How To Get a FIRST Class in a University Essay | Examiner Explains the Mark Scheme

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  • @jarrettetal.1680
    @jarrettetal.1680 3 ปีที่แล้ว +40

    This is amazing, please could you make a video on different critical evaluation points. At A level it was the generic "small sample" or "researcher bias" arguments but can you give example of degree level evaluation points please. Also looking through your videos and I'm in awe this is amazing

  • @bellatomsett4753
    @bellatomsett4753 3 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    This was excellent! Thank you. As someone who habitually straddles the fine line between a high 2:1(high 60s) and a low 1st (mid 70s), this has really given me a few useful pointers to implement next time I sit down to write in order to push my work a little further.

  • @judymwende8876
    @judymwende8876 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    This is great. I would appreciate practical examples as a follow up. Thank you.

  • @kxrxo__5081
    @kxrxo__5081 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I appreciate your vids sis 🥺 you’re the only support I have , thank you xx

  • @GabrielGuzman-lu9ld
    @GabrielGuzman-lu9ld 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Great video Amina! I really found it helpful. A piece of advice for your editing, make the sound of the transitions a little lower volume. :)

  • @ImjustAlanas
    @ImjustAlanas 3 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    Really informative video! I'm averaging around an early 2:1, and want to aim for a solid 2:1 or maybe push for a First!
    When editing, I'd go careful on addition sounds, in this video, the music is extremely louder than your voice and for earphone users it's painful!

    • @DrAminaYonis
      @DrAminaYonis  3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Ah! I knew I forgot something - sorry about that, I told myself to decrease the volume and didn't in the end *facepalm*

  • @Raynozal
    @Raynozal 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    One of my fatal mistakes was to think that I could just search for any academic reading materials that I believe to be relevant for my essay, partly because of avoiding to obtain the same books on the reading list with other students. It would be good if the modules can put all the articles and chapters on the reading list together as the textbook! Also there were too many other things to do while I was studying in London thinking that I would be returning soon to my home country 😂 I always wish I had another chance to prove that I can get more than a 2:2.

  • @phillymash1318
    @phillymash1318 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Came back here to give feedback. Followed the tips given in this video and managed to get a first in my law diss and other modules. Thank you Doc 😊

  • @kadraomar6957
    @kadraomar6957 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Salam, thank you so much little sister, I am on my 2nd year of my degree and you taught me a lots.

  • @june2212
    @june2212 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow this is such an incredible video, I really needed this as motivation! Thankyou :)

  • @caribbeancurls1963
    @caribbeancurls1963 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you for video, very informative, music is touch too loud x

    • @DrAminaYonis
      @DrAminaYonis  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Sorrrryyy! Totally forgot to decrease the volume.

  • @shay4sag760
    @shay4sag760 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks you ! That was very informative.

  • @duncandeysell1661
    @duncandeysell1661 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much for this insight Dr

  • @i.1303
    @i.1303 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Jazaakillahou ghairan sister

  • @jennyb.9237
    @jennyb.9237 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Followed every tip and I got a first, thank you!

  • @taylerfontana6395
    @taylerfontana6395 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Hi Amina! Do you have any advice regarding getting a grad job after graduating university? I have spoken to a lot of people and know a lot who haven’t managed to get a job after leaving university and I’m worried after looking that I might have this problem too :) I am about to graduate with a business degree and any advice would be amazing!

  • @pamdube840
    @pamdube840 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have sent an email with some questions. Hope it has not landed in spam. Look forward to hearing from you
    Absolutely relevant and useful video.

  • @maf6544
    @maf6544 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    How to start the introduction, thesis statement and topic sentences

  • @mjones1187
    @mjones1187 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

  • @harunabdulrazak4299
    @harunabdulrazak4299 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you!

  • @GG-jv1vp
    @GG-jv1vp 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I use the code reading but I use citations from other authors within the core book. So not sure the lecturers know I’ve actually read the core books. What do you recommend?

  • @FunnyVideos-fq8tp
    @FunnyVideos-fq8tp 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    What’s the difference between a PhD you find on the find a PhD website vs contacting a supervisor through a university page? Is there funding differences or something along those lines

  • @DrDinooshDeLivera
    @DrDinooshDeLivera 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank yoU!

  • @vinisharupchandani6386
    @vinisharupchandani6386 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you please make a video of referencing however the APA style 7th edition. I am a psychology student.

  • @hafsa3689
    @hafsa3689 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please also do some smart professional workwear for modest Muslim women- I know most are working from home but iA when we all get back x

  • @Michael-mg3lu
    @Michael-mg3lu 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    2:1 section is repeated in the video. Really helpful though!

    • @DrAminaYonis
      @DrAminaYonis  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I rush-edited, so annoying! Thanks :)

    • @Michael-mg3lu
      @Michael-mg3lu 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@DrAminaYonis Still great content, a little ironic though, haha.

  • @EngahmedHussein
    @EngahmedHussein 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Cool

  • @abdifataaxmaxamed5188
    @abdifataaxmaxamed5188 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ma soomaaliyed baadtay