Redesigning Your Logos! (Interesting results) 🔥 Ep7

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    In this week's episode of Redesigning Your Logos!, we're talking about redesigning your logos!
    If you're looking to revamp your branding, then this is the episode for you! We'll be discussing some interesting results from our recent logo redesign project and how you can apply some of these techniques to your own business.
    So don't wait any longer, watch this week's episode of Redesigning Your Logos! and see the exciting results for yourself!
    If there's anything you would like me to cover in a video, then let me know by commenting down below!
    🔗 Links
    Discord Link: / discord
    Will Paterson: linktr.ee/willpaterson
    Join the Reddit crew: / willpatersondesign
    Become a member: / @willpatersondesign
    If you would like me to design your logo and company branding, please check out my website for more information! www.willpaterson.design/
    🧡 Check out the original Logo Designs on the subreddit
    Scalpel Parrot logo by u/YellowDuckCreative: / scalpel_parrot_creatin...
    Burger Dawn logo by u/tantamtamtan: / burger_dawn_logo_design
    📋 Timestamps
    00:00 Intro
    00:10 u/YellowDuckCreative
    06:21 u/tantamtamtan
    12:31 Outro
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  • @nish3003
    @nish3003 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    for burger dawn you could also make the title itself the 'patty', with the top bun and bottom bun above and below the title respectively, that'll also make it look a bit more playful

  • @sheiryard8149
    @sheiryard8149 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    The burger dawn design almost reminds me more of an egg. Especially with the sunny theme which accentuates that even further

  • @miroslavtodorovic6067
    @miroslavtodorovic6067 ปีที่แล้ว +41

    Could've just image traced the first logo

    • @trialaccount2184
      @trialaccount2184 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Yeah that's what i was thinking the whole time.

    • @gillianthedesigner
      @gillianthedesigner ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Image trace adds a lot of unnecessary anchor points that he would have to clean up. For the sake of quick edits messing with the font is easier

    • @trialaccount2184
      @trialaccount2184 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@gillianthedesigner he said he wanted to make the eye round he could just deleted the eye and make it round.

    • @miroslavtodorovic6067
      @miroslavtodorovic6067 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@gillianthedesigner go over it with smooth tool and that's it for the sake of the vid

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  ปีที่แล้ว +8

      It takes longer than you think. lol

  • @zoeroswold4076
    @zoeroswold4076 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hey will! I just wanted to tell you that we used one of your illustrator tutorials in my college industrial design class. Although I’m not a graphic designer I like watching your vids and it was cool that my professor recommended it !

  • @anindabiswas8047
    @anindabiswas8047 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi Will, lots of love from Bangladesh ♥♥♥ I never miss your videos. Your design concept feels very simple but powerful.
    Thank you so much for your inspiring videos.

  • @tashisstoked
    @tashisstoked ปีที่แล้ว +15

    I feel like the burger dawn logo could have had more of a rectangular bottom bun (with rounded corners). Or lozenge shaped even. Also, I would have just traced the bird in the first one, a rushed trace to fix line width would have still been an improvement in my opinion 😊

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thanks for the feedback :)

    • @HardBud
      @HardBud ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Bro!
      How are you..?
      I hope you're good :)
      I just made a logo gig on fiverr, can you just visit and reply me what I can improve in my designs?
      your ideas will help me a lot!
      please reply..
      Thank you :)

  • @kidushabesha9580
    @kidushabesha9580 ปีที่แล้ว

    U're So good at this bro you redesigning 1 Logo me Learning lots of things thanks man

  • @willpatersondesign
    @willpatersondesign  ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Hope you enjoyed the video! To upload your AI files for redesign, go here: discord.gg/XeuRaqY7S6. 🚀

  • @OREO416
    @OREO416 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    That's neat. At first Will's redesign was starting to look like Walmart, but both are very unique, and I honestly shift towards the redesign. The original reminds me of a shell logo for maybe a corner store or a gas station. Either way, the idea is pretty cool.

  • @yellowduckcreative
    @yellowduckcreative ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thanks for reviewing my logo (scalpel parrot)😊one of the comments was correct, the scalpel is actually in the tail but I clearly need to make it more obvious. Great tips, I learnt a few things. Thanks Will

    • @yellowduckcreative
      @yellowduckcreative ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@DissonantSynth aww thanks mate, appreciate your encouragement

  • @SunKissedPeach
    @SunKissedPeach ปีที่แล้ว

    For color pallets the color cube is amazing as well

  • @starboard9551
    @starboard9551 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    In this case you should have added more ridges to the wavy line so that overall it looked straighter, less ridges accentuates the waves and in this case looks weird. Also flattening the burger a bit more would help sooth the translation a little better, but overall good arrangement.

  • @markurotv5169
    @markurotv5169 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    to edit the parrot icon further you can select the raster image and hit image trace on the top bar and choose either high quality or black and white, but make sure you have the original color saved so that you could recolor it with your eye dropper. onced image trace is done, hit expand in the top bar again making it into separate vector/shapes that you can edit. We do want the white background be deleted, so just select anywhere on the background with direct selection tool and hit delete. now for the eyes you can just remove and replace it with any shape you desire you can also select the other parts and edit it's corners to make it less edgy. if I can comment this in few words then maybe you can do it faster in AI.

  • @MittenMama2
    @MittenMama2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hey Will, I have been doing some logo design using the free version of sketchbook. Just recently I saw one of your videos on the free Vectornator. It is making a world of difference even though the learning curve has taken its toll on me. Finally found out that if I send as an SVG file, it actually holds its shape. Just trying to make it usable so I can send it out to make t-shirts or banners or whatever. Hell, lm not even sure it’s fully vectored😂. If you could help me out, maybe a good tutorial for Vectornator or just let me know if sending as an SVG file will work thanks

  • @premgct87
    @premgct87 ปีที่แล้ว

    Bottom bun can be a combination of a wave and a rounded rectangle or can be just a rounded rectangle.

  • @Visible.Friend
    @Visible.Friend ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Will, shhh, I'm pretty sure YT didn't notice
    you flippin' the bird in that Scalpel Parrot one
    hehe
    hUgz, Lee

  • @getoveritlive
    @getoveritlive ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Not an designer, but on the Burger Dawn one, I would have done a half burger with the rays like it's coming up from the horizon.

  • @NakeyNayNay
    @NakeyNayNay ปีที่แล้ว

    06:32 Not me saying "You mean burger-like" and then choking on my drink seeing BURG-U-LAR🤣

  • @vosiekip
    @vosiekip ปีที่แล้ว

    The burger dawn could be better on both sides, if you take your icon and put the typeface in the middle so it symbols the meat piece.
    And some more Time on the icon so the burger and wave line up better.

  • @jumahooyi
    @jumahooyi ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The parrot's tail was actually the scalpel blade tip (that makes surgical stub incisions) if you noticed. Great redesigns😃

    • @MyChemAndTwilight
      @MyChemAndTwilight ปีที่แล้ว

      I think the tail of the bird is also part of the A from the first font

    • @HardBud
      @HardBud ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Bro!
      How are you..?
      I hope you're good :)
      I just made a logo gig on fiverr, can you just visit and reply me what I can improve in my designs?
      your ideas will help me a lot!
      please reply..
      Thank you :)

  • @SteelCityProductions
    @SteelCityProductions ปีที่แล้ว

    If you were to see what I look like you'd trip out (lol) when I say. "I look up to u bro" always watching n learning from u🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

  • @monem6274
    @monem6274 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    The old setup 😍

  • @abdullahnaseem2285
    @abdullahnaseem2285 ปีที่แล้ว

    what is the font used in burger dawn?

  • @LindaLooUK
    @LindaLooUK ปีที่แล้ว +5

    The Burger Dawn logo represents a large water wheel in a river but what that has to do with burgers Heaven knows! 😄

    • @bjulin
      @bjulin ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yup, that's the first thing, I saw, too...

    • @HardBud
      @HardBud ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Bro!
      How are you..?
      I hope you're good :)
      I just made a logo gig on fiverr, can you just visit and reply me what I can improve in my designs?
      your ideas will help me a lot!
      please reply..
      Thank you :)

  • @ryandailey4470
    @ryandailey4470 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Great video Will. Flipping birds and flipping burgers. 😂 Anyway love these vids.

  • @ChaossX77
    @ChaossX77 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I just don't get the waves in the halves of the buns.

  • @ShockwaveWoodworks
    @ShockwaveWoodworks ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Do you have any behind-the-scenes photos of your TH-cam studio setup?
    I am interested in setting up a similar look for my woodworking YT channel and I really like what you have here (in addition to the content)!
    Thanks!
    Nathan

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I did a desk set-up video earlier this year, that might help? Currently I've got two 'sets' for filming at the studio and swap between them :)

    • @ShockwaveWoodworks
      @ShockwaveWoodworks ปีที่แล้ว

      @@willpatersondesign I'll check out that video! I'm curious about your lighting setup, specifically.

  • @keed4982
    @keed4982 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You could have used image trace as a black & white logo, then if there were too many anchor point u could right click and press simplify

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Tried that, looked awful so cut it and decided to use just the normal image.

    • @HardBud
      @HardBud ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Bro!
      How are you..?
      I hope you're good :)
      I just made a logo gig on fiverr, can you just visit and reply me what I can improve in my designs?
      your ideas will help me a lot!
      please reply..
      Thank you :)

  • @mollikfathemaakthershamima7876
    @mollikfathemaakthershamima7876 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow thinking

  • @Cyanide157
    @Cyanide157 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    *Scalpel.
    Also it would've aligned with the text if you placed the parrot on the left of the text rather than right.
    I love the redesign videos more than only critique videos. Keep them coming ✌️

  • @sieen7943
    @sieen7943 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    For the "burger dawn" I would have tried to use sesame seeds to recreate the sun's rays

  • @Sadman_sakib
    @Sadman_sakib ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Loved this. But I don't know why I am confuse in choosing between the two burger logos

    • @obyybo
      @obyybo ปีที่แล้ว

      the answer is quite simple...both suck

  • @adnanahmed5066
    @adnanahmed5066 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    to the three of you that are wondering about the font in burger dawn its comforta

    • @HardBud
      @HardBud ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Bro!
      How are you..?
      I hope you're good :)
      I just made a logo gig on fiverr, can you just visit and reply me what I can improve in my designs?
      your ideas will help me a lot!
      please reply..
      Thank you :)

  • @ChaossX77
    @ChaossX77 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    8:21 looks like the sun is rising. Fits well with the dawn in the name. Well now it looks like a broken egg.

  • @TheMasoom666
    @TheMasoom666 ปีที่แล้ว

    I think the half of the burger would work better, as the dawn at a sea and burger has a flat down bun.

  • @davidarreguin6339
    @davidarreguin6339 ปีที่แล้ว

    Came from my tv app to phone so I can check the description for discord link. Where is it at lol

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      It's in the description and pinned comment :) also here: discord.gg/XeuRaqY7S6

    • @davidarreguin6339
      @davidarreguin6339 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@willpatersondesign thank you. I found it. New update on app confused me on the description. I didn't expand it all the way. Thank you

  • @Brar2005
    @Brar2005 ปีที่แล้ว

    The first logo of burger was meaningful. It has the meaningful symbol of dawn and burger. Your's was like the rise of burger. beside it is a litttttle bit over designed.

  • @tantam.tamtan
    @tantam.tamtan ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Hi Will, I don't like your redesigned version, because I like the idea of half burger more. I designed this logo after that post and will upload it to Discord. Thanks for sharing your feedback!

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  ปีที่แล้ว

      Look forward to seeing it!

    • @HardBud
      @HardBud ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Bro!
      How are you..?
      I hope you're good :)
      I just made a logo gig on fiverr, can you just visit and reply me what I can improve in my designs?
      your ideas will help me a lot!
      please reply..
      Thank you :)

  • @nicolasta9387
    @nicolasta9387 ปีที่แล้ว

    How do u get your logo selected for redesign ?

  • @DawkinsPlays
    @DawkinsPlays ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I think if you had added sesame seeds and made the buns a little flatter, it would’ve looked better. I also would’ve had the rays just on the top bun not all the way around.

    • @trialaccount2184
      @trialaccount2184 ปีที่แล้ว

      Small details isn't pro in a logo

    • @nooster125
      @nooster125 ปีที่แล้ว

      what I would do is flatten the bottom bun to make it look like a burger it kinda looks like an egg now

  • @Karkies
    @Karkies ปีที่แล้ว +1

    SHEEESH

    • @HardBud
      @HardBud ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Bro!
      How are you..?
      I hope you're good :)
      I just made a logo gig on fiverr, can you just visit and reply me what I can improve in my designs?
      your ideas will help me a lot!
      please reply..
      Thank you :)

  • @MaDragon7
    @MaDragon7 ปีที่แล้ว

    It looks like a falcon or owl not a parrot. you nice work with the burger but it's more like sun than dawn

  • @user-jz3ol6qn3z
    @user-jz3ol6qn3z ปีที่แล้ว

    What really bothered me is that you rotated the company name at 2:39 and it stayed tilted till the end. Great work btw!

    • @HardBud
      @HardBud ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Bro!
      How are you..?
      I hope you're good :)
      I just made a logo gig on fiverr, can you just visit and reply me what I can improve in my designs?
      your ideas will help me a lot!
      please reply..
      Thank you :)

  • @AndereRickert
    @AndereRickert ปีที่แล้ว

    Bottom bun of the burger is flat lol, not round. Otherwise the burger would roll away.

  • @DesignWho
    @DesignWho ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Will

  • @elmerhuang4305
    @elmerhuang4305 ปีที่แล้ว

    Burger dawn, in the original, what i saw are burger, lettuce, tomato, and the sun. Your design looks balanced, but maybe not 'dawn' maybe that's why original made it halfway.;

    • @gillianthedesigner
      @gillianthedesigner ปีที่แล้ว

      I saw the sun part of the old one, but not the burger part. I don't mind the changes he did. If for some reason the half part need to stay, I would made the half shape a sesame bun instead to simplify.

    • @HardBud
      @HardBud ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Bro!
      How are you..?
      I hope you're good :)
      I just made a logo gig on fiverr, can you just visit and reply me what I can improve in my designs?
      your ideas will help me a lot!
      please reply..
      Thank you :)

  • @Dallallero
    @Dallallero ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Basically, this redesign consists of taking out the L 😆

  • @zimrimayfield
    @zimrimayfield ปีที่แล้ว +2

    DO you play guitar? I love you

  • @Dontbustthecrust
    @Dontbustthecrust ปีที่แล้ว

    burger buns are flat on the bottom.

  • @clarkcant
    @clarkcant ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I just want to say, both for you and your advertisers, that some of your users use Android phones and even *gasp* Chromebooks. Yes, that's right.
    So would you future advertisers who make useful design tools for other platforms, and would these advertisers please consider us as well?

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thanks for the feedback, we don't only choose advertisers who are marketed towards Apple, but as I don't use an Android phone or have a chromebook etc it's a bit difficult as I don't promote products and apps etc that I haven't used myself, I understand that can be frustrating though if they also don't cater to non-Apple users, but hopefully this gives a bit of an explanation :)

  • @kevynlevine
    @kevynlevine ปีที่แล้ว +1

    No hat.

  • @robinm1964
    @robinm1964 ปีที่แล้ว

    I agree with your assessment, but using the stereotypical burger in the logo is sooooo cliché. Makes everything look like BK

  • @turreu
    @turreu ปีที่แล้ว

    Did you intentionally misspell it as Scapel?

  • @LemonMusic-KR
    @LemonMusic-KR ปีที่แล้ว

    SCAPEL parrot...

  • @discoveryinanutshell
    @discoveryinanutshell 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Ayo will why do u always have spelling mistakes

  • @jayhawkrulz3375
    @jayhawkrulz3375 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Jesus loves you all and have a great day

  • @fatpanda1597
    @fatpanda1597 ปีที่แล้ว

    Just auto trace that owl omg....

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  ปีที่แล้ว

      I can't stand the extra nodes lol

    • @fatpanda1597
      @fatpanda1597 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@willpatersondesign Shape was quite basic, there would be not much or none extra nodes when done correctly.