is awkward and often the jist of the sentence is lost behind fancy words. Tell em to stick to the point and they'll do fine.
@@zeeshanmuhammed8883 I know my students.. I have never seen them use fancy words
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A very good morning.
My name is Johnny, from Dubai and am planning to take General celpip.
Please how can I join this sessions live?
Please kindly do let me know the days of the week you meet and the time.
Thank you
Hi Johnny, please visit this link to register for webinars live. The times and dates are listed on the left. www.celpip.ca/celpip-writing-pro/
@@CELPIPOfficial Thank you
Gods blessings
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the choppy audio is annoying
I like your accent
My exams is tomorrow
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This video is not relevant to guess ur score at present.
Hello Jagdeep, this link may give you a better understanding of scores. You will find sample answers for each level.
www.celpip.ca/prepare-for-celpip/score-comparison-chart/
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