CELPIP LIVE! - CELPIP Writing Practice: Writing an Email (Task 1) - S2 E14

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  • @PrietoLilia
    @PrietoLilia ปีที่แล้ว +18

    I want to express my deepest gratitude to the CELPIP Test channel for sharing this fantastic video. A massive round of applause goes out to Brandi; she truly is an exceptional teacher. I followed her recommendations for both Writing Task 1 and Task 2, and the outcome was absolutely incredible-I scored a perfect 12 on my CELPIP test. It's worth mentioning that I came to realize there are multiple approaches one can take when tackling these tasks. However, I decided to wholeheartedly follow Brandi's advice, and it delivered outstanding results! I must say, her explanations were incredibly insightful and, without a doubt, the best ones out there. Brandi, you are simply the best!

  • @peggyorji1563
    @peggyorji1563 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

    Hiya!! I used your TH-cam materials to prep for my CELPIP exams and I did so well! Listening-12, writing-12, Reading-11, Speaking- 11. Though I’ve been a native speaker but I do know it can still be a struggle to do well on the test just due to nervousness and other factors. I must say this page helped a ton!

    • @Theobesdiary
      @Theobesdiary 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

      😅😊❤❤1❤❤

  • @LovinglivingS
    @LovinglivingS 2 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    No other examination agency provides that much in depth, much required teaching . This shows that you guys give priority to care for the test taker’s struggles unlike other agencies who just want everyone to figure it out by themselves

  • @upekshakalpanirathnavibush6286
    @upekshakalpanirathnavibush6286 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Hi Brandi, I watched your videos last few weeks and I got 8 for writing, listening and speaking and 7 for reading. Thank you so much for your amazing tips. It helped me a lot.

    • @samirvahora4034
      @samirvahora4034 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Can you give me a contact number?

  • @nicholaskav5200
    @nicholaskav5200 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I found your explanations highly useful and practical. with no doubt what you did in 53 minutes made complex writing tasks more applicable and easier to understand. I appreciate your practical points and hints which boosted my confidence in applying them in writing task 1. Thank you for your consistent support.".

  • @_afeef
    @_afeef 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Full email at 29:04 , if it helps

  • @mohammedsadat7852
    @mohammedsadat7852 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Hi Brandi, Thanks for these writing tips, I scored 10 in my Writing exam following your guidelines. Thanks so much guys, great work.

    • @samirvahora4034
      @samirvahora4034 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Can you give me your contact number ?

    • @sidonculous
      @sidonculous 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      No

    • @farooqalikhan83
      @farooqalikhan83 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Sadat, Congrats your great score in Writing, have you used any templates or fancy words for a high score.. Please advise

    • @mohammedsadat7852
      @mohammedsadat7852 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@farooqalikhan83 thanks.. I followed Shayans celpip writing videos

  • @theofficialquadri1747
    @theofficialquadri1747 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great effort guys both of you are awesome !

  • @felixjoyce
    @felixjoyce 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    It was an excellent presentation. I enjoyed the question-and-answer part because it provided me some great relief and a boost to my preparation.

  • @EdithOgugua-v6t
    @EdithOgugua-v6t ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi appreciate you guys for the effort to update us on the text, we like to request for recent materials in 2023.

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  ปีที่แล้ว

      Hello Edith! You can find new practice tests on our website at celpip.ca. If you’re referring to new episodes, please go through our playlist or stay tuned for our next one happening on the 30th!

  • @juwonlosiyanbade6320
    @juwonlosiyanbade6320 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you so much. Your videos helped me get an outstanding result on my exam.

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your outstanding result!

  • @aishaqazi9062
    @aishaqazi9062 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I'm from India (bilingual with my first language as English) and to me an 'entree' has always been a starter or an appetizer . I was so surprised when I heard that line so I went to check it up... Apparently in Canada and the USA , unlike the rest of the world, an entree means the main course. This was good to know!

    • @webstertraille
      @webstertraille 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      As someone whose main and only spoken language is English also being a chef, not from Canada or USA. An entree', always mean main course.

    • @aishaqazi9062
      @aishaqazi9062 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@webstertraille I googled it again to make sure...EVERYWHERE it says that it is the dish before the main course, including in the dictionary. Anyway , this was not supposed to start an unnecessary argument especially not this way... I'm not going to engage after this. Good day.

  • @CharanTt-x8t
    @CharanTt-x8t 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you Aswita & Brandi. this is very much useful session for test takers.

  • @daxpatel8680
    @daxpatel8680 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love your work...thanks for such a wonderful way of teaching

  • @meismer
    @meismer 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much celpip test this is a big help for my upcoming celpip test

  • @akbaria
    @akbaria 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much folks, I got thru my celpip by going through your videos. Excellent help

  • @InhouseDR
    @InhouseDR ปีที่แล้ว

    I really appreciate this webinar. It was very very helpful. Thanks once again.

  • @moyeajinomisanghan8160
    @moyeajinomisanghan8160 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is very lovely but it has also taught me that the exam is more about one's analytical thinking than the actual test of the english language. It's actually a very interesting exam and i look forward to writing. It's like playing a video game

  • @santoshpawar2270
    @santoshpawar2270 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I'm very thankful Brandi for your previous guidance of 4 modules, and thankful to Ashwathi too.

  • @chynweobinnauche
    @chynweobinnauche 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks so much for simplifying the email writing task.

  • @omeliocastillo8702
    @omeliocastillo8702 ปีที่แล้ว

    I really appreciate all the effort you guys are doing to bring us such good sessions of English training. Thanks for all. Brandi is the best.

  • @arneliboytvvlog6271
    @arneliboytvvlog6271 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much Mam it's very interesting and very helpful to us this video's tips for new students to study English proficiency like me,,god bless

  • @ariuntuulgaridkhuu8431
    @ariuntuulgaridkhuu8431 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you very much!
    It was really helpful!

  • @fjc5357
    @fjc5357 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi, the lesson is very insightful

  • @josephatmabera1622
    @josephatmabera1622 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Dear ,Brendi,i think you are focusing on technicality to answer questions appropriatetly and overcome hard struggle by the applicant, your materialistic courage is more of sense

  • @kolaolugbenro9726
    @kolaolugbenro9726 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Beautiful delivery

  • @larrybergquist4259
    @larrybergquist4259 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    On the test in writing, I says to write it in your own words, it is not based on the 4 section standard form of complaint and resolution, of dining in a restaurant, and penalized for it.

  • @earth3190
    @earth3190 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much Brandi! You're amazing.

  • @merinaxavier4617
    @merinaxavier4617 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please share the complete format of all the test. Details about all the task in reading, writing, listing and speaking.

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Merina. You can find all those details and more on our website! Please do check it out- www.celpip.ca

  • @janvilunagariya1612
    @janvilunagariya1612 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I really liked the way she explained

  • @sarabjeetsingh1412
    @sarabjeetsingh1412 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks for the video, it’s really knowledgable 👍🏻.

  • @khadijatIyanda-d9s
    @khadijatIyanda-d9s หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great job, Brandi

  • @MacDev90
    @MacDev90 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for this video!

  • @chin0401
    @chin0401 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow! That’s wonderful! I never think about these writing tips. Thank you!

  • @sabaaamir7870
    @sabaaamir7870 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very helpful, it will be great, if you leave some writing prompts for practise purposes. Thanks

  • @rahulpatel-dh5ko
    @rahulpatel-dh5ko 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It's a really helpful and informative video. Thanks.

  • @anuvarghese8771
    @anuvarghese8771 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Great job Brandi...

  • @deepakjpaikada
    @deepakjpaikada 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    yukon also have one
    Carcross Desert, located outside Carcross, Yukon, Canada, is often considered the smallest desert in the world.

  • @muhanedmusa
    @muhanedmusa 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Dear Brandy and Aswathy thanks for your efforts and like too much what you're doing. I always listen to you when I have time out of work. Aswathy how are you, you a little bit talking fast (sorry for inconvenience)

  • @drtoca4034
    @drtoca4034 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great video! Thanks for the tips 🙏🏻

  • @lokeshkumar5619
    @lokeshkumar5619 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    wow I love this, thank you very much ! what interesting to me apart from learning letter writing is Celpip has spell check that is amazing because I'm good at doing spelling mistakes lol, this will defenitely an advantage to many people like me.

  • @jasonliang8091
    @jasonliang8091 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Awesome clips, it really helps

  • @bjoygolingay868
    @bjoygolingay868 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello I love all your video thanks so much.

  • @larrybergquist4259
    @larrybergquist4259 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Keremeos in BC and Athabaska alberta deserts, and one small in Yukon

  • @marcialynignacio7950
    @marcialynignacio7950 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    it is a great presentation. More.

  • @punchboss4561
    @punchboss4561 ปีที่แล้ว

    Really helpful. Thanks

  • @firasabuhamdan7920
    @firasabuhamdan7920 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great one!

  • @pannadarao5583
    @pannadarao5583 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This channel is very informative 👌

  • @ginosuarez6674
    @ginosuarez6674 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great content, thanks!

  • @theparasmalhotra
    @theparasmalhotra 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    The desert is in Osoyoos, BC.

  • @Desigangmusic-01
    @Desigangmusic-01 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thats really very helpfull.

  • @josephatmabera1622
    @josephatmabera1622 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    my question is on the format and level of the questions ,they should be differentiated on academic status

  • @kudamapfumo9316
    @kudamapfumo9316 ปีที่แล้ว

    This was helpful

  • @mansichandarana2717
    @mansichandarana2717 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Do we have to start with greeting likewise "Greeting of the day",? What greeting we should use in case of complain email?

  • @barasaflorence345
    @barasaflorence345 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Brandi thank you for good service I watched your video it's amazing it's really helpful I'm interested

  • @saebpanahifar3621
    @saebpanahifar3621 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much for sharing the tips. It was useful. I am studying for the CELPIP test. I hope to get the score that I expect.

  • @alishaferriera9980
    @alishaferriera9980 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please make more videos on the Writing part. They are very helpful.

  • @mariviesagusip8409
    @mariviesagusip8409 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very helpful to me🥰🙏

  • @mirfaisal2534
    @mirfaisal2534 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have written my version of email. Can you evaluate? Appreciate it.

    • @LifeOdysseyMotivation
      @LifeOdysseyMotivation 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I would love to see and evaluate your work. Can I see it?

  • @mariviesagusip8409
    @mariviesagusip8409 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you for this clear video, i hope i can pass my exam this Thursday 27 of January 22.

  • @brianbohrson
    @brianbohrson 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I would be very interested in seeing this type of video for Writing Task 2.

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Hi Brian! You can find the video here: th-cam.com/video/Ee7FMYAVaes/w-d-xo.html

    • @brianbohrson
      @brianbohrson 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@CELPIPOfficial Thanks! It was great

  • @Shamil0821
    @Shamil0821 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    its very helpful..i want to watch "celpip live" both season videos

  • @yousufbaig821
    @yousufbaig821 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    PERFECT !!

  • @vikasmehrotra8304
    @vikasmehrotra8304 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    While changing para in the original exam do I need to enter twice or just once for para change?

  • @indirajetta5982
    @indirajetta5982 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    It was great

  • @thiago1983brandao
    @thiago1983brandao 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Very helpful

  • @sheryagrover4707
    @sheryagrover4707 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Dear Brandi, Can you please suggest a few closing statements for an informal email?

  • @darpansharma3543
    @darpansharma3543 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi there, do let us know if there are any ways where we can recheck our Email writings that whether they are good or we need to work on some areas, as this will be helpful for the test takers who practice celpip individually at home

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Darpan! Please visit the 'Score Comparison Chart' section on our website where we provide sample responses for Writing & Speaking. Test-takers can choose the CELPIP Level they wish to study for and rotate through the score descriptor, sample question and response at that level, and an analysis of why that mark was given. This page should give you all the necessary information you need to be able to assess your writing at home. www.celpip.ca/prepare-for-celpip/score-comparison-chart/

  • @devinenisaketh
    @devinenisaketh 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Very helpful.

  • @mohammadkhavandgar4521
    @mohammadkhavandgar4521 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi there,
    Please check the final draft. I think something wrong.

  • @amitchopra2757
    @amitchopra2757 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Really good

  • @LatifaLatifahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    @LatifaLatifahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Brandi is great ❤️

  • @hussainbaig11
    @hussainbaig11 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very informative videos, but I have a request to say, please change the examples. I have bought your courses and test and most of the time I encounter the same examples. Thank you.

  • @jenniferanazor-ugwu
    @jenniferanazor-ugwu 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I didn't see an introductory paragraph stating the reason for the email. Why's that?

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      The purpose statement for this email is in the final sentence of the introductory paragraph (providing details of the visit and requesting a resolution for the disappointing food and service). Note that the purpose for writing in Writing Task 1 will be clearly identified in the test instructions.

  • @ricardopaetjr.6574
    @ricardopaetjr.6574 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    What if I exceeded 200words?

  • @jackymwaiseghe1185
    @jackymwaiseghe1185 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    was great

  • @pravezbuyer9516
    @pravezbuyer9516 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Brandi,
    How much score can be given to your this sample response? This query will surely give the idea of marking standard.

  • @aliceotiende580
    @aliceotiende580 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello am Alice from Kenya am suppose to do my celplp test on 15th and i don't know where to get that test in Kenya

  • @hassanyagoub4772
    @hassanyagoub4772 ปีที่แล้ว

    How are study materials obtained?

  • @indexrule2k
    @indexrule2k 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    can i finish the task 1 early to work more on task 2?

  • @khushdeepkaur7847
    @khushdeepkaur7847 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much

  • @archanavivaan
    @archanavivaan 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Where can I see previous test papers of CELPIP??

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Vivaan. While we cannot share test papers, our practice tests reflect the complexity and type of questions we ask during the CELPIP Test. www.celpip.ca/prepare-for-celpip/study-materials/study-materials-celpip-g/

  • @AnujKumar-ft4ps
    @AnujKumar-ft4ps 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Brandi , what level of score do we expect from this sample email ?

  • @manjiriramekar9991
    @manjiriramekar9991 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    thanks Brandi..

  • @Aartisharma-cp1gd
    @Aartisharma-cp1gd 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    How many paragraphs is necessary for writing task for email.,? Can you please let me know.

  • @rennypinto3689
    @rennypinto3689 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    What has the Salutation in start of Email has to be?

  • @gusmariplul
    @gusmariplul หลายเดือนก่อน

    on 0:29 she pronounces desert as " dessert".
    Anyway, great video. Thanks for all the tips and information.

  • @isaactoyin118
    @isaactoyin118 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi, I am not sure; your letter said "Yesterday evening" is not supposed to be "yesterday's evening"?

  • @kundanchaurasia
    @kundanchaurasia 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    How we can ask the Question during the session as i am not able to find such options.

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hello Kundan. These episodes were live-streamed on TH-cam at 9:30 am PST every other Tuesday. If you join us live, you are able to ask us questions through the live chat feature. We will be resuming CELPIP Live Season 3 soon, do join us live then!

  • @akpotuisabella2128
    @akpotuisabella2128 หลายเดือนก่อน

    hello, will pen and paper be provided during the exam to take note

  • @chantallmarietychingcoluzo3038
    @chantallmarietychingcoluzo3038 ปีที่แล้ว

    I wonder if I ca use words like "umami" or "al dente" for food

  • @foreigndreamsimmigration4727
    @foreigndreamsimmigration4727 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Which software was used to make this presentation video ?

  • @LifeOdysseyMotivation
    @LifeOdysseyMotivation 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    *At **29:17**, Final Draft. Proofread. The very first sentence of the first paragraph has a huge mistake. Is that intentional or you just forgot to edit? Or you just want us really to proofread the email?*

  • @Nittin111
    @Nittin111 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi, ma'am, Can I get the different versions of answers to this task according to different CLB levels?

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Nittin! Absolutely! We already have that available for both the Speaking and Writing sections. You can find it on our website here: www.celpip.ca/prepare-for-celpip/score-comparison-chart/

  • @parveenkaur-w4i
    @parveenkaur-w4i 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    If due to less time, if someone did not complete finish conclusion. Is it count in marking.

    • @CELPIPOfficial
      @CELPIPOfficial  11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yes, if you are unable to finish your response in the given time, you may lose points.

  • @manikantamaddipati1090
    @manikantamaddipati1090 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks 🙏

  • @amritveerboparai2417
    @amritveerboparai2417 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello, Can we use phrases like icing on the cake, killing two birds with one stone while writing an email?

  • @LifeOdysseyMotivation
    @LifeOdysseyMotivation 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    In word count, the spaces are included?

  • @GaganSingh-cw4dg
    @GaganSingh-cw4dg 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can we use the question sentences in the email.

  • @farooqahmad8213
    @farooqahmad8213 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    IS there any book for the higher level words to get higher CLB level ?