DUDE I LOVE the idea of having your super nice kinda weak rival LITERALLY being a little kid! So much better than just having a friend that just smiles when you beat the crap out of them and tells you "wow that was a close fight!" Now there's a REASON for them to be weaker, so now it's more of a mentorship! Omg I'm in love with this idea
I think Wally was kinda designed for that idea too, but just from a 4th wall perspective (since Brendan and May were both still around his age). I think aging up the protag for this story is the main thing that builds on that idea and makes it better.
@@emerfirek I think a big difference is also that Wally kinda comes out of nowhere at the end of the game to assert himself as "Okay I'm strong enough to beat you now!" which kinda kills all the interest he had, at least for me.
@@jakobthomas1926 Huh, I get that exact same feeling from Jay (prob b/c he also basically says that line near the endgame or postgame or w/e, lol), which doesn't really rub me any right or wrong way. I kinda hope it's possible to let him win and still progress the story w/o blacking/whiting out and rushing to the center just for him to "rechallenge" you though, lol. That'd just be a little nice, that's all.
“Jay is excited to start his new adventure! He just turned 10 ya see. Meanwhile, you spend the next minute contemplating what you’ve been doing with your life for 12 years.”
Always gotta have that one thing. In a world of amazingly well thought out stories, designs, and concepts, you just need that one that’s literally just “hey look, this thing is here”
Just like Persona 2 Level 1: Go talk to your teacher Level 100: Beat Hitler who is possessed by Nyarlathotep and is wielding thw spear that pierced Jesus
I really wanted Tom Bezzle to say “the audacity of this generation” when you met him On an entirely different note, OmegaRogon’s Porygon head on a menacing as body just cracks me up
I’m no artist, but I am a programmer and if this plot ever went into game development I’d love to work on it. This is something I personally would play and re play for hours.
@@pedrovilasgomes9144 well parents caused a big uproar about gambling in past games, which is why it’s not present in modern games. Also don’t go all PETA on us, it’s a video game for gods sakes, have a sense of humor.
@@klausoshaunacey8429 Sorry, the intention was only to be a joke with a bit of irony within it, forgot to add this to end, i was just kidding, i just said that because the idea of a minor gambling was funny to me, as are most of the things that happen in pokemon games
28:24 She could also give the protagonist one of the early generation Pokedexes saying something along the lines of "for now, we're going old-school". It would explain why it still has the functions of a pokedex, but it would just be so outdated that Tom wouldn't be able to track it.
I honestly thought that he was going to reveal that Professor Menzie's notes also "coincidentally" contained the version exclusive Lockemon for the version you were not playing. So that way you could still complete the Dex since trading in fan games is difficult.
For extra points, it could be styled after either the GameBoy Original, or after the Anime’s Gen 1 Dex Portrayal, with solid buttons instead of a touchscreen
It would probably kill the mood during serious cutscenes, but during random little cutscenes or maybe even cutscenes before and after rival battles? Absolutely! That would just be plain stupid fun! :D
Yeah, you can tell that's why he made "Lark" the one working for Amaze-all, because those dialogue lines take on a whole other meaning when being asked by "Wren"
Does anyone else feel bad for Lark? Like, he doesn't even know why the package is so important and he's just trying to be a good employee and help his family.
@@SynthDragon7 Oh? I haven't watched all the way through sword and shield (school sucks and i dont have a switch) so I'm not entirely sure what bedes backstory is? But from what i get rose took him in, but bedes attitude was mostly just his own. Yea some of the things he did was to impress rose but I think his attitude is not needed... (Not character wise. I just mean if it was happening irl. I like the idea of having a douche kunu rival)
Manadza: "Thunderbird! Arctikull's on my side of the region!" Arctikull: "He started it!" Thunderbird: "IF YOU TWO DON'T STOP FIGHTING I WILL TURN THIS REGION AROUND, DO YOU HEAR ME?!" Wicoot: "It's alright, calm down honey. Manadza, Arctikull, play with your Chewmunks and stay on your sides." Both, grumpily: "Yes, Wicoot."
I can totally imagine Lucy appearing at random parts in the world waiting for you and having the dialogue “how did I know you’d be here? Because it’s my job to know”
E N D R A M - O D A I P.S. I already feel nostalgic for this video despite the fact that its been only 1 year. I remember listening to this video and the Ultra-Beasts video back when I was in between cleanings of houses during my job!
@@Dominator_0211 You’re very right. However, I was more referring to other fan games. Most either use a fan made typing or one of the traditional bad guy types. I guess I didn’t make that clear. My apologies
What if there was a game expansion in which someone steals the Thunderbird remains relic & revives it with fossil resurrection tech. But instead of the massive powerful super legendary, it’s a little electric flying bird. It’s the thunderbirds first form. You then run around the region (doing something) to restore the baby Thunderbird as you bond with them. As you play it evolves twice, to an almost final form, & once you have finished (doing something) it mega evolves into its TRUE form. You have a heartfelt moment with your close friend that you raised before they fly away to fulfill their legendary duties. But before you leave, you notice something on the ground. A single egg. Now you can raise one to keep on your team that, in its final evolution, can mega evolve into its final form for battles. Feel free not to use this, it was just an idea that I had after realizing that whole thing of possibly resurrecting the Thunderbird. Edit: maybe you even need to have maxed out friendship for each evolution. Something to make it more unique on top of (doing something) like collecting shards.
May be some kind of Zygard plot (or, omega Rogon), where you need to gather several pieces of the Thunderbird accross the glob to revive it in its fullest ?
Trainer: bye mom i'm off to save the world and stop eldritch beings! Mom: ...why you're just off to deliver something? Trainer: i'm the main character of a pokemon game of course i'm gonna save the world at some point. maybe even twice
The notes to replace the pokedex should have really bad pictures on the pages, like, an image of an Eevee from behind, or a Mudkip that's completely submerged and you can only see it's silhouette, or a Rattatta halfway hidden by tall grass.
Except there will always be people who hate other people, so there will always be slurs, pessimistic, but it would probably be a thought policing totalitarian state that has no slurs.
@@dragonsswarm1987 uhhh or people could just not say slurs? you don't have to force people in order for people to not say slurs, its entirely possible by peoples own choices.
'Smile and give you positive vibes' *shows picture of Hop, a character who spends the majority of the game filled with anxiety and confusion as to what he is, constantly comparing himself to you or Leon and feeling like a failure*
And that doesn't deter him from smiling and giving us positive vibes in the slightest. That said, idk if that's good or poor characterization, but I'm leaning towards it being more poor than good.
I get that Hop had this whole story arc, but I just...didn't feel it? Like, yes, it happened, but it just felt kind of hollow, like an afterthought trying to make him interesting.
To me, it just felt like he was stuck-up and acted all high and mighty because he was the younger brother to the Champion, even though he's not made any major accomplishments himself yet, and to be perfectly honest with you, I was genuinely happy when Bede put him down. Does that make me a heartless person? Ehh, depends on who you ask, I guess. I just don't like Hop. Or Wooloo, honestly. It's just a stupid sheep. That's not a valid reason to like Hop anyway.
I really like the idea of getting an assistant as the champion, and that she seems to follow you around during all the post-game. One of the things I hope gets implemented in the post-game is to be capable to talk with Lucy, and that she says something different depending of the location (like the assistants in the Paper Mario Games or in Bug Fables), maybe giving some world-building info about the Towns, or if some new or rare Pokemon are available in a route, and definitly her backstory (or why she has a musical motif). EDIT: Furthering the idea (only if it is posible and if it doesn't cause problems to the programmers involve in the fangame), but it would be cool if Lucy also was involved with some of the usual post-game functions, so if you talk to her, a menu opens with the option to talk to help but also to schedulle rematches with gym leaders, notify you about pokemon migrations, and things like that.
That is a really nice idea. Since she was the bad guy assistant, I thought she maybe was evil too, but no just doing her job. And since she even oposses to the villians in the post-game, maybe she can even help us in a double battle!
I love that Wren just communicates in gestures much like how it’s implied you do in the mainline games. It’s a nice detail, most would just have your character talk.
@@ninjapotatolorf6237 Damning a corporate prick to an eternity of Eldridge Horror doesn't seem satisfactory to me. They absolutely deserve to suffer, but I was thinking of say, resetting their wealth and forcing them into the position of a surf or wage slave.
"Destroying that watch was smart." Minute later: "I would never invade someone's privacy without their consent. You could definitely play that part up as a slip of the tongue.
@@SmartAlec86 a simple answer for this question actually. The tracking and the rest suddenly got instantly shut off. Also the Vaibats or the Porygon in the watch can send the info to them
He turns on all of the privacy settings for you when he gives you the Porywatch Omega, and he was only doing the soul opening stuff on Mt. Spectal because he was under mind control. I don't think we can blame any of the post-game stuff on himself when he literally isn't in control of himself.
Easy way to give both parties what they want! Once you beat the space whale, it loses the red on its face and returns to its original calm form. It goes back through the wormhole, and after talking to the professors again, you can find the wormhole if you return to that original location where you fought the whale. You can go through the wormhole to fight 4 more new ultrabeast style lokemon, and then you can re-fight the whale and catch it. Makes it optional, but also makes it so it’s not handed to you and you have to find it on your own.
Or give the space whale the eternal max eternatus form while the normal space whale is available but this apocalyptic form with parasite is unobtianiable
I really like how the player helps out the younger character Jay. I think it's cute that an older but young adult is helping a kid and that it is used to teach the player how to do certain tasks. It sort of reflection the growth of the fans of pokemon and how you can still share your knowledge and experience with the younger generations. Good work.
@Xman34 yeah, rivals that are kind just make you feel bad. Because they’re just tryna be your friend, but you just obliterate them constantly. Rivals should be total jerks again, I need someone that I can hate and don’t have to feel bad when I beat them.
@@BobbyDipshit Me personally, I don't like jerk rivals, they just annoy me. It's not even satisfying beating them because they just pretend nothing happened and go right back to being tools. I prefer a more balanced mix, Less Hau and Less Silver, more like Cheren or Hugh
@@asafesseidonsapphire good for u ig ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Im not insulted Lark as a character, im just saying that in future games they should be more mean. However I do have to admit that Lark is a very creative character.
@@jackallett8236 I'm thinking multiple different types of pokemon that would help her with her job. like a flying type for delivering packages and carrying her to places, a super buff pokemon like machamp to carry things for meetings, psychic type to do something similar and to help write things down, a pokemon to ride in water and one on land (Arcanine, a horse kind of pokemon, etc), etc. I could also see her with a Cheekat or Faebrill or Mosster, she strikes me as a person who would have a more pet/friend pokemon when not working.
You know what be really fun? if Quailstrion was immune to the scrambling effects from Endram Odai, it saw it coming, it was Prepared for this, and it is ready.
that would be such a win, flavor-wise. I hope they do it. Maybe there is some sort of holdable item (the tin foil hat)that normally just gives -1 damage from psychic type attacks, but will stave off the scramble effects in this fight only.
He's not a villain. He is a businessman who creates jobs for the community and provides products that everyone wants. Without him, the lives of everyone around would be much less fruitful. Imagine never getting another delivery again. Also, cell towers in the desert are important because people lost in the desert need them to call for help.
@@funveeabledid you watch the video? it's heavily implied he's been dealing with mafia types like team rocket and also EXPERIMENTING WITH POKEMON UNETHICALLY???? HE'S THE VILLAIN DO WE HAVE TO SPELL IT OUT FOR YOU
@@funveeable While Tom Bezzle isn't really malicious and does generally want what's best for humanity, he's not wise enough to fully understand what he's doing. Yes, he's improving people lives, but he also strips people of the privacy and is very reckless in achieving what he see's as a greater cause. He's the kind of guy who can't see the forest for the trees
Bezzle is just the right amount of unsettling, with his "I just want to make the world more convenient, and everyone is willing to provide that for me,"
ye. he's sleezy, but not outright EVIL without the orbthilod. sure, he's got money on the mind, but if he is pushing a product he is gonna make it good (at least that is the vibe i get)
OMG WARRIOR CATS YES! Warriors is my favourite book of all time! I LOVE Squrrielflight, Tree, and Spiderleg (yes you heard me right Spiderleg) how about you? Also did you hear about the new Arc coming out? I just came from a Moonkitti and Akira video about it
@@amethyst_the_rainwing oh hey another Warrior fan on a Pokémon channel! (And by the looks of it a Wings of Fire fan too). I like Crowfeather alot, I hope Harestar dies soon so he can become leader already! But seeing how long Mistystar has lived Im not really sure anymore..l
the end end game when you have completed the shiny dex (ot just all the ones you can get shiny) you will have the portal go crazr and out comes a gigantic lv100 shiny tofrug with op moves and
I'm glad this becomes a game, i really am, but i have to say, this whole video and especially the shy talk around Minute 3 really made me think: "Yeah, this is reaching Pro-Level; a Level that 'Mr.Buddy' already reached a long time ago'.
I feel lark needs a bit more character progression. I kept expecting any exposition about his motivation and having dialogue that shows a reason for him to change besides just giving up and being fired would be really cool to see from a rival.
When Lockstin was saying how he's been asked to make a fangame out of this, I was sure he was gonna say "No" or "That's not happening" So glad I was proven wrong! Can't wait to play it when it comes out!
@@gapetheapegod7976 well the lawsuits mainly happened because of the use of the Pokemon brand name in the games title (in Uraniums case) so I'm all for having the game name be Lockemon
I really like the parallels between Fir and Bezzle with the whole "Sometimes you have to bend your morals a bit. You wouldn't understand at your age" thing.
I had an interesting idea for the end boss, if your team includes an orbtholad it can partially counter the menu depending on your friendship level with you. High friendship has it pop out of it's pokeball and counters the move scramble, items and Pokémon names are still affected, low but positive friendship has it do one move before endram-odai attacks and commands to leave and it does with a scar, leading you to need to track it down to recatch it, and if it the friendship is negative it leave the ball and randomizes the move with their names still scrambles. Either way you at best lose a Pokémon after one hit, and the other effects take the orbtholad off your team for the fight at the least.
Tom Bezzle: I am a business man, clearly this coyote will listen to what I have to say Wren: I don't think that's how it works Wicoot: Ah yes business man I will bring it to my shareholders for consideration...nah man they said no
I know! This takes the premise of an ultimate final boss in a Pokemon game to a whole new level. The energy that your opponent is giving off is too intense for you to think straight. You can barely get a hold of yourself to give orders to your team, let alone even stay conscious! Everything around you feels like an agonizing blur. You can't see your Pokemon clearly, can't remember their moves, you can hardly even pronounce their names at all! Your mind is failing you, but your heart still stays strong despite everything. A fight like this is a true challenge to the bonds you've made with your Pokemon, if you know them well enough to know what order they are in your team and how you're arranged their movesets, even while the battle interface is incomprehensible gibberish! At this point, you've grown with them so much that they can understand your feelings as you understand theirs. It's the ultimate test of the trust you have in your Pokemon, an ideology that the franchise has always been known for.
1:01:13 Here’s a suggestion: it gives you an egg that takes a very long time to hatch, and it hatches into a prevo and evolves extremely late (75-85) to Edram-Odai.
I always love that idea that instead of catching the legendary u enter a battle w it if u win it deems u are worthy and gave u a part of it's power by giving u an egg that hatch into a young replica and now u own a young "weaker" version of the legendary instead of the typical 10 years old catches a primordial God
This is a perfect Idea. Fits pokemon and the eldritch themes. (Spoilers...) Reminds me somewhat of the end of Bloodbourne. (Spoilers) Leaving you as the beginning of an Old One. Where if you get the true ending and beat the moon presence you are bestowed with his power but start off as a new-born, unformed vessel that will grow into an unimaginable strength. It's translation into a pokemon game via the completion of the post game and the raising of an Egg (Just like Gold/Silver and togekiss) is fitting for the "Eldritch" part of the game.
Theory: the four cataclysm Pokémon are the Lockémon equivalent of the Four Horsemen of the apocalypse. In all seriousness, though, this is a *fantastic* Region concept with an incredible story. That little pinch of H.P. Lovecraft at the end was awesome.
The story certainly has potential, but it does require some minor tweaks to set it out in a more logical format. As of what tweaks, I don't quite know, but I do feel the story is a tad too jittery in its current state. But weldone to the team so far, and hopefully the final result will hit the nail on the head.
I absolutely love that after becoming champion you get an assistant Also oh my god, the idea of your entire menu and game HUD getting messed up is incredible, it almost reminds of Pokémon H, a romhack where every letter and Pokémon sprite is just H so that you have to just kind of guess what each Pokémon and move is
Bezzle really gave me the shivers, especially that part with the privacy options. "Oh users can protect their data at any time, they just didn't think to enable data privacy." Talk about a typical corporate loophole!
I betcha dollars to donuts that's what they are. *Pestil* ation is a dead giveaway. Lamentu is almost sheep or goat-like, with seven eyes. Revelations 5:6 in the Bible has "The Lamb had seven horns and seven eyes, which are the seven spirits of God sent out into all the earth," and while Lamentu only has two horns, the seven eyes match up. Plus, it has almost angelic wings coming from its head, and the name has the word "Lament" in it. My best guess is if it is a "horsemon of the apocalypse", it's an angel of *death* of sorts. The other two were hard to pin down, but if I had to guess; Revylon might be *famine* for its gaping maw with glowing insides, almost Guzzlord-esque. Leoseace is probably *war* by process of elimination. I also just totally realized Revylon's name could reference Babylon, and Leosease could be a reference to the serpent that tempted Adam and Eve.
I like how we don't really know how the real Bird of Thunder looks like, just like original Unovan Dragon. Also, I like how the "Omega" in Omegarogon's kinda indicates the connection between the Bird of Thunder and Groudon.
I really like how there isn't a traditional bad guy team. Y'know, the lot that goes "Oi gimme ur mon!" only to get their butts handed to them shortly after, Bezzle isn't even the typical bad guy. At a first glance he gives off massive Giovanni vibes but after talking to him, he just wants to make the world better but was misguided by the very data he collected, a calculative man that had good intentions but was unable to see past the numbers at the time, which is why he turned himself in after finally realizing nobody can play Arceus. And I have a feeling that the Orbtholod was beginning to mind jack Bezzle which is why he became brash towards the player after the box legendaries were caught by him, heck, that Orbtholod seems to have been influencing his decisions from the start of the game!
I think you should include a scene after the Amaze-All raid where Lark runs into Professor Fir and apologizes for stealing Birbwhirl. It's kind of like something that happens in Heartgold and Soulsilver except you actually get to see the scene. Lark stole a rare starter pokemon so there should be some kind of resolution. Edit: Lark should also help out as professor Menzie’s assistant during the postgame
Lark helping menzie understand tech that would actually help her (+knowing how to shut off all the creepy side of the tech to ease her worries, being a former employee n all) and menzie teaching him morals and history erased by Amaze-al
The most unrealistic aspect of this whole thing is the idea of a big company actually perfecting a device, instead of making a "new and ultra upgraded" version every year or two
Wren Player: has blackish brown hair with yellow streak Lark Player: Has brown hair Real life Wren: Is brown Real life lark: Yellow and Black Me: **confused stonks**
Maybe wren player was born normal black until her hair change to dark brown (common thing for the baby that is growing) and dye a little yellow stripe on her hair
I guess having pairs with elements that fit the other more than themselves is on brand for Pokémon. Golduck being psychic while and Psyduck is golden, venonat resembling butterfree more than its prevos, etc
I love how the player character is just some random professor's assistant who casually becomes the Pokémon league champion between running errands for their boss. I mean it makes more sense than a 10 year old kid becoming the champion, but it's still hilarious.
The moment that Lockstin mentioned that they actually were working on making this a game I almost passed out from joy. I wish I had the time to try to help in any way but right now I can only show my support like this, but I can’t freaking wait!
With Amaze-All supposedly being a worldwide company and also having Groudon and Regigigas being involved in Kaskade's lore made me realize how the main regions lore barely interlaps with one another I understand wanting the games to be enyojable without knowing the previous' stories, but still, it gives me the sad feeling of those regions being isolated
I would really like to see, that basically, you aren't powerful enough as a player to beat the endboss. So you faint and the endboss wants to shoot a last attack on you, but Lark jumps out of nowhere in the way and saves you, dying in the process. And then his pudet (it's called like that, right? His dog pokemon) comes out of the pokeball and evolves (considering its inspiration/back story ). And you catch it as a last thing to remember Lark. (but, maybe to dark for Pokemon) 😉 Edit: Jesus Christ, 12 likes! I know, it's NOTHING compared to the others, but its still probably the most likes I've ever gotten on a comment I'm still proud of today. Thanks!
So basically Amaze-all is a Cthulhu-owned pokéAmazon that it trying to activate Metal Gear B as a side project, Wren is the courier from Fallout New Vegas, and the finale is an Sons of Liberty-level fourth wall break
I can imagine that the bit of story after the post game, you find out that the orbtholods weren't actually evil or anything, they were just bringing in their master Endram-Odai in an attempt to deal with the parasite somehow, and once you do that, it's all cool. It just takes, some dubious means to actually start in the first place.
Maybe that's how you can get an Orbtholod in-game if possible. You encounter one and it thanks you for freeing Endram-Odai from the parasite. It then chooses to go with the player as a thank you. I just thought of another potential way to get an Orbtholod. Maybe it can be a special event in the main where you encounter one and after a quick battle, it sees the player as a worthy ally to their cause for saving their master and will join you. I like the idea of trainers making friends with any pokemon, even lovecraftian beings.
Two things. One, good plot. Two, you have inspired me to make my own game: pokemon hero and destruction. P.S. region is called origic region, which is shaped like a pokeball
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DUDE I LOVE the idea of having your super nice kinda weak rival LITERALLY being a little kid! So much better than just having a friend that just smiles when you beat the crap out of them and tells you "wow that was a close fight!"
Now there's a REASON for them to be weaker, so now it's more of a mentorship!
Omg I'm in love with this idea
yes. That is the exact direction pokemon should go if we ever get an older protaganest
I think Wally was kinda designed for that idea too, but just from a 4th wall perspective (since Brendan and May were both still around his age). I think aging up the protag for this story is the main thing that builds on that idea and makes it better.
@@emerfirek I think a big difference is also that Wally kinda comes out of nowhere at the end of the game to assert himself as "Okay I'm strong enough to beat you now!" which kinda kills all the interest he had, at least for me.
@@jakobthomas1926
Huh, I get that exact same feeling from Jay (prob b/c he also basically says that line near the endgame or postgame or w/e, lol), which doesn't really rub me any right or wrong way. I kinda hope it's possible to let him win and still progress the story w/o blacking/whiting out and rushing to the center just for him to "rechallenge" you though, lol. That'd just be a little nice, that's all.
YEEESSSSS
first half: normal
second half: THE INTERNET IS MANIPULATING OUR LIVES!!!!
post game: oh no not the lovecraftian gods again
The internet is our own Eldritch God.
Look up Jupiter Brains. We’re gonna start creating our own eldritch gods eventually
LOVECRAFT??? H. P. LOVECRAFT??? IS THIS A DREAM THEATER REPHRANCE??? THE DARK ETERNAL NIGHT???
@@cosmicbird1541 OPPAI?!?!?!?!
@@cosmicbird1541 name is kinda stupid 🤣🤣🤣
“Jay is excited to start his new adventure! He just turned 10 ya see. Meanwhile, you spend the next minute contemplating what you’ve been doing with your life for 12 years.”
Mood
I like how wicoot is just acknowledged like “oh and there’s also this bastard I guess”
Straight up my teachers when I try my best 💀
Always gotta have that one thing. In a world of amazingly well thought out stories, designs, and concepts, you just need that one that’s literally just “hey look, this thing is here”
Level 1: Deliver a Key
Level 100: Defeat Cthulhu
Now I really want this fangame
Sounds like the perfect JRPG not gonna lie
Just like Persona 2
Level 1: Go talk to your teacher
Level 100: Beat Hitler who is possessed by Nyarlathotep and is wielding thw spear that pierced Jesus
@@TupocalypseShakur Well in one of the DC comics Hitler used the spear that pierced Jesus
@@bryanwoo8415 it was that awful Superman: At Earth's end story right?
Damn i really want to finish my game dev studies to help make this game!
I really wanted Tom Bezzle to say “the audacity of this generation” when you met him
On an entirely different note, OmegaRogon’s Porygon head on a menacing as body just cracks me up
The Porygon head is the more menacing part IMO, I just can't take that three-eyed Rotom head seriously.
Player: *catches endram-Odai and uses it it in a regular Pokemon battle*
The other trainer: *flat out dies*
10/10
That's something out of terminal montage
@@catcraft18 I can already see “Lockémon battle royale”
to be fair, that's what should happen when you use yveltal, right?
@@SurrealKeenan I mean if it faints and then gets revived and be sent in battle again then yes, but if not no.
I’m no artist, but I am a programmer and if this plot ever went into game development I’d love to work on it. This is something I personally would play and re play for hours.
join the discord then
Same here
Where’s the discord link?
Man it’s so weird having a player character who’s an actual adult. It makes gambling more understandable and you teaching younger trainers is adorable
What do you mean understandable, didn't you gamble and exchanged the prizes for live animals being forcibly maintained in captivity?
@@pedrovilasgomes9144 well parents caused a big uproar about gambling in past games, which is why it’s not present in modern games. Also don’t go all PETA on us, it’s a video game for gods sakes, have a sense of humor.
@@klausoshaunacey8429 Sorry, the intention was only to be a joke with a bit of irony within it, forgot to add this to end, i was just kidding, i just said that because the idea of a minor gambling was funny to me, as are most of the things that happen in pokemon games
@@pedrovilasgomes9144 ah, my bad. Lots of nuance lost in text, I understand :)
@@klausoshaunacey8429 It's okay, i always forget to indicate it in a clear way
The proffesor remainds me of every Computer Engienieer that is TERRIFIED of Big Tech and then having eyes everywhere, I love him
Pls tell me this will be a actual game I need to play this
@Vishnu PM Im not caught up in the series I haven't watched this video
@pink pineapple he says people might be working on it.
@@pinkpineapple4694 there are some people working on it
@@someoneawesome8717 I know I wanna use castform and rotom
28:24 She could also give the protagonist one of the early generation Pokedexes saying something along the lines of "for now, we're going old-school". It would explain why it still has the functions of a pokedex, but it would just be so outdated that Tom wouldn't be able to track it.
if that hapened i would go absolutley yes
Then again, the whole feel of "isolation" for lack of a better word fits the notebook way more. I still love your idea though.
@@Lasang114 True that.
I honestly thought that he was going to reveal that Professor Menzie's notes also "coincidentally" contained the version exclusive Lockemon for the version you were not playing. So that way you could still complete the Dex since trading in fan games is difficult.
For extra points, it could be styled after either the GameBoy Original, or after the Anime’s Gen 1 Dex Portrayal, with solid buttons instead of a touchscreen
Tom: explains his request in an understandable way.
Wicoot: *COOT*
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTER.
Coot
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I love how wicoot and Thunderbird are basically parents
Rayquaza all over again
I love how they set up this whole meeting with the legendaries and Tom just gets denied by them
GO TO YOUR ROOM MANADZA!!!!!!!!
To quote the two when Manadza and Arctokull fight:
"WHAT THE ARCEUS DANG HELL IS GOING ON HERE!?"
Hey you kids, stop destroying the world with your petty fighting!
The emoticon player “dialogue” HAS to be in the final game it’s so funny
Indeed!
It would probably kill the mood during serious cutscenes, but during random little cutscenes or maybe even cutscenes before and after rival battles? Absolutely! That would just be plain stupid fun! :D
If it has a final game (I hope it does)
Maybe as a Pikachu like emotion box from Pokemon Yellow.
Is someone actually making a fan game of this or am I just being a dumb dumb?
Wren: *Exists
Lark: I noticed you have a package there. 👁👄👁
Yeah, you can tell that's why he made "Lark" the one working for Amaze-all, because those dialogue lines take on a whole other meaning when being asked by "Wren"
And so the rivalry begins
“*notices your relic* owo what’s this?”
He’s 22 don’t call it weird
"Is for me??"
@@f.b.iagent3971 *noticed your packy wacky*
Lockstin: there aren’t enough compelling plots in Pokémon!
Volo: it is time I tell you what I’ve been after.
Pokemon scarlet and violet
Allow us to introduce ourselves
@@g.n.a4871, to be fair, Scarlet and Violet are more of a subplot package than a whole main story.
@@Doublemonk0506 I would say that it’s three subplots that all converge into a single main story at the end.
@@galning2768, you're probably right.
Does anyone else feel bad for Lark?
Like, he doesn't even know why the package is so important and he's just trying to be a good employee and help his family.
Yea, kinda reminds me of Bede tbh
@@SynthDragon7 Oh? I haven't watched all the way through sword and shield (school sucks and i dont have a switch) so I'm not entirely sure what bedes backstory is? But from what i get rose took him in, but bedes attitude was mostly just his own. Yea some of the things he did was to impress rose but I think his attitude is not needed... (Not character wise. I just mean if it was happening irl. I like the idea of having a douche kunu rival)
Like right before you beat him he like just starts crying. It’s just sad he needs money he was broke and you got him fired :(
Yeah but his methods of doing so are questionable to say the least
And quite illegal 😐
@@luckybenjamin6815 but he is broke, and desesperate
Manadza: "Thunderbird! Arctikull's on my side of the region!"
Arctikull: "He started it!"
Thunderbird: "IF YOU TWO DON'T STOP FIGHTING I WILL TURN THIS REGION AROUND, DO YOU HEAR ME?!"
Wicoot: "It's alright, calm down honey. Manadza, Arctikull, play with your Chewmunks and stay on your sides."
Both, grumpily: "Yes, Wicoot."
This is peak comedy
Underrated comment lmao
I'd love to see a sit-com with all of them living together.
Best comment change my mind
MandJTV fans got some hoen legendary pokemon talks episode vibes
I can totally imagine Lucy appearing at random parts in the world waiting for you and having the dialogue “how did I know you’d be here? Because it’s my job to know”
I could totally see that and If you find her in the post game there’s some hidden diolauge and extra secret stuff
@@LycanMOON I'm pretty sure they meant postgame. After all, she's _your_ assistant now.
would be good if we see and meet lucy befire tha champion battel and having to make some kind of bond with her.
@@edelweissurya6409 I agree. Kind of like your own personal waifu/assistant/bodyguard
@@musicalsystem927 /goth gf?
E N D R A M - O D A I
P.S. I already feel nostalgic for this video despite the fact that its been only 1 year. I remember listening to this video and the Ultra-Beasts video back when I was in between cleanings of houses during my job!
This story goes from "Pokémon plot" to "lovecraftian horror" so quickly its amazing
You can say it's "amazing-all"
Thank Endram-Odai
@@navybluegacha2119 the eildritch god whale that we didn't know we needed
With a mix of an extremely unsubtle message about 'big tech bad'
Laughs in kirby
I’m so glad that the “bad guy” typing has been shifted from poison/dark types to steel. I think it makes this fangame stand out.
Considering Macro Cosmos was a villain team of Sword and Shield wouldn’t this already be true?
@@Dominator_0211 You’re very right. However, I was more referring to other fan games. Most either use a fan made typing or one of the traditional bad guy types. I guess I didn’t make that clear. My apologies
Well thers team tundra...
@@thesceptilegod3581 Damn, I still need to watch that...
@@emrs4237 does MandJTV’s Team Sky count?
What if there was a game expansion in which someone steals the Thunderbird remains relic & revives it with fossil resurrection tech. But instead of the massive powerful super legendary, it’s a little electric flying bird. It’s the thunderbirds first form. You then run around the region (doing something) to restore the baby Thunderbird as you bond with them. As you play it evolves twice, to an almost final form, & once you have finished (doing something) it mega evolves into its TRUE form. You have a heartfelt moment with your close friend that you raised before they fly away to fulfill their legendary duties. But before you leave, you notice something on the ground. A single egg. Now you can raise one to keep on your team that, in its final evolution, can mega evolve into its final form for battles.
Feel free not to use this, it was just an idea that I had after realizing that whole thing of possibly resurrecting the Thunderbird.
Edit: maybe you even need to have maxed out friendship for each evolution. Something to make it more unique on top of (doing something) like collecting shards.
I'd love to see that.
But make it extra difficult, every time it evolves it’s friendship resets and you have to do it all again
Oh have it have a event where you can summon Groudon and Kyogre if you have it maxed out
May be some kind of Zygard plot (or, omega Rogon), where you need to gather several pieces of the Thunderbird accross the glob to revive it in its fullest ?
Cyber bird
I love how Wren just speaks in emoticons. It feels so fitting for her
She has the silly
Prof Menzie: "Did you happen to see any suspicious figures?"
Wren: "...>:("
Menzie: "I understand you P E R F E C T L Y"
My personal favorite player response was
Wren: wiggles
I thought the emoticons were funny
Wren ate glue as a kid lmao-
I resonate with wren on a personal level with how they respond
Lol
Trainer: bye mom i'm off to save the world and stop eldritch beings!
Mom: ...why you're just off to deliver something?
Trainer: i'm the main character of a pokemon game of course i'm gonna save the world at some point. maybe even twice
Make just one thing
custmoized please:
Where to wear your Romom-Wristwatch!
Shouldnt just be at the Wrist for everyone.
@@slevinchannel7589 ah yes i would like my wrist watch on my neck
The notes to replace the pokedex should have really bad pictures on the pages, like, an image of an Eevee from behind, or a Mudkip that's completely submerged and you can only see it's silhouette, or a Rattatta halfway hidden by tall grass.
So basically, photos you took in New Pokémon Snap?
or maybe just some horribly drawn pictures of the pokemons lmao, but the idea of us taking photos of them while being inexperienced is also nice.
@@d4kusa i meant it to be photos that the crazy scientist took..
@@herowither12354 oh, then my bad im sorry
Wicoot honestly seems like the only Pokémon legendary/mythical that would speak if they got a movie
I’d honestly see it with a Joker like voice, maniacal but intelligent
Only one that should speak
@@Hide____"Nyahaha, you'll never catch me, Vibatman!"
When he said why is there so many slurs just be nice people, I felt that.
Except there will always be people who hate other people, so there will always be slurs, pessimistic, but it would probably be a thought policing totalitarian state that has no slurs.
@@dragonsswarm1987 uhhh or people could just not say slurs? you don't have to force people in order for people to not say slurs, its entirely possible by peoples own choices.
@@rudytheduck4776 yes, and pre-existing words can be forced to become slurs by the assholes that make slurs.
@@dragonsswarm1987 yes true, but what's the point in stating the already obvious?
@@rudytheduck4776 because it's not obvious to everyone
'Smile and give you positive vibes'
*shows picture of Hop, a character who spends the majority of the game filled with anxiety and confusion as to what he is, constantly comparing himself to you or Leon and feeling like a failure*
And that doesn't deter him from smiling and giving us positive vibes in the slightest.
That said, idk if that's good or poor characterization, but I'm leaning towards it being more poor than good.
I get that Hop had this whole story arc, but I just...didn't feel it? Like, yes, it happened, but it just felt kind of hollow, like an afterthought trying to make him interesting.
To me, it just felt like he was stuck-up and acted all high and mighty because he was the younger brother to the Champion, even though he's not made any major accomplishments himself yet, and to be perfectly honest with you, I was genuinely happy when Bede put him down. Does that make me a heartless person? Ehh, depends on who you ask, I guess. I just don't like Hop.
Or Wooloo, honestly. It's just a stupid sheep. That's not a valid reason to like Hop anyway.
I really like the idea of getting an assistant as the champion, and that she seems to follow you around during all the post-game.
One of the things I hope gets implemented in the post-game is to be capable to talk with Lucy, and that she says something different depending of the location (like the assistants in the Paper Mario Games or in Bug Fables), maybe giving some world-building info about the Towns, or if some new or rare Pokemon are available in a route, and definitly her backstory (or why she has a musical motif).
EDIT: Furthering the idea (only if it is posible and if it doesn't cause problems to the programmers involve in the fangame), but it would be cool if Lucy also was involved with some of the usual post-game functions, so if you talk to her, a menu opens with the option to talk to help but also to schedulle rematches with gym leaders, notify you about pokemon migrations, and things like that.
smart idea! 👌😁👍
Wonderful
maybe after that ordel she tells you a myth related to meloeta and you can find it if you complete a side quest?!
That is a really nice idea. Since she was the bad guy assistant, I thought she maybe was evil too, but no just doing her job. And since she even oposses to the villians in the post-game, maybe she can even help us in a double battle!
It'd be cool to see her use a team of Sound based pokemon
I love that Wren just communicates in gestures much like how it’s implied you do in the mainline games. It’s a nice detail, most would just have your character talk.
Lockstin: "And professor Menzie explains that..."
Ad: "Tonight we'll be eating chicken salad!"
i read "we'll be eating children salad" and now i'm dissapointed
@Shadow and Rosie that's what he just said
@@estebanco6937 ?
@@estebanco6937 just come over im having some tonight
I stitched it together: And Prof. Menzie explains that tonight we’ll be eating chicken salad.
Tom buying himself out of prison is so cynical, I love it.
Yeah.
Truth be told though, the only way I could see him getting his comeuppance is if the alien Pokemon end up abducting him at the end or something.
@@ninjapotatolorf6237 Damning a corporate prick to an eternity of Eldridge Horror doesn't seem satisfactory to me.
They absolutely deserve to suffer, but I was thinking of say, resetting their wealth and forcing them into the position of a surf or wage slave.
@@ninjapotatolorf6237 Pull a Cyrus and have him end up trapped in Ultra Space or something.
@@nullpoint3346, like that'd ever happen
@@macoud12 yup, that's pretty much what I had in mind.
"Destroying that watch was smart."
Minute later:
"I would never invade someone's privacy without their consent.
You could definitely play that part up as a slip of the tongue.
How'd ne even know that the watch was destroyed in the first place?
@@SmartAlec86 a simple answer for this question actually. The tracking and the rest suddenly got instantly shut off. Also the Vaibats or the Porygon in the watch can send the info to them
He turns on all of the privacy settings for you when he gives you the Porywatch Omega, and he was only doing the soul opening stuff on Mt. Spectal because he was under mind control. I don't think we can blame any of the post-game stuff on himself when he literally isn't in control of himself.
Easy way to give both parties what they want! Once you beat the space whale, it loses the red on its face and returns to its original calm form. It goes back through the wormhole, and after talking to the professors again, you can find the wormhole if you return to that original location where you fought the whale. You can go through the wormhole to fight 4 more new ultrabeast style lokemon, and then you can re-fight the whale and catch it. Makes it optional, but also makes it so it’s not handed to you and you have to find it on your own.
And they could make the space whale and other 4 pokemon level 100
Or give the space whale the eternal max eternatus form while the normal space whale is available but this apocalyptic form with parasite is unobtianiable
I frickin' lost it at, "BUT OUR EYES LOCKED, WE HAVE TO BATTLE!!"
Edit. Fun fact, I got nothing but Amazon ads while watching this.
Heh
Edit: I don't mean the be condescending, I just thought that the Amazon ad thing was funny.
CRAP THEY KNOW
SAME I ALSO GOT THEM
Amaze-all would like to know your location.....
Nah I’m kidding they already know it
Same
Oh snap, an hour long??
BABY WHERE'S OUR POPCORN?!?!
I just ate shrimp chips
I was eating noodles that made my nose run
I had to throw it away :pensive:
I hour later...
i ordered food just for this video
That feeling when your Pokémon game goes back to the monster capturing genre’s roots and goes full circle into a Shin Megami Tensei game
Endram-Odai: *makes my moves gibberish*
Me: *writes them down*
Endram-Odai: No! That’s not how you’re supposed to play the game!
Tighten: Game Over!!!
Me: *You never said that I couldn't!*
Endram-Odai: *Welp, you've got me there!*
You’re laughing now, but wait until they change it to shuffle your Pokémon and moves at the start of the battle.
I'm playing 4d chest with you Bro
Endram: crap
I really like how the player helps out the younger character Jay. I think it's cute that an older but young adult is helping a kid and that it is used to teach the player how to do certain tasks. It sort of reflection the growth of the fans of pokemon and how you can still share your knowledge and experience with the younger generations. Good work.
And then we beat him up repeatedly throughout the plot
@Xman34 yeah, rivals that are kind just make you feel bad. Because they’re just tryna be your friend, but you just obliterate them constantly. Rivals should be total jerks again, I need someone that I can hate and don’t have to feel bad when I beat them.
@@BobbyDipshit Me personally, I don't like jerk rivals, they just annoy me. It's not even satisfying beating them because they just pretend nothing happened and go right back to being tools.
I prefer a more balanced mix, Less Hau and Less Silver, more like Cheren or Hugh
@@BobbyDipshit i founded Lark super funny, and a bit relatable
@@asafesseidonsapphire good for u ig ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Im not insulted Lark as a character, im just saying that in future games they should be more mean. However I do have to admit that Lark is a very creative character.
Rayquaza: *puts up sunglasses* what in the name of arkoos are they doing over there?
dafuq r dey doin ovah dere?
propably shud go che- oh, is mah 2014 AD Deoxys invasion alarm. goshdangit.
XD
You'd think the thunderbird would be like "Yo, Ray, help me out here."
Ah, we have a Man of Culture© here
Yaveltal approves
Lucy, when she's you assistant, should follow you in overworld, and should double battle alongside you occasionally
Same for Prof. Menzie
What would her team be? Maybe Sound-themed pokemon like Chimecho/Kaskadian Exploud?
@@jackallett8236 I'm thinking multiple different types of pokemon that would help her with her job. like a flying type for delivering packages and carrying her to places, a super buff pokemon like machamp to carry things for meetings, psychic type to do something similar and to help write things down, a pokemon to ride in water and one on land (Arcanine, a horse kind of pokemon, etc), etc. I could also see her with a Cheekat or Faebrill or Mosster, she strikes me as a person who would have a more pet/friend pokemon when not working.
@@jackallett8236 just give her an Orbtholod
I feel like the conspiracy theorist should have more lines like “I KNEW IT” or something like that
In the post game of course
Or “I WARNED THEM! I WARNED THEM ALL”
"WHO'S AN IDIOT NOW HUH?"
-Random conspiracy theorist
Lockstin, you realize that when the game comes out, we all want to see you do a playthrough, right?
Ooh, one with inside commentary too, like talking about development and conceptualization of characters by the team
@@MightyAverage Yooo that's a really good idea!
I also wanna see MandJTV do a castform only playthrough
@@faeliphmorales1116 Obviously
@@crystalizedfoxgacha2811 it should be a “mandjtv” mode which is just castform only mode.
Menzie: *breaks watch with hammer*
Wren/Lark: *MY WRIST*
i like to bilive that she tugged it till it came off, then YEETED into a wall
Half of Kirby characters: I h a v e n o s u c h w e a k n e s s e s
**painful birb/borb noises**
You know what be really fun? if Quailstrion was immune to the scrambling effects from Endram Odai, it saw it coming, it was Prepared for this, and it is ready.
That is a good idea
that would be such a win, flavor-wise. I hope they do it. Maybe there is some sort of holdable item (the tin foil hat)that normally just gives -1 damage from psychic type attacks, but will stave off the scramble effects in this fight only.
@@frostflamegames673 I love that idea so much.
Naw, thats such a great idea, it is perfect, I love it, I want that!!!
Lmao
I love how Tom Bezzle is made out to be this huge villain and when you meet him he’s super friendly and chill, but still a huge villain
He's not a villain. He is a businessman who creates jobs for the community and provides products that everyone wants. Without him, the lives of everyone around would be much less fruitful. Imagine never getting another delivery again. Also, cell towers in the desert are important because people lost in the desert need them to call for help.
@@funveeabledid you watch the video? it's heavily implied he's been dealing with mafia types like team rocket and also EXPERIMENTING WITH POKEMON UNETHICALLY???? HE'S THE VILLAIN DO WE HAVE TO SPELL IT OUT FOR YOU
ngl i hated him from the start just because of what i had been told. he just seemed too smug for me even after i met him
@@funveeable While Tom Bezzle isn't really malicious and does generally want what's best for humanity, he's not wise enough to fully understand what he's doing. Yes, he's improving people lives, but he also strips people of the privacy and is very reckless in achieving what he see's as a greater cause. He's the kind of guy who can't see the forest for the trees
@@funveeableYOU ARE CONCERNINGLY SUSCEPTIBLE TO PROPAGANDA
Bezzle is just the right amount of unsettling, with his "I just want to make the world more convenient, and everyone is willing to provide that for me,"
ye. he's sleezy, but not outright EVIL without the orbthilod. sure, he's got money on the mind, but if he is pushing a product he is gonna make it good (at least that is the vibe i get)
jeff bezos
I like how he's a mix of rose, a little bit Giovanni, and a teney tiny little bit of Lysander
Bezzle = Bezos 🔪
I think they're the best Pokémon villain so far.
"Thunderbird, can I please take a break?"
"Boi i gave you this enegy you better use it!"
Until we... Both collapse...
OMG WARRIOR CATS YES! Warriors is my favourite book of all time! I LOVE Squrrielflight, Tree, and Spiderleg (yes you heard me right Spiderleg) how about you? Also did you hear about the new Arc coming out? I just came from a Moonkitti and Akira video about it
@@pikathemimikyu6655 I don’t really have a favourite character but I usually say my favourite is Crowfeather.
@@amethyst_the_rainwing oh hey another Warrior fan on a Pokémon channel! (And by the looks of it a Wings of Fire fan too). I like Crowfeather alot, I hope Harestar dies soon so he can become leader already! But seeing how long Mistystar has lived Im not really sure anymore..l
@@pikathemimikyu6655 YES HARESTAR AND MISTYSTAR SHOULD DIE (Yes I am a WoF fan)
"A friend of your mom" thats what every profesor says, then he is your dad
"I already _befriended_ your Mom last night!"
Either that or it’s a mr. mime
@@cillianstewart9441 exactly what I thought
I was gunna say this lol
@@cillianstewart9441 Sans is a Pokemon professor confirmed
I like how Omega Rogon can be read as "Orogon", which sounds like Oregon, the state Kaskade was mostly based on
Finally, Tofrog will earn all the plot and history he deserves
oooooor not
Tofrug is the game
@@endk.3500 I concur
the end end game when you have completed the shiny dex (ot just all the ones you can get shiny) you will have the portal go crazr and out comes a gigantic lv100 shiny tofrug with op moves and
@@bjrnarvikene2460 that sounds like what a cheater would say as a back story to having a bunch of lvl 100 shiny legendaries
I like how Tofrug has basically become the mascot of this whole project.
I'm glad this becomes a game, i really am,
but i have to say, this whole video and especially the
shy talk around Minute 3 really made me think:
"Yeah, this is reaching Pro-Level; a Level that 'Mr.Buddy'
already reached a long time ago'.
True
Project tofrug
Of course, it's adorable and pillow size/shape
Plot twist it can evolve into the great thunder birb
Amaze-All: *Use Mainly Steel Types*
Wren with Tarmendoa: "Are you really in charge here?"
Thought the same. And many of the snake tamers will rule over Amaze-None with relitive ease
*Laughs in Kaskadian Concldurr
I Will choose Tarmendoa
I feel lark needs a bit more character progression. I kept expecting any exposition about his motivation and having dialogue that shows a reason for him to change besides just giving up and being fired would be really cool to see from a rival.
When Lockstin was saying how he's been asked to make a fangame out of this, I was sure he was gonna say "No" or "That's not happening"
So glad I was proven wrong! Can't wait to play it when it comes out!
When did he say that?
@@Aluberthefunnistreamer at 3:57
Thanks
Was gonna say lawsuit inbound but he doesn't seem to be monetizing it.
@@gapetheapegod7976 well the lawsuits mainly happened because of the use of the Pokemon brand name in the games title (in Uraniums case) so I'm all for having the game name be Lockemon
Lockstin: why be 10-12 again?
Gen 5 protagonists: *cries in 15-16*
So true i love Gen 5 so I know almost every one of fact
Weren’t the gen 6 protags also 16-17 year olds?
Also gen 8
@@weluvdusk I feel like some of them would be 12 and others would be 16
@@aSh-pi1inI don’t like the gen 8 protagonists they have the least personality tbh, they look so dead inside, the only exception is in pokemon masters
I really like the parallels between Fir and Bezzle with the whole "Sometimes you have to bend your morals a bit. You wouldn't understand at your age" thing.
Brothers question mark?
"I'm 22 and living in 2020 of course I'd f*ckin understand"
I had an interesting idea for the end boss, if your team includes an orbtholad it can partially counter the menu depending on your friendship level with you. High friendship has it pop out of it's pokeball and counters the move scramble, items and Pokémon names are still affected, low but positive friendship has it do one move before endram-odai attacks and commands to leave and it does with a scar, leading you to need to track it down to recatch it, and if it the friendship is negative it leave the ball and randomizes the move with their names still scrambles. Either way you at best lose a Pokémon after one hit, and the other effects take the orbtholad off your team for the fight at the least.
Tom Bezzle: I am a business man, clearly this coyote will listen to what I have to say
Wren: I don't think that's how it works
Wicoot: Ah yes business man I will bring it to my shareholders for consideration...nah man they said no
Lmao
he a business man with a business plan
He's just a businessman... doin business
@@nonametherabbit8593 he's gonna make you money in business land
@@keqingsimp2174he’s a cool guy, talks about game stop.
it took me a decently long time to realize omega-rogon is a pun on oregon
Hey, better than me. I didn't realize it until you mentioned it. I love that name more now
oh my god
I was surprised but I was also not surprised to learn this fact
also Omega + ROtom + PoryGON
@@lettuce674 wow this is a multi-layered pun
Not gonna lie the gimmick of the menu being glitched out is a sick idea
Yes
I know! This takes the premise of an ultimate final boss in a Pokemon game to a whole new level. The energy that your opponent is giving off is too intense for you to think straight. You can barely get a hold of yourself to give orders to your team, let alone even stay conscious! Everything around you feels like an agonizing blur. You can't see your Pokemon clearly, can't remember their moves, you can hardly even pronounce their names at all! Your mind is failing you, but your heart still stays strong despite everything. A fight like this is a true challenge to the bonds you've made with your Pokemon, if you know them well enough to know what order they are in your team and how you're arranged their movesets, even while the battle interface is incomprehensible gibberish! At this point, you've grown with them so much that they can understand your feelings as you understand theirs. It's the ultimate test of the trust you have in your Pokemon, an ideology that the franchise has always been known for.
and a very messy and hard one
is it me or does endurm odia look like a cosmic wailord
@@tommygalarian-slowbro9745 well, I mean they are both whales 🤷♂️
Prof. Fir: " The starter that was left has been stolen-"
Me: " NAH NOT THIS BULL AGAIN!"
1:01:13 Here’s a suggestion: it gives you an egg that takes a very long time to hatch, and it hatches into a prevo and evolves extremely late (75-85) to Edram-Odai.
I like this idea
I always love that idea that instead of catching the legendary u enter a battle w it if u win it deems u are worthy and gave u a part of it's power by giving u an egg that hatch into a young replica and now u own a young "weaker" version of the legendary instead of the typical 10 years old catches a primordial God
I was thinking it would be like Regigigas
This is a perfect Idea. Fits pokemon and the eldritch themes.
(Spoilers...)
Reminds me somewhat of the end of Bloodbourne.
(Spoilers)
Leaving you as the beginning of an Old One. Where if you get the true ending and beat the moon presence you are bestowed with his power but start off as a new-born, unformed vessel that will grow into an unimaginable strength.
It's translation into a pokemon game via the completion of the post game and the raising of an Egg (Just like Gold/Silver and togekiss) is fitting for the "Eldritch" part of the game.
Theory: the four cataclysm Pokémon are the Lockémon equivalent of the Four Horsemen of the apocalypse.
In all seriousness, though, this is a *fantastic* Region concept with an incredible story. That little pinch of H.P. Lovecraft at the end was awesome.
The story certainly has potential, but it does require some minor tweaks to set it out in a more logical format. As of what tweaks, I don't quite know, but I do feel the story is a tad too jittery in its current state. But weldone to the team so far, and hopefully the final result will hit the nail on the head.
I really thought that the four cataclysm pokémon were going to have names based on each horseman
@@trickalex5418 Who are the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse?
@@jngo172 Plague, Hunger, War and Death
@@DarthMolgy wasn't one Famine?
22:59
Lark:*appears to battle again for the package*
Player:"how many times do we have to teach you this lesson! OLD MAN"
*Young Man
@@magicfortune2462 you see it wouldn't been funny
@@magicfortune2462 it’s a reference I think
I imagine wicoot standing on the box legendaried mountain just yelling that “we have issues to solve and we need to solve them NOW”
except its all coot coot coot coot coooot
Lockstin: "Born during the 2000s..."
Me, a 2000 kid: *pain*
Not kid your 21
@@flatrsnillar people born in the 90s still call themselves 90s kids
Imagine how I feel. I was born in the 1900s...in 1999. Still painful.
@@JackHallowLantern .>
Kids these days...
Was I the only one waiting for him to say “Anyways THIS VIDEO IS SPONSORED BY AMAZE ALL”
God no you weren’t
I wish he does
Omaze All
Lol
Samee
Bezzle is everything Chairman Rose should’ve been.
Absolutely, but I think he should appear a couple times before the plot rises to a climax
Not the chairman we deserved but the chairman we needed-
Rose is better
I got to agree
Only in the anime
I absolutely love that after becoming champion you get an assistant
Also oh my god, the idea of your entire menu and game HUD getting messed up is incredible, it almost reminds of Pokémon H, a romhack where every letter and Pokémon sprite is just H so that you have to just kind of guess what each Pokémon and move is
Bezzle really gave me the shivers, especially that part with the privacy options.
"Oh users can protect their data at any time, they just didn't think to enable data privacy."
Talk about a typical corporate loophole!
I just saw the name Pestilation and thought "The four horsemon of the apocalypse are here"
*Horsemon*
I cracked up laughing when I read that.
THAT'S WHAT I THOUGHT TOO!!
I wouldn't be surprised if that is what they are meant to represent
I betcha dollars to donuts that's what they are.
*Pestil* ation is a dead giveaway.
Lamentu is almost sheep or goat-like, with seven eyes. Revelations 5:6 in the Bible has "The Lamb had seven horns and seven eyes, which are the seven spirits of God sent out into all the earth," and while Lamentu only has two horns, the seven eyes match up. Plus, it has almost angelic wings coming from its head, and the name has the word "Lament" in it. My best guess is if it is a "horsemon of the apocalypse", it's an angel of *death* of sorts.
The other two were hard to pin down, but if I had to guess; Revylon might be *famine* for its gaping maw with glowing insides, almost Guzzlord-esque. Leoseace is probably *war* by process of elimination.
I also just totally realized Revylon's name could reference Babylon, and Leosease could be a reference to the serpent that tempted Adam and Eve.
Pestilence isn't a horseman of the Apocalypse
I like how we don't really know how the real Bird of Thunder looks like, just like original Unovan Dragon.
Also, I like how the "Omega" in Omegarogon's kinda indicates the connection between the Bird of Thunder and Groudon.
Lockstin is a Noob where
Mr:buddy is a Legend.
@@Lumberjack_king My Comment did not include a question,
so your no is officially rejected.
Invalid.
@@slevinchannel7589 yes
@@slevinchannel7589 I think they’re both good at making plots
@@littlemines6648 Sure,
but Mr.Buddy is the Legend in the Field.
I really like how there isn't a traditional bad guy team. Y'know, the lot that goes "Oi gimme ur mon!" only to get their butts handed to them shortly after, Bezzle isn't even the typical bad guy. At a first glance he gives off massive Giovanni vibes but after talking to him, he just wants to make the world better but was misguided by the very data he collected, a calculative man that had good intentions but was unable to see past the numbers at the time, which is why he turned himself in after finally realizing nobody can play Arceus.
And I have a feeling that the Orbtholod was beginning to mind jack Bezzle which is why he became brash towards the player after the box legendaries were caught by him, heck, that Orbtholod seems to have been influencing his decisions from the start of the game!
The little "gather data" part when explaining the amaze-all lockémon gives me MAJOR "There is no war in Ba Sing Se" vibes
I think you should include a scene after the Amaze-All raid where Lark runs into Professor Fir and apologizes for stealing Birbwhirl. It's kind of like something that happens in Heartgold and Soulsilver except you actually get to see the scene. Lark stole a rare starter pokemon so there should be some kind of resolution.
Edit: Lark should also help out as professor Menzie’s assistant during the postgame
I would love this
@@itsmxtwist I can imagine Lark and Menzie arguing a lot because one is a boomer and the other is an ex-Amaze-All employee
That would be awesome
Lark helping menzie understand tech that would actually help her (+knowing how to shut off all the creepy side of the tech to ease her worries, being a former employee n all) and menzie teaching him morals and history erased by Amaze-al
Maybe Fir tells Lark to keep it, because Burbwhirl has grown attached to Lark
21:52 Lockstin: "you catch a slight glimpse of Kaskadian Diancie"
Me: I'm sorry WHAT?!
I like how he's just super casual about it, its like, "oh yea and you see a mythical Pokemon nobody has probably ever seen before lmao, anyways..."
38:40 that was actually pretty creepy. I loved that part
The most unrealistic aspect of this whole thing is the idea of a big company actually perfecting a device, instead of making a "new and ultra upgraded" version every year or two
So Apple
Lockstin: what inspired you to make amaze all
Tom bezzle : MONEY
i like money
I like money
I like money
No it’s :What inspired you to be bald?
Wren Player: has blackish brown hair with yellow streak
Lark Player: Has brown hair
Real life Wren: Is brown
Real life lark: Yellow and Black
Me: **confused stonks**
Ikr??
Same
Maybe wren player was born normal black until her hair change to dark brown (common thing for the baby that is growing) and dye a little yellow stripe on her hair
I guess having pairs with elements that fit the other more than themselves is on brand for Pokémon. Golduck being psychic while and Psyduck is golden, venonat resembling butterfree more than its prevos, etc
Lol, the sas in his voice when mentioning Lucy as your assistant, he knows exactly the feelings some get from her design. 😂
I was thinking that
I love how the player character is just some random professor's assistant who casually becomes the Pokémon league champion between running errands for their boss.
I mean it makes more sense than a 10 year old kid becoming the champion, but it's still hilarious.
The moment that Lockstin mentioned that they actually were working on making this a game I almost passed out from joy. I wish I had the time to try to help in any way but right now I can only show my support like this, but I can’t freaking wait!
alternatively, you can donate him money through Patreon as stuff like artist commissions can cost a fair bit!
I wonder what platform it'll be on.
If I look at your profile pic I have the urge to flee.
@@mathughsyoutubeworld2655 *Detecting multiple leviathan class lifeforms in the area. Are you sure whatever you're doing is worth it?*
Same
When I heard tom say "you humans" that made me scream that he's a meowth in disguise
Lockstin has been doing it in his vids for sometime already
I thought he was going to be a lizard person
What?
I thought it was a ditto
I like how he talks about an Ultra Necrozma tier fight, but I just swept it with a simple metagross
There should be a shiny tofrug plush that sometimes gets delivered instead of the regular one because, y'know, shinyhunting.
Of course!!!
But then people would buy so many that they would run out and other people wouldn’t get one
It could just be the card instead of the plush making it rare but not costing more money.
Better idea so that people don’t buy like a thousand just for a shiny, make the shiny version pop up on sale at random times
I really like that Wren's dialogue is almost entirely facial expressions
Like most real pokemon games!
@@cadenhanson8432 Lockstin is a Noob where
Mr:buddy is a Legend.
@@slevinchannel7589 dude stfu why do you keep commenting that on every single comment
@@primekyogre8201 Dude, stfu - haha, what a cringestart for a comment.
Amazing?
@@primekyogre8201 Why do you start a and end a comment with a Joke?
-That will only make people laugh.
With Amaze-All supposedly being a worldwide company and also having Groudon and Regigigas being involved in Kaskade's lore made me realize how the main regions lore barely interlaps with one another
I understand wanting the games to be enyojable without knowing the previous' stories, but still, it gives me the sad feeling of those regions being isolated
@Busco Diarrea probably a bot
Regigas is a bit all over places. While officially resting at sinnoh, he has been around many places including having a temple in galar
I would really like to see, that basically, you aren't powerful enough as a player to beat the endboss. So you faint and the endboss wants to shoot a last attack on you, but Lark jumps out of nowhere in the way and saves you, dying in the process. And then his pudet (it's called like that, right? His dog pokemon) comes out of the pokeball and evolves (considering its inspiration/back story ). And you catch it as a last thing to remember Lark. (but, maybe to dark for Pokemon) 😉
Edit: Jesus Christ, 12 likes! I know, it's NOTHING compared to the others, but its still probably the most likes I've ever gotten on a comment I'm still proud of today. Thanks!
So basically Amaze-all is a Cthulhu-owned pokéAmazon that it trying to activate Metal Gear B as a side project, Wren is the courier from Fallout New Vegas, and the finale is an Sons of Liberty-level fourth wall break
I bet there are mods for fallout new Vegas the could turn the courier into Wren
Accurate
Soooo Persona level-story combined with Pokemon mechanics and a Final Fantasy final boss
@@zipperfingers749 Not even Persona, This is *METAL GEAR SOLID* level
Game was rigged from the start
When the seasons go wrong
We need help from Wicoot
We must call him when the time is right
With a weird little flute
THATS A RECORDER GODAMMIT
I can imagine that the bit of story after the post game, you find out that the orbtholods weren't actually evil or anything,
they were just bringing in their master Endram-Odai in an attempt to deal with the parasite somehow, and once you do that, it's all cool.
It just takes, some dubious means to actually start in the first place.
They can see the future but are like: "Lets be overdramatic as all hell"
Maybe that's how you can get an Orbtholod in-game if possible. You encounter one and it thanks you for freeing Endram-Odai from the parasite. It then chooses to go with the player as a thank you.
I just thought of another potential way to get an Orbtholod. Maybe it can be a special event in the main where you encounter one and after a quick battle, it sees the player as a worthy ally to their cause for saving their master and will join you. I like the idea of trainers making friends with any pokemon, even lovecraftian beings.
Yeah, it’s very rare for Pokémon to just be straight up evil. Even Mewtwo’s violent tendencies are understandable.
@@GamerFromJump Mewto didnt even ask for the BS he went through the just birthed him as a murder weapon
Two things. One, good plot. Two, you have inspired me to make my own game: pokemon hero and destruction. P.S. region is called origic region, which is shaped like a pokeball
Ooh, that sounds interesting, love to hear some progress
Cool, mine fakemon region is the khaos region
Not as original as yours though
This has also been a massive inspiration for me aswell, love making regions or adding to regions, its just so lovely and cool!
We NEED a joke when you say that a video is sponsored by Amaze-all
IKR!
Edit: I originally had a question mark, then I realized that that didn't accurately represent my feeling on the matter.
He did that
The amaze all video
"No resemblance to any real world people or organizations intended"
Obviously
"Get in Xerneas, we have a thundermom to resurrect"
"Get in Yveltal, we have a deer to kill"
@@cristiano7541 "Get in Zygarde, we have a bird and a deer to tell to STFU."
@@KoopaKaos "Get in Necrozma, we have a god to kill"
@@lynxolotl5814 "Rayquaza! The kids are acting up again!"
@@dreamfire3133 "Eternatus! Do... Something!"