I can see why my friend recommended you; it's nice to see a what if that actually treats Palpatine as in character, not simply laying there and letting Windu kill him, nor having everything crumble apart when the slightest part of his plan goes awry. The man has plans within plans within plans. Keep it up!
What a great story, well thought out and wonderfully told. You nailed the fact that Palpatine always has a contingency plan. Well done sir, well done done
This was by far the best fanfiction story for an alternate timeline, I have ever listened to. I do not say that lightly. This was well thought out, made a lot of sense and was incredibly enjoyable so much so I'm sad its not the canon events that took place. Please make a Part 2 or 3 of this story some time
One thing I'm waiting for in one of these what if's is Palpatine: "I'm the only one who can save your wife Padne!" Anakin: "How did you know i was married to Padme?" Palpatine: "Um, well you see... it just... I..." Anakin's Lightsaber ignites. Mace Windu: "You didn't think that one through did you?"
Dude you've got to turn this into a full series with multiple episodes because it's to dammed good not too. Your a talented writer and could/should do this for a living. Please have a good day and keep up the good work. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
A series idea: What if Plo Koon and Mace Windu survived/ escaped into hyperspace, their broken hyperdrives knocking them out into our solar system where they crash-land, maybe somewhere during the medieval times.
Flipside to this is Palpatine likely Ratting out Anakin and Padmes Marriage Right in Front of Mace Windu to Try to Get the Last Laugh and Bringing Back Flashes Of the Old Republic with a Sith As Chancellor Being Enough to make the Entire Jedi Order Take Up Arms
Honestly, Windu was stupid. He should have instructed Anakin to inform Yoda and others in case things go bad. Anakin would have something important to do instead of just sitting with his thoughts.
So Palpatine controlled both the Republic as chancellor and the Separatists through Dooku What if Dooku betrayed Palpatine and Palpatine was voted out of office, leaving Palpatine with nothing?
Anakin saw Palpatine use the lightning at least twice by then, shouldn't he have been ready for it? Also, wouldn't the Jedi just deflect all the clones blaster bolts? Over a thousand of them should be pretty sufficient to form a pretty huge defensive wall deflecting all the bolts pretty easily.
Hello my friend. Love the accent! As an old star wars fan and really obsessed with what ifs, you sir have done a good job with this one. Keep up the good work, and you will be as famous as star wars theory one dya
It is quite a nice accent. Have u ever thought of doing a full novel length story? I would definitely buy it on an audio book. Honestly Disney is missing out on getting creators like u on board.
@StarWarsQuill. I have a Question, What would have happened if Palpatine had been exposed as Darth Sidious like Months after the start of the Clones wars Say, 3 months in. All his connections to the CIS also exposed, perhaps a plot by Plagius as a moment of revenge?
What if Sidious abandoned the Sith after killing his master and worked with Dooku to bring about a less corrupt government for the galaxy? (So essentially what if Palpatine does as was promised by him to Dooku)
Very good video, but i noticed one small thing. In the subtitle/caption it got seize and cease confused often. Like it would be like "Palaptine Ceased the moment." Or "something something was unseizing"
I am requesting a part 2. Not to see the next part of Palpatine's plans, just for Mace Windu to question Anakin about what the Chancellor said regarding his wife.
Actually, a law was enacted during the Jedi Civil War which did make it illegal to be a Sith. That law was still being enforced in the time of Darth Bane, but it isn't clear if it had been repealed by the time of the Clone Wars. Most people in the Galaxy had forgotten the Sith even existed by then, so the law may have still been on the books without anyone realizing.
@@FeenickzVR The Jedi Civil War was the conflict Revan caused when he fell to the Dark Side. It is the war going on in the game Knights of the Old Republic.
Should drop a part 2 because what happens when the Jedis learn that Padme is having Anakin's children? Would they still accept him considering the vold he has done or will they still go according to their rules? Cause this would make Anakin go and he either turns evil anyways or he escapes with Padmé to Naboo. So what would happen if he turned evil? Or if he escapes with Padmé, will he grow stronger or will Palpatine find a way to either kill him or manipulate him
This story is really good but my one issue is that I feel like you can’t keep the story the same and have Anakin join Windu instead of Palpatine due to the whole timeline being Palpatine manipulating Anakin to joining him, giving him the visions and the talks that the dark side can help save the ones he loves from dying, I think although this story is extremely well made, I feel as though you’d need to change the rest of the story for it to make sense more than just Anakin hesitating because Qui Gon told him to stop
anakin still following the jedi way, has he forgotten that he's the chosen one, and that he is the only one who is supposed to physically "destroy" the sith, anakin has to kill palpatine, this is how you destroy the sith man, mentally, but physically, anakin must kill palpatine, deep down inside, anakin should kill palpatine.
I can see why my friend recommended you; it's nice to see a what if that actually treats Palpatine as in character, not simply laying there and letting Windu kill him, nor having everything crumble apart when the slightest part of his plan goes awry. The man has plans within plans within plans. Keep it up!
Glad you enjoyed it, man :)
What a great story, well thought out and wonderfully told. You nailed the fact that Palpatine always has a contingency plan. Well done sir, well done done
Glad you enjoyed it, man :)
This was by far the best fanfiction story for an alternate timeline, I have ever listened to. I do not say that lightly. This was well thought out, made a lot of sense and was incredibly enjoyable so much so I'm sad its not the canon events that took place.
Please make a Part 2 or 3 of this story some time
Glad you liked it, man :) Really means a lot to me :)
Agreed
Please make a continuation for this very well written
I agree.
One thing I'm waiting for in one of these what if's is
Palpatine: "I'm the only one who can save your wife Padne!"
Anakin: "How did you know i was married to Padme?"
Palpatine: "Um, well you see... it just... I..."
Anakin's Lightsaber ignites.
Mace Windu: "You didn't think that one through did you?"
I'm pretty sure Anakin wouldn't be too surprised by Palpatine knowing they're married. The real thing he shouldn't know would be Anakin's dreams
In the novel Palpatine implied he found out through the clergy on Naboo, which was his home planet and he had been a senator.
Dude you've got to turn this into a full series with multiple episodes because it's to dammed good not too. Your a talented writer and could/should do this for a living. Please have a good day and keep up the good work. Kind regards from Daniel Harman.
Thanks for the kind words, Daniel :) Means a lot to me :)
It's NOT Treason, then
Imagine Sheev saying It's outrageous, it's unfair
A series idea: What if Plo Koon and Mace Windu survived/ escaped into hyperspace, their broken hyperdrives knocking them out into our solar system where they crash-land, maybe somewhere during the medieval times.
Or Alternatively, Peridia. Imagine Ahsoka and Sabine saving Plo, Mace, and Ezra. Imagine Ezra getting to meet his great great Grandmaster.
What If Ahsoka and Barriss left the Order and joined Ventress during the time of The Clone Wars
What if I went to college??
Makes absolutely no sense. Next.
Flipside to this is Palpatine likely Ratting out Anakin and Padmes Marriage Right in Front of Mace Windu to Try to Get the Last Laugh and Bringing Back Flashes Of the Old Republic with a Sith As Chancellor Being Enough to make the Entire Jedi Order Take Up Arms
Honestly, Windu was stupid. He should have instructed Anakin to inform Yoda and others in case things go bad. Anakin would have something important to do instead of just sitting with his thoughts.
Well Anakin wouldn't have to Outright worry about Padme Hating Him In This Timeline Because he Chose to Join Windu
So Palpatine controlled both the Republic as chancellor and the Separatists through Dooku
What if Dooku betrayed Palpatine and Palpatine was voted out of office, leaving Palpatine with nothing?
Anakin saw Palpatine use the lightning at least twice by then, shouldn't he have been ready for it? Also, wouldn't the Jedi just deflect all the clones blaster bolts? Over a thousand of them should be pretty sufficient to form a pretty huge defensive wall deflecting all the bolts pretty easily.
This was vert entertaining. Disney should consider adapting what-ifs into short films, they'd do well.
They’d jump into the opportunity to make more money by yoinking other people’s scripts.
Great story mate a part 2 would be welcome.
The Jedi council really dropped the ball wayyyyy too many times.
From Dooku telling Kenobi about the senate, to them consistently pushing Anakin away.
Hello my friend. Love the accent! As an old star wars fan and really obsessed with what ifs, you sir have done a good job with this one. Keep up the good work, and you will be as famous as star wars theory one dya
Glad you liked it, man :) Means a lot :)
@@starwarsquill I remember a long time ago I watched a theory about Darth Vader and it said in his free time he got emotional and thought about Padme
@nealsmall9316 yea, I think I’ve seen that one too… a long while back
It is quite a nice accent. Have u ever thought of doing a full novel length story? I would definitely buy it on an audio book. Honestly Disney is missing out on getting creators like u on board.
That last part of my comment was mean for starwarsquill
@StarWarsQuill. I have a Question, What would have happened if Palpatine had been exposed as Darth Sidious like Months after the start of the Clones wars Say, 3 months in. All his connections to the CIS also exposed, perhaps a plot by Plagius as a moment of revenge?
Love your vids, keep it going
Glad you like them!
Do a part two
Here have another comment. You really deserve fir the algorithm to work in your favor. I kove these stories you write
This was great let’s see part 2
Palpatine saw a few debts in the shield with no cracks and declared 1 more hit and it will shatter
Instead his spear splinter
This should be a movie it makes sence everything u said.also like that anakin and mace didnt deafet palpatine as they do in all what ifs.
What if Sidious abandoned the Sith after killing his master and worked with Dooku to bring about a less corrupt government for the galaxy? (So essentially what if Palpatine does as was promised by him to Dooku)
What a great story. It would be nice if there was a What if side story on screen.
Need a part 2 for this
What if the Clones of the GAR were geneticly modified super soldiers? With superior senses, strenght, agility, endurance, durability and intelect
Is this, the worlds most crispy sith lord? Let's find out:
This is some great fanfiction.
Very good video, but i noticed one small thing. In the subtitle/caption it got seize and cease confused often. Like it would be like "Palaptine Ceased the moment." Or "something something was unseizing"
This should get a part 2
This would be awesome on the big screen
Part 2? haha im joking this was perfect!!
Haha
Nim in staying hydrated with a 18 of busch
NEED A PART 2!!!!!
I am requesting a part 2.
Not to see the next part of Palpatine's plans, just for Mace Windu to question Anakin about what the Chancellor said regarding his wife.
what if the bad batch fought the scar squadron?
Looks like Palps is no match for the combined might of the Charlotte Hornets.
I know i said it in a comment already but if somehow disney would allow you to write a full length whatif novel I would totally buy an audio book.
Those things require skill that I don’t have, man :) I might make a 3 hour video at some point tho…
@@starwarsquill you can for sure develop the talent or have a team help u. Also sorry for the late ass reply I was busy at the ranch all month
We need a part 2
THEY WILL LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER
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Needs a part 2
what if palpatine was openly a sith lord when he was elected
it is not illegal to be a sith so i think it would be very interesting to see
Then he'd have every Jedi swinging for his head 24/7.
Actually, a law was enacted during the Jedi Civil War which did make it illegal to be a Sith. That law was still being enforced in the time of Darth Bane, but it isn't clear if it had been repealed by the time of the Clone Wars. Most people in the Galaxy had forgotten the Sith even existed by then, so the law may have still been on the books without anyone realizing.
@@stephenwells6434 was the jedi civil war during the times of the old republic? Where can I learn more about it?
@@FeenickzVR The Jedi Civil War was the conflict Revan caused when he fell to the Dark Side. It is the war going on in the game Knights of the Old Republic.
@@stephenwells6434 Thank you! I'll have to check it out.
Pt2?
Should drop a part 2 because what happens when the Jedis learn that Padme is having Anakin's children? Would they still accept him considering the vold he has done or will they still go according to their rules? Cause this would make Anakin go and he either turns evil anyways or he escapes with Padmé to Naboo. So what would happen if he turned evil? Or if he escapes with Padmé, will he grow stronger or will Palpatine find a way to either kill him or manipulate him
Part 2 please
what if palpatine was already dead when anakin arrived?
Palps: "I may had underestimated the Jedi"
Anakin and Mace would be very dead or Palpatine would have escaped.
I'm not so sure I'd agree, but it would be an epic battle regardless
I have a good idea for a what if
This story is really good but my one issue is that I feel like you can’t keep the story the same and have Anakin join Windu instead of Palpatine due to the whole timeline being Palpatine manipulating Anakin to joining him, giving him the visions and the talks that the dark side can help save the ones he loves from dying, I think although this story is extremely well made, I feel as though you’d need to change the rest of the story for it to make sense more than just Anakin hesitating because Qui Gon told him to stop
What if anakin skywalker runaway after he betrayed by padme in Mustafa’s
With palpatine gone dose that make maul the new sith master
Part 2
What if Napoleon was a general in the clone wars
anakin still following the jedi way, has he forgotten that he's the chosen one, and that he is the only one who is supposed to physically "destroy" the sith, anakin has to kill palpatine, this is how you destroy the sith man, mentally, but physically, anakin must kill palpatine, deep down inside, anakin should kill palpatine.
More ! or I will the dark forces of the Disney Sith masters after you.
Might as well give you another comment. Its well deserved.
:)
What if Mace Windu joined Palpatine?
Star Wars is dead. Disney killed it.
Get lost.
Unrealistic windu wouldn’t be so easily defeated by palatines lightning. Lucas stated that he beat him as well as Disney sources. 👎
Windu beat him in lightsaber combat but not the force.
First!
:)
Part 2