Immortal Affliction - Rarity [Pony Infection AU] (Grimdark)

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  • The first, but not last of its kind! A documentary style fanfiction brimming with frights!
    "Immortal Affliction - Subject 1 - Rarity”
    Written by Magpiepony
    www.fimfiction.net/story/5544...
    Summary: The Reign of Friendship has ended, leaving a grieving Equestria to grapple with their loss. Rarity Belle, the successful 500+ year old fashionista, has been harboring a secret that could spell Equestria’s doom.
    Audio Adaptation directed and produced by TheLostNarrator
    Cast (In Alphabetical Order):
    TheLostNarrator
    @Magpiepony
    @NeighratorPony
    @ScribblerProductions101
    Artist Credits (In Alphabetical Order):
    AngelAmyRose - www.tumblr.com/projectfimily
    Blackdove - / _loonytoonz_
    Cloud9 - @thelifeoncloud9
    DariDraws - / dari_draws
    MekBlueART - / mekblueart
    Mochi_de_Llama - / mochi_de_llama
    Nomad Flicker - @Nomad-Gamer
    Sleepy Dove - Link Pending
    Spencharly - @spencharly
    Suni - / suniscathorsis
    UrbanQhoul - / urbanqhoul
    VladiVoices - @vladivoices
    Xephina - @XephinaTheEleven
    A special thanks to Catsmeat for their amazing horse-puns for months and days of the week!
    Music provided by:
    Myuu
    / @myuu
    Empty Reflections (Slow Version) - ErikMMusic
    / @erikmmusic
    The Dark Somnium
    / @somniummusic
    Necromancer by Vindsvept - released under CC-BY 4.0.
    / vindsvept
    Please consider supporting me on Patreon to bring more stories like this to life!
    / thelostnarrator
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    / thelostnarrator​
    / magandlost
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  • @jonathanpierrelouis1267
    @jonathanpierrelouis1267 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +998

    shine bright like a diamond. 💎

  • @internetangel7990
    @internetangel7990 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1274

    My favorite part of this was that Gentle Heart had no regret with anything she did. She genuinely tried to help Rarity as much as she could, even forging a signature. She was dedicated to what her job was.

    • @renzoXD2022
      @renzoXD2022 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +41

      Agreed with you. 👍

    • @cameronsmith8917
      @cameronsmith8917 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

      Poor Rarity she didn't deserve this, she is so kind hearted and so generous but not to be too soon or any thing but she is in peace in the heavens light above her soul with the lord of our God now and forevermore.
      Rarity rest in peace my dearest friend, and may you find peace and happiness with your loved ones in heaven you deserved it .
      🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
      🕊️🕊️🕊️🕊️🕊️🕊️🕊️
      ✝️✝️✝️✝️✝️✝️✝️
      💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
      💎💎💎💎💎💎💎.
      Sincerely yours the Gold Knight of Scorpio
      ♏🦂♦️♦️🏜️🏜️🏛️🏛️,
      And my partners
      Mu the Gold Knight of Aries
      ♈🐏✨✨🏔️🏔️🏛️🏛️.
      And Aiolia the Gold Knight of Leo
      ♌🦁⚡⚡🌩️🌩️🏛️🏛️.

    • @changelingkingcocoon5029
      @changelingkingcocoon5029 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@cameronsmith8917 We don't know if she's dead, or somehow still alive in that stone. This story is called IMMORTAL Affliction after all. I hope she is dead, because the alternative is so much worse.

    • @theemeraldking3251
      @theemeraldking3251 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

      ​@@cameronsmith8917Is your pony OC a religious priest in MLP? 😅

    • @cameronsmith8917
      @cameronsmith8917 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      @@theemeraldking3251 I am a warrior of death in a good way, I maybe an autistic and especially a leukemia survivor for the past 23 years from now if ya know what I mean my friend, not to be rude or cause an argument or anything, but I don't get this emoji expression means (😂).
      Sincerely yours the Gold Knight of Scorpio
      ♏🦂♦️♦️🏜️🏜️🏛️🏛️,
      And my partners
      Mu the Gold Knight of Aries
      ♈🐏✨✨🏔️🏔️🏛️🏛️.
      And Aiolia the Gold Knight of Leo
      ♌🦁⚡⚡🌩️🌩️🏛️🏛️.

  • @yoyoyo1999ify
    @yoyoyo1999ify 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +771

    Listened to this again. Nurse Gentleheart got infected just from touching the stones on Rarity. And she sewed similar stone into countless dresses and sold them. Ponyville is going to become a crystal wasteland

    • @Thedragonlover95
      @Thedragonlover95 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +58

      An MLP infection AU indeed

    • @Imnotsmg4bob
      @Imnotsmg4bob หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      It's a good thing I got a pickaxe.

    • @crossoverqueen1775
      @crossoverqueen1775 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      Listening to this and reading this comm made me want to start thinking about what Ponyville would look like afterwards in the style of one of those Infection AUs

    • @Archiver_Studio
      @Archiver_Studio 25 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      @@crossoverqueen1775 Well, Scibbler did start working on one herself
      So I assume Ponyville would be overtaken with crystals similar to Rarity and the room she was kept inside

    • @BTSArmy-hu3by
      @BTSArmy-hu3by 24 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      Crystal ponies

  • @TheLastRunicorn
    @TheLastRunicorn 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +582

    the dates are killing me 💀'foaluary' 'hoofsday' 'trotsday' 'STALLIONDAY' y'all were having too much fun coming up with these istg

    • @nightmare_eclipse4933
      @nightmare_eclipse4933 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

      The way they would fit right in to

    • @rach3092
      @rach3092 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      I can’t get into it with those kinda names though 😅I just laugh lol

    • @TheLastRunicorn
      @TheLastRunicorn 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

      ​@@rach3092 yeah it was funny but kinda took me out of the setting a bit

    • @unripetheberrby6283
      @unripetheberrby6283 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      Yeah 😂 it's good puns tho

  • @thenewadventuresofhenry6998
    @thenewadventuresofhenry6998 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +422

    SPOILERS
    "I just bought a PONY made of DIAMONDS, cause I'm RICH!"

    • @temmieton9755
      @temmieton9755 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +37

      I can't believe Handsome Jack was true villain all along. . .AGAIN.

    • @ace_of_cups4096
      @ace_of_cups4096 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

      🤣🤣🤣🤣 omg I need to play Borderlands 2 again

    • @TheOnlyChara
      @TheOnlyChara หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Filthy Rich lol

  • @bleakautomaton4808
    @bleakautomaton4808 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +681

    So...Rarity bursts into gems meaning: Applejack roots in place and mutates into an apple tree; Rainbow Dash explodes into rainbows; Pinkie Pie confetties out as balloons (festively); Fluttershy lays out in a field and her shape dissipates into a flock of butterflies; and Twilight upon death warps out as raw magic?
    Who knows. A roaming dashing rainbow and pink butterflies flittering like a school of fish close to land?

    • @HerbHappyEm
      @HerbHappyEm 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +61

      Or Pinkie could straight up turn into a piñata of herself😆 And I could even imagine Fluttershy turning into one giant mutated butterfly similar to Spiderlock, the alternate version of Fluttershy from My Little Amnesia🤔

    • @revaslatts4301
      @revaslatts4301 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

      The possibilities are endless.

    • @amaranthdahlia
      @amaranthdahlia 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +24

      twilight was already established to be dead from the start though

    • @revaslatts4301
      @revaslatts4301 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +33

      @@amaranthdahlia She is definitely patient zero.

    • @bleakautomaton4808
      @bleakautomaton4808 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +44

      @@amaranthdahlia That's what I was thinking: after she died she just dissipates into raw magic. And I saw someone else's comment wondering if Twilight's death creates the affliction in her friends and that got me thinking if Twilight's body started seeping raw magic after her death that she'd gravitate to her close friends first (rest of the mane 6).

  • @antonrueda1044
    @antonrueda1044 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +177

    Rarity's body was mysteriously producing gems and the first thing she did was sow them into her dresses that she also SOLD!

    • @Archiver_Studio
      @Archiver_Studio 8 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      She did believe it was a blessing and never knew that it was an affliction which could be spread and also be fatal

  • @1989JROG
    @1989JROG 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +503

    Well, Rarity did say she wanted to be fabulous as a gem. So she got her wish.

    • @renzoXD2022
      @renzoXD2022 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

      Maybe then she'll learn the truth of that saying "be careful what you wish for." 🤔

    • @jbcool4448
      @jbcool4448 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

      There is Nothing she could do about it now tho since she petrified into a gemstone statue and possibly spreading it to all of her customers at her boutique

  • @ASilverSilkWing
    @ASilverSilkWing 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +244

    DAMN.
    The most horrifying part was when Rarity was vomiting for OVER 12 MINUTES STRAIGHT. Hot damn. That's just... absolutely horrible. VA did a stellar job, well done!

    • @estefaniasorando4409
      @estefaniasorando4409 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

      For more actually. With that last image of her I'd say is until she was suffocated by the gems. Just imagining it is... jesus

    • @Stars_Watch-gt4zp
      @Stars_Watch-gt4zp หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      This was the first time in many years I felt genuine, raw fear.

    • @Urfavoritelittleartesthxnybee
      @Urfavoritelittleartesthxnybee หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Skaddo

    • @abifuckingsexual8334
      @abifuckingsexual8334 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      For real, I actually paused the video when that segment started because the VA’s performance made me viscerally uncomfortable. Incredible work!

    • @kalic.5173
      @kalic.5173 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      I completely agree, it sounded so real, I thought I wasn't gonna make it through that part, but I did
      Lost, you did an awesome job!

  • @goldenfangryushenron
    @goldenfangryushenron 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +315

    Gentle Heart was true to her profession through and through. Even going as far as to forge a signature just to help Rarity. Sure, she ended up getting fired for it, but she has my respect 🫡. I hope she managed to find some semblance of peace from this.
    R.I.P Rarity, may your soul shine as brightly and as fabulously as the dresses you loved 😭💔 in the Elysium Fields.

    • @daisyjoy242
      @daisyjoy242 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

      Gentle Heart deserved better

    • @Archiver_Studio
      @Archiver_Studio 24 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      @@daisyjoy242 Hopefully she'll be cured if there is a cure for this hellish affliction

  • @Imnotsmg4bob
    @Imnotsmg4bob 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +469

    (Edit, fixed my subject mix-up, sorry about that-)
    "Subject 5 shows no deterioration compared to the others and continues to ask about the whereabouts of Subject 1..."
    Oh no...
    *Applejack, no...*

    • @revaslatts4301
      @revaslatts4301 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +41

      Same here. Now, I wonder who the other subjects are and how Sweetie Belle got affected... unless... oh my God... Rarity's dresses!

    • @o.r2308
      @o.r2308 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +77

      Good news: according to Scribbler while this video was being played live, she informed us that subject 5 is Applejack. Bad news is still the same tho
      Worst news is if rarity and applejack are subjects, then it’s not hard to guess who the other 3 are 😰😰😰😰😰

    • @What_am_I_doing339
      @What_am_I_doing339 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      🫢

    • @revaslatts4301
      @revaslatts4301 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

      @@o.r2308 Pinke Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy maybe?

    • @bendingdemon6483
      @bendingdemon6483 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      I'm thinking Spike, he's a dragon (which would explain having no symptoms) and is in love with Rarity (which would explain the constant asking)

  • @TruffleAntylamon
    @TruffleAntylamon 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +153

    Sounds like the Elements are going crazy due to the absence of the Element of Magic. If so, there's gonna be more than just a crystallization outbreak.

    • @samuelbedsole5089
      @samuelbedsole5089 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      MLP Gen 5 isn't just a time skip from Gen 4. It's the aftermath of an apocalypse.

    • @TruffleAntylamon
      @TruffleAntylamon หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      @samuelbedsole5089 that would work so much better than them apparently making it to where everypony's magic getting taken then them at some point drifting apart. G5 had too many plot holes that's why I never bothered with it. I was going to at first.

  • @victorialucas7645
    @victorialucas7645 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +172

    *“Mama’s still pretty… right?”*

    • @katlise_The_artist_god
      @katlise_The_artist_god 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      Someone made the reference

    • @readintimely2517
      @readintimely2517 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      Trama in those words

    • @grayghostgames8069
      @grayghostgames8069 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Love a Lil miss rarity reference

    • @victorialucas7645
      @victorialucas7645 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      LMR: *”Pain is subjective, darling…”*

    • @TheOnlyChara
      @TheOnlyChara หลายเดือนก่อน

      "it's a name I haven't heard for a long time"

  • @changelingkingcocoon5029
    @changelingkingcocoon5029 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +122

    Although this would fall under "Body Horror", something about this story just doesn't feel like "horror" is the right word. To me, it's just sad and heartbreaking. Even if the condition can't be reversed, I wish there could at least be answers about what's going on. And the worst part is the feeling of not knowing whether or not Rarity is still alive within that stone, and if she is, whether or not she's aware that she's alive. And considering that this story is called IMMORTAL Affliction, I'm afraid that she just may be still alive in there.

    • @emilywenig4390
      @emilywenig4390 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      This is some Made In Abyss type stuff...

  • @cristelromeave7414
    @cristelromeave7414 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +90

    Wanna know whats worse then this?, the fact that she has unknowingly made dresses for an entire set of ponys within not just ponyville but equesteria and possibly gifts for many creature friends, if even one mate receives the gifts or buys those dresses and so much as touches it, then there is no amount of help for not only them, but everyone else they come in contact with too, if the liquid or so much as touching the pony or the gems can cause it to spread then celestia only knows what'll happen after that.o-o'

  • @ACastillo_
    @ACastillo_ 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +51

    I actually believe that, if Twilight made everypony immortal ( more than likely through a spell that depended on HER to keep stable ) her death deestabilized the spell and it's currently crumbling down in a mass domino effect.
    There is no cure. There's only making sure the spell doesn't affect the newer generations if Equestria wants any chance at surviving.
    Ofc. This doesn't affect the true immortals. Aka. Celestia, Luna, Discord and potentially Cadance and Flurry Heart.

  • @kittygardenva2741
    @kittygardenva2741 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +198

    A well worthy addition to the MLP infection trend! Such powerful performances by Magpie as the lovely Rarity, Scribbler as the dedicated Nurse Gentle Heart, Neighrator as the helpful Orderly, and Lost Narrator as a bone chilling narrator!

  • @flux9629
    @flux9629 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +201

    I think what happened is Rarity became immortal, but she never became an alicorn, so over the years, her magic became stronger and stronger until her body couldn't take it, and this story happened. I just wonder how she became immortal, I think the most likely candidate is twilight, but if so, did she do it to her other friends so she wouldn't have to lose them? Does that mean subjects 2 - 5 are Appplejack, Rainbow, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Spike? If Twilight did make them immortal, it's also possible her death made the magic go haywire. I love it when a story leaves me with so many questions. Hopefully, this story continued. I can't wait to see where it could go!

    • @ACastillo_
      @ACastillo_ 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +37

      Spike's a dragon, he's already gonna be EXTREMELY long lived so immortality may not be needed.

    • @flux9629
      @flux9629 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

      @ACastillo_ subject 5 didn't show any signs of the affliction, which is why I said spike.

    • @revaslatts4301
      @revaslatts4301 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Subject five must be Sweetie Belle.

    • @revaslatts4301
      @revaslatts4301 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      ​@@ACastillo_ Like I said, it has to be Sweetie Belle!

    • @flux9629
      @flux9629 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @revaslatts4301 Why would sweetiebell be symptomless?

  • @tundraghost429
    @tundraghost429 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +122

    I love the fact that it was rarity’s gemstone talent that lead to an outbreak instead of it coming from the everfree forest for once. Also if this stemmed from her sadness and cutie mark, then did something similar happen to the rest of the mane six besides twilight do to her death?

  • @candycatgirl6496
    @candycatgirl6496 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +106

    SCP + MLP = This Awesome Series

  • @purplepartytigerd1598
    @purplepartytigerd1598 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +76

    21:34 Yo how did Mag *make those SOUNDS?* Holy crap that whole section was so eerie

  • @anamericangrizzlybear8315
    @anamericangrizzlybear8315 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +36

    Rarity's VA did a phenomenal job, especially in the ending where the noises she made really sold the severity of her affliction
    Her performance made me cringe, but in a good way lol, awesome video

  • @dariustucker1690
    @dariustucker1690 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +157

    This immortal thing is something else I love It! It's like Rarity transforms and she does not like herself and it has an amazing epic on this storyline.

  • @acatwithwings4009
    @acatwithwings4009 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +95

    the fact that it starts off just like her cutie mark instead of some plant is GENIUS (gives room for more Ideas too), and having Rarity be the cause and patient is such a wave of fresh air! Every time I see Rarity in an infection AU (when she's included), it's never for anything really special.
    This was Gorgeously written and preformed!❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @ACastillo_
    @ACastillo_ 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +92

    Okay, more theorizing:
    Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie are Subjects 3 and 4, particularly hard to restrain both of them given how fast RD is and Pinkie... *Being Pinkie.*
    Fluttershy is subject 2, and DISCORD probably took her away. that's why her whereabouts are unknown and why nobody can find her.
    and Applejack is subject 5, which honestly makes perfect sense beyond the potential shipping (lmao). Applejack has never come off as someone that would fight against authority unless absolutely necessary, and if she IS fearing sickness, like with the others, she WOULD more than likely willingly submit herself to medical intervention to keep her family safe.

    • @speedtracker9556
      @speedtracker9556 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      What about Twilight?

    • @ryanlozano9086
      @ryanlozano9086 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

      @@speedtracker9556 twilight is dead she died when the story began in rarity interview the first one

    • @speedtracker9556
      @speedtracker9556 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@ryanlozano9086
      Ok, that's odd.

  • @astephens3600
    @astephens3600 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +55

    It took me a while to realize that this whole fanfiction is a reference to scp-009 and scp-409.

    • @blazingeagle2820
      @blazingeagle2820 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      Don’t you mean the contagious crystal?

    • @astephens3600
      @astephens3600 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      @@blazingeagle2820 I updated my comment.

    • @TruffleAntylamon
      @TruffleAntylamon 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

      If Rarity is that particular scp, then AJ will probably be scp - 805. If they keep going that route.

  • @lynnboartsdye1943
    @lynnboartsdye1943 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +76

    Gentle hearts exit interview gave me CHILLS and the realization that the blinged dresses were going to infect other ponies was an excellent touch. I’m so glad we got to hear your version of the infection AU it’s so good!!

  • @charleswalker8262
    @charleswalker8262 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +62

    Rarity Is EVOLVING Into A 💎.

    • @pePs_Kab4ch0g
      @pePs_Kab4ch0g 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Her FINAL form 💎💎💎

    • @abygailflores6130
      @abygailflores6130 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Lol her rn:💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎

  • @SomePlonkerFromTheUK
    @SomePlonkerFromTheUK 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    As it happens, when Rarity said "DON'T GIVE ME THAT LOOK", my irl expression really was one of revulsion at what I was hearing lol

  • @pilloeglade5463
    @pilloeglade5463 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +50

    that body horror art was sickening and incredible

  • @thenewadventuresofhenry6998
    @thenewadventuresofhenry6998 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +74

    You didn't actually think that Lost and Mag were out of horror content after Sleep Experiment, did you?

    • @UmbreonKurosaki
      @UmbreonKurosaki 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

      Never in my mind lol

  • @rokblades3532
    @rokblades3532 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +32

    This was great the part where rarity is just vomiting out gems really shook me to my core. I do have a theory on why this is happening. Everyone in this univeres is "immortal", and since Twilights friends are also "Immortal" pretty sure we can deduce that Twilight most likely made her friends immortal or hell maybe the entier ponie race. And this virus might just be nature correcting itself or maybe its some sort of foul play, who knows. But hey thats just a theroy, a MLP theroy thanks for reading.

  • @lord_of_books7769
    @lord_of_books7769 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +31

    I see that Rarity is 546 years old. Must be a secret alicorn or something. Damn

  • @glitchlessyt9292
    @glitchlessyt9292 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +40

    As a french person said:
    "LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOO"

  • @Kahvinporo
    @Kahvinporo 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +65

    Big Lost projects are always such a treat because I can go to them fully blind.

  • @TalkedPuma6023
    @TalkedPuma6023 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +45

    I really enjoyed this. These are the types of stories that I like I think the most because there’s a level of body horror in here, and the eeriness that we see here really reminds me of the SCP foundation specially with the recordings and I just love how the sound is modified so it genuinely sounds like you’re listening to a recording it’s immersive.
    I also found rarity’s attitude, extremely uncomfortable. I don’t know how else to explain it. Let’s just say that she’s concerned from what’s happening to her, but not in the way that you would think she seems more concerned with her aspect rather than “am I gonna die “ And the way that she disrespects the staff is really unnerving and again just adds to what I’ve mentioned before.
    The Lost Narrator’s voice, as always makes it even more unnerving. Because there’s times where I find her voice relaxing and there’s others where I find it creepy which fits exactly here since it is a horror story and that’s what I love.
    Overall, I really enjoyed this fic and it’s definitely gonna be one of those that I’m gonna be listening to over and over again.

  • @cirtrousfuture6651
    @cirtrousfuture6651 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +72

    This was not only an Expertly written story (hats off to Mag) but also was so incredibly well performed. (Lost was a wonderful narrator as usual. And Scribbler gave us one of the most beautiful monologs I've ever heard) So I for one can't wait to see where this story goes. And hats off to everyone involved.

  • @vaporean_boylove.0w083
    @vaporean_boylove.0w083 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +46

    I really love this style! Really feels we found documents to a patient 0 case!

  • @TheLastRunicorn
    @TheLastRunicorn 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    i wanna give nurse gentle heart a hug, she really lived up to her name 💔

  • @madlaugher3300
    @madlaugher3300 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    I fear for fluttershy, she gonna produce silk all over her body followed by various changes related to the lifecycle of a caterpillar into butterfly
    Eating furniture, fur feathers and skin peeling off and new joints forming via limbs breaking.
    Or perhaps worse she might end up like SCP-439 the bone hive, kept barely alive to a colony of catterpillers using her as a nest and food source

  • @scarred-healer1368
    @scarred-healer1368 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

    Good God the stuff involving her eye made me physically wince in pain. That was a horrid thing for Rarity to go through…

  • @CyberDemon620
    @CyberDemon620 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    that is one way to become a gem pony, first pain then none. next is untold agony, now a world a shines like a freshly polished mirror

  • @icedaggerfan
    @icedaggerfan 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +48

    i don't know how to put this into words, BUT I LOVED THIS!!! the effort that was put into this was incredible!!
    rarity didn't deserve to go out like that though :(

  • @Undercookedsteak
    @Undercookedsteak 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    No matter how old I get, I love new grim darks

  • @blazingeagle2820
    @blazingeagle2820 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +22

    Wait if twilight died does that mean that she has become the source of the affliction? I believe this virus is magic based and it symptoms are based on the cutie mark.

  • @BLUEWOLFOFNIGHFIRE
    @BLUEWOLFOFNIGHFIRE 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +36

    Can we appreciate the time and effort TheLostNarrator puts in their videos for is to enjoy.

  • @URLoveable224
    @URLoveable224 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

    Good gravy mackeroll and holy shit. I'm so freaked out. That part with the extended puking was the worst (best) part for me. That gives me something more than chills, I don't even know how to describe it. Imagining the horror of more and more sharp painful stuff ceaselessly spilling from your face and never getting a second to breathe, with the ever growing horror of just how much there could possibly be, probably growing in quantity at a rate far faster than you can physically get it out. As someone who does a decent amount of puking in their life, THAT'S HORRIFIC.
    AMAZING WORK ALL!!!

  • @user-zz7el9zk9s
    @user-zz7el9zk9s 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

    Loved the story! I loved the concept of the pony's cutie mark involved with there injury/disease/infection. quite the fascinating and interesting story, I do hope there is a part two, possibly about another pony's experience like apple jack or rainbow dash, like apple jack grows into a tree, or rainbow dash starts to get rainbow patches on her skin but more detail. Just my thoughts and possible future idea's.

  • @silver45470
    @silver45470 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +48

    Hey, Lost! I want to thank you for being awesome! You're the first storyteller (and Scribbler too) who i started listening back in 2018 when i began learning English. Your impeccable voice acting deserves a praise! It's wonderful - Everypony sounds amazing in your voice! Im thankful that i had an opportunity to begin learning accents, pronunciations and funny words from you. You're more than awesome - you're amazing. And you gifted me amazing memories i won't ever be able to forget!

  • @twistedrobobearaz1650
    @twistedrobobearaz1650 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    Now rarity is gemstone, however don't know why I have a feeling that the other's are probably worse then what rarity went through but possibly make it a series probably?

  • @Thedragonlover95
    @Thedragonlover95 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    When we all thought they were out of stories to tell, they surprise us with another

  • @TheRealSparkplugTheFox
    @TheRealSparkplugTheFox 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

    This is my favorite take on the infection AU by far.

  • @akemikobyashi8478
    @akemikobyashi8478 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Nurse Red Heart’s realization with the dresses, actually broke me…I can hear her dread! Scribbler did a wonderful job voicing this

  • @VeraxFriends
    @VeraxFriends 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +28

    This is a great story! Pony infections are an absolute fave, and this is just amazing!!!
    Great job to all of you!
    🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 This is so very unique and very well written and said! It did scare me as much as the first one!

  • @BLUEWOLFOFNIGHFIRE
    @BLUEWOLFOFNIGHFIRE 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +26

    The effort TheLostNarrator put in their videos is insane huge props

  • @Secret_Moon
    @Secret_Moon 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    Production quality is impressive. The visual really adds to the story.

  • @renzoXD2022
    @renzoXD2022 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +28

    Wow, I admit that documentary was really shocking and one of my favorites of this AU genre (which is currently gaining trend among MLP fics). I never thought the cutie marks would be anything more dangerous than a double-edged sword actually. 😬😬You really shined, #TheLostNarrator, I look forward to seeing the continuation of this docuseries-type series when possible. 👍👍

  • @Soul_Squid
    @Soul_Squid 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +23

    If it was really an affliction, then where did it originally come from other than a gem? And were the other similar subjects could be Rarity's friends or who?
    Anyways, this got me hooked into it and I'm loving it!!!😁😁😁

  • @user-td1cw2lq7f
    @user-td1cw2lq7f 18 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    I love the idea that infection was not too fatal at first but as the time pass by slowly killing its host good job 👍.

  • @isacriaturapequena
    @isacriaturapequena 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +30

    Lost creating masterpiece again! OMAGAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
    now rarity knows how bad immortality is (I love scribbler's voice in this one aaaaaa)
    CRYSTAL APOCALYPSE, CRYSTAL APOCALYPSE COMIN!

  • @antonrueda1044
    @antonrueda1044 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    Everything about this is great. I expecially love the visual effects and the directing overall. It's so phenomenal. Instead of just still frames of the documents, we float around them in different angles while slowly moving to show more of them.
    The visuals for the recordings are my favorite. Getting different shots and different angles of this audio wave displaying device (I don't know what it's called and not even Google is helping that much) while also constantly moving around it.
    I can't exactly find the word to describe it, but it feels "cinematic" in a way. Your editing skills have improved so much and I can't wait to see you improve more. I'm also excited to see if you'll try different styles in the future. Experimenting can be really helpful.

    • @thelostnarrator
      @thelostnarrator  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Truth be told, its actually an after effects template that I downloaded from a digital asset website and then edit it to how I see fit. I've started using them more and more because they can add a new layer to the visuals, especially since I wanted this series to feel more like a report was being presented to you instead of just a straight forward reading lol
      Thank you though for the kind words! I appreciate that you enjoyed it!

  • @ToiletDestroyer2000
    @ToiletDestroyer2000 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    GentleHearts va did an ASTOUNDING job

  • @TheCommenterDragon
    @TheCommenterDragon 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    Another very marvelous and sensational reading Lost, I absolutely love it! Once again the voice acting and art are just ever so phenomenal and spectacular! Everyone did such a marvelous and fantastic job bringing this vid to life make no mistake about it, Truly outstanding and excellent work guys!!!👏👏👏

  • @krazykatedraws1145
    @krazykatedraws1145 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +15

    Usually don't comment on stuff, but ive been binging these for the past week or so. Dont really know why, perhaps out of nostalgia because I was a huge MLP fan as a kid. Whatever the case, I wanted to point out a potential consequence that I'm not sure I've seen pointed out yet. If the doctor got infected by touching the gem growth on Rarity, is it possible that every dress adorned with these "naturally grown" gems could also have the potential to infect the customer who bought them? A horrifying thought. Great video!

    • @InvaderGIR98
      @InvaderGIR98 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I wonder if it's only contagious if you touch what's still "in" her?

    • @flux9629
      @flux9629 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      The dotor already pointed that out to the hospital at the end of the story. That's how the over 200 ponies got infected.

    • @krazykatedraws1145
      @krazykatedraws1145 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

      @@flux9629 aw dang it. Thought I figured something out LMAO. Thanks for letting me know, usually I listen to this stuff while drawing and don't catch everything

  • @LeaserRoy
    @LeaserRoy 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    LORRRRDDD everything about this is so well done. Hats off to Scribble the emotion in that last Gentle Heart interview hit so hard

  • @thesouthernotaku9004
    @thesouthernotaku9004 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +17

    This was fucking AMAZING!!! Holy friggen Balls! Like what I said a day ago that "I was psyched" for this, this DID NOT disappoint. I really love the transitions from audio waveform, to image files of the condition and reports, its extremely interesting and it drives home the seriousness of Rarity's situation. The artwork is incredible and the voice acting, fucking amazing, the emotion is . . . fucking amazing! I can't think of anything else to say but "amazing." I love this Grimdarks they are badass and hardcore, Great job on this Lost and Team!

  • @DannyNWRE2
    @DannyNWRE2 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +23

    Sweet Celestia! There’s not enough words to describe how much I love this infection AU!

  • @SephDineros
    @SephDineros 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

    Never heard of an Infection AU but it will be very interesting to watch and enjoy :)

  • @revaslatts4301
    @revaslatts4301 22 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    They really captured Rarity's personality here, and the scene of gemstone Rarity regurgitating and the orderly losing his eye is just... I saw that in my nighmares. Sorry, "My Little Worms," you got dethroned - this is the number one best My Little Pony infection au. MAKE MORE, I BEG OF YOU!!!!

  • @thewiisportsresortdog5688
    @thewiisportsresortdog5688 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    INFECTION AU NARRATIONS WE ARE SO BACK

  • @avatar_of_asmodeus9092
    @avatar_of_asmodeus9092 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Excellent grimdark, Lost, Mag, and everyone who worked on this! 👏🏾 👏🏾
    Also, I can’t help but think back to the idea about how Twilight “wouldn’t outlive her friends.” Maybe she wouldn’t because she figured out a way to bestow immortal life to THEM instead (thus her sacrifice truly making her the Princess of Friendship)…but even she couldn’t have foreseen the terrible consequences….

  • @rainersanchez8495
    @rainersanchez8495 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +70

    Lovely as always Lost! Great work :3

  • @crimsondust3446
    @crimsondust3446 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    This was an interesting story to listen to, especially seeing the art used for it. I was trying to guess what could be happening to Rarity and how this could spread

  • @EquestriaExploration
    @EquestriaExploration 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Oh dear Celestia, I hope she didn't give any gems to Spike! °~°

    • @metalpeperone
      @metalpeperone หลายเดือนก่อน

      true but how is this even going to work on spike??
      like, this disease seems to be dependant on the pony's cutie mark, and as we all know, dragons dont HAVE cutie marks

  • @TakumoKun
    @TakumoKun 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +12

    LOST YOU CAME IN CLUTCH TODAY AT WORK TODAY. This Story was so good! Amazing writing Mag! Very clever with the world building details like the day n month names. LOST DUDE YOUR EDITNG FOR THIS STORY GAVE ME CHILLS. This entire project just amazing! Well done to everyone!! ❤️❤️

    • @thelostnarrator
      @thelostnarrator  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      The horse puns for the days and the months were taken from SlaughterHorse 2, which is a mobile game lol But thank you though!

    • @TakumoKun
      @TakumoKun 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Oh snap really?!? I haven’t heard of that game in forever. You’ve now given me another thing to do at work! ✨✨

    • @thelostnarrator
      @thelostnarrator  2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@TakumoKun its on steam as well I think for the PC. Mag and I had a livestream of it back in August on my side channel, but yeah lol those came from the game. The developer (CatFood) really came up with some amazing puns for it!

  • @silver45470
    @silver45470 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

    Absolutely flawless, Lost! I think this is one the best works put together by you and everyone. I can't wait for part 2!

  • @angelicalofgren6480
    @angelicalofgren6480 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    I would love to hear about the other subjects. This story was AMAZING.

  • @niobedragones7347
    @niobedragones7347 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Hats off to not only the incredible writing, but also the incredible voice acting here 👏💜✨✨✨

  • @animewolf3573
    @animewolf3573 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    I’ve to say by far this give me mysterious biohazard ☣️ vibe. It’s so bone 🦴 chilling how a single Crystal can take up entire organs within months and it’s still a mystery that hasn’t been cured. Another successful “TheLostNarrator” story. Bravo bravo ❤ I absolutely love it. 🥰

  • @nightmare_eclipse4933
    @nightmare_eclipse4933 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    And now i want a part 2 as this infection au really grabbed my attention in a matter of minutes

  • @dreemurrreborn9782
    @dreemurrreborn9782 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    OMG YESS THE INFECTION AU IS HERE!!! I'M SO EXCITED. I KNOW THIS WILL BE GREAT ❤

  • @midnightnightwish8266
    @midnightnightwish8266 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    GOD I LOVE THIS AU, and its so creative I need to know how the illness affects the other mane six because I would love to see what changes create in their bodies

  • @Gresekjr122
    @Gresekjr122 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    Everyone involved did a fantastic job. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work. Have a wonderful day Scribbler MagPie & Lost Narrator. Love you all.

  • @Jay_Morgan
    @Jay_Morgan 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    The voice acting of Scribbler as Gentle Heart is phenomenal, it scratched at my brain in a way I cant explain.
    And the style of this reading, the art and sound design is just *chef's kiss*.
    Can't wait to see more of it, Magpie is so talented and so are you, Lost! Keep up at it!

  • @dylanterry3421
    @dylanterry3421 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Dude no joke I was creeped out by this. Well done lost this was really well done.

  • @auspicioussun95
    @auspicioussun95 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I wonder if Twilight knew she could die one day, but she didnt know when she would die, so she made them immortal as long as she lived. So they could grow with her but die shortly after her own death? Because she wants to always have them with her in life and death?

  • @thecrimsonrayschaos5690
    @thecrimsonrayschaos5690 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Amazing as always! cant wait for the next one!

  • @yttryff6159
    @yttryff6159 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    3:23 wow wow wow it seems that the flesh that hates has a mutation I don't know how to travel across dimensions but that area means a clean scrubbing and then a burning and a removal of all tissue

  • @Xuix
    @Xuix 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Do crystals feed on rarity's magic to grow?

  • @icedaggerfan
    @icedaggerfan 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    i am ready for the horrors!!!!

  • @Sleepyduv
    @Sleepyduv 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Thank you again for letting me make art of this!! It came out beautifully

  • @TheGamingAnimator.
    @TheGamingAnimator. หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    15:27 you can actually hear the magic that is normally heard in the show! Great work on the small details!

  • @PhoenixFHeart100
    @PhoenixFHeart100 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    The latest content you’ve put out is simply amazing! Can’t wait for more Lost

  • @funny8823
    @funny8823 9 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Im so happy to find newer brony content online.

  • @rainbowsparkle1656
    @rainbowsparkle1656 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Three words: WHAT. THE. FUCK?!?! Rarity just straight up became a gemstone! Good thing this AU is nothing like all the other infections out there with terrifying stretched limbs and faces or extremely gory content, but it’s still horrifying to say the least. Good work losty, I’m interested in seeing if there’s going to be a part two!

  • @cian.o
    @cian.o หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Rarity, you putting all those body stones on those dresses is like if I vomited, used said vomit to paint a picture, and then everyone near it starts gagging.

  • @Jadeh678
    @Jadeh678 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    The voice acting is so spot on! The last recording gave me such chills. Great job!

  • @jackcapellini113
    @jackcapellini113 9 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Hey there! I love your narrations. They have so much character and personality to them.
    I have two recommendations for future narrations…
    1. Chapter 1 of Peter Benchley’s Jaws.
    2. “Nedry” from Micheal Crichton’s Jurassic Park.

  • @silver45470
    @silver45470 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    I can't wait to hear this marvelous piece of work!

  • @dragonquill3182
    @dragonquill3182 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Man, this was horrifying! Super well made and interesting but horrifying too. Also I'm wondering who Subject 5 is. Applejack? Sweetie Belle? Plus this all started after Twilight's death? So are the other princesses gone too? So many questions!