IELTS Writing Feedback - Teacher analysis with score
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Why don't we just take some time and appreciate Chris's adorable videos🤧♥️absolutely one-of-a-kind 🌸💞
Thanks Angelique. That's very kind of you 😊😊
I am thankful of my student who introduced me this valuable channel today. After watching some videos of yours, I must say your team has been doing such an amazing work here for us.
Kindly accept my gratitude.
Thank you
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Thanks Bravo Desi. Really glad that you enjoy the content.
Insanely helpful... It's always effective to learn with mistakes. I really wish I could financially contribute with the IELTS Daily project because it's just phenomenal, but, unfortunately, I'm not able of doing it at the moment. Keep up the good work!
You don't need to financially contribute but thanks for offering. The best way you can support is to like and share. Thanks for your wonderful comment 😊😊
I really appreciate your force on making so informative videos. Just THANK YOU!
I appreciate that!
1) use articles carefully
2) avoid using captitals in the middle
3) avoid using perfect passive (been)
4)hold the topic
5) avoid possessive form
6)use references appropriately
7)conclusion must clearly conclude the given information
I was weak in Speaking and then started watching your speaking videos. Alhumdulillah I scored 7.0 Bnads
Oh wow. We are so pleased to hear that you scored well ☺️😊
That’s a very good and video. You should definitely make more such videos in the future, many students are struggling with writing and often create grammatical and tenses mistakes like myself
So glad you think it's useful. We'll definitely make more :)
I got 5.5 in writing now I know why 😂 will have to improve a lot. thanks sir your videos are helpful hope you're doing great
Most welcome. Glad that you've begun to understand the importance of the band descriptors
The best explanation on how to assess the writing tasks of students👍
Thanks Abdu
Again a big thank you Chris
No one explained the band descriptor that much clearly to me
Glad you have found it useful 😊⭐
Much needed video 👍
We want more videos like this in the future
Thanks so much. Glad you think it's useful.
Thankyou Sir, just saw my results i scored an overall 8. And with less than 10days preparation, your videos did help me achieve that, i am really greatful to have got the support from your TH-cam channel. Thankyou so very much.
Wow Rahul. We are so pleased you managed to get a great score. Which questions did you get?!
@@IELTSDaily oh! I don't remember exactly, but for reading i remember a passage about multitasking, and for writing it was a map; and for t2 it was about publishing crime on the media (agree/disagree question). Speaking was totally general starting with the wildlife, followed by "how i managed quarrel between two of my friends" and follow-up questions regarding law enforcement (lawers and judges; and how they deal with such situations legally). That was it.
This is incredibly useful! Thanks to you~
Pleasure 😊🤗
I personally demand, please please upload like this video every week. Furthermore, I've sent this video in many IELTS group they all are going to watch it so please make it
Wow. You're so kind. Thanks
As an Indonesian which is english is not our first languange,
it's very hard to get a great essay test,
but never give up to learn ☺💯
Nice feedback. Remember give up + learning.
@@IELTSDaily Thank you very much.. ( .... never give up learning .... )
yeah, even though we also use alphabet.
We want more writing videos as soon as possible😊
Thanks Nargis.
Yesssssssss.
Please
Qn. Some people believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather then secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?
Most of the specialists believe that learning a foreign language is good at primary level of schooling instead in secondary. Wholeheartedly, I agree with the idea. Since, learning multilingual languages at early age of study is better than at secondary level.
Basically , learning a foreign language at early age enhances the kids creativity and understanding in different realms whereas at primary level , the foreign language is must. At the same time , different institutes and organizations teach English language at primary school. Undoubtedly , it helps kids for their further education in foreign country whilst one could achieve different opportunities in future. To cite an illustration, the English language is must and it is known as our second language. It is also in practice by different countries of the world whereas English language is mostly known language and used for communication which creates different doors of achievement for future aspirants.
On the other hand, kids at early age aren't well known about foreign language whilst at primary phase they are incompetent and even they don't know their own native language. That's why, learning new Language at secondary level is efficient and practical where one's could gain and research about the foreign language. For instance, learning languages like Chinese,Spanish,and others are learned after their secondary level.
To sum up, studying a foreign language at primary level out weighed the secondary level. All in all, there are some pros learning it at secondary school but learning in primary level is efficient. Besides, it builds base at early age and helps in secondary level even one would be more familiar with the language.
Please give the overall band score and feedback✨
Just took my IELTS test today. Thank you for this amazing channel! Couldn't have done it without it!
My cue card was: describe a house you liked to visit but wouldn't like to live in
Wow. Bruna that's so kind of you.... we're very glad that the channel managed to help you on your IELTS journey. Thanks for sharing. How was writing?
@@IELTSDaily Writing was really hard, to be honest. 😔 I was so exhausted and I feel like I needed more time. I'm hoping to get at least 6.5 on the writing part but my task 1, a map, didn't go really well 😶
But my task 2 was okay! It was kind of similar to one of the samples you provided. I had to discuss whether countries should invest more on practical skills and jobs, such as car maintenance, instead of focusing on university education
Thanks for sharing and fingers crossed for the score you need. Well done for completing and thanks for sharing!
@@IELTSDaily I've just got my results!! 8.5 in speaking, 8.0 in listening, 7.0 in reading and 6.0 in writing. Overall: 7.5. This channel was SO helpful in the speaking part, I'm so proud of myself and immensely grateful 🥺 unfortunately I couldn't get a band 6.5 in the writing part, but that just stops me from going to one specific university. I'll just forget about it. My overall result is awesome anyways. Thank you again, Chris, Jay and team 💖 Your work is so important and well-done!!
@@bruna123mp4 hello..can u give me some tips about the ielts exam (speaking, reading, listening & writing) I will take my exam on december & i feel nervous especially in writing..
Thank u in advance for ur response😊
You are fantastic sir 👌
I finally have found the right mentor 👼
Thanks Rabin. That's so kind of you.
wow, so machine is a countable noun, I have misunderstand it for ages :) thanks chris
Yes. One machine many machines :)
I liked the way you are doing much activities for the students those who are weak in Eng I am also learning from the vedios .Thanks a lot
Thanks Jayeb
THIS CHANNEL IS AMAZING AND SO IS THIS VIDEO thank you very much ♡
Thank you Artemis
Luckily I saw your channel and it proved beneficial for me thanku so much sir 😊🙌
Thanks Arsh. Glad you found it useful.
that was marvelous 😍i really liked it🌹thankyou
Thanks Delara
I have a test tomorrow, wish me luck 😢
Best wishes Adrian!
Good luck!
How was that?
@@angelforever4116 It went good, fortunately I had to answer easy questions, anyways I still have to practice to improve.
@@adrianaguilar6347 Thank God🙏 Good luck😇
Hello, this is my first time to do the writing task. Please excuse my errors as I want to know where I stand and monitor my progress as I learn how to effectively write. I want a comparison of my work (before, during and after). Thank you Chris and to all the teachers in IELTS Daily. I learned a lot, just by watching the speaking mock test. I have improved my vocabulary. I joined the app as well (while in beta mode) and got my first feedback in speaking. I did the writing essay in 40 min time and have not watched the feedback yet.
Math has always been a part of our daily lives. It has been introduced to us, for as long as we could remember. We were taught how to count numbers, how to add and subtract, how to multiply and divide and eventually, it became more complex and complicated. We were taught about the main branches of Mathematics and their differences. Do we really need to learn all of those things? Is it still relevant or useful to our daily lives? It is my view that despite the importance of learning Math, we should only know the basic.
Math is undoubtedly an important subject. It taught us about problem solving. It develops our critical thinking. Those skills are extremely important in our daily lives.
However, it is in my view that we should only teach what is basic to everyone. People who are only interested in Math should pursue the studies of the subject. I believe that time is very valuable and we should only spend it to things that we love to do, or what we want to be in the future. There is more important knowledge that would matter to help us find a job or have a better life.
In my opinion, it will only be a waste of time to invest too much of studying about Math. It would benefit all of us to know the basic. However, the advanced topics of Math should not be imposed to everyone. It is not something that we could not live without and we are not less of a person if we do not study Math.
Thank you so much for this writing task -2 academic class. Please share more videos.
Thanks. We'll definitely do that.
Ohh! I missed the live class bcz today was my presentation at university. the class is more helpful. thank you sir.
Welcome
Thank you very much for your clear explanation 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Welcome Aylin 😊😊👍🏼
Great Job Chris .. Thanks for the analysis with reference to band descriptors
Welcome :)
a very helpful video, thank you chris
Welcome
I'm' goona take exam on july 17th
Wish me luck)
Best wishes
My test is on 12 August. ❤️❤️Love the content
Impatiently waiting for your class
Hope you enjoy it :)
Thank you 🥰
Welcome
Thank you so much
Pleasure :)
Where's Jay? I like him because of his performance and I consider that you and him are the best duo For IELTS daily! and I want to watch like this video more.
Jay will be back soon. He's just very busy
I thought this guy was great!
My exam is in 2 days and these videos really help to calm down the nerves. 😬
So glad they are helpful :)
Oh really? Me too
All the best @Marian
@@josaphine9422 thank u so much
So helpful sir😌
Welcome Utpal
Nice video! I just don't understand why "working style" is a bad collocation.
Working style can be used in certain contexts but it felt somewhat awkward in this one.
@@IELTSDaily Thanks for the explanation! would it be better to just say "the way emplyers work"?
A perfect analysis!
Thanks so much 🙏🏼
CooL
i wonder how to join your classes, i really like your videos!
Every Wednesday... Check our TH-cam page
Hello everyone iam from indonesia
I always wait IElTS
Welcome Erna
Thank you sir for this topic
Welcome Rajjo
Thank you Chris
Welcome.
if I'm being asked in plural (all kinds of questions, just in plural), for instance, "What are the advantages, and disadvantages?" Do I have to write more than one idea since I'm being asked in plural? I mean writing more than one idea for advantage and disadvantage?
Sir, I want to submit my essay for corrections. please tell me where can I send...please sir ❤🤗😇😇
You can join our channel as a Superstar member
Please post more videos about writing. Thanks 🙏🏻
we have many writing videos at ielts-daily.com
Please make more and more videos
Thanks..will try
Could you say which type of question is below writing question?
Universities are becoming increasingly expensive to operate. In some countries, money from taxation has met these costs. However, this is not always enough to maintain the quality of universities. What are some ways universities could be funded in future?
Great job thanks🤗
Thanks Areman 😁😁
thank you!
Welcome Lilybeth.
In my writings, I use the phrase "In our contemporary era" instead of "Nowadays" because I feel like the former is more ambitious language-wise. My teacher says she hasn't come across this phrase I'm using before, so is it ok to use the phrase "In our contemporary era" or does it not make sense?
'In this contemporary era' is an invented internet phrase. Avoid it!
@@IELTSDaily Thanks sir. Unfortunately, I used this phrase in my exam because I had read it somewhere that I thought was credible; apparently it's not. Hopefully, the examiner isn't too harsh on me for using an incorrect phrase.
@@IELTSDaily I guess what made me use it is the fact that we use the phrase "modern era" all the time, so since contemporary is basically a synonym of modern, I thought the phrase made sense.
Sometimes not all synonyms are not the same in all contexts. The examiner shouldn't be too strict on that one phrase. When are your results?
Sir, I got 7 overall band, the result is shown today. speaking 7, reading 7.5 writing 6 listening 7.5, my writing is not good enough, but 6 is band I stuck with, need an advice on how to improve my writing. I personally believe I give more time and dedication for task 2, only use 10 minutes for task 1 and did not do enough to accomplish task 1, need your advice please
Wonderful video
Really appreciate the comment 😊
Hello sir,could you please evaluate my very first essay? Thankyou in advance. please help me to improve.
Topic - "prevention is better than cure". Out of a country's health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Answer:
It is argued that priority from the health budget should be given to health education and precautions over the treatments. In my opinion, I disagree with the above statement. However, I believe that taking necessary precautions and awareness programmes play a significant role in a country's health.
First of all, in my view, health is an essential need of any country. Further, treatments should be readily available for the general public at any time. Even if a country had taken actions to aware people of different diseases and preventive measures, anyone would get sick at any time because of human nature. If a country fails to provide relevant treatments for the diseases, it will cause people to die. Hence, a large proportion of the health budget should be allocated for 00treatments over health education.
Secondly, it is not necessary to spend money on awareness and precautions. Because the government can incorporate them into the school curriculum. Benefits would get by children. Moreover, they can organize discussions and informative programs on TV and Radio to aware people. Generally, it will reach a vast audience. Thus, money is not necessary to make people aware and to take necessary precautions.
To conclude, we can say, diverting a large proportion from the health budget to prevent does not create healthy people in a society at all. Any country should give priority to the treatments while helping other sectors, to make people aware of the preventive measures and education on health as well.
Hi I'm afraid we can't do free writing feedback..
@@IELTSDaily how can i get it done?
You can become a paid member of our channel to get some extra feedback.
I have a test 10 july, wish me luck🤸
Best wishes.
Plz share more videos on writing task
We have lots of videos already
@@IELTSDaily ok i'll check 😊
Hello Chris! In writing task-2, for example the question is agree-disagree. Do we have to discuss both sides and then give our own opinion ? or explaining one side that we agree is enough.
Thank you in advance!
To score up to a band 8.0 in task response, one side is enough.
Hi, chris, I want to become a member of your class.Please, can you tell me how could I become a member.
Hello Taiba,
You can be a member by clicking the 'Join' option on our TH-cam homepage.
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Sir you are doing a great job👌👌👌.I have a doubt - can we start a sentence in IELTS writing(essay) using "there is" or "there are" or "it is"..It would be really helpful if you could reply me.
As long as it's grammatically correct and it makes sense (and relates to the question), why not?!
Thank you so much, sir. Actually, I didn't expect a reply from you. You are doing a great job👌👌👌👌@@IELTSDaily
I have a problem sir and i could really use your help.
I’m a native english speaker with really good use of english, i rarely make any grammatical mistakes, and reading some of these writings and watching some of your videos correcting these writings and giving them a band 6 and personally I thought that the writings were really poor with so many mistakes no clear task response and either there’s absolutely no way I got a band a 6 and I deserve way more and I should get it remarked or you are being very generous with the corrections of your students. Is there any way where I can see my writing and show you how i did so that you can mark it and give me advice on it?
Hello, it's actually much more common than you think for native candidates to score much worse than they were expecting. Please see this article here: blog.e2language.com/impossible-ielts-writing-test/
We know many native speakers who didn't get their desired score.
We have a service called 'Superstar' member which is pretty cheap and you get detailed feedback on your score and where you are doing well / going wrong.
Thanks for your reply, that article that you attached seems to be exactly the same as my issue, in your personal experience, do you believe that some examiners don’t properly mark the exams or don’t put much effort into it and therefore give out incorrect report cards? Also could you please attach a video responding to task 1 of the writing so that I don’t make any mistakes there.
Thank you so much sir
There are many factors why people don't get the mark...
1. Strict examiners
2. Poorly prepared candidates
3. Difficult questions
I don't think you deserve 6.0 but I can understand why a strict examiner may have awarded you 6.0 (although I definitely don't agree with it).
It's quite easy for a native speaker to score
TR: 4.0
CC: 5.0
LR: 8.0
GRA: 7.0
= 6.0
We've made videos on this.
I don't agree with you, Coherence should be at a band 5 because the person wrote quite a lot of confusing phrases and even sentences. Grammar should be at a band 6. Remember that more than 50% of error-free sentences are enough for band 7, which means that you can make grammar mistakes in 6 out of 13 sentences and still get a 7 for grammar. The person didn't make enough grammatical mistakes to bring him down to a band 5.
I didn't fix all the grammar mistakes 😂😂.
And the band descriptors do not say "50%"
Hi Chris.You helped alot to improve my writing. I have a doubt regarding writing an eg in task 2 essay.Is it ok to write statistics eg in our essay.
Like- a recent survey conducted by the UK university, which is one of the leading universities in the world, indicated that around 80% of children who are taught moral values at home did not bully their peers at school.
Can you just help me sir.I am quite confused whether I can write it or not in my essay.
i hope it will help me, bc for me essay part is incomprensible in terms of criterias
Can you give me some tips how to improve writing if I don’t have a teacher?🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
Watch all our writing videos
Your slide shows are beautiful! What program do you use?
What do you mean 'slide shows'?
@@IELTSDaily Hi! your slides, your presentation slides, your slide shows. Thanks .
We actually just use Google docs to make the annotation and the scores on the write are edited by our videographer.
Hi @IELTS Daily, I have my IELTS test coming up soon. Is it possible that I do a mock speaking test with you guys and get scored just to see where I'm at?
I want to join the writing class? HOW DO I REGISTER???
I am using in the contemporary epoch instead of modern era , is this correct for writing task 2.
No!
Thanks for your response 🙏
Why don’t you pick a great essay and then provide comments about that.
Why don't you look through the video selection we have!
What is the recommended word limit as there is no maximum word limit?
250 to 300 for task 2
150 to 200 for task 1
@@IELTSDaily what if we go above 300 is it going to affect the score?
I love youwu
Hello !
Could you, please, say if you are a *certified* IELTS examiner?
Examiners are not allowed to reveal if they are examiners. And the honest answer is 'no'. But I have a very detailed understanding of how examiners interpret the marking rubric.
Could you give me the link of your app for Iphone
Hello Everyone✋✋🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳
Welcome
Thank so much.. General. Please🙏
General?
@@IELTSDaily i mean task 2 for general training🤗
It's basically the same.
@@IELTSDaily oo i see. Thank you so much. I will take my exam in july 10🤗. Thanks
Can you analyse aspects for both task 1 and 2?
before you did the analysis, I was totally don't capture the idea from this essay :D
Hope it was clear afterwards
where or how I can submit my writing? I can't find any video talking about that ???
Hi. If you are a Superwriter or Superstar. You'll see the writing homework posted on the community section of the page.
Hi
Can u give a class on spelling mistakes
Sir can you tell me how to think about contents
Hi Chris. How can we submit our tests for detailed analysis like the one in video. It would be great to get some help in my writing section
You can become a superstar member
could u pls guide me how to be one?
Hello sir, do you provide writing correction service?
I had my reading ,writing today it was horrible
Oh sorry to hear that. Share your experience.
@@IELTSDaily I don't why but my speaking examiner used to make to stop after saying 1 to 2 sentences
by showing me her had✋ she did this again and again😢
@@IELTSDaily she asked me that what do I like about the house or apartment I live in .....I said it is a beautiful building and all the rooms are quite big ...what I like most about this house is its terrace
I was about to say more but she did this ✋
Hello
Hello 😊
How can i submit my qnswer to u
Become a member of the channel.