The Endless Lies about the Celestial Toymaker Scripts

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    Okay, maybe "lies" is a strong word, but for decades we've been told certain things about the development of The Celestial Toymaker which simply aren't correct. Maybe it's down to foggy memories but a lot has been said which seems to take away from Brian Hayles's contribution. In this video we use material from David Brunt's amazing book, combined with a lot of forensic analysis, to try to redress the balance concerning who wrote what in this quirky story.

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  • @unanimousowlcouncil7377
    @unanimousowlcouncil7377 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +153

    As Toby Hadoke very aptly put it 'if everybody else involved in a production was dead, and Donald Tosh could claim he had done something, he claimed he had done it'

    • @dreamcastfan
      @dreamcastfan 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +27

      It’s a bit like the reverse of JNT, where any and all bad decisions are now attributed to him! 😅

    • @acewickhamyoshi8330
      @acewickhamyoshi8330 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      As . Australian free to air bbc dedicsted channel Abctv .. played it about every 3 years .. 1969. 1974 .. 1980 .1985 was last time i saw it . I dont remember other actors . I just remember the toy puzzle . & william hartnells reaction .. as he walked away .. i thought ah glad i wont have to talk about that episode ever . Lol . Its one of those episodes we forget easy ,, 1985 sylvester mcCoy was doing pantomime theatre shows in austraia ,, so we had drwho set in australia & new zealand ,, right at the time that both Lord of the Rings & Planet of the apes scene location scouts were scanning for more post ~hollywood ~ unusual film locations

    • @jayjlevans2000
      @jayjlevans2000 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      ​@acewickhamyoshi8330 the full story aired in 85?

    • @acewickhamyoshi8330
      @acewickhamyoshi8330 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@jayjlevans2000 yes ,, australia played all episodes daily from 1973 anniversary ,, 1983 ..oh 5 days a week, during march 30~ to october ~ 22 april.. yes ,, celestial toymaker june ,,

    • @christopheralthouse6378
      @christopheralthouse6378 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      @@acewickhamyoshi8330If that’s the case then why are three of its episodes STILL MISSING? Would’ve thought ABC would’ve sent their copies back by now…🧐

  • @NapoleonGelignite
    @NapoleonGelignite 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +28

    My Aunt was good friends with Terry Nation. Only found out a few months ago when she was talking about a mutual friend that lived on the Isle of Wight and mentioned him. I asked if he was a writer, and she calmly said ‘oh yes, he invented the Daleks’ as if it was nothing.

  • @Chord_
    @Chord_ 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +63

    Look, I know we're all here for Daleks, but it is always an immense pleasure to see you guys branch out into other subject matters. Jack the Ripper, The Wheel in Space, and now the Celestial Toymaker. You bring a much-needed fact-based (with actual, proper documentation!) approach to your videos that always makes the audience walk away feeling the better for having learned all that you have. The fact that it's presented in an entertaining way only further proves the mastery of your craft. Can't wait to see what's next!

  • @vampiremonkeyonspeed
    @vampiremonkeyonspeed 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    An hour long video taking an almost irrelevant subject and breaking it down into almost obsessive detail? God yes, more please

    • @chriswinwood6501
      @chriswinwood6501 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Could have been twenty mins longer if it discussed Hartnell’s absence in more detail

    • @PercyandDuckfan94
      @PercyandDuckfan94 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@chriswinwood6501 What about the time someone said the N word in the story?

  • @KarlWitsman
    @KarlWitsman 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +23

    George and Margaret were basically a "meme" before that word got turned into a type of picture joke. And thank you for this episode, stepping out of the Dalek venue for a while. And thank you for the new word "materteral" which I didn't know either.

    • @marhawkman303
      @marhawkman303 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      It's always neat seeing pop-culture references in prior decades I wasn't alive for. :D

  • @MrPaulFCockburn
    @MrPaulFCockburn 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +31

    Thing is, as you retell things that happened to you years ago- even decades ago - they become more and more stories and less historically accurate-you just have to listen to successive retellings of the same events down the years by Jon Pertwee or Terrance Dicks to see how aspects “slip” somewhat to make the stories “better”. And who among us doesn’t tweak an anecdote to make ourselves more the hero - or indeed antihero - of a funny story? People’s memories are not the best foundation for history-documents and evidence are.

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      That's my view entirely. The paperwork doesn't lie.

    • @andrewgwilliam4831
      @andrewgwilliam4831 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Paperwork can mislead. But it does need to be at the heart of a thorough examination.

    • @througtonsheirs_doctorwhol5914
      @througtonsheirs_doctorwhol5914 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      who among us remembers that the 6th Doctor almost said his name out loud?
      While walking on Ravolox (when we see it back from the trial) he says to Perri something akin to :"I could settle down and live my life here and write my memoirs. The memoirs of Doctor..." AND there Perri interrupts him. In his post-regeneration hubris the 6th almost told us his name!!

  • @maxgowland1670
    @maxgowland1670 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    An hour-long special project taking a "deep dive" into the subject of 'who wrote what', and it's still more interesting than watching the actual programme was! Very rewarding to see the great team at Dalek 63-88 branching out into this sort of research. They're diligent, thoughtful and they don't miss a trick. And the narration, as ever, is charmingly detached from its obsessive thesis, amiable and particular -- rather like listening to a mildly amused dose of valium.

  • @KieranHighman
    @KieranHighman 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    Incredible work, seriously! Thrown whole new light on my favourite story. I'm especially pleased to now understand why Dodo was written as thick as bricks. And Graeme Allan's score is very punctilious indeed. I'm recommending this video to friends & family.

  • @engineerforthefuture8593
    @engineerforthefuture8593 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Incredible research, lads. Happy to hear cameos from the Missing Episodes Podcast hosts!

  • @richardmattocks
    @richardmattocks 14 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I have to say, this deep dive script history breakdown is flipping awesome! I love it!

  • @scottkandrews
    @scottkandrews 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +39

    Donald Tosh in ‘absolutely full of s***’ shock 😂

    • @kevinhardy996
      @kevinhardy996 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +17

      Tosh by name
      Tosh by nature

    • @dustin_4501
      @dustin_4501 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      Or he was misremembering or he just said yeah fuc_ it everybody is dead nobody can deny my claims.

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

      I'd been saying it for years and it was nice to finally have enough definite evidence to disprove him.

  • @tortysoft
    @tortysoft 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

    Brilliant detailed, fascinating work Sir ! I may be able to add to it...
    I used to work at the BBC,TV centre initially, but in the late 80s I worked at BBC Enterprises at Woodland. I was a Video Tape engineer, but by that time the job description had changed to 'Operator'. This irritated all of us as we most certainly needed engineering knowledge to make the Quadruplex VT machines work.
    As a long time Dr Who fan, my father and latterly I myself actually working on the show, and once it had been shelved - whatever - I wanted it back. The best I could do was to attempt to recondition episodes that were not acceptable for sale due to the masters having been wiped. So... a friend, Keith Hunter managed to get colour 525 copies of Terror of the Autons via Ian Levine. In the down time at BBC Ents I got them converted to 625. Keith and I wondered if there was any chance of adding the colour from the multi-gen, twice converted ex US copies to the monochrome Film Recording copies the BBC still had. The short story was - that indeed it was possible, but only just.
    And now the relevant bit. Somehow or another, I really can't recall, a chap called Peter Lydiard White watched me do the experiments. He was utterly delighted by the results, crude as they were. We chatted a lot as I fiddled with settings and such, and he said he had been the PA on Toymaker. I think he may have called it Toy Master, I certainly did for years.
    He proudly told me that he had come up with the Trilogic game !
    I note the image of the script names a N. Lydiard White as the P.A. I presume this was him. He said he was called 'Snowy white' at the time.
    I hoped he would help get funding for the reccolorisation process, but I heard that he had a non fatal heart attack shortly after I saw him. I have seen no evidence he had anything to do with Toymaker until I saw the script page in this video.
    Well, I think it's interesting :-)

    • @Dalek6388
      @Dalek6388  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      Fascinating thank you!

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Yes, that's the same Snowy.
      Toymaker was his second story, he'd already done The Space Museum, and went on to do The War Machines, The Tomb of the Cybermen, The Ice Warriors and The Space Pirates.

    • @tortysoft
      @tortysoft 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@DVB0 I wonder if he has any memorabilia - I'm sure he has more stories !

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@tortysoft I understand that he died some years ago.

    • @tortysoft
      @tortysoft 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@DVB0 I am very sorry to hear that.He struck me as being a really nice chap, utterly loved Dr Who. RIP Snowy White.

  • @christopherlockery9629
    @christopherlockery9629 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    You could also say that the Toymaker used Cyril in much the same way that young boys at the time would play with their Action Man figures or young girls would play with their Barbies in that he would change his outfits in order for him to have different 'roles' or 'play patterns' as they were figures that one was able to change their clothing and hwve them as more or less your own custom toys.
    That is why Action Man was not only marketed as army based toyline but also as a policeman a fireman and a footballer, among others....

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I don't think Action Man was released in Britain until the summer of 1966, after Toymaker was shown.

    • @christopherlockery9629
      @christopherlockery9629 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @DVB0 True, but in the USA their was GI Joe, and in any case children do often use the same exact toys in different play patterns as they see fit.
      The Toymaker would have been no different...

    • @Tymbus
      @Tymbus 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      One of the things that helped Action Man's longevity in Britain was the name. In America GI Joe tied the toy to the war Vietnam then Korea which were becoming unpopular in the States. In Britain Action Man extended into other character types. Part of my MSc research included men's recollections of playing Action Man. Some used the black jumper and other clothes to genre-shift the toy, turning him into a cool spy such as Ilya Kuryakin The Man from UNCLE

    • @SportyMabamba
      @SportyMabamba 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@TymbusAction-Man was great, my brother and I had a few as kids 😄

    • @Tymbus
      @Tymbus 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@SportyMabamba Yeah, a mate up the road had loads of army based Action Men and Jeeps and maybe a tank! I had the arctic explorer and scuba diver, my brother had the astronaut and capsule!

  • @jamescooraysmith2120
    @jamescooraysmith2120 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Good stuff. On the idea that DODO is conceived to be typed over ANNE, there are a couple of occasions in Bell of Doom’s script where this has happened, and one where it’s failed to. Take a look! J

  • @KeplersDream
    @KeplersDream 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    I'd never noticed before how much the younger Michael Gough looks like Leonard Nimoy.

    • @rayvenkman2087
      @rayvenkman2087 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Would have been interesting had he been in the states and available when Star Trek TOS Season 2 hadn’t started production including the dispute between Leonard Nimoy and Gene Roddenberry.

  • @SamLowryDZ-015
    @SamLowryDZ-015 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    Fascination script archaeology. Congratulations too all involved in unravelling the past.

  • @WilberforceWooster-uo2bl
    @WilberforceWooster-uo2bl 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    Tosh by name, Tosh by nature.

  • @relative-dimension-in-space
    @relative-dimension-in-space 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This was fascinating! I knew The Celestial Toymaker had gone through script changes but I had no idea the extent of it or the changing of hands throughout. I didn’t feel at all like I was watching this for an hour, I could’ve happily sat here for double the runtime lol. Amazing detective work!

  • @Interference22
    @Interference22 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

    Considering the interview with Tosh was from 1992, when he was in his late 50s, I think we can probably safely exclude dementia and general forgetfulness and assume he thought "Well, everyone else is dead (Gerry Davis died in 1991), I can embellish the story all I like."
    The most favourable interpretation is he thought making all this stuff up would have made more of an article than simply admitting he didn't play much of a role in the final draft. Less favourably, he resigned in support of producer John Wiles and perhaps felt no duty to be accurate about a period of his life underpinned by staff fall-outs, animosity towards Gerry Davis, and numerous scriptwriting problems (not just with The Celestial Toymaker).
    I'd love to hear a Big Finish version of the original Hayles script, but it's a fair bet any copy of it is long gone.

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      It's definite that there's no trace of it anywhere. The Hayles estate don't have it - though they do have many of his unmade storylines.

    • @Adam-gt9tq
      @Adam-gt9tq 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@DVB0i am thinking on doing a article on the life and work of mr Hayles. How easy would it be to contact his estate. Via the BBC.

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@Adam-gt9tq They may be able to pass it on to whever his literary agent is now to deal with.

    • @AdamStone-ul3df
      @AdamStone-ul3df 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@DVB0 David thanks I will consider that. i was inspired by the looking for documentaries and other researches including you own.

    • @pegjames188
      @pegjames188 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Have to say I found the toy maker episode rather boring,didn’t appeal to a 11 year old at all.

  • @andrewgwilliam4831
    @andrewgwilliam4831 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Fascinating!
    I think Dodo is one of the companions who was very poorly handled by the writers, and reusing scripts intended for a different character helps explain the inconsistent treatment.

    • @chriswinwood6501
      @chriswinwood6501 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      Creating new companion characters and then wishing they hadn’t, or casting an actor and then finding the actor doesn’t want a long running role, or so many other problems. From Vicki’s departure to Victoria’s arrival, the producers really were all over the place for a couple of years , and sometimes it reallly shows

  • @MatthewCaunsfield
    @MatthewCaunsfield 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Great investigation👍 Loved the little dive into the pop culture of the pre-Doctor Who era!

  • @ChrisHopkinsBass
    @ChrisHopkinsBass 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    So Donald is talking Tosh? This isn’t the first time I’ve heard this over the years!

  • @Djarra
    @Djarra 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    One interesting aside in ‘Allo Allo’ a production still of the clown is used as a photo of Fanny, Edith played by Silvaria’s mother, as a young circus performer.

    • @rassilontdavros3004
      @rassilontdavros3004 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      That's certainly a tidbit to file away!

  • @Stuart_Cox1969
    @Stuart_Cox1969 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Nice one, thanks to the team for all their hard work on this one.

  • @davidlavelle70
    @davidlavelle70 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Gerry Davis’s foreword to the novelisation makes interesting reading. According to that he was dispatching his rewritten pages to the studio every three hours.

  • @garygeorge6940
    @garygeorge6940 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Fascinating video. Thanks so much for all your amazing work researching and creating this doco. Very much enjoyed.

  • @Tardisntimbits
    @Tardisntimbits หลายเดือนก่อน

    It's taken a bit to get round to this video, but what a corker! As a Canadian lass that wasn't even thought of when this serial was made, it's fascinating to see some of the veil pulled back. Excellent documentary!

  • @TheBillPodcast
    @TheBillPodcast 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Superb documentary, beautifully produced as always. Thanks Gav & co!

  • @dustin_4501
    @dustin_4501 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +10

    Quite interesting that this discussion of changes in scripts and ideas is more engaging than the final episode we got.

  • @papalaz4444244
    @papalaz4444244 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +8

    So, with context "George and Margaret" is actually a really funny contemporary joke. They are like Mrs Mainwaring or Cataloguer Prink :) In a strange, ironic way, not appearing in it at all is still funny LOL

  • @WonderlandPirate
    @WonderlandPirate 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Okay well this was fascinating! And also really well told, because it didn't feel at all like I'd just watched an hour long video.

    • @ShamrockParticle
      @ShamrockParticle 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      It felt longer because of the background music, which doesn't feel needed given the quality and strength of spoken research?

  • @Lumibear.
    @Lumibear. 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    My word, you’ve finally become actual detectives! This Tosh fellow sounds well named…
    Thanks guys, love your work.

  • @andrewgilbertson5672
    @andrewgilbertson5672 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    As always, love all your hard work in research!

  • @paulvcooke
    @paulvcooke 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Brilliant suff as usual Gav. Really enjoyed this.

  • @JanjyGiggins
    @JanjyGiggins 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Fascinating! An hour long and I still wanted more at the end!

  • @radishdalek
    @radishdalek 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    The toymakers gown is adapted from Mark Eden's costume in Marco Polo

  • @idiotproofdalek
    @idiotproofdalek หลายเดือนก่อน

    Gerald Savoury is a very Toast of London name.

  • @BigHairyKev
    @BigHairyKev 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    *Great research, well presented!* ⭐😃👍

  • @alexfletcher5192
    @alexfletcher5192 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Without meeting any of the participants, it's difficult to know who to believe. It's a confused and troubled story from what seems to have been a confused and troubled time. As Terrance Dicks said later about rewrites: 'It's not getting better - It's getting worse!'

    • @rayvenkman2087
      @rayvenkman2087 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Something tells me he’d hate Gene Roddenberry for doing exactly that behind the writers’ backs throughout Star Trek TOS. So many that it’s difficult to know what scripts he did rewrites on or who else did the script changes.

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@rayvenkman2087 Marc Cushman's three books has all the rewrite dates for TOS, indicating who did the rewriting....

    • @rayvenkman2087
      @rayvenkman2087 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@DVB0 I have all three volumes.

  • @obsoletebutneat
    @obsoletebutneat 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Just got the blu-ray for Father's Day, watched it, and then a video from my favorite Dr. Who archivists pops up!

  • @Mr_Flerb
    @Mr_Flerb 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Fantastically done!

  • @papalaz4444244
    @papalaz4444244 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I like every aspect of the animated realm of the Toymaker, just not the horrible character designs.
    I don't know why some people insist on those horribly designed faces.
    The environments 10/10

  • @davidevans-powell6381
    @davidevans-powell6381 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is absolutely fascinating, and some amazing research.

  • @Problembeing
    @Problembeing 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Absolutely fascinating. Great job!

  • @reviewsbyelaine4902
    @reviewsbyelaine4902 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Another great vid that’s very well narrated, thank you!

  • @SpeedyDeath
    @SpeedyDeath 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Great research! I love these little sidesteps into other areas beyond the Daleks. Thank you for finally explaining George and Margaret! I've gone and found the film on TH-cam. It's amazing how much myth has been taken as fact over the years, especially with most of the paperwork still in the archives! And it's nice to see Brian Hayles get his proper recognition.

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Most of the paperwork for the story doesn't exist (same with almost all of John Wiles' stories except for 'Master Plan' - and even then that's missing a big chunk of the production paperwork).
      What there is has been pieced together from what few random sources survive. Mostly by accident in other files.

  • @mandolinic
    @mandolinic 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Guests whose main flaw is that they never stay long ... sound like perfect guests to me ;-)

  • @thecelestialtoygazer7816
    @thecelestialtoygazer7816 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Just begun watching, as one of the 3 fans of the original Toymaker serial this ought to be interesting

    • @rayvenkman2087
      @rayvenkman2087 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Who’s the other two?

  • @MednaTheFox
    @MednaTheFox 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    Hello from North America

  • @chriswinwood6501
    @chriswinwood6501 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    So punctiliously researched that I actually wonder if the pics of the mysterious aunt and uncle were actually Brian Hayles’s aunt and uncle. Fanny Cradock’s appearance got a round of applauze. More of this sort of thing!
    Was Hartnell’s two week absence always part of the plan for this?

  • @kongshow6229
    @kongshow6229 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Amazing work by all, thank you

  • @richardpeel6056
    @richardpeel6056 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I was struck by the similarities of the robot depicted in the Celestial Toymaker and BBC TV version of Marvin the Paranoid Android from the Hitch Hiker's Guide to the Galaxy. I'm aware that Douglas Adams wrote Dr Who scripts and would have had access to Dr Who archives, but who designed Marvin?
    The Toymaker entrapped people in his playroom but offered them a chance of escape, it wasn't long afterwards that Patrick McGoohan dropped Dangerman and created the Prisoner TV series. McGoohan already knew about Inverlair Lodge a place where people who knew too much were held during the war, he wanted to add video surveillance, mind altering drugs and mind control to the mix.
    Did Patrick Mcgoohan see the Celestial Toymaker and use it for the inspiration of No 2, and Rover the robot (played by a weather balloon)?

    • @KeplersDream
      @KeplersDream 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Marvin was probably designed by a collaboration between HHGTTG production designer Andrew Howe-Davis and costume designer Dee Robson, perhaps with a dash of Douglas Adams - depending I suppose on whether our plastic pal who's fun to be with qualifies as a costume or a prop. I think the similarity between the two robots is largely a coincidence, both being essentially a traditional box on legs, and Marvin's radio incarnation is undescribed.

    • @normanby100
      @normanby100 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      The rover robot looks suspiciously like a Dalek. Lots of 60's spy/action series used carnivalesque themes and settings, eg the Avengers.

  • @TheLordCrass
    @TheLordCrass 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Brilliant stuff thank you! x

  • @android65mar
    @android65mar 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    quite a tangled web

  • @matrow87
    @matrow87 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    A brilliant piece of work, in both technical and research terms. Absolutely loved it. Well done to all. Quite punctilious!

  • @RichArd-vc5jp
    @RichArd-vc5jp 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Great research! Can I ask was William Hartnell going to be replaced when made invisable or was this another myth?

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      There's no surviving paperwork to confirm or deny that it wasn't part of Wiles' intention (perhaps in the Tosh draft in December, when the rumblings about Hartnell's exit start). There's no indication from other scripts from around that period so I suspect it didn't get very far.
      By the time the story was made Hartnell had already been recontracted for the rest of the third season in any case.

  • @robertlloyd8616
    @robertlloyd8616 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    There's nothing wrong with Chinese puzzles. Might as well complain about Russian dolls, Swiss watches, American cowboys, or Irish poetry.

  • @JohnAShort
    @JohnAShort 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Awesome! I realise normal people would be bored silly by this type of thing... But I was gripped! It didn't seem like 54 minutes... it flew by. (Oh I am just sad!)

  • @IrisGalaxis
    @IrisGalaxis 18 วันที่ผ่านมา

    the word punctilious

  • @euanrenesto5235
    @euanrenesto5235 21 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Punctiliously good

  • @philipneedstowrite1799
    @philipneedstowrite1799 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Fantastic video, I've been rewatching all of your prior episodes while waiting for this one, and am constantly amazed at your level of detailed research.
    I've seen a couple of other people understandably perturbed by the use of AI generated visuals, and I was wondering if in future you'd at least distinguish which photos are AI generated, and which are pre-existing. It might just be me being me, but the presence of un-noted AI generated visuals give a sort of... lingering doubt to surrounding images. While I appreciate that they may be useful for relaying a point, it probably doesn't help a documentary to have the audience unsure if what they're looking at is actually real!

  • @EuanOLeary
    @EuanOLeary 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +31

    Uh... what's the deal with all the AI generated images?

    • @flyhyland
      @flyhyland 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Aren’t you smart enough to figure it out? You honestly don’t know what the deal is?

    • @titanic_monarch796
      @titanic_monarch796 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@flyhylandas far as I can find there hasn't been any allusion to it or elaboration on 6388's official channels and it's just been suddenly introduced, so if you have any info I'd appreciate if you shared.

  • @owntmpsn
    @owntmpsn 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I always thought The Toymaker a bit punctilious.

  • @frankshailes3205
    @frankshailes3205 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Donald Tosh talking tosh about the extent of script and storyline fleshing-out and rewrites? Who knew? (Well, Terry Nation knew...)

  • @Tymbus
    @Tymbus 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    OOh, nice to see the fanzine I edited - 23-11-63 - is cited. The interview was arranged and conducted by Gary Hopkins. It was published over two issues.Sadly, Hayles died after the first issue was published. Not wishing to be disrespectful, we actually debated about publishing the second part ! I think it's great that people are now able to use documentation alongside recollections

  • @ohmydinosare
    @ohmydinosare 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I think this might be your most punctilious video yet!

  • @gharman7571
    @gharman7571 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Punctilious research as always!

  • @darcysmart2955
    @darcysmart2955 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Where have you been all my life? Fantastic work, instant sub.

  • @thee2724
    @thee2724 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +25

    Maybe lay off with the AI generated images. Not the best move to use a tool that cobbles together an image without the original artists' consent.

    • @flyhyland
      @flyhyland 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      That’s not how AI image generation works. That’s like saying if you go to a zoo, see a bunch of giraffes then go home and draw a picture of a giraffe based on what you saw that day, you’ve stolen the image of the giraffes.

    • @princeofcupspoc9073
      @princeofcupspoc9073 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'll let you know when we have AI, in about a thousand years.

  • @missingepisodespodcast
    @missingepisodespodcast 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Don’t forget to hit the notification bell… OF DOOM. Hahahahahahahahahahaha 😂😂😂😂 I have GOT to try stand up.

    • @Dalek6388
      @Dalek6388  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Stand up and walk out the room….

    • @missingepisodespodcast
      @missingepisodespodcast 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@Dalek6388 I used to like you Jon

    • @Dalek6388
      @Dalek6388  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I used to like your jokes

  • @fellowcitizen
    @fellowcitizen 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thanks!

  • @thirteenthnile3536
    @thirteenthnile3536 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Thanks, I really enjoyed this video. It was so punctilious.

  • @coyoteartist
    @coyoteartist 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I remember seeing the available episode years ago and honestly it was pretty disturbing. I'd still be curious to see the whole story although i don't think in the manner which they've animated it. I do rather like that bit about Hale basically asking his now boss, can I do this thing as a bit of a welcome gift

  • @TheFineLens
    @TheFineLens 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Disappointed to see and hear so many AI generated elements in this video, for me whenever generative AI is used in a project it undermines the effort put into other areas.
    Having been subscribed a number of years I know the team is better than this and I hope this is just a one-off miss-step.

  • @henrykujawa4427
    @henrykujawa4427 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    "George & Margaret" sounds like the inspiration for an early episode of ALL IN THE FAMILY, where George Jefferson is invited to dinner. Archie is annoyed, he wanted to go to the ballgame. Archie & his guest argue about things like "What makes you think God isn't black?" At the end, the guest is revealed to really be HENRY Jefferson, George's brother. What happened to George, Archie asks. "Oh, he went to the BALLGAME."

  • @alasdairswanson5035
    @alasdairswanson5035 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    What an amazing video! Absolutely brilliant stuff, many thanks. I do have a question about the use of the 'three spaces' tells in the scripts -- you say that this differentiates between the original (Brian Hayles) script and the numerous later additions but I was under the impression that the finished camera and rehearsal scripts were typed up by BBC secretaries (not sure of proper job title so I'll keep secretary) and not by the original writers. My inference from your video is that the secretary who typed up Hayles' *original* scripts had this 3-space mannerism but that the later additions were by other secretaries that did not. Is this a reasonable reading of your video?

  • @Paul_M_Bradley
    @Paul_M_Bradley 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Well that’s just made me want to read the original scripts even more. Shame no one asked Hales what was different about it.

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      When Hayles died in 1978 nobody really knew that there had been endless rewrites done on Toymaker.

  • @Michael-v7g6f
    @Michael-v7g6f 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    One of the best researched Who video documentaries I have had the pleasure to watch, genuinely learnt a lot from this.

  • @angeluslupus
    @angeluslupus 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Very interesting, indeed: punctilious!

  • @stephenhill4492
    @stephenhill4492 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    That was fun! Thanks.

  • @karlkammer3050
    @karlkammer3050 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This was bloody brilliant!
    Another deep dive would be whatever information regarding the script that Terry Nation submitted prior to Genesis of the Daleks to Terrance Dicks and Barry Letts when they were planning Tom's first season and reportedly said that he had sold them this script before. Of course Terry was known for reusing the tried and true tropes for his narrative.

    • @daddjokes
      @daddjokes 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Yeah the development of that story is something I'd be very interested to learn more about. I've always wondered how much Robert Holmes contributed to it, given how it stands head and shoulders above the tired scripts Nation had recently been handing in for Pertwee.

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@daddjokes Terry Nation's 'Genesis of Terror' storyline is in the Production paperwork on the Season 12 bluray.
      There's nothing in his Writer's File to suggest he'd submitted a story and asked to go back and try another.
      Except for some dialogue polishing and other tweaks from Bob Holmes, Genesis was written by Nation. It was commissioned by Holmes, not Dicks.

  • @thebringerofwonder395
    @thebringerofwonder395 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Well this was bloody good. We need more please. If only this was on the Blu-ray release rather then that (very odd) escape room game thingy., and that interview with Carmen Silvera, which sounded like it was recorded in a toilet bowl.

  • @ZedZed9PluralZA
    @ZedZed9PluralZA 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Do you have any further information on the photograph of the man typing in the rain (shown at the 50 min and 12 second mark)? Is it the writer himself, or is it just a stock image? I'd love to know the story behind it.

  • @andriygriffin4782
    @andriygriffin4782 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    What was the reasoning the production soured on Maureen? I know she was conflicted to stay or leave the program at that point

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      She was very vocal about disliking the scripts for Galaxy 4 (among others) and expressed her disapproval that she was being given less and less to do. Complained too often. So they wrote her out to start planning their own new companion(s).

  • @cillianennis9921
    @cillianennis9921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    One thing I disliked about this episode was how it retconned the black pool episode. Like its pretty clear that it would've been made had the BBC not been trying to shut the show down & due to that I feel like that episode should've been referenced. The Meep was fine since they where making an adaption of the original comic & the comics are in a wierder cannon. But I feel like Big Finish for the most part can be considered cannon & some of the books as they filled in the gap & all. Obviously Doctor who has no cannon really but when you directly say something its hard to look back at the older stuff as cannon.

    • @AurumEtAes
      @AurumEtAes 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Us classic fans are so well aware that Revelation of the Daleks cut the Doctor’s final line about taking Peri to Blackpool. We all think of it as the first adventure that we ‘lost’ during the hiatus. It seems a shame for The Giggle to insist that the Doctor hasn’t encountered the Toymaker again since Hartnell and therefore outright dismiss The Nightmare Fair

    • @cillianennis9921
      @cillianennis9921 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@AurumEtAes I found it especially bad because the only available in their original form stories with the Toymaker. Well kinda but I listened to it in preparation for the new episode as the original isn't available in full.

  • @Quod_Matter
    @Quod_Matter 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Absolutely punctilious

  • @SamJLance
    @SamJLance 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Great work here! I see you’re getting some pushback from using AI imagery to help illustrate your point.
    For what it’s worth, I don’t think it’s an issue on something like this. And that’s from someone who is not really a fan of the AI surge we’re seeing lately. This is clearly a non-profit passion project, and you’re not replacing an artist, you’re merely incorporating visuals that wouldn’t be there at all otherwise.

  • @MarkMcCluney
    @MarkMcCluney 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The reproduction of the tin toy robot is very impressive. I had one exactly like it as a child. I wonder what happened to the prop?

    • @rayvenkman2087
      @rayvenkman2087 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Either dissembled, scrapped or modified after this story for a different program likely.

  • @geraldstiling3735
    @geraldstiling3735 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Mr Gough had me running behind the sofa...😮.. especially after Billy Bunter got electrocuted ⚡

  • @titanic_monarch796
    @titanic_monarch796 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I don't mean to be rude but the introduction of ai imagery is a bit muddling. Generally these videos appear to have used either genuinely contenporary, visually appropriate, or more visibly intentionally modified images, so it rather muddled the overall image of the, well, imagery. It also does not help that the effects applied on actual photos combined with generated images with strange artifacring someahat makes it difficult to tell what images are genuine and makes the production feel less legitimate...

  • @AurumEtAes
    @AurumEtAes 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Wouldn’t it be great if all the abandoned drafts of Who scripts survived? Would be interesting to see, especially for something like the Celestial Toymaker, where the changes in tone and content were so dramatic

    • @DVB0
      @DVB0 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Some of them do survive, as far back as the first story (and before!). Toymaker is the story with the most changes, yet the least amount of paperwork to say what they were, and when.
      I'm right at the end of adding info to the Troughton Diary book text from the draft and rehearsal scripts for more than 40 episodes of the Troughton era, from Power to War Games. Plus abandoned and spec storylines.

  • @ultimatedbz2
    @ultimatedbz2 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I find the idea that the play George and Margorot is in someway canon to Dr Who, with the reason that they never show up being that they were kidnapped by the Toymaker, to be very amusing

  • @gleggett3817
    @gleggett3817 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    scary Aunt and Uncle characters? pass me that script for The Doctor's Wife....

  • @davidioanhedges
    @davidioanhedges 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Wonderful Research
    George and Margaret were better known as a concept than the play was - The only thing many people knew about the play was that the people it's named after do not appear
    It was the waiting for Godot for the general public

  • @rog2224
    @rog2224 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    The whole staging reminds me of The Prisoner.

  • @flyhyland
    @flyhyland 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Love seeing DW fans being unintelligent and complaining about AI imagery because they don’t understand how it works and their ignorance scares them. 😂😂 Keep up the good work TerryNationArmy and ignore these reactionaries that history will laugh at. 🎉🎉

  • @timthememer2785
    @timthememer2785 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    It kind of baffles me that Tosh wants to claim credit for turning the Toymaker into a racist caricature. I know the story was well-regarded at the time he gave those interviews, but he had plenty of time to go back on it since he only passed away in 2016. Fantastic work on this deep dive, of course!

  • @phonotical
    @phonotical 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    It was the man's name on the screen, it just wouldn't have happened if ir had been written, or re-written by somebody else
    Remembering the old saying, the memory cheats

  • @AurumEtAes
    @AurumEtAes 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    It’s a real shame that George and Margaret weren’t just renamed. Or failing that the supporting characters weren’t rebooted each episode and instead it was made clear that they had been real people trapped by the Toymaker, and they weren’t given a proper through line and character arc. They’re whole situation was a very tragic one and they are the warning of what fate will befall Steven and Dodo if they lose the games. Steven keeps insisting that their opponents are just “dolls”/toys, but the whole point is that they aren’t

  • @stephenreed2093
    @stephenreed2093 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Excellent example of “too many cooks”. I was watching the new animation last night and fell asleep in episode three. All those writers and it’s just so boring!