I listen to a lot of the stories in this genre. Makes work go fast but if I hear one more time any of these …indomitable human spirit, grim determination, cut through shields like tissue paper I am gonna lose my ever loving mind
Very redundant. In fact, the narrator chose to uselessly restate the same concepts several times. This either was in order to fruitlessly boost engagement and video length, or it was the loquacious product of a caffeine-fueled stream-of-consciousness writing session, or it was a long-winded but ultimately misguided story written by AI based on incorrect assumptions of what good literature is. Regardless, this story's superfluous need to redundantly restate a few simple concepts an inordinant number of times in a most verbose manner is the true definition of poor writing. Indeed, only a few moments in to this long-winded video, I was struck by how many times and how many diffuse manners only a few sentences had been reiterated several times. I daresay this is a completely and utterly unnecessary use of padded language. Why, it makes me think... is the writer a particularly verbose AI? Are they a sleep-deprived high schooler? Are they a conniving TH-camr trying to squeeze some extra adcents out of TH-cam? Or are they simply an incompetent writer? And blah blah blah... I ran out of troll synonyms to redundantly use
I listen to a lot of the stories in this genre. Makes work go fast but if I hear one more time any of these …indomitable human spirit, grim determination, cut through shields like tissue paper I am gonna lose my ever loving mind
But........The fate of the Galaxy is at at stake!
Don't forget "but the war was just beginning".
Never thought I'd be reading a HFY story that had no humans in it. Not sure what the title has to do with anything.
Humanity, wherefore?
Humans?
and an atmosphere laden with an unusual amount of space debris (and tetra ethyl lead, like Earth since 1921?)
Very good story. 😅
Nothing at all to do with humans.
Redundant.
Very redundant. In fact, the narrator chose to uselessly restate the same concepts several times. This either was in order to fruitlessly boost engagement and video length, or it was the loquacious product of a caffeine-fueled stream-of-consciousness writing session, or it was a long-winded but ultimately misguided story written by AI based on incorrect assumptions of what good literature is. Regardless, this story's superfluous need to redundantly restate a few simple concepts an inordinant number of times in a most verbose manner is the true definition of poor writing. Indeed, only a few moments in to this long-winded video, I was struck by how many times and how many diffuse manners only a few sentences had been reiterated several times. I daresay this is a completely and utterly unnecessary use of padded language. Why, it makes me think... is the writer a particularly verbose AI? Are they a sleep-deprived high schooler? Are they a conniving TH-camr trying to squeeze some extra adcents out of TH-cam? Or are they simply an incompetent writer? And blah blah blah... I ran out of troll synonyms to redundantly use
@@sewpungyow5154 To be fair, I would have run out after a couple sentences. This is impressive.
@@arcticfox6478 I would like to have responded with a similarly annoying redundant wall of text, but I don't have the energy. So pretend I did :)