Because most Chinese novels are focused on physical or emotional abuse, regret, liver or stomach diseases. Unless they're themed on Wuxia then it is basically the protagonist surprising allies and enemies alike because of cheat abilities .
Tf? I was staying in my world n let fmc deal w/ her karma. Even system said it was working on redemption arc for other male lead? Trash system already fvcked him over 1st time. Mc left his wife n son 2 still help fmc? 🤡
Kevin the son being four when his dad died and then 10 years later continuing to call his resurrected father "Daddy" is weird. Roxana staying with Henry is strange.
I don’t think the title fits, but overall this story has no stakes. Henry’s too incompetent to give any antagonistic push back despite having been corrupted by murdering William & even having the literal plot on his side. Roxane knows William has evidence and chooses to stand by Henry because she needs him, but doesn’t do anything to stop William when he refuses to destroy the evidence. William sets up his revenge but because of the 1 month stipulation he leaves before anything substantial happens (stock prices dropping isn’t immediately a game winning hand) and we get no epilogue. Not to mention the son & FL also kind of just quickly accept everything without any real push back just “hey can you stay” “no” “ok we’ll learn to make do without you.”
Ok. One thing I need some clarification on, Kevin was 5 years old when William was killed, and 10 years had passed after William came back, so technically Kevin should have been 15 years old at the time. Why does the story try to make us think Kevin is still a child?
I understand the plot, but it was too cramped with many things put in a too short vid. It would have been better if the whole plot was explaining stuff more in-depth. Because it was lacking at this point, the story couldn't hold itself well. Why didn't the strategist react to the knowledge of Olivias killing 2 children and even trying to kill keving? And so on.
This should have been longer to add some background for everyone. Still a good story and will be listening to many times even if I am being baised since system stories will always be my favorite.
@CataleaSilla The MC already failed the mission and was living his best life with a family that loved and cherished him. The system practically begged him to go back to the mission world to help comfort Olivia just because she was going crazy, even though the system knew everything that happened between them and how bad Olivia treated him. Let's break it down: Imagine the person you're romantically involved with treated you like dirt and was abusive to you. You finally decide to leave, and while you're in another relationship, your parent (who knows you were abused) comes to you and days "Hey, for 30 days can you try and comfort your abusive ex? Don't you feel responsible for her emotions? It's just 30days, do it for me?". Even if he did get "revenge" on Henry, that was just a side quest. A good system would've just let Olivia suffer the consequences of her original actions.
Lol system, your author really is a trsh isn't it ?😂 Trying the redemption arc when your MC and FML are such trshy being? O_o Ending feel rushed.. i personally would have loved a real conversation between MC and his ex-wife, she seems to have developped in a better direction compared to 10y ago, if they talked now he can make her understand fully how she hurt him in the past and that the MC didn't hate her, didn't forgive her but didn't hate her. That way it would fulfill his mission too, since he came back for one once just to save her... Again. As for the son... A conversation with him wouldn't be bad too, he's 14 now if he can really learn about who his father is during this whole month he can grow up, because he won't be swayed by his mom and henry this time, that can only be good for hip to remember his real father's values etc
Ok, but what did he get in exchange, health, riches or superhuman stamina. Because the system should have given him something in return.
1st, also i wouldve just denied the systems request as my mission has already failed and I'm living my life happily
Well. After all system was his savior so that's understandable
I don't really get this system story's ware the mc tries to salvage a story the story gets ruined then you have to come back Years later to fix it
These “systems” are just excuses to make the MC a spineless loser. I don’t know why these MCs must be simps.
Because most Chinese novels are focused on physical or emotional abuse, regret, liver or stomach diseases. Unless they're themed on Wuxia then it is basically the protagonist surprising allies and enemies alike because of cheat abilities .
Tf? I was staying in my world n let fmc deal w/ her karma. Even system said it was working on redemption arc for other male lead? Trash system already fvcked him over 1st time. Mc left his wife n son 2 still help fmc? 🤡
Kevin the son being four when his dad died and then 10 years later continuing to call his resurrected father "Daddy" is weird. Roxana staying with Henry is strange.
I don’t think the title fits, but overall this story has no stakes. Henry’s too incompetent to give any antagonistic push back despite having been corrupted by murdering William & even having the literal plot on his side. Roxane knows William has evidence and chooses to stand by Henry because she needs him, but doesn’t do anything to stop William when he refuses to destroy the evidence. William sets up his revenge but because of the 1 month stipulation he leaves before anything substantial happens (stock prices dropping isn’t immediately a game winning hand) and we get no epilogue. Not to mention the son & FL also kind of just quickly accept everything without any real push back just “hey can you stay” “no” “ok we’ll learn to make do without you.”
Not even a response from the System
Ok. One thing I need some clarification on, Kevin was 5 years old when William was killed, and 10 years had passed after William came back, so technically Kevin should have been 15 years old at the time. Why does the story try to make us think Kevin is still a child?
I understand the plot, but it was too cramped with many things put in a too short vid.
It would have been better if the whole plot was explaining stuff more in-depth. Because it was lacking at this point, the story couldn't hold itself well.
Why didn't the strategist react to the knowledge of Olivias killing 2 children and even trying to kill keving?
And so on.
This should have been longer to add some background for everyone. Still a good story and will be listening to many times even if I am being baised since system stories will always be my favorite.
Good story
That ending felt kinda abrupt.
Skipped a few steps there on the return
System is the true villain.
how?im confused
@CataleaSilla The MC already failed the mission and was living his best life with a family that loved and cherished him. The system practically begged him to go back to the mission world to help comfort Olivia just because she was going crazy, even though the system knew everything that happened between them and how bad Olivia treated him.
Let's break it down: Imagine the person you're romantically involved with treated you like dirt and was abusive to you. You finally decide to leave, and while you're in another relationship, your parent (who knows you were abused) comes to you and days "Hey, for 30 days can you try and comfort your abusive ex? Don't you feel responsible for her emotions? It's just 30days, do it for me?".
Even if he did get "revenge" on Henry, that was just a side quest. A good system would've just let Olivia suffer the consequences of her original actions.
@@XenMaster2017 thank you for explaining 😁
You got system bro
That’s it????
10/10
Lol system, your author really is a trsh isn't it ?😂 Trying the redemption arc when your MC and FML are such trshy being? O_o
Ending feel rushed.. i personally would have loved a real conversation between MC and his ex-wife, she seems to have developped in a better direction compared to 10y ago, if they talked now he can make her understand fully how she hurt him in the past and that the MC didn't hate her, didn't forgive her but didn't hate her. That way it would fulfill his mission too, since he came back for one once just to save her... Again.
As for the son... A conversation with him wouldn't be bad too, he's 14 now if he can really learn about who his father is during this whole month he can grow up, because he won't be swayed by his mom and henry this time, that can only be good for hip to remember his real father's values etc
Thank you. This video is not worth my time. I better write the story myself.
Bru this ai author is using pentium with 512 mb of memory or just rendering is not fast lol
That or he's procrastinating all the time.
second baby