5 Ways to Improve an Original Character

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  • @harrisonwynn5201
    @harrisonwynn5201 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5287

    Patrick is going to kill everybody on the last episode of spongebob.

    • @red_lonk4051
      @red_lonk4051 3 ปีที่แล้ว +144

      XD I'm sorry, I messed up the 69 likes but this was too godly

    • @fizzbee5137
      @fizzbee5137 3 ปีที่แล้ว +37

      Ahh yes, I can't wait

    • @fcs5510
      @fcs5510 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      Nice

    • @whitneyfallon
      @whitneyfallon 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Thanks pizza I don't watch it

    • @egginafryingpan
      @egginafryingpan 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      yes

  • @graceoartyo
    @graceoartyo 5 ปีที่แล้ว +13320

    gravity falls took this very literally. Look at that villain. It is a triangle.

  • @nikoozen6049
    @nikoozen6049 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4668

    Ando: "don't make your character live in the void"
    Gaster: *am i a joke to you?*

    • @nightingale3847
      @nightingale3847 4 ปีที่แล้ว +269

      DaRandom Flora
      one of my OC’s that literally live in a place called ‘the void’: *b r u h*

    • @anmer9272
      @anmer9272 4 ปีที่แล้ว +240

      Toby Fox is rolling in his office or wherever he is.

    • @yourlocalpharmacist7679
      @yourlocalpharmacist7679 4 ปีที่แล้ว +84

      My world legit is in the void lol

    • @kitchelle
      @kitchelle 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

      Kaexe 𝗂 𝖽𝗈 𝗇𝗈𝗍 𝗎𝗇𝖽𝖾𝗋𝗌𝗍𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗒𝗈𝗎...

    • @kavuu7329
      @kavuu7329 4 ปีที่แล้ว +114

      so an undertale comment
      _in a video that has nothing to do with undertale_
      ...i love it.

  • @moonlightwolf8425
    @moonlightwolf8425 4 ปีที่แล้ว +845

    "Triangles can be threatening"
    *Shows Sonic*

    • @edwardbo4666
      @edwardbo4666 3 ปีที่แล้ว +111

      She shows him after saying untouchable, and also his existence is threatening even if he isn't.

    • @donnadisney7381
      @donnadisney7381 3 ปีที่แล้ว +34

      Hand over the rings or I’ll shoot!

    • @CraftyTween
      @CraftyTween 2 ปีที่แล้ว +39

      Gotta go fast *nee noo nee noo*

    • @unitysparticlesystem
      @unitysparticlesystem 2 ปีที่แล้ว +24

      " Sonic.exe intensifies "

    • @diogocaetano1ALT
      @diogocaetano1ALT 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      I agree sonic is scary

  • @mothmanthemothman2754
    @mothmanthemothman2754 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3157

    Triangle: sonic
    Me: wait he is evil-?

    • @knitskatra6837
      @knitskatra6837 5 ปีที่แล้ว +325

      He's active and somewhat dangerous

    • @mintyturner9925
      @mintyturner9925 5 ปีที่แล้ว +26

      Lol true

    • @mintyturner9925
      @mintyturner9925 5 ปีที่แล้ว +93

      But it triggered me cuz he is a hero
      HE IS TRIANGLE SHAPED CUZ HE IS A HEDGEHOG...
      Is being a hedgehog bad? ;(

    • @lixiesky
      @lixiesky 5 ปีที่แล้ว +21

      I thought the exact same thing XD

    • @mintyturner9925
      @mintyturner9925 5 ปีที่แล้ว +68

      Yeah.. It was a bad example.
      Put a pic of Shadow and it might fit XD

  • @darksniperdog
    @darksniperdog 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8337

    Ferb I'm sorry
    Phineas is a triangle. He's gonna betray you

  • @lexieloaf9203
    @lexieloaf9203 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2194

    “If your character has a lot of dramatic shadows, it might be about horror or psychological drama”
    You heard it, All Might

    • @tomatoketchup3848
      @tomatoketchup3848 3 ปีที่แล้ว +150

      Do you mean JOJO shading?

    • @idiott101
      @idiott101 3 ปีที่แล้ว +223

      LOL- ESPECIALLY CAUSE HE JUST WENT- "Hey kid eat this hair it will give you superpowers" LMAO-

    • @user-yg4om8rd1z
      @user-yg4om8rd1z 3 ปีที่แล้ว +126

      @@idiott101 *”i t l l g i v e y a s u p e r p o w e r s”*

    • @idiott101
      @idiott101 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      @@user-yg4om8rd1z lmao-

    • @tan-tan5913
      @tan-tan5913 3 ปีที่แล้ว +88

      @@idiott101 *”E A T T H I S”*

  • @rickdegruccio6869
    @rickdegruccio6869 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1860

    Ando: Do they dress their age?
    Also Ando: Shows boss baby

  • @KindaNotReally
    @KindaNotReally 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4789

    I can't believe that you didn't describe Dory as "forgetful yet unforgettable"

    • @misscloudycreations
      @misscloudycreations 3 ปีที่แล้ว +54

      Oh hey I watch your videos your art is great UwU

    • @b1rthfl0w3r
      @b1rthfl0w3r 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      You're here AAAAA
      You are amazing

    • @momoka9873
      @momoka9873 3 ปีที่แล้ว +23

      t'is but an opportunity missed

    • @hellstoastt
      @hellstoastt 3 ปีที่แล้ว +24

      yeah!! dory is super unforgettable!!!
      wait who's dory?

    • @griffindettman98
      @griffindettman98 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I don't understand the fuss over dory, but I respect your opinion.

  • @cheyennemarchetta7554
    @cheyennemarchetta7554 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3075

    Did she really just casually take a 6 month break? And then drop this awesome work off and leave again? I want more

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +145

      Well if all goes well I will have a new video out this month, though it’s going to be a live presentation

    • @kittypawanimates1386
      @kittypawanimates1386 5 ปีที่แล้ว +40

      @@AndosArtTips better than nothing! Take breaks if you need though- I'm new to this channel and I'm already worrying about someone overworking

    • @emiled8409
      @emiled8409 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Half a year... Yea take some time

    • @natsukifan8736
      @natsukifan8736 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Like, steven universe nowadays. They make a few awesome episodes then hiatus.

    • @vega1123
      @vega1123 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      >talking about hiatus without mentioning Berserk

  • @scistical
    @scistical 4 ปีที่แล้ว +835

    OC: *dies*
    Me: *gives video*
    OC: I have awaken

  • @joonyi1227
    @joonyi1227 4 ปีที่แล้ว +999

    Squares are big strong and sturdy
    Me: hehe sponge bob square pants

    • @user-uk6lf1qp4c
      @user-uk6lf1qp4c 4 ปีที่แล้ว +58

      Expectation subversion buddy

    • @icantbelieveyouvedonethis1813
      @icantbelieveyouvedonethis1813 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      @@user-uk6lf1qp4c what part of SpongeBob subverts your expectations?

    • @epikitee2186
      @epikitee2186 3 ปีที่แล้ว +46

      ​@@icantbelieveyouvedonethis1813 spongebob is known for being a bouncy, bubbly character, which are traits much more associated with circles than squares.

    • @icantbelieveyouvedonethis1813
      @icantbelieveyouvedonethis1813 3 ปีที่แล้ว +52

      @@epikitee2186 exactly, a lot of his design is very round. His shoes, fingers, eyes, etc. Nobody expects spongebob to be a tough guy, he's very visibly an innocent, bubbly character

    • @epikitee2186
      @epikitee2186 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      ​@@icantbelieveyouvedonethis1813 i was trying to point out what i thought were the expectations being subverted, namely that his name literally has "square" in it, but he has circle traits. i do agree that he is a very round and bubbly looking character, though.

  • @emile9663
    @emile9663 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2897

    ″Say you have a character, unless they live in an absolute void-″
    *has literally 10+ OCs who live in voids*
    welp *good thing they can leave their voids*
    edit: its been three years please why am i still getting comments
    o and by the way theyve been completely revamped and then promptly abandoned so rip these guys

    • @coixerra7319
      @coixerra7319 5 ปีที่แล้ว +96

      That-
      That sounds really interesting I wanna learn more

    • @emile9663
      @emile9663 5 ปีที่แล้ว +148

      @@coixerra7319 Oh, thanks! So the concept is that they're either made by the void or kidnapped into it, and they all have very *very* different views on no longer being human (or witch) or being made from one themself
      Also they can leave the void if they need to, but some don't because they're either scared of social contact/outside world or because they're just more comfortable in the solid endless color and lack of stimulus (like trees, wind, smells)
      Thanks again for liking it, it's my passion project I've been working on for *years*

    • @coixerra7319
      @coixerra7319 5 ปีที่แล้ว +64

      @@emile9663 Woah that sounds amazing! I have a passion project too but it mostly consisted of a crappy magic system and some spooky monsters before I also scrapped the magic and gave them all guns lol. The premise isn't that great but I love each of my characters even if they're probably not the best written. I've worked on this for years too and it went from a light hearted fantasy to a horror in the meantime.

    • @coixerra7319
      @coixerra7319 5 ปีที่แล้ว +32

      @@emile9663 Still yours sounds way cooler, I'm actually really excited to see what you do with it, do you have an instagram or tumblr account I can follow you on?

    • @emile9663
      @emile9663 5 ปีที่แล้ว +26

      @@coixerra7319 I don't have an Instagram or Tumblr account YET. I'm severely limited to literary stories right now. Once I get the hang of anatomy and character design, I will open those up and start posting comics and stories.
      I do have a magic concept in the making, since the void ocs don't technically belong (anymore) to the overall world where most of the stories take place. I may not have the mainstream social media, but I do (cringily enough) have a Wattpad, which is currently empty until I'm better at story telling

  • @rhjubarb
    @rhjubarb 5 ปีที่แล้ว +492

    *Triangles often give out threatening vibes*
    Me: - Looks at Bill Cipher -
    Also Me: Cute.

  • @pepsiprita5746
    @pepsiprita5746 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1684

    Me: *makes an oc*
    Me: *draws them a few more times being happy*
    Also me: *gives them a traumatizing backstory*

    • @someonerandom3609
      @someonerandom3609 4 ปีที่แล้ว +29

      Same

    • @kaexewires7531
      @kaexewires7531 4 ปีที่แล้ว +76

      God why are some of these comments so accurate to my oc...

    • @grubblebubble217
      @grubblebubble217 4 ปีที่แล้ว +23

      Omg are you me? Am I you?!!! I DO THE SAME THING WITH LIME

    • @BrokenDreamMaker
      @BrokenDreamMaker 4 ปีที่แล้ว +27

      Haha my oc’s have emotional backstories
      :,)

    • @KLF-jk3zy
      @KLF-jk3zy 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Same

  • @batgh0ul
    @batgh0ul 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5247

    Main goal:
    Making a good OC
    Obstacle:
    Not knowing how to draw.
    edit: ok it's been 3 years and I'm getting notifications for this LMAOAO yes I know about picrew now!! thus, I've been practicing drawing since then and I think I've improved a lot. enough to at least give my characters a face I suppose. but thank you all

    • @aaronking1181
      @aaronking1181 4 ปีที่แล้ว +138

      Write

    • @batgh0ul
      @batgh0ul 4 ปีที่แล้ว +228

      @@aaronking1181 Hm yes writing for a physical description, perhaps lore.
      not the same thing tho, I would have to pay someone to draw for me :')

    • @youraveragesub
      @youraveragesub 4 ปีที่แล้ว +39

      @@batgh0ul Maybe a light novel.

    • @mrmoo400
      @mrmoo400 4 ปีที่แล้ว +22

      Maybe you can go to art school . . . ?

    • @conceitedsloth9882
      @conceitedsloth9882 4 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      Liina
      I just downloaded live portrait to get a basic idea of what my characters look like

  • @iriswoof1614
    @iriswoof1614 5 ปีที่แล้ว +756

    Me: *sees hairy cup of tea*
    Also me: *shivers*

    • @lulutea77
      @lulutea77 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Me too

    • @zuku7868
      @zuku7868 4 ปีที่แล้ว +28

      as a brit, I am disgusted, but also slightly amused.

    • @iheartluffy8880
      @iheartluffy8880 3 ปีที่แล้ว +22

      now that’s a cursed image

    • @nononeofit7783
      @nononeofit7783 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Don't watch harry potter then

    • @Wereboypiko
      @Wereboypiko 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      lol

  • @ichabodelclown1144
    @ichabodelclown1144 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3484

    Me : kill them
    Others : no
    Me : kill them off
    Others : that’s really dark
    Me : bring them back and make them suffer more
    Others : how about no
    Edit
    (I made this so long ago eek to clarify my character sees ghosts and it’s a main part of the story when characters die off )

    • @raykel568
      @raykel568 5 ปีที่แล้ว +60

      Big boy mood-

    • @alanamorris1984
      @alanamorris1984 5 ปีที่แล้ว +22

      Yeah that's not funny

    • @emptycanvas8609
      @emptycanvas8609 5 ปีที่แล้ว +58

      Basically homestuck...

    • @emptycanvas8609
      @emptycanvas8609 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@greencup4568 Nice pfp. Fefipeta I think?

    • @emptycanvas8609
      @emptycanvas8609 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@greencup4568 Whups, been a while. Xp pfp does fit the whole dying and coming back to life. And then dying again... '-'

  • @eletrica_
    @eletrica_ 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1142

    Me: Feels bad when I draw my OCs sad or injured, so always draw them happy.
    Also me: Give them a sad and tragic past and thinks how I'm going to make them suffer emotionally in the story, to show later a character development.

    • @cuturtimeshort1450
      @cuturtimeshort1450 3 ปีที่แล้ว +72

      Lol, I smile when i write them sad.

    • @saturniiiidae
      @saturniiiidae 3 ปีที่แล้ว +21

      CutUrTimeShort
      O_O

    • @notherelol
      @notherelol 3 ปีที่แล้ว +48

      I have a super sassy gay snake boi who is super smooth and always so bright so when ever i hurt him it feels like im hurting myself. Hes too good for such things-
      *My cHilD*

    • @zipp3rf1sh95
      @zipp3rf1sh95 3 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      LITERALLY SAME SGDSETRDY
      ONE OF MY MAIN OC'S IS A CYCLOPS CAT WHO ALWAYS SMILES

    • @finnthehat
      @finnthehat 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Yesss I start get watery eyes and I erase and draw smiley faces

  • @bananabro1010
    @bananabro1010 4 ปีที่แล้ว +286

    "Kind monsters.."
    Me: *UNDERTALE*

  • @DavinLong
    @DavinLong 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1057

    Another great example of #4 is from Spider Man Into the Spider Verse! They use different art styles on different kinds of Spider-Men and Women from Anime, Graffiti, Cartoony, Noir, and Comic Book, and yet it never feels jarring

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +84

      Also a really great use of Shape Language! I wish it was out when I was making this video, because I for sure would have put Kingpin in the square section, he had such a great design!

    • @pianopanicattack
      @pianopanicattack 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Davin, your profile picture gives me life. I’ve seen Big Hero 6 almost 70 times and I will never tire of it!

    • @mintyturner9925
      @mintyturner9925 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      I saw that movie recently, and honestly.. There is ALOT of shape

    • @pianopanicattack
      @pianopanicattack 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      It’s a great story, it all moves along beautifully (but *somebody* didn’t need to *die* if you know what I mean.)

    • @mintyturner9925
      @mintyturner9925 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@pianopanicattack I know...
      - DONT READ ON 4 SPOILERS -
      miles couldve shown his identity to his uncle during the scene when prower was in his apartment :P
      Like legit I sat there saying:
      MILES BRO TELL HIM....

  • @QueenCloveroftheice
    @QueenCloveroftheice 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2840

    Costuming is my faaaaavorite part of character design, mostly because that means I can go crazy with coming up with adorable outfits for my girl characters :D

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +70

      QueenCloveroftheice Costuming is one of my favorite parts too! Especially if I’m working off of a theme!

    • @QueenCloveroftheice
      @QueenCloveroftheice 5 ปีที่แล้ว +53

      @@AndosArtTips Oh, and if your story takes place in a fantasy world or historical time period, and you can design those ornate fashions for your characters... true bliss.

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +40

      QueenCloveroftheice absolutely! I love looking at old photos and costuming books to reference for my period fashion! 💖

    • @Yggdrasilincarnate
      @Yggdrasilincarnate 5 ปีที่แล้ว +32

      Definitely designing cute outfits for girl characters is great. Why oh why is men’s fashion so dull??

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +26

      Hard to find references for mens period clothes too 😞 I wish that western guy’s clothes were given more range, but India and China have especially lovely stuff

  • @notoriousnosk8876
    @notoriousnosk8876 4 ปีที่แล้ว +328

    My OCs don’t exist I can’t draw but they’re pretty okay in my head

    • @loveareej
      @loveareej 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      Same

    • @cuturtimeshort1450
      @cuturtimeshort1450 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      YES!
      I'm thinking of taking classes to draw as a side project, but I don't know how much time it would take away from my writing.

    • @blueghost4769
      @blueghost4769 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      I usually create them in games or avatar creators online

    • @Yu-jiSenna
      @Yu-jiSenna 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I’m bad at art too, so I insert pictures into a drawing app I have and change the colours so it looks like them.

    • @An_Entire_Lime
      @An_Entire_Lime 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      hey I couldnt draw either but every time dem bad oc ideas came up I drawed a little and now I still cant draw for shit but Im a bit better

  • @kisu_1919
    @kisu_1919 4 ปีที่แล้ว +211

    *When you're the story writer and the fandom of your story at the same time*

    • @metra8604
      @metra8604 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      yep.

    • @flannelfan433
      @flannelfan433 2 ปีที่แล้ว +23

      Now that's some next level dedication

    • @Gr4ceful4life
      @Gr4ceful4life ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@flannelfan433 I suddenly feel praised lmao, thanks mate

    • @Man_Jr._Studios
      @Man_Jr._Studios ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Relatable af

    • @artisticfox_vw
      @artisticfox_vw ปีที่แล้ว +1

      This is me

  • @zooer64
    @zooer64 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1082

    How I make my ocs!
    Me: *listening to music*
    Me: God, if only I had someone to relate to it-
    Also me: OC MAKING TIME

    • @teraspeXt
      @teraspeXt 4 ปีที่แล้ว +38

      Why is this so relatable tho.

    • @Official_Nerd
      @Official_Nerd 4 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      That's me when i see cute wigs tho

    • @nightingale3847
      @nightingale3847 4 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Zooer this is me listening to
      *Any. Flipping. Song*

    • @alienqueen3324
      @alienqueen3324 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      MEEE

    • @SQTXD
      @SQTXD 4 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      How I do it is.....
      Inspiration from pinterest

  • @chester2963
    @chester2963 5 ปีที่แล้ว +581

    Wait... I have one question...
    How was your sandwich?

    • @stoopiosproductions3130
      @stoopiosproductions3130 5 ปีที่แล้ว +27

      It made her STROOONG

    • @ThreeBeeHDb
      @ThreeBeeHDb 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      At the time I am reading this, your comment is like right next to marsiiart's comment
      She asked pretty much the same exact thing

    • @cringecentral1197
      @cringecentral1197 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Stoopio's Productions nice TF2 reference

    • @colatheprotogen3744
      @colatheprotogen3744 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Don’t you mean sandvich?

    • @metthew1846
      @metthew1846 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It's rotted

  • @randomdude4685
    @randomdude4685 4 ปีที่แล้ว +296

    Ando: How do they dress?
    Me(A warrior cats fan): They wear fur...?

    • @possums154
      @possums154 3 ปีที่แล้ว +46

      *W-wear* fur? Did they *kill* someone to get their fur?

    • @gamesemail8980
      @gamesemail8980 3 ปีที่แล้ว +20

      Yesss warrior cats forever

    • @meggamiauw4266
      @meggamiauw4266 3 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      @@possums154 they're litteral cats. cats.

    • @possums154
      @possums154 3 ปีที่แล้ว +24

      @@meggamiauw4266 I know, it's just funny that the thing for having fur (as a cat in the comment) is "wear fur"

    • @osumguild6513
      @osumguild6513 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      SAME

  • @grubblebubble217
    @grubblebubble217 4 ปีที่แล้ว +134

    Ando: your character’s story!
    Me: **sweats in Undertale OC**

    • @chillway5776
      @chillway5776 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      Actualy, most of Undertale MAIN characters have an good backstory.
      Pick up Asgore and Flowey as examples.

    • @themyconidwitch
      @themyconidwitch ปีที่แล้ว

      @@chillway5776 damn right

    • @aaamogusthespiderever2566
      @aaamogusthespiderever2566 ปีที่แล้ว

      what about the friskies tho =(

  • @ThatOneGuy-fi5su
    @ThatOneGuy-fi5su 5 ปีที่แล้ว +681

    5 ways to make a Mary sue good
    I'd honestly like to see 5 ways to make a basic Mary sue into a actual well designed, fleshed out character

    • @ratlinggull2223
      @ratlinggull2223 5 ปีที่แล้ว +126

      1. Give her a weakness.
      Oh wait

    • @nasserfirelordarts6574
      @nasserfirelordarts6574 5 ปีที่แล้ว +44

      @@ratlinggull2223 unnecessarily a weakness, maybe a superior or a challenge

    • @ulyssesdenice5071
      @ulyssesdenice5071 5 ปีที่แล้ว +47

      Easy
      1:obliterate them

    • @HarbingerOfWAH
      @HarbingerOfWAH 4 ปีที่แล้ว +20

      @@ulyssesdenice5071 Great! Now we just need 4 more ways.

    • @ulyssesdenice5071
      @ulyssesdenice5071 4 ปีที่แล้ว +101

      @@HarbingerOfWAH
      1.Obliterate
      2.Rewrite
      3.Add some fricking flaws in there
      4.Redesign
      5.Constructive Criticism

  • @someguy6966
    @someguy6966 5 ปีที่แล้ว +884

    I literally just got the notification for this when I was watching your video on "5 Things that can kill an OC"

  • @kokichiyoursupremeleader.1713
    @kokichiyoursupremeleader.1713 4 ปีที่แล้ว +338

    You’re forgetting another important thing:Emotional and personal attachment.
    The crucial thing about that is that a person is more motivated to continue with that character. Those OC’s with personal attachment make it easier to write. (Assuming you are gonna write with them).

    • @margoxathegamer9371
      @margoxathegamer9371 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Also color langauge

    • @redheartsunglasses
      @redheartsunglasses 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Yes, this is why most of my ocs are based off of parts of me.
      Oc 1: Bubbly, happy, chatty, intelligent, and secretly kinda s******.
      Oc 2: Cold, sarcastic, serious, blunt, kind of rude
      Oc 3: Cutesy, slightly childish and appears happy all the time, but is secretly really manipulative and homicidal.
      Oc 4: idk where she fits in this one is just a tsundere lesbian

    • @metra8604
      @metra8604 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@redheartsunglasses same. and i have a heck ton of ocs. they all have SOMETHING similar to me, be it small or big. do you want me to give a list of what part of me they are?

    • @redheartsunglasses
      @redheartsunglasses 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@metra8604 yes

    • @metra8604
      @metra8604 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@redheartsunglasses ok
      TW: self harm, 5u1c1d3
      Sabrina: eyes. the eyes are a mix of different colours, which is exactly what my eyes are. also, her eyes glow. as to represent the fact that to me my eyes 'stand out'.
      slim: mainly the mask they wear. i wanna hide my face, same with slim. and i wanna wear a cat mask if I do, which is what they have.
      elis: taken away from her best friend. i had to move away from my best friend and i have no contact whatsoever. she got separated from her best friend because her parents wanted to 'protect' her.
      nameless: i constantly try to be kind, but no matter how hard i try i end up hurting everyone and loving it. Nameless tries to be nice, but ends up hurting or even killing them.
      aaron: mental health issues and others. his death is 5u1c1d3 because throughout the whole story he's struggling with self harm, depressive symptoms and 5u1c1d3al thoughts. i also struggle with these.
      sara: just kinda pessimistic. i keep looking on the downside of life. of course, i can be optimistic but that's not often.
      ty: one personality i have, made into an oc. just a mess. scared, confused, panicked, relies on others etc.
      fiz: another personality into an oc. fiz is manipulative, parasitic, just toxic. and may want to kill everyone. more toxic side of me. definitely not a friend.
      Tezinn.. lonely. just lonely. this dude is trapped with only himself, nothing else. and when he gets out, he keeps ruining friendships because he's extremely socially awkward. i think you get what im representing here.
      Thetris: what i want to be. Thetris comforts people in their last moments. they have wings, representing freedom. i want to be free. they got out a tough situation and now live a happier life, just being a silhouette with wings roaming the land.
      zero: how i wish i lived. i just wanna live life having fun, trying new things, experimenting, etc. also i wish to just be a robot sometimes. a robot who can just turn off things anytime it wants. zero is a robot.
      adam: i wanna just live with a friend. not have a kid. Adam has no interest in kids, and the closest thing to a kid is zero.
      dan: i wish i wasn't afraid of water. i want to embrace it. i want to be like dan when it comes to water. care-free.
      danielle: she can fight very well. i want to be able to fight like her.
      calabaza: my love for fire. she is able to burn things and not get hurt. i am not. i am not able to burn things and not get hurt, 90% im put near fire i get hurt. i don't like it. i don't even have access to anything good enough to burn a house down.
      Invert: he seems like an innocent kid when in reality he's a little shi-
      rakel: gun. i like guns. she likes guns. gun.
      Elisabeth: she's beautiful. i wanna be beautiful.
      candice: i wanna be a boy but im scared. she just wants to dress like a boy but can't.
      janice: a helpful demon. although, it may hurt, i do help.
      so opinion?

  • @goldsidion3086
    @goldsidion3086 3 ปีที่แล้ว +285

    Goal: Make a unique OC
    Obstacle: Drawing basic hair,clothes,and eyes

    • @An_Entire_Lime
      @An_Entire_Lime 3 ปีที่แล้ว +30

      goal: making an OC Im happy with
      Obstacle: myself

    • @allright9785
      @allright9785 2 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      I rly cant fucking draw hands😭

    • @enigmatic2878
      @enigmatic2878 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@An_Entire_Lime ... same

    • @themyconidwitch
      @themyconidwitch ปีที่แล้ว +3

      solution:draw a robot

    • @Man_Jr._Studios
      @Man_Jr._Studios ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Hey man, one of my OCs literally have dots for eyes, spiked up hair and a long sleeve shirt, lol you’re totally fine

  • @animated_finn
    @animated_finn 5 ปีที่แล้ว +232

    My oc : *soft, kind, is loyal no matter what, shy, quiet, quite girly, (basically it’s my pfp)*
    My friend: oh he lost his eye. He looks really mean and threatening.
    Me: *B O I*

  • @mochiimochii4811
    @mochiimochii4811 5 ปีที่แล้ว +555

    Number 7: have fun

    • @nell4790
      @nell4790 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Preach

    • @icecoldpolaroid
      @icecoldpolaroid 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      No.. If you want a good OC you will be confused and pissed until the drawing is good and it is on you wall. Then fun!

    • @SlightlyArtsy
      @SlightlyArtsy 5 ปีที่แล้ว +29

      It's all fun and games until you have to differentiate your new character from the 70 other one's you've already made, then it's not so fun anymore.

    • @dizzee6089
      @dizzee6089 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Oh yeah yeah!

    • @pointytoes780
      @pointytoes780 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Oh yeah yeah

  • @monaelsafy1098
    @monaelsafy1098 4 ปีที่แล้ว +77

    "A cutesy villane"
    Me: i think cozy glow is one yes, yes she is

    • @meggamiauw4266
      @meggamiauw4266 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSS!!!!!!!!
      I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE THAT KNOWS MLP!!!

    • @mychemicalcoffee3022
      @mychemicalcoffee3022 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      EXACTLY!
      I love MLP!

    • @purpl3x3d93
      @purpl3x3d93 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      horse

    • @milenakrysinka3133
      @milenakrysinka3133 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@purpl3x3d93 pony

    • @aniahliepard
      @aniahliepard 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      While I agree, there's just something about Cozy Glow motivation-wise (considering it's lacking) that makes her being a cute villain no one expects... kind of confusing

  • @ericathehedgefox5725
    @ericathehedgefox5725 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    2:48 "they are often used in antagonists, rivals and cunning characters"
    *shows picture of a protagonist*

  • @notmyaustria
    @notmyaustria 5 ปีที่แล้ว +496

    _makes my OCs gay for each other_
    *haha yes*

  • @t.q.quinn25
    @t.q.quinn25 5 ปีที่แล้ว +351

    I literally was laying in bed for 6 hours wondering why I can’t go to sleep, it’s currently 5:51am where I am, then I just remembered that I took my medicine before I slept, which means intotal I had 200 grams of caffeine. During those 6 hours laying in my bed, I created a few new ocs wit a whole plot to correspond with my main story line....I’m still up...oof

    • @lauren3650
      @lauren3650 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Last night I took my medicine and i couldnt sleep for 5 hours after my "original bedtime" (10 pm). The medicine helps but has side effects :')

    • @starpop3737
      @starpop3737 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      I feel like people can have the weirdest story behind how they came up with their story

    • @keyketkey
      @keyketkey 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Legend says that after two months Tanime & Art was still awake

    • @fayahmeraine1574
      @fayahmeraine1574 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That happened to me last night

    • @VV_irl
      @VV_irl 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      It:s 5:01 AM for me right now hhahauegeudgdhd
      Edit: I'm going to try and sleep after this video

  • @Jordinary
    @Jordinary 4 ปีที่แล้ว +52

    AFTER READING ALL THE COMMENTS
    me: wow I'm not the only one who experiences all this things🙃

    • @Man_Jr._Studios
      @Man_Jr._Studios ปีที่แล้ว

      We’re all artists suffering together 😂

  • @silvermoon8184
    @silvermoon8184 4 ปีที่แล้ว +462

    “What were they doing before the story?”
    Me: they were living
    “What are they doing during the story”
    Me: they’re dead
    “How are they left at the end of th-“
    Me: THEY’RE DEADDD

    • @matiabayneh4192
      @matiabayneh4192 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      👌

    • @SketchUT
      @SketchUT 3 ปีที่แล้ว +77

      For me:
      •they were vibing
      •they are vibing
      •they will be vibing

    • @memowl3663
      @memowl3663 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      Sketch UT
      they do be vibing tho

    • @mikeb439
      @mikeb439 3 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      Who are they,the Afton family?

    • @barbaraujo3811
      @barbaraujo3811 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      ITS BEEN SO LOOOOONG SINCE I LAST HAVE SING THIS SONG, LOST TO THIS MONSTER, TO *DA MAN BEHIND DA SLAUGHTEEER*

  • @lilylou3848
    @lilylou3848 5 ปีที่แล้ว +183

    Circles are Hufflepuffs, squares are Gryffindors, and triangles are Slytherins! Ravenclaws are just the whole Subverting Expectations.

    • @nell6044
      @nell6044 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      the circle was blue-

    • @aaronking1181
      @aaronking1181 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Its 2020...

    • @tempolynnrealofficial
      @tempolynnrealofficial 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      I guess I subvert expectations
      Ya yeet

    • @nell6044
      @nell6044 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      are we seriously ignoring the fact that the circle was blue??

    • @moonstraka
      @moonstraka 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I guess I’m a triangle

  • @indaygarutay2263
    @indaygarutay2263 5 ปีที่แล้ว +178

    "Your characters story" me: hmmm....
    Me: Ah i know! **types in my o'cs bio**
    My o'cs story bio: she ate a baseball once
    Me: Perfect!

    • @ThreeBeeHDb
      @ThreeBeeHDb 5 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      You sir...are a genius

    • @elliot9164
      @elliot9164 4 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      Was it fried or steamed

    • @MrParkerman6
      @MrParkerman6 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      ...and they call them steamed despite the fact that they are obviously grilled?

    • @yarraidalg
      @yarraidalg 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      w wha whaaat

    • @kaexewires7531
      @kaexewires7531 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@elliot9164 atleast it was good if it was...

  • @auraisangel5003
    @auraisangel5003 4 ปีที่แล้ว +127

    My character lives outside of the Multiverse she exists in. Think of it as like living in between game files.
    Soooooooo, technically...
    My character DOES live in a void.

    • @chaoscreeture
      @chaoscreeture 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Error?-

    • @Yu-jiSenna
      @Yu-jiSenna 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I am liking these Undertale comments on an unrelated video

    • @auraisangel5003
      @auraisangel5003 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yay- Fellow Undertale people-

    • @An_Entire_Lime
      @An_Entire_Lime 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      why is there so much undertale in non undertale things? didnt that die a eon ago?

    • @Yu-jiSenna
      @Yu-jiSenna 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@An_Entire_Lime *Never*

  • @user-vk3du4nx7h
    @user-vk3du4nx7h 4 ปีที่แล้ว +50

    *7:37*
    *Soul did well protecting Maka. I actually cried and I thought my babey was gonna die :'(*

  • @zephyrweather
    @zephyrweather 5 ปีที่แล้ว +246

    Me: *sees kaneki from Tokyo ghoul and voltron characters*
    Me: *Screeches in anime*

    • @downthespyral
      @downthespyral 5 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      ☆StormySkiez☆ bUT voltron isn’t technically an anime...
      ,’/

    • @zephyrweather
      @zephyrweather 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      @@downthespyral *it's close enough lol*

    • @ebony2622
      @ebony2622 5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      *shrieks in weeb*

    • @wolfiebun5842
      @wolfiebun5842 5 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      For voltron it should be
      *screeches in trainwreck*
      (Like i love the show and all but bruh. Season eight....)

    • @starrod616
      @starrod616 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      *Insert I am a pen meme here*

  • @debraisaac9136
    @debraisaac9136 5 ปีที่แล้ว +141

    I should've left when the word spoilers flashed across the screen....WHYYYYY?!?!

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +21

      Ah, sorry about that! Still a really great show though, and there’s still a bunch of great twists in it!

    • @maddiechapman7564
      @maddiechapman7564 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      One unrelated question, do you like “8:26”?

    • @debraisaac9136
      @debraisaac9136 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@maddiechapman7564 I haven't personally watched Voltron: legendary defenders, but my brothers have and they LOVE that show!😊

    • @maddiechapman7564
      @maddiechapman7564 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      If you like sci-fi, then watch it

    • @debraisaac9136
      @debraisaac9136 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@maddiechapman7564 I will! Thanks for the tip!🤗

  • @snailkat
    @snailkat 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    “Triangles are threatening”
    Bill Cipher: 👁👄👁

    • @cabbagemerchantt
      @cabbagemerchantt 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Bill has only one eye, and his mouth is his eye, so it's just: 👁️

  • @cyanity1017
    @cyanity1017 4 ปีที่แล้ว +541

    Me: gives character soft edges, hearts in her design, makes her nice and gives her a sweet family
    Person: Aww, she's so cute!
    Me: also she's a demon
    Person: *WHAT THE-*

    • @matiabayneh4192
      @matiabayneh4192 4 ปีที่แล้ว +40

      PLOT TWIST

    • @teraspeXt
      @teraspeXt 4 ปีที่แล้ว +44

      this. this is something i end up doing all the time

    • @koitkracked472
      @koitkracked472 4 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Sounds like a God and Angel dub but with artists and other people

    • @megmalins
      @megmalins 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      I would actually like that OC (it was OF so I edited it )
      Oh, why?
      Weellllll you see I once came across a little "cute" flower
      Flowey!
      And he used to be a cinnamon roll
      And then turned into a demon flower

    • @springtrap-fan-stan8540
      @springtrap-fan-stan8540 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I actually have an OC who is a demon.... She has a heart shape on her chest. My friend said she cute (she a winged wolf)

  • @CaptainSoftboy501
    @CaptainSoftboy501 5 ปีที่แล้ว +306

    Okay, but I really love the examples you give because it helps me understand and connect what you're trying to say. Thanks for this! :D

  • @hannahbranch7770
    @hannahbranch7770 5 ปีที่แล้ว +58

    Ando: Squares are usually strong Characters
    Me: I can already guess the exception.
    (the Krusty Krab theme plays in the background.)

    • @grubblebubble217
      @grubblebubble217 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Wait you mean spongebob theme?

    • @undercookedsalmon
      @undercookedsalmon 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Bro wdym Spongebob isnt strong, he can 1 shot God himself

  • @Elinahette69
    @Elinahette69 3 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    Triangle: sharp threatening active uninviteing
    Peridot in future: *am i a joke to you*

  • @cyanide_crow7970
    @cyanide_crow7970 4 ปีที่แล้ว +124

    "Don't make your character live in a void"
    My OC when she teleports:
    **casually breaks reality for a second and transcends time and space through a void**
    Edit: My OC just teleports regularly now I've fixed her.

    • @An_Entire_Lime
      @An_Entire_Lime 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      my ocs: pathetic! *becomes void*

    • @metra8604
      @metra8604 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      my ocs: amateurs. *gets dropped in the place often called the void time to time and are chill with it unless you're a first timer then you're fricked*

    • @An_Entire_Lime
      @An_Entire_Lime 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@metra8604 yes but are you *the void* ?

    • @metra8604
      @metra8604 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@An_Entire_Lime well my mc is half a creature literally made of the 'void' so i guess

    • @awildhorrorartist
      @awildhorrorartist 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Bill Cipher: *uh*

  • @adriananthos6203
    @adriananthos6203 5 ปีที่แล้ว +457

    The biggest shift in my main OC (Anthos) would have to be having him go from an untouchable demonic overlord with legions of hellspawn at his beck and call, to being a literal dad and keeping the other characters from doing dumb stuff on the daily. Here's one of his interactions:
    Anthos: "Sterling, you know I respect you not only as a father, but as a man as well."
    Sterling: "Okaaay...?"
    Anthos: "So would you PLEASE explain to me why you're sliding down my marble staircase with a sled?"
    Sterling: "...The kids said it would be fun..."
    Anthos: "Was it?"
    Sterling: "Very..."
    (I dunno if people will care about this, just thought it'd be funny to post :p)

    • @aethernano
      @aethernano 5 ปีที่แล้ว +45

      I think the dialouge was very humerous, and if willing, could I use the dialouge for a story of mine. Also I really like your OC.

    • @swoluigi3828
      @swoluigi3828 5 ปีที่แล้ว +27

      Adrian Anthos hey
      try not to make those untouchable demon god ocs in the future, mary sues are to be avoided

    • @filipvadas7602
      @filipvadas7602 5 ปีที่แล้ว +46

      @@swoluigi3828 not neccesarily , if done well OP characters can be extremely entertaining but it is REALLY difficult to pull of constantly ( which is why most writers put some sort of handicap on these characters , a time limit for instance or maybe a mental hinderance)

    • @TheDragonCat99
      @TheDragonCat99 5 ปีที่แล้ว +24

      Adrian Anthos
      This sounds like an anime
      ....an anime I’d pay to see

    • @Ray-nd8nn
      @Ray-nd8nn 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      "Very" mmhmm.. sureeeeee

  • @Milksi_bons
    @Milksi_bons 5 ปีที่แล้ว +47

    Okay but my thought throughout the whole time
    *"Okay but what about the Kirby villians, literally all of them around and adorable, but heccing m e a n"*

    • @benoliver4306
      @benoliver4306 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Zero: Am I a joke to you

    • @smilesnack9482
      @smilesnack9482 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@benoliver4306 you don't think giant floating bleeding eyeball spheres are cute?

    • @aaamogusthespiderever2566
      @aaamogusthespiderever2566 ปีที่แล้ว

      What about the evangelion lookin dude

    • @azzytheidiot
      @azzytheidiot ปีที่แล้ว

      That one giant floating bleeding eye: am i a joke to you

  • @skylarpeterson3488
    @skylarpeterson3488 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    "Number three, strong silhouettes" Hazbin hotel: *Am I a joke to you?*

  • @p.shaver1294
    @p.shaver1294 4 ปีที่แล้ว +20

    When I heard triangle I was like:
    BILL CIPHER!!! IT IS BILL CIPHER!!!!!!!

  • @AndosArtTips
    @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +746

    Hey all! It was brought to my attention that the last upload had a pretty bad audio balancing issue, so I figured I'd save all of your ears and upload a better version. Sorry about the inconvenience and I hope you enjoy the video!

    • @spiketrap8212
      @spiketrap8212 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      hewwo 0w0

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      invitartfic yeah, I figured it would be best to just replace the video early on, so sorry if it looked like I spammed your subscriptions

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      John gamer221 Hoiii!

    • @spiketrap8212
      @spiketrap8212 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ando how are you?

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@spiketrap8212 Doing good, how bout you?

  • @twistedk.7187
    @twistedk.7187 5 ปีที่แล้ว +73

    I reflected my recent character after the "tougher they act the softer they are" saying. She is the leader of a few thousand demons who is dubbed as: "the mistress of moons." (Also shown as her constant use of moonstones in her accessories) She acts like a confident cold blooded killer with no heart but secretly a sympathetic, skiddish, homebody who is protective of her demons like they're her own children. Her usage of an oversized cloak and her black blindfold is a subtile hint that she's not entirely a cold blooded killer deep down hidden under practical use and intimidation/mystery factor. her role is suppose to be the "villian" but she is really an anti-villian. She's a softie who has done bad things because that's how the demons raised her. To keep her inner self in hiding she has a Prideful, lovably arrogant, secretly caring double winged gryphon-like demon who keeps her in check and acts as her "captain-save-a-hoe." The soft personality calms her demons from their usual sadistic and blood-thristy nature. A yin and yang factor, if you will. Sometimes, I wonder if I should change a few things...

    • @elkthenightingale3147
      @elkthenightingale3147 5 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      "Captain-save-a-hoe" hahaha I like it, I would love to see an anime on this one day!!!

    • @twistedk.7187
      @twistedk.7187 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Thanks. I'm glad you like my character.

    • @beyondhaircraze4418
      @beyondhaircraze4418 ปีที่แล้ว

      This comment section is a plethora of cringe

    • @HogBurger
      @HogBurger 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ⁠@@beyondhaircraze4418how about you shut the hell up and stop acting like you’re better than everyone? “ohhh man look at me I’m so cool, this comment section is so cringe!!! But I’m not!!” Like just shut the hell up man.
      On another note, I really like this OC. It sounds like a cool idea

    • @belynda1224
      @belynda1224 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@beyondhaircraze4418 bro's just mad they never had creativity as a kid

  • @ellastarburst736
    @ellastarburst736 4 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    "I recently started a Ko-fi account-"
    You're telling me
    My whole life
    I've been pronouncing it like some
    *sci-fi alien race*
    or a
    *Minimalist Millennial-targeted advertising company*
    when in actuality it's pronounced like
    *b e a n j u i c e*

    • @lorddumb21
      @lorddumb21 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thats one way to say it

  • @IamCorgi2u
    @IamCorgi2u ปีที่แล้ว +6

    2:28 SpongeBob: I'm gonna stop you right there

  • @Sam-ix8jy
    @Sam-ix8jy 5 ปีที่แล้ว +59

    2:45 sO aRe yOu sAyiNg thAt aRnOld frOm hEy aRnOld iS tHrEaTninG

    • @ametsunami4070
      @ametsunami4070 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      He’s absolutely terrifying.

    • @An_Entire_Lime
      @An_Entire_Lime 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@ametsunami4070 arnold caused 9/11

  • @comettailofthenightwings1765
    @comettailofthenightwings1765 5 ปีที่แล้ว +42

    i just discovered this channel. As an aspiring animator, I'm a beginner in digital art, so was super helpful!

  • @DanePerson
    @DanePerson 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    "shape language" / "strong silhouettes"
    Me:
    **intensely sweats from making around more than 80 stickman OCs which body is the same and more than 5 normal OCs with also the same body**

  • @leafy_green7573
    @leafy_green7573 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    8:08 made me tear up cuz this scene in the movie had me sobbing uncontrollably XD

  • @maenya7877
    @maenya7877 5 ปีที่แล้ว +82

    This video was reposted because the audio messed up in the original at some point, i think.

    • @maenya7877
      @maenya7877 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @invitartfic With headphones the sound would jump from right to left. It started around 2/3 of the video

  • @theonewithagoodname977
    @theonewithagoodname977 5 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    " *That's rough buddy* "

  • @korbby6263
    @korbby6263 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Avatar, Overwatch, Emperor’s New Groove, and Voltron were all used as references in this vid which I think is awesome cause I love all of these

    • @armyshope
      @armyshope 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Emperor's New groove is a masterpiece

  • @nikojpeg
    @nikojpeg 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    "don't make your character live in the void"
    Hollow Knight Shades Ive made into characters: This is why we live in the Abyss

    • @An_Entire_Lime
      @An_Entire_Lime 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      My Hk ocs: we arent in the void! we ARE the void

    • @tigerkat4419
      @tigerkat4419 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      The Hollow knight : ⚫▪️🟠

    • @undercookedsalmon
      @undercookedsalmon 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Me who also made hollow knight ocs

  • @noellemrocks
    @noellemrocks 5 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    5:50 I think the game of “Clue” pulls the “realistic-but-different silhouette” off very well.

  • @winterzedits7695
    @winterzedits7695 5 ปีที่แล้ว +494

    I don’t even have any draw ocs..
    *time to make some*
    0:27
    Lol,that “ OHHH” tho!

  • @ultimatesoupdemon
    @ultimatesoupdemon 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Ando: *starts talking about clothing*
    Me, who mostly draws cats: *goodbye felicia*

  • @love_mandyxo
    @love_mandyxo 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Me: has 10+ OCs made
    Also me: focuses only on my favourite OC

  • @Joseph_Owusu
    @Joseph_Owusu 5 ปีที่แล้ว +89

    At 10:50
    wait...fish dont have eyelids and dont sleep or blink...
    *_NEMO EXPLAIN._*

    • @thegamingfandom6721
      @thegamingfandom6721 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Pufferfish do

    • @zangie_baby3969
      @zangie_baby3969 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      Fish actually do sleep, well some do

    • @squip6764
      @squip6764 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      DISNEY/PIXAR LOGIC

    • @annaastuty5511
      @annaastuty5511 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@zangie_baby3969 but when they sleep the open their eyes

  • @synflwr
    @synflwr 5 ปีที่แล้ว +342

    I have a realistic art style, how should I use shape language?

    • @3leafcloverr
      @3leafcloverr 5 ปีที่แล้ว +125

      Add them into face shapes, or hair styles (or even clothing/ accessories)

    • @asdasdasd-iy4nq
      @asdasdasd-iy4nq 5 ปีที่แล้ว +147

      Think about the body in a more general sense. Someone fat would roughly have a circular shape; Someone like ,say, the rock would have more of a square body, an hourglass figure is literally two opposed triangles, etc.
      You can apply the same logic to other parts of the body like the legs, arms, hands and as logoutoflife said face and hair. I would say the those two plus the torso are the most important.

    • @synflwr
      @synflwr 5 ปีที่แล้ว +22

      @@asdasdasd-iy4nq Thanks!

    • @notmyaustria
      @notmyaustria 5 ปีที่แล้ว +31

      also pose and maybe have them carry some props

    • @umbrieliya7867
      @umbrieliya7867 5 ปีที่แล้ว +24

      maybe in their clothing choices and body built

  • @rowan2086
    @rowan2086 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    “Hi, my name is Raven Windblown. I have long black hair, bright blue eyes, an hourglass figure, fair skin, and freckles that are splattered across my nose and cheeks. I put on a small black skirt, a corset, and fishnet gloves. I hate how i look. Im super popular at school, have a wonderful home life, and my parents are rich, but im really depressed because my life is so hard. My mom is like an alcoholic or something, she has like 2 beers a night, and my dad smoked pot once 20 years ago. My parents are just so crazy, they should be in rehab”

  • @KyuKofi
    @KyuKofi ปีที่แล้ว +3

    'or is your story a slice of life all about the little moments ?'
    shows usagi drop:

  • @latte4006
    @latte4006 5 ปีที่แล้ว +84

    "Do they dress their age?"
    *Danielle Cohn has entered the chat*

    • @gillianhunter3793
      @gillianhunter3793 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      *melanie martinez has left the chat* (no disrespect to melanie or anything)

    • @nachelle_h9767
      @nachelle_h9767 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Gillian Hunter jojo siwa*

    • @barbaraujo3811
      @barbaraujo3811 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Wut i dont get it

  • @BologneyT
    @BologneyT 5 ปีที่แล้ว +35

    I loved the dead center of this video because I remember you telling us not to tell people our OC likes french fries and went to Wisconsin unless that info was needed for an OCT, LOL. XD

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Lol yeah I probably could have put it better in that first video, but the notes of things that aren’t integral to understanding the character or their story are still important, just not something that the audience should be outright told in a bio unless it’s intended for someone else to use as a reference for writing about the character. Those little bits of trivia like favorite foods (ones that aren’t integral to the character) are still important to developing the character, just not necessary for the bio. If the audience finds out about them at all, they should be found out about naturally. Hope that helps clear things up!

    • @BologneyT
      @BologneyT 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Don't worry I wasn't confused. :) Just loving remembering that bit and really liking that you replied to me. :3

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      BologneyT Oh I see! Well thank you for watching!

  • @CenoriaWoah
    @CenoriaWoah 4 ปีที่แล้ว +42

    Well somebody said on your how to kill an OC video a knife, a knife, a knife, a knife
    Soooo
    1. A hospital
    2. A hospital
    3. A hospital
    4. A hospital
    5. A hospital

    • @metra8604
      @metra8604 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      hospitals won't save you from the almighty gun

    • @Kya_YT
      @Kya_YT 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@metra8604 oh no

    • @metra8604
      @metra8604 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Kya_YT îț'ș coming

  • @foxdraws8200
    @foxdraws8200 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    All the example images took me on a FIELDTRIP

  • @mixedmango2870
    @mixedmango2870 5 ปีที่แล้ว +63

    I'm glad you brought it up since costuming is one of the parts that's screwed up the most when designing a character. I think when it comes to an outfit design it should serve two main purposes; 1) well, serve it's purpose well and 2) reflect the character.
    What I mean by 1 is something that tends to get screwed up the most. Take an example if you have a character that's a knight, you wouldn't have them wearing a T shirt and jeans. And if you have a character that's a normal High school student they probably won't wear any elaborate suits or gowns
    Ad for number 2, it also tends to get screwed up (sorry if saying that is harsh but that's the closest phrase I have)
    For an example of a great costume design, I have one in mind that might help make things a bit clearer
    Cure Black from Futari Wa PreCure has one of my favorite outfit designs , as it perfectly both reflects her personality and serves it's purpose. It's purpose is to be a flashy and stylish outfit that you could still move around and fight in, and it does show with the cool color choices but also in how it is ultimately simple and practical. As for reflecting her personality, it also does that very well. She's the more battle focused and physically active of the two, and her more practical outfit with the bare stomach and pants reflects that, but also reflects how she still has her girly and childish side with the heavy use of pink to contrast her mostly black outfit
    As an example of how not to design outfits, well it's hard to talk about that since I can't really think of any specific examples and I don't want to be mean
    A few tips for designing a great costume :
    1: always remember your characters' goals, personality and role in the story. This'll prevent you from making outfits that completely contrast everything about your character. Unless you're doing that for a bait and switch then it would be wise to avoid it
    2: keep a coherent and simple color scheme. Once again, something that tends to get screwed up. When you're making an outfit, especially if it's for a character that's a super hero or magical girl or something like that. I always suggest to use one main color and then pick up to two sub colors. For example, if your characters' main defining color is blue, then you might make most of their outfit blue and add some white highlights. Or maybe purple instead. Maybe if that character is wearing a dress then her dress would be mostly blue with a white ribbon and purple shoes. It would also be helpful to look at color combinations and the color wheel.
    3: make sure it looks pleasing to the eye. This one is simple. Unless a character is intentionally supposed to be hard or nauseating to look at, then don't make them unappealing. Once again, color scheming really helps
    Anyway that's all I have to say on the matter, sorry this comment is so long I just had a lot to say

    • @sakuraogami6885
      @sakuraogami6885 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Leehie Peleg simple is boring thooooo
      ugh lol

    • @mixedmango2870
      @mixedmango2870 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sakuraogami6885 Ummm
      What????!

    • @sakuraogami6885
      @sakuraogami6885 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Leehie Peleg cuz you said keep the colors simple lol but I get it

    • @mixedmango2870
      @mixedmango2870 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      It's better to keep the colors simple and the color palette limited rather than use tons of mismatching colors and see what sticks. That's why I say stick to two or three colors and use different shades

    • @mollie8420
      @mollie8420 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I agree with Cure Black being a great example of this! Her outfit is practical, girly but not to the extent that Cure White's is, and the colour scheme works really well!

  • @tams7411
    @tams7411 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    6:50 OMG!!! One of my FAVOURITE movies!!! I feel like Song Of The Sea is ssoooooo underrated :/. Seriously, the art is adorable and the story line is great, 10/10 recommend you to watch.

  • @llenomu
    @llenomu 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    7:29 didnt expect that one haha

  • @lesbianlyrics9573
    @lesbianlyrics9573 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Me: (Watches this) Cool! I’m hyped to start my OC’s story!
    Also me:
    *No actual art style whatsoever, can only imagine what they’d look like*

  • @Mel0nCake404
    @Mel0nCake404 5 ปีที่แล้ว +51

    7:03
    How did you leak my life story

    • @anduro7448
      @anduro7448 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      *Reported for DOXXing*

  • @marsiiart4437
    @marsiiart4437 5 ปีที่แล้ว +118

    How was your sandwich? 😂

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +24

      Dry 😔

    • @Chancey06
      @Chancey06 5 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      Ando rip

    • @AndosArtTips
      @AndosArtTips  5 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      Zombie Dude I-it wasn’t that bad

    • @spartanwar1185
      @spartanwar1185 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I mean i don't like wet sandwiches
      But i prefer mine atleast moist
      If the bread isn't moist, BACK TO BAKERY HELL WITH YOU!-
      -I mean
      Maybe they should make another loaf..

  • @itsthevoidmoth4463
    @itsthevoidmoth4463 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    "don't make your charapters live in the void"
    Well excuse me for them living in my mind. I'm litteraly the void moth

  • @falliscrispy1234
    @falliscrispy1234 2 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    This is so overwhelming to make a story and make OC’s especially if they just live in your head. When I try to make a character sheet I can’t put their story’s in words

    • @pat9703
      @pat9703 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      same... i've been struggling with writing a decent enough story for my characters for a long time, so most of them end up getting abandoned...

    • @attackofthejiggli
      @attackofthejiggli 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      ​​@@pat9703
      Abandonment in writing is a myth, just need to rethink your approach. More often than not, when you have all these stories in your head for a character but can't put it on the page, it's not the character you're attached to, but the wonderlust. The new possibilities, the potential. But those feelings will always be flighty and pass. You cannot say you're passionate about the character until you sit down and make those "what ifs" into a "will be"

  • @mysryuza
    @mysryuza 5 ปีที่แล้ว +85

    I once made a Beyblade FC (Not OC) who is a tomboy, but wears a dress like princessy dresses because she feels more comfortable and feels more free and expressive than wearing outfits typical with tomboy archetypes, not because she's a girly or super feminine person who doesn't like boyish things
    And it wasn't intended as an error of design, that's part of the point of poking fun of the tomboy archetype and mock the "rule" of "Outfits should always reflect personality" and the people who say it should always be this and that.
    -totallynotcuzSheiladrama-

    • @pleejithoj1712
      @pleejithoj1712 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      woah, that's so cool!!

    • @lord.shitpost698
      @lord.shitpost698 5 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Foriginal characters ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

    • @ravenfrancis1476
      @ravenfrancis1476 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      Well, I mean, an outfit's gotta reflect the character's personality at some point, that's one of the basic rules of character design. Nobody wears clothes that directly contradicts their personality and beliefs.

    • @mysryuza
      @mysryuza 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@ravenfrancis1476 Are you sure about that? Its not really a mandatory rule, but go off with your purist views I guess. "Nobody" is false unless proven otherwise throughout.

    • @ravenfrancis1476
      @ravenfrancis1476 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@mysryuza I never said it was a mandatory design rule, it's just that unless the other characters acknowledge that this is a subversion of their expectations, and not just one for the audience, then it usually doesn't work that well. Plus, out of all the tomboys I know (Which is, like, practically every woman I know that isn't my mom), almost none of them would be caught dead willingly wearing a super feminine dress.
      So not only is your design blatantly ignoring a fundamental aspect of character design, it's actually highly inaccurate to the demographic it's supposed to represent.

  • @user-no3wg1hi1m
    @user-no3wg1hi1m 5 ปีที่แล้ว +264

    When she switched to squares the first thing I thought was “if garnets not on here I’m suing”
    I thought that as a joke, please don’t get mad at me ;-;

    • @thegamingfandom6721
      @thegamingfandom6721 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Same

    • @vodamiinurl1337
      @vodamiinurl1337 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      It's current year, jokes are considered hate speech.

    • @sakuraogami6885
      @sakuraogami6885 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      vodahmiin nonamehere shut up dude, that’s not what they meant. Stop trying to start shit. And yeah, sometimes jokes can go to far

    • @vodamiinurl1337
      @vodamiinurl1337 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@sakuraogami6885 that was a joke...

    • @sakuraogami6885
      @sakuraogami6885 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      vodahmiin nonamehere are you talking about your comment? If so, nice save /sarcasm

  • @thepolishgenerator5915
    @thepolishgenerator5915 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I got myself in quite the pickle, you see,
    MY OC'S ARE ALL TRAINS BASED ON HISTORRICAL LINES

  • @TamWam_
    @TamWam_ 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    my new oc has a floating head.
    why?
    because i drew the head too high, and i was doing traditional art. guess i gotta live with it
    anyway its interesting

  • @Squidself
    @Squidself 5 ปีที่แล้ว +75

    Im a tomboy in real life so most of my OC's are tomboys and i have one (the one I like the most) with blades on the tips of her ears and tail and shes wearing a red hoddie. Most people would think shes Aggressive and dark (blades and hoodie) but she's actually friendly and she loves cooking!

    • @aethernano
      @aethernano 5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      I have a character almost the opposite. My OC, Luke, has a soft, feminine appearance. Their personality, however, is cold, cunning, and not very empathetic. He also doesn't get much sleep, but plays it off with a smile. The only thing maybe showing this is the fact that Luke has constant bags under his eyes.

    • @okbro7908
      @okbro7908 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Ohhhhh,my oc is not rlly talkative some mix of shinsou from bnha and shikamaru from naruto but twist is that once adrenaline kicks in she goes psycho ,and I wanna draw ur oc,dm me on insta if u want _doublled_ I wannaaa draw ur occcccc

    • @jaydenarts4974
      @jaydenarts4974 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Lol, my OC is a gang leader. She has that attitude of an alpha, and acts like she is the only one. She uses a big axe, too.

    • @aethernano
      @aethernano 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@shrimp5444 That is possibly the best description I have ever heard. No not possibly. Definitely.

    • @mollie8420
      @mollie8420 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      I have a character, who's a fairy with a cute and childish design and colour scheme, but she's not cute, she's a rude, narcissistic show off, who likes taunting people and flaunting her magic. She's not very nice, she's very dense, and believes that everything she does is a blessing to those around her.

  • @nerysstuart4210
    @nerysstuart4210 5 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    At the what was your character doing before the story etc. part, my OC Tara's checklist appeared in my head:
    Before: Breaking free of chains (metaphorically AND physically) with her girlfriend and getting married
    During: murdering people to be stronger/ killing off the "hero" group/ spending time with her wife who is also her partner in crime, etc.
    After: dead
    The "before" is a lot more intricate than that but that was as concise as I could make it
    ...
    I write cheerful things.

  • @mongoofe6294
    @mongoofe6294 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ando: Tringles are sharp and uninviting.
    Phineas: "I took that personally"

  • @angelenelee7122
    @angelenelee7122 4 ปีที่แล้ว +38

    "Do they have a uniform-"
    shows voltron characters
    Me screams in hell.

  • @basicusernamehere8068
    @basicusernamehere8068 5 ปีที่แล้ว +42

    I once had an Oc, that Did INDEED live in a void. Except it also stood for, Varying Odd Inner Demons. :p jUST A FuN FaCT aBOuT mE.

    • @admeliora6226
      @admeliora6226 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Oh mood, big same sorta

    • @nilusrivastava9185
      @nilusrivastava9185 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Was he Gaster?

    • @basicusernamehere8068
      @basicusernamehere8068 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @Nilu Srivastava No, not gaster. I found a draft of it. I never finished it. I made it like a year ago. A glass heart.
      By, M.B aka, Marigold.
      A heart of glass, mind so broken, a breaking connection.
      “Hello there.” A voice whispers from the darkest corner of the room.
      At least what you assume to be a room. It’s dim lighting makes it difficult to tell.
      A small girl with somehow pink hair skips to you holding out her hand. “Hello? You, alright there?” The girl looks you in the eyes confusion filling her voice. She looked to be either 7, or 9.
      “You took a big fall!” she chirps hyperactivity. You stare her in the eyes and take her hand. You are still unsure of where you are. The girl trots along a small path in the darkness. Keeping a grip on your hand. She began humming a tune, “Little mockingbird in the tree’s.” You refuse to question it, still a bit shocked. You tapped her shoulder. She turns her head to you. “Hm? Oh you are still confused?” She said in a disappointed high pitched voice. “You’re in V.O.I.D silly!”
      You tilt your head in utter confusion. She then continued, “Varying odd inner Demons!” She laughed before chuckling to your confusion. “It’s just called void.” You aggravatedly mumble something about her. She’d not hear this to busy humming that stupid tune. You stare into the road. You look at the dark shapes darting in and out of view. It scares you to think of what those shapes may be.
      Part 2.
      The girl decided to introduce herself. “My name’s, Kari.” You’d tilt your head to the side.
      You ponder what Kari is taking you to. You again peer into the darkness. A new shape darts across it. This shape is reminiscent of a large snake with legs. Kari turns around seeing as you had stopped to look at the shape. She stamps her boot with a loud huff. “Why are you stopping?” You’d not respond your vision still fixated on the shape. She’d tug you along the dark path. Then you noticed a small light. Slowly you realize that Kari is taking you to it. As you enter the shack you see it’s wooden interior. Soft yet shaggy carpeted floor. Along with a window showing you the darkness outside. Kari lights another lantern and trots to the kitchen. She opens a cabinet revealing some boxes. You can’t read any of the labels. She takes out a small cereal box. She pours herself a bowl. The cereal looks like chunks of wood. They’re big and seem hard to chew. She’d look up at you the light revealing her slightly pink hair. She’d say with her mouth entirely full. “Want some?” You’d shake your head and point to the pantry. She’d nod and say you could pick something. You grab the single edible looking box. You pour a bowl. It’s bland but better than nothing. You go to sleep on the sofa. Kari is busy glaring out the window. A scowl on her face. You fall asleep listening to a distant growling and thumping in the distance.

  • @lauren3650
    @lauren3650 5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    *"That's rough, buddy"*

  • @iceespizza
    @iceespizza 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    “Triangles are used for evil characters.”
    Bill: happy triangle noises

  • @zipp3rf1sh95
    @zipp3rf1sh95 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    "how do they dress"
    *My oc being a 6 feet tall spider with a dog head and claws*
    hmm..
    *CORDUROY HOW DO YOU DRESS?*

    • @edwardbo4666
      @edwardbo4666 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      My 7 foot 10 inches tall character known as serena: You dare challenge me?!

    • @An_Entire_Lime
      @An_Entire_Lime 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      my characters: I kind of just found clothes somewhere.. who are these from?